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Ra_Skywalker420 Registered: Mar '03	Date Posted: 4/18/03 5:33am Subject: Only You ::J/TK-J/Z:: update 6/17! surprises inside! - Date Edited: 6/17/03 11:56am (9 edits total) Edited By: Ra_Skywalker420
	A/N- I do not own anything...nothing... relating to this story. please dont hurt me! another A/N- i'm new to this stuff, so its gunna take me a while to get this just the right way...so be patient. thanks! This story takes place right before the kidnapping of Jacen sniff Only You Prelude- Poem for Tenel Ka's pov The darkness seems to swallow me whole I no longer exist without you Then a gentle breeze blows, stirring my soul But no comfort in it is renewed Myself I can fool no longer I have to admit that you're gone It's only for you that I hopefully hunger Yet I hopelessly die with each bloody dawn I go through each day with a feigning content My true feelings have become too shy I work, as my usual day is spent But by night I'm alone, and I cry I cry for the days to never embrace My heart burns with an icy fire Angry tears rip at my paling face Because I know I can't have this one desire Memories lash through my hazy mind I cringe at the forthcoming pain They've told me that you I never will find If I did, what could I gain? All is silent, as a tear falls away And a breeze blows gently again Your voice comes through, and I hear you say That you'll be back as soon as you win You struggle for light against the dark You're running through an engulfing flame Then once out, on your journey embark But promise to me you'll be the same I pause to listen, and hear you speak And feel you wrap around me I start to tremble, and I fall down, weak Trapped, but there's no fight to be free You're alive, and that's all I need I can go on, because you're here You've planted again love's tiny seed And death never again shall I fear. ********* That's the intro, and as soon as I can find a lot of time, i'll get my new stuff up! yay! -Ra -----signature----- -Skywalker -Rogue Princess Smuggler
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Elven_Jedi_Maiden Registered: Apr '03	Date Posted: 4/18/03 4:07pm Subject: RE: Only You ::J/TK-J/Z::
	Wow... Intense stuff! Exactly how I imagine Tenel Ka must have been feeling at that time, so anguished and helpless. But there was hope at the end... More soon? -----signature----- Save the Earth. It's the only planet with chocolate. Jag and Danni stink.. I love Legolas and Zekk!!! J/Z, J/TK, and L/M die hard Adoptee to LadyMairead
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Agent_Jaid Registered: Feb '03	Date Posted: 4/18/03 4:21pm Subject: RE: Only You ::J/TK-J/Z::
	That was........... Amazing!!! -----signature----- Wasn't Enough: One-Shot http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=21015893
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YJK_Index Registered: Apr '03	Date Posted: 4/18/03 6:06pm Subject: RE: Only You ::J/TK-J/Z:: - Date Edited: 4/18/03 6:22pm (2 edits total) Edited By: YJK_Index
	Do you want to submit your fic to the YJK index? -----signature----- http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=11325509
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jacesolo1138 Registered: Jan '02	Date Posted: 4/18/03 6:16pm Subject: RE: Only You ::J/TK-J/Z::
	I love it! Glad you decided to post it here, can't wait to see how this turns out! ~jacesolo1138~ -----signature----- Darkness Returns (YJK, Jacen/Tenel Ka) http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=10935977&replies=2
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Ra_Skywalker420 Registered: Mar '03	Date Posted: 4/20/03 12:32pm Subject: RE: Only You ::J/TK-J/Z::
	I'll have a post up real soon, i promise!! i just have to finish one thing and i'll have it up! keep checking in. -----signature----- -Skywalker -Rogue Princess Smuggler
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Ra_Skywalker420 Registered: Mar '03	Date Posted: 4/22/03 6:49am Subject: RE: Only You ::J/TK-J/Z:: updated 4-22!! - Date Edited: 4/22/03 6:50am (1 edits total) Edited By: Ra_Skywalker420
	Here's chapter one! enjoy! Chapter One- Missions... A boy of about 17 was laying sprawled out on his somewhat comfortable bed, staring up at the ceiling. The room was filled with light, and his eyes, being accustomed to the darkness the night, stung when he opened them. He closed his eyes, rubbing them, and turned over to switch off the buzzing chrono beside him. Sunlight poured into his room, which, on any other day would have been pleasant, but considering that this was part of the source that spoiled such a good dream, he was annoyed. He groaned and tried to slip back into that state of sub-consciousness that he enjoyed so much, but it was impossible. He sighed, and he stood to get ready for the day. The dream had been of her. The woman he loved. Tenel Ka. He tried to recapture every detail of his dream. He remembered seeing her leaning on a quiet, lonely balcony, her red hair spilling over her bare shoulders. She had a flowing silky black nightgown on. She sighed, staring at the stars. 'That's not anything like Tenel Ka...' He thought, laughing quietly. He remembered himself walking up to her and slipping his arms around her waist, pulling her into a tight hug. She rested her head on his shoulder. No words were spoken, just feelings. He pulled his head away from hers and stared into her passive, gray eyes. He remembered leaning in to kiss her, but just before their lips met was when he heard a distant, but loud buzzing noise from his chrono. He turned off the shower, and stepped out to dry off and get down to the mess hall in time to eat. Master Luke had called five friends back to the academy in order to discuss a delicate subject concerning the war at hand. He wanted to meet with Jaina and Jacen, their two best friends Tenel Ka and Zekk and a friend of the family by the name of Lobacca. Everything was tense those next few days, and the only time Jacen could find peace was in his sleep. He thought deeply, walking down the lonely hallway, which used to be filled with familiar faces of the Jedi he used to train with. He let out a loud sigh and made his way quickly to the mess hall. "Jace!" A familiar voice rang out. Jacen turned to see his twin sister Jaina sitting at a table with Zekk and Tenel Ka. Jacen's heart pounded as his eyes fell over Tenel Ka's well-formed figure. He traced her hair down to her shoulders, and back up, resting on her lips. She didn't say anything to the other two sitting at the table, instead she ate silently. Silent, that was Tenel Ka. Silent and solemn. Jacen snapped out of his trance, and took another step towards the table. Before he reached it, he realized that instead of one unusually empty seat there were two. Still somewhat asleep, he couldn’t place his finger on who was missing. That is until two furry arms wrapped around his neck in a giant hug. When Lobacca the Wookiee released Jacen, who was gasping for air, he grunted something that Jacen had gotten used to hearing. "Good morning to you too, Lowie." Jacen said, gaining more control over his breathing. He sat down at his usual spot beside Tenel Ka and began eating. "Good Morning, Jacen." Tenel Ka said in-between rather large bites of her food. "Mornin'.” Jacen grinned, happy to hear her voice. "Did you sleep well?” She asked curiously, passing him the food. "Uh huh." Jacen answered. "How about you?" Tenel Ka shook her head. Jacen wondered why she hadn’t. "It was cold." She said, reading his mind. She grinned, seeing Jacen's eyes light up as if he had a wonderful idea. "Well, we'll just have to fix that wont we?" He said eagerly. She laughed quietly, and finished her meal. -TK POV- Ok so maybe I lied. It’s early-he can’t catch on. I wasn’t really that cold, well temperature cold anyway. I’ve been having bad feelings lately. I can’t sleep anymore, all I think about is Jacen… But why? Aren’t there other things that are more important to me than Jacen? I’m in a war… I don’t have time for nonsense…Not now anyway… -J POV- She’s not telling me the truth. Not the whole truth. There’s something wrong, she’s troubled. I just wish I knew what it was… After breakfast, they all walked together to where Master Luke had told them to meet. Jacen walked, occasionally glancing at Tenel Ka. Her eyes were fixed straight ahead of her, never breaking her concentration. Tenel Ka was deep in thought. She felt him staring at her, but that didn’t bother her. Her mind was racing with thoughts of him, but she tried to block them out and concentrate on the matter at hand. They finally arrived at the place where Luke had called them. “Good Morning.” He greeted them sincerely. They entered the room and began their meeting. Luke talked for a long time about what has happened throughout the war that they might not have heard. He explained his concern for the well being of the five friends. He explained the concerns of the war. He explained the cost of winning and losing. He explained a mission… *** I'd like to thank my beta JaceSolo1138. I hope you enjoy, i'll have more up in just a little bit (a little bit being either later today, or tomorrow!) let me know what you think! -Skywalker ^.^ -----signature----- -Skywalker -Rogue Princess Smuggler
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Ra_Skywalker420 Registered: Mar '03	Date Posted: 4/22/03 10:42am Subject: RE: Only You ::J/TK-J/Z::
	chapter 2 is finished! i'll probably put it up tomorrow due to lack of time now. but enjoy chapter 1 for now! chau! -Skywalker -----signature----- -Skywalker -Rogue Princess Smuggler
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jacesolo1138 Registered: Jan '02	Date Posted: 4/23/03 4:34am Subject: RE: Only You ::J/TK-J/Z::
	Great job on Chapter 1. Keep up the good work! ~jacesolo1138~ -----signature----- Darkness Returns (YJK, Jacen/Tenel Ka) http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=10935977&replies=2
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Ra_Skywalker420 Registered: Mar '03	Date Posted: 4/23/03 8:30am Subject: RE: Only You ::J/TK-J/Z::
	A/N- Tenel Ka DID get her arm fixed! * Yay! Chapter 2 already! Chapter 2- Don’t Let Go The five stepped out of the meeting and began to walk down the hallway. Jacen trailed behind and made sure that Jaina, Zekk and Lowie were far enough ahead. He reached his hand out to grab Tenel Ka gently by the arm. She stopped and looked at him. He turned her around to face him. Her usually expressionless face hinted confusion. “Tenel Ka, I need to talk with you real quick.” Jacen said, quietly. He pulled her over into a corner. “You know, I wasn’t joking about what I said at breakfast…” Tenel Ka’s confusion was more apparent. “When you said you were cold…” He continued. Tenel Ka still didn’t understand. Jacen grabbed her hands in his, and leaned in closely to kiss her. Their lips met for a few seconds, just long enough to be enjoyed, but not too long to make it uncomfortable for both of them. Tenel Ka looked at the ground and didn’t say anything. “I love you, Tenel Ka.” Jacen said. She looked up, surprised. She stared him in the eyes. -TK POV- I can tell he means it…I can see it in his eyes. I love him too, but can I tell him? I will…if I can just find the words to say. -J POV- I wish there was another way to say it, but she looked so confused, I had to just say it straight up. I hope she understands that… Tenel Ka opened her mouth, but no words came out. She bit her lip and looked back at the ground. Jacen’s heart began to sink, ‘She must think I’m a fool…’ he thought to himself. Jacen’s grip on her hands began to lighten up as Tenel Ka brought her face up to his once more. Her chin began to quiver, but she held back the tears that have been trying to force themselves out for as long as she can remember. “I love you too, Jacen Solo.” She said. Jacen’s heart beat rapidly, and his face lit up with a smile. He brought her hand up to his mouth and kissed it lightly. Tenel Ka laughed quietly, as Jacen wrapped an arm around her in a simple hug. She hugged him tightly around the neck. He unwillingly let her go, but he knew they had to catch up to the others before they became too suspicious. * It was later that night, and Jacen had stuck to his promise. He was lying in his bed with Tenel Ka’s warm body snuggled up against his. He had his arms wrapped around her, and he could feel her body expand every time she took in a breath. He closed his eyes, but he couldn’t fall asleep. He was too busy thinking. Tenel Ka, who wasn’t really sleeping quite yet, sensed Jacen’s thoughts, and opened her eyes. “What is wrong?” She asked quietly. Jacen breathed into her hair, “Nothing, go back to sleep.” He ordered lovingly. Tenel Ka sat up stubbornly. “No, something is wrong. Please tell me.” Jacen sat up next to her, his eyes tasting every curve of her body. He moved his hand up to her cheek, rubbing it lightly with his fingers. She closed her eyes, resting her head in the palm of his hand. Jacen smiled at her contentment, and moved his other hand up to cup her face. His gaze centered in on her mouth. So perfectly shaped and filled in, he found it hard to resist. But he didn’t try. He pulled her face close to his and his lips hungrily met hers. Tenel Ka was shocked, but pleased. She closed her eyes and kissed him back. Each time their lips met, the kiss became more fervent. Tenel Ka broke the kiss abruptly and looked down at the bed sheets. “What was that for?” She asked quickly. Jacen lifter her chin up with his fingers, “Nothing.” He replied calmly. Tenel Ka sensed the hidden meaning behind his words and smiled. Again, Jacen’s eyes fell to her lips. He loved to see her smile. She laid back down and closed her eyes. Jacen brushed her hair out of her face and kissed her forehead lightly. ‘I love you,’ He thought to himself. He too laid down and fell asleep. He had another dream that night…more like something of a memory… Classes went as normal, with Jacen face down on his desk. After their morning classes and afternoon meal, they normally would go hang out with Jaina and Zekk, or sleep, but not that time. It was too pretty outside to stay indoors. Jacen had messily stuffed a few clothes in a bag and had told Tenel Ka to get something that she could swim in. They were all four going down to swim in one of the small streams that were created from the green rivers of Yavin 4. Tenel Ka heard a knock on the door to her room. “Hurry up, we’re late.” Came an annoyed voice from the hallway. She pulled a soft shirt over her head, and grabbed her bag. “Coming.” She yelled. Jaina opened the door and hurried her out. They ran down the hall to meet up with Jacen and Zekk, who had been waiting on them for a good five minutes. “That was fast.” Jacen said sarcastically. Tenel Ka punched him in the arm. “Ow…” Jacen whined. Jaina rolled her eyes at him. “She didn’t hit you that hard, Jace…” she said, punching him in the other arm. “Hey! Why is everyone hitting me?” Jacen asked, covering his head. Zekk laughed, and Jacen shot him a nasty scowl. Zekk put his hands up in defeat, before anything could happen. Tenel Ka grabbed Jacen’s arm and drug him away, and all four of them ran excitedly to the river. Jaina placed her bag on the ground, and tugged her shirt over her head, dropping it on top of her bag. She stood at the edge of the stream in her dark yellow bathing suit and a pair of shorts. She dipped her toe in to test the water. She shivered. ‘Of course it’s cold…’ she thought. She pulled her foot back to the shore. Tenel Ka walked over to her and asked how the water felt. “It’s cold…it’s always cold…” Jaina pouted. Just as Tenel Ka was about to feel the water, the two boys came bursting out of a nearby bush and threw the girls into the river. Jaina surfaced, with Tenel Ka right behind her. Jaina sputtered, spitting water away from her mouth. “That was not funny.” Tenel Ka growled, however still showing no true emotion. Jacen, who had been laughing, suddenly felt a wave of fear rush over him. “Was it worth it?” She asked threateningly. Jacen wanted so badly to answer yes, but he knew no matter what he said, he would be severely hurt anyway. Tenel Ka climbed out of the frigid water, her red hair dripping with water, straightening out her bikini top. She walked towards him slowly, as he backed up. She cut of his retreat by backing him into a nearby tree. Jacen looked around his to try and find an escape. The only way out was to jump into the river. ‘Oh that’s great…its either get beaten up by Tenel Ka, or jump into a freezing river with all my clothes on…’ Jacen thought. He knew he had to run. Tenel Ka smirked, and Jacen, seeing no other way, took off running. He had hoped that he could have gotten off easy by jumping in, but his escaping only fed the chase. She ran quickly after him, laughing. Jacen was clumsily trying to pull his shirt off so he could save at least some of his clothes. He succeeded in pulling it off and threw it on the ground. He reached the edge of the bank and dove in. A chill ran through his body as he was captured by the icy coldness of the water. ‘Maybe she’ll give up now that I’m in the water…’ He thought. Tenel Ka stood at the edge of the bank staring at him. Jacen smiled an innocent smile, but looked as if to say “Too bad…” Soon, he realized that the water wasn’t as cold anymore and began to move around. Tenel Ka still stood on the riverbank, staring at him, her arms folded over her chest. Jacen felt a little safer after a few minutes of such ‘activity’, and he swam to the shore. Just as he was reaching a more shallow part of the river, Tenel Ka’s muscles flinched, and an evil smirk formed on her mouth. Jacen hadn’t noticed for he had been too busy concentrating on swimming. He looked up at her once his feet could reach the bottom of the river, just in time to see her jump in right at him. She balled her body up and created a large splash. Jacen didn’t move, and once the water had settled, he stood where he was with an annoyed look on his face, water dripping down it. Jaina, who had been watching Tenel Ka, giggled loudly in amusement. Jacen looked at her, now pouting. She tried to stifle her laugh, somewhat unsuccessfully, holding her hands over her mouth. Jacen looked back towards Tenel Ka, who was standing with her face right in front of his. “Ok, we’re even…” He said in defeat. He slipped his hands around her waist, pulling her body closer to his. “Oh no my friend…not yet…” She said evilly. Jacen pulled her into a kiss before she could say anything further. Jacen woke up to a cold room, and no one in his bed. He sat up, wondering where Tenel Ka had gone. The sky was still dark, and he turned and stared at his chrono. ‘3:30…what’s she up to now?’ Jacen thought sleepily. Tenel Ka had gotten up from the bed not too much earlier, and was standing out on the balcony. Jacen grabbed a blanket and walked out to her. “What’s wrong? Why are you out here?” He asked calmly. “I could not sleep well…I don’t feel good.” She answered. Jacen put his arm around her thin waist, wrapping the blanket around them. -TK POV- His arm around me felt so strong, like it would never let me go. I was uncomfortable. I mean, it felt so good to be held by him, but he made me uncomfortable. I know I love him. He knows that. I just feel like something bad is going to happen- that I’ll never see him again… -J POV- She was so easy to hold, never forcing against me, and leaning into my grip. But I didn’t understand why she didn’t seem to enjoy it. I haven’t seen her in a long time, I’ve dreamt of nothing else but her for all that time. I wish she could know how much I love her, but I can’t tell her that- there are no words… He turned and gazed into her eyes. The silver stars reflecting in them. She stared back into his. “Jacen…I…” She began. Jacen’s eyes urged her on. “I need you…” She breathed. She pulled him into a deep, passionate kiss. Jacen’s mind raced with confusion and pleasure at the same time. Was this the Tenel Ka he knew? No, of course not…it couldn’t be. She never would have kissed him so willingly. Tenel Ka’s hands slid up his back, rubbing it gingerly. Jacen’s questions were all erased when she pressed her lips harder against his. He wrapped his muscular arms tighter around her. She pressed her slender body against his, allowing him to take control. Jacen let go of everything, and poured all of the love in his heart into this kiss. Tenel Ka began to shake; she broke the kiss, turning her head away. She closed her eyes, sinking her face into his shoulder, fighting the tears. -TK POV- What’s wrong with me? Why did I do that? He must think I’m crazy. I guess I’m just so scared that I can’t control myself anymore. Or maybe it’s because I really do need him. Who knows… -J POV- Am I going crazy? What was that for? It’s not that we’ve never kissed…we’ve kissed a few times… but she’s never kissed me on her own. But it’s like she has no power over it. She’s killing me, every time she looks at me, I feel like I’m dying. Why can’t I tell her how deeply I love her? I love her more than anything, and she must know that by now. But I’m not sure how much longer I can restrain myself from not being able to say it. Jacen grabbed her shoulders and pulled her away. He looked into her eyes. She couldn’t make eye contact with him. She was still shaking, more aggressively than before. He let her go, allowing her to fall back into him. He rested his head into her soft red hair, rubbing her back, trying to calm her down. She took deep breaths, gaining more control over herself. “Don’t give up, Jace…” She said through shivers. Jacen was confused, but said only one thing in response- “I wont.” He picked her up and carried her back into his room, placing her gently on the bed. She snuggled up to his chest and fell asleep for the first time in weeks. *** Enjoy! -Skywalker -----signature----- -Skywalker -Rogue Princess Smuggler
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Eowyn_Jade Registered: Jan '03	Date Posted: 4/23/03 12:45pm Subject: RE: Only You ::J/TK-J/Z:: updated 4/23!!
	oh this is such a sweet story! but I sense something is going to go wrong soon... Can't wait to read the next post! EJ -----signature----- "You guys are like ravenous wolves." -Devin ~ Defying Gravity ~
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Ra_Skywalker420 Registered: Mar '03	Date Posted: 4/24/03 9:24am Subject: RE: Only You ::J/TK-J/Z:: updated 4/23!! - Date Edited: 4/24/03 8:37pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Ra_Skywalker420
	Hey guys, um...opening night this weekend for our play! havent gotten hardly any downtime...been at school for 14 hours a day at least. lots of fun, but tiring. i'll have a post up prob next week. sorry for the delay. -Skywalker -----signature----- -Skywalker -Rogue Princess Smuggler
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jacesolo1138 Registered: Jan '02	Date Posted: 4/24/03 4:51pm Subject: RE: Only You ::J/TK-J/Z:: updated 4/23!!
	Great post! ~jacesolo1138~ -----signature----- Darkness Returns (YJK, Jacen/Tenel Ka) http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=10935977&replies=2
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Ra_Skywalker420 Registered: Mar '03	Date Posted: 5/1/03 2:15pm Subject: RE: Only You ::J/TK-J/Z:: updated 4/23!!
	ok so maybe i lied a little...well, i mean about having a post up soon...i just havent been able to write much lately. i'll try and get one up sometime... -----signature----- -Skywalker -Rogue Princess Smuggler
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Midnight_Jedi Registered: Jan '03	Date Posted: 5/1/03 4:18pm Subject: RE: Only You ::J/TK-J/Z:: updated 4/23!!
	That was...wow... I'm intrigued, I have to know what's going on with Tenel Ka now. Great, I'll probably sit there in class all day on obsess over it. That's a good thing, though, sometimes I say that to people and they get all offensive... Just one thing, if you put two spaces between paragraphs, it makes it a bit more spaced out and easier on the eyes, besdies that it was awesome and I can't wait to read more! ~~MJ~~ P.S. As a J/TK author, it's great to see more of them on the boards!! -----signature----- I wish I could be your tear, so I could be born a sparkle in your eye, live a caress on your cheek and die a lingering kiss on your lips "Sometimes I pretend that I'm in another world, free from the shackles of reality" -Tahiri, "Fire Lights" by Midnight
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Rogue11JS Registered: Jun '02	Date Posted: 5/1/03 4:48pm Subject: RE: Only You ::J/TK-J/Z:: updated 4/23!!
	This is really cool! Im a little confused but this is really cool! one of my stories was going to have some j/t stuff in it but i had to change it because i couldnt write Tenel Ka well enough I made her sound funny. But you write her pretty well she tends to be one of the harder charaters to describe the hardest one is Leia though every author ive ever read a book from always made her seem kind of well... Dumb.. and Leias not dumb there are a few fan fic writters who do a very good job of it and some times i wish they would just replace some of the actual writters. Great Job MORE SOON??? -----signature----- Proud Jedi Master Of TenelKaJedi-RIP my friend JEDI BLOOPERS: http://boards.theforce.net/Beyond_the_Saga/b10477/11488158/?474 Dont mess with me and my 64 personalities My life or hers:http://boards.theforce.net/Beyond_the_Saga/b10477/11343662/?420 Yub
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