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Author Topic: The Seditious Force: A/N 6/15J/J J/TK L/M H/L AU NJO Conclusion
JainaPadmeJade  5058 posts
Registered: Dec '02
22849_Padmé
Date Posted: 7/29/03 1:05pm Subject: The Seditious Force: A/N 6/15J/J J/TK L/M H/L AU NJO Conclusion - Date Edited: 6/15/04 9:04pm (7 edits total) Edited By: JainaPadmeJade
Hey everybody!!!

First and foremost I would like to thank my master: Zara_Valinor for just supporting me and being so understanding through all of this!! And also a HUGE thanks to my beta: Jedi_Jai!! I love u man...u're the best!!!

Second I would like to thank anyone who reads this!! Responses would be nice since I am a feedback junkie!!! tongue

Disclaimer: I don't own anything or anyone belonging to Lucas or Zahn or the respective people that created that marvelous galaxy a long time ago, far,far away! It's there sandbox...I'm just trying to make a sandcastle. tongue

Anyways here goes the summary. It's kinda like what you would see on the back cover of a book.

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Searches are being conducted for answers that have no definite questions. As Sekot becomes the new ally for the Galactic Federation of Free Alliance the war may be already won. Heresies and prophecies are becoming revealed, but one question still remains.Some questions don’t have any answers as some plots have no true villain.
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And here's the teaser:
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My hair was rustled by the chilly air and as were my dark cloaks. I let them blow and my once happy, care-free eyes, linger on the disaster below. Now my eyes were dark and held a depth than if any being looked into then they would be absorbed into their black voids and be swallowed up by the torture that had once prevailed over me. Everything I had experienced in my younger years up until now could never compare with what I saw, and that has to be some record. I think these creatures even make Palpatine seem like some hero.

Hero. That had been a word thrown around recklessly in my lifetime. All those heroes died in front of my eyes, and even the few that escaped I’m sure were dead now. Everything was just gone.

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Well there ya have it!! Just to let everyone know, this is replacing my old thread: The Unifying Prophecy.

Love and Lightsabers~JPJ


 

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Star-Lead  902 posts
Registered: Feb '03
6630_Nebulon-B
Date Posted: 7/29/03 2:29pm Subject: RE: The Seditious Force: Summary/Teaser up-7/29 S/S
Interesting, very interesting indeed.

I'll try and keep this up for JPJ.

 

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J_M_Bulldog  2837 posts
Registered: Apr '03
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Date Posted: 7/29/03 3:10pm Subject: RE: The Seditious Force: Summary/Teaser up-7/29 S/S
Thanks for the PM.
I will keep an eye on this.

 

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GreatOne  3725 posts
Registered: May '03
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Date Posted: 7/29/03 4:26pm Subject: RE: The Seditious Force: Summary/Teaser up-7/29 S/S
I will check back to see what happens next....

 
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ZaraValinor  4736 posts
Registered: May '02
47805_Ben Skywalker
Date Posted: 7/29/03 10:47pm Subject: RE: The Seditious Force: Summary/Teaser up-7/29 S/S AU NJO Ending
Can't wait for more my young apprentice.

 

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Star-Lead  902 posts
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Date Posted: 7/31/03 8:18am Subject: RE: The Seditious Force: Summary/Teaser up-7/29 S/S AU NJO Ending
*drags thread onto first page*

Get up.

 

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Star-Lead  902 posts
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Date Posted: 8/1/03 10:59am Subject: RE: The Seditious Force: Summary/Teaser up-7/29 S/S AU NJO Ending
Up.

 

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ZaraValinor  4736 posts
Registered: May '02
47805_Ben Skywalker
Date Posted: 8/4/03 9:03am Subject: RE: The Seditious Force: Summary/Teaser up-7/29 S/S AU NJO Ending
Padawan where are you?

 

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ZaraValinor  4736 posts
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Date Posted: 8/19/03 9:49am Subject: RE: The Seditious Force: Summary/Teaser up-7/29 S/S AU NJO Ending
Upping for my young apprentice.

 

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JainaPadmeJade  5058 posts
Registered: Dec '02
22849_Padmé
Date Posted: 9/22/03 4:01pm Subject: RE: The Seditious Force: Summary/Teaser up-7/29 S/S AU NJO Ending
Hey everyone!! I'm so sorry I haven't updated in forever....school has it's nastly claws wrapped around me...but I have a post!! Thanks to all of u who read it!!

 

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Guess who's back...back again?
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JainaPadmeJade  5058 posts
Registered: Dec '02
22849_Padmé
Date Posted: 9/22/03 4:03pm Subject: RE: The Seditious Force: Chapter 1 up!! RENEWED DESTRUCTION-9/22 S/S AU NJO Ending
Disclaimer: Well I obviously don’t own Star Wars. I’m just a simple girl using trying to tell a lil story. All respected characters belong to their respected creator’s. I don’t wanna bore ya with the legal crap, so let’s just move on my story ok?
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Chapter 1-Renewed Destruction

Stars twinkled above shining brightly. The black night was a warm cloak that surrounded me with those comforting sparkling specs that never changed, no matter where my life took me. When I breathed again the damp, thick air, full of the smell of death and destruction that lingered from the massacre below filled my senses and I was once again forced to recognize my bearings. On one of the tallest buildings ever built in the whirlwind of worlds that some call a galaxy, I stood, my hair whipping in the harsh wind that blew every disaster I had encountered in my lifetime in my face. Now it was reduced to just a pillar of rust being devoured by green vines and slime, much like every skyscraper, building, nightclub, and landing bay of Coruscant.

Everything around me was lush, green, and full of different colors contrasting to the old planet-city that was filled with the grays of metals and the clear blues of the glass and the sky. Only parts of the heavens could be viewed between the web of highways and steel that intertwined above your head. All that majesty was gone. It was replaced with organic technology of some ruthless creatures that I was quite unfamiliar with. Some plant-like monster was devouring everything I had worked for my entire life. Who did they think they were anyways? Even I knew this planet was desolate. They took destinies away from many innocent souls and claimed the lives of mere bystanders. Families separated, loves left to be blown away by the cold night air, everything was gone. Even the memories brought pain and only made the present worse.

My hair was rustled by the chilly air and as were my dark cloaks. I let them blow and my once happy, care-free eyes, linger on the disaster below. Now my eyes were dark and held a depth than if any being looked into then they would be absorbed into their black voids and be swallowed up by the torture that had once prevailed over me. Everything I had experienced in my younger years up until now could never compare with what I saw, and that has to be some record. I think these creatures even make Palpatine seem like some hero.

Hero. That had been a word thrown around recklessly in my lifetime. All those heroes died in front of my eyes, and even the few that escaped I’m sure were dead now. Everything was just gone.

A sigh escaped my mouth. My thoughts had never gotten the best of me. I was always too busy with some business to ever concentrate on my life, or what happened to me. I had always separated myself from my family and friends and in the end it had cost me the lives of everyone I loved. Recalling the list would be too long and too painful. The pain would consume me like love once had and I would probably plummet from my open prison down to my eternal fate. Maybe that would not be so bad. At least I would be among friends and family for eternity.

No, that would not solve my problems. I know somehow, someone out here, maybe not on this planet but somewhere in this galaxy, is searching for me and needs me. Hell, this galaxy needs me. Turning my back on the familiar landscape that I had watched for the past couple of minutes, I pulled the cloak over my head to hide my features. I can see a new landscape, still filled with the same horrors of the previous one and even some new ones. The good thing is they don’t see me. Nothing one can predict who I am.

Whipping me out of my thoughts blasts are heard from below and I look down and watch the spectacular display of lights that had consistently filled my life. One fragment of light misses its target and hits my pillar. Then another one soon followed by others. My feet start to shake as I realize that I don’t want to be on top of this thing for long. Before I could react a strong force rocked my pillar and it began to fall . . .directly behind me as it knocked me off.

Quickly I fumbled with my belt and uncoiled a whip. With a flip of my wrist the black string snapped around the pillar and swung me to the other side so I was looking at the ground coming closer and closer to me. Shots still hit my pillar and once I was low enough so it was safe to jump I took the chance and threw myself off my base and onto the swampy ground.

My feet began to sink as they made contact. In a few moments I was engulfed by murky green water. ‘This just gets better and better by the moment now doesn’t it?’ I thought to myself and I took what you would call a deep breath, if you could consider it that as I was underwater, and began to swim even though it was nearly impossible.

I conducted my swim for a few minutes before I had to come up for air. My left hand wiped the slime off my face while my right poked around for any weapon to use. Since no one was around and my blaster was pointed to an invisible foe, I put it in my belt, and tried walking though the slush and not nearly drown like before.

I looked up once again at the stars as I sat down on a metal plank that was “floating” in the moving ground. “Stars don’t fail me,” I whispered to those twinkling specks and it seemed to me they nodded, or at least winked at my comment. I had to move on.

My platform took me for another half of a kilometer before it reached solid fround. Once my feet were no planted in firmer soil, I began to tread my way towards more destroyed buildings.

Lost was the only word that could describe how I felt in this odd enviroment. Nothing around me looked even vaguely familiar, I was lost.

"And alone," I added to my thoughts. At least the soldiers had provided company for myself and kept my analytical mind occupied. Now all I had were my thoughts.

That particuliar thought didn't comfort me very much and I continued on my path. The muddied alleyway was dark and droplets of water composed a symphony of gloom. My slimy hands tugged on my hood tighter as if the flimsy piece of cloth could protect me from the impending drear.

My footsteps entered the symphony along with my heart and heavy breathing. Puffs of white clouds used to escape my mouth every time I exhaled on a cold night on Coruscant. Tonight was different. It was still cold, but in a different, harsher way. This cold was different...it chilled me to the bone.

As on cue, my body began to shiver and my teeth began to chatter. My jaw firmly clamped down to stop the barely audible noise. Every noise seemed so loud although there was nothing but silence all around me. Just dead and complete silence.

That was something you could never hear on the capital city.Speeders were always zooming by, people were always walking, shouting to those they recognized. Even at this ungodly hour the city-planet would be bursting with life. It still was ironically, just not the same kind of life.

Large living organisms replaced buildings, lighted insects replaced lamps, and tattooed monstrosities replaced people. Everything I had known was gone.

"Crack!" My head snapped up at the harsh sound that echoed throughout the planet. I walked slowly towards the direction of the sound. A scream caused me move faster, only to have me stop dead quickly in my tracks.

Before me was an open, vast field. In my terms I would consider it a large farm with the tiny dots that spotted it being the harvesters that reaped the rich land, but that was far from it. The land was a deep emerald green, even in the night one could see that. Yellow lights emitted a dim glow on the beings that filtered through the large plants that grew up from the ground. They were a cross between a tree and a monster, that's the only thing I could relate the vegetation to. Blue globes lay on the ground, obviously the object of their gathering.

The gatherers. I swallowed hard, fighting the lump in my throat. That was what had caught my attention. I couldn't see very clearly but I could make out the slumped forms of those working. In between every few would be a figure who was larger than the rest. The muscles and the scars that could be seen identified them as the new invaders. Those working were a combination of varying species in all different sizes and ages. At least they were familiar to me. Maybe that was what pained me. All were slumped and saddened and their eyes had a dazed look that reflected in the faint light. They were slaves.

Things certainly had changed in this galaxy. I bent down and picked a globe off from the ground. Closer it had traces of purple and green lines. I tilted the soft objected in my hands to inspect it more efficiently. I was slowly familiarizing myself with my new surroundings.

The cracking of whips, screams, and the mechanic movements of the beings in front of me was overwhelming me. I had to leave, not because of fear that I would become a slave, but out of fear that someone would see me. I had no strength to fight.

But in an odd way I did. Once I saw Coruscant for what it really was I thought I had lost the battle that had begun when I was young. All the reasons I fought for were buried in the sea of plants, but still there was something, someone, worth fighting for. Them.

Becoming one of them would do me no good. I had to move on, keep fighting. I gave my new hopes one last glance and started moving in another direction, towards what used to be a warehouse of some sorts.

I was a few mere steps away from my destination when a strange sound met my ears. I carefully unhooked my blaster and readied myself to shoot at anything. Shadows flickered over the building and I shot, the light crashing into the surface of the building. It started to collapse and dust and ashes mixed in the air. I hung my head down, below my hood so the debris wouldn’t fog my eyes. In the distance I could see an army of soldiers all waiting for me.

I raised my blaster, prepared to fight, like all heroes did.


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Star-Lead  902 posts
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Date Posted: 9/23/03 10:22am Subject: RE: The Seditious Force: Chapter 1 up!! RENEWED DESTRUCTION-9/22 S/S AU NJO Ending
Interesting indeed.

 

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ZaraValinor  4736 posts
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Date Posted: 9/30/03 1:37pm Subject: RE: The Seditious Force: Chapter 1 up!! RENEWED DESTRUCTION-9/22 S/S AU NJO Ending
Sorry it took so long to get to this but wonderful job, Padawan.

 

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JainaPadmeJade  5058 posts
Registered: Dec '02
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Date Posted: 11/8/03 5:50pm Subject: RE: The Seditious Force: Chapter 1 up!! RENEWED DESTRUCTION-9/22 S/S AU NJO Ending
Hey!!

Well I'm reviving this thread!! Son there wil be a new post!! Forgive me for nt droping in for an eternity. Marching bad has taken over my life...but look at my sig! Then school takes up all my free time! But now that amrching season is over I have more time on y hands which i can put into typing this story!! I really missed writing it and seeing u guys!! Se y'all soon!! Get the word out that the new chap will be posted in a week at the most! L&L~JPJ

 

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"A goddess, huh? You can't say the kid lacks ambition."
Padawan to Zara_Valinor
Guess who's back...back again?
CUz the baords just felt so empty without me
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JainaPadmeJade  5058 posts
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Date Posted: 11/11/03 10:06am Subject: RE: The Seditious Force: A/N-11/06 S/S AU NJO Ending-Awesome stuff to come..spread the word!
ok...bumping this thread up..love to hear from y'all!

 

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Padawan to Zara_Valinor
Guess who's back...back again?
CUz the baords just felt so empty without me
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Date Posted: 11/11/03 8:08pm Subject: RE: The Seditious Force: A/N-11/06 J/J J/TK L/M H/l AU NJO Conc- Awesome stuff to come..spread the w
Sounds coom.

Who's the characther, Jaina ?

 

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