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RK_Striker_JK_5  20142 posts
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Date Posted: 10/28/03 8:26pm Subject: Three New Sailor Senshi (crossover with Sailor Moon) Rewrite started. Link on page 50. - Date Edited: 6/5/06 8:05am (311 edits total) Edited By: RK_Striker_JK_5
Okay...this is my first time posting a fanfic on these boards. is this story good? Compared to some people here, I'm just barely learning English. Anyway, Star Wars is owned by George Lucas. Sailor Moon was created by Naoko Takeuchi.

And now, without further ado...

Three New Sailor Senshi

Chapter One: Which Way?
Nobody knows who discovered hyperspace. Only through that otherworldly dimension was faster-than-light travel possible, and it was very dangerous. One misstep would plunge you into the abyss-or worse.

Jaina Solo wouldn't have it any other way. She was the daughter of Han Solo, one of the galaxy's biggest risk-takers. Sometimes the thrill was the only thing that reminded her she was alive. Besides which, she was a Jedi. A little trip through an alternate form of reality was nothing to her. She could feel where the instabilities were, and how much she could push the ships she piloted.

Her favorite ship to pilot was the Rock Dragon. It nominally belonged to her friend Tenel Ka, but since she wasn't the best pilot, it fell to Jaina to fly the sleek Hapan starship. This particular time was quite special. She and a group of her closest friends were returning from a vacation on Coruscant. Now they were returning to Yavin IV in order to learn how to become Jedi Knights, the protectors of the galaxy.

By her side was Lowbacca, an adolescent Wookiee. The two worked in sync, checking for course corrections, bleeding off excess static discharge and a dozen other tasks.

It almost didn't leave her enough time to glance out the window, but she was able to spot an area of turbulence set against the red haze of hyperspace. A small tingle ran up her spine, as the black vortex grew closer. "I have a bad feeling about that." She said as she began steering the ship away from it.

After a few minutes Jaina was ready to breathe a sigh of relief. The Rock Dragon was about to pass that little instability. Then the comm system crackled to life. "Ah, Jaina? We got a problem back here." It was Jacen; Jaina's twin brother. "I found this really cool rat-like thing near the engines. Unfortunately it looks-" His voice was drowned out by an explosion amidships. Alarm Klaxons began blaring as emergency lights dimmed.

Lowbacca growled out a series of curses as he struggled to stabilize the ship. Jaina checked the status boards. "Our starboard engine just blew! We're losing power and our hyperdrive cutoff switch is inoperative."

Jaina fought rising panic. Without the cutoff switch, the Rock Dragon could be stranded in hyperspace forever.

Lowbacca pointed out the window and barked. His translator droid M-TD activated. "Master Lowbacca indicates that we're caught in a gravitic funnel and are being pulled toward-are you sure?" The Wookiee nodded. "Oh, my! We are being pulled toward that instability! We'll be dashed to a million pieces!" The ship began spinning as it came closer. Jaina dumped all remaining power into the shields and inertial damping. She could only hope it was enough…
*****
She felt the impact, as sure as if the ship had hit her directly. After 10,000 years of existence, not much affected Meiou Setsuna. As the guardian of time for her universe, she had literally seen it all. Atrocities, acts of compassion, genocide, the birth of new species…all had transpired in her lifetime.

All of those events, however, were a normal part of the timestream. A starship from an alternate universe crashing through a weak point in the space-time continuum was not part of the timestream! Setsuna knew she had to act quickly in order to determine the effects it would have on future events. She stepped into an alley. Before her, a large ornate door appeared. It silently swung open, and the guardian of time stepped in.

A 'normal' person would only see a bright mist with beams of light before them. Setsuna was no normal person. She instantly began perceiving the patterns. One trail, bright and strong, was the proper timeline. The coming darkness and the founding of Crystal Tokyo shone through. Setsuna looked down at another thread, darker and thinner. It was what 'could' happen if the occupants of the starship were allowed to land. Death, tragedy and chaos awaited if they lived. It wasn't a certainty, but Setsuna didn't deal in certainties; she had to make the hard decisions on the fly. Sometimes it didn't work, but most of the time it did. She concentrated, and a small ornate rod appeared in her hand. Her scarlet eyes hardened as she spoke.

"Pluto Star Power, Make-up!"

 

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EmilieDarklighter  4707 posts
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Date Posted: 10/29/03 5:16am Subject: RE: Three New Sailor Senshi (crossover with Sailor Moon)
Oooh! SW and SM! I'm an SM author myself. *sits down to wait for more*

 

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RK_Striker_JK_5  20142 posts
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Date Posted: 10/29/03 7:30am Subject: RE: Three New Sailor Senshi (crossover with Sailor Moon)
Well, thanks for replying, EmilieDarklighter. More will be up on Thursday. In the meantime(looks around), Up!

 

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Trickster_Jaina_Fel  5203 posts
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Date Posted: 10/29/03 4:27pm Subject: RE: Three New Sailor Senshi (crossover with Sailor Moon) - Date Edited: 10/29/03 6:20pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Trickster_Jaina_Fel
i know absolutely zip about SM, but i'll try to get back and read this soon happy then i'll edit this...

until the potatoes are peeled!

bump^

~TJF

EDIT: great start! is zekk going to be in this? (i know, i know, i'm bad, but i had to ask)

and i'll just pretend i know what's going on with the....other....person tongue wink

 

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MoonChild  1583 posts
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Date Posted: 10/29/03 5:58pm Subject: RE: Three New Sailor Senshi (crossover with Sailor Moon)
Keep going!!

 

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EmilieDarklighter  4707 posts
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Date Posted: 10/29/03 5:59pm Subject: RE: Three New Sailor Senshi (crossover with Sailor Moon)
Please, call me Emmi. Yes, actually, I'm a rabid U/M fan. Are you using the dub or the manga names in this?

 

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MoonChild  1583 posts
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Date Posted: 10/29/03 6:04pm Subject: RE: Three New Sailor Senshi (crossover with Sailor Moon)
Pleease use manga names! I don't know the english names, I'd be confused

 

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RK_Striker_JK_5  20142 posts
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Date Posted: 10/30/03 12:32pm Subject: RE: Three New Sailor Senshi (crossover with Sailor Moon) - Date Edited: 10/9/05 5:33pm (2 edits total) Edited By: RK_Striker_JK_5
Checks back in I have multiple readers? I must respond right away!

Trickster_Jaina_Fel: You're reading my story? I feel...honored. Seriously, I do. Don't know much about Sailor Moon? Don't worry. I've got an 'exposition' piece ready. And yes, Zekk is in this one. And yes, he and Jaina are...close.

MoonChild:Yes, I'll keep going. And I'm using the original Japanese names for this. It's Usagi and Mamoru, not Serena and Darien. (Ugh!)

Emmi: Okay, I'll call you Emmi. And now, on with the show...or typing...or something.


Jaina's eyes slowly opened as the fog lifted from her brain. Her vision cleared to reveal a teenaged boy staring at her. "You're awake! Thank the Force!" He said. It was Jacen, her twin brother. He extended a hand and helped her to a standing position-only to cause her to almost faint again.

"Woah! Are you trying to help or hinder me?" She said.

Jacen shrugged. "Grumpy after waking up with signs of irritability. It's good to see you all right, sis."

Jaina sidestepped him and went for the controls. "Hah, hah. Have we contacted Coruscant yet? Mom and Dad are probably worried sick about us." She began trying to hail the capital planet, but there was only static on the comm frequencies.

She turned back to Jacen. "What's going on? It's working, so why isn't it receiving?" Jaina quickly sensed her brother's mood shift ever so slightly into panic.

"To be perfectly frank, we don't know. The comm system's working, but it's not picking up anything. To top it all off, Tenel Ka says the galaxy feels 'different'. She couldn't elaborate any further, but after a while we all felt it."

Jaina immediately reached out with the Force. She felt the fabric of the universe, the ties that bound reality together. It was quickly apparent that the fabric of space-time was different. She reached out farther, past this system. There was less life in this galaxy, and it was concentrated on the rim, not in the galactic core. "What's going on?" She said, barely above a whisper.

Jacen put his hand on her shoulder and drew her into a hug. "Don't worry. We'll find out together. That's when we're strongest!"

Chapter Two: Blundering Towards Friendship
After a few minutes, Jacen and Jaina headed aft to the Rock Dragon's passenger quarters to meet with the rest of their friends. There were seven of them, not counting the twins. Lowbacca barked a greeting. The gangly, fur-covered Wookiee's translator translated. "Master Lowbacca greets you, Master Jacen and Mistress Jaina."

Tenel Ka, a Jedi trainee from two worlds-the frontier Dathomir and regal Hapes- walked towards her. "My friend Jaina, I am glad to see you alive and well."

Jaina nodded. "So am I." She looked around. "Does anybody know where we are? When we are?"

A rugged-looking individual named Zekk spoke up, his emerald eyes shining. "I believe I know what's going on, but you are not going to believe it" He looked around before speaking again. "I believe we are in what is known as an alternate reality."

Everybody's face twisted in confusion. It was a full minute before anybody spoke. "Ahem. Excuse me, but what is an 'alternate reality'?" It was Raynar, an Alderaanian Jedi with the sometimes-annoying habit of asking questions.

Zekk bit his lip as he gathered his thoughts. "Okay. This is…what if Master Skywalker never blew up the Death Star?" He scratched his forehead in thought.

Fortunately for Zekk, a voice from behind him spoke up. "Alternate realities are next to impossible to explain at best. It may not be wise to try, Zekk." This time it was Anakin Solo, Jacen and Jaina's younger brother. He resembled a young Luke Skywalker with his dirty-blonde hair and ice-blue eyes. "All we know is we're here, cut off from our loved ones. There's a city 2.3 kilometers to the northeast populated by humans. Some of us should go there for supplies while the rest stay behind for repairs." He looked around. "Any volunteers?"

Please review, and a hearty up, up and away!!!!! happy

 

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Date Posted: 10/30/03 1:16pm Subject: RE: Three New Sailor Senshi (crossover with Sailor Moon)
So good!! So THAT'S who my friends are talking about when they say Darien and Serena! I was so confuzzled thank you!!

 

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Date Posted: 11/2/03 3:51pm Subject: RE: Three New Sailor Senshi (crossover with Sailor Moon) New post 10/30/03 - Date Edited: 10/9/05 5:39pm (1 edits total) Edited By: RK_Striker_JK_5
MoonChild: You're welcome. I'd be confused too if I'd never watched the dub. looks around I know I have readers, so I must post for them. I must also attract readers, so I must post for them. Either way, I must post.

*****
After a few minutes it was decided. Zekk would go out, accompanied by Tahiri Veila, a younger Jedi Trainee. The two made a contrasting pair. Zekk was tall, serious-looking and was clad in a black jumpsuit with a vest over it. His emerald eyes constantly scanned the surrounding area for any threats. Tahiri was shorter and had a wide grin plastered on her face. She was clad in an orange jumpsuit with bare feet. Plus, she kept a constant stream of chatter going.

The Rock Dragon had crashed on the largest island of a chain, right near a large mountain. The pair quickly made their way across the landscape, avoiding the small villages whenever possible. Zekk found the houses he passed fascinating. They appeared to be made of some sort of wood, and the symbols on them were intricately drawn on them. He wondered what they meant, but the language he heard from the indigenous population was unknown to him.

Tahiri was loving every minute of the journey! This place wasn't like her homeworld of Tattooine, no sir. Here it was green and lush with plant life, not brown and clogged with sand. She continually talked while she and Zekk walked. "This place is pretty cool. I wonder what that says. Is it even writing? I know Jawa and Tusken as well as basic, but those symbols seem weird to me. I wish-" She abruptly stopped talking when she sensed something…powerful ahead.

Zekk immediately sensed it as well. He motioned Tahiri to stop, and he unclipped a 35-centimeter rod from his belt. With the press of a button a deep red blade sprang from the rod. "Stay behind me." He said.

They had just exited the last village and were on a dirt country road. A strong wind blew, and over the horizon appeared a woman. She was dark-skinned and was wearing a ridiculously short green skirt that showed a lot of leg. She also wore a sleeveless blouse with a black ribbon on front. Knee-length boots and gloves that came up to her elbows completed the almost ridiculous ensemble.

Zekk almost dismissed her until he looked her in the eyes. Those are the eyes of experience, he thought. She's seen death and Force knows what else.

The stranger raised her left hand, and a long staff as tall as her appeared out of nowhere. "I am Sailor Pluto." She said, astonishing both Zekk and Tahiri.

"You speak basic?" He said.

Pluto nodded. "Yes. I am the guardian of time and space. You do not belong here." She lifted the staff and pointed it at Zekk and Tahiri. She whispered.

"Dead Scream."

A torrent of energy ripped through the air straight toward the Jedi, who were moving before Pluto spoke. Tahiri leapt back almost five meters, augmenting her leg strength with the Force. Zekk, meanwhile, had leaped at Pluto with his lightsaber swinging. Pluto immediately brought her staff up and deftly blocked the energy blade, parrying it down and almost slicing Zekk's leg off!" I do not wish to cause you pain in this." She said. "But you must die so the future isn't altered!"

Zekk swore under his breath as he swung. Why isn't my blade cutting through that damned staff? And what the hell was that…'dead scream'? His thoughts were interrupted when Pluto jumped back and raised her staff again. Before she could speak, Zekk knelt down and whipped out a small blaster from an ankle-holster. He squeezed off a half-dozen shots, hoping it would be enough.

Instead of moving, Pluto raised her staff above her head and shouted. "Dark Dome Close!" The top of the staff, a red orb, glowed as a translucent wall of energy encircled the guardian of time. All six bolts bounced off harmlessly.

Zekk swore profusely and in multiple languages. He turned and saw Tahiri standing off to the side of the road. "Tahiri!" He yelled. "Get back and warn the others! I'll take out this Nightsister wanna-be!"

She hesitated. "I don't want to leave you!" She yelled as fear enveloped her.

Zekk's face grew beet-red in anger. "Listen to me you kriffin' barve! Get back to the fratzing Rock Dragon now or else Mini-Daala here's gonna catch them by surprise and kill them. Now go!"

Tahiri swallowed and turned around-only to see something she really wish she hadn't. "Uh, Zekk? We got problems!"

Nine figures approached from the opposite end of the road. Eight were female; wearing the same odd outfit Pluto was wearing. However, the colors of their skirts were different. In the back was a man in…formal wear? He had a tuxedo on with a white mask over his eyes. In his hand was a plant with red petals. The female in the lead had the most bizarre hairstyle Zekk had ever seen. Twin ponytails were tied in back and reached down to her ankles. They were knotted in thick, almost Death Star like balls at the base of her skull. She began talking rapid-fire in the unknown language, all the while gesturing oddly.

Tahiri stared, dumbstruck at the events. Then an idea seized her. She immediately ran at the group, arms outstretched. She stopped halfway between Zekk and the group, dropped to her knees and shouted. "We surrender!" She closed her eyes and waited…

*****
Ten minutes in downtown Tokyo

Tsuskino Usagi was having a perfectly marvelous day. She was fairly certain she had passed a math test in school earlier, and now she was enjoying a hot fudge sundae with her boyfriend and soulmate Chiba Mamoru. In short, a crisis was fated to happen.

As she finished off the sundae, a small device began beeping in her bag lying at her side. She reached over and, after rummaging for three minutes, pulled out her communicator. She opened it up and said. "Yes?"

Pluto's image appeared. "Sailor Senshi! A pair of new enemies has appeared just outside of Tokyo. I will attempt to hold them off, please hurry!" The communicator's screen went dark.

Usagi sat up and glanced over at Mamoru. "We have Senshi business." She said, gaze drifting down to her sundae. "And I wanted a cheeseburger too!" She sniffed as she fought off the tears.

Mamoru sighed as he paid the waitress and hustled Usagi out of there. "I'll get you a cheeseburger when we get back, okay?"

At that her eyes lit up with happiness. "Oh, Mamoru! You're the best!" She hugged him so tightly they nearly stumbled into traffic!

Mamoru guided his girlfriend into his car
and quickly got in. "Do you have a fix on the positions of the other Senshi?" He asked.

Usagi opened her communicator back up. "Hai. Pluto's about half a kilometer outside of town. The rest are gathering at Rei's Temple." She looked out the window. "Oh, we're here!"

Mamoru and Usagi quickly got out and entered a large Shinto Temple. Rei Hino AKA Sailor Mars lived there. They went past the gate and began climbing the 100 steps up to the main building. Finally, they reached the top and were greeted by a young woman in the traditional red and white robes of a Shinto Priest-or in this case, priestess. "It's about time you got here, odango-head. We were wondering when you'd show up."

Usagi glared daggers at her. "Oh, be quiet Rei. Besides, we're not the only ones not here. Minako and Makoto aren't here either."

Rei sighed in frustration. "That's because they're getting us food. Now come on!" She grabbed one of Usagi's ponytails and pulled, forcing her into the building followed by an embarrassed looking Mamoru.

Inside sat four young ladies around an ankle-high table. They were Mizuno Ami, Ten'ou Haruka, Kaiou Michiru and Tomoe Hotaru. Haruka, a tall amazon of a woman got up and walked over to Usagi. "Usagi, what are we waiting for? Setsuna needs us to fight these new enemies." She ran her hand through her short, almost crew-cut length blond hair in impatience.

Usagi nodded. "Hai, I understand. We'll transform and teleport over to Setsuna when Makoto and Minako arrive." Just then, a rather tall brunette and a blond walked in. The brunette was carrying a tray filled with snacks-something that Usagi immediately smelled. "But we shouldn't go fight on an empty stomach."

Haruka felt a gust of wind, and Usagi was gone. She looked around and saw her at the table stuffing her face with food. Ami, Haruka and Hotaru were doing their best to shield themselves from the flying food, but to no avail. Rei quickly pulled her away, while the brunette- Kino Makoto to be exact- smiled. "I'm glad you liked that. I made more for after."

Ami sighed in worry. "I hope Usagi'll leave some for us."

At that Usagi stood straight up and shouted. "All right, let's go!"

Ami, Michiru and Hotaru all got up and shouted. "Hai!" All eight women raised their right hands, and an ornate rod similar to Sailor Pluto's appeared. All eight shouted a phrase, similar but different.

"Moon Eternal Makeup!"

"Mercury Star Power Makeup!"

"Mars Star Power Makeup!"

"Jupiter Star Power Makeup!"

"Venus Star Power Makeup!"

"Neptune Star Power Makeup!"

"Uranus Star Power Makeup!"

"Saturn Star Power makeup!"

Each girl was immediately bathed in a bright light. When it faded, they were no longer mere high school students; they were the Sailor Senshi, guardians of love and justice. Usagi AKA Sailor Moon took Sailor Mars' hand. "It's time to teleport." She said, all trace of her fun side gone. The eight Senshi and Mamoru-who had changed to his alter-ego Tuxedo Mask-joined hands. They closed their eyes as an otherworldly light enveloped them…

When Ami opened her eyes, they were now on a country road outside of Tokyo. As Sailor Mercury, the blue-haired genius tugged at her earring. A deep blue visor materialized over her eyes and a small laptop computer appeared in her hands. She began scanning the road ahead with the sensors embedded in the visor, looking for any signs of the enemy. After a short while she shouted. "Sailor Moon! Pluto is fighting with two people just ahead. They're both very powerful."

Sailor Uranus AKA Haruka unsheathed a jewel-encrusted sword from her side. "Let's just kill them now!"

Sailor Mars shook her head. "No. This doesn't feel right. I don't feel anything evil with those two. It almost feels like they're lost." The raven-haired Senshi stared straight-ahead and concentrated, tapping into what some people call the 'sixth sense'. She could feel when something was going to happen, what people were feeling. It always scared her and thrilled her simultaneously.

After a minute her shoulders slumped in defeat. "I can't determine what they're intentions are."

Sailor Moon half-smiled. "That's okay." She then clenched her fist in determination. "Let's go!"

The eight Senshi and Tuxedo Mask broke out into a dead run and quickly reached Pluto and the two enemies. One was a man dressed in black firing energy bolts at Pluto. The other appeared to be a small girl in an orange jumpsuit. Even weirder was the fact that she wore no shoes. The Champion of love and justice paid those facts no mind as she affected a pre-battle pose and began her speech.

"Hey, you! You can't disturb the peaceful villages here! These people work hard and have a right to live how they please. I can't forgive you for that." She raised her left arm in front of her body and pointed at the two people with her right. "In the name of the Moon, I'll punish you!"

Suddenly the small girl ran at them. Sailor Uranus readied her sword, while a blue light began glowing from Mercury's hands. What happened next surprised everybody. Instead of mutating into some demon, she simply stopped, knelt down, threw both arms in the air and shouted in English! Sailor Moon, Sailor Jupiter, Mars and Saturn immediately turned to Mercury, Uranus, Neptune AKA Michiru and Venus AKA Minako, all asking the same thing. "What did she say?"

Tuxedo Mask, as usual forgotten until now, spoke up. "I believe she said 'We surrender'." He stepped forward and walked toward the girl. "Can you tell them your name?"

The man in black ran incredibly fast and was at her side in a moment. He was also brandishing some sort of energy sword. "Don't tell them anything, Tahiri!"

The girl-Tahiri guessed Tuxedo mask-stepped forward. "My name is Tahiri, and this is Zekk. Who are you? Where are we? And why do you look so ridiculous? And why did that lady shoot at us? What's a 'Dead Scream'?" The normally stoic Mask was taken aback by the stream of questions from the girl.

He looked back at Sailor Moon, who was waiting a translation. "They appear to be lost!" He shouted.

Sailor Moon stepped forward. "Mamo-chan, will you please translate?" He nodded as Sailor Moon began speaking. "We apologize for the attack. Right Pluto?"

The elder Senshi, could only nod, having been taken aback by the sudden turn of events. Was I wrong? Oh, god I could've killed innocent people. She hung her head in shame.

Tuxedo Mask translated Sailor Moon's speech. Tahiri apparently believed them, but Zekk wasn't. He gripped his sword tighter and glared daggers at the entire group. "I want to believe you. "He said through clenched teeth. "But right now I have a hard time believing you after that nutjob back there nearly killed us." He glanced down, and did something nobody expected. He fiddled with his the handle for his sword, and the blade retracted back! He clipped it to his belt and held his hands out to the side.

Sailor Moon smiled. She concentrated, and a light shined over her body. To Zekk and Tahiri's amazement, her clothes melted into strands of energy and retracted back into a broach on her chest! After a second a schoolgirl's uniform appeared. She pointed to herself and said. "Usagi."

*****
Jaina and Tenel Ka watched as Zekk, Tahiri and almost a dozen human females came marching up to the Rock Dragon. Jaina's brown eyes burned a hole into Zekk as he approached her. "So, would you mind explaining who those ladies are?"

Zekk chuckled nervously and said. "What? No, no, no!" he stepped back and motioned for Usagi to step forward. "Jaina Solo, I'd like you to meet Tsuskino Usagi." As the two shook hands, Zekk continued. "You both have something in common. Both of you are royalty of destroyed planets."

Jaina gasped. "You're from Naboo?"

Usagi shook her head. "No. I'm the reincarnation of lunar royalty." She looked up at the sky and pointed at the moon. It was just past noon, so the crater-scarred orb was just barely visible. "Ten thousand years ago, my mother ruled over the Solar System." She motioned to everyone else. "All of us were royalty of our own respective planets, but they were all destroyed by a being known as Metallia."

Tenel Ka's eyebrows shot up. "Ah, aha. And I assume your mother was Force sensitive?" Usagi smiled. "Yes, she was very sensitive and kind."

Jaina let a snort of laughter escape her mouth. She turned away, but the brown-haired lady suddenly found herself confronted by an angry brunette. "Don't laugh at Usagi!" Makoto said, grabbing Jaina by the wrist.

In a flash, Makoto's hands were knocked away by a well-placed chop from Tenel Ka. "Do not touch her." Tenel Ka said. Gray fire burned in her eyes as the 'karate maniac' sized her up.

Makoto quickly went into a defensive stance, but Usagi quickly jumped in front. "No, don't fight! There's no reason to! Zekk explained everything to us!" Makoto and Tenel Ka separated, but the two continued to stare daggers at each other.

Jaina turned away-and almost bumped heads with Ami. "Oh, I'm sorry!" The blue-haired genius said. She stepped back and bowed. "My name is Mizuno Ami, but you may call me Ami."

Jaina nodded. "Well, it's nice to meet you. But you don't have to be so formal." She looked around at the rest. "So, you're the reincarnation of ancient royalty?"

Setsuna, standing in the back, walked up to Jaina and Ami. "Yes. Like you Jedi, we have powers of our own." Her scarlet eyes half-closed for a second, and an ornate rod appeared. She held it high and shouted. "Pluto Star power Makeup!"

A bright flash of light momentarily blinded Jaina and Tenel Ka. When it faded, a strange lady stood in place of Setsuna. Tenel Ka reached out with her senses and probed the lady. "It's the same person!" She said with a hint of surprise.

Sailor Pluto nodded and motioned to her friends. "Each of us can transform into a very powerful warrior known as a Sailor Senshi." A bright flash of light engulfed her, reverting her back to Meiou Setsuna. The guardian of time looked over Jaina's head and saw a large furry biped, a young centaur and three young men running at them. Jaina turned her head and saw Jacen, Lowie, Anakin, Raynar and Lusa. "Well, looks like the gang's all here." She quipped.


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Date Posted: 11/2/03 4:44pm Subject: RE: Three New Sailor Senshi (crossover with Sailor Moon) New post 11/02/03
"But I wanted a cheeseburger!"


LOL That was really good!!

 

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Date Posted: 11/2/03 6:12pm Subject: RE: Three New Sailor Senshi (crossover with Sailor Moon) New post 11/02/03
*mind is swirling from trying to accept all facts given in about SM so that she'll be able to half understand what's going on*

maybe i should try to find some comprehensive guide to the entire SM galaxy...i got the royalty thing, but otherwise i'm lost tongue

oh well, what else is new? ?:|

With the press of a button a deep red blade sprang from the rod

isn't Zekk's lightsaber orange? red's only for dark jedi....

laugh tahiri and zekk...now there's a pair tongue good thing they came along the...uh...sailor senshi or whatever, cuz i think they'd have ended up driving each other insane laugh tongue

btw...when you're writing dialogue, you start a new paragraph each time a new person speaks. ie:

"blah blah blah," jaina said.

"blah-de-blah-blah!" said jacen.

k? happy

i don't suppose you could make a list of the sailor people...i can guess at the sailor moon/pluto/whatever names, but when you throw in the usagi or ami's and all, i get lost blush

great job, Striker grin

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Date Posted: 11/2/03 6:13pm Subject: RE: Three New Sailor Senshi (crossover with Sailor Moon) New post 11/02/03 - Date Edited: 11/2/03 6:48pm (1 edits total) Edited By: JediStarMoonstruck
And the Saturn fanatic of the JC comes in! tongue (check my bio!!!)

I love this!!! Can't wait for more!

Edit: Hey, Trickster_Jaina_Fel! If you need info on Sailor Moon, go here Profiles of the Senshi

 

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Date Posted: 11/3/03 3:25pm Subject: RE: Three New Sailor Senshi (crossover with Sailor Moon) New post 11/02/03 - Date Edited: 11/3/03 3:28pm (1 edits total) Edited By: RK_Striker_JK_5
TFJ-I apologize for confusing the heck out of you. Here is a dramatis personae and small summary of Sailor Moon

Warning!!! Spoilers lie ahead!!!!!

Tsuskino Usagi (In Japan, the family name is usually given first, followed by the given name) is...an idiot. She's constantly late, she's a crybaby and pigs out like a hoover vacuum. One day while running to school(Late), she comes across a strange cat with a crescent-shaped mark on her forehead. Turns out this cat, named Luna, needs Usagi to fight the forces of evil. She gives her a magic wand, she says a phrase...and she transforms into a super-powered idiot named Sailor Moon.
Over the course of 200 episodes, Usagi learns how to control her powers and about her destiny. She also finds friends and(miracle of miracles) gets into high school.Oh, yeah. Her friends. Along the way she meets up with other reincarnated people from the old planetary kingdoms. They are:

Mizuno Ami(Sailor Mercury)-A shy, unassuming girl-with an IQ of 300. She knows everything or at least as close as you can get to everything.

Hino Rei(Sailor Mars)-a fiery tempered girl with psychic powers including precognition and the ability to seal away evil. She and Usagi are best friends-when they're not trying to kill each other.

Kino Makoto(Sailor Jupiter)-The 'tomboy' of the group. Her parents died in a plane crash when she was about 5, and she apparently witnessed it. Every male alive reminds her of her old boyfriend.

Aino Minako(Sailor Venus)-She was discovered by a cat named Artimis about a year before Usagi, so she has more experience. However, she can act ditzier than Usagi at times(thereby proving there are no absolutes).

Ten'ou Haruka(Sailor Uranus)-Even more tomboyish than Makoto. She's older than the others mentioned, and can be extremely arrogant and rash.

Kaiou Michiru(Sailor Neptune)-Very elegant and refined, about the same age as Haruka, but can be a bit standoffish.

Tomoe Hotaru(Sailor Saturn)-Umm...She's about ten years old and can destroy the planet. Consequently she can be slightly messed up. She alternates between very warm and loving and totally cold and psychotic.

Meiou Setsuna(Sailor Pluto)-She's about ten thousand years old, at least according to my sources. Not much phases her, and she can seem very aloof, but in reality, she's very lonely.

Chiba Mamoru(Tuxedo Mask[Kamen]-Usagi's soulmate. The two were in love during the fall of the Moon Kingdom 10,000 years ago, and they're in love today. He's not integral to the fic, but you might want to know who he is. And finally...

Jadeite-Sailor Moon's first enemy, a general of the Dark kingdom (The organization that destroyed the Moon Kingdom). He failed too many times and Beryl, the main baddie, froze him in crystal...
I start a new paragraph with new dialogue? I honestly didn't know that. Hmm, thank you! And Zekk's lightsaber...plot fix coming up!

MoonChild-Thank you. I try to capture the characters.

JediStarMoonstruck-Welcome! You like Saturn? She's my second favorite, behind Mercury. And thanks for the link. It might do better than my crappy summary.

Okay. I'll have a new post tomorrow. In the meantime, up!

 

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Date Posted: 11/3/03 3:52pm Subject: RE: Three New Sailor Senshi (crossover with Sailor Moon) New post 11/02/03
thanks! grin

*has the feeling she'll be checking back to this post every few minutes for the first dozens of chapters, but oh well tongue wink *

bump^

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Date Posted: 11/4/03 6:24pm Subject: RE: Three New Sailor Senshi (crossover with Sailor Moon) New post 11/02/03 - Date Edited: 10/9/05 5:42pm (2 edits total) Edited By: RK_Striker_JK_5
Trickster_Jaina_Fel-You are welcome. And now, withpout further ado. My next post. The first part introduces the villain, and might seem a bit confusing. And there will be some(probably really bad) character development.

Chapter Three: A Match Made in Hell-And matches Made in heaven

Far to the north lay the Arctic Circle, sight of an invasion that was started 10,000 years ago-and was just stopped ten years ago. The Dark Kingdom under the control of Queen Beryl tried to invade, conquer and defile Earth, all because she couldn't get the guy 10,000 years ago. Because of her jealousy, a pocket reality was destroyed and a species made extinct-save for one individual.

Time had no meaning for him anymore. What little sensory input he got was distorted, like a dream you can't wake up from-or a nightmare. He had been frozen in crystal with no chance of escape-until now.

A dark cloud appeared above his prison. He heard a voice in his mind, not unlike the other voices in his head. This one, however, actually sounded calm.

Greetings, my young apprentice. I have been awaiting you.

Huh? Who are…what? Are you alive? Are you dead? Are you me? Am I me?

I am your new master. I can give you freedom from this crystal prison, and sanity. Will you accept my offer?[i]

[i]Sure. No! Yes! No! Yes! PLEASE END THIS!

Very well. The cloud descended over the crystal, cracking it like an egg. After a few seconds it shattered, freeing the man inside. He crumbled to the ground, shivering. He wore a gray uniform with red trim. His eyes darted all around, finally settling on the dark cloud of evil descending upon him. After a minute of coughing, he spoke his first words in ten years. "AAAAAAHHHHHHHHH! Get away from me!" He threw up his arms and attempted to throw up a telekinetic shield. Unfortunately for him, the decade in stasis had drained his energy to nothing. The cloud enveloped him, permeated and consumed him. The man rose, his formerly blue eyes now an eerie orange.

he voice came to him again. Excellent my young apprentice. The man smiled the smile of a predator. "Thank you, but who are you?"

I was…I am Palpatine, dark lord of the Sith. And you, Jaedite, shall be the vessel for our vengeance. Overhead the heavens rumbled as they witnessed the most unholy of unions.

*****
Jaina, Zekk and Ami stood in front of the Rock Dragon's starboard engine and peered into an open panel. Jaina's gloved hand reached in and tugged on a scorched piece of metal. "This intake housing is warped, but it should be strong enough for takeoff and maneuvering." She said. A sigh escaped her lips as she thought about that rat that chewed through that power cable yesterday. "I hope Jacen enjoys his new 'pet'." She said through clenched teeth.

Zekk chuckled to himself. The rat was now in an impromptu cage constructed out of mesh and wiring. "Hey, from what I hear, this happened to you guys before." Ami glanced at the two, then stepped forward and stuck her head and arms straight into the hole.

"I believe this is what you call the hyperdrive motivator, correct?" She said, pulling out a small metallic cube. She extracted herself from the panel and handed it to Zekk. "It appears functional."

Zekk's emerald eyes scanned the motivator. Without that two kilogram hunk of metal, the Rock Dragon-and everyone on board-would be stuck on this Earth forever.

He looked up and said to Jaina. "It looks fine to me." Ami stepped back while Zekk stuck his right arm and head into the hole. After a quick adjustment, the motivator once more fit snugly into its proper socket. "That ought to do it." He said. The former bounty hunter turned to Ami and scratched his head. "How'd you learn about this stuff so quickly?"

Jaina put her hand on Ami's shoulder. "Yeah." She pointed to another section of hull plating. "It took you only five minutes to realign the starboard sensors." Ami's cheeks reddened in embarrassment at Jaina's kind words. Zekk rolled his eyes and looked out across the small field. It had taken a bit, but the Jedi and Senshi were starting to get to know one another. Shaky questions became the starting point of conversations, which matured into the exchange of ideas, wishes, hopes and fears. Eventually, friendships formed.

One such friendship was between Haruka and Lusa. The tall blond looked the centaur square in the eye and snorted. "I don't think you have a chance against me." She said, blowing a lock of hair out of her eyes. "I am the wind."

Lusa stood tall and squared her shoulders. "I am a future Jedi Knight and part equine! You think you can beat that because you're the 'wind'?" The two looked across the grassy plain and saw a large gray rock about fifty meters away. "The first one there…" Lusa said as she pawed the ground. Haruka nodded and leaned forward. Her lean body, almost devoid of fat, tensed. The young centaur waited a few heartbeats before shouting. "Go!"

The two seemed to vanish as they surged toward the rock. Two people watched them, Raynar Thul and Kaiou Michiru. "There's no way Haruka can win." Raynar said with a smug look on his face. "Lusa once beat Tenel Ka in a race around the Great Temple, and nobody beats Tenel Ka." Michiru's ice-blue eyes watched as her best friend struggled with Lusa.

Haruka glanced to the side and saw the young centaur keeping pace with her. This is impossible! She thought. Nobody can keep pace with me, especially not some… Haruka's thoughts were interrupted when she reached out and touched the slate gray rock-a half-second behind Lusa. The young centaur turned her head to the side and regarded Haruka with her brown eyes. "I…think…I won." She said between pants. The amazon's face clenched in embarrassment as, for the first time in her life, she felt defeat in an athletic competition. Lusa raised her arm and extended it toward Haruka. "Nice race. You almost had me." She said. Haruka's hand ruffled her short hair before clasping Lusa's hand.

"You're not bad yourself." She said. The pair suddenly looked up and saw Raynar and Michiru standing there. Raynar patted Lusa on the back.
"That was great!" He exclaimed. Lusa merely shrugged, and the two walked away. Meanwhile, Haruka and Michiru regarded the two.

"They're in love." Michiru said.

The tomboyish Haruka snorted and said. "How could you tell?" After a second, however, her expression softened. "Those two are good kids. It would be an honor to fight alongside them."
Michiru nodded. "Indeed."

*****
The Rock Dragon was surrounded on three sides by low-level hills. Although none was above 20 meters, they served to conceal the alien cruiser from prying eyes. They also proved to be the perfect sparring ground, as Tenel Ka Djo and Kino Makoto proved.

Ten minutes before, Tenel Ka found herself on the flattest hill, practicing Hapan martial arts. The warrior felt one of the Senshi approaching, so she stopped and observed Makoto climbing the hill. The tall brunette looked up and stared at Tenel Ka, and tensions began to build. The redheaded Jedi flashed back to when the two almost cam to blows. She means to finish what we started. She realized.

Makoto's green eyes burned a hole into Tenel Ka. The two warrior's eyes locked, and neither one would break the stare. "I hear from Jacen that you're the 'brawn' of your little group." Makoto said. Tenel Ka's eyebrows arched in surprise. She spoke to Jacen? The 'karate maniac' smirked. "Yeah. You know what? He sort of reminds me of my old boyfriend."

That sparked Tenel Ka's anger. A slow flame began to burn as she walked over to Makoto. "You will not speak of Jacen that way." She came face to face with Makoto and the two stood centimeters from each other. "Jacen Solo is my best friend, and I won't have you regard him in such a lascivious manner." Inside Tenel Ka's mind, a small voice spoke up. Do we really want to provoke her? That voice was soon drowned out by a virtual shout of protect Jacen. Protect Jacen. Protect Jacen.

Makoto poked Tenel Ka right in her chest, leaving a dent in her glittering lizard hide armor. "So, that'll get you riled up? Good." She stepped back and assumed a martial arts stance. "You know, I have to admit, I'm curious as to whether or not you or I would've won if Usagi didn't interfere." The brunette let a smile creep across her face. "So, shall we?"

Tenel Ka let a faint smile cross her lips. "That is a fact. I too wondered." In a flash, the Jedi trainee lashed out with a right heel kick aimed squarely at Makoto's left calf. Makoto knelt down and dropped her arm to the side, letting her upper arm absorb the blow. She also lashed out with her foot and attempted to sweep Tenel Ka off her feet. The warrior Jedi jumped up and somersaulted back, doing a complete 360-degree rotation before landing.

Makoto leapt to her feet and raced toward Tenel Ka. Her right arm was coiled and ready to fly. As soon as she reached the redhead, Makoto threw her entire weight behind a stiff right cross. Tenel Ka raised the stump of her left arm and partially deflected it, but Makoto's fist grazed her left cheek, sending her staggering back. Makoto smelled blood and punched again. Although this one had less force, Tenel Ka was unable to block it, and Makoto's fist slammed into her left cheek just below her gray eye.

Tenel Ka's vision swam as she staggered back. Never in her entire life had she been hit with such raw power. Not even a Wookiee had hurt as much. Tenel Ka's arms went up to cover her face, but Makoto went low and tried to punch her in the gut. At the last second, Tenel Ka dropped her right arm and grabbed the brunette's arm. She stepped forward, wrapped the stump of her left arm around Makoto's head and flipped her onto her back. Before she could mount any defense, Tenel Ka unclipped her lightsaber and ignited it, sending a turquoise beam shooting forth from the emitter plate.

Makoto sat up and put her hands in the air. "All right." She said. "I know when I'm beaten." Tenel Ka deactivated her lightsaber and clipped the rancor tooth back onto her armor. She also stepped forward and stuck her arm out. Makoto hesitated a moment before accepting the aid. "Where'd you learn to fight like that?" She asked.

Tenel Ka shrugged. "I am heir apparent to the Hapes Consortium in my home reality. Both my mother and father saw to it that I learned to defend myself." She paused and rubbed the spot where Makoto's fist landed. An egg-sized lump had begun to form. "Where did you learn how to fight like that?"

Makoto arched her back. Although she was loath to admit it, that flip had almost thrown out her back. "I've been taught kung fu and jujitsu since I was young. It helped…distract me when times got tough." A thought struck her. "Hey, what's this 'Hapes Consortium' consist of, anyway?"

"Sixty-three star systems and approximately four hundred billion citizens."

Makoto's mouth went dry, and her vision went dark for a second. Sixty-three…planets? Is she for real? Tenel Ka nodded. "Yes, I am 'for real' as you put it."

It took a full three seconds before the Senshi realized that Tenel Ka had read her mind. Makoto shrugged. Ah, well. Rei can read minds, and she's okay. What's one more psychic among friends? And the two new friends began walking back to the Rock Dragon.

*****
Anakin found himself bored. He had already run diagnostics on the Rock Dragon's computers four times. He sat in the ships' lounge and half-heartedly read through an electronic book called The Fall, Rise and Fall of Xim the Despot. Jaina, Zekk and Ami were handling repairs to the ship. Tahiri was off talking to Setsuna, and Jacen and Lowie were out exploring the outer areas. Although the youngest Solo found the Sailor Senshi fascinating, he didn't know enough about them to form a concrete opinion. Therefore, he stayed away. Therefore, he had no one to talk to. Therefore, he was bored.

A noise startled him out of his stupor. He stood up and cast his senses out, discovering another human approaching the lounge. He felt…power, raw power. It startled him, especially when he saw who possessed it.

A young teenage girl, only about fifteen or sixteen, emerged from a doorway. She wore a plaid skirt, a red cardigan and had brown shoes on. Her raven-black hair was cut in a short bob, but the most striking thing about her were her violet eyes. From one angle, they appeared full of light and laughter. From another; they were cold, dead and emotionless.

Anakin cleared his throat and said. "Hello." He extended his arm to her, but she instead bowed before accepting the proffered handshake.

The young woman approached him and smiled. "Hello. I-I'm Tomoe Hotaru." She said. Nervousness was laced through her voice, and a shaky smile was plastered on her lips.

Anakin's right eyebrow arched as he appraised her. There's no reason for her to be nervous. From what I've heard, she's one of the most powerful Senshi. He smiled and said.

"So, what brings you here?" He noticed her hand briefly go to her right ear and adjust a tiny earpiece nestled there. He flashed back to when Mizuno Ami showed them the miniature translators she had built. She had nothing to use except bits of metal in her backpack and circuit boards from an ancient calculator, and she still built four functional translators for her friends. He motioned for her to sit down. Hotaru sat opposite of him and put her hands on the table.

"I was wondering…what you like to do." She said. All the while her violet eyes beheld the most handsome boy-no, young man-that she had ever seen. Anakin's face, while still holding vestiges of body fat, was starting to become more angular. His tousled blond hair perfectly complemented his blue eyes, and the tilt of his chin was the icing on the cake. She cleared her throat and continued. "I was also wondering. What is this 'Force'? Your sister said that you can channel the 'Force', and I was wondering what it does."

Anakin nodded and stood up. He walked over to a small piece of equipment and held his arm out. "The Force is an energy field created by us, well by living things." He reached out and levitated the object over to Hotaru, who stared in wonder. "It's not magic, and it's not science. It's somewhere…in-between." The hunk of metal settled onto the table with a thunk. Hotaru grabbed onto it and lifted it up. Or rather, she tried to lift it up. Anakin thought for a second. "Hotaru, would you transform for a minute?"

The young woman looked at him in confusion. Why would he want me to do that? She shrugged and stood up. Her eyes half-closed, and her transformation wand appeared in her right hand. She held her arm up and shouted. "Saturn Star Power Makeup!"

A blizzard of ribbons surrounded Hotaru, reforming her clothes into a Sailor Fuku with a purple bow tied on front and a violet skirt. Knee-high boots and elbow-length gloves completed the ensemble. She was now Sailor Saturn. Anakin noted that transformation time. A half-second? Interesting. He motioned to the hunk of metal on the table. Saturn grabbed it and lifted it into the air with one hand. "Our strength is increased when we transform." She said to him. "We are almost the ideal."

Anakin nodded. His mouth was partially open in surprise at the large increase in her strength. Saturn put the equipment down, and a bright light enveloped her. When it faded, Tomoe Hotaru stood there once more. She reached around and pulled out a small pack of playing cards. "Do you have card games where you come from?" She asked.

The youngest Solo nodded. "My father's from Corellia, the gambling capital of the galaxy." He sat down as she began dealing out cards. He picked up his hand and noted the difference between them and Sabacc cards. "What is this called, anyway?"

Hotaru finished dealing and laid the undealt cards onto the table. She picked up her hand and said. "It's called go fish. Got any threes?"


And on that note...typing one person speaking at a time is really hard. Sorry, but I believe I might go back to the way I was doing it. Sorry, TJF. sad

And on that note, I'll give myself an up. I'll also shout a request for reviews. Good, bad flames, I don't care.

 

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