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From Earth to Yavin. 5 Person Round Robin. post up Feb 25
_3MD_PsychoSniper
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Oct '03
Date Posted:
2/3/04 8:29am
Subject:
From Earth to Yavin. 5 Person Round Robin. post up Feb 25
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First, these are the people in this round robin
BETA
Jaya Solo
Writers
_3MD-PsychoSniper
-Tenel-Ka-
RK_Striker_JK_5
Wild_Phoenix
JainaPadmeJade
This is a 5 person round robin fic that takes place right after the end of the YJK novels. In this fic, the NJO was never even published. The premise of it is getting some TF.N FanFic writers inside the GFFA. Basicly, the Rock Dragon crashes onto Earth and almost kills us, they take us back to yavin for medical care. Were stuck in the SW galaxy, which is both strange and farmiliar to us since weve read all the books and movies. Also, there will be some amusing points when we explain to them how they are fiction were we are fromn. Read the prolouge to see how the JK kids get to earth to start with......
Ok, heres a brief description of us, so you know what were like, since we
are
the characthers in this fic.....
Real name/TF.N Screen name
age-
height-
weight-
hair-
eyes-
build-
personality-
Daniel /
_3MD-PsychoSniper
Age-19
height-5'3"
weight-214lb
Hair- brownish with blond highlights when grown out, usualy in a short buzz cut. Beard has red brown and blond in it, when he has one
Eyes- grey-blue, with yellow rimming the irises
Build- short and stocky, with a slightly round middle, but still quite strong from the gym. He can’t jump that high or run that fast, and has a short reach, but he’s got good strength.
Personality- Stubborn. Quiet and easy going, known to tell bawdy jokes as bad as Jacen’s. A SW and trek fan. When totally confused and/or scared, is likely to freak quite violently.
Heather /
-Tenel-Ka-
age- 19
height- 5'4"
weight- 120lb
Hair- brown
Eyes- blue
Build- Pretty plain build, pretty medium, no sports for Heather and lots of junk food, but she seems to stay in shape SOMEHOW! O_O
Personality- A quiet girl, until you get to know her and vice versa, then she becomes an openly sarcastic person with a twisted sense of humor. With a strong sense of morals, she knows when people need to be taken down a few notches. She also has an unnatural obsession and attachment to certain fictional characters. (coughjacensolocough)
Jonathan (Jon to friends) /
RK_Striker_JK_5
Age-25
Height-5'9"
Weight-120lb
Hair-Dark brown, cut short.
Eyes-Dark brown, with an intense stare
Build-Rail thin.
Personality- Compassionate to friends; merciless to enemies. Never afraid of hard work. Very intelligent, but sometimes needs a second to get going. I don't smoke or drink, and I know how to cook. Acts serious 99% of the time.
Name/Screen Name: Shaun/
Wild_Phoenix
Age:25
Height:5'8"
Weight: 150 lbs.
Hair: Dark Brown (usually long)
Eyes: Brown as well.
Description: Medium build but with enough muscle tone that suggests practice in martial arts. Scar on right hand from a accident as a kid.
Personality: In a nutshell...a person that plays by his own rules and tries to change the rules when he doesn't like the ones already in play. A natural born smart mouth I find myself in more situations than you know. But carries a code of honor that keeps him from betraying a trust and Intelligent but rarely shows it.
Kristen "Nelle"/
JainaPadmeJade
age-17
height-4'11"
weight-102lb
Hair-well it depends on when I dye it right now it is a dark auburn color...in other words dark brown with lots of red highlights.
Eyes-dark brown
Build- petite, great legs from dancing, very athletic. I keep myself in shape from exercising constantly and dancing a lot.
Personality- very optimistic and naive. Kinda ditzy - tend to say stupid stuff that makes even Jessica Simpson seem smart. Clumsy - tends to cause a lot of trouble. Great person to laugh with and at sometimes. Very quiet and shy until u get to know me. I’m told I have a great smile but if you make me mad...I can be downright scary.
Prolouge
Written by 3MD and final version rewritten by WildPhonex
In the space around Yavin there was quiet as the mighty giant sat there like some elder god of times long past. But now the ancient giant would be witness to something that it had not yet seen before, something in which everything changes. And this is where it starts.
With a silent snap of the fabric of space the ship the Rock Dragon exited space after the end of a long mission. It's destination: Yavin 4, home of the Jedi Academy. On the outside things looked normal, but on the inside it was anything but.
"Lowie!!" Jaina Solo screamed out over the din of the alarms, "Try to get us back in trim! We're coming in too steep!" and she went back to her one on one battle with the controls. This shouldn't be happening. Everything checked out fine when they jumped, what had happened? As she stubbornly fought the yoke she triggered the comm, "All hands brace for impact!" she yelled into the intercom.
Of course back in the lounge Jacen wondered if that warning was a bit too late, "Brace for impact sis? We already impacted," he muttered from underneath Tenel Ka as they both laid sprawled on the floor. But Tenel Ka was already standing and helping him stand as they staggered to the couch to strap in. It is a good thing he was not in the cockpit or else joking would not have been on his mind.
Jaina glanced up and her jaw dropped as a small pinprick appeared in space. Without warning it spread out like a whirlpool energy discharges giving off the look of a hungry space creature with writhing tentacles in search of food.
With a roar Lowbacca looked at the now dead sensors.
"Lowie, I don't know what that thing is. But it looks like a wormhole." Even as she said it Lowie roared again and Em-Teedee gave his own translation.
"Mistress Jania, Master Lowbacca says it seems to look rather unstable."
Muttering a curse she had heard her father use so many times in the past she looked back at the non responsive controls, "This gets better and better," she mumbled as the ship's speed picked up and it was caught in the grasp of the wormhole.
With an internal howl the accelerator compensators blew out and all aboard were sent spiraling into a dark void. Save one, Jaina Solo, who fought the controls with all her skill and frustration, using the Force to keep her from passing out like the others did. It was all up to her, and she would not fail them.
As quickly as it began it ended, and the Rock Dragon found itself plummeting towards a blue and green world that she did not recognize. And she knew right then and there she was not in the Yavin system anymore.
"Great...just great." she muttered as she unstrapped from her chair and ripped open an access panel. What she saw did help her in the slightest. With a glance at the viewport and then at the burned out wiring, she had that sinking feeling hit her full force.
Lowie groaned a bit as he slowly came to. He did not wish a repeat of that ANYTIME soon, but he doubted he'd be able to avoid it next time. This stuff always followed those Solos around like the plague. With a glance at the viewport he roared in shock.
"I know there is a planet there Lowie… but the controls are out as well. I'm trying to get the repulsors online so we can at least control the landing a bit," she yelled back as she looked at the planet. "Why is that continent shaped like a boot?" she wondered and Lowie shot her a glance as he wondered if she had taken leave of her senses, an then he whuffed and pointed at the planet.
"Mistress Jaina, Master Lowbacca thinks we should land on the night side of the planet. We will have a better chance of not being detected that way." Jaina responded with a nod and sat in the pilot's chair and looked at the intercomm as it started beeping. Slapping it on her brother's groggy voice is heard on the other end.
"Jaya, please tell me it's safe to get up now? We only got one chair with crash webbing on it and Tenel Ka is sitting in my lap at the moment." Biting down her amusement she hit the send button.
"Yes, we're clear of the wormhole but we got a problem with the controls so you might want to keep sitting there. Oh… and the planet we're flying at is not Yavin and seems to be mostly water. So enjoy Tenel Ka in your lap while you can." As she turned off the comm she could imagine her brother turning as red as they come. Looking back at the controls she slapped the shield override to shut down the shields and rerouted power to the repulsors. "Let's hope this works Lowie," she muttered as she opened herself to the Force. She went to work on the controls adjusting the trim of the ship and slowing down their momentum with minute repulsor bursts, smiling a bit as they shot across the terminator of the planet. She set the ship in an arc over the coast line of a continent.
With a triumphant howl Lowie point at the sensors to let Jaina know he had found a stretch of land that they could land on safely. "Good going Lowie!" she exulted as she put the ship into a sideslip to allow them to land. Of course at the moment the repulsors finally gave out and the ship started skidding along the ground. For one moment Jaina thought she saw a ground vehicle flash past and she winced, "..That's NOT good." And the ship finally skidded to a halt she hopped up from her chair, "Lowie… controls… I'll get the repulsors," she said as she ran to the back of the ship.
Running into the lounge she smirked at the two, "Tenel Ka, Jacen, we've landed so you have to get up no matter how much you enjoyed the seating arrangements," as the both blushed she waved it off, "No time for that now. We almost hit a vehicle of some sort. See if they're okay because I need to get the systems back online." And with that she ran to the engine room.
With a thud the hatch dropped down and Tenel Ka and Jacen walked out into the night air. Jacen repressed a whistle as he looked at the long scar the ship had left in the ground, or whatever it was. "..Hmm… looks like a cheap duracrete," he commented as he took in their surroundings. His eyes falling on a small wooden building off on the side of the road, and some type of four legged animal grazing in front of it.
"Friend Jacen, look," turning in the direction Tenel Ka pointed in he shook his head.
"Oh no," he said as he saw the ground vehicle that Jaya mentioned. Its front in smashed by the impact with a tree. Checking with the Force he looked at Tenel Ka, "Get the medpacs from the ship. And tell Jaina to hurry up with the repairs. We need to get these wounded to a hospital. And from the looks of the tech here, we'll need to take them back to Yavin."
(thats the prolouge, in the following posts we'll wake up on yavin amd react to being in a world we regarded as fiction shortly before. We will each write our own indivusal posts for how we react, so be paitent as we have to coordinate them so there are no plot conflicts)
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_3MD_PsychoSniper
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Date Posted:
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RE: From Earth to Yavin. 5 Person Round Robin. Prolouge and Bios up Feb 3
All writers, we now have a planning thread
here
in the writers resource forum
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Uppity up.
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There is a time to fight and a time not to. Now it's time to kick ass.
Everything I tell you is a lie.
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RE: From Earth to Yavin. 5 Person Round Robin. Prolouge and Bios up Feb 3
This is Great Guys! I am definatly Interested!
Bring it on...
But i have three ???S
somewhere in this story could u guys have
1 wes janson
2 Jagged Fel
3 EWOKSSS!
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there wont be any Jag Jaina, since this is a YJK fic, but the Chis might make an apperince.
Wes ? Ewoks ?
As a WJFC member, I'll make sure of it.
Wes will LOVE hearing of the WJFC.
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Ok. now Striker Wakes up. Needless tosay, Striker wrote this on his own.
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My eyes slowly opened up. I could feel myself floating in...something. Panic gripped my mind for an instant. I can't swim! Get me out! I thrashed my legs against the side of...a tank? Where the hell am I? I looked around and found myself floating in a tub of viscous liquid with a mask over my face. It abruptly began pulling against my mouth, prompting me to look up. I saw a being above me. I kicked my legs and rose to the top.
Five minutes later, I stood on extremely wobbly legs in front of...a slightly younger man. I squinted at him, wishing I had my glasses. "Umm, thanks," I said. He flashed a grin at me. "Hey, it was our fault for nearly killing you." He extended his hand at me, prompting me to blindly grope for it. I gripped it, and then felt something in his hand. "These were on your face when we found you," he said. "Do you need them to see?" I let a smile cross my face as I slid my glasses on over my brown eyes. The world swam into focus, allowing me to get a good look at the room. It was stone, not looking like a hospital at all. Then a gasp escaped my lips as I saw my friends in similar tubs against the wall. "You're the first one to wake up," he said.
I turned back and grabbed him by the shoulders. "Where the hell am I?" I snarled. "And who the hell are you?" His face clouded over with anger for a moment before saying. "My name is Jacen Solo, and you're on Yavin IV."
My arms dropped to the side, and my jaw dropped to the ground. "Y-Yavin IV?" I asked. Jacen nodded, and I knew he could sense my confusion and utter terror. A strange smile crossed my face, and I held my left hand up to my forehead as I felt a bit dizzy. "All the world's a stage," I muttered.
Jacen grabbed my arm. "You're not okay. I can feel fear and terror radiating off of you." I nodded. "You always were the empathetic one." This time he was the confused one as he said. "How would you know that?" I opened my mouth to speak again. "I read it."
Jacen shook his head. "Where did you read that? Was it some trashy tabloid?" I walked up to one of the tanks lining the wall and held my arm up to it, leaning on it heavily. "Jacen, my name is Jonathan Ellis, but my friends call me Jon. What I'm about to tell you will seem strange and confusing, and I'm not even sure about most of it." He smirked and said, "Great. I'll just pretend you're Jaina and she's explaining some hyperdrive thingy."
I thought about that for a full two seconds before simply filing that away for a later date. "How did we all," I motioned to the bacta tanks lining the wall, "get here?" Jacen scratched the back of his head and shakily replied. "Ah...our ship entered some weird wormhole. We crash-landed and nearly killed you, and we brought you back for treatment." I nodded, and then glanced around the room with my brown eyes as the last piece of the puzzle slid into place. "Jacen, my friends and I are from an alternate reality; a different universe if you will." Jacen's own brown eyes shifted around as he thought about it. "Yeah. That would explain why our instruments went all haywire and we didn't know where we are." I looked over at the bacta tanks and saw Shaun stirring a bit. "One of my friends is about to wake up," I said. Jacen walked over to his bacta tank and checked a panel on front. "His injuries are almost healed. He can be out in about ten minutes." I looked over at Heather, Nelle and Daniel. Another smile crossed my lips as I saw Daniel floating in the bacta. ‘He looks like a miniature Chewbacca’ I thought to myself. Jacen obviously sensed my concern for my friends. "They're all right. Bacta can heal anything, and there's no way for them to hurt themselves in it. I chuckled and said, "Nelle could find a way."
Jacen's brow wrinkled in confusion. "Really?" I nodded, and then spoke my next few words in a rush. "Jacen, in my reality, you and everything here is a work of fiction." For a full minute silence reigned. I couldn't believe I had just blurted that out, while I bet Jacen was trying to figure out just what the hell I just said." Could you repeat that?" he asked. I blinked several times before stuttering. "You-you are fic-fiction in my reality." I looked around, hoping-praying that someone else would come by, but there was no one else there. He walked over, staring at me with his intense brown eyes. I felt...something at the back of my head, and I knew that he was probing my mind. Reflexes took over, and I concentrated on the pressure I felt. Suddenly, Jacen went flying back and skidded to a halt near the far wall. I ran over and extended my left hand out to help him. "I'm sorry!" I blurted out. He looked up at me with surprise written all over his face. "You're...Force sensitive," he whispered.
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NJO sucks worse than anything before it, even Planet of Twilight.
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Hey great JOB!
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Thanks JG15, and more good news, we got a beta now.
I conned my regular beta, Jaya Solo, into helping out
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this is the first time i've seen the whole thing and it's great!
wow!! i'm the youngest one!! i feel so...young
and let the Nelle-bashing begin
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My first L/M fic: A Twist of Jade:
http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=14415287&replies=0
"A goddess, huh? You can't say the kid lacks ambition."
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Guess who's back...back again?
CUz the baords just felt so empty without me
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This Fic is looking like it'll be great fu.
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Jon, I LOVE the:
"Great. I'll just pretend you're Jaina and she's explaining some hyperdrive thingy."
line and you saying:
"All the world's a stage."
That rocked.
Awesome post~
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Conned... talked into with threats of purposefully spelling bad... same thing. You know I'm a sucker for really, really bad spellers. I mean, your first fics were just crying out for a beta, so I decided to be nice and offer help. And look at where it's gotten me now. :: sigh ::
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Padawans: DreamingIce, LostJedi26
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Why thank you,
Heather
. Hmm, it'll be a bit before I'll be used to typing out your actual names rather than your screen names.
ANd thanks for your help, Jaya.
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Heh, Jaya, as I recall you were a reader of my fics before you were beta.
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Great prologue! I'll definitely be keeping an eye on this story.
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we shoulf have another post up before too long.
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