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Author	Topic: Whispers From the Darkness -Volume 1 of the Chronicles of DestinyCOMPLETED 02 APRIL 04
Jedi_Whispers Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 2/26/04 11:58am Subject: Whispers From the Darkness -Volume 1 of the Chronicles of DestinyCOMPLETED 02 APRIL 04 - Date Edited: 11/12/04 6:19am (19 edits total) Edited By: Jedi_Whispers
	As Always, I do not, unfortunatly, own Star Wars or any of it's characters. The characters I do own will be the one's you don't recognize. ************************************************ "Jag, slow down! We're losing Jacen and Tenal Ka." Jaina called. "We're fine, Jaina, keep going. We'll catch up." Jacen shouted to her. "I'm not going to leave you!" "You won't have to." Tenal Ka said coming up next to her friend. "We should be safe here for a little bit. It looks like we lost them in the catacombs." Jag told them, stepping next to Jaina. "Anyone got any ideas on how we were found out?" The four were on a mission for Luke. A Jedi had disappeared on Belkadan and traces had shown that she had been transported to Coruscant, most importantly to a small troop of Yuuzhan Vong rogues. “We were betrayed, Jag." Jaina said plainly. "By another Jedi." "Another Jedi?" He asked shocked. "Who?" "We don't know.” “So how do you know it was another Jedi?” “We felt him. But there was something strange about him.” Tenel Ka explained. “Something dark.” “You mean, like the Dark Side?” “No, it’s worse. I never thought there was anything worse than the Dark Side, but then I felt him. I’ve been there, Jag, but what we felt was nothing like that. The more we felt him the more it felt like he was ripping our souls from our bodies.” Jaina shivered with the thought. Silence enveloped the group. “We should wait here until morning. Then we may be able to make it to our ships without getting caught. Of course that all depends on if our little friend tattles on us again.” Jacen decided. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ They had managed to make it to their ships undetected, the problem now was getting off-planet. Right as they were about to start up their engines they could hear Yuuzhan Vong approaching. “Shavit!” Jaina exclaimed. “Jag, we’d better hurry up and get out of here. They are coming from all angles.” The engines of Jaina’s ship, the Trickster Goddess, roared to life and soared off into Coruscant’s orbit. Jaina and Jacen’s X-Wings weren’t to far behind. Unfortunately, a dozen skips followed them. “Sithspit!” Jacen cursed. “Jaya, I’ve got one on my tail.” “Had one on your tail. Jag, we gotta do something here. My lasers are failing.” “Mine too. I have a feeling our ships were found and tampered with.” “Roger that, Goddess, set a course for Genosis, we can hide in the asteroid field.” “Copy that.” “Roger.” ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The stars blurred. Jaina took a deep breath . She tried to clear her mind when she heard the voice. “I know who you are.” it said. The voice was cold and purely evil. Jaina gasped in surprise, fear began to envelope her. "Oh yes, Jaina Solo, be afraid." the voice cackled. "Hide, if you must, but I will find you and you will be mine." Jaina was just about to ask Jacen if he'd heard the voice too when she blacked out. **************** Let me know what you think and maybe I'll keep going. -----signature----- ~Whispers of the darkside call to me Evade them I must For only then I will be free~ Ab uno disce omnes. Absit invidia. Dum vivimus vivamus From one learn to judge all. May there be no envy or malice. Let us live while we have life.
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NYCitygurl Title: Manager of SFFBC, C&G, NSWFF, and Icons Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 2/26/04 12:37pm Subject: RE: Whispers From the Darkness (J/J, J/TK)
	I think that it's pretty good! I'm very interested. Please continue. NYC -----signature----- I agree with RJ Officially Idri's Muse
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Jedi_Whispers Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 2/26/04 7:10pm Subject: RE: Whispers From the Darkness (J/J, J/TK)
	Okie dokie. I'll update tonight when I get home from work. ~Whisper~ -----signature----- ~Whispers of the darkside call to me Evade them I must For only then I will be free~ Ab uno disce omnes. Absit invidia. Dum vivimus vivamus From one learn to judge all. May there be no envy or malice. Let us live while we have life.
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princess_jaina5013 Registered: Jan '04	Date Posted: 2/27/04 2:05am Subject: RE: Whispers From the Darkness (J/J, J/TK)
	ooh, yeah!!!! please post soon!!!!
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Jedi_Whispers Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 2/27/04 5:29am Subject: RE: Whispers From the Darkness (J/J, J/TK) UPDATED 2/27 - Date Edited: 3/11/04 1:17am (1 edits total) Edited By: Jedi_Whispers
	Jaina's eyes snapped open. "Jaina? What happened? Where are you?" Jag was frantic. "It's okay, Jag. I'm fine. I'm right behind you. I must have fallen asleep." Jaina assured him. "You've never slept that soundly before. Jacen and Tenal Ka tried calling you through the Force. The could feel your life presence, but they said it felt empty. It was like your touch with the Force blinked out of existance. I was worried." Jag's voice cracked with emotion. "I'm fine, Jag. Really, I am." Jaina told him firmly. "I want you to dock with us." Jag said suddenly. "What about Jacen? We can't leave him out here alone." Jaina protested. "I'm already on board, sis. My X-wind failed as soon as we dropped out of hyperspace." Jacen's voice came over the comm. "Roger. Open the bay, Jag." Jaina guided her X-Wing towards her frieghter. "I'm coming home." After finishing her shutdown procedures, she found herself smothered in the arms of three of her closest friends. "Come on, guys. Let me freshen up and I'll tell you what happened." 'I can find you Jaina Solo. No matter, where you hide. I will be there.' The cold voice laughed. Jaina could tell by the look on her brother's face that he'd felt the touch too. 'Don't let Jag sense that something is wrong.' She told Jacen. "Are you sure you're okay, Jaina?" Jag asked wearily. "I'm fine, Jag, I promise. Why don't you go and rest. We'll take care of things on the bridge." She kissed him softly and gently pushed him toward his cabin. "Alright. I am a little tired." He gave her a small smile and went off to his bed. Jaina led Tenel Ka and Jacen to the bridge. "Please tell you guys blacked out too." she pleaded. Tenel Ka nodded. "We did. Neither of us were out for anywhere near as long as you were. I woke up almost immeditaly and Jacen shortly after that." "We could hear him, Jaina." Jacen said, his hands shook in fear. "Who is he? What is he? What does he want?" Jaina cried exasperated. "I don't know who he is or what he is, but I have a good idea of what he wants." Jacen answered quietly. "And what would that be, Jacen?" Tenel Ka asked. "He wants Jaina." ************************************ You like? -----signature----- ~Whispers of the darkside call to me Evade them I must For only then I will be free~ Ab uno disce omnes. Absit invidia. Dum vivimus vivamus From one learn to judge all. May there be no envy or malice. Let us live while we have life.
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NYCitygurl Title: Manager of SFFBC, C&G, NSWFF, and Icons Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 2/27/04 9:43am Subject: RE: Whispers From the Darkness (J/J, J/TK)
	I like. Very interesting. Why doesn't Jaina want Jag to know? One thing-you might want to leave some spacec between paragraphs, it's easier to read. More soon? NYC -----signature----- I agree with RJ Officially Idri's Muse
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Eowyn_Jade Registered: Jan '03	Date Posted: 2/27/04 10:23am Subject: RE: Whispers From the Darkness (J/J, J/TK)
	ooh...interesting start...can't wait to see wher you go from here more soon please! EJ -----signature----- "You guys are like ravenous wolves." -Devin ~ Defying Gravity ~
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Jedi_Whispers Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 2/27/04 11:03am Subject: RE: Whispers From the Darkness (J/J, J/TK)
	Sorry about the spacing...I was at work As for Jaina not wanting Jag to know...he'll find out soon enough. ****************** "What would he want me for?" "You are the the Trickster Goddess. If he's associating with the rogue Yuuzhan VOng, perhaps he has plans for you." Tenel Ka suggested. "Let's go home. I think we need to talk this over with Uncle Luke and Aunt Mara." Jaina decided flatly. "Go lay down, Jaya. Tenel Ka and I will get us home." Jaina hugged her brother and headed towards her cabin. Stopping outside JAg's cabin, Jaina heard soft moaning. "Jag? Are you okay?" she asked over his comm. When he didn't answer, she palmed open his door. He lay on his bed, drenched in sweat. A nightmare. "Jaina, where are you?" he whispered, he was still asleep. "I'm right here, Jag." she said softly. "Come to me, Jaina. I can't find you. I can't hear you. I need you." he moaned. She laid down next to him and put her arm across his chest. "I'm with you, Jag. I'm always with you." He seemed to calm into a nice peaceful sleep. Jaina wasn't to far behind. ~~~~~~~~~~~~ Her sleep was invaded by blurs. The blurs turned into pictures, the pictures into action, and then finally into horror. She could see fighting, blood, death and chaos. She watched helplessly as one by one her friends and family were brutally slaughtered. She saw Jag, bleeding from numerous wounds die in her arms. She could hear herself screaming. "Jaina! Jaina! Wake up!" She could hear Jag calling to her and felt him shaking her shoulders. Only then did she realize she was still screaming. "Force, Jag. If that happens every time I go to sleep, I will never sleep again." Jaina cried breathlessly. "What happened?" He asked. She told him about the vision, the fighting, and the voice, all the while trying not to cry. She burst into tears as she told him of his death. "Do visions always come true." He asked, stunned. "Not always, but more often than not." "Then all you have to do is make sure this one doesn't come true." Jag hoped there was confidence in his voice. He took her in his arms as spasms of crying overwhelmed her. ****************************************** That's all for today. I've got more written (what else am I gonna do at work all day? ) ~Whisper~ -----signature----- ~Whispers of the darkside call to me Evade them I must For only then I will be free~ Ab uno disce omnes. Absit invidia. Dum vivimus vivamus From one learn to judge all. May there be no envy or malice. Let us live while we have life.
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NYCitygurl Title: Manager of SFFBC, C&G, NSWFF, and Icons Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 2/27/04 11:26am Subject: RE: Whispers From the Darkness (J/J, J/TK)
	Poor Jaina!!! She better make sure it doesn't come true. Jag can't die. NYC -----signature----- I agree with RJ Officially Idri's Muse
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Eowyn_Jade Registered: Jan '03	Date Posted: 2/27/04 11:57am Subject: RE: Whispers From the Darkness (J/J, J/TK)
	Oh poor Jaina I wouldn't go to sleep after that either! -----signature----- "You guys are like ravenous wolves." -Devin ~ Defying Gravity ~
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Jedi_Whispers Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 2/27/04 12:06pm Subject: RE: Whispers From the Darkness (J/J, J/TK)
	Don't worry, guys, I don't think I'll kill Jag... I like him and Jaina to much. ~Whisper~ -----signature----- ~Whispers of the darkside call to me Evade them I must For only then I will be free~ Ab uno disce omnes. Absit invidia. Dum vivimus vivamus From one learn to judge all. May there be no envy or malice. Let us live while we have life.
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NYCitygurl Title: Manager of SFFBC, C&G, NSWFF, and Icons Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 2/27/04 1:58pm Subject: RE: Whispers From the Darkness (J/J, J/TK)
	Good! Too many authors threaten to kill Jag. NYC -----signature----- I agree with RJ Officially Idri's Muse
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JAGSGURL15 Registered: Jul '03	Date Posted: 2/27/04 6:49pm Subject: RE: Whispers From the Darkness (J/J, J/TK)
	GreatJOB! I am most definatly interested in seeing where this leads! -----signature----- Mush Queen of TKL's LOMIN ALE WRAITHS Living In DE'NILE i <3 JJ REDICK ~&NY YANKEES&~ (((DUKE BLUE DEVILS)))
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Jedi_Whispers Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 2/28/04 1:16am Subject: RE: Whispers From the Darkness (J/J, J/TK) UPDATED 28 FEB 04 - Date Edited: 11/13/04 4:09pm (2 edits total) Edited By: Jedi_Whispers
	Just thought I'd give you a heads-up...I may not be able to post Sunday night or Monday night. I work both those nights...on a good note, my time is about 9 hours ahead of board time, so you may be able to see something. ~Whisper~ ********************************************** "I don't know what to tell you." Luke shook his head. "Especially about that vision." Mara added, shivering. "You said you saw everyone you love being slaughtered." Jaina nodded. "That has a tendancy to worry me." "Do you remember who was killed first?" Han asked. Jacen threw a dark look at his father. Han threw up his hands defensively. "I asked for a reason son. If this went in a specfic order, maybe we can keep them from getting killed. It could break the chain." Jacen considered this and nodded. "Who was the first, Jaina?" "Alema Rar." Jaina answered quietly. "She was followed by the rest of the Jedi who weren't family or really close friends. Then came Kyp, Tahiri, Lowie, Tenel Ka, family and then Jag." "Anyone after Jag?" Luke asked. "Yes. My daughter and then me." "Daughter?" The word echoed throughout the room. Han glared at Jag. "Daughter?" Jag repeated blankly. "You're pregnant?" Jaina shook her head, "Not that I know of." Jag sighed a sigh of relief. "Well, there is only one way to ensure you don't get that way. Jag, go away." Han huffed at the idea of his daughter being pregnant. 'Pregnant! Ha! She is still a little girl, little girls don't get pregnant.' "NO! I'm not going to let you send him away. I need him." Jaina told her father stubbornly. "I understand what your father is saying. If I go, you won't get pregant. Which in itself may break the cycle." Jag reasoned, standing up. "Sit down" Jaina snarled. "I'm not letting you go, Jagged Fel. There has to be another way." "Maybe there is." Mara started. "Perhaps sending our endangered Jedi into hiding. They'd have to stay in disguise and close themselves to the Force completely, but it may just save them." "It's worth a try." Jaina sighed. "I hope it works." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ He knew she was on Boreleias. He had lost all touch with her after she got there and he was getting antsy. Somehow, she had managed to hide from him. A knock on the door announced his long awaited visitor. "Let him in." He ordered the Yuuzhan Vong guards. A tall green-eyed man with hair the color of midnight came forward. "How may I be of service today, my Lord?" his deep voice resonated through the hall. "Find Alema Rar and kill her, brutally. Leave the body where Jaina Solo will find it. I want her to be able to recognize her friend." "As you command, my Lord." the man bowed deeply and left the room. "I will break you, Jaina Solo and you will be mine." The Lord said to an empty room, "I, Acheron, will rule over you for all of eternity." *************************************** -----signature----- ~Whispers of the darkside call to me Evade them I must For only then I will be free~ Ab uno disce omnes. Absit invidia. Dum vivimus vivamus From one learn to judge all. May there be no envy or malice. Let us live while we have life.
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YJK_Index Registered: Apr '03	Date Posted: 2/28/04 11:02am Subject: RE: Whispers From the Darkness (J/J, J/TK)
	If you would like this story added to the 'Young Jedi Knights Index', please PM the following information to YJK_Index: Title: (with URL) Author: (with profile URL) Summary: Keywords: (please include the timeframe, genre, pairings and main characters) Author’s Notes: (if needed) Thank you (Oh - and yes, I'm aware that this isn't the YJK timeframe; however, the Index accepts any fic with the YJK pairings ) -----signature----- http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=11325509
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Jedi_Whispers Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 2/29/04 4:57am Subject: RE: Whispers From the Darkness (J/J, J/TK) UPDATED March 1, 2004 - Date Edited: 2/29/04 9:24pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Jedi_Whispers
	I know it's short but I didn't have a lot of time today. ~Whisper~ ************************************ Alema Rar sat in Master Skywalker's office awaiting instructions. A good portion of the Jedi Order filled the large office making it seem small. When Master Luke entered the room he was followed by a large number of civilians. Surprise registered throughout the room and Alema knew she was not the only one who felt it. "I'm glad you are all here. We have received information that there is a new enemy. An enemy that was a member of our order and is willing to kill all the Jedi to get to her. This new enemy is a man like no other." "Is he of the Dark Side, Master Skywalker?" Corran Horn asked. "No. He is beyond it. Far worse than the Dark side." Once again, surprise radiated through the room. "Is that possible, Master?" Kyp Durron asked incredulously. "It is. Three of your fellow Jedi have felt his touch, they described it as much like having their souls ripped from them. They felt cold and empty. One of these Jedi had a terrifying vision of the brutal slaughter of numerous friends and family, most of whom are Jedi. It is for this reason you are assembled here today. We have a way we hope will be able to protect all of you. It means going into hiding. Before I explain our plan, I would like to know if you are willing to go through with this." A chorus of affirmatives rang through the crowd. "Master Skywalker, if I may inquire, who had the vision?" Alema asked. "Jaina Solo." Luke told her. As for the plan, these volunteers to my side have volunteered to don disguises that would portray them to be each and everyone of you, while you each don new identities and histories. You are not to use the Force or lightsabers for any reason. You will each be given two blasters for your protection. You will be required to cut off all unnecessary communication with me, family and friends. I know this will be difficult. Do you all still agree?" He looked around the room and received nods from each of the Jedi. "Alright, then follow me in to the next room." As they stood up to leave a laser bolt shot through an open window and struck Alema Rar in the chest. She let out a small gasp of pain and looked to Master Skywalker. He ushered everyone else into the next room and ran to her side. "Don't worry about me, Master. I'm joining my sister. Keep the Jedi safe." Alema whispered as her last strength slowly drained away. "I'm coming to you, Numa." she murmured with her last breath. She died in Luke’s arms. He scooped her up and carried her into the next room. ************************************** Reviews? Please? -----signature----- ~Whispers of the darkside call to me Evade them I must For only then I will be free~ Ab uno disce omnes. Absit invidia. Dum vivimus vivamus From one learn to judge all. May there be no envy or malice. Let us live while we have life.
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