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A Journey of Discovery - Book 3: Prism (L/M, H/L, OC's) Completed! - Epilogue - 8/11/04
Jedi-2B
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Date Posted:
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Is everybody ready? 'Cause ready or not, here we go...
The particulars:
Title: A Journey of Discovery — Book Three: Prism
Timeframe: post-ROTJ
Characters: L/M, H/L, OC's
Genre: AU, EU
Summary: Sequel to
Journey of Discovery - Book Two: Pendulum
Disclaimer: All these wonderful characters belong to George Lucas. No Imperial or Republic credits are being made from this story.
Before you start reading, a couple things to note --
Lorrdians have long, convoluted names, per the Lorrdian woman that Han met in
Han Solo's Revenge.
They also tend to communicate among themselves with a series of complicated facial and hand gestures. You may wish to brush up on Lorrdians by typing in 'Lorrd' at the excellent Unofficial SW Encyclopedia here at tf.n.
It goes without saying that you'll understand this fic much better if you've already read the first two books in the Journey of Discovery trilogy --
Pendulum
and
Pledge
.
Many, many thanks to
Gabri_Jade
for helping me to correct all the writing blunders I've been unwittingly making all along.
As before, silent Force dialogue will be marked by asteriks. Chewie's dialogue will be translated and put into brackets.
Finally, a huge apology to everyone who's had to wait forever for this fic. My only excuse is my tired old brain just couldn't get any inspiration. In fact, I still haven't written the ending, but hopefully I will by the time we get to that point. I'm not even sure how frequently I'll put up each chapter. We'll see how it goes. Since the first chapter is a bit shorter, you'll get all of it today.
On with the show!
Journey of Discovery — Book Three: Prism
Chapter One
"Your report, Admiral Gorra?"
Elbows resting on the highly polished table, Lorrd's Crown Regent, Pard-and-Rand Ke'lor-Mise, steepled his long dark fingers and let his heavy lids drift shut as his top military officer gave a lengthy report of the war's progress. Ke'lor had been hoping, praying, that a peaceful solution to the dispute between his planet and neighboring Argazda could be achieved. But the Argazdans, it seemed, were as determined to wrench control of this sector away from the Lorrdians as their ancestors were four thousand years ago. The heavy fighting was confined for the moment to Lorrd's eastern continent, on the far side of the planet from the capital. Lorrdian forces were holding their own against Argazda, but just barely.
"Evaluation, Archa?"
Military strategist Colonel Ces-and-Grond Pimar-Archa sent a cautious gaze at his colleagues gathered in the opulent conference room, then directed his attention back to his leader.
"The situation is grave, Excellency," he pronounced, his grim-faced expression serving to conduct the news as much as his words. "We can hold on for perhaps another month – no more than that. Our forces have been clinging to our promise of a Jedi coming to lead them for far too long. There are rumors circulating among the air squadrons that no Jedi exists, that it is only a ploy to give them false hope."
"I see." The Regent turned to his aide, Meend. "Still no word, I presume?"
"Not yet," Meend admitted. "Today marks the tenth day since we received the Jedi's message of delay."
"Very well. If they do not arrive by sunset, we shall contact Mon Mothma to coordinate a search party."
Viceroy Dast-and-Yacit Blin-Ars, deputy of Lorrd's southern continent, raised his head in confusion. "They, Excellency?"
"He brings with him his padawan."
"You allowed this?" the portly viceroy questioned. "You expect an adolescent boy to also aid our cause?"
"A Jedi rarely travels anywhere without his apprentice," the Regent patiently explained, having studied the Jedi all his life. "It is considered an integral aspect of the student's training. To refuse to allow the boy to accompany his master would not be conducive to obtaining the Jedi's cooperation. Besides, if this padawan has been involved in battle in any manner, he may be an asset."
"If this Jedi cannot even appear as scheduled," General Chukla-Bref spoke up, his skepticism reflected in half the visages in the room, "how can we continue to hold faith that he will be able to lead our forces to victory?"
"The reports we have received of his victories with the New Republic say otherwise," Admiral Gorra countered.
"Sketchy reports, at best," Blin-Ars scoffed, his head shaking on his thick-set neck.
Objections and assertions rebounded among Regent Ke'lor's diverse staff of politicians and military officers, a staff he inherited when Lorrd's planetary governor died three months earlier. The ruler heaved a weary sigh as the debate escalated up and down the conference table ...
"He single-handedly slew both the Emperor and Darth Vader. How can we question his strength?"
"That does not prove that he can effectively champion our men and women to rally against the superior forces of Argazda."
"He is a military commander; a hero in the eyes of the galaxy."
"Yet we know nothing of the man himself. We have no information of his background, his education, or even his age.
"He is a Jedi Knight, that is enough.
"What if he doesn't agree to help us?"
"He must. All Jedi are sworn to aid any galactic citizens that ask for help. Did not the Jedi assist our ancestors?
"But if this Jedi... what was his name -- Skywalker... if he refuses?"
"He will not refuse. Not if he wishes to obtain a treaty for his precious New Republic."
"We would blackmail a Jedi Knight?"
"We would give him an added incentive to carry out his duty."
General Chuckla-Bref leaned forward, his hands gesticulating the possibility which no one wanted to voice aloud.
What if the Jedi never arrives?
"He must arrive, and he must lead our forces," Ke'lor pronounced solemnly. "He is our only hope."
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
Mara Skywalker watched as the star lines resolved back into pinpricks of sparkling light. Ahead, the planets of the Kanz Sector continued their lazy orbits around their solitary sun. Lorrd was the planet closest to the sun, close enough for the solar radiation to darken the inhabitants' skin to multi-hued light and dark browns, far enough away to not burn those same inhabitants to a crisp. Argazda, Mara remembered from the data file, was the next planet out. The only noteworthy event in this sector was some sort of dictatorial takeover of Lorrd by its neighbor planet several thousand millennia ago, an event which was eventually squelched by the Old Republic.
No sooner had realspace settled around her than the subspace comm began beeping in a loud tone. Mara reached for the switch at the same time as her senses reached out for Luke in the seat behind her. He remained peacefully ensconced in his healing trance.
"This is Lorrdian Spaceport Authority calling New Republic B-wing AA-615," a mechanized voice stated. "This is Lorrdian Space—"
"This is New Republic B-wing AA-615," she answered, cutting off the recording. Lorrd must have had the repeating hail going for days, she thought, waiting for the New Republic's errant negotiators to arrive.
There was a few seconds delay, and Mara could picture a bored spaceport controller noticing that someone finally answered the hail. "This is Controller Hauft, of the LSA, awaiting contact with Commander Luke Skywalker."
"This is Commander Skywalker's ... co-pilot," Mara replied, momentarily at a loss as how to identify herself. "We just arrived in-system, and were about to comm you. We should be in orbit over Lorrd and ready to land in approximately one standard hour."
"Acknowledged," the controller answered. "Relaying landing coordinates now." There was another pause, then the military-sounding voice returned. "We have an incoming transmission on a New Republic channel for Commander Skywalker. Rerouting now."
"Luke?" a familiar voice crackled onto the line.
"No, this is Mara Jade, Your Highness," Mara said in exasperation.
Blazing stars – keeping tabs on little brother already!
"I want to talk to Luke."
Mara made sure her sigh was loud enough to be heard over the comm. "Hold on. I'll have to rouse him back to consciousness."
"What?!"
Smirking happily to herself, Mara sent the pre-arranged mental prodding back to her husband.
*Time to wake up, lover.*
She had jokingly reasoned that being referred to as anyone's lover was such a new concept to Luke that it would jolt him out of even the deepest trance. "Your sister's on the comm," she added aloud.
Luke jerked awake with a groan. "We're there?" he muttered, his voice gravelly as he shook off the remnants of his trance.
"Your sister. Comm," Mara repeated, ignoring his question for the moment.
He reached for the control on his own instrument panel. "Leia?"
"You were unconscious?" Leia asked worriedly.
"No, I was just in a heal— uh, just sleeping."
"A healing trance?" As usual, Luke's clumsy attempt at deception was utterly wasted on Leia. "Luke, what happened? Are you hurt?"
"It's nothing. I'm fine."
"Luke, tell me what's going on."
"Leia, did you want something, or are you just checking up on me?" Luke asked abruptly.
Mara listened with amusement to Luke's conversation with his overprotective sister. She knew he didn't mean to be so blunt; she'd discovered that he was sometimes a bit cranky when he first came out of a trance. Playing word games with Leia wasn't helping his disposition.
"Where are you, Luke? You were supposed to be on Lorrd ten days ago," Leia continued undaunted. "I was worried about you as it was, and now I find out that you're injured and that Mara Jade is still with you."
Mara frowned to herself.
What was that supposed to mean?
"Did you think I would misplace her along the way?" Luke retorted. "Leia, I told you I'm fine. We had trouble with the ship and had to land for repairs. But we're just about to touch down on Lorrd" –his foggy mind reached out to Mara for confirmation— "and I'll be sure to grovel on my knees in apology when we meet the Regent."
"I'm not worried about the negotiations, Luke," Leia said. "I just ... Just be careful, brother. Don't trust anyone, do you hear me? Anyone."
"Sure, Leia," Luke replied slowly. "We'll be careful."
"All right. I'll contact you again tomorrow," Leia said. "I love you, Luke, and ... and ... just watch your back."
"I will," he said again. "Love you, too, sis."
"Nothing like being neurotic," Mara said as soon as Leia had signed off.
"Yeah, she was acting kinda strange," Luke murmured. "I wonder if she's sensing some sort of danger that we aren't?" He paused a moment. "There's something about Lorrd that doesn't seem quite right to me, but I don't feel any real danger. I guess I should have asked her to explain herself better, but maybe she thought the transmission was being monitored." He sighed audibly. "At least we don't have to wonder whether Mon Mothma told her that you came along."
"I didn't expect she'd keep it a secret, did you?"
"No, I suppose not."
"Speaking of secrets," Mara said. "Do we tell them?"
"Do we tell who what?"
"The Lorrdians, of course." She tried to twist around in her seat, but it was no use. It was impossible to talk to Luke face to face in this blasted cockpit; she would have to settle for feeling his emotions. "Do we tell them we're married?"
Several seconds passed before Luke answered. If it weren't for that precious emotional link, Mara would have thought he'd fallen asleep.
"If it's all right with you," he finally began, "I'd rather keep that to ourselves until we get back to Coruscant. It's not that I'm not bursting to shout it to the galaxy, but I didn't even get a chance to tell Leia, and if she finds out through some Holonet headline ..."
"Which she no doubt would," Mara finished. "You're right, you should tell her in person yourself."
"So that's Lorrd?" Luke said after a few minutes' pause.
Mara turned to gaze out at the mottled green and brown planet they were hurtling toward. "So the charts say. I already talked to the spaceport at the capital, which is also called Lorrd, by the way; they sent landing coordinates." She glanced down at her instruments. "Want me to send control back to you?"
"No," Luke muttered, and Mara could feel his mind still puzzling over what had Leia so jumpy. "You can land."
"Me?" Mara bit her lip in hesitation. She hated to admit that she was unsure of herself in any situation, but ...
"I remember your telling me that you could fly anything." A hint of amusement colored his offhand comment.
"Fly anything, yes," Mara said grudgingly. "Land the most bizarrely designed ship in the galaxy, well ..."
Luke sent a sensation of understanding to the front of the cockpit. "I'll talk you through it," he promised. "How was the trip here? Did I miss anything?"
"Like the hyperdrive failing again or a band of pirates attacking?" Mara asked, laughing. "No, it was boredom personified. And I did as I was told, Master. Rested, meditated, practiced focusing with the Force. Oh, and I reviewed the negotiation directives."
"Good. Glad one of us will know what we're doing." Luke exhaled wearily. "This will be my first assignment as a true Jedi – the first one that doesn't involve warfare."
"Looking forward to playing ambassador?"
"Looking forward to not having pilots dying under my command."
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
"Well, that was subtle," Han mumbled under his breath, his fingers punching in the coordinates for the final jump. The
Millenium Falcon
had been hanging quietly in space while Leia made her latest, and ultimately successful, attempt to reach her brother. An earlier attempt at the edge of a small asteroid cluster proved to contain too much static for a clear transmission.
"I could hardly blurt out 'Luke, she's an Imperial spy, take her prisoner.' Jade would've had her blaster pinned on him faster than he could blink." Leia settled back into her seat and adjusted her crash webbing. She hoped against hope that Luke had gotten the message. His refusal to admit that he'd been in a healing trance had her worried, too. Her brother never could lie convincingly. Why had he felt the need to lie now?
Han glanced back to Lando. "How soon before we reach Lorrd?"
"About fourteen standard hours," Lando answered. "It will be early tomorrow morning, their time."
"And then we still have to find Luke," Han added.
"No," Leia said grimly. "Then we have to find
her
."
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It was on her fifteenth day in the darkness of the Nirauan cave when Mara Jade awoke to discover a rescuer had finally arrived.
It was not, however, any of the potential rescuers she would have expected.
It was Luke.
~~And the rest is history~~
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First post, first post, *hops*!!!
"I love you, Luke, and ... and ... just watch your back."
Heh, Leia so worried about her baby brother!
This shapes up well!
*Dances away singing "I got first post on Book 3!!"*
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Good grief, you're quick,
Shrink
!
I think it's been posted all of three minutes. Thanks!
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It was on her fifteenth day in the darkness of the Nirauan cave when Mara Jade awoke to discover a rescuer had finally arrived.
It was not, however, any of the potential rescuers she would have expected.
It was Luke.
~~And the rest is history~~
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WOO-HOOO! It's here, it's finally here!
And it's looking great so far. I'm not too sure about these Lorrdians. I wonder if Luke won't be a little miffed at the idea of them basically blackmailing him...and he'd probably be willing to help them anyway, that's just the kind of man he is.
And they just assume that Luke's apprentice is male? Sounds kinda chauvinistic to me!
LOVED the little conversation between Leia and Luke!
I really can't wait to see what happens when they find out Luke knew about Mara's past all along!
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Darnit,
Stormie
, you beat me! I thought for sure I had first post!
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A fluke,
Jedi_2B
!! But I got first, anyway!
Sorry,
kayladie
! If it makes you feel any better, I
always
think I get first post and then don't. I'm so happy I got this one!
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Well, that was an interesting post! So they assume Luke's padawan is a little boy! LOL! Boy, are they gonna be surprised! I have a feeling Leia is going to be a little bit annoyed with her brother when she finds out he's married.... Han will probably think it's funny! Great post!
(don't be mean to Han!
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Teeheee, it's going to be priceless when Leia finds out that the 'imperial spy' married his little brother. She's neurotic enough already without knowingly having an assassin sister-in-law...
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Yeah, it has begun.
The Lorrdians are going to do a double take with Mara - she don't look anything like an adolescent boy.
Leia is already checking up on her brother and throwing hints at him. He's thinking she's picked up something about the Lorrdians - let the confusion begin.
*makes popcorn* So is Monday going to be the official posting day each week?
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You expect an adolescent boy to also aid our cause?
Well aren't they in for a suprise. I bet Luke won't be to thrilled about another warfare mission either. And Mara won't be to thrilled that the Lorrdians think she is a boy or that Leia thinks she has her figured out. (Oooh are we gonna get a Leia - Mara Showdown!?) Of course Leia won't be to thrilled that Luke already knows Mara's
secret
without having told her. Oh how oh how will they explain how they're time during Luke's "imprisonment and torture"? Can't wait, can't wait, can't wait!!!
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Yay, it's started!
Although I've done little more than polish an already great story, I'm loving being the beta for this, Michele. Can't wait to see how it ends.
"Yet we know nothing of the man himself. We have no information of his background, his education, or even his age.
The Lorrdians are in for a wee bit of a surprise, aren't they?
"No, I was just in a heal— uh, just sleeping."
"A healing trance?" As usual, Luke's clumsy attempt at deception was utterly wasted on Leia. "Luke, what happened? Are you hurt?"
Yeah, Leia's a determined one.
"Luke, tell me what's going on."
"Leia, did you want something, or are you just checking up on me?" Luke asked abruptly.
Mara listened with amusement to Luke's conversation with his overprotective sister. She knew he didn't mean to be so blunt; she'd discovered that he was sometimes a bit cranky when he first came out of a trance. Playing word games with Leia wasn't helping his disposition.
*is also amused* I kind of like seeing Luke be abrupt with Leia. It's so rare, after all.
"I remember your telling me that you could fly anything." A hint of amusement colored his offhand comment.
"Fly anything, yes," Mara said grudgingly. "Land the most bizarrely designed ship in the galaxy, well ..."
Mara does have a point. How exactly does one land a B-wing?
"And then we still have to find Luke," Han added.
"No," Leia said grimly. "Then we have to find her."
*sighs* Leia, Leia, Leia. This will be most interesting.
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Oh it'll be fun when Leia and Luke finally get together. I can just see the fight now and Han and Mara off to the background. Nice beginning and I hope you overcome the writer's block, it's always a killer.
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Darn it! How could I be so late?!?!
"You expect an adolescent boy to also aid our cause?"
LMAO!! I'm sorry, knowing Mara, I had to laugh at that.
"Did you think I would misplace her along the way?"
Haha, Great line!
"Looking forward to playing ambassador?"
"Looking forward to not having pilots dying under my command."
Poor Luke...
Great post, J2-B!!!!
Sorry I wasn't here earlier.
UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Tut, tut Leia... jumping at spies in every corner...
Weeeee! We're on our way!
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I just return from a magnificent trip –we visited some lovely small towns with a lot of history and most important Delphi, the navel of the earth- and find a magnificent story begin!
First, if I remember correct these Lorrdians asked for a Jedi to mediate, not to lead troops to war. So, there is definitely something wrong with them. They even thinking of blackmailing Luke
for achieving their goal. Bad feeling about this.
Second, they seem to know some things of the Jedi of the Old Republic, so it’s a good thing that Luke decided not to tell them about the marriage. Because if they know the attachment rule, it will bring trouble. Do you follow the AOTC in this subject, or you will not deal with that mater? Certainly they will not look as a respectful Jedi master and his padawan. Farmboy is too young for resembling Master Jinn, after all. Not forget that with Mara as a padawan would be required two Jedi masters...
Third, Leia could be a great messing factor in all this, considering her ideas about Mara planning to kill her beloved brother.
I can’t wait:
To see Lorrdians finding out about the Master/Padawan team.
To see Luke finding out what the Lorrdians want him to do.
To see Lorrdians facing Mara Skywalker when they try to blackmail the former Emperor’s Hand’s husband.
To see Leia finding out that her brother lied to her about Mara’s past and had already married Mara.
To see Han’s reaction about the above two things.
To see Han asking Luke his sister’s hand.
On other words, I CAN’T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTERS...
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Yeah, it is here!
Oh, boy. I doubt the Lorrdians know exactly what they are getting themselves in for. Mara is no boy and will not like them trying to blackmail her husband.
*places her hand over eyes* Leia, Leia. I'd advise you to not follow this fool idea that you've come up with. Luke already knows what Mara was and he still loves her. You are only going to get hurt feelings over this.
Can't wait to see where this goes.
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BA(bad attitude), aka Thwack, of TKL's Lomin Ale Wraiths
I am never down. I am either up or I am getting up, but I am never down.
Stop telling God how big your storm is; instead tell the storm how big your God is.
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Marsa
Registered:
Feb '04
Date Posted:
4/12/04 6:26pm
Subject:
RE: A Journey of Discovery - Book 3: Prism (L/M, H/L, OC's) Chap.1 - 4/12/04
*delerks*
Ahem!
I have an announcement. I've decided to post replies on this story. I didn't on the last one, which I had mixed feelings about, cause....
well.... cause I'm darned old-fashioned and you made me blush!!! (
)
You are a very good writer, and I think (though I'm not making any promises) that I'll stay delurked for the time being.
Now, I get to say something I've been wanting to for a very long time.
UP!
~M
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Erin Go Bragh!
"Who the heck is Minnie Bothans, anyway?"
--Me, to my friend Becky, during yet another philisophical discussion.
If you are a John Wayne/Maureen O'Hara fan: Adopt my bunny! (pg 28)
"Obi-Wise. What can I say more?"
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