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Niff-tik-Ocsif Registered: Nov '03	Date Posted: 5/16/04 12:11am Subject: Lost Pride (AU_ J,J OC)- update Han's death - Date Edited: 11/7/04 11:28am (9 edits total) Edited By: Niff-tik-Ocsif
	Right okay, This story is not authorized by Lucas or Lucasarts, but I'm not makin any prophet off it so please don't sue This story is mainly about Jagged Fel and Jaina well after the vongwars (sorta). -----signature----- Never doubt the sanity of a crazy person wisedom is like a present, the longer you are without it the more you want it. http://boards.theforce.net/Beyond_the_Saga/b10477/15884660/ Lost Pride ayep
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Niff-tik-Ocsif Registered: Nov '03	Date Posted: 5/16/04 12:18am Subject: An odd Visit - Date Edited: 5/16/04 12:27am (2 edits total) Edited By: Niff-tik-Ocsif
	And now without further delay (I hope) Lost Pride: Jaina paced nervously around the empty room. ‘Why her? Why him?’ That Is all she wanted to know why? Slowly she sipped water from a small glass. What was she waiting here for? Ten minutes then she had to leave. “Hello” a voice called from behind her. He was small. No one she had seen around the station in the past year she had been there. Must have come aboard with the new recruits a week ago. Why hadn’t she sensed him? “H-hello,” she stuttered still startled by his sudden appearance. “By now you are wondering why you are here are you not?” He asked. “YES!” she said a bit more enthusiastic than she wished she had. “Well,” he said chuckling, “you know this, Colonel Jagged Fel?” he asked. “I have met with him,” she answered, Choosing her words careful. She wished that this one would get to the point and leave her be. In the depths of her mind something stirred, how Jag, her Jag, had been before they had came. “Well this is about your Jagged Fel and Fit.” He said. Finally they were getting somewhere. Jaina’s first impulse at the sound of Fit’s name was just blow the little man away, not a challenge after all she had been through and now this. Fit had been flirting with Jag lately, and she was all his green eyes had look at since she came a week ago. “What about them?” Jaina asked as calmly as she could. Her eyes slowly filled up with tears as she remembered what Jag had said that morning. “I have come to tell you not to worry about anything, it is just the way Fit is. I have learned to trust her, can you trust him?” he said slowly. “I can and I do.” Jaina waited a moment after the little man left then slumped to her knees, her head hung, quietly sobbing ******************** That is all I have for now, hope you enjoy it -----signature----- Never doubt the sanity of a crazy person wisedom is like a present, the longer you are without it the more you want it. http://boards.theforce.net/Beyond_the_Saga/b10477/15884660/ Lost Pride ayep
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Niff-tik-Ocsif Registered: Nov '03	Date Posted: 5/16/04 8:39am Subject: RE: Lost Pride (AU_ J,J)
	No one? well than Up it will go. off to write more incase anyone stumbles in here. -----signature----- Never doubt the sanity of a crazy person wisedom is like a present, the longer you are without it the more you want it. http://boards.theforce.net/Beyond_the_Saga/b10477/15884660/ Lost Pride ayep
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Jaina_and_Jag Registered: Apr '03	Date Posted: 5/16/04 10:19am Subject: RE: Lost Pride (AU_ J,J)
	Interesting beginning. I wonder who this Fit is...
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Niff-tik-Ocsif Registered: Nov '03	Date Posted: 5/16/04 2:02pm Subject: RE: Lost Pride (AU_ J,J)
	Hey my first reader, for my first story. Just poped in before i make one last adjustmeant and post the next post (I have no beta so bear with me on my errors) -----signature----- Never doubt the sanity of a crazy person wisedom is like a present, the longer you are without it the more you want it. http://boards.theforce.net/Beyond_the_Saga/b10477/15884660/ Lost Pride ayep
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Niff-tik-Ocsif Registered: Nov '03	Date Posted: 5/16/04 2:09pm Subject: Shock for Jaina - Date Edited: 5/16/04 8:33pm (2 edits total) Edited By: Niff-tik-Ocsif
	The Next Post::: Slowly Jaina climbed to her feet, cursing herself, she knew that she could trust Jag. He had trusted her after all; never given her a reason to doubt him. Why should she now? The years since the vong threat had ended hadn’t made her soft, four deaths in her family and day after day of training her self, her mind; she wasn’t letting anything, or anyone, stand between her and one of the few things, still living, that she loved. Jaina’s mind reeled over the deaths that occurred most recently in her life. All three of her children, none of them had lived more than a month, and her father, Han Solo. All dead. Her thoughts vanished as she bumped into something. She had been looking down and as soon as she looked up she wished she hadn't. There before her was short, slim, Corrilain female. Fit. Fit’s golden hair lightly draped her shoulders, her blue eyes seem to pierce deep into Jaina’s thoughts. “Hello, Fit,” Jaina managed at last. “Hey Ja…” Fit thought for a moment. “Jaina,” a bit more than annoyed, Jaina said. ”Right Jaina, well hey I got to go, you and I should get together sometime, but for now I got to go meet another new friend of mine,” Fit said with a wink. “You mean Jag?” Jaina asked, fearing the answer. “Yep,” with that Fit jogged off, with a love song on her lips. ’Your aren’t the only one who is about to see him’ Jaina thought to herself and hurried quietly after Fit. ************************************* ”She is late Wes, she might not come knowing you are here,” Jagged Fel said turning to the ewok loving Wes Janson. He felt a gentle nudge on his shoulder. ‘Not again’ he thought to himself, turning to his left he saw her, Fit. ”Oh she’ll come Inyri can’t resist me,” Wes Rambled on. Jag walked to the other end of the room, hoping that Fit wouldn’t try to cling to him, again. Too late, she came over and sat on the small bench next to him. Before Jag could protest her head was on his shoulder. Quickly Jag shot up from the bench. Then Jag heard them, footsteps, Hurried footsteps going away from them. Jag leaned out in the doorframe to see Jaina’s figure turn down another hall. “Sith” he whispered under his breath. ___________________________ hmmm...hmmm....ayep:::thats all for now -----signature----- Never doubt the sanity of a crazy person wisedom is like a present, the longer you are without it the more you want it. http://boards.theforce.net/Beyond_the_Saga/b10477/15884660/ Lost Pride ayep
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Jaina_and_Jag Registered: Apr '03	Date Posted: 5/16/04 3:30pm Subject: RE: Lost Pride (AU_ J,J)- update Shock for Jaina
	Jaina had three kids and they all died?! That's so sad!!! Han's dead too? sniffs No fair. Stupid Fit! She's messing it up! Jag should run after Jaina.
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Niff-tik-Ocsif Registered: Nov '03	Date Posted: 5/16/04 5:04pm Subject: Lums - Date Edited: 5/16/04 5:09pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Niff-tik-Ocsif
	“How’d you find me?” the little man said, “or more importantly who told you my name was Lums?” Lums fell back onto a small stool. “That isn’t anything to worry about, I called you here because you seem to know Fit. You told me not to worry, do you have any idea what I just saw?” Jaina said, rather speedily. “You saw Fit clinging on to someone do doubt, because that is what she does.” Lums snapped at Jaina. “I have to go now. Please don’t bother me again, If we need to talk I will tell you.” Lums pulled himself off of the stool. At the door he turned around and sighed “I’ll see what I can do with my friend,” and with that he was off. Jaina spent the rest of the day avoiding Jag, which wasn’t hard since everywhere he yelled her name trying to find her. Finally Jaina had to retire for the evening, but she had no intention of going back to the dormitory that she knew Jag would be waiting for her at. Instead she went to her mother. “Jaina,” Lea gasped as her daughter appeared seemingly out of nowhere. “What is wrong?” She asked eyeing her daughters face. “It’s nothing mom, I just, can I stay here for the night?” Jaina only got a slight nod in reply to her question then her mother picked up an old halo-graph. “Dad,” Jaina whispered. Lea gave a slight smile at the figure. “Yes, I miss him more and more everyday. Luke still blames himself.” Jaina knew that Luke would most likely always say that it was his fault that Han was dead. ___________________________________________ Jag just couldn’t seem to find her. He had sat there in Jaina’s room for what seemed like days. Jag glanced over at the chrono. ‘only two hours!?’ he thought. Slowly Jag got up walked into the hallway, thought for a second, and headed left. _________________________________________ “FIT!!!!” Lums called, beside him Fit appeared. “Look Fit,” he started ”No! Luo I am tired of all this, I won’t stop, you know it is in my blood.” Fit cut him off. “Lou, you trust me don’t you?” Fit asked with the childhood innocence that everyone thought she could never loose. “Yes I trust you, Fit I worry about you that’s all. It isn’t good to mess with the relation of Her and her husband,” Lums let out a sigh. “You can go, and it is Lums here not Lou, not yet.” At that Fit left. “Yes, Fit, it is your blood, literally,” Lums chuckled to himself. _________________________________________ ’Where was she?’ Jag wondered. Since he couldn’t find Jaina to try and explain, which wasn’t something he was sure he could do, he decided to go after the problem itself, Fit. He entered the mess hall; everyone was just getting up from dinner. Slowly Jag scanned the room, his eyes resting on everyone in the room for barely a second. He spotted Jaina leaving the other end of the room. Again his idea changed, ‘Yelling at Fit can be saved for another day.’ Slipping through the scattered crowds Jag hurried after her. ‘Why this hall?’ Jag wondered as he reached the passage Jaina had left through. Jaina, however, was no where in sight. Jag sighed and headed to his own quarters. ******************** Thanks to J_and_J for helping me with this one -----signature----- Never doubt the sanity of a crazy person wisedom is like a present, the longer you are without it the more you want it. http://boards.theforce.net/Beyond_the_Saga/b10477/15884660/ Lost Pride ayep
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Jaina_and_Jag Registered: Apr '03	Date Posted: 5/16/04 5:40pm Subject: RE: Lost Pride (AU_ J,J)- update Lums
	No more avoiding Jaina! Just let him talk to you! Do we get to know how Han died? Also, how old are they? (Jaina and Jag)
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Niff-tik-Ocsif Registered: Nov '03	Date Posted: 5/16/04 5:44pm Subject: RE: Lost Pride (AU_ J,J)- update Lums - Date Edited: 5/16/04 6:11pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Niff-tik-Ocsif
	reply (to my one reader) J_and_J- Han's death will be told or at least talked about. Jaina is 25 and Jag is 27 -----signature----- Never doubt the sanity of a crazy person wisedom is like a present, the longer you are without it the more you want it. http://boards.theforce.net/Beyond_the_Saga/b10477/15884660/ Lost Pride ayep
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Jaina_and_Jag Registered: Apr '03	Date Posted: 5/16/04 5:54pm Subject: RE: Lost Pride (AU_ J,J)- update Lums
	Ok. I'm just hoping I don't have to wait too long to hear it.
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Niff-tik-Ocsif Registered: Nov '03	Date Posted: 5/16/04 7:45pm Subject: RE: Lost Pride (AU_ J,J)- update Lums - Date Edited: 5/16/04 8:04pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Niff-tik-Ocsif
	Uping my own story without shame up -----signature----- Never doubt the sanity of a crazy person wisedom is like a present, the longer you are without it the more you want it. http://boards.theforce.net/Beyond_the_Saga/b10477/15884660/ Lost Pride ayep
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Niff-tik-Ocsif Registered: Nov '03	Date Posted: 5/16/04 8:47pm Subject: RE: Lost Pride (AU_ J,J OC)- update Lums
	Again i am uping my story without shame. -----signature----- Never doubt the sanity of a crazy person wisedom is like a present, the longer you are without it the more you want it. http://boards.theforce.net/Beyond_the_Saga/b10477/15884660/ Lost Pride ayep
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Jaina_and_Jag Registered: Apr '03	Date Posted: 5/17/04 1:45pm Subject: RE: Lost Pride (AU_ J,J OC)- update Lums
	Just so you know-- You're not supposed to up your story a lot. It's like this new rule or something. I find it really stupid but you're not supposed to. Just wanted to let you know before you got in trouble or anything.
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JAGSGURL15 Registered: Jul '03	Date Posted: 5/17/04 4:03pm Subject: RE: Lost Pride (AU_ J,J OC)- update Lums
	Great JOB! Hey.. u are really doing this well.. just so u know... ! -----signature----- Mush Queen of TKL's LOMIN ALE WRAITHS Living In DE'NILE i <3 JJ REDICK ~&NY YANKEES&~ (((DUKE BLUE DEVILS)))
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Niff-tik-Ocsif Registered: Nov '03	Date Posted: 5/17/04 4:09pm Subject: The biggest secret of them all - Date Edited: 5/17/04 4:11pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Niff-tik-Ocsif
	Jaina slipped into the nearest room. Jag was still trying to catch up with her, ‘what a time avoiding this husband of mine,’ Jaina thought to herself. Jag was everywhere second guessing her every move, every place to get away. Jaina looked around the room, there he was. Lums came from the shadows. “Care if we talk now?” Lums asked cheerfully. “Only if you have good news for me,” Jaina said praying her voice would sound calmer than she was. “Well how does Fit leaving your Jag alone sound?” Lums smirked. “I think I got through to her, please understand that she has been,” he paused for a minute searching for the words, “trained to seduce men. It is like second nature for her to seek out males and make them succumb to her will.” Jaina thought for a moment, turning over what he said in her mind. Reaching out with the force Jaina searched, and searched. ‘Odd, it is like I am the only person in this room.’ Jaina thought to herself. “Fine I will believe you, for now.” “Have you told him yet?” Lums quickly changed the subject. ”Told who, what?” Jaina questioned cautiously, wondering if he knew. “Jag, and that you are pregnant. Have you told him yet?” Lums asked impatiently. Jaina gasped, no one but her and her mother knew her knew that she was pregnant, and even to them it was only an assumption. “No, and now I must go.” With that She left. ‘How had he known? She barely knew.’ Jaina’s mind whirled about all Lums had told her, so many things didn’t make any sense to her. According to the force, Lums wasn’t even there. ”Jaina!” Jaina turned to meet the voice behind her. Jag. “Look, what, that wasn’t,” Jag began to stutter. ”I know, a friend explained most of it to me,” Jaina sighed. Jaina felt Jags arm slip around her waist. ”Who is this friend? I have to thank him.” Jag pulled her closer “Now isn’t this sweet?” Wes Janson popped up beside them. Jag pulled his green eyes away from Jaina’s. “What do you want Janson?” Jaina asked. Wes smiled and walked off muttering about ewoks. ______________________________ A few hours later, Jaina and Jag were resting on the couch. “I’m sorry, I should have done more to avoid Fit,” Jag told Jaina for the fifth time. Jaina laughed, “It is okay, I trust you, it is her I don’t trust,” Jaina turned to face him, “don’t you ever doubt my trust alright?” “Alright,” Jag said as he leaned down to kiss her. ******************* That is all for now I got for now, it only the begening of this post though. -----signature----- Never doubt the sanity of a crazy person wisedom is like a present, the longer you are without it the more you want it. http://boards.theforce.net/Beyond_the_Saga/b10477/15884660/ Lost Pride ayep
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