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Cobranaconda Title: Ex-FF-UK: South CR Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 7/12/04 10:48am Subject: A New Start (Post NJO, J/J then split, J/TK, Shocks included) - Date Edited: 1/10/06 5:50am (6 edits total) Edited By: Cobranaconda
	This is a little story(47+ pages) of what happens after NJO. Is it peaceful? It's Star Wars! Enjoy. Star Wars: A New Start. Chapter One He was going to be a father! Jacen couldn't believe it! He didn't even know how! Talk about first time lucky! He and Tenel Ka were getting married in a week! He couldn't control himself! He walked, well, no, swaggered into his and Tenel Ka's chambers. "Hi," he said. "Hi yourself, you're pretty cute! I don't know what my fiancé would say if he knew that you were in here" she replied. Jacen leaped up onto the bed. He leaned forward and kissed her on the forehead. " Cilghal's told everyone," he said. "Oh," she said in return, " I wanted to tell them all." "Yeah, well Cilghal stole our moment." " Fact." " You really annoy me when you say that," he said. " You know that I have no humour," she replied huskily. " Are you sure that you didn't lose it when I accidentally cut your arm off?" " That wasn't your fault," she replied, " It was me and my faulty Lightsabre." " Yes well, I still feel guilty, you know." " Well you shouldn't. Let's go get something to eat." " Don't you have to comm Hapes to give them your Queenly instructions for the day?" " They can wait." And they walked off towards their local cantina. Half a standard hour later, they walked out of the cantina. " Them Soypro cutlets were bland." Tenel Ka said blankly. " Yes well you're used to spicy stuff." Jacen said. " Fact," Tenel Ka said, matter of factly. " You really should go back to Hapes to sort things out," Jacen said seriously. " What! And you could go for a week without seeing your beloved?" Tenel Ka asked. " I could come with you," Jacen replied. " OK," she conceded. -----signature----- "We find that your American beer is a little like making love in a canoe." "Making love in a canoe?" "It's ****ing close to water."
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Cobranaconda Title: Ex-FF-UK: South CR Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 7/18/04 11:28am Subject: RE: A New Start (Post NJO, J/J then split, J/TK, Shocks included)
	Does this mean that no-one can be bothered to read a huge story, or is it just because I'm new in the FF? -----signature----- "We find that your American beer is a little like making love in a canoe." "Making love in a canoe?" "It's ****ing close to water."
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Jaina_and_Jag Registered: Apr '03	Date Posted: 7/18/04 11:42am Subject: RE: A New Start (Post NJO, J/J then split, J/TK, Shocks included)
	It might be better if you broke up the story so it wasn't all in one post. It's very daunting to see something that huge and most people can't be bothered to try to wade through it.
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Cobranaconda Title: Ex-FF-UK: South CR Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 7/18/04 12:14pm Subject: RE: A New Start (Post NJO, J/J then split, J/TK, Shocks included) - Date Edited: 7/20/04 9:51am (1 edits total) Edited By: Cobranaconda
	I'll probably get done for spamming now. I realise that the first half is a bit dialogue dominated, don't worry, as this fades as the story continues. Chapter Two. " Hapes," Tenel Ka said, surveying the planet's green hills. " Why don't we go into the palace now?" " Sure," Jacen said. They walked into the palace and were greeted by Ta'a Chume, Tenel Ka's grandmother. " How lovely to see you both again," she said. " I trust that you will be staying for more than a week this time?" " Maybe," Tenel Ka replied ," But we have more pressing needs to attend to at the moment." " Like what, for an example?" Ta'a Chume asked. " Like our marriage for a start." Tenel Ka answered. " Marriage? You two are getting married?" Shock was easily apparent on Ta'a Chume's face. " Yes," Jacen spoke for the first time. " Excellent," Ta'a Chume responded. " Also, I'm pregnant," Tenel Ka said. " Even better!" Ta'a Chume replied. " Can we hold the ceremony here?" Tenel Ka asked. " Of course you can!" Ta'a Chume answered. " as you are the current monarch it is only proper for you to hold it here. When will it be?" " Two weeks. That should be long enough for everybody to get here," Tenel Ka replied. " Who will be coming?" Ta'a Chume asked. " Han Solo, Leia Organa Solo, Jaina Solo, Luke Skywalker, Mara Jade Skywalker, Alema Rar, Lowbacca, Zekk, and the rest of the academy students and all of our family." "Okay," Ta'a Chume said. "I'll comm them immediately." "Thank you", Tenel Ka replied. She and Jacen then left the room and started walking down the corridor. "That went well", Jacen said. "Well enough, yes. Come, I will ........ I mean, we will prepare a holovid with our news. Everyone except for the Ni'Korish will be quite pleased." " The Ni'Kor .... what?" Jacen asked. " The Ni'Korish. The anti-Jedi, anti Dathomiri xenophobic Hapans who consider themselves better than everybody else. They are the ones that murdered my mother." " Oh, yeah, right, now I see." "Come on then, we have to send the message!" " Hold on." Jacen said excitedly." What if we visited all of the worlds in the Hapes cluster and broke the news personally? Surely they'll feel more honoured?" " Fact, but you're missing out an important factor." " What's that then?"Jacen asked suspiciously. " Assassination attempts!" " Hello! Jedi Jacen Solo to Tenel Ka! We are Jedi!" He patted his Lightsabre. " Fact," Tenel Ka sighed, beaten. " Where first? Gallinore?" " OK, but sixty-three planets in two weeks will be hard." " Not really." Tenel Ka said. " I, like my father, have a custom modified Miy'til fighter which just happens to have two seats! I have named it the Dathomiri Sabre." " That's all very well but, how fast can it go?" " Ten thousand klicks per minute at sublight and point- four past lightspeed." " Sithspawn! That's faster than the Falcon!" Jacen gasped. "Fact, and we could make all the planets within a week and a half." Tenel Ka said. " Cool!" Jacen replied. " Come on, let's go!" -----signature----- "We find that your American beer is a little like making love in a canoe." "Making love in a canoe?" "It's ****ing close to water."
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Cobranaconda Title: Ex-FF-UK: South CR Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 7/18/04 12:15pm Subject: RE: A New Start (Post NJO, J/J then split, J/TK, Shocks included) - Date Edited: 7/20/04 9:57am (1 edits total) Edited By: Cobranaconda
	Here's the next. Chapter Three. Jacen sat in the back of the Hapan fighter, thinking. He hadn't thought for a long time, not since the fall of the Yuuzhan Vong anyway. So far they had visited fifty-eight of the sixty-three planets and only thirty- two assassination attempts had been made so far. Luckily, all of them had been foiled. Out of the eighty-three assassins that had made attempts on their lives, three were decapitated, eighteen were in jail, two were drifting slowly into a sun, eating hard vacuum on their way there. The remaining sixty were killed in ways not describable by the crowds present at the announcements. He also thought of Jaina, Lowie and Alema playing about in Jaina's new Corellian Engineering Corporation YT-2800 Light- stock freighter named Little Brother, in honour of their little brother Anakin's codename for the raid to kill the Voxyn queen over Myrkr. He then thought of Anakin, Anakin who died at Myrkr trying to kill the Voxyn queen. He then thought to the future. He saw himself and Tenel Ka maybe ten years down the line, playing with five young children. Two looked like Luke, one looked like Mara and the other two must have been his and Tenel Ka's. He looked even further to see uncle Luke lying in state, well, his robes and Lightsabre anyway, seeing as Jedi Masters disintegrate when they die. Standing next to the pallet he saw his mother and Mara watching on, but his father was not present. He then saw Kyp Durron, Kam Solusar, Tionne Solusar, Corran Horn, Jacen's sister Jaina and himself training new students at the Jedi Academy. But then he saw something bad. It was a Yuuzhan Vong attack force, in the future! He felt a jolt as Tenel Ka settled the ship down onto the ground. He then became fully aware and said to Tenel Ka, " I think I just had a vision of the future, and it is not good!" He emphasised the not. " Why? What did you see?" Tenel Ka asked. " First I saw us playing in a field with Luke and Mara's two children and our three." He rushed. " So far, not bad at all." Tenel Ka said. Jacen spoke faster now." Then, I saw uncle Luke's robe and Lightsabre. People were mourning but my dad wasn't there!" " Okay, everyone dies sometime." Tenel Ka replied. Jacen sighed." Then I saw me, Jaina, Kyp, Kam, Tionne and Corran training kids at the Academy." Tenel Ka laughed. " That's the antithesis of bad." Jacen smiled bitterly. " Okay, here is the really bad bit. I saw a huge Yuuzhan Vong attack force that could rival any fleet that the New Republic could muster." " Well, maybe you were seeing it in the past, when they first attacked our Galaxy." Tenel Ka replied. " I hope so," Jacen said. " I really do." " Yes, very well. Let us go and see this audience then." " Okay then," Jacen said, kissing her full on the lips. They then walked to the podium, where the huge audience was waiting, and they gave their announcement. -----signature----- "We find that your American beer is a little like making love in a canoe." "Making love in a canoe?" "It's ****ing close to water."
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Cobranaconda Title: Ex-FF-UK: South CR Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 7/18/04 12:17pm Subject: RE: A New Start (Post NJO, J/J then split, J/TK, Shocks included) - Date Edited: 7/20/04 10:03am (1 edits total) Edited By: Cobranaconda
	This one's quite a long chapter. And it will make the Kyp lovers shout with joy as the Jag lovers mourn. Chapter Four. Jaina didn't know why, but she had to do this. She thought about the good times that they had had together as she walked towards Jag Fel's quarters. She buzzed the comlink. " Jag. Open up. It's me, Jaina." she said. " Hi, Jaina, hold on." He opened the door." So, what can I do for such a fine lady at such a late hour. Would you like a drink, or me?" " Can it Jag." she said, obviously annoyed. " Actually, I've come to, well, uh, I, uh, came to, uh, break up with you." She smiled sheepishly. " You what?!" he shouted. " There is no reason to get mad Jag. I just need a breather, you know?" " But why?" Jag asked suspiciously. " I don't know. Well, actually I do. I looked into the future earlier and I saw that if we carried on with each other, one of us would die." she said, then added,"soon." "Oh," he said, close to tears. " We'll still be friends, right?" " Of course Jag," she answered," always." " Good, and , one more thing." " What's that then?" " Thanks." " Thanks? Thanks for what?" " Thanks for being there when I needed you." " That's okay. I want to thank you too." " Why?" " For helping me get to grips with myself." " That's fine." Jag replied. " I'll miss you." " Why? Where am I going?" " Well, I mean I'll miss being with you." " Me too." Jaina turned and walked out of the room. Then, for the first time since he was a young boy, Jagged Fel, Colonel, hero of the Chiss, hero of the Vong war, leader of Vanguard Chiss Squadron, cried. He cried so hard and for so long, he cried himself to sleep. Shawn'kyr'nuruodo of the Syndic Mitth'raw'nuruodo House Phalanx from Csilla, one of the Chiss homeworlds, arrived at Jag Fel's quarters early the next morning. Shawn'kyr'nuruodo was a full-blooded Chiss, part of the same Phalanx as Mitth'raw'nuruodo, who was better known as the Imperials greatest strategist, Grand Admiral Thrawn. Shawn'kyr was second in command in Jag's Vanguard Chiss Squadron. When Jag didn't answer his comm, Shawn'kyr used the override code. Jag was lying on his bunk, motionless. Shawn'kyr walked over to Jag. She was about to speak when she heard sobbing. And a quiet voice murmuring, " I can't believe she left me. I can't believe she kriffing left me!" " Excuse me Colonel," Shawn'kyr said loudly, making Jag jump."But bad language will not get you anywhere in life. " Besides, if you're talking about Jaina Solo, she is in a similar state at the moment in the nearest TapCaf drinking herself to her death with pure Tanaabian whiskey. If she goes on for much longer she will be dead within the hour. NOW, GET, UP, AND, DO, SOMETHING!" she boomed. Jag literally jumped straight out of bed, not at all minding the insubordination. He grabbed the nearest set of clothes and ran out of the door. When he got to the Chalgrin's Charcoal Cantina, Jaina was already unconscious. He dragged her out of the cantina, ignoring the barman shouting that she owed three hundred credits. He dragged her all the way to the Skywalker quarters. He buzzed the door comm and as soon as Mara answered it Jag yelled," Mara quick, get Luke, Jaina needs help, urgently!" The last word was irrelevant as Mara had already opened the door. " What is wrong with her?" Mara asked. " She came to break up with me last night. Shawn'kyr'nuruodo saw her drinking heavily this morning and when I got there she was already unconscious." " Who is unconscious?" Luke Skywalker asked. " Ah, Master Skywalker, it's Jaina." Jag said. " Ah, yes! I foresaw this happening, she really shouldn't do this to herself." "Yes, well, can you put her in a healing trance or something?" Jag said. "She already is, the likely explanation would be that she felt herself slipping, so she put herself into a trance." " Jaya!" Ben Skywalker's voice came from behind Jag. The three year old infant walked towards his cousin and climbed onto her. "Fix, Fix, daddy, tell Jaya to fix." Came his high pitched voice. " She is fixing, Ben." " Good." Ben said. He then walked over to where Jag had seated himself and climbed on him too. He then pulled off Jag's Colonel insignia and started to chew it. " Ben!" Luke shouted, sounding extremely embarrassed, but Jag simply laughed. " Don't worry." Jag said. " I have plenty. This is an old jumpsuit and that's just an old insignia." Suddenly, Jaina stirred. " Jaya!" Ben shouted, waving his arms triumphantly. " Jaya wake up!" " Good whiskey?" Jag asked. " Jag? Is that you?" she asked. " Yes. And Luke and Mara and Ben as well." " What?! Why aren't I dead in Chalgrin's?" " I thought you were unconscious, so I brought you here." " I was, well, I was refined unconscious. That way, you heal as you go!" " Dumb Jaya," Ben said. " You got drunk in the morning. Why didn't you suck Glitterstim as well?" " Why not?" Jaina said sarcastically. " Well, let's see, how about the fact that I'm not that stupid." " Yes Jaya is, otherwise, Jaya not have broken up with Jag." Ben said. " Long word for you Ben." Mara said. " Learn it from Jaya." Ben said. " Then why not say my name properly?" Jaina asked. " Because it doesn't sound as good as Jaya." Ben said. Jaina gave up." Oh well. Mara? Can I have a Gizer Pale Blue ale please." " Why?" Mara asked. " Because my mouth is dry." " Oh, Okay." " Thanks Mara." -----signature----- "We find that your American beer is a little like making love in a canoe." "Making love in a canoe?" "It's ****ing close to water."
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Cobranaconda Title: Ex-FF-UK: South CR Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 7/18/04 12:18pm Subject: RE: A New Start (Post NJO, J/J then split, J/TK, Shocks included) - Date Edited: 7/20/04 10:06am (1 edits total) Edited By: Cobranaconda
	If I'm going to get done for posting all 47 chapters really quickly, could someone please tell me now. Chapter Five. ' Invite to Jacen and Tenel Ka's wedding', Read the invitation. In three days time, an astonished Leia thought. I better hurry. " Han!" Leia shouted. " Jacen's wedding is in three days time. Prep the Falcon." " Oh!" came Han Solo's voice. " Can't it wait." " No!" Leia's shocked reply said. " Ohhhh!" " Now!" Leia shouted. " Okay, Okay." " Well get up then!" " I am, I am." He got up slowly and walked into the 'fresher. " Threepio," Leia shouted. " Come here." " Yes, Mistress Leia?" " Help me pack." " Okay." Thirty standard minutes later, Leia was packed and Han had prepped the Falcon, and they were ready to go. " So, where is it that we are going then?" Han said. " I do not have a clue." Leia replied. " I did see a TC signature and a weird logo. Maybe ... Hapes?" " Probably, yes. Seeing as Tenel Ka is the queen there." " I suppose so. Do you know the coordinates?" Han asked. " I don't, no." Leia said regretfully. " Oh, brilliant!" Han replied sarcastically. " Why aren't they in the navicomputer?" Leia asked. " I wiped them." Han replied innocently. " Why?" " Well why do you think?" Han said." After last time I really didn't want to go there ever again." " Oh yes." Leia remembered. Han had been badly beaten up by the Royal guards, they had even cracked open his supposedly unbreakable skull. " Hey, Goldenrod, get your carcass up here now." Han shouted. " Yes Master Han?" Threepio's prissy voice said. " What are the coordinates for Hapes?" " I am afraid that I do not know them sir." Threepio replied. " Well, ask Artoo then." Han said. " Okay Master Han." Threepio trotted back into the hold. After a series of bleeps, Threepio came back up. " Artoo says that the coordinates are quote ' one- seven-nine-decimal-eight-three.' Unquote." Threepio said. " Thanks Threepio," Leia replied, " come on flyboy, lets go." They jumped into Hyperspace. -----signature----- "We find that your American beer is a little like making love in a canoe." "Making love in a canoe?" "It's ****ing close to water."
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Cobranaconda Title: Ex-FF-UK: South CR Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 7/18/04 12:20pm Subject: RE: A New Start (Post NJO, J/J then split, J/TK, Shocks included)
	Do you think I should wait for a reply before posting the one after this? Chapter Six. Jaina, Luke, Mara, Ben and Jag looked at the holocomm unit. " So," Mara said. " Jacen is getting married." " Looks like it." Luke replied. " What? Jasa? Married?" Ben asked. " Yes Ben." Jaina answered. " So." Luke picked up the holocomm transmission relay." Are we all going?" Three yes' and a no answered him. " Why aren't you coming then Jag?" Luke asked. " I have two squadrons to run." Jag replied simply. " So has Jaina, but she can spare the time." Mara said, glaring lasers at Jag. " Yes, but, she's only got Twin Suns Squadron. I have Vanguard and Chiss Squadrons." Jag tried to look as innocent as he could. " Oh, okay. We'll let you get away with it." Mara said, then added, "this time." Jag laughed. Then said," Thanks, but I better dash, my squadrons might be missing me." " All right then," Mara said. " See you soon." Jaina said as Jag walked out of the door. " So," Luke said. " Which ship are we taking?" " The Shadow has my vote." Mara replied cockily, as she always was when her ship was mentioned. " Well, I have responsibilities to my ship and my crew," Jaina said,"So I'd better take the Little Brother." " Okay then," Luke picked up his Jedi cloak and put it on. " Let's go." Alema and Lowie greeted Jaina on the ramp and asked her where they were going. " We're going to Jacen's wedding." Jaina replied. Lowie growled inquisitively. The translation was, [ Who is Jacen getting marrrried to?] Using the Shryiiwook language, use only by Wookies. When Wookies could be understood by humans, the R's were always longer than in Basic. " Jacen is getting married to Tenel Ka." Jaina replied. " Really?" Alema asked. " Yes." Jaina said while running to the cockpit/bridge of the freighter. " Come on, hurry up." She switched on the comm unit on the Jade Shadow's frequency and said," How about a race to Hapes Mara?" " You're on." Came Mara's reply over the comm. Jaina cleared for take off only to find that the Shadow was about three klicks ahead of them. Jaina kicked the sublight engines up to full speed and set them a course for the edge of the atmosphere. By the time they got to the edge of the atmosphere the gap had narrowed to just under a klick. They raced for another few minutes so that they could plot the course and then the starlines shot by then evaporated into the mottled blue blur of Hyperspace. When the Little Brother arrived in system, Jaina was surprised to see the Millennium Falcon just pulling away from where Jaina was. Jaina then started towards Hapes to land. -----signature----- "We find that your American beer is a little like making love in a canoe." "Making love in a canoe?" "It's ****ing close to water."
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Cobranaconda Title: Ex-FF-UK: South CR Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 7/18/04 12:30pm Subject: RE: A New Start (Post NJO, J/J then split, J/TK, Shocks included)
	OK, no-one is either listening or caring, so I'll just post the next as well. I did write this a while ago, so I'm just copying and pasting and not needing to wait for reply's and then wait longer so that I can write a new bit. Chapter Seven. Jacen and Tenel Ka greeted everyone at the spaceport. " Hi mum, dad, thanks for coming." Jacen said, grinning like a Hutt."And everyone else too!" " Welcome." Tenel Ka said powerfully. " Come, we must get to the palace quickly." " Why?" Mara asked, looking confused. " The Ni'Korish are already looking for Jacen and myself, but with nine Jedi on the planet, they will have a field day!" Tenel Ka said in her usual non-emotional tone. " Sure," Mara replied, looking around as if expecting an attack. "Lets go." It was early evening by the time that they got to the palace. Ta'a Chume greeted them all, but she " accidentally" missed out Jaina, because Jaina had, two and a half years ago, rejected Ta'a Chume's offer to become the queen of Hapes. " So, how are you all then?" Ta'a Chume asked politely. " Fine, thank you." Mara snapped back. She was still furious about what Ta'a Chume had put her apprentice, Jaina, through. " Oh, good." Ta'a Chume replied, extremely poshly. " Dinner will be served in half of an hour. Please turn up." She turned and left the room. " Well, that was quick." Jaina remarked sourly. " Fact." Tenel Ka replied." My grandmother has not been much on speeches since Jaina made her look like a fool in front of most of Hapes." " Oh good." Jaina said with a hugely false sadistic smile on her face. " There is no use in sarcasm, Jaina." Luke admonished her. Lowie brayed something. " You, Lowie, are just like your uncle." Han said. " You always think with your stomach leading the way and your brain lacking three klicks behind it." Han gulped. Chewbacca's death five years ago had hit Han hard. " Yeah, well," Alema said." Lowie does have a point. We are all starving and food from here is bound to be better than the ration bars that we've been eating recently." " How true." Mara said. " Let's go and get some food." After they had eaten, they went back to their quarters. Jaina sat on her bunk. After a while, she got bored and turned on the Holonet. She watched a Garik "Face" Loran movie. It was called the Black Bantha. Eventually the necessity for sleep grew unbearable, so she turned the 'net off and went to sleep. -----signature----- "We find that your American beer is a little like making love in a canoe." "Making love in a canoe?" "It's ****ing close to water."
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Cobranaconda Title: Ex-FF-UK: South CR Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 7/18/04 12:31pm Subject: RE: A New Start (Post NJO, J/J then split, J/TK, Shocks included)
	I really doubt that this is much better than it is before, so I'll just laugh because I know that there'll be 40 odd posts with just me posting! Please don't ban me! Shorty now. Chapter Eight. By the next day, Tahiri Veila and Zekk, two Jedi Knights arrived. They met Jaina in the corridor. " Hi, Jaina." Tahiri said. " Hello Tahiri, Hello Zekk." Jaina greeted them both. Zekk was wearing his usual black jump-suit covered by his Jedi robe. Tahiri, on the other hand was wearing only simple brown robes and was as always, characteristically barefoot. " Did you have a good trip?" " Not really," Zekk answered. " Bad food." " Bad chambers as well." Tahiri added. " Ah, poor you." Jaina mocked. " It's not funny!" Tahiri scolded. " I think that they were anti-Jedi." Zekk remarked. " Who isn't?" Jaina responded while laughing. " Fact." The voice came from behind them. " Tenel Ka!" Tahiri almost hit the roof, literally. " I'm so happy for you!" " Who isn't happy?" Tenel Ka said." There are no more Vong!" " Yuuzhan Vong." Tahiri replied absently. " Oh, yes, sorry." Tenel Ka smirked. " So, are you going to take us to the dining hall or what?" Tahiri asked excitedly. " Yes, I'm sorry." Tenel Ka replied, starting to walk off down the corridor. " I'd forgotten that people need food when they are excited." " Yes, well, come on." Tahiri said. " I'm starving." And so they went to the dining hall. Chatting needlessly all the way. -----signature----- "We find that your American beer is a little like making love in a canoe." "Making love in a canoe?" "It's ****ing close to water."
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Cobranaconda Title: Ex-FF-UK: South CR Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 7/18/04 12:39pm Subject: RE: A New Start (Post NJO, J/J then split, J/TK, Shocks included)
	This originally had some big innuendos, so I edited them out and made the "Punishment" bit into a sparring scene. Chapter Nine. Later that day, Tenel Ka sat talking to Jacen. " So, three hours until marriage, fourteen days until birth." Tenel Ka said. " Yep," Jacen replied." Oh, Sithspit! I forgot to buy you a ring!" " Fact." " So, what, aren't you going to punish me for it?" Jacen asked. Tenel Ka looked surprised. " Why would I want to do that?" " Will you ever laugh, it was a joke, unless you actually want to hurt me badly." " Oh, I get it, but we only have three hours until we get married!" " Exactly! We have got three hours!" " Oh okay." They sparred for the next hour and a half, Tenel Ka winning more often then not. Tenel Ka smiled as they got out of the 'fresher. " My god!" Jacen said." You smiled!" " Why wouldn't I." She replied. " That was the best challenge I've ever had." Jacen hit his head with his hand." Oh god, I forgot. Wedding, smart clothes." " Oh yes. You'd better do that!" Tenel Ka kissed Jacen on the cheek. " Mmm." Jacen replied. " So. We had better go to the reception then." Tenel Ka said. " Fact." Jacen mocked. " You're mocking me again." She said warningly. " Yes, and it feels good." " Really?" " Yes! Of course it does. I get to insult you!" " Okay," Tenel Ka said as they finished getting changed." Come on. We'd better go." So off they went. -----signature----- "We find that your American beer is a little like making love in a canoe." "Making love in a canoe?" "It's ****ing close to water."
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Cobranaconda Title: Ex-FF-UK: South CR Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 7/18/04 12:42pm Subject: RE: A New Start (Post NJO, J/J then split, J/TK, Shocks included)
	This is a huge chapter and has quite a bit of violence, duelling with sabers. It also has a shock which some of you will hate me for, as it has been discussed in the EU boards since it happened, but oh well. Chapter Ten. An hour later, the reception was ready to begin. They walked into the reception room silently. As they stepped in, a deep voice said," Good. Now I have all of the Jedi in the galaxy in one room." The doors slammed shut. Jacen drew his Lightsabre, but an invisible wall smashed into his face and his Lightsabre went flying into the hand of the mysterious person. " Who are you?" Jacen asked. " I am the Jedi's worst enemy, a Sith Lord, called Darth Ascunsion. My Force powers alone would be enough to destroy you pitiful Jedi, but I will give you a chance. I have four apprentices that will kill you first, though. These are three of my apprentices: Vereter, Heloith Djo and Brakiss." " Heloith?" Tenel Ka asked. "Why did you turn?" " We needed to repel them Vong things." She replied. " But do not try to redeem me. It will not work." " Brakiss." Luke said coldly. "' Master'" Brakiss replied. " How did you survive?" Luke asked. " That is not your concern, 'Master'." He drew his Lightsabre." My powers far surpass yours. You are weak, I am much stronger than you could ever be." " That may be so old friend," Kyp Durron said. " But I wonder?" " Wonder what?" Brakiss snapped back. " Whether or not that you are more powerful than me?" Kyp replied. " Kyp is right." Luke said, cutting off Brakiss and drawing a gasp."Kyp's powers do surpass mine, and most likely surpass any other Jedi's skills that I have ever met, save perhaps Yoda. I accepted that many years ago." " Maybe, Master Durron." Ascunsion growled. " But you have yet to meet my most powerful apprentice. You see, he was one of you, yet you all believe him dead. You even burned him on this planet. But he was with me, and his Dark Side powers allowed him to hibernate through his 'death'. He came back to us and, despite the fact that his body is badly burned, he still lives. It is your fault, Jaina Solo, that he is like this. Without a breathing respirator he would die. He now wears the armour of his grandfather." The door opened and everyone gasped as a huge shadow stepped into the room. Everyone held their breath... As the figure of Darth Vader revealed itself from the shadows. " Hi, everyone." Vader said. Jaina thought, that sounds like ...." Anakin!" She shouted. " You're alive!." She ran towards him, but he drew his Lightsabre. He left it off, but he did not put it away." When did you turn?" Jaina asked him. " When Chewie died." He replied. He ignited his red Lightsabre."Now we all must fight." He said. Tenel Ka fought Heloith Djo, Luke fought Brakiss, Kyp, Lowie and Alema fought Ascunsion, while Tahiri, Zekk, Jaina and Jacen crowded around Anakin. " I loved you Anakin!" Tahiri sniffed. " I thought you loved me back." She then started crying. " I did," He replied. " But my Master taught me that love hinders everything." " Uncle Luke is your master, Anakin." Jaina told him. " No he is not." Anakin replied. " He ceased to be my master five years ago." " Shut up and listen Anakin!" Jacen admonished him. " We are your friends and family. So, if you had the chance, would you kill us?" " No," He replied. " Well, then. You are not dark." Jacen said. " You know nothing of the dark side or its power." Anakin shouted. " Actually, Anakin, we all do." Zekk interrupted." I was the Darkest Knight at the Shadow Academy. Jaina turned when she thought that you were dead. Jacen turned on Coruscant while he was imprisoned by the Yuuzhan Vong. And, only I know this, but Tahiri turned in grief for you! This is how you thank her? " Anyway, back to the point, we've all been there Anakin, and we've all turned away. So can you." " No, you don't understand." Anakin replied. " I've fallen farther than you." " Well, say that to Master Skywalker or Master Durron." Zekk said. Anakin sighed, then he threw Force lightning at them. They all deflected it easily. Anakin looked shocked, well, as shocked as someone in a mask could look. " Is that all you've got?" Jaina laughed." If we can summon it, we can easily dispel it." Jaina looked around the room. Vereter was on the floor, unconscious or dead. Han stood over him with a blaster. Heloith was impaled on the end of Tenel Ka's Lightsabre. Alema and Lowie were floored, but they were slowly getting back up. Kyp had all but killed Ascunsion, who was panting and puffing. He probably had a few broken ribs. But Luke was badly injured, lying on the floor with a hole in his upper right leg and another in his left shoulder. Brakiss was just about to stab Luke in the chest, but suddenly there was a flurry of activity. Mara had moved Luke, Leia had moved Brakiss' arm and Han had shot Brakiss in the chest, but Brakiss absorbed the energy and used telekinesis to steal the DL-44 blaster. But, out of nowhere came a sizzling blast of electricity and caught Brakiss right under his chin. He fell to the floor with a thud. Brakiss tried to get up but a three meter long Lightsabre blade stabbed him in the chest. " Thanks, Corran." Mara said. " No problem." He grinned cockily, but it quickly turned into a grimace." Kyp, look out." He warned. Kyp then twirled around expertly and stabbed Ascunsion, who was rising up behind him, in the chest. Ascunsion groaned, then faded into nothingness. " Wow," Kyp said." He really was a master!" He snorted. " Thanks with the assist on Brakiss, Jaina." Corran said. " It wasn't me." She replied. " Who was it?" She asked. Everyone shook their heads. They then realised that Anakin was still standing there. " It was you, wasn't it Anakin." Jaina said. " Yes," He replied. " Why did you do it?" "You had already killed the others, besides, I hated Brakiss. He was too arrogant." " Right, Mara," Jaina turned to her. " Are you going to take Uncle Luke to the Medcentre?" " No, there is a Two-Onebee here already. That way he can watch the ceremony as well! " The ceremony is still on?!" Jacen gaped." After all that happened I'd would think that it would have to be postponed!" " Not a chance in that Jacen." Luke struggled to say. " Anakin?" " Yes Uncle Luke?" " You can watch the ceremony as well." " Me! What?! But I'm dark! Shouldn't I be executed?" Anakin asked. " No, you shouldn't be executed." Luke replied. " But why not?" " Because you are not dark." Luke said. Anakin looked confused." I sensed it from the moment you walked in here. You were ... well, you still are under the effects of a powerful drug that makes you think that you are something that you really are not." " Oh, right." He replied unconvincingly. " But I would like to know how you fooled Tekli and managed to get badly burned." " It is coming back ... albeit slowly. That's it, I've got it. The drug must have an hours time limit. I last had a drink an hour ago. Well, I put myself into a deep coma that fooled the life monitors. The surge in the Force that you all felt was a Force blast made by Ascunsion. He reached into your minds, which were torn about the mission and Jaina's grief, and he hit you in a psychic wound. Hold on, this armour is claustrophobic, I think I'll take it off." " No!" Jaina screamed. " You can't, you'll die!" " No I won't, he's had me under an illusion. I wasn't the one burned, it was a fake, a doll, maybe even a Human Replica Droid, Lomi and Welk must have switched the me with it." He took his armour, then his helmet. He had no burns at all. He had been right. " You're back." Leia cried. " You're really back!" " Calm down mum, I know." He said. " I'm back." " Good." Luke wheezed. " Now lets watch the ceremony." " OK." -----signature----- "We find that your American beer is a little like making love in a canoe." "Making love in a canoe?" "It's ****ing close to water."
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Cobranaconda Title: Ex-FF-UK: South CR Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 7/18/04 12:44pm Subject: RE: A New Start (Post NJO, J/J then split, J/TK, Shocks included)
	Boring one. Chapter Eleven. The rest of the ceremony passed without any interruptions. Afterwards they all sat talking. " Well, that went pretty well." Jaina said. Mara looked shocked. " Four Sith Lords turn up and it goes pretty well! I'd hate to see what your bad is like." " Hey, you two, leave it out." Leia admonished. " At least Anakin is back." " Fact." Tenel Ka said. " So, how long until you give birth?" Leia asked. " About thirteen days. But that, of course, is an approximation."Tenel Ka said.' " Of course." Leia replied. " So," Jacen said, " how about some food?" " Good idea." Jaina replied. " Hey, has anyone seen Anakin or Tahiri?" " No," Leia said. "But I think it would be best if we left them alone. They're probably catching up on old times." " OK." " Can we eat now?" Alema asked. [ That would be good.] Lowie replied. " Come on," Jacen said," let's go." -----signature----- "We find that your American beer is a little like making love in a canoe." "Making love in a canoe?" "It's ****ing close to water."
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Cobranaconda Title: Ex-FF-UK: South CR Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 7/18/04 12:45pm Subject: RE: A New Start (Post NJO, J/J then split, J/TK, Shocks included)
	This is another quite big one, with lots of innuendos, but mild one's. Chapter Twelve. Anakin and Tahiri sat kissing in Tahiri's quarters. After about three minutes, they finally broke apart. " Wow!" Tahiri said. " Wow to you too!" Anakin countered. " You know what I mean." Tahiri blushed. Anakin grinned. " Yes." He answered. " So, in the three years that you've been gone, what have you been doing?" " Primarily watching innocent people die around me." " But, you didn't kill any, did you?" " Not that I'm aware of, no." " That's OK then." " What's good? Watching innocent people die?" Anakin looked puzzled. " No, good that you didn't kill any." " Oh, right, sure." He looked relieved. " So, welcome back, great-hero-from-the-stars who is to good to keep in touch with his girlfriend." " Well, it's good to be home." " Actually," Tahiri mocked Tenel Ka's voice," You're not home. You are on Hapes." Anakin laughed." That's very true." " Fact," She mocked again." That's why I said it." " You're so clever." " I know." " Cocky." " Hey." " Sorry." " I know you are." Tahiri laughed. " Hey, are you hungry." " Yes." " Good, lets go and meet the others and eat." " Good idea." They headed off towards the palace dining room. Leia, Han, Mara, Jacen, Jaina, Alema, Zekk, Kyp, Corran and Lowie sat around the main table, talking and eating. Anakin and Tahiri walked in. " Hi, everyone." Tahiri said. " Hello." Came the reply. " So," Anakin said," What can we eat?" " Pretty much anything you want," Leia replied." Just say what you want into that comm in the middle of the table there." " Oh good," Tahiri said," Can I have some Soypro cutlets please?" " Certainly," said the comlink. " And can I have some marinated Mynock strips with added vweilu nuts please?" Anakin asked. " Of course sir." the comlink said. " So," Mara's voice leaked suspicion." What did you two get up to?" She grinned maliciously. Tahiri laughed. Anakin said," nothing like that, don't worry. I just told Tahiri what happened while I was away." Anakin and Tahiri's food arrived and they sat down. Jaina asked,"And what exactly did happen?" So Anakin told them. "Mmm," Tahiri said," Wonderful food." " It was, wasn't it." Anakin replied." It was the best food I've had in years." " What did the dark siders give you to eat?" " Mainly roasted boot rubber covered in a grease gravy." " That would be Giju stew then?" " Right first time. How did you guess?" " I've had it once before." Tahiri started them walking down the corridor. She smiled warmly at him, and he returned the smile. " So, how do you feel about being an uncle?" " I'm OK about being an uncle, but I always figured that Jaina would get married and have children first." " She almost did." Tahiri laughed. " Really?" Anakin looked shocked." I mean, she hasn't mentioned anything." " That's because she just broke up with him." " Oh right. So, who was it?" " Jag Fel." Tahiri said innocently. " That stuck up fighter jock?!" " Yeah, but don't voice your opinion in front of Jaina though, she might just crack again." " Again?" Anakin looked surprised. " What do you mean?" " Do you not remember? We told you in the reception hall. Jaina turned to the dark side." " Oh right, yeah." Anakin laughed. " So when did she split up with him?" " Only about a week ago." " Why?" " She had a vision." " What of?" " One of them dying." " Well of course they are going to die." " I know, but I mean soon...." " Well, they are both fighter pilots." " But not in an X-Wing or a Clawcraft, just, well, dying naturally." " Oh, right." " I know" " Know what?" " That that's a bad way to break up a relationship." " How would you know?" " What do you mean?" " Well, you've only been in one relationship." " So what, are you calling me naive?" " No, I'm calling you inexperienced." " Exactly." " Hey?" " Inexperienced is naive." " I suppose so." " And you're calling me that." " Tahiri." " What?" " Shut up." " Wha ..?" Anakin kissed her then, full on the lips. After a minute, they broke apart. Tahiri was gasping for breath. " Wow, Sithspit, where did that come from?" " I don't know, it just did." " Good enough for me." She kissed him back. When they broke apart again, Anakin said," Thanks, I really needed that." " Good, so did I." " Glad to be of service." " I know you are." She got up and turned around. He slapped her backside. She jumped, then turned around and faced him. " What was that for?" She asked. " Why, didn't you like it?" " Yes, do it again!" " OK," he did. She giggled. " What's so funny?" he asked. " It tickles!" " Oh, right, sorry." " Don't be." " Why not?" " Come here." She extended her hand and index finger and gestured for him to approach her. " Wh...?" " Don't ask questions." " Fine." He got up and walked to her. She embraced and kissed him again. " Thanks for that," he said. " But no more time for play. It's been an extremely long day, and I'm wasted, so let's get some sleep." " Good idea." She replied. Almost as soon as they hit the bed they fell asleep. -----signature----- "We find that your American beer is a little like making love in a canoe." "Making love in a canoe?" "It's ****ing close to water."
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Jaina_and_Jag Registered: Apr '03	Date Posted: 7/18/04 4:41pm Subject: RE: A New Start (Post NJO, J/J then split, J/TK, Shocks included)
	It also might work better if you put spaces between the lines so it's not as hard to keep your place.
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Cobranaconda Title: Ex-FF-UK: South CR Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 7/19/04 11:45am Subject: RE: A New Start (Post NJO, J/J then split, J/TK, Shocks included)
	Will Do. Chapter Thirteen. In the morning, the newlyweds left to go to Gallinore for a few days as a honeymoon. But other than them, everyone else stayed. " Ah," Jaina sighed inwardly. " I wish I could go to Gallinore." " Who doesn't." Tahiri moaned. " Me, for a start." said Kyp. " Why not?" asked Jaina. " Well, nature just isn't really my thing." he replied. " Like we didn't already know that." Tahiri said. Anakin yawned as he walked in to the dining hall. "What are you lot all grumbling about now?" He asked. " We want to go to Gallinore!" Tahiri exclaimed. " Well, everyone except me." Kyp said. " Yes Kyp, you've already explained that fact to us." Jaina moaned. " Ah, but Anakin didn't know." Kyp countered. " Exactly." Anakin said. " Mm..mm." Jaina was chewing hard on her breakfast. " Chew your food sis." Anakin sounded embarrassed and his cheeks flushed pink. " Okay." Jaina responded, no longer battling with her food. " Now, what did you say?" " I said, ' You do now.' " " That is correct. Now seeing as we can't go to Gallinore, let's go for a swim." Anakin said. " Good idea." So they went for a swim. -----signature----- "We find that your American beer is a little like making love in a canoe." "Making love in a canoe?" "It's ****ing close to water."
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