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Author	Topic: Dark Sword (Post Star By Star AU Dark Jaina/Jag/Kyp/Jacen/Vergere/Tenel Ka) New Post! 12/27/05
Jaina_Solo_15 Registered: Dec '02	Date Posted: 8/9/04 6:09pm Subject: Dark Sword (Post Star By Star AU Dark Jaina/Jag/Kyp/Jacen/Vergere/Tenel Ka) New Post! 12/27/05 - Date Edited: 12/27/05 6:03pm (22 edits total) Edited By: Jaina_Solo_15
	Disclaimer: I don’t own Star Wars or the NJO. That all belongs to George Lucas, Lucasfilm Ltd. and various others who are not me. Author: Me. Summary: A what if? Dark Jaina alternate universe story set at the end of Star by Star. Author's note: This is just a random plot bunny. Hopefully I'll be able to turn it into a story. Prologue Go now. Anakin, I can’t!” Jaina commed. Anakin raised the detonator so that his brother and sister could see. Thirty seconds. He released the trigger. Take her, Jacen. Kiss Tahiri for me….. Anakin used the Force to nudge the sphere away, then caught an amphistaff in the ribs and went down hard, letting his lightsaber fall from his hand. His aura was only a faint glow, flickering between dim and nonexistent. The maelstrom inside was dying away now, flowing back into the Force. Anakin was gone. ….Jacen laid a hand on her knee, hoping his touch might serve as her anchor. “We can’t give up. We still need to destroy the queen.” Jaina looked up, a faint spark of presence finally showing in her vacant eyes. “You left him to the Yuuzhan Vong.” “We had to,” Jacen said, accepting the rebuke. As much as he himself was hurting, he would rather Jaina lay the blame boiling up inside her on his own shoulders than her own. “They were all over him. You saw that.” Jaina pushed his hand from her leg. “He put you in charge, and you left him behind.” ….Jaina felt someone watching and turned to find Vergere staring at her from the shelter of a nearby archway, Anakin’s lightsaber dangling from one hand and her narrow eye angled in what seemed a peculiar expression of dismay. Jaina sneered at the creature, then raised her hand and loosed another bolt of Force lightning….. Alema came to Jaina’s side and, somewhat tentatively, took her by the arm. “We’d better go.” Jaina knocked her arm away and started to run. There was no where Vergere could go that Jaina couldn’t find her and no speed that she could go that Jaina wouldn’t match. She would die…. Jaina ran and ran, never stopping. Any Vong that got in her way was promptly moved aside with Force lightning. She rounded a corner and slammed back into the wall. Her vision and consciousness went dark. Vergere…. There came a terrible thunder overhead, a firestorm so bright it lit the darkness behind Jacen’s closed eyelids. He heard a voice calling- a voice that he had known all his life. “Jacen?” A pause, frantic and demanding. “Jacen, answer me!” A delicate hand, brushed back his hair and he opened his eyes to look into a beautiful familiar face. Tenel Ka. “It’s okay. You’re on board the ship now. We’re leaving. We have too.” “Jaina?” His voice was desperate and hoarse. She shook her head once, decisively. “Gone.” Jaina Solo gasped, and screamed until her throat was raw. She was alive. She was awake and she was in the Embrace of Pain. Edit- As some of you probably already caught, there are some direct quotes and some altered quotes from Star By Star in there. If you're interested in knowing exactly where they came from pm me and I'll give you the page number. -----signature----- Proud Dark Lady of the DLC
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JAGSGURL15 Registered: Jul '03	Date Posted: 8/9/04 6:16pm Subject: RE: Dark Sword (Post Star By Star AU Dark Jaina fic Jag/Kyp/Jacen/Vergere)
	jaggie! it says jaggie! ME WILL STAY TILL JAGGIE SHOWS DEFINATLY! me loveyed! -----signature----- Mush Queen of TKL's LOMIN ALE WRAITHS Living In DE'NILE i <3 JJ REDICK ~&NY YANKEES&~ (((DUKE BLUE DEVILS)))
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DarthIshtar Title: Former CR Registered: Mar '01	Date Posted: 8/9/04 6:21pm Subject: RE: Dark Sword (Post Star By Star AU Dark Jaina fic Jag/Kyp/Jacen/Vergere)
	Whoa...i like the idea! -----signature----- "I feel like a more down-to-earth Pink 5 when I'm writing Leah. Same attitude, less lip gloss." ~Me on how to get in the right mindset for Twilight fanfic.
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Sara_Kenobi Registered: Sep '00	Date Posted: 8/9/04 7:42pm Subject: RE: Dark Sword (Post Star By Star AU Dark Jaina fic Jag/Kyp/Jacen/Vergere)
	Hey, wow, you're a busy little writer, Jaina! I love AU stories and this looks like it's going to be great. I've read SbS only once before, but this makes me wanna read it again. A very emotional scene! Excellent! -----signature----- Flight of Raven's http://boards.theforce.net/non_star_wars_fan_fiction/b10808/30284518/p1/?0
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Jaya Solo Registered: Jul '99	Date Posted: 8/10/04 9:27pm Subject: RE: Dark Sword (Post Star By Star AU Dark Jaina fic Jag/Kyp/Jacen/Vergere)
	Interesting. Very interesting. Yeah, it does seem like you have a ton of plot bunnies floating around. Good start! -----signature----- Padawans: DreamingIce, LostJedi26 Restoring Order: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/24000645 Green Eyes 4: http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=24195159 Palpatine's Blog: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/25399668
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Jaina_Solo_15 Registered: Dec '02	Date Posted: 8/11/04 6:05pm Subject: RE: Dark Sword (Post Star By Star AU Dark Jaina fic Jag/Kyp/Jacen/Vergere)
	JAGSGURL15: Glad you liked it! And yes, Jag will be in this. You know I'm a definite J/J shipper, but I'm not sure how mushy this one's gonna get. DarthIshtar: Thank you. Sara_Kenobi: I've read SbS only once before, but this makes me wanna read it again. A very emotional scene! Wow! Thank you. Not sure how the rest of this is gonna be, but I'm glad you liked this part. Jaya Solo: Stupid plot bunnies. They're everywhere! Now I just have to chase this one down and wring an update out of it. -----signature----- Proud Dark Lady of the DLC
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NYCitygurl Title: Manager of SFFBC, C&G, NSWFF, and Icons Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 8/11/04 6:42pm Subject: RE: Dark Sword Author Replies up! (Post Star By Star AU Dark Jaina fic Jag/Kyp/Jacen/Vergere)
	Gasps That was so sad!! And good. I like the twist-I just hope Jacen doesn't do what Jaina did on Hapes. NYC -----signature----- I agree with RJ Officially Idri's Muse
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NYCitygurl Title: Manager of SFFBC, C&G, NSWFF, and Icons Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 8/17/04 11:55am Subject: RE: Dark Sword Author Replies up! (Post Star By Star AU Dark Jaina fic Jag/Kyp/Jacen/Vergere)
	Just bumping this up a little because it doesn't have many replies. NYC -----signature----- I agree with RJ Officially Idri's Muse
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Jaya Solo Registered: Jul '99	Date Posted: 8/17/04 11:58am Subject: RE: Dark Sword Author Replies up! (Post Star By Star AU Dark Jaina fic Jag/Kyp/Jacen/Vergere)
	Yeah, I agree, I hope that Jacen doesn't almost marry Isolder! -----signature----- Padawans: DreamingIce, LostJedi26 Restoring Order: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/24000645 Green Eyes 4: http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=24195159 Palpatine's Blog: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/25399668
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NYCitygurl Title: Manager of SFFBC, C&G, NSWFF, and Icons Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 8/17/04 1:06pm Subject: RE: Dark Sword Author Replies up! (Post Star By Star AU Dark Jaina fic Jag/Kyp/Jacen/Vergere)
	LOL, that would be really funny!! NYC -----signature----- I agree with RJ Officially Idri's Muse
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Sara_Kenobi Registered: Sep '00	Date Posted: 8/18/04 9:16am Subject: RE: Dark Sword Author Replies up! (Post Star By Star AU Dark Jaina fic Jag/Kyp/Jacen/Vergere)
	That'd be different! -----signature----- Flight of Raven's http://boards.theforce.net/non_star_wars_fan_fiction/b10808/30284518/p1/?0
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green_eyes Registered: Apr '04	Date Posted: 8/18/04 10:35am Subject: RE: Dark Sword Author Replies up! (Post Star By Star AU Dark Jaina fic Jag/Kyp/Jacen/Vergere)
	Great idea. Jacen is left behind and Jaina is taken by Vergere and thought dead. Very good! I can't wait to see where this goes. green_eyes
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Jaina_Solo_15 Registered: Dec '02	Date Posted: 8/18/04 12:30pm Subject: RE: Dark Sword Author Replies up! (Post Star By Star AU Dark Jaina fic Jag/Kyp/Jacen/Vergere)
	Yeah, I agree, I hope that Jacen doesn't almost marry Isolder! ROFL! I'll let you write that one, Jaya. -----signature----- Proud Dark Lady of the DLC
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Jaya Solo Registered: Jul '99	Date Posted: 8/20/04 9:49am Subject: RE: Dark Sword Author Replies up! (Post Star By Star AU Dark Jaina fic Jag/Kyp/Jacen/Vergere)
	I will if you don't want a serious story. -----signature----- Padawans: DreamingIce, LostJedi26 Restoring Order: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/24000645 Green Eyes 4: http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=24195159 Palpatine's Blog: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/25399668
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Jaina_Solo_15 Registered: Dec '02	Date Posted: 8/20/04 10:22am Subject: RE: Dark Sword Author Replies up! (Post Star By Star AU Dark Jaina fic Jag/Kyp/Jacen/Vergere)
	I really wasn't expecting it to be a serious story, but I wouldn't mind seeing you write it. -----signature----- Proud Dark Lady of the DLC
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NYCitygurl Title: Manager of SFFBC, C&G, NSWFF, and Icons Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 8/20/04 3:07pm Subject: RE: Dark Sword Author Replies up! (Post Star By Star AU Dark Jaina fic Jag/Kyp/Jacen/Vergere)
	I wouldn't mind seeing you write it. LOL, I wouldn't either. NYC -----signature----- I agree with RJ Officially Idri's Muse
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