Author Topic: The Sith Resurrection- my first fan fiction-Post NJO- S/S ,angst, (FINAL POST UP!)
Meredith_Kenobi 
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Date Posted: 7/28/05 4:39pm Subject: The Sith Resurrection- my first fan fiction-Post NJO- S/S ,angst, (FINAL POST UP!) - Date Edited: 9/2/05 6:24pm (24 edits total) Edited By: Meredith_Kenobi
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The Maw Cluster was an enormous cluster of black holes, shaped themselves like a giant hurricane out in the giant sea of space, complete with an eye of calm right at its center. No one knew how it had formed, and scientists had pondered the subject for years. All of the black holes sucking in everything around them made the Maw nearly impossible to navigate. Unless you're a Jedi, that is.

Ben Skywalker’s hands seemed to float over the controls of his father's X-wing as he piloted it between the deadly holes. While he wasn’t quite a Jedi yet, at only nine years old he could fly a ship better even than some of the most seasoned pilots.

At the moment none of this mattered to R2-D2, who gave a squeal of fear at a particularly sharp turn. He was not enjoying Ben's little joyride at all.

Ben swerved out of the grips of a black hole, and risked a look behind him at the little droid nestled safely in the droid socket of the worn star fighter. "What's the matter Artoo? Are you scared?”

Artoo gave another squeal, obviously telling Ben to watch where he was going.

"Whoa!" Ben cried, steering around a small, but deadly black hole. He glanced at the translator on the ship’s screen. "You want to go back, huh?”

Artoo whistled a hurried confirmation before Ben could get distracted.

“Okay, okay. We'll go back." Ben relented, giving a loud whoop of joy as he made a particularly steep dive. He reluctantly turned the ship around and began to make his way back towards Eclipse.

Eclipse was a space station nestled right in the middle of the Maw Cluster’s eye. The Jedi base served as a retreat for all of the Jedi not currently on a mission, or who were just in need of a break.

The silver sliver that was Eclipse slowly grew back to a full size space station as the X-wing approached the Jedi base at full speed.

"I don't think anyone noticed we were gone. " Ben said, relief clear in his voice. Peering out the cockpit at the docking bay, he suddenly realized he had spoken too soon. Standing in the docking bay with her arms crossed, was a woman with long red-gold hair. Even at this distance, he could see his mother's brilliant jade eyes flashing with worry and anger.

"Oh, now I've really done it." Ben groaned. He slowed the fighter and began the landing cycle. After the ship had come to a complete stop and had cooled down, Ben popped the cockpit, and jumped out of the ship. Using the Force to soften his landing, he jumped out of the ship and onto the ferrocrete below. Artoo used his jet boosters to blast out of the droid socket, to simultaneously land beside him.

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Mara Jade Skywalker stood next to a giant Mon Calamarian space cruiser as she waited patiently for her young son to make his way over to where she was standing. Ben's head was drooped, his unruly, sandy hair covering his face as he sheepishly shuffled his feet, taking as long as he possibly could to reach her. R2-D2, who had taken to following Ben around everywhere he went like a faithful dog, was trailing close behind him managing to look distressed.

Why was her young son always getting into trouble? Mara wondered. He had no regard whatsoever for the rules, and was always disobeying them. Especially when it came to flying out into the Maw Cluster, a forbidden pastime that he absolutely loved to do and would do anything in his power to accomplish.

"How was your trip to Coruscant?" Ben asked with false cheer when he finally reached her.

"Don’t even start." Mara scolded. "You don’t care a bit about how my trip went. You’re obviously just trying to delay punishment, but that’s not going to work. You have been told a thousand times not to fly into the Cluster, and yet you still do it, no how matter how many times you are punished. You could have died Ben, do you realize that?”

"I'm sorry. "Ben said quietly, lowering his head in shame.

While Mara could be sympathetic, she knew his shame would be only temporary, especially when it came to getting what he wanted. Mara crouched down so that they were at eye level, and looked at Ben straight in the eyes. "I love you Ben," she told him brushing his blonde hair away from his jade green eyes, so much like her own. "I don't want to lose you."

"I love you too, Mom." Ben told her, giving her a hug.

"Then why do you disobey me?” Mara asked, “Why do you fly into the Maw time and time again? Why do you make me punish you?”

“I don’t know…I—“

“I know, I know. You love flying.” Mara cut him off. She stood up, and took his hand in hers. “Come on, let’s go find your father and sister. They’re waiting for us.”




 

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Date Posted: 7/28/05 4:46pm Subject: RE: The Sith Ressurection: my first fanfiction- Post NJO S/S and others
Do you like it so far? Please tell me what you think. wink batting grin

 

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Date Posted: 7/29/05 3:03pm Subject: RE: The Sith Ressurection: my first fanfiction- Post NJO S/S and others
That's . . . sweet . . . of Mara. But true. She wouldn't want to lose her only child.

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Date Posted: 7/29/05 3:09pm Subject: RE: The Sith Ressurection: my first fanfiction- Post NJO S/S and others
Cute begining!
So Mara and Luke have a daughter too...I like it. Cant wait to see how your fic progresses!

 

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Date Posted: 7/29/05 5:36pm Subject: RE: The Sith Ressurection: my first fanfiction- Post NJO S/S and others
Thanks for you replies, I am glad you like it so far. hugs

 

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Date Posted: 7/29/05 6:41pm Subject: RE: The Sith Ressurection: my first fanfiction- Post NJO S/S and others - Date Edited: 8/17/05 6:18pm (5 edits total) Edited By: Meredith_Kenobi
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Han Solo and his wife Leia Organa Solo sat quietly in the back of a grimy, well used, air taxi as its driver guided it through the clogged skies of Coruscant. It had been nearly eight years since the Yuuzhan Vhong had been defeated, yet Coruscant had only just begun to look like it had before the invasion. Once again the entire planet was covered in massive buildings made of various materials, housing millions of sentient beings.
All of which, it seemed to Han, were trying to go the same direction he was, all at once. That was one bad thing about having an entire planet be a city. It accounted for an incredible amount of traffic.

At long last, the taxi pulled up to one of the buildings' large landing platforms. While Leia payed the driver his ridiculously high fare, Han began to make his way towards the towering buildings' entrance at the end of the platform.

"I hate taxis." Han remarked when Leia caught up with him.

"I know." Leia said smiling up at him, "But at such short notice I didn't have enough time to rent a speeder."

Han looked down at his wife watching her auburn hair, which she had taken to leaving down, as it flowed in the gusty Coruscant breeze. She was wearing a simple white dress much like the one she had been wearing when he had met her on the Death Star all those years ago. She still looked just as beautiful as she had then.

"That’s okay, Sweetie." Han assured her. Leia again smiled up at him, her deep brown eyes sparkling. Han smiled back contentedly. Ever since the death of their son Anakin nearly nine years ago, Leia hadn’t been smiling much; this trip to Coruscant, seeing it almost like it had always been, seemed to be cheering her up.

As they reached the entrance to the building, a greeting droid opened the door for them and ushered them inside. "Greetings. My name is JFN-NA 5. May I be of assistance?”

"Yes, actually." Leia said politely. "Could you give me and my husband the directions to General Garm Bel Iblis's apartment? My name is Leia Organa Solo, and this is my husband Han Solo. We have an appointment."

The droid paused, making a show of searching his databanks for their names. “Right this way please.”

Hand in hand Han and Leia followed the droid down a maze of red-carpeted hallways, twists, and turns before finally reaching General Iblis's apartment. Leia thanked the droid for his assistance; she then pushed the button near the door that would send a series of beeps throughout the apartment warning anyone inside that there was someone there.


The door swished open revealing General Garm Bel Iblis smiling widely. "Ah, Han, Leia, you've arrived! Come in, come in, make yourselves at home. Would you like some refreshments?"

"No, thank you." Leia declined, following the General into the living quarters. The apartment, while simple, was really quite beautiful. The walls were a soothing pale green and had numerous, white-rimmed windows, revealing a grand view of Coruscant far below. The furniture, which came in various shades of gray, was sitting on a beautiful wood floor, which looked to be made of shyyyk maple.

"I trust your family is well?" Garm asked, sitting down in a chair.

"Quite well." Leia assured him. She sat down on a couch next to Han, across from General Iblis.

The General paused, seeming to gather himself. “I'm not one for small talk so I'll get staraight to the point.” After taking a deep breath, he continued. “New Republic Intelligence has cracked a code they have long been working on. Using that code they have uncovered a holomessage, which I think you will find is quite interesting. And disturbing. He took a datacard from his pocket and inserted it in a nearby datapad.

A deep gravelly voice immediately filled the room emanating from the datapad. Leia gasped and covered her mouth recognizing the voice right away. It was the sinister voice of Emperor Palpatine.

"Admiral Bane," the voice began, “the time has come. You are to go to the clone facility on Naboo and begin a clone from sample 312 immediately. That clone is to have full access to all of my personal files, at all times. Once that clone has reached full maturity you are to make as many clones as possible from clone sample 212. You and one squadron of stormtroopers are to stay in isolation with these clones for as long as possible. Speak of this to no one. If you do, the consequences will be more terrible than you can possibly imagine." The message ended.

“Naboo, huh?” Han said. “I’ve never heard of it. Where is it?”

“That’s exactly what I said.” General Iblis remarked. “I’d never heard of it either. That’s because Palpatine did everything in his power to erase it from as many of the files he could get his hands on. The NRI did some digging, and finally uncovered a document with Naboo’s coordinates in Palpatine’s personal files.”

“So when was this message sent?”

“It was estimated to have been sent around fifty years ago.”

Leia, who had been sitting on the couch in shock up till then, finally got up the gumption to speak. “Who were the cloning samples from?” she asked in an almost inaudible whisper.

General Iblis shifted in his seat uncomfortably. "Yeah, this is where it gets really interesting. We did some digging, and it turns out that sample 312 was from the Emperor himself."

"And sample 212?" Leia asked, though she thought she already knew...

The General cleared his throat nervously. "That was from…ahem..Anakin Skywalker."

Han quickly glanced at Leia to see how she was taking this new information, then asked one of the many questions swarming through his mind. "Why did you show this to us? I mean, shouldn’t you have told Luke or one of the other Jedi? This is more of their kettle of soup, I would say.”

"Actually I did try to get a hold of Master Skywalker, but no one seems to know where he is…I was hoping you could take this to him."

"In other words," Leia said, accepting the datachip, "You want my family to save the galaxy. Again."

The General shrugged helplessly, giving an apologetic smile. “I’m sorry Leia, I didn’t know who else to turn to.”
"I've got a bad feeling about this.” Han remarked grimly, shaking his head.



 

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Date Posted: 7/30/05 3:38pm Subject: RE: The Sith Ressurection: my first fanfiction- Post NJO S/S and others
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Pretty Good. You got me interested! wink

 

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Date Posted: 7/30/05 4:49pm Subject: RE: The Sith Ressurection: my first fanfiction- Post NJO S/S and others - Date Edited: 7/30/05 4:52pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Meredith_Kenobi

Keela_Underwail posted:
Pretty good,got me interested
-Thanks! cool

 

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Date Posted: 7/30/05 7:07pm Subject: RE: The Sith Ressurection: my first fanfiction- Post NJO S/S and others
Cool idea ... you've got me interested too!

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Date Posted: 7/31/05 5:28pm Subject: RE: The Sith Ressurection: my first fanfiction- Post NJO S/S and others

oldjedinurse posted:
cool idea...you've got me interested too


Thank you, I try. happy

 

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Date Posted: 7/31/05 6:49pm Subject: RE: The Sith Ressurection: my first fanfiction- Post NJO S/S and others(updated 7/31) - Date Edited: 7/31/05 6:53pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Meredith_Kenobi
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Luke Skywalker sat at the kitchen table in his apartment on the Eclipse.He had come to the Jedi base to try and spend a few days alone with his family.Away from politics and passive-aggressive senators.Away from all of the problems in the galaxy...evidently that was too much to ask for.Luke answered the urgent message from his sister Leia, confirming that she could indeed come speek with him about "a very pressing and serious matter".

Luke sighed, and looked down at his daughter Allana who was sprawled out on the floor humming a nonsense-tune while she drew a picture. Allana's red-gold hair, so much like her mother's, was in two buns one on each side of her head. But with her big brown eyes, she looked more like a five-year old Leia. For a moment, Luke briefly wished he was five-years old again-when all he had had to worry about was whether he had cleaned the sand off of the moisture vaporators good enough.

"Daddy," Allana said breaking Luke out of his thoughts."was Darth Vader my Grandfather?"

"What?!" Luke exclaimed,"Who told you that?" He had been dreading the day when he would have to have this particular conversation with his daughter. Ben had asked the same exact question only two years ago, and that had been bad enough.

"No one told me.I figured it out myself.Yesterday when you were showing me pictures of my cousin Anakin, you said he was named after my grandfather.And today Tionne sang all of us children a song about how Anakin Skywalker had turned to the Dark Side,but then right before he died he turned back."

"But you never listen to Tionne's ballads.Why did you have to listen to that one?"

"I dunno."

Luke sighed, and motioned for Allana to climb onto his lap. "No Ali, Darth Vader was not your grandfather.Anakin Skywalker was."

"But...are'nt they the same person though?"

"Well yeah, but when Anakin became Darth Vader he was no longer Anakin Skywalker."

"Ohhh...."Luke could tell she didn't really understand.Suddenly Allana perked up sensing the presence of both Mara and Ben as they approached the apartment.

"Mommy!" Allana cried, jumping off of Luke's lap and running to the doorway.Luke let her go, glad that he didn't have to finish their previous conversation.

"Hello, Ali," Luke heard his wife say in the living quarters. He looked up to see his wife, two children and Artoo enter the kitchen. Allana was the only one who looked happy. Mara's eyes were glinting with anger, Ben was hanging his head dejectedly. Artoo crossed the kitchen floor and rolled into the adjoining hallway as fast as his little wheels would take him,trying to escape Mara's piercing glare.

"What's going on?" Luke asked, though he thought he already knew.

"Your son flew your X-wing into the Maw Cluster.Again."

"Ben." Luke groaned. Ever since Ben had found out he had a gift for flying, Luke and Mara practically had to keep him on a leash to stop him from flying.

"Doorbell!" Allana suddenly cried out, five seconds before the actual doorbell. A strange drawback from having Force-sensitive children.

"Who could that be?" Mara asked, temporarily distracted.

"Han and Leia." Luke informed her. "They said they had something important to discuss."

"Great. Ben, go answer the door."

Ben took off as fast as he could. "Me too,me too!" Allana exclaimed, running closely behind him.

Mara sat on a chair next to Luke, and rested her head on his shoulder."There's some crisis isnt't there? Some life-threatening scheme that will have you flitting around the galaxy trying to save everyone."

"Most likely."

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The moment Ben keyed the door, Allana was hugging Han's squealing with delight."Uncle Han!"

"How's my fovourite niece?"Han asked her, picking her up and swirling her around in a circle.

"I'm your only niece." Allana giggled.

"Well... that's true." Han admitted, ruffling Bens hair fondly and following Leia into the kitchen.

"Wanna see my picture?" Allana asked as Han and Leia joined Luke and Mara at the table.

"Course I do." Han said. Alanna scrambled over to where she had been drawing, and picked her picture up off of the floor.Han accepted the picture from her outstretched hand's, and began to examine it. For only five-years old, Allana was a very good artist.It was a picture of an older man who looked to be about fifty or sixty. He appeared to be standing out in space gesturing to a lare planet in the foreground.Hanging from his belt was a lightsaber.

"Who is it?" Han asked Allana.

"That's Qui-Gon Jinn." She answered as if it were the most obvious thing in the galaxy.

"Who's that?"

"The man from my dream,silly."

"Oh the man from your dream." Han handed the picture to Luke."Here, must be one of those Jedi things."

"Why's he standing in front of that planet?" Luke asked Allana.

"Because,that' where he wants me to go.He wants me to go to Naboo and save Anakin Skywalker. That's why I asked you about him."Allana answered brightly.

Han stiffened at the casual mention of both Naboo and Anakin, and Leia gasped.

"Ben, Ali,run along and play,okay?"Mara ordered them, seeing Han and Leia's reactions.

Grumbling, Ben grabbed Allana's hand and pulled her out of the room.

"What's going on?"Mara demanded' after the two children had left.

Leia showed them the datachip, and related all of the events that had taken place at General Garm Bel Iblis's apartment.

"Ali's picture!" Mara gasped. "The man in her dream told her to go to Naboo, and save Anakin Skywalker."

"Yeah." Luke said, obviously still in shock. Han figured he would be pretty shocked too if he had just found out there were little clones of his father rinning around somewhere. "When was the message sent,again?" Luke asked Leia.

"They estimated it was sent about fifty years ago."

"So...are you gonna hold one of those Jedi meetings or something?"

"Good idea,Han." Mara bsaid, beginning to rise from her chair."I'll go alert-"

"No. Luke said, cutting her off."If we hold a meeting, this will eventually get out.Millions of outraged beings will flock to Naboo with murder on their minds."

"Luke-"

"No.No he's right." Leia agreed."If we held a meeting, no matter how secret, this would get out.Naboo is a peaceful planet;its government would'nt be able to deal with such a crisis."

Defeated, Mara sank back into her chair."Well...what are we supposed to do then?Charge on down to Naboo and deal with this ourselves somehow?"

"That is exactly what we are going to do."

 

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Date Posted: 8/1/05 5:53pm Subject: RE: The Sith Ressurection- Post NJO --S/S--angst- Please Read! (updated 8/01) - Date Edited: 8/18/05 6:21pm (4 edits total) Edited By: Meredith_Kenobi
no replies? cry oh well...

Jaina, her husband Jagged Fel, and their daughter Sierra arrived at the Skywalker's apartment later that day closely followed by Jaina's twin brother Jacen, his wife Tenel-ka, and their five-year old sons Adrian and Julian who were identical twins.

"Grandpa!" The three children cried trying to be the first one to reach him. For some reason children absolutely adored Han Solo.

"Hey, kiddos!" Han laughed, trying to hug all three jumping children at once. "Go say hi to your grandma, then run along and play, 'kay?"

The three children gave Leia a hug, a bit less enthusiastically but no less lovingly, and began to leave the living quarters where everyone was sitting. Only Sierra managed to leave the room successfully, however. The twins were attacked by a red blur, which was squealing with delight.

"Adrian, Julian!" Allana screeched. "When did you get here?"

The three five-year olds, inseparable when together, were often mistook for triplets as the twins had inherited their mother's red hair, and their father's brown eyes making them look much like Allana.

"Come on." Allana urged the twins taking each of them by an arm and pulling them out of the room. "I want to show you something." As the three children left, no one noticed Artoo skulk into the room and hide behind a sofa.

"What's going on?" Jaina demanded, her brown eyes glinting with suspicion. Mara could tell that Jaina knew there was something serious going on.

For the second time that day Leia played the datachip, and related everything General Iblis had told her.

Tenel-ka was the first person to break the long silence that ensued. "So...what are we supposed to do about this?"

"Well," Leia began, "Han, Luke, Mara, and I were planning to go to Naboo to find the cloning facility. We were hoping you four would come with us."

"What!?" Jag exploded. "You've got to be insane! Wer’e talking about Palpatine and Vader here. Palpatine and lots of Vaders. Heck,we don't even know how many Vaders!"

"Actually I think we do." Leia interjected calmly. "I did some research on the flight over here, and found out that a standard Imperial cloning sample would make up to nine clones."

"Oh. Okay. Great. Wonderful .One crazy Palpatine and nine Vaders. Sure. We can deal with this. Piece of cake!"

"No I agree with Mom." Jacen said. "Count me in."

"Count me in also." Tenel-ka added.


"You people are suicidal! You'd have to be crazy to go through with this!" Jag said, his face was one of complete astonishment.

"That is exactly why we’re going through with this. We’re the only ones crazy enough to do it." Han said, giving a famous lop-sided Solo grin.

"But...how are you even going to find this cloning thing?" Jag asked. “You wont even know where to start."

"The Force will guide us." Jacen said, to which Jag rolled his eyes.

Mara glanced over at Luke and Leia to see the two of them staring at the table glumly, not even seeming to be listening to the conversation going on heatedly before them. It suddenly hit her what their problem was. Darth Vader was their father. Leia had never really gotten past that fact, and didn't want to face it. Luke had gotten past that fact, and had actually had to duel with his father twice. The first time resulting in the loss of his hand, the second resulting in the loss of his father. He didn't want to have to do it again. Luke had also faced a clone af Palpatine. That hadn’t ended well either. He had turned to the Dark Side.

"You know what, maybe this isn't such a good idea." Mara burst out. She wasn’t exactly keen
on the idea of facing the form of her reincarnated Master, Palpatine, herself.

"No, see we have to do it." Han insisted.

"Why?"

"Because I believe we are the only ones who can. First of all, the only other people who know about this are the New Republic Intelligence guys and they pushed this off on us. And besides, Leia said we can't tell anyone else. Second of all--I don't know-- I've just got this feeling it's got to be us." Han finished, looking slightly embarrassed.

"So when do we leave?" Jag asked.

No one noticed Artoo scurry out of the room in the direction of the room the five children were currently playing in.


 

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I'm still with you. Pretty interesting so far. Would like to read more.

 

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Date Posted: 8/4/05 7:37pm Subject: RE: The Sith Ressurection- my first fan fiction-Post NJO- S/S ,angst, (updated 8/1) - Date Edited: 8/18/05 6:24pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Meredith_Kenobi

"Did you get everything? "Ben urged Artoo, closing the door quietly behind the little droid.

Artoo bleeped a confirmation, assuring Ben that he had gotten everything of importance that the adults had talked about.

"Excellent." Ben pressed the button on Artoo's dome that would begin the message he had recorded. The moment Sierra had rushed into Ben's bedroom telling him how her parents had been summoned, Ben had sent Artoo to record what the grown-ups were talking about. He knew they would be talking about something interesting; something he wouldn’t find out about otherwise. He was not disappointed.

After the message had ended Sierra and Ben just sat there stunned.

"I don't get it." Julian said bluntly. Adrian and Allana nodded their heads in agreement.

"Nope."

"Me neither."

Ben rolled his eyes in disgust, but luckily Sierra had more patience. "Well," she began, "You know who Emperor Palpatine was, right?"

The three younger children nodded their heads in agreement. Encouraged, Sierra continued. "Okay, well this man has made one clone of himself and nine clones of a man named Anakin Skywalker."

"What's a clone?" Adrian asked, tilting his head to one side.

"A clone is a person who is made from someone else’s DNA, and they look exactly like the person they are made from. "Ben tried to explain.

Perplexed, Allana glanced over at Adrian and Julian. "So...are they clones then?"

"No!" Ben groaned in exasperation, "A clone doesn’t have a mother or father, see."

“Oh...." It was obvious they still didn’t understand.

Ben decided to ignore their confusion. "We have to go to Naboo with them." he said excitedly.

"Okay, I'll go ask if we con go with them." Allana said. She jumped up and ran to the door.

"No! They can't know we know where they're going, 'cause it’s going to be dangerous and they aren’t going to let us go. We have to go with them without them knowing. Besides, you three are too little. Only me and Sierra are going."

"But that's not fair!" The three younger children protested.

"Yeah? Well life's not fair .Now here's the plan...




 

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Date Posted: 8/5/05 12:33pm Subject: RE: The Sith Ressurection- my first fan fiction-Post NJO- S/S ,angst, (updated 8/1)
Nice work Meredith_Kenobi happy ! I'm really looking forward reading some more!

 

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