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A Christmas Carol – Star Wars Style (K/J post NJO - completed)
Anastasia_Fel
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Sep '04
Date Posted:
12/11/04 8:45pm
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RE: A Christmas Carol – Star Wars Style (K/J Post NJO -posted 12/10; Review up)
So anyone else who wants to guess who the three ghosts will be?
Sam, please don’t give them ideas!
Ohh but Maggy, I wouldn't give away too much
Your secret is safe with me.
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Maggy
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Date Posted:
12/12/04 12:38pm
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RE: A Christmas Carol – Star Wars Style (K/J Post NJO -posted 12/10; Review up)
I know honey!
Post should up in the next hours
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Maggy
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Date Posted:
12/12/04 1:04pm
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RE: A Christmas Carol – Star Wars Style (K/J Post NJO -posted 12/10; Review up)
Barefoot here you have your first ghost and he is...
*drum roll*
... read yourself *lol*
Visiting Christmases of the Past
First Part
At midnight Kyp found himself awakened by someone pulling on his robe. The Jedi Master opened the eyes to look for the offending object...
“Miko?”
The younger man smiled at him. “Hello Kyp.”
“Miko?” he asked again unbelievingly. Tiered, he rubbed his eyes. Two dead friends, family members visiting him in one night. He really needed to stop drinking so much before he went to sleep, he was having very disturbing dreams.
“What are you doing here?”
His first apprentice took his hand and pulled him from the chair. “Come Kyp. I’m here to show you some of your past Christmases. Don’t be afraid.”
“Past Christmases? What are you talking about?” Kyp questioned with a raised eyebrow.
“Don’t ask so much! Come my friend we don’t have much time and there is so much for you to see and remember.” The younger man pulled his old master through the door but instead of the corridor Kyp found himself standing in his old family living room.
Under a decorated tree sat two children. Kyp recognized them as himself at five years old and his older brother Zeth. Both were wide eyed and staring at the brightly decorated pine tree. Behind them sat their parents, and together the family was singing Christmas carols.
“That's Mum, Dad and Zeth. What are you doing to me Miko?” the aging Jedi Master asked toward his former apprentice.
“I have done nothing. That is all you. I take that this was the last Christmas you spent with your family?”
“Yes it is,” he whispered and turned to watch the scene before him again.
When the song was finished, Mrs. Durron gathered Kyp into her arms and hugged him. Kyp slang his tiny hands around her neck and returned the hug.
“Merry Christmas, Kyp. Love you.”
“Merry Christmas to you too mummy and I love you too,” Kyp replied, reaching up to kiss his mothers cheek. He beamed at her and hugged her again. His mother let go of him and he run into his fathers arms.
“Marry Christmas daddy.”
“Marry Christmas, Kyppie,” his father hugged him too. Then the young boy looked at his older brother. He grinned mischievously.
“Marry Christmas bro.”
Zeth gazed at his `baby brother´. “Wish you the same.” He stepped toward him and tussled his hair, getting a yell from the young boy.
Kyp had cherished this memory for the last 30 years. It was the last time his parents had told him that they love him. It was the only Christmas he could really remember with them. One month later his parents had been killed and he landed in the mines of Kessel.
“Kids blow the candles out than you can open your presents,” their father said. They nodded and did as ordered. When they had finished they sat again on the floor and searched for their presents.
They both unwrapped their gifts and grinned mischievously. They threw the torn wrapping paper at each other and shrieked when they themselves were hit.
Sitting on the couch, the two parents watched with a smile as their two children played happily, fully into the Christmas spirit.
Kyp felt a cold touch on his arm. He looked down and saw Mikos arm resting on his arm.
“It is time to go. I have other things to show you.”
Before he could question his long gone apprentice about his meaning, Kyp found himself on the top of the old temple on Yavin. One the edge of the roof he spotted a light haired young girl. Besides her was a young dark haired man sitting.
“Deirdre...”
Miko looked at his bitter master with a slight bit of amusement in his eyes. “Yes Kyp that is her, Deirdre Clya. And when I was told, if it was correct, the two of you are going to confess your love for one another. When was that?”
“It was in my first year here. After Exar Kun's evil. After Carida's destruction, at Christmas,” Kyp answered sadly.
He walked closer toward the couple. Miko was right; a 16-year-old Kyp Durron was about to tell a good looking girl that he was in love with her. That particular Christmas was the best after his parents were killed. Deirdre had been helping him with his healing abilities and he helped her with levitation, they had become close friends over the months, and Kyp had just realized that he wanted more from their relationship than just normal friendship, he wanted love.
End First Part
in the next post will be some mush and romantic
the bet with Miko you won Barefoot *lol*
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RedGold
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12/12/04 3:09pm
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RE: A Christmas Carol – Star Wars Style (K/J Post NJO -Part 2 up)
That was cool Maggy!
I feel sorry for Kyp in some ways. Poor guy gets his life turned upside down and all. No wonder he turns in a scrooge. You really picked the right character for this!
More. Now. I demand it.
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Maggy
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Date Posted:
12/12/04 3:11pm
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RE: A Christmas Carol – Star Wars Style (K/J Post NJO -Part 2 up)
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Hello Red!
Thank you! I couldn't think of someone better than Kyp *lol*
Tomorrow will be the next part up
promise
Mag
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DantanaSkywalker
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12/12/04 4:51pm
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RE: A Christmas Carol – Star Wars Style (K/J Post NJO -Part 2 up)
Very cute.
I love stories that show Kyp interacting with his family.
However, Kyp was eight when he and his parents went to Kessel, and his parents died when he was nine.
Dana
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Congrats, babe. Hope you're still laughing, wherever you are.
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Smuggler_Shidakis
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12/12/04 5:03pm
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RE: A Christmas Carol – Star Wars Style (K/J Post NJO -Part 2 up)
^^ Dana beat me to pointing that out.
Scroogy Kyp... I'm having so much fun with him... Cute childhood memories!
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Jesina_Dreis
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12/12/04 5:17pm
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RE: A Christmas Carol – Star Wars Style (K/J Post NJO -Part 2 up)
I have to study, Mag, but I wanted to let you know I thought this was cute. Looking forward to more Kyp/Jaina.
Jes
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Anastasia_Fel
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12/12/04 9:24pm
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RE: A Christmas Carol – Star Wars Style (K/J Post NJO -Part 2 up)
He walked closer toward the couple. Miko was right; a 16-year-old Kyp Durron was about to tell a good looking girl that he was in love with her. That particular Christmas was the best after his parents were killed. Deirdre had been helping him with his healing abilities and he helped her with levitation, they had become close friends over the months, and Kyp had just realized that he wanted more from their relationship than just normal friendship, he wanted love.
He He, Kyppie is finally waking up to himself, at 16 mind you
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Maggy
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Date Posted:
12/13/04 11:20am
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RE: A Christmas Carol – Star Wars Style (K/J Post NJO -Part 2 up)
Thank you all for reading!
Dana
Very cute.
Glad you like it
However, Kyp was eight when he and his parents went to Kessel, and his parents died when he was nine.
Thanks for pointing that out. I didn’t found it in the books so I picked an age. I should have checked more carefully. I hope you all don’t mind.
Sorry for that slip
Okay I have other things in this story that will probably not suit with the book history from Kyp and Jaina. I hope you all don’t mind and keep reading.
Smuggler_Shidakis
Scroogy Kyp... I'm having so much fun with him...
*lol*
I had fun writing them (and had help from Sam
, my beta)
Cute childhood memories!
thanks
Jes
I have to study, Mag, but I wanted to let you know I thought this was cute. Looking forward to more Kyp/Jaina.
Good luck with your study
More Kyp/Jaina will come in the next chapters not quite the next but it will come
Sam
He He, Kyppie is finally waking up to himself, at 16 mind you
*lol*
Mag
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JainaDurron
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12/13/04 12:13pm
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Wonderful post.
~~Jilly
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Missed post! *blushes* This is so cute, Mag!
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Maggy
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12/13/04 12:28pm
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Thank you, Jilly
Sarah don't worry!
Check later again. I will post in some time the next part
Mag
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Maggy
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12/13/04 1:04pm
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RE: A Christmas Carol – Star Wars Style (K/J post NJO - Part 3 is up) 12/13
Hello everybody! A new post!
That will be AU. I don’t know who his first love was in the books so I created one.
Reminder from the last post:
He walked closer toward the couple. Miko was right; a 16-year-old Kyp Durron was about to tell a good looking girl that he was in love with her. That particular Christmas was the best after his parents were killed. Deirdre had been helping him with his healing abilities and he helped her with levitation, they had become close friends over the months, and Kyp had just realized that he wanted more from their relationship than just normal friendship, he wanted love.
and so it continues ...
oOoOoOo
Second Part
Kyp had brought her to the top of the Massassi temple, his sacred place. He had blindfolded her and led her up there the long way round, so as she wouldn't realize where their destination was. When he reached the edge of the roof he took the silken scarf from her eyes.
She gasped. Beyond them were ever green woods and a crystal clear river nearby. It looked so serene and beautiful.
“Kyp,” she said turning toward him, a smile on her lips.
“Merry Christmas, Deirdre," the soft voice spoke as he handed her a wrapped box. She took it from his hands and brushed his fingers, sending shivers down his spine.
“Thank you.” Carefully she unwrapped the box and opened it. In there was a chain with a heard shaped pendant. Deirdre gasped at the sight of the beautiful present. A small tear escaped her grey-green eyes and Kyp reached up to wipe it away. He locked his eyes with hers and took a deep breath.
”Deirdre, I have wanting...”
“I have a gift for you too,” she interrupted him bluntly.
Kyp blinked in surprise when suddenly a wrapped box appeared in her hands. He stared at it then looked on her face. Her cheeks had reddened in a blush. He forced a smile on his lips and took the present form her.
“Thank you,” he replied whilst quickly tearing the paper away and the young woman giggled at the sight of him. He looked like an overgrown child.
The older Kyp felt his heart ache when he saw her giggle. Her laugh was the loveliest sound he had ever known. Even after ... He didn't get to finish the thought as the younger Kyp moved again.
The teenage Kyp opened the box. Inside was a clasp with the initials `KD´ engraved. She took it form his hands, again causing shivers to run down his spine and clasped it on his cape.
“I though it would suit you, and I must say it does,” she smiled shyly at him.
“I – I think I have fallen in love with you, Deirdre.” Kyp blurted out as though the words were dying to escape.
The young woman gasped and another tear escaped her eyes.
"I think, I think I love you too, Kyp.”
She loved him too. Kyp felt so elated, it was as though his wildest dream had come true, which it had. He did the only thing he could think of and grazed her lips for a kiss. He pulled slightly away again and searched her eyes. Then their lips met again and again...
The aging Jedi Master felt himself being pulled away form the scene before him. His heart was aching. All he wanted to do was watch for a little longer, to see his first love happy.
“Kyp we need to go. There are other things to see.” Miko said and pulled at Kyp's robe again. Finally, scene before him faded until he could barely see the passionately kissing couple as they made out. Kyp's eyes shot closed for a moment and when he opened them again, he found himself in his old rooms.
His 17-year-old self was sitting on the cold stone floor, a tear stained piece of paper in his hand.
The older one could recite every single word that was written on it, he would, no could never forget them.
Dear Kyp,
I hope you are well. Everything is so new and wonderful. My Master is so kind toward me and last month we settled down in a city.
I miss you. Not only because it is Christmas. I miss our conversation. I miss our practice.
I think only we aren’t’ together anymore doesn’t mean we can’t talk. I have wanted that for a long time now.
Kyp there is something I have to tell you. I have fallen in love again. He is so sweet and reminds me on you. He is so smart and handsome.
I still love you and I am sorry that we didn’t work out between us. I hope that you can find it in your heart to forgive me, as well as let us still be friends.
Someday you will find the happiness you deserve, and love another who deserves you more than I ever did.
Merry Christmas
Deirdre
Kyp looked at his younger self as he crumpled the letter and threw it into a near by fire, watching as the paper curled up and burnt.
He had been hurt terribly again. First, he had lost his parents and brother, and then Deirdre had broken his heart. He wouldn’t want to feel something like that again. Never.
“How much I loathe that holiday. All it ever does is hurt me,” the Jedi Master whispered.
Miko laid his hand lightly on Kyps arm and he shivered under the spirits touch.
“I think you never had the chance to have the right company after your parents died," Miko said thoughtfully with a hint of sympathy in his voice, "Ohh... I'm sorry Kyp, it’s time to go furhter.”
End Second Part
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Mag
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That's one right for me... I had a good feeling about Miko Reglia. Oh... Just a clarification. I said that I thought one of the ghosts would be Anakin
Solo
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