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Deneveon Registered: Jun '02	Date Posted: 3/24/03 12:29am Subject: Flee: A Tahiri Poem
	-- FLEE -- I seek escape I seek a way I try to catch the ghost with his face In the distance, voices No second chances No last dances My footsteps echo in the darkness They disappear into the darkness Slowly they erode in the blackness I cry with tears that are blood red As nightmares play again in my head The movie comes to no end I am prisoner to the past My own fate has been cast On the crimson-stained die of time Forever I will run Forever I will hide From the lingering horrors That are trapped unheeded inside -- --Den
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MadamMidnight Registered: Mar '03	Date Posted: 3/24/03 6:12am Subject: RE: Flee: A Tahiri Poem
	This is good, this is very good! Nice job! -----signature----- Tell me where the party's at
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AERYN_SUN Registered: Apr '01	Date Posted: 3/24/03 7:43am Subject: RE: Flee: A Tahiri Poem
	I cry with tears that are blood red As nightmares play again in my head those are my two favorite lines. good job, dene ~aeryn -----signature----- my livejournal - http://obisgirl.livejournal.com Realm of Attatchment (Obidala and Sabewan Thread) - http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=27453838&brd=10304&start=27455097
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Elfsheen Registered: Feb '03	Date Posted: 4/21/03 7:39am Subject: RE: Flee: A Tahiri Poem
	Wow! This is very good! I never saw this before! Well done! -----signature----- You're the worst hallucination ever!!! I'm not crazy I just have a second consciousness in my brain Double Oh Fang
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Xaara Registered: Jun '02	Date Posted: 5/29/03 1:31pm Subject: RE: Flee: A Tahiri Poem
	Excellent job, Deneveon! I think you've really captured Tahiri in this poem (I find that sometimes her character is actually easier to write in a poem format.) I like how you focused on the fact that Tahiri is desperately trying to run from the Yuuzhan Vong within her, but can't quite escape the effects of her shaping. My favorite lines: No second chances No last dances Those just made me shiver! Great job, and keep up the good work. -----signature----- My Ramblings: http://www.livejournal.com/users/xaara/ My lil bro/sis: Flyboy_7/Wyn_Fel Wyomé, Handmaiden of the Crest
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Arina_Jaylin Registered: Apr '03	Date Posted: 5/29/03 3:40pm Subject: RE: Flee: A Tahiri Poem
	Wow, nice writing. -----signature----- Aprentice to Agent_Jaid If there's a stupid idea, somebody will try it -You might regret what you do, but you'll regret what you don't do so much more. - Bad spellers of the world... UNTIE!!!!
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Deneveon Registered: Jun '02	Date Posted: 7/1/03 11:02pm Subject: RE: Flee: A Tahiri Poem
	Thanks all. --Den
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