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Galactic_Girl Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 2/26/06 6:10pm Subject: RE: Instruments of Destruction - What could have happened if Anakin did not burn on Mustafar. VIG 1 - Date Edited: 2/26/06 6:11pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Galactic_Girl
	I want to applaude you, really I do; but my vision is blury right now from all these tears I am threatening to shed, and my body is numb from the absolute shock of this powerful viggie, so I hope you'll settle for a rose instead. This was absolutely masterful, Anakin_Heartbreaker! I only have one question for you, Do you have a tissue, because I definetely need one after reading this. It was breathtaking, literally. -----signature----- "Our greatest glory is not ever falling, but in getting up everytime we do." - Confucius
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sithhappens6 Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 2/26/06 6:40pm Subject: RE: Instruments of Destruction - What could have happened if Anakin did not burn on Mustafar. VIG 1
	That was so powerful. The last part broke my heart. Well Done. Poor Ani and Obi. -----signature----- "No loose wire jokes"
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ANAKINSBABY Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 2/27/06 12:29pm Subject: RE: Instruments of Destruction - What could have happened if Anakin did not burn on Mustafar. VIG 1
	Obi-wan holding Anakin as he died... And Padme asking about Anakin.....I just can't take it! You have the ability to make me an emotional wreck with just a few words Heartbreaker! -----signature----- Hayden=perfection All power corrupts. Absolute power...is kind of neat.-John Lehman "He's quite clever, you know...for a human being."C3PO
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ChewieSkywalker Registered: Dec '04	Date Posted: 2/27/06 2:38pm Subject: RE: Instruments of Destruction - What could have happened if Anakin did not burn on Mustafar. VIG 1
	I read the title and thought maybe it would turn out differently, if Anakin didn't burn, like if he was saved or didn't get dismembered. I didn't think it would be what if Obi-Wan put Anakin out of commission. Very shocking! Very well written as always. Anakin_Heartbreakeris the master of the fan fiction. -----signature----- Superman is what I can do, Clark is who I am.
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lady_sapphire Registered: Feb '05	Date Posted: 2/28/06 7:53am Subject: RE: Instruments of Destruction - What could have happened if Anakin did not burn on Mustafar. VIG 1
	wow that was very intense and very well written. are you going to post more and if you are, how many posts are there going to be? excellent post as always. thanks for the pm! -----signature----- The Departed (AU) Anakin/Padme/Sabe. http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/22190592/p1/?0 Sanctuary (AU) Anakin/Padme. http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/23355605/r23363712/ Nothing's Broken (AU) Anakin/Padme. http://boards.theforce.net/the_s
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amidalachick Registered: Aug '03	Date Posted: 2/28/06 9:28am Subject: RE: Instruments of Destruction - What could have happened if Anakin did not burn on Mustafar. VIG 1
	Fanfiction stories have left me choked up many times. But only two have made me really, truly cry, and this is one of them. I'm still crying while I type this. The emotions in this piece were so intense and so real. Poor Ani! Poor Obi! Amazing work, Anakin_Heartbreaker. -----signature----- "So I can open my own can of pudding, can I? Shows what you know, Marge!"
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little_miss_jedi Registered: Aug '05	Date Posted: 3/2/06 6:16pm Subject: RE: Instruments of Destruction - What could have happened if Anakin did not burn on Mustafar. VIG 1
	oh my...that was so, so good! Fantastic work! You had be crying. -----signature----- "You power crazed, obnoxious, ludicrous little jerk." Don't Go: http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=28203894&brd=10476&replies=0 Jacen Solo - Forever in the light... :'(
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michaellover Registered: May '05	Date Posted: 3/2/06 6:25pm Subject: RE: Instruments of Destruction - What could have happened if Anakin did not burn on Mustafar. VIG 1
	poor Obi!!! It was one thing to kill Vader, but to do it, and then see Ani again, it must have been devastating -----signature----- Vicki: I'm busting your chops for talking about demons and I was out hunting a vampire Henry: I'm gonna let you in on a little secret. Okay? Vicki: You believe in vampires Henry: I am a vampire.
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Gina Registered: Jun '03	Date Posted: 3/2/06 6:59pm Subject: RE: Instruments of Destruction - What could have happened if Anakin did not burn on Mustafar. VIG 1
	Just rip my heart out and stomp on it, why don't you?!?!? “Anakin…” Obi-Wan stroked his face, as Anakin's innocence radiated from his eyes. Kenobi felt a violent surge of anger flow through his veins, why could he not sense Anakin before? Why could he not save him from the dark side? What kind sick joke had fate played on him? Why did he have to kill the only family he had? Why? “Let me go Obi-Wan…” Obi-Wan could hear Anakin in his mind, as he smiled at him. “No, you’re my brother. I won’t let you leave.” Anakin’s grip began to weaken. “I…Love…You…” That was so emotional, so beautiful. It conveyed so much about their tumultuous history. You had me in tears. Masterfully done! -----signature----- A long time ago in a house far away, there was a mother who was strong in the ways of the Force. She "forced" her sons to clean their room, she "forced" her sons to behave. - Part of a story written by my 9 yr. old sons I found while cleaning their desks
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Jedi_Master_Cazz Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 3/3/06 12:22am Subject: RE: Instruments of Destruction - What could have happened if Anakin did not burn on Mustafar. VIG 1
	Not lil' Ani!!! WAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!! Treat, indeed that was. Cheers_Cazza -----signature----- "People of Earth! I come with good tidings of Peanuts... and beer!" --- Proud Padawan to Master VaderLV64!
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Anakin_Heartbreaker Registered: Sep '04	Date Posted: 3/10/06 2:24pm Subject: RE: Instruments of Destruction - What could have happened if Anakin did not burn on Mustafar. VIG 1
	Darth_Father-in-law - Thank you for the amazing words, I did not know that it would ending up literally being breathtaking!!!! I was a bit choked up when I wrote it too. CrazyAni - Thanks for the incredible compliment! I think as the duel continued to progress, Anakin slowly disapeared, and Vader took over. He was hesistant at first to even fightObi-Wan, but towards the end, it was too late. Star_Angel - Whoa!!!! Too many awesome words to take in at one time, I think I am going to be blushing all week!!! jedisister - Thanks for the amazing feedback, it really means alot to me. Yeah, with Anakin gone, the whole SW universe is turned onto its head, that why I kept it to just one post! LOL. Yeah, I wanted the ending to really hit home, and Padme asking Obi-Wan was the way to do it. ani-eyes - I hope your tears have stopped, because your kind words have just brought a tear to my eye. Lets see what the future holds as far as writing more. jmsbndgrl - As always, your comments touch my heart. Yes, it was a pity, I think Anakin felt something when Obi-Wan told him that he loved him, but was immediately set on fire before he could respond. Maybe that's just me, but that is what I based this vig on. Amidala66 - Your feedback remains amongst the best I ever received, thank you so much for reading and responding! Vader_Princess - I'm sorry!!!!!!!! Layren - Thank you so much!!! Those flashbacks really allowed us to feel Obi-Wan's anguish. Luna_Nightshade - I always wanted to write such a scene, because as you said, Obi-Wan walked away, I think he just could not bear to see his brother burn in front of his eyes. So I chose to keep him from burning, but his fate could have been even worse. Thank you so much, I love reading your work, so your response means alot! PadwanKayla - As always, your comments leave me speechless, your feedback have always been invaluable to me. HandmaidenVeme - Takes you back to Rage of the Jedi huh? Thanks for reading! Ladynaye - Please don't cry. Darth-Naga-Shadow - Okay, I've ripped my fingers off, no more writing such stuff! I'll just get someone else to do it for me. LOL JediArym - WOW!!!! I am totally floored after reading your wonderful response!!! Thank you. Galactic_Girl - I shall take the rose, and place it by my screen. AWW, (uses the Force to send some tissues). Thank you for your incredible reply. sithhappens6 - Thank you for reading! ANAKINSBABY - I'm feeling really bad now, please don't cry. I am always touched by your heartfelt words! ChewieSkywalker - Yeah, the title is misleading, but that was for the maximum shock value. Your final comment has broken me down, I'm am crying now. Seriously!!!! lady_sapphire - This was just a one post vig. It was something that I really wanted to show, thank you a million times over for reading and responding! amidalachick - Your reply is truly priceless, you have no idea how much that means to me. little_miss_jedi - Thank you for reading, please don't cry. michaellover - Yeah, to see Anakin again must have been the worst thing for Obi-Wan. Thank you. Gina - Your comments will always be special to me, and I cherish each of them. It breaks my heart that I made you so upset. Please forgive me. Jedi_Master_Cazz - Thank you so much!!! One final thanks to everyone who read this, lurkers included!!!!
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HandmaidenVeme Registered: Jun '04	Date Posted: 3/10/06 11:44pm Subject: RE: Instruments of Destruction - What could have happened if Anakin did not burn on Mustafar. VIG 1
	Takes you back to Rage of the Jedi huh? It sure did. "Rage of the Jedi" will always be one of my All Time Favorites. I can read it over and over again and get teary eyed each and every time. (And for those of you who have yet to read "Rage..." I highly recommend it, but have a box of Kleenex handy.) -----signature----- Angel #1 the "Mischievous" one "Anakin Skywalker's Towel Girl" Team Edward!
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Darth_Father-in-law Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 3/11/06 1:48am Subject: RE: Instruments of Destruction - What could have happened if Anakin did not burn on Mustafar. VIG 1
	Rage of the Jedi? Never heard. Where do I find it? I am too lazy to scan these pages, so it would be nice to find some link... -----signature----- “Waiting is painful. Forgetting is painful. But not knowing which to do is the worse kind of suffering.” - Paulo Coelho
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HandmaidenVeme Registered: Jun '04	Date Posted: 3/11/06 9:37pm Subject: RE: Instruments of Destruction - What could have happened if Anakin did not burn on Mustafar. VIG 1
	Darth_Father-in-law posted: Rage of the Jedi? Never heard. Where do I find it? I am too lazy to scan these pages, so it would be nice to find some link... My pleasure -----signature----- Angel #1 the "Mischievous" one "Anakin Skywalker's Towel Girl" Team Edward!
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Anakin_Heartbreaker Registered: Sep '04	Date Posted: 11/15/06 1:14pm Subject: RE: Instruments of Destruction - What could have happened if Anakin did not burn on Mustafar. VIG 1
	HandmaidenVeme - I've run out of superlatives for you!!!!! Do you have any idea how much I am going to miss you?
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