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BigE Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 7/18/06 11:32am Subject: RE: Forgiveness: a poem (Anakin/Obi-Wan) Author replies 07/14/06!
	That was beautiful, man. Absolutely beautiful. -----signature----- Not charging for Awesomeness. Gentlemen's Writing Guild 'Shipwrecked' challenge: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/30481486/r30519170/ psst: It's "crazy good", says a source. Eduard Cullen = Gary Stu. Yep, I said it.
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brodiew Registered: Oct '05	Date Posted: 7/25/06 3:13pm Subject: RE: Forgiveness: a poem (Anakin/Obi-Wan) Author replies 07/14/06!
	Thanks for you kind comments. Jade_Pilot: Thanks, Jade. I wanted to Obi-wan to say something that would break Anakin completely, but in love. DarthIshtar: Thanks for reading, Ish. Yes, Anakin's redemption capped by Obi-Wan's forgiveness. Big E: Thanks, Big E. I'm glad it touched you. -----signature----- “You were right about one thing, Master. The negotiations were short.”
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VaderLVR64 Title: Manager Emeritus Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 11/17/06 2:46pm Subject: RE: Forgiveness: a poem (Anakin/Obi-Wan) Author replies 07/14/06!
	Absolutely breathtaking! Laying against the bulkhead, He let out his final breath, A moment with his son, Then onward into death. Suddenly free of armor And all its needed aid, He marveled at the freedom And was no longer afraid. -----signature----- R.I.P John, Alex, Jason, and Christian Never forgotten Soldiers' Angels http://soldiersangels.org/ 2114 soldiers waiting for someone to care
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obsessedwithSW Registered: May '05	Date Posted: 1/2/07 4:25pm Subject: RE: Forgiveness: a poem (Anakin/Obi-Wan) Author replies 07/14/06!
	As the two walked arm in arm And faded to the light, Another man stood at peace Knowing he was right. That was beautiful Brodie. Ive read so many fics that deal with OBi-Wan's and Anakin's reunion in the afterlife but I do believe this one says it all, just enough leaving all the unsaid things where they should be, in their eyes. I loved the finish with Luke watching. Again -----signature----- Yes Darth Maul -bring sexy back! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JW8kOYvwVng Avid SiriWaner ! Stories in Bio
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Magenta_Moonshadow Registered: Aug '05	Date Posted: 1/2/07 5:35pm Subject: RE: Forgiveness: a poem (Anakin/Obi-Wan) Author replies 07/14/06!
	That was lovely! Well done! -----signature----- Proud padawan of Nienna_Narmolanya Member of Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan Fan Clubs "ONCE A JEDI" (A Drabble - Ben and Luke) http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=26761802&brd=10476&start=26788057
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AnakinsFavorite Registered: Apr '06	Date Posted: 1/31/07 8:31am Subject: RE: Forgiveness: a poem (Anakin/Obi-Wan) Author replies 07/14/06!
	Wow... that was beautiful I don't think you could have adequately expressed yourself in other forms as you did in this poem- it was perfect. After reading your note at the beginning, I found the Father/Son imagery appealing- and soothing. Powerful images came to mind as I read this. It was very inspirational. This stanza was my favorite: “It is good to see you, Young One Your heart has long been hidden, But in this place of mercy, Your sins are all forgiven.” Beautiful job! AnakinsFavorite -----signature----- "I want not fame, beauty, love, or money- all I desire is to make a difference and be remembered for it. Life demands this of me, and I am its humble servant." ~Me
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JadeSolo Title: Manager Emeritus Registered: Sep '02	Date Posted: 2/1/07 9:44am Subject: RE: Forgiveness: a poem (Anakin/Obi-Wan)
	As his father drew ever closer, His will gave way for good, His brother stopped in front of him, And drew back his hood. I loved this because I can never decide if Obi-Wan's more of a father than a brother to Anakin, and you fixed it by giving both aspects equal time. I also really liked the image of forgiveness you mentioned at the beginning of the post - I hope you find someone to draw it, because that would be something to see! -----signature----- "If you expect a kick in the balls and you get a slap in the face, it's a victory." "May God bless you and keep you always...I mean that in a civic deist way." -Prof. Siegel "No guaranteed money, but all guaranteed fun!"
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corellian-jedi Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 2/1/07 12:24pm Subject: RE: Forgiveness: a poem (Anakin/Obi-Wan)
	That was incredibly beautiful, and such a great way to write the reunion between Anakin and Obi-Wan. I loved the forgiveness theme. I really liked the lines depicting Obi-Wan, the father figure, and followed by Obi-Wan, his brother. That was so reminiscent of their relationship in life. Best of all, now they have eternity to be brothers/friends again. -----signature----- In hatred as in love, we grow like the thing we brood upon. What we loathe, we graft into our very soul.
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earlybird-obi-wan Registered: Aug '06	Date Posted: 2/1/07 12:44pm Subject: RE: Forgiveness: a poem (Anakin/Obi-Wan)
	I love poetry and this one is beautiful. -----signature----- writer and Star Wars fan FANART [link=http://boards.theforce.net/fan_art/b10020/25793899]fanart[/link] stories in my bio
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Alley_Skywalker Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 4/28/07 8:16pm Subject: RE: Forgiveness: a poem (Anakin/Obi-Wan)
	Oh WOW! I love the flow of this poem. It's absolutely beautiful! -----signature----- Knight of the Fanfic Order (trained by oqidaun) Master to CodyMonKenobi & mujapple-juicey Proud Obi/Ani shipper! Facades: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/24152038/p1 Class of '09 forever!!!
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JainaRox Registered: Nov '06	Date Posted: 4/29/07 8:48am Subject: RE: Forgiveness: a poem (Anakin/Obi-Wan)
	I could imagine Ani begging forgiveness like that. It was perfeact but you could of mentioned Padme. JainaR -----signature----- "You ... you ... Am I the only one here who simply wants to punch Master Skywalker in the nose?" Perfect couples K/J,H/L,A/T,L/M Jacen is dirt and Mara rocks Jaina or Mara who is better Zekk or Kyp no Jag
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Flowerlady Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 6/13/07 8:56am Subject: RE: Forgiveness: a poem (Anakin/Obi-Wan)
	Wow!!! Thanks for the link. That was very powerful. FL -----signature----- Master to DanaeMariSkywalker, JediMasterArmada and PHGS_Weyr All WIP's on hiatus.... website: http://www.authorswe.webs.com/ Thank you to all that believe in me...Love ya!
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sibethale Registered: Jun '07	Date Posted: 6/13/07 10:13am Subject: RE: Forgiveness: a poem (Anakin/Obi-Wan)
	Wow...this is indeed beautiful ...nearly had me in tears here, hehe -----signature----- Duct Tape is like the Force. It has a light side and a dark side, and it binds the Galaxy together http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/26899017/p1/?0 ... That would be my little Maul vignette >o_O<
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