Author Topic: Out of Character: Anakin/Padme
darthzeppo  771 posts
Registered: Aug '05
15579_Padme
Date Posted: 8/16/06 7:55pm Subject: Out of Character: Anakin/Padme
This is what I wrote for swficchallenge. The challenge was the seven deadly sins.

Time frame: AOTC
Characters: AnakinPadme
Summary: aboard the refugee transport lust envy & pride lead to wrath. It’s an evil Anakin fic hence the title.
Disclaimer: I don’t own SW

Out of Character

“Don’t look at me like that.”
She turned away and blushed; it was the second time she had said that. Earlier she had told him off when she was packing for their journey.
Now they were aboard the refugee transport, alone in their cabin. She sat poised on the edge of the bunk hands crossed on her lap. Last time she had coolly brushed him off, confidant in her superiority as senator. This time was different; she was Padme, alone, young and confused. He reached over and pulled her headdress off running his fingers through her hair down over her neck.
“ Anakin please don’t,” she pleaded.
“ Why not?” he asked, feeling some pride that he, a slave boy, could have such power over her.
She didn’t answer but looked away at the ground.
“ Are you worried by what you’re friends might think? Senator Amidala a woman of good rank and morals caught out with a Padawan?”
She pressed her lips together.
“ Do you know how it feels to be a slave? To be poor? To go hungry for one day?”
She shook her head.
“ No I didn’t think so, not you, not Senator Amidala!” He spat out.
“It’s not my fault! I didn’t choose to be born a Noble-”
“ But you did choose the be Queen and what did you do for the slaves when Queen? Nothing. You could of done something if you wanted to but you were too busy living a life a luxury and leisure to care. Keeping you’re wealth to yourself.”
“ No that’s not true!” she tried to get up but he wrapped his arms around her waist and pulled her onto his lap.
“Let me go!” she struggled against his grip for a few moments then gave up resting her head on his shoulder.
“ I want you,” he whispered into her ear, “All of you.”
“No! No! Please let me go!”
“ As you wish!” He threw her off him. Her head hitting the table before crumpling to the floor.



 

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Meredith_Kenobi  2228 posts
Registered: Jul '05
14879_Sabé
Date Posted: 8/16/06 8:16pm Subject: RE: Out of Character: Anakin/Padme
shock That is evil Ani.

I think this ficcy deserves a devil smiley: devil Ah, there we go.

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leia_naberrie  3737 posts
Registered: Sep '02
47943_Leia Cartoon (316)
Date Posted: 8/16/06 11:24pm Subject: RE: Out of Character: Anakin/Padme
LOL! I'm sorry but the end was just funny. grin Poor Padme. cry

 

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