Author Topic: loyalites Anakin/Padme mush
darthzeppo  771 posts
Registered: Aug '05
15579_Padme
Date Posted: 9/6/06 12:21am Subject: loyalites Anakin/Padme mush
Title: Loyalties
Rating: G
Characters: Anakin Padme
Summary: Anakin find his loyalties divided
Wordcount: 338



“Anakin?” , Padme had slipped gracefully out of bed and followed her husband out onto the Veranda. It was springtime on Naboo and the air smelled sweet with the scent of flowers.
Anakin stood looking over the lake with his arms crossed behind his back. The sun was just beginning to rise and its golden rays seeped out over the mountains onto the lake, colouring it silver.

“Anakin, are you all right?”

He turned around and looked down at her sadly, “ Just thinking.” He reached out with his mechanical arm and tucked a stray brown curl back behind her ear.

“About what?”

He turned away and walked off down the veranda. She followed him, walking fast to keep up with his long strides, “Anakin tell me!What’s going on?”

He stopped and leaned against the railing, “Nothing.”

“ You always say nothing but it always means something.” She wrapped her arms around his waist snuggling her face into his chest.
He sighed heavily, “ I love you.”

“ I would hope so since you married me.”

“ I would do anything for you, you’re my whole life, my existence. I couldn’t live without you.”

“ Don’t be silly, of course you could.”

“ I mean it Padme, I would go mad… If this damned war hasn’t made me mad already!”

She pulled back and looked up at him, “ That’s it, you’re worried about the war?”

“ I got a message from Obi-wan yesterday. They want me to cut my leave short.”

“ What did you say?”

He looked away, “ I said yes.”

“Anakin!” she stepped back and crossed her arms, glaring at him,“ how could you?”

“ They're my friends Padme! I have to help them!”

“Why? What’s so important? What’s more important than me?”

“Adi Gala has been injured and they need someone to replace her. I’m the best pilot they have.”

“ You promised we’d have a week together!” Padme bit her lip. Her outburst had sounded whiney and she hated being whiney.
He didn’t seem to notice but took her into his arms again kissing her forehead, “ I know, I’m sorry.”

“When do you have to leave?”

“ Tomorrow.”

“ Well then,” she said, smiling mischievously, taking his hand and leading him inside, “we better make use of what time we have.”

 

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Healer_Leona  37096 posts
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Date Posted: 9/6/06 3:19am Subject: RE: loyalites Anakin/Padme mush
Nice start.

Padme must remember that Anakin is also a Jedi with other responsibilities and unless he's willing top confess his marriage, there's probably little he can give as excuse to staying.

 

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leia_naberrie  3737 posts
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Date Posted: 9/6/06 4:18am Subject: RE: loyalites Anakin/Padme mush
“ Well then,” she said, smiling mischievously, taking his hand and leading him inside, “we better make use of what time we have.”
Yum yum! tongue It's nice to see Padme written as a selfish, human bride. happy

 

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Meredith_Kenobi  2228 posts
Registered: Jul '05
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Date Posted: 9/6/06 6:01pm Subject: RE: loyalites Anakin/Padme mush
*gasp* Padme's bein' a wee bit selfish! mischief I like that. It shows that she's human after all. shock

wonderful mush!! applause applause applause

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darthzeppo  771 posts
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Date Posted: 9/7/06 12:30am Subject: RE: loyalites Anakin/Padme mush
Healer_Leona sorry but his is just a short story i wrote for fanfic challenge.

leia_naberrie laugh

Meredith_Kenobi thank you as always happy

i forgot to thank my beta reader RyooNaberrie for editing it.

 

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slow_dawn  361 posts
Registered: Apr '06
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Date Posted: 9/7/06 5:27pm Subject: RE: loyalites Anakin/Padme mush
Padme being selfish and Anakin being responsible? Hmmm.... It's quite interesting to see what seems like their typical roles reversed. Nice little story.



 

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KELIA  11207 posts
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Registered: Jul '05
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Date Posted: 10/2/06 10:52am Subject: RE: loyalites Anakin/Padme mush
Awwww....that was actually very sweet

love love love love

I'm glad Padme decided to make the best of the time they had left instead of pouting.

Nice job on this

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