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earlybird-obi-wan Registered: Aug '06	Date Posted: 10/26/08 12:55am Subject: Micco and Mujaa for the fruit challenge
	Title: Micco and Mujaa Author: Earlybird-obi-wan Timeframe: JQ Characters: A Micco Rodent. Genre: humor Disclaimer: G.L. owns Star Wars Summary: A Micco rodent observes the antics of Jedi Padawans. Note plays during Survivor A little Micco-rodent was scurrying towards the fallen Mujaa fruits. His fellow Micco rodents were also in the garden eating from the succulent fruit-meat. In a big house – big from the Micco rodents’ point of view – were voices chattering wildly. The Micco rodent perched up his ears. “Wake up time flyboy.” “Wait.” “Slimey, slimey snail, slither, slither down the trail. I might be sluggish on the walk.” “But I am sure I can talk” “Sarghi, never knew you were a poet.” “Just something I learned during those cooking lessons from Serinka and I have joined the ‘Pots and Pans band’ formed by the cooks. “Shall we wake up Anakin with that? I can get some pots and pans from the main building.” “Nah. If he doesn’t want to join us he doesn’t wake up. Let him sleep and be the spoilsport. With the six of us we can manage. He sure will leave his bed when the masters are awake or when he hears my master leaving with that bike before he has had the chance to try it.” “Or our cleaning will wake him.” “Not when we are very silent. Let’s wait for his master to return” Stomp, stomp piieeep, squish. Stomp squish “got ya” The Micco rodent gave a squeal and scurried away. Big things were trying to kill him. They were robbing him of his food. Ducking into his hole he observed the big things collecting all his food leaving only a few rotting morsels behind. Big doors on smaller houses were covered by the fruits and two doors got only a few fruits. The same voices were heard. “I hope my master won’t use that as an exit” “No way. My master had to use the shoulders of master Kenobi to get inside and there she had the sink to step on. Getting outside is more difficult.” “He has to go to his Padawan today and they are tasty presents.” The Micco rodent saw them leaving and resumed his eating seeing his rivals coming outside their burrows. Clang, cloing bang, clink. Noises came from another big house. --- The first rays of the sun were shining on the meadow when the Micco rodent had eaten enough and returned to his burrow. He heard more noises looked and saw the piled fruits roll inside a house. “Who is spoiling food?” “Nice and it will give them more work to do.” “I know a nice place for those fruits” The Micco rodent saw the fruits disappear in the large houses and scurried deeper into his burrow hearing more noises coming from a large house. “We will hear their comments during breakfast.” “Master Telesaar removed them already from my master’s door but that’s alright with me.” “Yeah and now they are giving the fruits a new resting place; the bunkhouses!” “The male bunkhouse is flooded by them. And who’s inside?” “Flyboy Skywalker” Bang, bang clabam. Slimey, slimey snail, Slither, slither down the trail. I might be sluggish on the walk.” But I am sure I can talk Fruity, fruity mush Is served by us The cooks and sportsgirl and boy For a flyboy, for a flyboy FIN -----signature----- writer and Star Wars fan FANART [link=http://boards.theforce.net/fan_art/b10020/25793899]fanart[/link] stories in my bio
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Gkilkenny Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 10/26/08 5:44am Subject: RE: Micco and Mujaa for the fruit challenge
	He's a poet and doesn't know it! Flyboy Skywalker More likely Disaster Skywalker. cute. -----signature----- Proud Padawan to p_stotts Peace over anger - honour over hate - Strength over fear. Links to Stories in my Bio. Obi-Wan forever.
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Trika_Kenobi Registered: Nov '99	Date Posted: 11/11/08 1:23pm Subject: RE: Micco and Mujaa for the fruit challenge
	Wow. Very creative, early! Great perspective! Thanks for the read! Trikes -----signature----- My Uncle Sam sends me places... the "going OCONUS lol" is here! Current Location: Iraq Don't bother running. You won't get far enough. http://www.TalonIntelligenceSquadron.com
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kecen Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 11/16/08 12:36pm Subject: RE: Micco and Mujaa for the fruit challenge
	The ambiguity is apt. Hey, they could have left the fruit out as a winter present! Does Anakin like fruit? -----signature----- "Thank you for the warning, but I still see the sun," "A little Vongforming never hurt no one!" Member of the General Grievous fanclub Member of the George R. Binks fanclub, whoo! Supporting Hutt Marriage since October '06
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SoA Registered: Apr '08	Date Posted: 11/21/08 3:48pm Subject: RE: Micco and Mujaa for the fruit challenge
	That was cute! Not ever day you hear a story from the perspective of a rodent. Fun story. -----signature----- Padawan to Commander-DWH Under the Shadow of the Builders- http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/29386724/p1/ Fanfiction Web Site- http://faraway.toweroftime.com SoA's India Blog- http://jenna-song.blogspot.com
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Thumper09 Registered: Dec '01	Date Posted: 11/30/08 9:00pm Subject: RE: Micco and Mujaa for the fruit challenge
	Neat! The poor little rodent doesn't have the easiest life, what with having to compete with padawans and other micco rodents for his food, but he sure gets to hear and witness some interesting things around there. Great job, and fascinating perspective! -----signature----- "Like anything worth writing, it came inexplicably and without method." -Karen Eiffel, Stranger Than Fiction "Adamantine"--Rebel OC vig http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/30390799 "That's 'stupid plan, sir,' Lieutenant." -Wedge
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Commander-DWH Title: Shiny Fan Fiction Manager Registered: Nov '03	Date Posted: 11/30/08 9:30pm Subject: RE: Micco and Mujaa for the fruit challenge
	Nice job with choosing a unique perspective! This was definitely a fun read. Good work! -----signature----- Complements (KOTOR)- http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/21177927/ Luminosity- http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/27900517/ Barefoot hippie in the OC revolution Master of the lovely and talented SoA
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epithree Registered: Aug '06	Date Posted: 11/30/08 9:52pm Subject: RE: Micco and Mujaa for the fruit challenge
	Hello earlybird. Bravo! That was such a clever piece. Excellent response to the challenge. Thanks for the humorous read. -----signature----- 'And so it is.' 'charge the plasma rotors!' 'hello there.'
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