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Sara_Kenobi Registered: Sep '00	Date Posted: 8/17/02 7:49pm Subject: Hallowed Road - Date Edited: 8/17/02 7:51pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Sara_Kenobi
	Title: Hallowed Road Summary: Alderaanian Fals Ethord is a witness of a murder and goes on a personal quest to find the criminal before they strike again. Category: Post Prequel AU Hallowed Road By Sara Kenobi Introduction Fals was running through the bush. The night air nipped at his bare heels as he ran as fast as he could go from the main House. Flashes of what haunted his soul pierced his blue eyes as the shadowed night enveloped him into it's cold embrace. His mother's terrified scream as his father was killed with his own lightsaber on their front door step. Then his younger sister. Before Fals could make his way down the staircase, Jamy's body hit the floor beside their father. His mother met her death as he made the final decent. Fals saw it happen in his minds eye; the Sith smiling the whole while. Fals gave a cry of intense grief and outrage, and fell too his knees beside their fallen bodies. The anger and screaming madness that ran through Fals' mind took command; as he was the last of his family, and every part of him cried revenge for this senseless act upon his House, as the enemy gazed down upon him and smiled... *** "No!" "Fals, wake up!" Fals Ethord opened his eyes and realized the nightmare had ended. His wife Kestra was telling him to wake up. Fals took a deep breath before saying anything and wiped away the sweat from his forehead. "I'm okay, Kes," Fals lied smoothly. The blond haired woman frowned. "You can't fool me, you know," Kestra said softly. She then leaned in and kissed his cheek. "I'm here for you, okay?" Fals sighed as he realized his cry out may have awakened their 5 year old Daughter; Alejamy was in the bedroom beside their's. "Did she wake up?" Fals whispered. "No, not yet," said Kestra. "Her dreams are deep tonight." "Thank the Force for that," said Fals, who was over tired now and didn't think he would be of much help to Alejamy, if she did need him to comfort her. Not tonight anyway. There wouldn't be much of anything tonight. It all had happened thirty years ago, but it still felt like it was yesturday. tbc -----signature----- (Twilight) Dream Escape (One shot, Bella pov, NM) http://boards.theforce.net/non_star_wars_fan_fiction/b10808/30615424/p1/?0 One Night Only (A/P, PT challenge, one-shot) http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/30618860/p1/
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Kit' Title: Manager Emeritus Registered: Oct '99	Date Posted: 8/18/02 12:53am Subject: RE: Hallowed Road
	This sounds like it is going to be really, really cool! -----signature----- Some people are like slinkies; Not really good for anything, but you still can't help but smile as you push them down the stairs * Writers wanted.... http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/27996678
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jodiwent Registered: Feb '00	Date Posted: 8/18/02 2:23am Subject: RE: Hallowed Road
	I'm not usually into original characters but this one looks really interesting. -----signature----- Links to FICS in Bio on botom of profile http://boards.theforce.net/ASP/user.asp?usr=238155
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starwarsfan1000 Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 8/18/02 3:44am Subject: RE: Hallowed Road
	Looks good. -----signature----- New Story: To Destroy the Sith (ROTS) AU http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/22601037/p1/?0
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Knight-Ander Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 8/18/02 7:27am Subject: RE: Hallowed Road
	Yeah, this does look interesting. I always thought it would be great to have a standard mystery story take place in the SW Universe, if that is the way this will actually go. I'm waiting patiently for more. -----signature----- The Part He's Looking For - A pre-ANH Luke vignette http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/30044606/p1/
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Arwyn_Whitesun Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 8/18/02 7:37am Subject: RE: Hallowed Road
	Great start! Looking forward to more. -----signature----- In Love and War - - http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/20250548/?0 Obi-Wan AU Clone Wars Fic
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Sara_Kenobi Registered: Sep '00	Date Posted: 8/18/02 10:54am Subject: RE: Hallowed Road
	Thanks everybody for the support. This is a first for me. I've never written a fic with my own characters before as the main story. This is based on the new Tom Hanks film btw. It's greatly based on my own twist though on the film and this is no means a crossover. More soon! -----signature----- (Twilight) Dream Escape (One shot, Bella pov, NM) http://boards.theforce.net/non_star_wars_fan_fiction/b10808/30615424/p1/?0 One Night Only (A/P, PT challenge, one-shot) http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/30618860/p1/
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Sara_Kenobi Registered: Sep '00	Date Posted: 8/18/02 1:28pm Subject: RE: Hallowed Road
	Part 1 Kestra Ethord left her family that morning with a heavy heart. She couldn't remember that last time she had seen Fals so upset. He gave little or nothing away about the past. His parents and sister were a top secret subject with him. Fals discussed them with no one if they weren't totally alone. Fals was raised in the Royal Palace by his mother's Cousin, Prince Jonas Organa and his wife; Lady Elannora Meridian-Organa. Being raised as a Royal hadn't bore any negative effects upon Fals. At the age of 20 years, his Uncle had allowed him to leave the life of the Palace so Fals could get a position in the Republic and eventually have his own family to care for himself. It was important to him to carry on such a thing, as it had been important to his father before him. Fals didn't want to ever lose that. That was why Kestra had found it so easy to fall in love with Fals Ethord; the quiet Jedi Knight that had battled so endlessly with the Jedi Council for them to allow his Marriage to Kestra. Jedi Master Yoda took into consideration that Fals was the last of his family, as his only sibling and parents were dead, and agreed that Fals could take a wife. Fals had stood by Kestra through it all and vowed to Marry her, dispite whatever the rule of the Council was. Fals had a hard childhood and only entered the Order at the request of his Aunt at the age of 5 years, shortly after the death of his family, and Fals had just went to live with the Organa family. Fals' Grandfather on his Mother's side of the family had been a Jedi Master before marrying and leaving the Order for a life of politics. Somehow that power had been passed through the family line to Fals. Since getting married to Kestra and having their Daughter, Fals gave little or no thought to his time with the Jedi Knights. Kestra and Alejamy were his life now, and were all that mattered to him. Kestra had found her way to the Senate Building that was located in the center of the city. She entered and right away spotted him with her bright green eyes. "Senator Palpatine," Kestra said with a false smile and formal matter. "Senator Ethord, it is always a great pleasure to see you again," Jaques Palpatine smiled. "You are as beautiful as you ever were." "Thank you," Kestra told her former Fiance with another false smile. "What are you doing here on Alderaan? It's a long way from Naboo." "I'm here too see you, of course," Jaques said with a smile that could mean many things. "I've missed you very much; over these few years especially." "You know I'm married, Jaq," said Kestra firmly, careful to keep her distance in this place of all places. If it ever got back to the Organa's that she was even speaking with her former lover, they'd be furious and demand Fals Divorce to avoid any scandals. All of them were in politics of some sort and anything could make the family look bad. "You should be married to me, my love," Jaq said, touching her face. Kestra gasped and backed away from him. "Don't say such things," Kestra hissed. "I'm in love with Fals. You must accept it! It's been over 6 years, Jaq!" "I will never forget you, Kestra," Jaq said. "I must go and speak with his Highness now. I'll see you later, my dear and beautiful lady." Kestra watched him go with fear in her green eyes. "No you won't Jaq," Kestra vowed to herself aloud. "I won't let you take away what I have now. I won't!" As a cold chill went up and down the Alderaanian Senator's spine, Jaques Palpatine vanished from the Senate corridor. tbc -----signature----- (Twilight) Dream Escape (One shot, Bella pov, NM) http://boards.theforce.net/non_star_wars_fan_fiction/b10808/30615424/p1/?0 One Night Only (A/P, PT challenge, one-shot) http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/30618860/p1/
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Casper_Knightshade Registered: Oct '00	Date Posted: 8/18/02 1:29pm Subject: RE: Hallowed Road
	Well speaking from experience it can be challenging, refreshing, and darn right free all at the same time. -----signature----- The Sith Hunters - Complete http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/29378838/p1 ------ Or download TSH and the first three volumes of the Gessa Saga in ZIP format! http://thegessasaga.tripod.com/
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Sara_Kenobi Registered: Sep '00	Date Posted: 8/18/02 1:31pm Subject: RE: Hallowed Road
	Thanks Casper! -----signature----- (Twilight) Dream Escape (One shot, Bella pov, NM) http://boards.theforce.net/non_star_wars_fan_fiction/b10808/30615424/p1/?0 One Night Only (A/P, PT challenge, one-shot) http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/30618860/p1/
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Sara_Kenobi Registered: Sep '00	Date Posted: 8/18/02 8:25pm Subject: RE: Hallowed Road
	Up! I'll post the second part tomorrow! -----signature----- (Twilight) Dream Escape (One shot, Bella pov, NM) http://boards.theforce.net/non_star_wars_fan_fiction/b10808/30615424/p1/?0 One Night Only (A/P, PT challenge, one-shot) http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/30618860/p1/
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Princess1 Registered: Dec '01	Date Posted: 8/18/02 8:55pm Subject: RE: Hallowed Road
	Sara, your righing another one! However do you find the time? Really good start, I'm really intersted to see what you do with this, I used to read mysteryies all the time, so a mestery in star wars, this should be cool! -----signature----- "Weddings! I love weddings, drinks all around! " Captian Jack of course! Fortress Bestower of Hero Kisses I am Red Jenny Flint, passionate and daring damsel of "Freedoms Fire" BUNG! A new word. Just don't ask what it means.
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starwarsfan1000 Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 8/19/02 4:05am Subject: RE: Hallowed Road
	Good post. -----signature----- New Story: To Destroy the Sith (ROTS) AU http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/22601037/p1/?0
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Kit' Title: Manager Emeritus Registered: Oct '99	Date Posted: 8/19/02 4:32am Subject: RE: Hallowed Road
	Very cool, I love the way this is progressing and I just want to know more about the family!!! Kit -----signature----- Some people are like slinkies; Not really good for anything, but you still can't help but smile as you push them down the stairs * Writers wanted.... http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/27996678
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Sara_Kenobi Registered: Sep '00	Date Posted: 8/19/02 9:31am Subject: RE: Hallowed Road
	Part 2 Elannora Meridian-Organa couldn't wait for the return of her Husband Jonas Organa, who was away on business in the Outer worlds to visit a former Aide's House. Wilhem Chasara had served Jonas as a political Aide for the last 14 years. Upon a recent deal that Jonas had made with another Senator, Wilhem abruptly quit, and vowed to report the deal to the High Chancellor himself. Jonas thought a personal trip to Bakura would convince Wilhem to let things go. Elannora could only hope that Jonas was right. They needed no trouble at this time to surface. Their first born Son was about to get married and ready himself to take Jonas' place when the time arrived. They had once thought of adopting Fals and naming him the Heir to the Throne. Fals had only been a young boy then but still had refused the very idea. He had said he loved both of them dearly for taking him in and giving him a home, but he was born his father's son and would remain so. Nither Elannora or Jonas had ever brought up the subject again with Fals. When the Jedi came calling though, Fals had begged them to allow training at the Temple on Coruscant. Having their own son on the way then, they had agreed to let Fals go. It still had been a very painful time for them though. Elannora and Jonas had loved Fals as their own and didn't want to let him go. Elannora gasped upon hearing the door to their Suite open in the Palace. She turn away from the Living room window that over looked Aldera at night and hurried toward the door. As she ran across the room, lightening could be hered thundering in the night sky. She saw him and ran faster until she was in his arms. It was something familer as Elannora always waited up for him on the night of a return from a long trip. 40 years of marriage and she still was as overjoyed at seeing Jonas as she had been the very first time. "Oh, Jonas," Elannora cried happily. "I missed you so much." Jonas smiled in the darkness and kissed the top of his wife's head. "I missed you too, my love." He placed his arms around Elannora and held her tightly. "I'm happy it's done now." Elannora was about to ask what that ment, but she didn't have too. The smell of blood tickled her nose as she pressed her face into his shirt. tbc -----signature----- (Twilight) Dream Escape (One shot, Bella pov, NM) http://boards.theforce.net/non_star_wars_fan_fiction/b10808/30615424/p1/?0 One Night Only (A/P, PT challenge, one-shot) http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/30618860/p1/
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Sara_Kenobi Registered: Sep '00	Date Posted: 8/19/02 10:48am Subject: RE: Hallowed Road
	Up! -----signature----- (Twilight) Dream Escape (One shot, Bella pov, NM) http://boards.theforce.net/non_star_wars_fan_fiction/b10808/30615424/p1/?0 One Night Only (A/P, PT challenge, one-shot) http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/30618860/p1/
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