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bobilll Registered: Aug '02	Date Posted: 9/22/02 5:00pm Subject: Much Ado About Whip Cream- A Star Wars/ Earth crossover (updated daily) - Date Edited: 9/26/02 7:10pm (4 edits total) Edited By: bobilll
	Disclaimer: I don't own these charectors and I don't make money off them. ~~~~ PART ONE: ROLLING HILLS HIGH SCHOOL, first day of school Carol Jackson reached into her pocket and pulled out her bus number. This was her first time riding the bus home from school, and she was nervous! After all, what would happen if she got on the wrong bus? How would she ever get home? Inwardly she knew that she had nothing to fear. Carol was an intelligent person, even if she was a little shy. She wouldn’t have any trouble getting home. Relax, Carol, a voice in her head said forcefully. Most of the student population rides a bus. You can, too. On the other side of the parking lot, she spotted her friend, Benjamin, heading toward the bike rack. Carol had known Benjamin for two years now, and knew for a fact Benjamin’s affinity to biking. Turning back, she spotted another friend Danielle, and hurried over to chat about their first day of high school. ~~~~ Benjamin Davis strolled down the field toward the bike racks, a feeling of satisfaction mellowing in his brain. The first day of high school had been pretty good. The teachers were all pretty nice, and he was lucky to find at least a few of his friends in every one of his classes. Kneeling down to reach his lock, Benjamin deftly pulled the chain away from the wheel, and tucked his key back into his pocket. A small glint of metal caught his eye. Reaching down, he found a small necklace carved with a strange symbol. Interested, he picked it up and shoved it in his pocket. ~~~~ Peter Smith jumped out of the building whooping and crying. His first day of high school was finally over. Not that it had been so bad, especially the part of hazing the freshman. Reaching into his backpack, he pulled out his whip cream cans and one by one threw them into the trash. He stopped at his last can. This one still had some whip cream left in them. He turned around and saw a freshman boy rushing through the sidewalk on her bike, and grinned. A last prank to the day’s hazing. Aiming for the boy, he waited for the right moment and shot it right at the freshman’s face. It was a direct hit. Peter watched smugly as the boy cursed loudly, his bike going out of control. ~~~ “Watch out!” Carol had not heard the bystanders shouting her the much-needed warning. She did not see the senior shoot whip cream into Benjamin’s eyes, and did no see her friend go out of control, heading right towards her. All she saw was a blur of blue, and all went black. -----signature----- You'll have to buy him a sweater.
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NYCitygurl Title: Manager of SFFBC, C&G, NSWFF, and Icons Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 9/22/02 5:06pm Subject: RE: Much Ado About Whip Cream- A Star Wars/ Earth crossover
	Interesting story. Love NYC -----signature----- I agree with RJ Officially Idri's Muse "Hat. We thought of authentic Native American headdress before we thought of hat."
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bobilll Registered: Aug '02	Date Posted: 9/22/02 5:54pm Subject: RE: Much Ado About Whip Cream- A Star Wars/ Earth crossover
	Glad you like it! -----signature----- You'll have to buy him a sweater.
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bobilll Registered: Aug '02	Date Posted: 9/22/02 7:51pm Subject: RE: Much Ado About Whip Cream- A Star Wars/ Earth crossover (how would one act in Star Wars Land)
	um, anyone else interested? -----signature----- You'll have to buy him a sweater.
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Tinuviel_Jyana Registered: Mar '02	Date Posted: 9/22/02 8:02pm Subject: RE: Much Ado About Whip Cream- A Star Wars/ Earth crossover (how would one act in Star Wars Land)
	hmmm... i'm intrigued... this sounds fascinating... like to see where you're going with this. love the title (i'm a shakespeare nut who worked in a smoothie place over the summer (much whip cream)...) so this looks like it will be interesting... so i'll give you and UP for it. if you like check out my story... -----signature----- She, Nemesis (possible AU, Obi/OC, pre TPM) - http://boards.theforce.net/Before_the_Saga/b10475/18888720/?2 - Hiatus
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Monica_Skywalker Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 9/22/02 8:27pm Subject: RE: Much Ado About Whip Cream- A Star Wars/ Earth crossover (how would one act in Star Wars Land)
	I like it so far! It sounds interesting! Can't wait for the next post! ~Monica~ -----signature----- Proud Anakin lover See profile for links to fics!
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bobilll Registered: Aug '02	Date Posted: 9/23/02 3:22pm Subject: RE: Much Ado About Whip Cream- A Star Wars/ Earth crossover (how would one act in Star Wars Land)
	Hey, glad you all like it! NYCitygurl, it gets more interesting! tinuviel, lol! glad you like the title! the story doesn't really have a lot to do with shakespear, but we were studying shakespear in class when i was thinking of the title. glad you like the post, monica, here's more! ~~~ PART TWO: STAR WARS UNIVERSE, the day of the invasion Darth Maul paced through the streets of Coruscant. Everything had gone well until now. The Trade Federation had administered their blockade, and successfully invaded the planet. The queen was captured, and in his opinion it wasn’t long now until the treaty was signed, the first step toward his master’s domination of the galaxy. But now there was a disturbance in the Force. Something had happened. A barrier separating space and time was broken, and someone had made it through. Only a strong warrior could have broken through the barrier, and could not be ignored. No matter, though. Maul had been well trained; he could take on this warrior. And though his instructions were to concentrate only on the invasion, Maul secretly vowed to himself to hunt down these warriors and tear them apart, piece by piece. No one was intruding into his master’s galaxy. ~~~~ Captain Panaka blinked. He had just had a physical examination last week, as a requirement for the head of security in Naboo. His vision had been fine, then. Apparently, though, the doctors were wrong, because no man with twenty-twenty vision saw teenagers just appear out of nowhere, and in the Theed Palace, of all places. Cautiously, he approached the teenagers. Apparently, they were alive, but unconscious. Panaka frowned. These people weren’t from around here. It wasn’t their physical form that looked alien. They were humanoid, their skin tan and their hair dark, just like the Naboo. But the clothes they wore, small shirts and short pants! The queen would have to know. Suddenly, the boy stirred, waking his companion. Together, they let out a small groan and opened their eyes. ~~~ Slowly the haze broke away from Benjamin’s eyes. Unfortunately, he couldn’t say the same about his head. Slowly, he sat up and looked around. He was lying on a marble floor in a richly decorated hallway. “Who are you?” a voice sounded. Benjamin looked around to see his friend, Carol, staring at a tall, dark man that looked a bit too much like a certain captain from a certain movie. “I’m Captain Panaka, head of security to Her Majesty, Queen Amidala of Naboo.” Benjamin blinked. Had he heard wrong? Was this man really pretending to be a fictional character? He looked over to Carol to see her just as confused. “I ask that you please state your purpose for infiltrating the royal palace.” Benjamin blinked again, and looked back at Carol. She probably doesn’t know who he says he is, Benjamin thought. After all, Carol had never seen Star Wars Episode I before. “You got a nephew called Typho too?” he said jokingly. Panaka jerked. “How did you know about him?” Benjamin stared, confused. He took a deep breath. “Um, you really think you’re Captain Panaka? Are you okay? Maybe you need help.” ~~~~ “Maybe you need help,” Carol mimicked grouchily. Yeah, sure, best thing to say to the guy with a gun in his pocket. As soon as the Panaka guy heard Benjamin’s big mouth, he had immediately arrested both of them. He had said that he would hold them until the queen was out of her meeting with the Jedi Ambassadors to talk about the conflict with the Trade Federation. “Me and my big mouth,” Benjamin moaned. Carol glared at him, but decided not to comment. They couldn’t affor to fight now. “Where are we?” She asked instead. Benjamin shrugged. “The last thing I remember is that senior spraying whip cream in my eyes. I think I might have crashed into someone.” Carol grimaced at the giant bruise on her leg. “You did. Me.” “Whoops!” Benjamin replied, much to Carol’s annoyance. Carol shot Benjamin another glare. “So what exactly is going on?” Benjamin shrugged. “Maybe we’re having a dream? About Star Wars, of all things.” “Star Wars?” Carol asked. “Is that where that Panaka guy is from?” Benjamin nodded. Suddenly, he looked up. “Carol? What do you think happens if we die in our sleep? I mean, we’re in Star Wars, and it’s a pretty violent movie.” Carol paled at the idea. The reality of the situation began to sink in. “Yeah, I saw a couple of the movies. They were pretty violent.” She furrowed her brow. “I don’t remember Panaka, though.” “He was in the first movie, you know, the one that came out a couple years ago?” “Oh,” Carol nodded. She had not yet seen the new movies, so of course she didn’t know Panaka. “What happens in the movie?” Benjamin thought a bit. “Um, the Trade Federation comes and invades Naboo, and the queen and a couple other people try to go to Corucscant to get help, but they get stuck on Tatooine because their ship broke down. Actually, the Naboo don’t really die in the movie, or at least the people that were with the queen. A lot of people died in camps, though.” Carol snapped up. “Trade Federation? Panaka just said that the queen was having a meeting about the Trade Federation!” Benjamin thought quickly. “The meeting was in the movie. The communications break down and a few hours later the Federation takes over all of Naboo. That pretty much means that we have a few hours before we’re taken prisoner.” “So what do we do when the queen comes?” Carol asked. “If we can get onto the ship with the queen, we should be safe for a while,” Benjamin replied thoughtfully. Carol frowned. “Why would a queen take a couple of girls onto her royal ship?” A smirk crossed Benjamin’s mouth. “Leave it to me,” he replied anonymously. -----signature----- You'll have to buy him a sweater.
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Tinuviel_Jyana Registered: Mar '02	Date Posted: 9/23/02 3:30pm Subject: RE: Much Ado About Whip Cream- A Star Wars/ Earth crossover (how would one act in Star Wars Land)
	hehe... great post... can't wait for more -----signature----- She, Nemesis (possible AU, Obi/OC, pre TPM) - http://boards.theforce.net/Before_the_Saga/b10475/18888720/?2 - Hiatus
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Monica_Skywalker Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 9/24/02 7:50am Subject: RE: Much Ado About Whip Cream- A Star Wars/ Earth crossover (how would one act in Star Wars Land)
	Great post! That would be really cool if we could just pop up in the Star Wars universe like that! ~Monica~ -----signature----- Proud Anakin lover See profile for links to fics!
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bobilll Registered: Aug '02	Date Posted: 9/24/02 2:16pm Subject: RE: Much Ado About Whip Cream- A Star Wars/ Earth crossover (how would one act in Star Wars Land)
	i know what you mean, Monica, that would be so neat! Glad you like it, Tinueviel, here's more! ~~~ Queen Amidala frowned impatiently as her head of security lead her down the palace cells. The Trade Federation was about to invade, and all Panaka could think of were a pair of teenagers who had stumbled into the palace by mistake. Of course, Panaka had claimed that the kids had appeared out of nowhere, and possessed an unusual amount of knowledge of the planet, but Amidala just assumed he was being crazy. The captain stopped in front of a cell and punched in a code, opening the door. Two teenagers sprang to their feet at the sight of her. The taller, a girl with auburn hair and soft freckles, was gaping openly, while the shorter one, a boy with chestnut eyes and raven hair, was trying his best to hide his incredulity. Amidala sighed. She had been receiving these reactions ever since she had started wearing the extravagant robes and ceremonial makeup that showed her station. Now that she actually saw the kids, Amidala had to admit that they were strange, or at least their clothes were. She frowned in distaste at the short length of the pants and shirts. “May I present Queen Amidala of the Naboo,” the captain announced, breaking the monarch’s thoughts. “Your Majesty, this is, well, I don’t know who they are yet.” The captain turned to the teenagers. The girl was still gaping, but less openly now. The boy was obviously intimidated, though he tried hard to cover it. “I am Benjamin Davis, and this is Carol Jackson,” he stated in his most regal voice. “We are Ambassadors from the system Earth. We were sent here as to observe the performance of this planet.” The queen frowned suspiciously, not buying a word of it. “I do not remember scheduling an appointment with any ambassadors today, and I am sure I have never heard of the system Earth.” “But Earth knows of you, Your Highness. Earth had been following the history of your planet for a long time. Since before the late King Veruna was assassinated, I believe.” The Naboo all gasped. The assassination of King Veruna had been kept secret. No one, not even all the palace guards knew of it. “What does your system want, Lord Benjamin Davis?” The queen asked, trying to mask her surprise. Benjamin smiled. It was working. “So far, Earth has been impressed with Naboo’s peaceful habits, so not to use its deadly weapons against your world. But news of the Trade Federation blockading the planet has caused great disturbance.” “The Federation blockaded our planet against our will!” the queen argued. Benjamin started at the anger in the queen’s voice, but continued. “We need proof of that. We ask that Carol and I be allowed to participate in court for the next few weeks.” “Now is not a good time,” Amidala protested. “The Federation has disrupted our communications and will be invading soon!” Benjamin put up a shocked face. “Invasion? Earth will not be pleased to hear that!” He pretended to think. “Carol and I will pose as your personal guards during the invasion, so to keep an eye on you. If we are pleased, then we will not report this to our superiors. Otherwise, the consequences for all of us will be dire.” The queen considered this, then nodded, seeing that she had no choice. “All right.” She turned to one of her handmaidens. “Take Lord Benjamin Davis and Lady Carol Jackson to my quarters and give them a fighter’s uniform.” The girl curtsied and let the two ex-prisoners away. ~~~ Rabé led the two strange ambassadors down the hall to the Royal Chambers. They were a strange couple, who claimed to be from the strange Earth system, wherever that was. Nevertheless, she couldn’t help but send frequent glances at the young boy. He was different than any boy Rabé had ever met before, with sleek raven hair and dark eyes. Just admit it, you think he’s cute! Rabé tried to push her friend Sabé’s much-used taunt out of her head. To deny that statement, though, would be a lie on Rabé’s part. “Hi,” the young boy said, breaking the silence, and obviously a bit scared by Rabé’s frequent glances. “I’m Benjamin.” “I am Rabé,” Rabé answered, blushing slightly. “We welcome your presence here, Lord Benjamin.” Benjamin smiled. “Please, it’s just Benjamin! ‘Lord’ makes me sound all noble and pompously!” Rabé’s smile was short-lived. “I wish you had come at a better time. Naboo is usually such a lovely place, but now with the invasion…” she trailed off sadly. Benjamin gave her a sympathetic look. He paid no attention to the matchmaking looks Carol was throwing his way. -----signature----- You'll have to buy him a sweater.
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NYCitygurl Title: Manager of SFFBC, C&G, NSWFF, and Icons Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 9/24/02 2:23pm Subject: RE: Much Ado About Whip Cream- A Star Wars/ Earth crossover (updated 9/24)
	Those were AWESOME!!!!! Love NYC -----signature----- I agree with RJ Officially Idri's Muse "Hat. We thought of authentic Native American headdress before we thought of hat."
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bobilll Registered: Aug '02	Date Posted: 9/24/02 3:53pm Subject: RE: Much Ado About Whip Cream- A Star Wars/ Earth crossover (updated 9/24)
	Thanks! anyone else? -----signature----- You'll have to buy him a sweater.
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bobilll Registered: Aug '02	Date Posted: 9/24/02 7:44pm Subject: RE: Much Ado About Whip Cream- A Star Wars/ Earth crossover (updated 9/24)
	uh, anyone? -----signature----- You'll have to buy him a sweater.
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Tinuviel_Jyana Registered: Mar '02	Date Posted: 9/24/02 8:29pm Subject: RE: Much Ado About Whip Cream- A Star Wars/ Earth crossover (updated 9/24)
	great post yet again... sorry i've not read sooner... been very busy with school dies from Darth Homework... while waiting for people to read your story... which i understand can be quite annoying when you want input, you can read my story i need more love on my story before i have encouragement enough to put more up... ok i'm bad with shameless plugs... the link is in my signature if you're interested. -----signature----- She, Nemesis (possible AU, Obi/OC, pre TPM) - http://boards.theforce.net/Before_the_Saga/b10475/18888720/?2 - Hiatus
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Monica_Skywalker Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 9/24/02 9:10pm Subject: RE: Much Ado About Whip Cream- A Star Wars/ Earth crossover (updated 9/24)
	Awesome! They get to go along with the Queen! I would've replied sooner, but I had after-school sports, and I got home just a few hours ago. ~Monica~ -----signature----- Proud Anakin lover See profile for links to fics!
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bobilll Registered: Aug '02	Date Posted: 9/25/02 2:53pm Subject: RE: Much Ado About Whip Cream- A Star Wars/ Earth crossover (updated 9/24)
	i read your story, tinuviel, and it was really good! i posted some comments there. i know what you mean by darth homework, argh, the teachers are loading us with projects! thanks for reading, monica! yeah, they get to go with the queen! too bad we don't get to go, too! thanks for replying, guys! this next post is kinda short, but, argh, too much evil homework! ~~~~ Carol scratched her neck. This fighter suit was itchy! Looking over at Benjamin’s smug look, she resisted an urge to cuff him in the head. Okay, she had to give him credit for convincing the queen to let them in their entourage, but it was getting to his head! After all, this was far from over, they had to go to battle! Benjamin, however, was not thinking of his success back in the holding cell, but rather that handmaiden, Rabé. He had read about her in some Star Wars novel, and remembered from the movie her accent. But he had never seen her face until now. Ben smiled as he thought of her face, so smooth and perfect, even under the hood. And her accent! It was so rich and musical! He wished he could hear that accent all day. Snap out of it, Benjamin! He scolded himself. After all, this is just a dream! It’s not like you’ll ever really get a chance to know her! Carol approached him from behind, interrupting his thoughts. “So what happens now?” she asked. Benjamin turned around and shrugged. “Stick close to the queen, I guess. When the Federation invades, we have to make sure we’re with her, or we won’t get onto the ship to Tatooine.” “In which case we’ll be led into the camps where we’ll die in our sleep,” Carol finished grimly. However, neither one of them had much time to lament, as the sound of laser fire rang through the hall. -----signature----- You'll have to buy him a sweater.
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