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Jane Jinn Registered: Jan '00	Date Posted: 11/26/03 2:31am Subject: Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition 5, November 2003 - Date Edited: 11/26/03 2:45am (1 edits total) Edited By: Jane Jinn
	PAGE I Story Reviews Before the Saga Tales of a Jedi, Volume 1 by red_rose_knight Era: pre-TPM Status: in progress Summary: The first in a series of short stories on the life of Ben’al Houk, a Jedi who live more than 1100 years before the events of TPM. This story is about how he came into possession of the legendary lightsaber, the Prak’sha, and earned the title of Sith killer. Reviewer 1: Rating: Excellent Comments: The story begins quietly. The peace and tranquility of the Jedi Temple, written in lovely vivid detail, seems to permeate the air as the young initiates learn about the history of the Jedi Order. Ben'al Houk, the greatest swordsman of his age, is introduced; mysteries and questions surround his tale but the current-day Jedi know little. The story changes quickly as we are thrust into the sinister past. Ben'al and his Master are fighting for their lives, against Sith and Dark Jedi. But it is more than just good against evil. These Jedi are not the quiet, focused agents of the Force; rather they seem almost aggressive, killing with more than a little enjoyment, beheading and bisecting their foes with relish. The change between past and present members of the Jedi Order is almost ominous and sizzlingly clear. And Ben'al Houk is at the heart of it all. Quote: For some Jedi, the Force guided them to the healing arts, others to diplomacy. For Ben’al it was the lightsaber. He was a living weapon and Jedi High Council knew this and used him. “I agree, he has his flaws,” Girn replied, burying his hands into the billowing sleeves of his cloak. He also knew, that there was great potential in the young man to be the source of great things. “When he overcomes these flaws, I foresee he will become a great Jedi Knight.” “When?” Horus huffed. “You mean if his arrogance does not kill him first.” ===== Reviewer 2: Rating: Good Comments: The author starts the tale of Ben’al Houk with an incident in which Sith and dark Force-users attack a gathering of politicians, killing most of them and kidnapping the Chancellor. Five Jedi are also present, and fight back, but the outcome is not yet certain. The characterizations are rich and complex, and there’s lots of action. Quote: Girn shook his head at the thought of another addition to his padawan’s list of faults. “He has much to learn about tact,” came evenly spoken words. “Unfortunately, it is something I fear he will not come by as easily as his saber skill. His arrogance blinds him to others.” There was a brief pause as he watched Amare storm away. “But I do believe, his intentions were true with her. He just handled it poorly.” ***** To Skin a Gundark by Mistress_Renata Era: pre-TPM Status: in progress Summary: Rendell Trett is a Jedi, sworn to uphold the laws of the Republic. But when the laws are unjust, how can he uphold them and follow the Jedi code? A Padawan can’t do much to change the Galaxy…can he? Reviewer 1: Rating: Excellent! Comments Very original story line that deals with a subject not often tackled in Star Wars fanfic; slavery. The two original characters, Padawan Rendell Trett and Master Myron, are wonderfully drawn and very endearing. Quote Trett tasted the pwert egg. Myron kept a straight face as the boy's eyes widened in dismay. But he managed to keep a calm demeanor, and swallowed what was in his mouth without gagging, before discreetly hiding the rest under a leaf of some green vegetable and trying a slice of spiced, roast snorg. Ah, good boy. ===== Reviewer 2: Rating: Excellent Comments: There is nothing bad that I can say about this story. Plot, characters, storyline, writing - everything is excellent. The main character's conflict between feeling and duty is gripping, and the author does a superb job of letting the reader feel it. Likewise, his master's guidance towards his padawan is well done, reminiscent of Obi-Wan's "point of view" remark to Luke in ROTJ. Quote: Slavery was evil. But as far as the Republic was concerned, it was legal. And had been for hundreds of years. And the Jedi served the Republic. They might be upholding the law. But this didn't seem like justice to him. He had been in the Jedi Order for fourteen years, and had tried desperately to follow the Jedi Code. But this...was this worth it? Was this what he wanted to spend his life doing? Defending slavery? +++++ The Saga Distant Echoes of a Fragmented Mind by LadyPadme Era: time of AOTC Status: in progress Summary: What if the woman Leia knew as her mother was not Padme? What if Padme's fate was very different from what we all believed? Reviewer 1: Rating: Good Comments: A very different take on the relationship between Padme and an already established Darth Vader. Dialogue well written even though some of the dialogue is stilted. Quote: A child? Our child! When and where? The thoughts echo resoundingly through Vader's brain, obliterating all other thoughts but one last one of anguish and betrayal. Why, Padme? Why didn't you tell me? ===== Reviewer 2: Rating Very Good Comments The Dark Lord, Darth Vader, stumbles across a young catatonic woman that bears a remarkable resemblance to his lost Padme. But she neither speaks nor reacts, seemingly willing to obey any command but without an intellegence behind it, almost droid-like in her manner. When Vader realizes that it is indeed Padme and that she has given birth recently, he is frantic to bring her back from a self-inflicted mindlessness. Unfortunately, the more he presses, the worse she becomes. Vader must force her into the real world and learn her secrets at all costs. Quote And of course, Padmé herself cannot answer the questions that plague those around her. Her true self is buried so deeply within layers of subconsciousness that there is little chance it will surface without damaging her irreparably. The lightning display threatened to trip certain locks that have hidden her true self; threatened to unleash the pain and the memories that she does not want to face. The outer, catatonic Padmé lays perfectly still within the scanner. She has paid a terrible price for the peace she enjoys. She has paid for it with her very identity. The emotionless Padmé will fight at any cost to keep that other, dangerous psyche buried away. ***** Interpretations of the Force by padawan lunetta Era: one year pre-AOTC Status: in progress Summary: Two Jedi apprentices with very different views on the Force are thrown together unexpectedly when slavers start picking up their goods in the lower levels of Coruscant. Reviewer 1: Rating: Very good Comments: Two Jedi Padawans, Corellian Valin Halcyon and Coruscant's Helaine Trillium, are kidnapped by slavers along with two others (unbeknownst to her, one is her non-Jedi brother) in the lower levels of Coruscant. They need to work together to escape, their very different views on family and the Force hindering their plans. Their Masters are also frantically trying to find them but the trail is getting cold. Quote: Lanelle bit back a sigh, not wanting to think about the situation in to which Helaine had been thrown. Her brother was there, someone she was never supposed to meet, and the closest thing she had to supervision was a Corellian apprentice, known to be a bit of troublemaker, especially with her padawan. Not that she didn't trust her padawan...but a Halcyon... ===== Reviewer 2: Rating Good Comments Padawan Lunetta's characters are well fleshed out. The Horns come across well, and she lets us see the differences between Jedi in the Corellian system, compared to those elsewhere. Quote "Nice cover name, by the way. Think I should change mine to Tri?" "Quiet," Valin said, elbowing her. "I had to think quick... and I kind of like it. Hal." "Don't you think it's a little too exotic?" Helaine teased, raising an eyebrow. Valin shrugged. "It's no Bail, but I think a popular name would be more suspicious anyway." +++++ Beyond the Saga: A Pilot’s Tale (A Star Wars / Lord of the Rings crossover by Jade243 Era: NJO Status: in progress Summary: Wes and Hobbie and Wedge and Tycho have problems with a hyperspace jump and end up in Middle Earth. Reviewer 1: Rating: Good Comments: This story should appeal to everyone who likes both Star Wars and Lord of the Rings. The story is still at a very early stage, making it difficult to critique, but seems to be off to a good start. Kudos to the author for her efforts with the Elvish languages. Quote: Definitely their leader, Wes thought of this new arrival. “Alagos, leithio i dhîr; tirech ú-charnatha mín.” No matter what culture, Wes could recognize a dressing down by a superior. He had plenty of experience with that as well. When the first man looked back at him, Wes shot him a sympathetic look while he felt and saw the weapons trained on him were lowered. The newcomer now brought his focus to rest on the pilot. The man bowed slightly, placing his right hand over his heart and extending it toward Wes. “Mae govannen, mellon. Legolas Thranduilion eneth nín.” ===== Reviewer 2: Rating: Good Comments: This is a great start, but sadly, the author has announced that the story will no longer be continued. Wes and Hobbie, and Wedge and Tycho are ripped from hyperspace due to causes unknown, and land on Middle Earth. Wes meets up first with giant spiders, and is then saved by Legolas and company. Strangely, Legolas does not speak Basic, and Wes doesn’t speak Sindarin, though he’s starting to pick up a bit from situations, such as “Yrch!” when they later come across Orcs. The author has made a wonderful attempt at reproducing Sindarin, and provides translations at the end of each post. Quote: “At least I’m experienced in crashes. Surely by now I have enough skill with them to get us down relatively intact.” “ ‘Relatively’?” Wes scowled as he heard his voice crack a bit. “What do you mean ‘relatively’?” “Just what I said. I’ve only had a one or two crashes where all systems were out like this.” “Great.” “Look on the bright side though. Wedge may not be as skilled at crashing as I am.” “This is supposed to encourage me?!” ***** Renewal by Xaara Era: post-ROTJ Status: complete Summary: A series of Myn/Falynn viggies set during the events of X-wing: Wraith Squadron by Aaron Allston. Myn is still struggling with the destruction of Talon Squadron; Falynn offers him friendship and support. Reviewer 1: Rating: Very good Comments: Xaara's portrayal of the characters is dead on accurate. She uses the present tense in her viggie, allowing us to feel everything with her characters as they experience it. Get ready for an emotional rollercoaster ride. I would definately recommend this fic to anyone who loves the Wraith characters. Quote: "A squadron's a part of you," he says. "It's like you're equal parts of a greater machine. Nothing functions with eleven out of twelve parts missing." "Not many machines function with any of their parts missing," Falynn counters, "but most stop and wait until someone fixes them. They don't grind on until they're beyond repair. They also don't try to shoot the first mechanic who comes near them." ===== Reviewer 2: Rating: Very good Comments: The author shows us deep insights into the characters of Myn and Falynn – it’s hard to believe that we’re NOT reading Aaron Allston’s work. The last vignette, where Myn is getting over Falynn’s death, is particularly powerful. Quote: Falynn shakes her head, then adds, "Would it help if I told you I've wanted to do that for a long time?" "What, kiss me or force me out of my universe and into everyone else's?" She smiles at that. "Both." -----signature----- Mostly retired now Just making the occasional guest appearance
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Jane Jinn Registered: Jan '00	Date Posted: 11/26/03 2:33am Subject: RE: Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition 5, November 2003 - Date Edited: 11/26/03 2:43am (2 edits total) Edited By: Jane Jinn
	PAGE II Vignette Reviews: by Amidala_Skywalker Moon and Blood by Lady Moonbeam Era: Before the Saga, Status: Vignette, complete Summary: Shmi, in the nine months before Anakin, on love, loss, and being surrounded by things she can't understand. Comments: This vignette creates an interesting environment in which Shmi could have lived before Anakin’s birth. The master of the house is neither cruel nor tyrannical, but yet he’s not quite a loving man. Nevertheless, the piece circles around Shmi, and to a minor extent, two other slaves. One thing I positively admire about Lady_Moobeam’s work is her ability to change her style of writing, which changes the speed and tone of the text. This vignette itself covers over nine months, but is very languid in pace. The author successfully crafts that illusion. The italic text which cuts through every scene is very fitting and encourages the reader along. Another favourite is Shmi’s reference to “Son of the Suns” and how she holds the unborn child in such high esteem. It is almost like the coming of this child signals salvation. That is also combined with Shmi’s chilling interpretation of the blood shed a day before Anakin’s birth. While I find it unusual for a child that would be a saviour to be born once blood has been spilled, it is completely believable in Anakin’s case because he is a balance between the Dark and the Light. There is honestly so much to this vignette. Another character I haven’t mentioned, but one that deserves a compliment, is Talos. He is a fellow slave who falls in love with our male character. This is a simple slave who doesn’t have an educated upbringing, but knows the gift of love. Shmi, unfortunately, realises how to get past her inability to love someone too late. In summary, this is a thoroughly enjoyable vignette that is a must-read. Rating: A well-deserved 9/10. ==== Simple Words by LianaMara Era: The Saga Status: Vignette, complete Summary: Obi-Wan deals with his cheeky young padawan. Comments: We don’t often see many humour vignettes that could plausibly fit into the SW universe without compromising its style and integrity. LianaMara pulls it off in this adorable vignette, which will leave you shaking your head at Anakin’s antics. Even without Anakin’s spunky attitude in this piece, Obi-Wan is already having problems – and growing a few grey hairs no doubt. As one of the readers commented, Obi-Wan is trying so hard to be the proper Jedi and a very conscientious teacher. Anakin, on the other hand, is just having a good time. He’s not trying to be the Chosen One realising his destiny – well, we couldn’t see a ten year old in Vader’s suit, could we? Are you sure? The entire vignette is centred around Anakin attempting to get Obi-Wan to admit that he has cursed before, and has therefore violated the code. Without giving too much away, Anakin is his trickster self, ruining the harmony of the Jedi Temple under the guise of that innocent grin and twinkling eyes. I have to admit that a few sentences in this vignette had been laughing, especially when it came to Obi-Wan’s description of his childhood. It does seem like our dedicated Jedi knows a few pranks of his own! In summary, LianaMara has created a wonderful vignette that properly expresses the “family feeling” that resonates throughout the entire Star Wars saga. This is one piece that would be perfect to read if you’re in need of comfort and a smile. Rating A bite-sized 8/10 ===== Receptivity by Tilly Era: NJO Status: Vignette, complete Summary: Luke and Mara’s wedding reception Comments: Here is another fine vignette that gives you that extra boost once you have read it. Tilly is a new author on these boards, and already she is carving a fine path for herself. One of my favourite things about this vignette is its ability to combine wit with humour. Many of the conversations exchanged between our two couples – Luke/Mara and Han/Leia – are very light-hearted and the characterisation is spot on. However, we can’t say that we have ever seen Leia get drunk before. On the subject of drunkenness, I especially liked the conversation Leia and Mara had outside, despite Leia’s tendency to trail off in the middle of her important speech. There we so many little details in this vignette which perfectly matched the personalities of each character. For example, Luke decided to wear dark blue to the wedding, which is one of the nearest colours to black. I could continue to point out the little, unique details, but suffice to say, the piece did Star Wars justice. In summary, it was lovely done. I hope to see more from this talented author. Rating: A smooth 6/10 +++++ Author Profile by obi-ew In this issue of the newsletter, we are taking a look at another fresh face to the boards. Darth_Leia_6669 first wandered her way to the boards in April of this year. On a desperate search for Episode 3 spoilers, she found the site and eventually the fanfiction boards. Chosing a user name that combined her two favorite OT characters along with numbers that are a long standing joke with her real life friends, she settled in nicely and agreed to answer a few questions for us. How did you get interested in Star Wars fan fiction? A) By seeing it here. This was my introduction to the world of fan fiction, and what I saw had me in awe. The support is just incredible, and the other authors are amazing. And having written most of my life, I saw this as a great chance to improve my own skills. Where did the idea come from to mix Star Wars with the anime genre? A) Ever since I began watching anime, I had envisioned Star Wars done in that genre. Most of the styles would compliment SW quite well, and so much more of the story could come out. As I was beginning my story, Shards of the Heart, I realized that I needed a background for my OC's, so I decided to use the characters from Ruroni Kenshin. There were many things from RK that I was able to incorporate into the Star Wars universe quite easily, and it has been fun and frustrating at the same time. But that's the beauty of art! Do you have a preference as far as the type of characters you use? SW canon or your own? A) Right now I'm trying to keep my OC's down since I have so many cross-over characters. I am more comfortable writing my own characters, but I'm finding canon are becoming easier as well. But really, I don't have a preference. Where does inspiration come from? Other writers, films, ect.? A) One of my biggest inspirations has been Jim Morrison, mostly his poems such as those found on An American Prayer or the epic poem Celebration of the Lizard. Music is also a big inspiration, and if I can't seem to get the emotions of a scene, I'll find a song, or album, that reflects what I want, and go from there. Films that inspire me include Star Wars, Strange Days, and The Crow. Authors would include Anne McCaffrey, and Ann Rice. When I first started reading here, I was inspired by three authors in particular to try my hand at a fic. Those were Darth-Lex, obi-ew, and Princess1. Any advice you would like to offer any writers out there who are just starting out and slow to get readers? A) Don't get discouraged. Just keep writing and constantly work on improving yourself. Nothing happens overnight. Who is your favorite character and why? A) Anakin Skywalker. I can relate to him in several ways, and I think that he's largely misunderstood. He is a very complex character. I do know that I'll cry when he's horribly disfigured and becomes Vader! Thanks for taking the time to tell us about yourself! Everyone go check out her wonderfully original story Shards of the Heart. +++++ Showcase: Less-Popular Genres “Knight of the Old Republic” fanfic: Old Ghosts by Menlu +++++ Locked Thread Recommendation for November Defiant Acts by Herman Snerd Teaser: Perhaps hundreds of years ago when there were thousands of Jedi across the galaxy people might have casually forgotten about the power wielded by a person wearing such robes, but those days were no more. Since the founding of the New Republic, the Jedi Order had resolutely struggled to re-establish itself, but even after all these years, seeing a Jedi was a rare enough occurrence that people still stopped to take a second look. Accompanying Eirlana Marcano on her visit to the market district, I attracted more attention than she did. No easy feat considering the beauty under my protection. It wasn’t so much her physical appearance, although her features were flawless, as it was the way she carried herself. Certainly her golden hair, diamond blue eyes, and porcelain skin were to be admired, but these attributes only served to accentuate Eirlana’s true beauty. Eirlana had a poise and calm self-assurance rarely granted to one so young. Though only nineteen standard years of age, she had a poignant grace which women twice her age still struggled to achieve. And whether at the gala ball following her father’s installment to office, or bargaining with merchants about the price of their wares, she never seemed uncomfortable or out of place. I admit it saddened me a bit to know that this would be our last day together. ++++ Plot Bunnies Before the Saga We’ve read lots of stories where Obi-Wan has left the Jedi for whatever reason, only to come in contact again with Qui-Gon eventually, and return. But what if it were Qui-Gon who went AWOL from the Jedi? After Xanatos’ fall, full of grief and self-recrimination, Qui-Gon lives as a hermit on an outlying planet somewhere. Perhaps his wounds are starting to heal, but he’s stubborn and maybe a bit worried that the Jedi wouldn’t want him back after such a long time. He’s probably turned into a crusty old man. Obi-Wan, not chosen by any other master because of his temper, has been sent to an inhospitable planet (not necessarily Bandomeer) to work in the Agri-Corps. One day, he comes across the old hermit. Neither of them know that the other is a Jedi, and gradually, a kind of friendship forms between them. Then there is a crisis; the two have to work together to save others. They discover each other’s secrets, and Obi-Wan manages to convince Qui-Gon to return to the Temple. He’s not expecting anything else and is surprised when Qui-Gon decides to take him as his padawan. Variation: Obi-Wan is chosen by someone else. They come into contact with Qui-Gon during a “situation,” where Obi-Wan’s new master gets killed. The crusty old man takes young Obi-Wan under his wing and together they solve the situation. Enough of a friendship forms between them that Obi-Wan can discover that this hermit is actually a Jedi. Qui-Gon eventually decides to return of his own free will, or maybe just to make sure that Obi-Wan makes it back, and eventually comes back to full service in the Jedi with a new padawan at his side. ===== The Saga During the duel between Vader and Luke on Bespin, Vader remarks that "Obi-Wan has taught you well." What if Luke thinks about Yoda and Dagobah at exactly that moment, and Vader is able to see his thoughts? Vader decides to make a side trip to Dagobah before returning to Coruscant and the Emperor. ===== Beyond the Saga What if Jaina came across one of the Jedi that survived the Jedi Purges? How would this Jedi of the Old Republic come to terms with the events that have occurred and what would the Jedi do when he/she comes face to face with Luke Skywalker, son of the ill-fated Anakin Skywalker, the one who turned to the darkside and hunted the Jedi out to wipe them from the Galaxy? What would Luke's reaction to this be? How would the “Old” Jedi react to Jaina and the other “New” Jedi? -----signature----- Mostly retired now Just making the occasional guest appearance
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Jane Jinn Registered: Jan '00	Date Posted: 11/26/03 2:37am Subject: RE: Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition 5, November 2003 - Date Edited: 11/26/03 3:37am (3 edits total) Edited By: Jane Jinn
	PAGE III Grammar Tip of the Month You’re is a contraction meaning “you are.” You’re a wonderful writer! Your is a possessive form meaning that something belongs to you. Your fic is wonderful! They’re is contraction meaning “they are.” They’re wonderful at replying! Their is a possessive form meaning that something belongs to them. Their responses in my fic brighten my day! It’s is a contraction meaning “it is.” It’s got to be here somewhere. Its is a possessive form meaning that something belongs to it. The droid extended its arm. +++++ Writing Tip of the Month Dangling participles: A present participle is a verb ending in -ing, and is called dangling when the subject of the -ing verb and the subject of the sentence do not agree. An example is “Walking back home yesterday, a tree nearly fell on my head.” One way to tell whether the participle is dangling is to put the phrase with the participle right after the subject of the sentence: "A tree, walking back home yesterday, nearly fell on my head" doesn't sound right. Since when do trees walk? Dangling participles can ruin an intensely emotional scene by conjuring up unintentionally ludicrous images in the reader’s head. “Passionately kissing his wife, his clothes hit the bedroom floor.” Wow, that’s some clothing! It can kiss and hit the floor at the same time. +++++ Beta-Reading Tip of the Month From the article “Beta Readers” by Nitid, at the FanFiction Archive What to look for: Here's a mini checklist to the types of things you should be looking for as a beta reader. There are many more, but this is a good place to start. Opening. Does the first sentence get your interest and make you want to read further? Conflict. Are there too many or not enough conflicts? Plot. Was the main plot clear and believable? Did the plot/subplots move fast enough to keep the reader's attention? Was there a plot/subplot left unresolved? Is the plot too predictable? Setting. Are the descriptions of scenes too wordy or do they transport you into the Star Wars universe? Characterization. Was the characterization accurate and consistent? Could the story have been improved by adding more details about their preferences, their relations to other people, habits, beliefs, etc? Are there enough sensory descriptions so that the reader can easily sense what is happening to the main character? Dialogue. Was the dialogue in character? Is there too much dialogue? Not enough? Could you sense the conflict, attitudes, and intentions of each character in their dialogue without the author telling you of these directly? Point of View. Did the story change between first person and third person POV too much? Does the maturity of the narrative voice suit the story? Show vs. Tell. Did you get a chance to interpret what the characters were feeling or did the author just tell you directly? Was there too many instances of words like "very", "much", "really", "great", or "nice" when a more detailed description would have been more colorful? Grammar & Spelling. Were there any typos? Did the author use too many exclamation points? Does the author know the difference between "their" and "they're"? Read the rest of the article here! Another great article about beta-reading was written by Melyanna and is called Dealing with Red Ink: Writing With a Beta +++++ Humour Read the caption! When he entered the cave on Dagobah, Anakin was finally forced to confront his worst nightmare. See the picture! +++++ Forum News by Amidala_Skywalker To begin, I would like to once again thank Jane Jinn and her newsletter staff for making this resource possible. Without the time and devotion of these members, there would be no story reviews, writing tips, articles, and the list goes on and on. Thank you all. Activity has been slow on JC recently in the wake of the Halloween celebrations. In case you missed the entire week, the competitions went over smoothly with more than a handful of VIP winners. I apologise for not copying the names of the winners, but you know who you are. After more than a few bumps, the “Ghastly Fan Fiction Challenge” is due to come to a closure soon. We didn’t expect it to run this long, though it should have been expected considering the amount of entries that were submitted. In the future, competitions will not continue to run this long. We expect this only to be a one-off occurrence. Talking about competitions, Christmas/Kwanzaa/Hannukah/Ramadan/etc is soon approaching. I believe we have at least one challenge set in stone, but so far nothing else has been discussed. After all, we still have quite some time to go until the festivities begin. As some of you may or may not have noticed, the Beta Reader Index has now become a sticky at the top of this forum. The purpose of this is to draw the attention of authors towards this good resource. Often with normal threads, they are passed over. It is with hope that the Beta Reader sticky will help as many people as possible. Recently, in a Communications Mod Squad Update and a thread in the WR, there was talk of a Fan Fiction banner contest. That contest has been approved. Like last time, I will be posting the “mother competition thread” in the WR and advertising the competition in Communications for non-Fan Fiction visiting banner-makers. At the moment, the plan is to create banners that are more suitable to the forums in which they are hosted. This does not mean, however, that the banners will fall into the usual forum stereotypes (Obi-Wan, Qui-Gon and the Jedi Temple for “Before the Saga”). I don’t have a clue when this competition will be conducted, but I am hesitant to start it too close to Christmas or to wait until the New Year. This next paragraph is more newsletter-based news than anything, but I felt that it needed to be included here. For those who did not read through the comments on the last newsletter thread, it has been organised for the newsletter to be linked on the TF.N main site. This is a great opportunity for all involved. Let us hope that this link creates more traffic for Fan Fiction on a whole. Roughly two weeks ago, two extremely organised indexes were started. Those indexes are now run by a handful of people. If you do not dabble in NJO, the indexes are the Jaina/Jag index and the Jaina/Kyp index. Before, both indexes were combined into one, but there was a growing need to split the two into separate entities. I would like to thank the members of these groups for working with me to create these directories. You have all been doing a wonderful job. On a more depressing note, it is with much sorrow that TenelKaJedi, a member of our Fan Fiction community, is very ill and close to death. On behalf of the entire forum, I would like to wish TenelKaJedi and her family clear skies. You’re in our thoughts and prayers. Words of support can be expressed here. Lastly, I would like to plug our local review challenge, which is located here. As someone pointed out, there have been more posts on the “Authors’ Rant” thread than there has been on the “Review Challenge” thread. Let’s go about changing that. In conclusion, I know I have forgotten something, but nevertheless, I hope this section has been useful to you. +++++ Newsletter News Jedi Hood has stepped down as a reviewer for the Newsletter due to time constraints. We’d like to thank him for his hard work, and we’re sorry to see him go. If you would like to be a reviewer for the Newsletter, or otherwise contribute to it, please PM me (Jane Jinn) and let me know. +++++ Credits: Reviewers: Dianethx DarthLeia6669 Derisa Ollamhin InyriForge obi_ew Jedi Hood Vignettes and Forum News Amidala_Skywalker Newsletter Organizer: Jane Jinn +++++ Links to previous Newsletters Fan Fiction Newsletter 1, March 2003 Fan Fiction Review Newsletter #2, April 2003 Fan Fiction Review Newsletter, Edition 3, May 2003 Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition 4, October 2003 +++++ Advertisements by dianethx *Estate Sale* - Owner forced to sell his Jedi Scum Collection!!! Unique one-of-a-kind pieces! Must be seen to be believed!!! Here are just a few of the awesome objects for sale.... Pre-owned Force collars - Slightly used; some battered but cleaned, others still have the patina of age and entrails of dead criminal. Please be sure to indicate which type you want! Comes with Certificates of Authenticity and a complete list of the traitorous Jedi demons that wore these unusual items. Used Lightsabers - What kid wouldn't want one of these? With the holidays coming up, these should be tops on your shopping list. In silver, gold or durasteel. Once owned by the corrupt fiends of the galaxy, now it can be yours. Definitely a must have. Does not include crystals. Padawan Braids - A showpiece for any collection. Issued in a wide variety of colors. Some with skin or fur still attached! Mounted on shimmersilk, these framed pieces have a bronzed plaque with the name of the Padawan traitor, date of death and a nifty profile of their executioner. A must buy! Act quickly to get these extraordinary and never-to-be-offered-again pieces!!! *Call 1-800-Emperor now!!! You won't be sorry!!!* That’s all for this month, and thanks for reading! -----signature----- Mostly retired now Just making the occasional guest appearance
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obaona Registered: Jun '02	Date Posted: 11/26/03 2:48am Subject: RE: Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition 5, November 2003
	Those advertisements are cute, but slightly horrifying. Excellent newsletter. I finally know what a dangling modifier is, though I'm also quite certain I'll forget it by tomorrow morning. Oh well. Also, I think having 'plot bunnies' in there is particularly cruel. I now have the urge to write the 'Before the Saga' one, 'cause it's so good and I can just imagine all the things I could do with it . . . Nice job, everyone. -----signature----- MS Word is designed by sadists with masochists in mind. - teh atty my recent Atton (KOTOR2) fic: http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/30335989
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Amidala_Skywalker Title: Manager Emeritus Registered: Jul '01	Date Posted: 11/26/03 2:50am Subject: RE: Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition 5, November 2003
	Jane and newsletter staff -- Yet again you have produced a fabulous issue. Very entertaining and helpful! Good reviewing and tips! You all continue to amaze. Thanks! Am -----signature----- Amsié, Crest of Handmaidens . ___ TF.N Archive Reviewer ___ Battlestar Galactica is the new way.
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Xaara Registered: Jun '02	Date Posted: 11/26/03 3:54am Subject: RE: Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition 5, November 2003
	This is truly a wonderful addition (yet again) to the Boards. Excellent job, everyone who reviewed, interviewed, or just did the dirty behind-the-scenes work. I can't say much except I'm impressed, and I can't wait until the next newsletter comes out! -----signature----- My Ramblings: http://www.livejournal.com/users/xaara/ My lil bro/sis: Flyboy_7/Wyn_Fel Wyomé, Handmaiden of the Crest
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dianethx Registered: Mar '02	Date Posted: 11/26/03 4:03am Subject: RE: Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition 5, November 2003
	Great job, everyone. I especially liked the grammar and writing tips. I never knew what a dangling participle was, but apparently, I've been using them...oopps! And those plot bunnies are really calling me...must resist....arggghhhh! Looking forward to the next one. -----signature----- Betrayal - http://boards.theforce.net/s/b1/10935143 updated 11/2/09 jedidas3's Master Merlin - Diplomatic Immunity - http://boards.theforce.net/nswff/b10808/30459852
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obi_ew Registered: Apr '02	Date Posted: 11/26/03 5:55am Subject: RE: Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition 5, November 2003
	Everything was brought together so beautifully once again Jane. -----signature----- In Loving Memory Of CC Price of Courage- Obi/Whie/Luke- http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/20124958/?37 Updated 4/20 Finally!!
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Shaindl Registered: Jun '02	Date Posted: 11/26/03 8:02am Subject: RE: Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition 5, November 2003
	No, Diane! Don't resist the plot bunnies! Great job, all of you - you're doing a fantastic job with a huge project. Can't wait to see more. Shaindl -----signature----- Halfway Moment - Qui, Obi, Anakin AU - http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/20110461/?0 - UPDATED JULY 3!
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DarthIshtar Title: Former CR Registered: Mar '01	Date Posted: 11/26/03 8:41am Subject: RE: Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition 5, November 2003
	Jane, that was great, as well as all you contributors! I'm going to go read some of the stories mentioned! -----signature----- "I feel like a more down-to-earth Pink 5 when I'm writing Leah. Same attitude, less lip gloss." ~Me on how to get in the right mindset for Twilight fanfic.
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Knight-Ander Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 11/26/03 8:56am Subject: RE: Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition 5, November 2003
	Hopefully this should straighten out my "it's" "its" problems. -----signature----- The Part He's Looking For - A pre-ANH Luke vignette http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/30044606/p1/
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DarthIshtar Title: Former CR Registered: Mar '01	Date Posted: 11/26/03 8:58am Subject: RE: Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition 5, November 2003
	My english teacher in 9th grade threatened us with severe punishment if we ever got the two confused. (We didn't, because she also was my Horror Fiction Writing teacher and knew how to make us suffer!) -----signature----- "I feel like a more down-to-earth Pink 5 when I'm writing Leah. Same attitude, less lip gloss." ~Me on how to get in the right mindset for Twilight fanfic.
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AlrikFassbauer Registered: Apr '03	Date Posted: 11/26/03 10:03am Subject: RE: Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition 5, November 2003
	Once again I'm impressed ! thumbs up -----signature----- "May the Enya equivalent of the Force be with you." (Uncle Darthvyd)
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obaona Registered: Jun '02	Date Posted: 11/26/03 1:57pm Subject: RE: Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition 5, November 2003
	pops in Has anyone else seen this on the front page of TFN? points at Jane Jinn and company You're famous! pops out -----signature----- MS Word is designed by sadists with masochists in mind. - teh atty my recent Atton (KOTOR2) fic: http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/30335989
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JDH3 Registered: Mar '03	Date Posted: 11/26/03 2:33pm Subject: RE: Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition 5, November 2003
	WOW! To Jane Jinn and the rest of the staff congrats on another wonderfully done edition! Great stuff period is about all I can say. Thanks for all the hard work you guys and gals put into this. JD. -----signature----- Winner of a Golden Ewok™ with Corellian Bloodstripes. Uncontrollable (LOTF AU): http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/29523035/r29532300/ The Future is Now: A Clone Wars Tale: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/29270805/p1
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Mar17swgirl Registered: Dec '00	Date Posted: 11/26/03 2:44pm Subject: RE: Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition 5, November 2003
	@ the ad about the Padawan braids. Great newsletter, guys. Kudos to all involved. -----signature----- "He was caught in Alicante with a sheep." "Flagrante, Chris, in flagrante." "Yeah... flagrante."
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