Author Topic: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition VII -- February, 2004
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14391_Aaron Allston  (A&A)
Date Posted: 2/28/04 11:56pm Subject: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition VII -- February, 2004 - Date Edited: 2/29/04 7:23pm (2 edits total) Edited By: FF_Newsletter_Editor
The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition VII
February, 2004




HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY FROM THE NEWSLETTER STAFF!



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Newsletter News:

It's that time again – time to drop by the Writers' Resource Forum to see what's happened here in the past month. We were busy this February – between the Winter Fan Fiction Awards and the Valentine's Day Challenge, the Newsletter staff was hard pressed to keep up with all the goings-on. We would love to create a middle-of-March newsletter with reviews for the Valentine's Day challenge entries. It's not a time-consuming job; in fact, how much time it takes is for the most part determined by how much time you're willing to spend. We also need general reviewers – we would like to review more of the excellent stories here on the Boards, but there just aren't enough of us to review as well as write the rest of the newsletter. If you're interested in reviewing, finding stories for us to review, writing an article, conducting an interview, or if you just want to make a suggestion or comment, please PM FF_Newsletter_Editor or Xaara. Your help would be much appreciated. happy

—The Editor

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Recommended Reading:

Before the Saga:

Always and Forever by Lorax

What happened between Adi and Siri the day Siri left the order for her undercover mission that made even the Jedi think that she had turned rogue?

Reviewer 1:

Rating: Very Good

Comments:

This story fills in the background on a Jedi Apprentice/comic book character - Siri Tachi. Sent from the Temple on an undercover mission to expose a criminal, Krayn, Siri pretends to have left the Order and becomes a bounty hunter.

The writing is clear and crisp. One fight scene was especially well-written, both funny and easily pictured. The story line is also logical and thoughfully done. Everything makes sense including the characters and their motivations. A good read.

Quote:

"I am not a child anymore. Nobody orders me around. Not you, not the Council, nobody."

"Jedi follow orders Siri. It's part of our way of life." Adi said warningly.

"Then maybe I don't want to be a Jedi."

Every eye in the room was on the pair now.

"Being Jedi doesn't mean anything anymore. All it means is that you're authorized to lug around a lightsaber and kill people in the name of justice. I'm sick of living like that! We are all puppets and the Senate is the strings! Don't you see that?! We are so much more powerful than them, why live with their stupid laws?"

Adi frowned. "If the Council could hear you-"

"Damn the Council!" Siri bit out, hating herself as she said it, and began to turn away.


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Reviewer 2:

Rating: Very Good

Comments:

This is a wonderful start on an intensely emotional and character-driven story. Siri Tachi, a young Jedi Apprentice, convinces her fellow Jedi that she will leave the Jedi Order in a scene at the beginning that drew me into the story.

The characters are solid and realistic; the storyline is intriguing and suspenseful. So far, we have quite a few unanswered questions, such as what exactly Siri is doing, and what her motivations are. A highly recommended story.

Quote:

"Then you will join me." He looked her over with an appraising eye. "You will do well as my personal slave."

Her eyes narrowed into slits. "As your partner." She hissed softly, lethaly.

He laughed off her threat, gesturing vaguely to the shadows. Two armed men emerged, holding blaster rifles trained on her. His intelligent, crafty eyes glinted sharply as he spoke. "Slave capture is my business. I have turned it into a kind of art. Nobody ever escapes me alive. What makes you think you'll be any different?"


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Crash Course by Lilith Demodae

An OC story from the point of view of a young female swoop racer who, through a series of coincidences, meets a stranger who might or might not be everything he seems and becomes caught up in growing tensions between Coruscant's swoop gangs.

Rating: Excellent

Comments:

I love it when a story opens up an undiscovered portion of the Star Wars universe. Never have I seen a better example of this than Lilith’s wonderful story Crash Course.

The story revolves around Crash, a female member of one of Coruscant’s swoop gangs who serves as the group’s slicer. As she and another member of the gang are running from Coruscant police, she jumps off the swoop they’re riding and on to another that is piloted by a complete stranger. In this manner, she meets Mason Cade, new to town and looking to join up. As the gangs on Coruscant slowly build up to a big showdown involving themselves and the police, Crash must figure out just who Mason is, if she should trust or help him and figure out what is at the middle of the growing suspicion and animosity. Not to mention also figuring out her own life and what to do about the two men who are pulling at her attention – Mason and her lover, Shael.

The plot is complex and fascinating, combining elements of political thriller, adventure and romance into one immensely satisfying whole. The characters are fully realised, and I found myself wishing I could meet them in real life. As well, in many of the stories I’ve read in the past, authors have not been successful in writing alien species. Lilith accomplishes this by having a female Wookiee and a felinoid Trianii – each with their own different outlooks on life (I particularly liked Nash the Trianii’s advice to Crash on how to handle a spat with Shael: “Cuff your mate and then let him apologize”). Life in a swoop gang is also explained well. Finally, the story is written in Crash’s voice, and Lilith handles first-person writing deftly.

As I said, I love it when a story explores a previously unknown area of the GFFA. One last note: although it appears so at the beginning, it is not a completely OC driven story.

So go find Crash Course, and explore the underworld of the Star Wars universe and I promise you won’t be disappointed.

Quote:

My short, unpowered flight came to an abrupt halt when I landed on the back of another swoop. Unfortunately, I had some serious momentum when I hit. My helmet impacted against the one in front of me with a jolting thump and what had been a leisurely cruise became a frenzied scramble. I locked my legs tight around the chassis and flung my arms around the driver's waist while he fought desperately with the controls to stop our madly spinning descent.

The cop, though, was having problems of his own. Bulldog's ride no longer had my extra weight slowing it down and he began to edge ahead again, faster than the cop had been pulling up on us before. The cop had to decide very quickly whether to follow Bulldog or me. If I'd been the betting kind, I would have bet that he would ignore the passenger and go straight for the driver.

I was right. The cop bet on catching Bulldog and ignored us completely as my new driver and I plummeted from the sky.

Still chuckling to myself, I chinned through the various channels available on my comm until I hit acoustic. Pressing my helmet against the one in front of me, I spoke, my comm transmitting the message by touch and using his helmet itself as a speaker. I knew from experience that it would be muffled, but audible.

"It was good for me. Was it good for you?"


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Reviewer 2:

Rating: Excellent

Comments:

Told in a frank first-person POV, this story is all about the Coruscanti underground, and the sometimes-likeable, sometimes-unsavory sentients that populate it. Crash, the main character and narrator, is a likeable young woman whose wry voice lends her a great deal of credibility.

Mason (who is someone else as well – someone you'll almost certainly know…) serves both as a potential love interest and as a darker, complex character to contrast the live-by-the-seat-of-your-pants attitude most of the swoop racers seem to have. Shael, Crash's significant other, is another well-formed character, a man with strengths and weaknesses, attractive and unattractive qualities.

Lilith_Demodae has managed to write a seamless plot with living, breathing characters. Action, adventure, romance, and a highly recommended piece of work for anyone who enjoys a good story.

Quote:

"Why are you telling me this? I could be a cop."

I snorted. //Way ahead of you pal.// "You're not." He confirmed it a moment later by not denying it.

"What if I'm working for another gang?"

"You'd be asking different questions."

"You're awfully trusting."

"No, just a good judge of character."

"You're awfully confident, then."

"Got a right to be."

He shook his head and grimaced in frustration and I just snickered around my next mouthful of killa leaves. We passed the rest of the meal in companionable silence. Mason didn't ask me any more questions and I didn't give him any more smug or useless answers.


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The Saga:

Flotsam by Lurkalidth

What if Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan weren't Master and Apprentice on Naboo?

Reviewer 1:

Rating: Good

An engaging AU in which Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan’s paths diverged before the Battle of Naboo. Obi-Wan still went to Naboo, only this time with Mace, and defeated Darth Maul. This served as his Trials while Qui-Gon took on Anakin. In the present time, Obi-Wan now serves as a Council member, and has a Padawan he adopted after the boy’s Master was killed while on a mission. After years of thinking that he wasn’t wanted by anyone –especially Qui-Gon, whom he hasn’t talked to in years – Obi-Wan discovers that more than a dozen different masters wanted to take him as a Padawan. He goes to Yoda for an explanation and the troll tells him that the way in which most people have interpreted the Chosen One prophecy isn’t correct; Anakin is not the Chosen One, but the true Chosen One – and his anchor – are alive in their time…

The concept is original, and all the PT favourites are here: Obi-Wan, Qui-Gon, Anakin, Yoda, Mace, Dooku and various other minor characters. The OCs have been interesting – the inclusion of a Padawan with all the same doubts and fears as Obi-Wan is especially intriguing (I’ll be interested to see how Lurkalidth deals with that as the story progresses). The story is written in first person, and (so far) switches between Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon. It can take a few lines before you realise which one is speaking in a post, which might bother some people, but I don’t think that takes away from the story in the slightest. The characters are for the most part well done – I particularly liked how Qui-Gon is written and his slow realisation that perhaps he hasn’t treated Obi-Wan all that well.

Three things made me drop this from a very good to a good, all related to technical issues rather than plot or content, which means they’ll be relatively easy to fix. First, there are typos throughout the writing that distracted me. Second, every once in a while a word is thrown in that looks like it should be a real word, but isn’t. I went diving for my dictionary a few times after seeing something and thinking “I don’t think that’s a word, but I'd better make sure”. Connected to this is the fact that a couple of times words are used somewhat incorrectly, although you know what the author is saying. Finally, Yoda is a central character in the story and his syntax (such as it is, of course) isn’t always correct, at least to my ears (I even tried reading it aloud to see if it was only in my head that it wasn’t working).

All in all, this is an intriguing story, with an original plotline and mostly well-written characters. A beta reader with an eye for detail would do wonders for the typos and incorrect words, as well as tightening up the prose and helping with Yoda-speak. But the story is fun to read – go and find it now!

Quote:

"Nice try, but you weren't with him last time." Mace's eyes glitter their amusement. I don't understand how Master Windu earned a reputation for inscrutability, when his eyes telegraph his emotions.

"But you didn't ask me where I was last time, did you?" I banter back. "If it wasn't important enough then--"

He laughs first; score another point for me in our ongoing competition. "Touche. When you argue like that, you remind me of Qui--" He stops talking. Perhaps he sees me flinch at my former master's name. I don't want people to look for him in me; I wouldn't measure up with their expectations--I never did during my apprenticeship--so why disappoint them? …

What would it have been like if Mace Windu had Chosen me? … My mind aches at the possibilities: either we would have become an incredibly close master-padawan team, or he would have rejected me just like Master Jinn did.


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Reviewer 2:

Rating: Very Good

Comments:

This is a generally well-written and well-planned story. Though it starts off a little unsteadily, it gains momentum with each successive vignette, and it soon becomes a lot of fun to read.

The idea that Anakin is not the Chosen One, but that someone else is, makes the story unique and interesting. Qui-Gon is believable throughout the story, as is Obi-Wan. Overall, the piece is a good short read.

Quote:

"But Anakin has come so far," I protest.

Mace Windu shifts slightly in his chair. I recognize that set jaw from our creche days--he will not budge. "Be that as it may, Qui-Gon, it's been ten years, and--" My childhood companion heaves a sigh and seems about to continue when the subject of our discourse interrupts.

"It's all his fault!" My apprentice gestures vehemently at the figure seated just to Depa Billaba's right. Anger ripples across our bond, then ceases as he shuts his end. "He turned the Council against me, just like he did the rest of the Temple."


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Beside my Own Reflection by obi_ew

OffWorld has a rival desperate to get their hands on a new Jedi Starfighter. Anakin Skywalker and his Padawan are caught in the crossfire

Reviewer 1:

Rating: Very Good

Comments:

The story is one in the Redemption Series but it does stand on its own. An in-depth look at the Kenobi clan with his padawans and grand-padawans, the story deals with love and attachment and its relevance to the Jedi Order.
Written in clear, unambigious language, the story unfolds quickly and well. There is plenty of action and a well-developed plotline about the choices each individual makes and how it affects the rest.

There are characters that any reader of the Jedi Apprentice books would recognize and she does fairly well with them. I would have preferred Obi-Wan and Anakin to be a little closer to "canon" but, within the context of the story, they are fine.

But it is her own characters that are the most intriguing. The author knows how to make her own OCs very real - with depth and flaws and personality. The story is worth reading just for the OCs alone.

Quote:

"Why are you so angry at me? You know how I feel about Anakin. If there was any chance he was alive and in trouble, I had to act," he told her earnestly, his sapphire eyes pleading with her to understand.

"While your devotion to those you love is too be admired Jivan, you nevertheless are a Jedi and have certain procedures to follow. The Council is very unhappy with the choices you have made so far during this situation and are fully prepared to reprimand you in some way when you return to the Temple," Luminara warned her son in a grave tone.

Lips thinning into a line, Jivan stared at her with a mixture of hurt-betrayal and underlying anger. Drawing himself up to his full height, he allowed her to see the defiant gleam in his eyes as he spoke.

"I will not apologize for what I have done, and if I had to do it over again, I’d do the exact same thing. If the Council, and more importantly you, can’t understand my devotion to my family, then I pity you all."


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Reviewer 2:

Rating: Very Good

Comments:

A very good mix of OCs and canon characters, this story is fast-paced and well-written. It explores Jedi ethics and thinking, in particular much of the theory behind the existent Jedi Code. Both the OCs and the canon characters, but the OCs in particular, are round and convincing. The descriptions are vivid, but short enough to stay fresh.

I especially like the dialogue in this story – it differentiates clearly between the characters and adds to their portrayal. Obi_ew has taken characters that we know already and changed them just enough to make them her own without damaging them. This is a bit of a longer read, but highly recommended if you enjoy JA books.

Quote:

“Thank goodness you’re still here! They’re at it again and we were hoping you would come down and break it up,” he informed the young Jedi.

Sighing wearily, the young man grabbed his tunic from the back of a chair and nodded.

“What set them off this time?” he asked in a slightly exasperated tone.

The technician grinned and shrugged. “We didn’t even bother asking. We really appreciate this Padawan Kenobi. It’s difficult for us to interfere when we’re dealing with a Jedi Master and our boss.”

Tossing him an understanding look, Shai clipped his lightsabre to his belt and followed the man out of the room. Anakin and Desimir were embroiled in yet another altercation that he would have to end.


Beyond the Saga:

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Falls the Shadow by GeithJiseo, Ambassador Cara Jade

This new trilogy takes place during the NJO era. The New Republic has enjoyed a golden age of peace and prosperity after defeating Xizor and Black Sun, but little do they know that their greatest challenge lies ahead...

Reviewer 1:

Rating: Very Good

Comments:

From the first post, this is a gripping story. The action is quick and easy to read and comprehend. Geith's writing style is clear and straightforward.

In this AU, Callista married Luke and started a family with him; together, they have a young daughter and an infant son. As Luke and Leia are exploring their past on Tatooine, a number of subplots are weaving into each other, including Jacen, Jaina, and Anakin Solo as well as the Skywalkers. It's a good story in the Star Wars tradition, and keeps moving at a reasonable pace while allowing the reader to keep track of all the plot details.

Quote:

A flash of white light, and [Luke] saw another memory. Obi-Wan, looking much younger, his hair and beard just beginning to gray. He held something in his arms, a bundle of something, but Luke couldn't see what it was--

Then there was more. Memories that went beyond this hut, beyond Tatooine. Luke could see Obi-Wan's life flash before his eyes, each scene moving at a quick pace, too fast for him to see them all. He could hear voices again, different ones this time, voices he didn't recognize--

And then nothing.


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Reviewer 2:

Rating: Very Good

Comments:

The first post of this story started an intense wave of suspense builds without a hitch toward later events that will involve the Skywalker/Solo clan. Luke is married to Callista, and they have two children, Hope and Jakob. The plot manages to stay linear and complex at once – there are quite a few subplots, but they all tie together nicely.

I liked the characterization of children in this story. Often, writers exaggerate when writing children – either the three-year-olds speak like they're twenty or the nine-year-olds act like they're three. In this piece, however, the children act, speak, and think like normal kids who haven't been exposed to all the trials of the universe yet. Writing is all in the details and the observations the writers make, and this story is a wonderful example of detailed and intelligent writing.

Quote:

Garn chuckled. “Oh, I know when to use it,” he said, and swung one ham-sized fist at Hope. She ducked quickly with her Force-born reflexes, and grabbed his fist, twisting it behind his back.

“As do I,” she said. “And if you cross your team captain again, I’ll see to it that I use the brains I’ve got to get you off this team.”

“Skywalker!”

Hope released Garn quickly, and turned to see Coach Beckin approaching. His face was dark, stern...just the way he looked whenever his team displeased him.

“Sorry, coach,” she said, taking a step back.


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All in the Karrdes by rogue11lovesjag

When one of Karrde's operatives is on the run, they stumble across a upstart organization that's involved in shadier activities then the New Republic realizes, with the protection of none other than the Mistryl.

Reviewer 1:

Rating: Very Good

Comments:

Shada D'ukal has always been a favorite character of mine and as I read rogue's work I remember why. She's witty, resourceful, and dangerous – definitely not someone you want to meet in a dark alley. And of course, you can't have Shada without Karrde, her suave partner-in-crime, whose smoothness always comes in handy.

And then we have Moranda, a mysterious character. We don't know whether she's good or evil (or maybe a little of both) yet, but we'll find out soon, I'm sure. By the second post of the story, she's already escaping a bar through an upper-story window, so I think we can assume we'll be seeing plenty of quick escapes on her part.

Action, intrigue, and some potential romance between Shada and Karrde (not there yet, but always possible) make this a story worth adding to your favorites.

Quote:

The door chime pinged, and she called, “Come in.”

The door slid open and Talon Karrde walked in, holding muffins in one hand, and fruit in the other. “Good morning, Shada.”

“I wouldn’t go that far,” she said wryly, pouring the tea into the mugs.

“Having trouble waking up this morning?” he asked, setting the fruit down as she pulled plates out of her cabinet.

“What clued you in this time?” she said, setting them down with a gentle clink.

“Your sunny personality.”


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Reviewer 2:

Rating: Excellent

Comments:

So far this story has me literally on the edge of my seat. There's so much going on by the end of the second post that I have to wonder what's going to happen to Shada and Karrde, who are skulking about in their usual manner, attempting to contact a Moranda who might have information they need.

The suspense is building even in the first two posts, in great part because we don't yet know who to trust. Obviously Shada and Karrde are the "good guys," but Shada's dislike of Moranda leads us to distrust her as well. I, for one, can't wait to find out what's going to happen in the next few posts!

Quote:

“When did everything start falling apart?” Karrde asked.

“About an hour before you got here,” Torve said from his seat.

Shada sat down at her station. “The shields by the ion cannons are also fried.”

“Yeah,” Aves said, glancing at her. “Them too. We can’t fix that until we get into port, though, because we’re going to have to take the entire shield system offline.”

“Welcome to a normal day on the
Wild Karrde,” Shada muttered.

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Classic Fan Fiction:

Piggy and Slim by BlindMan

A Star Wars mystery with a twist – Jek Porkins, detective!

Reviewer 1:

Rating: Fair

Comments:

This story is all about cheap laughs; part of it comes off as distasteful, but, for the most part, it's good fodder for a good laugh. The ensemble cast is particularly well put-together.

Quote:

"I seem to remember you were getting rather friendly with that one Ewok," he said, giving me a sly nudge. "What was her name?"

"Deela," I said flatly.

"Deela, that's right." He nodded. "How'd that work out, by the way?"

"Badly." Which was putting it mildly. The alimony payments were a killer.


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Reviewer 2:

Rating: Good

Comments:

It's a funny story in parts, but choppy in others. Overall, it's a good fan fic to read if you're looking for a laugh. The idea of Piggy as a private eye is interesting, and the characterization of Artoo as a sarcastic droid is effectively amusing at points throughout the story. This is a light read, and good for an afternoon off.

Quote:

"So what brings a lady like yourself to this part of Coruscant?"

"I've lost something," Rabe said. "I need you to find it for me. I heard you were the best."

"All right," I said, puffing up with pride. "What are we talking here? Stolen jewelry? Cash? Artwork?"

"Actually...what's gone missing is...a moon."

"A *moon*?!"

She nodded.


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Tomorrow and Tomorrow and Tomorrow by CYNICAL21

An exploration of Obi-Wan Kenobi – Old Ben – and the intense moments in time that make up his life after Anakin's fall.

Reviewer 1:

Rating: Excellent!

Comments:

A series of scenes from the very intimate perspective of Old Ben Kenobi, the desert hermit and once-Jedi. This series of short stories explores his years in exile in exquisite and very well-wrought detail. I have always found the desert world of Tatooine a telling choice for Obi-Wan's exile, and in the first three posts of her story, CYN has already touched on a number of the reasons why.

CYN is a brilliant crafter of words, and writes from a wellspring of both inspiration and personal understanding of the deeper, darker caverns where emotion resides. Her style has won her many fans over the years, and with excellent reason. Her Obi-Wan is a classical tragic hero, a man of great intelligence and compassion caught in a trap of destiny, for whom the reader cannot help but wish that he might one day know the peace and satisfaction of succeeding at his difficult tasks. Of course he does, so for a change the story will end happily, we know that, yet these intimate glimpses into this character alone in the desert never fail to captivate.

Quote:

The Jedi were my family.

My family - is dead now. All of them.

Qui-Gon went first, of course - without even a decent good-bye. Without ever telling me if I had succeeded in becoming what he wished me to be. I have finally, after many long years, made my peace with that; accepting that I would never know the answer to that question was one of the hardest things I have ever done.

I have tried to convince myself that he was pleased with me - that he would have been proud - but it has grown more difficult in recent years.


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Reviewer 2:

Rating: Excellent

Comments:

Tomorrow and Tomorrow and Tomorrow
is a tightly woven and beautifully crafted series of vignettes that delves deeply into the mind of Obi-Wan Kenobi. Old Ben is a man of intelligence and integrity, whose character is sadly unexplored in the movies. Within the story however, CYNICAL21 manages in a few words to give a complete picture of a man whose life has been nothing if not tragic.

CYNICAL21's portrayal of Obi-Wan is sympathetic and wonderfully rich – it is a true tribute to him. A definite must-read for anyone who enjoys a character exploration written with exquisite command of the English language and just the right undercurrent of intense emotion.

Quote:

Memories, I find, are not, after all, the comfort I expected them to be.

Memories generate images - images of faces.

Faces lost to me.

I listen to the silence, broken only by the swish of the sand - and I long for the day when the silence will be complete.

 

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14391_Aaron Allston  (A&A)
Date Posted: 2/29/04 12:02am Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition VII -- February, 2004
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Vignette Reviews:
by Amidala_Skywalker


A Game of Chess by Darth_Solent

Era: Before the Saga
Status: Vignette, complete
Summary: A letter written by the hand of the Dark Side.

Comments: This captivating piece gives as distinctive look at the battle between Good and Evil. From the point of view of the Dark Side personality, we listen to his views on the battle that has lasted forever and will only be balanced by the Chosen One. The author’s prose flows smoothly and a reader can almost imagine the scene that has been set for the great clash mentioned in the letter.

I particularly liked the section where the Light Side personality charged into the battle and overcame the dark armies. It made me feel like light would go to any lengths to defeat the darkness (this reminds me of an old quote – “The only way for evil to triumph is for good men to do nothing”.) This vignette also had a very strong ending by making reference to the Jedi and Sith as pawns in a game of Chess. One person is so insignificant to the Dark Side. Yet it is eventually one individual who balances both forces.

Rating: An enjoyable 8/10

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Happily Ever After by vader_incarnate

Era: The Saga
Status: Vignette, complete
Summary: N/A.

Comments: How can I describe this vignette? Well, first, I think I should explain the storyline. I’ve seen (and I know you’ve seen) post-EP3 speculative fan fiction on what happened to Padme. This story fits into that category, but with a twist. She’s captured by the Imperials and it seems they’ve tossed her into an insane asylum. Throughout this story, you can examine certain observations she has that seem a bit strange or irrelevant (for example, the blue liquid of the water cooler). To me, that says that the author has put a lot of thought into subtly demonstrating Padme’s slip into madness/paranoia/whatever floats etc. She acts completely like someone else – only a remnant of her past self remains.

It gets even more odd when Obi-Wan appears on her “doorstep” and she starts having flashes of previous conversations with Anakin that mimic the words Obi-Wan is speaking to her. As the subject bar suggests, there is some Obidala, but I think it’s more on the friendship side. Please don’t let anything sway you from reading this puzzlingly wonderful piece. The author has done herself a credit.

Rating: A spot-on 9/10

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Zealot by Lady-Hermione

Era: Beyond the Saga
Status: Vignette, complete
Summary: An outcast Yuuzhan Vong takes the matter of the Jedi into his own anonymous hands-- but his motives vary from those of his people.

Comments: This piece is very dark and disturbing. If you enjoy light-hearted fan fiction, this isn’t the vignette for you. However, I found this piece compelling, unusual, and a very satisfying read. My main fascination with this piece is the way the author portrays her Vong character. This Vong believes that death is a gift and that he is therefore saving a person by killing them. All the while, he wants that bliss himself.

I was awestruck when the Vong took the life of little Ben. Through the text, I understood why the Vong was doing the right thing and why his race had made him an outcast. He was wrapped up in morals and beliefs that had completely blotted out any opposing voices. For me, this vignette was a dive into Vong religion and the passion which drives an individual to do shocking things.

I recommend this vignette to anyone who is willing to examine the many different layers and shades of grey in this text.

Rating: A strong 9/10

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Once Upon a Time: Legends and Myths by Various Authors

Teaser (extracted from Melyanna’s story):

She took Dacia's soft hand in her work-hardened one and dropped a ring of white metal with a sparkling clear stone in the young woman's hand. As she closed Dacia's fingers around the ring, the colonel's wife said, "I want you to use this ring, my dear, in your wedding today. I know it will not be the wedding you have dreamed of, but I hope that your marriage will be long and happy, as mine has been."

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Bunnies Up for Adoption into Good Word Processors:
by ophelia


If you assume that midichlorians are the root of someone's ability to use the Force, and that they live in the blood, then:

1. The only time a mother & baby's blood mixes is during birth--which is why that whole positive/negative Rh factor thing can be a problem. Padmé is Force-sensitive for 1-3 days or so after the birth of Luke and Leia.

2. Someone is temporarily Force-sensitive after a blood transfusion. (This could be cool in a family-angst kind of story--brother A is a Jedi, and brother B has always hated him for leaving the family, even though he's secretly jealous. One day brother B is in a hideous accident & needs factor-matching blood, so brother A provides it. Now brother B is Force-sensitive too for a little while, causing soul-corroding angst!)

3. Force sensitivity can skip generations, and there is a "Jedi carrier state?" A person whose body actually produces/houses midichlorians, but whose immune system reacts to them and keeps them suppressed to a non-functional level, would be a "carrier." One day a carrier finds himself or herself immuno-suppressed (serious illness, tissue transplant, etc.), and voila! Instant Force sensitivity.

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February Writing Trivia:

It's February, the month of Valentines, and few people realize that it's also the birth month of a founder of the sci-fi genre we all adore – Jules Verne. Verne was born in France on February 8, 1828 and grew up with a love of science and theater which led him to publish his first book, Five Weeks in a Balloon, in 1863. He later went on to write such classic favorites as A Journey to the Center of the Earth, Twenty Thousand Leagues Under the Sea, and Around the World in Eighty Days. His work is largely available at various public domain websites and at libraries throughout the world. Below is a short excerpt of his spaceflight novel, From the Earth to the Moon:

"You know," said he, "what progress artillery science has made during the last few years, and what a degree of perfection firearms of every kind have reached. Moreover, you are well aware that, in general terms, the resisting power of cannon and the expansive force of gunpowder are practically unlimited. Well! starting from this principle, I ask myself whether, supposing sufficient apparatus could be obtained constructed upon the conditions of ascertained resistance, it might not be possible to project a shot up to the moon?"

At these words a murmur of amazement escaped from a thousand panting chests; then succeeded a moment of perfect silence, resembling that profound stillness which precedes the bursting of a thunderstorm. In point of fact, a thunderstorm did peal forth, but it was the thunder of applause, or cries, and of uproar which made the very hall tremble. The president attempted to speak, but could not. It was fully ten minutes before he could make himself heard.

"Suffer me to finish," he calmly continued. "I have looked at the question in all its bearings, I have resolutely attacked it, and by incontrovertible calculations I find that a projectile endowed with an initial velocity of 12,000 yards per second, and aimed at the moon, must necessarily reach it. I have the honor, my brave colleagues, to propose a trial of this little experiment."

 

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As a special treat today, we dug up all those stories that won the Winter Fiction Awards. We can't review all of them, but we can recommend them. The staff here at the Newsletter would like to extend a hearty round of thanks to Sebulba2179, KrystalBlaze, Wilhelmina, PadmeLeiaJaina, Jedi-2B, JainaDurron, solojones, spiritgurl, Bellyup, ShortySC22 and everyone else who nominated, voted, or offered suggestions.

WINNERS:

BEFORE THE SAGA:

Best AU Story:
Forsaken and Begotten by Arldetta

Best Drama Story: To Skin A Gundark by Mistress_Renata

Best Action Story:
Tales of a Jedi: Volume 1 by red_rose_knight

Best Romance Story: Smoke by obaona

Best Humor Story: Check, Please! by BecJedi, Charmisjess

THE SAGA:

Best AU Story:
The Skywalker Prophecy: Episode V: Hope and Darkness by Darth_Lex

Best Drama Story: Winds Of Change by geo3

Best Action Story: The Skywalker Prophecy: Episode V: Hope and Darkness by Darth_Lex

Best Romance Story: A Jedi Shall Not Know Love by red_rose_knight

Best Humor Story: Diary of an X-Wing by JediLynx

BEYOND THE SAGA:

Best AU Story:
Legacy by TKeira_Lea

Best Drama Story: Walking on the Other Side by TKeira_Lea, Zara_Rose

Best Action Story: X-Wing: Deception by InyriForge

Best Romance Story: Legacy by TKeira_Lea

Best Humor Story: Mara the Burninator by obaona

LENGTH CATEGORIES:

Best Poem/Songfic:
Here Without You by Tahi

Best Vignette: In the White Room by Lady_Moonbeam

Best Short Story/Novella: Dissonant Echoes of a Fragmented Mind by LadyPadme

Best Novel: Winds Of Change by geo3

Best Series: The Redemption Series by obi_ew

CHARACTER CATEGORIES:

Best Original Character in a Leading Role:
Bryon Skywalker in The Skywalker Prophecy: Episode V: Hope and Darkness by Darth_Lex

Best Original Character in a Supporting Role: Balé Mindin Naberrie Skywalker in Winds Of Change by geo3

Best Interpretation of an Ensemble Cast: Winds Of Change by geo3

Best Interpretation of a Canon Character: Anakin Skywalker in Winds Of Change by geo3

WRITING CATEGORIES:

Most Underrated Story:
Hajii's Children by Wilhelmina

Most Imaginative Story (Tie): Knights and Eros Bound by DarthBreezy and
Twelve Past Victory by Lady_Moonbeam

Best Overall Story of the Winter: Winds Of Change by geo3

AUTHOR CATEGORIES:

Best New Author:
Lady-Hermione

Best Collaboration Story: The Water's Edge by obaona, Happy_Hobbit_Padawan, Vader_Incarnate

Best Author: geo3

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Writing Tips of the Month:

Ms. Nitpicker and William Safire's "How (Not) to Speak English Properly:"


1. A writer must not shift your point of view.
2. Also too, never, ever use repetitive redundancies.
3. Also, always avoid annoying alliteration.
4. Always pick on the correct idiom.
5. Analogies in writing are like feathers on a snake.
6. And don't start a sentence with a conjunction.
7. Avoid clichés like the plague. (They're old hat)
8. Be more or less specific.
9. Comparisons are as bad as cliches.
10. Contractions aren't necessary and shouldn't be used.
11. Do not be redundant; do not use more words than necessary; it's highly superfluous.
12. Don’t over-use exclamation points!!!!!
13. Eliminate commas, that are, not necessary. Parenthetical words however should be enclosed in commas.
14. Eliminate quotations. As Ralph Waldo Emerson said, "I hate quotations. Tell me what you know."
15. Employ the vernacular.
16. Eschew ampersands & abbreviations, etc.
17. Even IF a mixed metaphor sings, it should be derailed.
18. Everyone should be careful to use a singular pronoun with singular nouns in their writing.
19. Exaggeration is a billion times worse than under-statement.
20. Foreign words and phrases are not apropos.
21. Go around the barn at high noon to avoid colloquialisms.
22. If any word is improper at the end of a sentence, a linking verb is.
23. If you reread your work, you can find on rereading a great deal of repetition can be avoided by rereading and editing.
24. If you've heard it once, you've heard it a thousand times: Resist hyperbole; not one writer in a million can use it correctly.
25. It is wrong to ever split an infinitive.

For more, head to this site, or How to Write Almost Readable Fan Fiction

 

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Profiles:

She's fresh, she's funny, and she's a new author to add to your favorites list. Author of the "Male Bonding" series, she keeps her audiences laughing while managing to present her own unique takes on life, the universe, and everything. This month of February, we're honored to interview our very own Best New Author…Lady-Hermione!

1. Tell us a bit about yourself - how did you come to writing and to writing Star Wars fan fiction?

Like often it does, my love for writing originates back to an initial love for reading. My mother always read to me as a child and ensured that I was doing so on my own by the age of four. It was in first grade that my wonderful teacher, as an option during free time, provided us little ones with pictures that she cut from magazines for us to create stories about. Needless to say, most of my classmates chose instead to play dolls and games and draw on personal chalkboards. I occasionally joined them, but more often than not, I could be found sitting quietly at my desk with a pile of random pictures and my pencil scratching away. It was then that I realized that I did not only enjoy reading about whimsical fantasies and magical kingdoms, but that I wanted to create tales about them that were all my own.

I suppose that, technically, one could say my writing for Star Wars began with my involvement in Talk City’s old Star Wars roleplaying chat rooms. Aside from forming many friendships, my three or so years as a Star Wars roleplayer really helped to develop my writing skills in general. Roleplaying (the literary kind) is really like one fast-paced collaborative story in which you must be quick-witted enough to develop a fast but decent response to another player’s actions in the story; its definitely a learning experience. I’d recommend it to anyone who is looking to improve their writing.

I came to writing actual Star Wars fan fiction by first reading the wonderful stories that grace TheForce.net’s fan fiction boards. I grew particularly fond of obaona’s "Temperature" series, a collection of Luke-and-Mara centric vignettes that always have the perfect blend of romance and humor. I loved not only to read the stories but also the comments as well, because she seemed to have so much fun responding to her readers and discussing their ideas on her works with them. It was during my reading of one of obaona’s installments that I paused and told myself, “Hey, I can do this. And so I shall.”

And so I did.

2. Thanks to you, we now know what happens when Han baby-sits Ben, or when Kyp, Luke, and Han encounter a crazed (and barely literate) fangirl, and when Luke puts on his teacher garb and hands out life lessons: a lot of laughs. happy Where did you come up with the idea[s] for your much-loved "Male Bonding" series?

“Male Bonding” started as just one story about Han Solo babysitting Ben Skywalker. This is no novel idea, by far, for many people have written and still do write stories about older characters finding themselves in a babysitting predicament, but I really wanted to write one that was humorous but held some meaning in it. I wanted Han and Ben to have fun, but also to bond with each other on an emotional level. Han lost his child, and Ben is at the mercy of two loving but strict Jedi parents-- they both can use each other’s company as solace and relief. Though I didn’t expect it, I received an unusually positive response from my readers and several people pressed for a sequel. Now I’m not much for sequels, but I did compromise by turning that one story into a series of vignettes that chronicle some light-hearted moments between our favorite Star Wars guys. In a world full of dark times, I think we could all use a few laughs now and then, and that’s what I hope to provide.

3. Can you give us any hints as to what you have in store for our favorite Star Wars males in the near future? wink

I wish I could! I’m one of those “strike-of-lightning” authors, though; I rarely ever plan anything. I just have to wait for that flash of inspiration to hit me.

4. We noticed that your stories often feature Luke – a mature, socially adjusted, Master-of-the-Jedi Luke. Is there any particular reason you like to write his character?

In my opinion, Luke Skywalker is sadly under-developed, especially considering how much potential his character has. For every person who loves Luke, there seems to be another person who hates him just as vehemently. I think this stems from the fact that Luke is more “real” than many of the other characters; he cries when he’s grieved, he falls prey to impulse and emotion, his responses are awkward more often than they are sharp-witted, and he doesn’t always have a foolproof plan or good luck to make up for a lack of one. In essence, he’s an awful lot like most of us. This either renders him endearing and relatable or makes him an uncomfortable reminder of your own weaknesses.

I personally find the unlikely hero of Luke’s sort to be a refreshing change from the everyday arrogant, nearly-infallible leading man that many tales often choose to glorify. Even though Luke begins as a normal person full of bittersweet dreams and naivety, he develops into a wise and powerful Jedi Master. He is the embodiment of the idea that if you follow your dreams and your heart, there’s no limit to what you may achieve in life.

5. Other than Luke, which are your favorite Star Wars characters to write? Why?

Aside from my beloved Luke, I particularly enjoy writing the children: Jacen, Jaina, and Anakin Solo and Ben Skywalker. I suppose this stems from the fact that I love children in general. I work at a day care and am studying to be an elementary teacher, so I interact with children on a daily basis, which gives me good insight into their minds and mannerisms and chances to just sit and observe them. (Though, as any child caretaker out there knows, the moments in which you are blessed with a moment to just sit and observe are few and far between!) I don’t think I’ve ever laughed so whole-heartedly as I did when, during a classroom viewing of The Empire Strikes Back, one of my charges gazed in awe at Obi-Wan Kenobi’s spirit and gasped, “WOW! I didn’t know God was in this movie!” Its random-- but utterly sincere-- moments like that that warm and tickle you to the core and make children such a fun subject for literature.

6. Although you are obviously an accomplished writer of humor, you've also posted some much darker pieces. Of these, "Zealot" differs most from the majority of the stories we've seen from you. What inspired you to write that vignette?

I wrote “Zealot” to display the tragic consequences that a perverted view of one’s religion can bring upon one’s self and others around them. I realize that I may be treading into dangerous waters, but I didn’t mean in it an offensive way at all, for I am and always have been a devout Christian. I believe that spirituality and faith is a beautiful gift; “Zealot” is a cry against those who would use their faith or religion to justify hurting or even killing others. The Yuuzhan Vong from the galaxy far, far away are not so different from some people on Earth-- a dangerous and foreboding concept, to say the least.

7. You've shown the ability to write from many different points of view – Yuuzhan Vong, human, and now plasma. happy Your "Sunlight Soliloquy," a short piece written from the points of view of Tatooine's twin suns, is a unique view of young Luke Skywalker. How did you "get into the minds" of these two omniscient characters?

The Tatooine Twin Sunset scene from A New Hope is one of the most beloved Star Wars scenes of the entire series, and I myself am included in its lengthy list of admirers. The music, the dying light, Luke’s wistful expression… you just get a sense of, 'I’ve been there. I’ve gazed out on another ended day and wondered if the next one would finally bring me what I’m looking for… whatever that may be.' Its such a powerful and relatable scene, and I thus wanted to elaborate on it. As I began, however, taking the orthodox route of using Luke’s perspective, I paused when I considered the title that I had already dubbed it with: Sunlight Soliloquy. What if, I asked myself, it actually was a “sunlight soliloquy”-- what if I wrote this from the viewpoint of the twin suns?

I had to be careful when personifying the twin suns; I wanted them to be passionate, masterful and glorious, but also somewhat forlorn: two givers of radiance that never receive any gratitude in return. I just tried to imagine what it would be like to have the innate purpose of warming a desert world day after day for centuries on end, but to never tire of that job because you understood that the plan of nature was a perfect one and you honored it as thus. That’s a concept that we as people often lose sight of: that some jobs are worth doing without compensation… that some fulfilled purposes are rewards in themselves. “Sunlight Soliloquy” is more serious and philosophical than any of my other stories, and though I lean toward humor usually, its one of the ones that I hold closest to my heart.

8. Your stories seem to span a variety of styles and genres. Which is your favorite piece, and why? Was it also your favorite to write?

I don’t know that I have a favorite, but when I look over all of my works, I think that Sunlight Soliloquy is the one that I’m proudest of because I really searched deep into my own heart and poured it into my work with that vignette. As far as my favorite story to write, though, that’d be a toss-up between “Male Bonding II: What a Tangled Web we Wove” and “Pajama Game”. Both of them are terribly silly, but those are always the most fun kind of stories to write!

9. Do you have any plans for further writing, either fan fiction or original?

I feel that God gives everyone a purpose in life, and I believe that writing is mine. Naturally, I am going to happily continue my works here at TheForce.net, but I do whole-heartedly plan to publish my own original works someday.

10. Thank you for agreeing to interview for the newsletter, and once again, congratulations on your award for Best New Author! I'm sure we can expect to see more great work from you. happy

And thank you! It was and remains an enormous honor to receive such an award, and likewise an honor to be interviewed.

Interested?

Pajama Game
Male Bonding
Male Bonding II
Male Bonding III
Zealot
Sunlight Soliloquy

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The few, the proud, the beta-readers – who can argue that they're not one of the driving forces behind all fan fiction? This month, we have a special interview with a beta-reader whose credits include beta-reading Aeryn_Sun's "Defining Us," Gina's "Handmaiden's Gift" and "The Betrayal," AlrikFassbauer's "Babysitting a Padawan," and bobill's "Sparks." Let us raise the curtain of literary mystery and introduce to you one of those diligent behind-the-scenes editors who makes the world of fan fiction go around…SobiFan!

1. Let's start out with a little of your background information. What was your first editing/beta-reading experience?

Oh, let's see... that was a while ago! The first time I ever helped edit anything was when I was in my early teens, and my brother needed help writing a paper. I liked helping him a lot, and felt proud when he got a good grade for it!

2. What drew you to beta-reading fan fiction?

Ever since I was young, I wrote. I wrote, and wrote, and wrote! I've always been in love with reading and writing, and noticed others shared my love for both. A few years ago, I found this cool thing called 'fanfiction', and was immediately a fan of it. But I ran across so many poorly written pieces, as one always will. When I saw some people looked for 'beta-readers', I didn't waste a second! It's a lot of fun to help people out with their story-telling.

3. There have been some interesting discussions in the Writers' Resource Forum concerning the use of language. Where do you stand on the spare/minimalist prose vs. rich/dense prose issue? On the argument of whether or not Earth-based swear words are appropriate in Star Wars fan fiction?

It is my opinion that no two styles should be alike. wink Some stories are great with lots of flowery speech and ornate descriptive writing. Other stories are more suited with simple, to the point writing. I don't believe every story should be structured with the same sort of prose, or that people should feel obligated to write a certain way. happy

The swear word issue? Watch 'A New Hope' and you hear the word 'damn'. So I consider that word acceptable. But other common words that we earthlings use are probably not. When I read a Star Wars story, I expect things to be strange, exotic, and unheard of. But when I read a Star Wars story that features the swearwords I use, it makes the story less believable, and sort of silly sounding. Making up swearwords is much better than having Han Solo scream out something like 'Holy s***!!!', wouldn't you agree?

4. As a beta-reader, you have undoubtedly read a wide variety of fiction. What is your favorite genre? Who are your favorite characters?

I'm partial to drama, romance, and character exploration. My favorite characters to read about are Obi-Wan Kenobi, Boba Fett, Sabé, and all the other handmaidens.

5. Beta-reading is tricky in that much of it is subjective. For example, you might think a word is out of place while the author believes it to be adequate; you might think a characterization slightly off while the author believes it expressive and accurate. When beta-reading, what sorts of corrections and changes do you usually suggest?

I try to read the story I am editing from the viewpoint of three different persons: the author, the audience, and of course, me! I want to see what the author was trying to get across, the style she uses, and how effective her writing is. I want to see what the audience will see, and make sure they will understand and grasp the message and picture that the author is trying to convey. I look for anything that might require editing or changing.

Whenever an author and I have a conflicting viewpoint on a certain issue, the key is to make suggestions, and to remind the author that she must consider how the audience will see the issue. And so I make suggestions about these issues, explaining why I think the characterization is a bit off, how it could be fixed, etc. The author is, well, the author, and whatever she writes is hers. While my beta services are there to be useful, the author is still in charge of her story, and the final decisions are up to her. happy

6. Do you have a pet peeve? If so, what is it (so we can all avoid it before sending our stories out to the beta-reading list!)?

Mostly, I hate grammatical errors such as: tense switches, pronoun and antecedent agreement, person switches, and of course the 'your' vs. 'you're'. I'm pretty picky about how a story looks on paper (or computer screen!), and I'm a strong advocate of proper grammar! But I understand that a lot of people have a lot of difficulty with the English language, which is perfectly understandable! Besides, if everyone wrote with total correctness, what use would there be for beta readers? wink

7. What are some tips you would give to aspiring authors with regards to writing well?

The best author is the best reader! Reading is, in my opinion, the key to writing success. Of course, it's good to write, but don't forget to read!! And honestly, practice doesn't make perfect (there really is no such thing as perfect!), but it sure helps!

8.What about some tips for aspiring beta-readers?

I think the best beta-reader is friendly and understanding, and my favorite and most-remembered beta-readers always were just that (yes, I use beta-readers too tongue ). Try to work with the author instead of just slapping them across the face with their errors, and telling them what needs to be changed. Basically, treat the author and the story with kindness, as silly and cliché as that might sound.

9. What, for you, is the most challenging part of beta-reading? The most rewarding part?

The most challenging part of beta-reading is probably the lack-of-time that I have. The most rewarding? I love to get the job done, and to get comments from thankful authors. grin

10. Thank you for agreeing to the interview, and happy editing!

No problem, it was a blast! I wish all the authors and aspiring authors out there the best of luck, and feel free to contact me about anything grammatical. wink

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Article:

Ooh, Sithly Woman
A Report on Literary Themes in Star Wars Fanfic
by Ty-gon Jinn


He staggered backwards while his heartbeat thundered in his ears; berating himself for letting himself get lured in so easily by Black Widow Aseri; the name the galactic press had given her.

--From Spiders and Butterflies, by Rokangus (Beyond the Saga)


Okay, here's your ten-dollar word of the day, taught to me by my Lit teacher: chthonic. According to dictionary.com, cthonic comes from Greek. It's typically used to refer to the "nether regions" or the underworld, coming from the Greek word khthonios, of the earth. In literature, it's a theme that's used many times. The dark, earthy tones in literature are, many times, associated with women; for this reason, feminine themes are often described as chthonic.

(Don't worry, we're not going to have a vocabulary test.)

But you do not answer to gods anymore. You answer to Anakin -- and as much as you want your rest, as much as you know that you could talk to him and tell him that you wish you could sleep, and have your sleep for eternity, you know that he will not hear. He will hear that you want to leave him, and for that alone, he will bring you back. Without rest, without hope, without a prayer of eternity, just endless cycles, of returning to decaying flesh and that same flat taste of the grave, to a shrouded angel with his selfish good intentions... and to the white room.

--From In the White Room, Winner of "Best Vignette" Winter Fanfic Award, by Lady_Moonbeam (The Saga)


Why is a passage like that so remarkable? Is it just the new perspective – that no one considered what would happen in Anakin applied his “some day I will even stop people from dying” to Padmé? Well, certainly, it’s a rarely-seen and original perspective. But Padmé’s survival has been played out in many other fics. There’s something, however, that’s remarkably evocative about the grave taste, about the mythological references known by the Naboo, about the senseless being in that material place. Earlier in the vignette, Padmé refers to a great river. This is undeniably chthonic, making use of a theme seen so seldom in Star Wars that it’s jarring to see it used in fanfiction, and will undoubtedly make an impression.

The adjective chthonic has an antonym: Uranic, derived from the Greek ouranos. This is the masculine term, the lighter term. It’s also the astronomical term: the Greek ouranos means heavens. Star Wars is a male-character-driven saga, set in outer space, full of futuristic technology, where the light is destined to win out in the end; it is undeniably uranic. In that context, though, it is the characters of the Dark Side who capture the imagination, and the promise of darker and darker films that have kept up enthusiasm for the prequels.

Is it any surprise, then, that the women of the dark side in the Expanded Universe have been embraced by fans? Asajj Ventress has been immortalized on the Cartoon Network, and Lucas even included Aurra Sing in The Phantom Menace.

"I do believe she's okay, little one," Rune said assuring, patting her head. "You do look like one of those still alive. But it’s best you stay down here. There's so much carnage up there it is not meant for such pretty eyes to see."

After giving them all one more smile, Rune reached into the satchel she had picked up and pulled out a thermal detonator. She asked, "Do you know what this is?" They shook their heads. "Anyone? No clue? Well, have you ever played hot rock?" They all nodded with some glee; hot rock was a child's game where children in groups from two to twenty or more were in a circle, tossing a beeping ball -- the hot rock -- around at random; the beeping ball would begin to beep more and more, indicating that it was 'getting warmer', and when it got 'hot' it would hover over the last person to possess the hot rock. Some games lasted short, others very long; it was a school yard exercise, designed to wear the children down.

"Well, this is an advanced version of hot rock," said Rune. She set the thermal detonator's built in timer to five minutes, armed it, and activated it. It began to beep. "This game tests your patience. Here," she gave the thermal detonator to the little girl, "why don't you try it. Pay attention to the beeping now. Don't be the last one holding it. Oh, the rest of you!" Rune got the attentions of the other children that were trying to get in on the game the little girl and her friends began so very quickly. She pulled out four more thermal detonators, and activated the set-off link feature in them: when the first explosive went off, they would all go off in unison. They were now beeping in sync with the first one, and Rune handed the bombs off to the others. "Now play, while I tend to matters upstairs."

Rune went to the door, turned back to the children and yelled, "KIDS!" They stopped playing and looked at her, attentive to their new mistress. She gave them a friendly smile. "Don't worry. You'll be joining your parents soon enough. I assure you it will be no time at all."


--From The Sith Maiden, by Casper_Knightshade (Before the Saga)

In a series like Star Wars, fanfic authors have a stumbling block. How can you make your own work stand out? Obviously, it can never completely stand out, since it’s set in someone else’s world. But what sets yours apart from every other? A few writers have caught onto the jarring theme of the chthonic. The above is an example from Casper_Knightshade’s The Sith Maiden, a work with even a chthonic title. The author has succeeded in creating a cast of characters that seems to flow right into the Star Wars universe, with one main exception: There are more representatives of the Sith than of the light, and most of those happen to be female.

The Daughters of the Dark Side that Casper has given us are good examples of the chthonic in all its meaning; not only are they dark characters, Sith who are attuned to the Dark Side by their very biology, and not only are they feminine, they are earthy, and naturalistic. Many of them have embraced a form of the Dark Side that promotes the Sithian view of inner peace. They even breed Black Roses in gardens on the dying world of Korriban.

Of course, the desire to see a strong female villain in Star Wars is nothing new. Fans have been pushing for such a character since the announcement of the prequel trilogy. But the chthonic form, even embraced without villainy, has a jarring effect. Remember the implication of the netherworld given by the word’s root…

Noemi did not smile, but her chin came up as though startling from a light sleep. "You don’t seem to pay attention to your other visitors, so the powers that be figured it would be wise for a familiar face to catch your attention."

She was seated at the viewport, face shadowed in profile. There was, as always, a slight blue hue to her entire form, but the features were still perfectly familiar. All-too-familiar.

He’d memorized the feel of her ebony hair between his fingertips, the way her almond-shaped eyes narrowed in amusement above those slightly crooked teeth and button nose. He knew the line of her jaw, the feel of her lips. Her loose tunic concealed too many scars than he cared to remember, but the one scar he remembered best was one that was his doing.

"They certainly succeeded," he admitted, settling into the chair at his desk. "Of seventeen thousand, two hundred ninety-four possible harbingers of doom, they had to pick you this year?"

The comment was flippant, but his voice sounded something like a badly-aligned sublight engine -- trembling and throbbing. She wouldn’t be fooled by his false bravado, but she didn’t need to be.

The smile materialized in the form of a smirk as she turned to face him. "I have my own grievances, too, Yric."

He grimaced slightly. "Of course you do," he said quietly. "Why don’t you simply get on with it and allow the others their due time?"

She could only smile with half of her face, since the other half was practically a crater, a hollowed mass of flesh and gore. Her dark eye was fixed on him, but the other was half-blasted away, hanging by the optic nerve. The simple elegance of her beauty was decimated.

And it was all his fault.

"In due time," she assured him, "but first, you need to remember why we come each year. When you understand that, perhaps you will know what we require."


--From Bloodprice, Winner of the Ghastly Fiction Challenge, by DarthIshtar (Beyond the Saga)

Of course, we can’t all write dark, ultra-chthonic sagas, or it would get old after a while. However, one of the most powerful tools the writer can use is to contrast the themes against each other. Because the word chthonic has come to encompass a few different themes, it can be very effective to play them off of each other.

The downfall of the Empire on Endor provides us with a good opportunity to contrast the themes, as the shining, industrial Empire falls to the dirty, earthy Ewoks. While we have the a dramatic battle full of flashy ships taking place out in the stars, we also see a glimpse of the Imperials – the darker characters – falling, their technology giving way to rocks, logs, and little creatures – who had embraced only the strange woman from the rebel alliance right off the bat – that no one counted on. It pits the dark against the earthen, only to culminate in a firelight celebration. The chthonic elements run heavy throughout the scene, giving fanfic authors ample opportunity to navigate uncharted waters.

In the Collapse of the Empire anthology started by Amidala_Skywalker, we see a glimpse of the very end of the Empire’s reign, as glimpsed by a woman on Endor, written by Sara_Kenobi. The chthonic themes here are contrasted against each other as the light begins to break through the darkness, leaving the Empire in its dark, earthen ruin.

It was late in the night the explosion rocked the skies of Endor. The Death Star was gone. The Emperor and Darth Vader were dead.

Commander Jolie Sera stared blankly at the data screens of the AT-AT walker she had been trapped inside of for hours now. Her comrade-in-arms was stoned dead, laying just a few feet away from her crushed shoulders.

The data screens flickered as the announcement came.

["The Imperial Airborne forces have fallen! All remaining grounds men retreat!"]

With a cry of unadulterated fury, Commander Sera screamed in desperate outrage, as she kicked hard at the top door of the broken and battered machine, in a last effort to free herself from her prison. In one pitiful and final attempt to rush to the defense of her fellow comrades.

But she didn't move. She couldn't. Her legs were bloodied and nearly broken. It hurt far too much to move anymore.

"No!" was a soft cry from her chest.

The star dust from space danced in the heavens of Endor's great sky, and shouts of thrump and victory could be heard in distant rumbles from the night, and now rising dawn of a new day.

The Empire had fallen. It was true. Everything she had ever fought for and believed in was gone.

The Rebellion scum had stolen victory from the Imperial might.

It was the commander's final thought as death took her before dawn's final light.


--Dawn’s Final Light, by Sara_Kenobi, from the Collapse of the Empire Anthology (Beyond the Saga).

Why is it that the chthonic can be so effective? Principally, it’s because Star Wars is heavily uranic already. It’s also easier to write a bright, male-driven saga, since most action movies have a brave hero anyway, one who guys can write because they can imagine being him and who girls can write because they can imagine having him for a boyfriend. wink

Of course, there’s nothing wrong with a nice uranic story. But it is the chthonic that is really jarring, and I suspect that it is because there are some emotions that it takes a feminine perspective to even begin to grasp. I’ll conclude the article with one of these moments, presented by Casper_Knightshade’s Daughters of the Dark Side themselves.

Unbeknownst to her, the shadows of the resting grounds began to move with life all their own, responding to her unshakable grief. The shadows permanently left their sources and gathered ever so slowly at a distance and view that allowed the growing phantasm of darkness to bare witness to the Sith Maiden’s failure. She was not ready, she could not handle the responsibility, the power, the burden and the gift that was the Dark Side of the Force. All she did was grieve and let the grief dictate her life. The grief should anger her, motivate her to do greater things, greater evil and wickedness in the name of her lost unborn child. Instead all she could do was live solely by grief, let her emotions be her motivation to live and not use her emotions like a Dark Side entity should.

Naressa Rapier was not ready.

As the shadows of darkness finally formed into a fog-like substance, it decided to move forward and be done with her. A slow death was not going to happen; just a removal of her soul to be sent directly to whatever she thought was hell. Her body will fertilize the soil, enrich it with the knowledge of failure for the first time ever a Sith Maiden was not ready for the burden of being a true Matriarch of the Sith.

It came towards Naressa, and reached out with a hand of instant death to grab her...

"I’m sorry," Naressa whispered out, still unaware of the shadow that was going to kill her. She never would, for the shadow suddenly began to retreat and separate to form the many shadows in which it was created from, and resume their places of hiding.

"I’m so sorry," Naressa choked out again. She raised her sad face, not bothering to wipe off the dirt or shake off the grass that clung. Her hand shook as she caressed the crypt compassionately, her attempt at trying to caress something that was of her Little One. "My anger is what got you killed. I -- I was angry at myself for not getting the job done the first time."

In her mind the memory of what she was referring to flashed in her mind; ten years ago, at Rapier Manor, high above on the Tower Maze. She was not alone, for Juna held on to her with one arm wrapped around a leg while her other hand had a hold of
Enothchild Sarch’s hand as he struggled to look over the side along with the Rapiers. Down below, so very far down, was nothing more than cracks in the cement and blood where Magus Prophet had landed after he was stabbed through the back and chest and hurled over the side of the tall structure. Her energy was poor at the time from having healed the Jedi Master, but she felt that if she let go of her now growing anger, released through her being, she would have enough strength to finish the near dead monster. As the power built up in her Naressa could see him, see his stumbling form in the woods fall to the ground in a weakened state and prepared to destroy him.

Even if it meant it would mean her life.


--From The Fading Light, by Casper_Knightshade (Classic JC Stories Board)

 

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Date Posted: 2/29/04 12:13am Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition VII -- February, 2004 - Date Edited: 3/8/04 8:38pm (1 edits total) Edited By: FF_Newsletter_Editor
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Forum News
by Amidala_Skywalker


Welcome to the “Forum News” section for the month of February! I’d just like to acknowledge our new editor, Xaara, and any new reviewers or contributors. The newsletter is a valuable asset to the Fan Fiction forums and it’s good to see a successful changing of hands for the third time.

February has been an unusually quiet month on the JC Fan Fiction front. As I write this, the Fan Fiction banner competition (which can be found here) is winding down at midnight tonight. Numerous entries have been submitted to me by PM, so there is no doubt that this will be a tricky contest for the mods to judge. Thank you to all those who did take the time to participate! The Fan Fiction forums will most certainly benefit from a “new look”.

February was also the month of romance and the Fan Fiction forum celebrated Valentine’s Day in style. Mistress_Renata conducted a Valentine’s Day Treasure Hunt, while I, along with LianaMara and JainaDurron, opened a Valentine’s Day Love Letter (Writing) Challenge. The judges are still out on that competition. By my count, 81 fan fics have been entered into the contest, which is an astonishing number for the five days the challenge was open. Keep an eye on the “mother thread” (located here) for updates. I also encourage everyone to volunteer to write a review for the special edition Valentine’s Challenge newsletter! Xaara needs as many hands as possible to review 80+ fics.

In other news, Kit’ returned from her break to Bundaberg – the Australian capital of rum and sugar cane. The MS is yet to see the souvenirs she brought back from her trip wink .

Please don’t forget to view this thread. It has a very important reminder that everything should observe.

In light of the lack of events to showcase, I’ve decided to point out a handful of very helpful threads for the average writer/reader.

- Beta Readers: Yes or No? (If you’re undecided as to whether you need a beta-reader, visit this thread and examine the opinions of fellow writers. It also discusses whether you should use a beta-reader before or after you’ve posted your story.)

- There are always long running character discussion threads operating in the Writers’ Resource. Just to name a few: Obi-Wan – A Character Workshop, Letting Qui-Gons be Qui-Gons, and Underground. If you’re interested in conversing about a character that doesn’t have a discussion thread, go ahead and create one! However, it might be wise to ask the mods beforehand to see if there isn’t a pre-existing thread that your eyes have skipped over.

- Discussing Shifting Perspectives and Other Story Telling Methods in Fan Fiction (A very active and in-depth discussion thread on POVs and storytelling.)

- War of the Writing Styles: Bare minimalism VS. Rich texture (How do you write? What’s your style? What’s your preference? Express your opinion in this thread!)

- The brilliant Fan Fiction Recommendation Service is still alive. Are you having trouble finding the fan fic you want? This service will help you find your ideal reading choice.

- Writing in Collaboration With Others – what are the secrets of success? (This topic gives very accurate advice and tips on co-writing.)

- Thesaurus – Tool or Crutch (I highly recommend this thread for new writers to gain experience.)

Until next month, ciao! happy

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Past Newsletters:

Newsletter I, March 2003

Newsletter II, April 2003

Newsletter III, May 2003

Newsletter IV, October 2003

Newsletter V, November 2003

Newsletter VI, January 2004

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Credits:

Reviewers:
_Derisa_Ollamhin_
Dianethx
Flyboy_7
Shaindl
Ty-gon Jinn

Vignettes, Forum News, Locked Thread Recommendation:
Amidala_Skywalker

Plot Bunnies
ophelia

Article:
Ty-gon Jinn

Contributing Artists:
Leela: "Han and Leia"
Guinastasia: "Wedding"

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Editor/Organizer:
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Date Posted: 2/29/04 5:26am Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition VII -- February, 2004
These newsletters are awesome. You guys do a terrific job. happy

 

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Date Posted: 2/29/04 5:43am Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition VII -- February, 2004
Magnificent work, all! happy

LOL at the advertisements! Great job, dianethx! I also found Ty-Gon’s article to be particularly intriguing.

Thank you to everyone for their contributions! Another satisfying read for this month.

Am love

 

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Date Posted: 2/29/04 9:16am Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition VII -- February, 2004
Another excellent and informative newsletter.

Well done. happy

 

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Date Posted: 2/29/04 12:36pm Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition VII -- February, 2004
And SobiFan did an excellent job on Defining Us. I just wish I could have gotten her to beta its sequel but she's a busy webmiss, which I understand completely.

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Date Posted: 2/29/04 1:46pm Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition VII -- February, 2004
*snort* Oh, Diane, your ads are always so funny! laugh

And Ty-Gon, great article!

 

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dianethx  14888 posts
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Date Posted: 2/29/04 2:42pm Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition VII -- February, 2004
Great job everyone. I really liked the pictures at the beginning. Lovely! And Ty-gon Jinn's article was quite interesting but I was very glad he didn't have a quiz at the end (wipes worried brow)...LOL.

Am, I liked the listing of useful discussions going on. Very helpful and rather enlightening when you see them all listed like that.

And terrific reviews and interviews!!!

Great quality. Keep up the good work!



 

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Date Posted: 2/29/04 6:15pm Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition VII -- February, 2004
Xaara you didn't miss a beat after taking over for Jane. happy Great job everyone! You put out another quality newsletter. I was thrilled to be reviewed and so glad whoever got the task enjoyed the story. blush

 

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14391_Aaron Allston  (A&A)
Date Posted: 2/29/04 7:01pm Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition VII -- February, 2004
Thank you everyone - the newsletter was, as always, truly a team effort. Everyone who submitted a portion of the publication and those who offered support and ideas helped immensely.

As stated above in Am's Forum News, we will be publishing a supplement with short reviews of the Valentine's Day Challenge entries. Keep an eye out for that - reviewing all the love letter stories promises to be rewarding.

Once again, thanks for reading! happy

-Xaara

 

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Date Posted: 2/29/04 7:02pm Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition VII -- February, 2004
Despite not being around here much any more, I still have my spies grin who twittered in my ear about these reviews - and I am truly honored. To get accolades is always lovely; to get them from such multi-talented, gifted individuals is a source of pure joy.

Congratulations to all the contributors to this marvelous effort.

CYN

 

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Date Posted: 3/3/04 7:44pm Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition VII -- February, 2004
I didn't know this existed! Brilliantly well done; I especially liked the literary section. How do we know when this is posted in new editions?

-Saber

 

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Date Posted: 3/3/04 8:03pm Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition VII -- February, 2004 - Date Edited: 3/3/04 8:03pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Jedi-Ander
Check the Admin. Announcements stuck to the top of the Writers' Resource Forum's first page whenever it is updated. happy

 

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