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FF_Newsletter_Editor Registered: Jan '04	Date Posted: 3/31/04 10:58pm Subject: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition VIII -- March 2004 - Date Edited: 4/1/04 4:28am (1 edits total) Edited By: FF_Newsletter_Editor
	The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition VIII March, 2004 Happy St. Patrick's Day! Page I: Newsletter News: It hasn't been a fast-paced month, but the reviewers here have worked diligently to produce another wonderful newsletter. Although we intended to put the Valentine's Day reviews out near the middle of the month, I underestimated the amount of time and the sheer magnitude of the task. However, we are including a Valentine's Challenge review page with this newsletter – so enjoy! In this newsletter we have…gasp…a contest! Yes, ladies and gentlemen, in honor of St. Patrick's Day, we've set the first line of an Irish poem throughout the first page of the newsletter. Just find the little green letters, piece them together, and send me the title of the poem and its author. The prize for the first PM to arrive? An interview to be published in the next newsletter, and the opportunity for you to recommend any JC fic of your choosing, whether it be yours or another particular favorite. Who can resist the chance at a moment in the spotlight? (Hint: There are a total of 35 letters to be found, and they're all in the order they appear in the first line of the poem.) Contest closed - see my post. Congratulations to the winner! As always, if you're interested in reviewing, finding stories for us to review, writing an article, conducting an interview, or if you just want to make a suggestion or comment, please PM FF_Newsletter_Editor or Xaara. Your help would be much appreciated. —The Editor Recommended Reading: Before the Saga: Tomorrow's Rage by Healer Apprentice Lina Reviewer 1: Rating: Very Good Comments: Healer Apprentice Lina has some very strong characters; it seems I'd have to read Momento to completely understand, but the plot works very well. Quote: He knew exactly what the Jedi saw when they looked at him. He was a killer, but a young killer. No more than a boy. A weak, foolish boy. Well, why not let them think that? Just for now... ———— Reviewer 2: Rating: Excellent Comments: I am not a huge fan of OC unless there are major canon characters; I am more a fan of stories that are mainly around canon characters. However this story has made me re-think that standard. In Tomorrow’s Rage, the author begins to weave a stunning tale that unfolds right before your eyes. You can picture the characters as though they were part of the Star Wars family. The author through her words and imagination draws you into the story to the point where you are feeling sorry for the characters…whether they be Jedi or not. I for one shall be keeping an eye on this lovely chapter, and pray that there is an update soon, for even reviewer can get a bit impatient. Quote: Knight Bilal stood talking quietly to Faal, whose features were twisted into a mask of worry. Turning to Lewix at his approach, Knight Bilal gave the younger Jedi a neutral, official glance. “Padawan Winchard, I have a few questions to ask you regarding your time in the Creche this evening,” he began. “Has something happened?” inquired the dark-haired student. “One of the infants in the Creche has gone missing,” informed the Knight, coolly. “Please detail to me as best you can if you think you noticed anything strange during the time you assisted Master Faal with the vaccinations.” Feudal Space by Keeper_of_Swords Reviewer 1: Rating: Fair Comments: The author has tried to meld Star Wars into a feudal-based story. With dragons and skeleton Sith and noxious things in the dark, it is an adventure story involving a Shadow Thief and a Jedi Knight. While the premise is interesting and things medieval are thrown into the mix for effect, the plot of each chapter seems slight. The writing is easy to read, no dense detail to distract the reader from the interactions of the two main characters, but it might have been better to deepen the relationship instead of having still more action. Quote: In a prison cell within the Jedi Temple, Wulfgar was thinking. It had been three days since he had been caught. The Jedi said that they had felt his presence by use of the Force, but he still felt gloomy about being captured. He was after all a Shadow Thief – an expert in the art of stealing and a chief of stealth and escape. ———— Reviewer 2: Rating: Good Comments: Feudal Space is an intriguing attempt to marry medieval tales with Star Wars. Set in the early days of the Order, the set of short stories centres around Wulfgar, a Thief and Ceinwyn, a Jedi Knight. The combination of standard medieval story elements, such as castles, moats, drawbridges and lightsabres, ships and the Jedi is really interesting. Like all good crossovers, though one would think they would never work together, they really do. The two main characters are interesting, and as a duo, a striking pair. What dropped it down to a good instead of a very good or an excellent is a certain clunkiness to the language. It's a bit thick in places and doesn't always read easily. I don't know if Keeper uses a beta (I suspect not) but one would help to smooth out the language and help it flow better. That said, this story has intriguing ideas, interesting characters and the concept is incredibly original. Nice work, Keeper! Quote: “Close the gate!” yelled the Lord of the Sith to the sleeping guard at the main gate. On his horse, Wulfgar pointed his bowcaster forward, and still riding, shot at the large iron chain that kept the drawbridge up. Red laser hit into the chain and it snapped. The drawbridge fell. The Guard at the main entrance opened his eyes, still dazed. Ceinwyn leaned low and sideways on her horse, passing her green sword through his skull. “NO!!!” yelled the Lord of the Sith as he saw Wulfgar and Ceinwyn ride out of his Castle. “Come on!” he roared to his riders, “we’ve got to follow them, and kill them!” So the Jedi and the Thief rode away from the Stronghold of Garm and headed toward the forest, with laser still being shot at them from the castle windows and ten furious Sith Riders galloping towards them from behind, coming closer upon them. The Saga: Solid Ground by Thumper09 Reviewer 1: Rating: Excellent Comments: The story is one of Corona Squadron and placed after the Battle of Yavin. The plot line is intense and intriguing but it is the characters that really shine. Each OC is carefully crafted to stand out, with their own personalities and quirks and yet they merge together beautifully into a fighting unit when needed. The descriptions are vivid but not overdone so that you can clearly and easily picture what is going on. The author use]s comedy to help sweeten the time between the intense firefights of Rebels and Imperials - it is very funny and helps to highlight the camaraderie of the Squadron. A wonderful fic and one that readers should scramble to read. Well done. Quote: Finally Quiver continued in a serious tone, forgetting about the accent, "Our mission is a difficult one and will require us all to be on top of our game." He quickly called up a holoprojection of Coruscant on the front table. "Our destination: Coruscant, or Imperial Center. Former capital of the Republic, current capital of the Empire. Defense stations, fighter patrols and planetary shielding will all have to be dealt with or avoided to reach our primary target: The Swordcat's Lair, home of the best nerf steaks this side of Corellia. Our objective: take-out." Now the Coronas could sense where Quiver was going with all this, and they were more than willing to play along and be entertained while waiting for their CO and XO. The mock gasp coming from them was done so perfectly in unison that an outsider who was watching would have been convinced the whole thing was scripted beforehand. Before the gasp and associated murmurings had completely died out, Quiver's wingman, Flight Officer Darin "Thumper" Stanic, opened his eyes wide and said, "But that's a suicide mission! We'll never make it!" ———— Reviewer 2: Rating: Excellent Comments: Solidly realized original characters and finely crafted plot combine to make this story flow. Though we don't know the characters as canon, they quickly become an integral part of the Star Wars universe. Above all, this work is realistic on many different levels – it focuses on relationships in a wartime situation and follows round and flawed characters through a logical sequence of events that is gripping and tense. Wonderful, wonderful story. Quote: "Starsmoke to Corona Lead." Starsmoke was the remaining Special Forces shuttle. "This is Corona Lead," responded Mackin. "Things are pretty hectic over here." "I know, Corona Lead," Lt. Col. Trainneer replied. "That's why we're getting out. The Imperial forces here are much stronger than we anticipated. We're temporarily aborting the mission. You and your pilots are to break off and head for Point Delta. Omega Signal. Acknowledge." "Omega Signal acknowledged," Mackin answered to indicate he heard the retreat order. The TIE in his sights danced, trying to throw off Mackin's aim. The Rebel danced with it. "Starsmoke, I have three pilots down and one with a damaged hyperdrive. We'll send you their locations and move the fighting away from them before we disengage. I need you to come retrieve them so we can leave." He fired and missed. "Negative, Corona Lead. I said get out. Our last team member inside the colony managed to get one more report through before we lost contact completely, and he said more Imperial forces are on the way. Cut your losses. We're leaving and so are you." Memories of My Beloved Alderaan by PadmeLeiaJaina Reviewer 1: Rating: Excellent Comments: Brilliant characterizations of the characters and near-poetic recollections of sights and sounds of Alderaan. Very, very nice. Quote: "I’m sure she was just referring to Emperor’s Day, Princess Leia. Pine boughs are an essential component of the celebration they represent the spirit of the outdoors. Although the rest of the trees may be slumbering during winter, pine still remains green as a reminder that the spirit of rebirth with spring is just around the corner. From what I understand on arid planets such as Tatooine, they use plastique boughs since there are no trees there," Threepio prattled as he detangled the ribbon from his body. He moaned, "I couldn’t imagine living somewhere as horrible as that. My joints hurt just thinking about all of that sand." ———— Reviewer 2: Rating: Excellent Comments: This was a very good flashback type of story. The author seemed to convey the feelings and memories of Leia and brought us back to a place where Leia grew up to be the person we all feel in love with. The author’s story brings to life what life may have been like on Alderaan. From the culture to the sites and smells. Also she gives a peek into how the Rebellion came to be, and why her father joined and help create it. I do look forward to reading more on this great story once darth real life has released its hold on her. Quote: On her small, rickety table sat four buckets filled with handmade stick puppets. The puppet hid inside its cone and you pushed upwards on a stick, causing the puppet to peek out and greet the world. Each one was intricately painted and detailed. I saw beauty in their simplicity. My father seemed very proud of me for selecting a toy from the old woman’s booth. I didn’t see anything noble about my choice, all I knew was that I had satisfied my craving for a treat. In later years, I would learn that Madam Hilgrant, the toy artist, had been on the brink of poverty. When word spread throughout the festival that the Prince of the House of Organa had purchased one of her toys, she sold out all of her stock. In her last years she lived comfortably as people finally recognized the skill that she put into her beloved puppets. Each year it became a ritual of mine to purchase a toy from her booth. When I was eleven I recall dashing through the crowds bee-lining towards her booth only to discover she wasn’t there. Frantic, I searched high and low, but Madam Hilgrant was nowhere to be seen. I was in a near state of hysterics when my father found me. After some investigating he discovered that she had passed away during the heat of the summer. In that moment I had felt that my childhood had ceased and come to an abrupt end. I didn’t purchase a toy that year, nor ever again. I feared that by endorsing another artisan, that I would be spoiling her memory. I cherished my puppets from her. They were some of the rare toys that I had kept in pristine shape. I had always hoped that I could pass them onto my children… Beyond the Saga: The Other Half of Me by J_M_Bulldog Reviewer 1: Rating: Good Comments: I liked the characterization in this story a lot. Mara especially sounds very much like the Mara from the books. In fact, she is so like book-Mara that I felt an urge to jump into the story and inform her in no uncertain terms that she was to fall in love with Luke and that was final. Eventually, however, she figured that out without my help and realized her love for him unaided. If you're a fan angst and romance, this story is definitely one for you. And if you're not an angsty romantic, be sure to stop by anyway. The Other Half of Me is an entertaining read. Quote: “Honey,” he drawled, “where is the associate that I was to speak to? Will you run back into the ship and fetch him?” “I fetch no one,” Mara said. “I am the associate.” ********* Mara shook the memories out her head. The persistent beeping warning her of a problem on her ship, caused her face to twist into a scowl. She checked the navicomputer. The closest planet she could land on was in the Hapes Consortium. Faintly growling Mara headed for the small planet. “Unidentified ship,” a shrill voice sounded over the comm. grating on Mara’s already frayed nerves. “Who are you and what is your purpose here?” ———— Reviewer 2: Rating: Very Good Comments: This is a Luke/Mara story that is both fun to read and less predictable than most. Of course, the readers know that Mara and Luke eventually fall in love, but the time before they understand their feelings for one another is full of banter and adventure as Leia sends them off on a mission to try to hasten the process. Unfortunately, they misunderstand almost everything that happens, which leads them into some situations that are amusing from the readers' removed viewpoint. I though Mara and Luke were portrayed very well. They are believable characters that expand upon the ones found in the books and the movies. Very good job. Quote: “Look, Skywalker, I just got in and I’m tired. You can introduce me to your girlfriend later.” Even though she had flippantly called the person he had met his girlfriend, she was concerned that her insides had cringed at the word. “Mara, you know I don’t have a girlfriend. I was meditating and felt led to go for a walk. While out, I found a young female alien, lost and alone and in need of help.” Mara snorted. “You and that ‘I’ve got to help everybody’ complex of yours.” Luke ignored the comment. “I have to ask you something but I wanted you to meet her first.” Lest Ye Be Judged by DarthIshtar Reviewer 1: Rating: Very good Comments: The story is AU after ROTJ, and asks the question of what would happen if Anakin Skywalker were put on trial for his crimes? The answers are interesting, as is Ish's choice for his lead counsel. The best part of this story is some of the dialogue and the relationships. Ish has Han and Leia bickering down pat, but colours it with the love they have now professed for each other. Luke and Leia's developing relationship as brother and sister is similarly well-written. I could picture having some of those exchanges with my own brother. There a couple of things that didn't work for me here. The first is that sometimes the action seems a bit jumpy and that certain things are inserted for the sake of inserting them. Early in the story, for instance, Leia gets pregnant, but then loses them to miscarriage. I'm not sure how that tied into the rest of the story. Elements like this could have been eliminated and the story tightened up. Second, some of the bits in the trial, while well-written and showing some definite knowledge of law and criminal proceedings, leaves some confusion. It may have been the fact that I read the story fast and not as closely as I may have otherwise, but there were a couple points where I was left thinking, "what exactly did Leia accomplish with that cross-examination"? A couple of readers expressed the same thought, so I doubt I was alone. But it is an interesting story that raises interesting questions: was there any hope of redemption for Anakin/Vader? Was it possible to look beyond the mask to the person beyond? What is the definition of family? How do we heal immense hurts that we have inflicted on others? Can we? In light of recent world events, and the resulting international tribunals, I really found this fascinating. Great job, Ish! Quote: "We are all aware of the great triumph that came with the Emperor's death," she began, surprised at the lack of waver and the presence of mind in her voice. "We have even more present in our minds the injustices that brought us to that triumph. We can remember why each of us fought the war, no matter which side we were on. We remember too well the losses that shaped our characters and kept us fighting so that some day the losses would end. "But we also must remember that, while many of these are the common costs of war, there are many things that cannot be so casually dismissed. I know that we are of one heart on that matter because of the dozens of requests I have received in the eighteen days since the founding of the New Republic for war crimes trials." Finally, the words that would shape the rest of this madness had been uttered. She had to pause for a long breath before her mind would allow her to continue coherently. "Most surprising was one from a perpetrator against himself. He surrendered of his own free will and choice and has come forward to be judged for his crimes. It is for this reason that we come before you today, not as allies or enemies, humans or aliens, but as commonplace people needing justice. "This man was born Anakin Skywalker. He served the Jedi Order until the rise of the Emperor, but records since then have made no mention of his name. Yet he is the most feared name in recent history, for Anakin Skywalker spent the last twenty-five years as Darth Vader." The expected reaction did not disappoint. While some chose to simply gasp or murmur amongst themselves, others stood to hurl insults or demand answers. Luke was soon hidden from view, but her gaze was already wandering, taking in the full view. ———— Reviewer 2: Rating: Very Good Comments: The story is both well-written and intriguing. I was captured from the first few words, and read excitedly until the most recent post; I can't wait for an update! Han and Leia are characterized with great skill, and the premise of the story is interesting – Vader is put on trial for crimes he committed during the Galactic Civil War. Though overall a good mix of action and reflection, the story did lag at points, and there were some thus-far unnecessary elements such as Leia's miscarriage. Despite the presence of a few negative attributes, the story was a great deal of fun to read and is definitely worth your time. Quote: [Leia] reached out a hand and he accomodatingly grasped it, coming in to enfold her in a quick embrace. "I'll be back in a few hours, but I wanted to tell you where I was going and ask you what I am supposed to tell them about our missing team member, Commander Luke Skywalker." A wave of something between frustrated misunderstanding and cautious resolve swept over her, but she stood firm and broke away. "He didn't desert us," she insisted. "I know," he countered honestly, "but they're not going to see it that way. What am I supposed to tell them?" -----signature----- 'Twas as if the combination in one city of too many printing presses; a bloody and perpetual atmosphere of Party Malice; and an infinite supply of coffee had combined...to engender...an unstanchable wound that bled Ink and would never heal.
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FF_Newsletter_Editor Registered: Jan '04	Date Posted: 3/31/04 11:04pm Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition VIII -- March 2004 - Date Edited: 4/1/04 6:41pm (2 edits total) Edited By: FF_Newsletter_Editor
	Page II: Locked Thread Recommendation: It Was Cold by SenatorLeiaOrgana A humorous view of Luke's thought processes as he's suspended (upended?) by the Wampa on Hoth. Luke stays true to his character throughout, which is an extraordinary feat, as he's upside-down and not in the normal serene Jedi state. Very short, very sweet, and very funny. Bunnies Up for Adoption into Good Word Processors: by JadeDjo 1. Where did the Rebels get the money to fund their little rebellion? Because even if they were all volunteers the equipment necessary to run an operation of that kind needs some kind of capital. 2. How do the Jedi of the Old Republic or the New function? Is everything donated (ex. ships, equipment)? Are they an independent business? Are they sub-entities of the government and so entitled to a part of the budget? March Writing Tips: This month, we're going to talk about something that people often, well, talk about – dialogue. Namely, we're going to discuss four essential points to remember while writing good dialogue – the placement of punctuation, the capitalization of nouns indicating who is speaking, the capitalization of new sentences within dialogue, and the placement of action that occurs between spoken lines. 1. Placement of Punctuation: Punctuation belonging to the speaker's statement goes inside quotation marks. When someone speaks, he or she finishes what he or she is saying within the quote. Punctuation attached to the sentence outside the quotes (usually a reminder of who's speaking or a description of actions) goes outside the quotation marks. When you think about it, the way we write quotations makes sense. Also, when someone quotes someone else, the inside quote should be indicated by apostrophes instead of standard double quotes. See examples below: Correct: "I don't know about this whole writing business," Ray Terr said. "Don't worry," Questa Nanser said. "It's not as complicated as it seems. A wise man once said, 'Time flies like an arrow. Fruit flies like a banana.'" "You're not making any sense. How will I remember all of these rules?" he asked. Incorrect: "You won't have any problems", she said ",because, you'll realize that when someone's speaking, he's creating complete sentences within the framework of larger narrative structure.". 2. Capitalization of "He," "She," and "It." "He," "she," and "it," though they do indicate people and/or animals who may be speaking, are not proper nouns. They are capitalized only when used to begin a new sentence. Correct: "Hey, I get this!" he exclaimed. "This is starting to make sense." "I knew you'd understand sooner or later." She smiled at him. "Now let's get on with the example." Incorrect: "But wait a minute…" He continued. "How will I know when not to capitalize the 'he' that means 'me'?" "Is your 'he' part of a different sentence?" she raised an eyebrow. "I thought not. Therefore, your capitalization of it is wrong." "Ah, but you're also wrong," He said, "because you didn't capitalize 'she' in your sentence." "We're demonstrating, Ray." 3. Capitalization of the Continuation of Sentences: When the indication of who's speaking interrupts a sentence, the second half of the sentence is not capitalized, and there is a comma instead of a period after the indicator. When the indication of who's speaking comes between two complete sentences, the author should place a period after the indicator and start the new spoken sentence with a capital letter. Correct: "Well," Questa said, "we're almost on the homestretch here." "It's about time," said Ray. "I was beginning to think our author would never get around to finishing up this article." Incorrect: "But of course," Ray continued. "There has to be the section where we make deliberate mistakes, as always. I'm speaking in fragments again." "Ray, you need to stop that," said Questa, "between your fragments and my run-ons, we make quite a pair." 4. Placement of Descriptive Sentences: If Ray is talking and then decides, for some reason, to cavort around the room, all of this writing stays in one paragraph. If, however, Questa is the one talking while Ray is the one cavorting, the dialogue and the action should be in separate paragraphs. Correct: "Well, I think I've learned about everything there is to know about how to write dialogue," Ray said. Just for fun, he danced a jig while speaking. Questa rolled her eyes. "You," she said, "are absolutely absurd." "But you like me anyway," he said. "Otherwise you wouldn't put up with me." Incorrect: "I'm not so sure." Ray hopped on one foot and then turned a back flip. "But you do put up with me, Questa." Questa tapped her foot impatiently. "As a result of the jumbled dialogue, I have no idea whether I'm speaking or you are." Ray nodded in agreement and continued his gymnastics. There you go – that's all you need to write perfectly understandable and entertaining dialogue. Good luck, and happy writing! "Yeah, and see if you ever sucker us into this again," grumbled Ray. Questa poked him. "You know, Ray, this is our job." "I know. But still…. You just know she's going to make us do something next month too…. For some practice, visit this site. March Writing Trivia: It was on March 11, 1954 that popular writer Douglas Adams was born. His fantastically popular Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy series was a rebellion against the standards of conventional science fiction and featured, a hapless hero, Arthur Dent, a supremely conceited politician, Zaphod Breeblebrox, an experienced intergalactic hitchhiker, Ford Prefect, and a perpetually depressed robot, Marvin. A short excerpt from A Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy "Six pints of bitter," said Ford Prefect to the barman of the Horse and Groom. "And quickly please, the world's about to end." The barman of the Horse and Groom didn't deserve this kind of treatment; he was a dignified old man. He pushed his glasses up his nose and blinked at Ford Prefect. Ford ignored him and stared out the window, so the barman looked instead at Arthur, who shrugged helplessly and said nothing. So the barman said, "Oh yes, sir? Nice weather for it," and started pulling pints. He tried again. "Going to watch the match this afternoon then?" Ford glanced round at him. "No, no point," he said, and looked back out the window. "What's that, foregone conclusion then, you reckon, sir?" said the barman. "Arsenal without a chance?" "No no," said Ford, "it's just that the world's about to end." And that's only the beginning… -----signature----- 'Twas as if the combination in one city of too many printing presses; a bloody and perpetual atmosphere of Party Malice; and an infinite supply of coffee had combined...to engender...an unstanchable wound that bled Ink and would never heal.
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FF_Newsletter_Editor Registered: Jan '04	Date Posted: 3/31/04 11:07pm Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition VIII -- March 2004 - Date Edited: 4/1/04 4:22am (1 edits total) Edited By: FF_Newsletter_Editor
	Page III: Hundreds of people have written about love letters over the years. Love, its trials and its rewards, is one of the most discussed subjects on this (and may we assume any other?) planet. In February our writers put out an amazing volume and quality of work focusing on a love letter, and we've come up with a few sentences and a 1 – 10 rating for each. Enjoy! Before the Saga "Untitled" by jacen200015 - I liked the way this vignette balanced the two letters between Xanatos and Zenia, the woman he loves. The realization that she loved him but not enough to abandon her duty to the Jedi was very satisfying. A solid 5/10 "Aluvian Rosewood" by ViariSkywalker - The use of memory to introduce the letter between Brann's parents was a good one. I liked how the story mixed past and present to tell the sad story of his parent's life. The letter itself was relatively happy but his mother's sense of foreboding was a nice counterpoint. A fine 6/10 "Will You Read the Letter?" by Ty-gon Jinn - The letter had a very good old-world feel to it with formality and just a touch of humor. I liked the subtle give-and-take between the two sisters as well. A nice 6/10 "What Was Never Meant to Be" by Jedi_Nifet - I liked that the letter was delivered several years after it was written and it was obvious that someone else (likely Obi-Wan) has sent it after Qui-Gon died. I really liked the ending. It made the whole story much stronger. A good 7/10 "Is Hope Lost?" by Jade_Skywalker - I really liked this story. It showed a slave's life very well, especially how little the owners really care about their property. I especially liked that Kalisha thought of Conner at the end. A good 7/10. "That Crazy Little Thing Called Love" by Shaindl - I loved this story. It was innovative and heart-stopping hilarious. The use of the droids/cruisers names was a very subtle touch of whimsy. Kept laughing at "get a hanger" - LOL. A brilliant 10/10 "In the beginning..." by Nerpherder - It was rather sad that the future evil Emperor was in love with a woman that didn't love him back. It was an intriguing take on his life. A nice 5/10 "From the moment I saw You" by ca_tron - I found this rather sad - that Obi-Wan loved someone but that love was not returned. To tear up the letter and then have the woman call him to gush about the man she loved was a really nice touch. A nice 6/10 "Love You, I Do" by Happy_Hobbit_Padawan - I absolutely loved this story. The cutesy names that Yoda and Yaddle kept calling each other were hilarious but strangely disturbing. I couldn't stop laughing. A brilliant 10/10 "Simply Ben" by Reihla - This was a really sad story. I especially liked that Qui-Gon decided to send Obi-Wan's discarded letter. At least, Obi-Wan had some closure when he heard the news of his love's death. A sweet 7/10 "Obi-Wan: A Friar of Verona?" by Knight_Dilettante - I really liked that this story had me guessing if the letters between Madama Jocasta Nu and Qui-Gon Jinn were love notes or something else. I loved the ending when you find out that it was just translations of old love poems. Very well done. A wonderful 9/10. "Picnic" by obaona - This story was amusing. I really found the subtle byplay between the two to be quite funny. The use of ephemisms (kata and picnic) for other activities was very tongue-in-cheek. A good 7/10 "Dearest Ulic" by NarundiJedi – This vignette was able to tell a slice of the story of comic-book characters Nomi Sunrider and Ulic Qel-Droma very well. It was bittersweet but a good job. A nice 6/10 "Pretty in Pink" by Jemmiah - Jemmy's little letter to her Ben was beautifully done. The attempt to butter him and Qui-Gon up so that the mess she created with the red/pink tunics would be "overlooked" was first rate. The poem at the end was really funny. Very amusing story. A great 8/10. "How do I love thee?" by JadeSolo - This letter was really cute. The story had me guessing until the end just who he was talking about. When I realized it was his starfighter, I laughed out loud. Wonderful. A very good 8/10 "Jango Fett: Haunted" by Dormé - I liked that the vignette gave Jango a backstory and a woman to love. It made him more human and likable. I also liked that he was able to realize that his love could be killed because of him. Nicely done. A very good 8/10 The Saga "Untitled" by stacysatrip - This was a touching and nice little letter. It seemed to catch how a 10-year old would write a letter to someone he or she cared about: ramblings about different things going on in one’s life with an occasional "I love you" written in there. This letter brought you back to the time when you were ten and had your first crush on that special boy/girl and you had no clue how to write to them. This letter shows how each of our letters would have turned out if it was us. Good little story. Rating: 9/10 "Liar" by rhonderoo - Wow!! This was the first word that came to mind when reading this little piece. This is a well-written set of letters, set during ESB and ROTJ. When reading I could feel the pain that Ani and not Vader felt at reading those long lost letters from his wife. If you read anything, this is one fic that needs to be read. Rating: 10/10 "Untitled" by Darth_Lex - This was a good post. It brought out the emotion everyone was feeling. My only problem with this was the fact that being one the of the few who have not read the comics it was a bit confusing. I think that there could have been a little bit more information as to what had happened on the moon. Also the story did not flow smoothly as some of the others I have read. But other then that this was a great story. Rating: 6/10 "What does the heart say?" by Sara Kenobi - This was a great letter. Brought out the true feelings of Leia and explained why she acted the way she did towards everyone. You could almost feel her struggle to believe that Han was still alive…I really loved this one. Rating: 9/10 "All I Want" by Thumper09 - I have never been a fan of original characters unless a canon character was in the story, but I have to say that I did enjoy this one very much. For a moment there you can not help but feel sorry for the person reading the story, knowing as he does that the girl he has fallen in love with loves someone else. This is a great piece of writing and I look forward to reading more of Thumper09’s work. Rating: 10/10 "Worthy" by Lady-Kenobi - This short story is comprised of two letters – one from Obi-Wan to Padmé, the other from Padmé to Obi-Wan. The letters are short and sweet, and generally well-written; I found the emotions Obi-Wan displayed particularly touching and realistic. This was hardly a new spin on the ancient art of the love letter, but it is a charming vignette. Rating: 6/10 "The Letter" by jacen200015 - A letter from a survivor of the attack on the Jedi Academy is juxtaposed with the experiences of a man fighting in an urgent war. It is never clear exactly what he is fighting for; neither is his love's relationship to the Jedi fully explained. The writing style is somewhat choppy, and the end left me hanging, as if a few more sentences were required to finish the story. Overall, however, it was a good effort. Rating: 5/10 "Untitled" by anakin_girl – A letter from Sabé to Obi-Wan makes up this AU. The story is based on the idea that Anakin arrived on Tatooine in time to rescue his mother from the Tusken Raiders. Obi-Wan is there with him, separated from Sabé, his secret love. The letter is full of amusing details about life on Tatooine and Obi-Wan's observations, and is satisfying, if short. Rating: 8/10 "My Valentine" by CrystalKenobi – A letter and a song from Obi-Wan to his lady with the peach-colored eyes, this is a short and sweet vignette. I had some trouble relating it to the Star Wars universe, however – it seemed to rely heavily on Valentine's Day and the associated traditions such as roses, candy, and dinner. Despite that fact, it is definitely a worthwhile read. Rating: 7/10 "To Tar-Lal, my husband" by GuerreStellari – A highly emotional but otherwise somewhat unoriginal letter from one OC to another, this story focuses on the feelings experienced by the wife of a member of the military. It is eloquently worded and filled with very realistic sentiments. Rating: 7/10 "Shadow" by KrystalBlaze - I found this viggie really intriguing. The narrator is never revealed, and I would be very interested to know who Krystal was thinking of when she wrote this. Finally, Krystal accomplishes something a lot of us can't - she wrote this in the present tense, and the feeling that gives the reader is one of immediacy, like we're there. A much different take on the idea of a love letter - nicely done! Rating: 8/10 "Hopefully Yours" by _Derisa_Ollamhin_ - The best part of this viggie is how completely immersed the reader is in the Star Wars universe. By great use of language, Derisa shows us that we're not in Kansas anymore; her characters are well-rounded and have unique voices. Only thing I would say is that it's too conventional in terms of how the letters are presented. But really, I loved it - especially Derisa's facility with language. Rating: 8/10 "In Memoriam" by JediNemesis - Okay, I'll admit it. I'm biased. Nem's other work is great and I enjoy her writing immensely. Moreover, I love first person stories. The combination of both in this story is wonderful. The flow is superb, it keeps you moving along, and you really feel for the poor soldier who keeps the last letter from his ladylove in his helmet. But the twist, so carefully hidden until the moment it's revealed, is what really sets this vignette apart. Rating: 9/10 "A Knight & His Lady" by AERYN_SUN - A somewhat clichéd Sabé/Obi-Wan story. She loves him, he loves her, and they want to spend their lives together but can't because of their duties. Some exploration of the circumstances behind the letters would have helped. Rating: 6/10 "Butterfly" by Livi-Wan - Lovely imagery, and a great poem (this coming from someone who doesn't usually care all that much for poetry!). Even though it's short the story is complete - you know why the protagonist is writing the letter, and why it's important to her to do so. Nice work! Rating: 7/10 "Message Number 39" by geo3 – A wonderful and unique piece of writing, this vignette had me laughing and thinking all the way through. Anakin's cryptic message to Padmé – "All is well" – turns out to be much more by the end of the tightly written story. It turns out to be, well, a love letter. Rating: 10/10 "Untitled" by LadyPadme – Although it is somewhat unoriginal, this story managed nevertheless to condense Padmé's love for Anakin into a sweet letter that is worth the read. Rating: 7/10 "Untitled" by Ellcrys3 – A love letter to Anakin…which is not written by Padmé. This short vignette is in fact the letter of Shmi Skywalker addressing her son, and it expressed with great clarity the pride and loss Shmi feels as her son is no longer with her but away training to be a Jedi. Rating: 8/10 "Letters to Daddy" by kayladie97 – Luke writes letters to his absent father via a journal in this sweet story focusing on a boy's quest for understanding. The journal entries show a process of growth in Luke's thought patterns over the years, and are touching and warm. Rating: 8/10 "In Our Own Way" by Shaindl – What a twist on the idea of a love letter! In this tightly written vignette, the love letter central to the story is in fact a generic letter from a Jedi to the galaxy, eventually read by the stormtrooper who kills him. Wonderfully introspective and thoughtful. Rating: 10/10 "Whispers of Love" by Arldetta – In this vignette, Obi-Wan receives a love letter from a dead woman who gives him a reason to continue. Obi-Wan's thought processes are rather predictable; he swears his everlasting love for the woman and resolves to brave all until he can meet her in the afterlife. Still, an engaging read. Rating: 7/10 "Of Hopes and Dreams" by TKeira_Lea – Letters from Anakin to Padmé and from Padmé to her children are read by Luke and Leia in this evocative vignette. The characterizations are gentle but effective, with the siblings' discovery of who they really are portrayed with subtlety and a strong command of language. Rating: 8/10 "The Last" by Happy_Hobbit_Padawan – Beautifully written, with a heartrending twist at the end, this story is a must-read for anyone who wants to cry his or her eyes out. Although it is an Anakin/Padmé pairing, it is anything but cliché, and is in fact quite convincingly realistic. Rating: 9/10 "Untitled" by Arriss – A journal entry from Padmé to herself, this entry emphasizes Padmé's adherence to expectations and willingness to perform her duty. Arriss pulls off what is essentially an internal monologue quite nicely. Rating: 8/10 "We're In This Together" by RebelScum77 – In this strongly written letter from Anakin to Padmé, a young lover's frustration at the impossibility of his situation is clearly portrayed. Anakin's love for Padmé is evident throughout, and his enduring willingness to wait for her is realistic as well. Rating: 7/10 "Grime and Dirt" by obaona – Really a great story, this vignette features Anakin lost without food, finding a couple's love letters. The simplicity of the letters is beautiful, and the fact that they radiate deep yet simple affection is a mark of skill on the author's part. The end is clever and unexpected, but not so fantastic as to seem illogical. Rating: 9/10 "Untitled" by Healer_Leona – The love letter central to this story is never revealed, which caused me several minutes of grumbling during the course of which I realized that knowing the contents of the letter was not really necessary in order to appreciate the sparing plot. The characters remain utterly true to themselves, especially Obi-Wan, who is ever the gentleman. The OC is well-done also. Rating: 8/10 "The Letter" by dianethx – A marvelous vignette in which a letter from a woman to Qui-Gon is revealed between sections of Qui-Gon's introspection. A warning: read this carefully. Literally every word counts, and a skim will lead you to miss the most important sentence, cleverly hidden between two much more innocuous ones. Rating: 10/10 "Message in an Artoo Unit" by Knight-Ander – The dramatic irony in this story is deftly twisted – we know exactly what's happened, but the main characters, Luke and Leia, have no idea. There are a few spelling and grammar errors, but overall the story is nicely rounded, with excellent characterizations. Rating: 6/10 "Helping Out a Friend" by MissPadme – This is definitely one of the more original stories I've come across in this challenge. The letter involved is from Chewbacca to Mallatobuck, and holds some powerful insight into Han and Leia's relationship. Humorous and discerning, this vignette is a wonderful read. Rating: 9/10 "Insignificance" by JadeSolo – The main character in this story is a classic worried protagonist who can't muster the courage to send his loved one a note professing his love despite his ability to write and delete it. Bittersweet and nicely done. Rating: 8/10 "The Little Bird Sings Sweetest" by Knight_Dilettante – Original in its interpretation of the meaning of love letter, this vignette portrays a young man very much unwilling to betray his lover to Vader, who cannot even prove that she exists. I enjoyed the last few lines, and the man's realization that he will have to leave his love to protect her. Rating: 8/10 "Untitled" by DarthIshtar – Although this vignette is from Leia's point of view, it is really an exploration of Han's love for her. With her discovery of Han's journal, Leia understands at last how long the relationship between them has been building. Beautifully done. Rating: 9/10 "Marry Me" by Fate – Cliegg's letter to Shmi is the focus of this vignette. The tone is earthy and realistically straightforward – Cliegg's personality shines through. Despite its brevity, the letter is intensely emotional and insightful. Rating: 7/10 Beyond The Saga "Untitled" by Darth_Lex – This Jacen/Tahiri fic is tastefully and sensitively written. Anakin's last "Kiss Tahiri for me," plays a central role in this story. A quiet read, but a worthwhile one. Rating: 7/10 "Untitled" by JainaJag00 – A nice idea, somewhat lacking in execution, but quite readable nonetheless. The experimentation with stream-of-consciousness from Jag's point of view lapsed into the past tense in several areas, and his voice was not always consistent. Still, his love for Jaina shone through, making this a nice piece. Rating: 6/10 "Untitled" by Laine_Snowtrekker – A touching, if a bit cliché, story, this vignette focuses on Xander and a note left to him by his parents. His reaction to the note, and Luke's subsequent handling of the situation all point to Luke and Xander's ability to feel emotion strongly; the feelings they experience ring true. Rating: 6/10 "Missing You" by TKeira_Lea – The open-ended nature of this story set it apart from many of the others; I was free to decide what I thought had happened at the end. Jaina is dying throughout, composing her last "letter" to Jagged, until the both rewarding and unsatisfying ending. Rating: 9/10 "Your Forever" by Eowyn_Jade – Mara and Luke are well-portrayed in this story, but it is the innocent comment by Ben at the end that really clinches the whole vignette and brings tears to my eyes. Rating: 8/10 "A Letter Never Reads" by SpikeLeadJF – A nice little story in which Jag leaves his declaration of love on his desk for Jaina to see, this vignette is heartwarming and left me with a smile. Well done. Rating: 7/10 "Untitled" by DarthIshtar – Tahiri grows a great deal over the course of only a handful of words in this tender and sensitive story. It's a satisfying view of Tahiri's thoughts and pain at losing Anakin, and also the process of healing that occurred after his death. Rating: 8/10 "Untitled" by –Tenel-Ka- – I liked the progression of Jacen's messages to Tenel Ka over the years. He starts as an innocent boy talking to his best friend, and ends as a man speaking to the woman he loves. Rating: 9/10 "Love's Gamble" by Jags_Scoundrel – What a sweet vignette! The original characters were wonderfully done, and their emotions fairly sang through the words. The hesitancy, the nervousness, and finally, the hope, all combined into something engaging and satiating. Rating: 10/10 "A Working Relationship" by Thrawn McEwok – There were hints throughout the story as to who the main character opposite Thrawn was, but it was not until the very end that I had my suspicions confirmed. Very clever twist to this story, and a nice pre-NJO addition to the anthology. Rating: 8/10 "Emesa" by daeana – This is an unusual premise: Jag, for reasons unknown, is slowly losing his memory. His letter to Jaina is all the more painful for his advancing condition. Rating: 7/10 "Untitled" by LadyPadme – This story made me laugh out loud several times. It was both hilarious and true to the characters of Han and Leia, on whom it focused. The misunderstandings, attempts at romance, and other blunders all contribute to the final warm ending. Rating: 9/10 "When All the Stars Have Vanished" by Knight_Dilettante – Overall, a good story, although the characterizations are a bit inconsistent. The idea behind it is a tearjerker, and the fact that love letters from the lover of a captured soldier motivate Han and Leia to acknowledge the depth of feeling they have for one another is potent. Rating: 8/10 "The Symbol of My Love" by Rogue_of-Peace – As suggested by the title, this story deals with Jacen, his love for Tenel Ka, and the ring he buys her as a result. Unfortunately, Tenel Ka dies before he can give her the ring, and the agonizing pain he feels is well-expressed. Rating: 7/10 "Untitled" by Jaina_Solo_15 – A quick and satisfying read that ends in the realization that everything Jag has imagined about Jaina and her love for him is just a dream. The narrative is choppy in sections, but it flows well overall. Rating: 7/10 "Untitled" by Master_Vicky – The surprise ending of this story makes the rest of it much more emotional. In fact, I thought it a better piece on the whole the second time I read it. Well-written, sad, and something I can definitely come back to. Rating: 7/10 "To Jania from the guy who sits behind you in Meditation" by Jedi Master Greg – A cute and short story, this vignette is a letter from the anonymous young man who sits behind Jaina in class. (Hence the title.) The love letter reminded me of any number of similar notes I've read: it was naive and charming and made me smile. Rating: 7/10 "Untitled" by JainaSticksSolo19 – I've always been a fan of the Inyri/Wes pairing, and so this vignette was enjoyable for me. However, it featured relatively little writing between the lyrics to a song and had quite a few grammatical and spelling errors. With a beta, this story could be improved immensely – it has the seed of feeling necessary for it to flourish. Rating: 5/10 "Untitled" by rogue11lovesjag – The interaction between Karrde and Shada in this vignette was amusing and heartwarming. Shada's discovery of Karrde's many drafts of a love letter to her in his wastebasket is amusing and cleverly conceived. Rating: 9/10 -----signature----- 'Twas as if the combination in one city of too many printing presses; a bloody and perpetual atmosphere of Party Malice; and an infinite supply of coffee had combined...to engender...an unstanchable wound that bled Ink and would never heal.
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FF_Newsletter_Editor Registered: Jan '04	Date Posted: 3/31/04 11:12pm Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition VIII -- March 2004 - Date Edited: 4/5/04 5:02am (3 edits total) Edited By: FF_Newsletter_Editor
	Page IV: Forum News: Farewell March! Welcome April, the month of Easter! In the past month, the boards have maintained a steady posting speed – never exceptionally fast or incredibly slow. Everyone seems to be preparing for exams at their educational institutions or paperwork at their workplace. However, there have been a number of significant changes to the Fan Fiction forums. The most noticeable change is Fan Fiction’s new appearance. As you can see, all the five forums have a unique banner, designed to showcase the material that lies within. For example, Beyond the Saga has a banner that shows EU characters – the majority of the images are from NJO book covers. Thanks goes to obaona (Before the Saga banner creator), Melyanna (The Saga banner creator), duskwings (Beyond the Saga banner creator), and red_rose_knight (Before the Saga colour scheme creator, and Classic Stories and Writers’ Resource banner creator). Additional credit goes to Raven, our technical administrator, for the humourous “Poof” comments in the sidebar. Everyone did a fine job. For more information or the opportunity to congratulate these users, see this thread. While the winners of Valentine’s Day Love Letter Challenge for every category have not been announced, the Before the Saga champions have already been congratulated and given their awards. First place went to Reihla and her story, “Simply Ben”, which, between the three judges, accumulated a massive 136/150 points! Reihla was awarded with 120 hours (5 days) VIPship. In second place were Shaindl and her story, “That Crazy Little Thing Called Love”, which, between the three judges, accumulated a score of 135.5/150 points! Shaindl was awarded with 73 hours (3 days) VIPship. Finally, third place went to Happy_Hobbit_Padawan and her story, “Love You, I Do”, which, between the three judges, accumulated a score of 134.5/150 points! Happy_Hobbit_Padawan was awarded with 24 hours (1 day) VIPship. As you can see, it was an extremely close vote. The other categories will be announced very soon. On another note, the administration has issued a reminder about Drug Use in Fan Fiction. The reminder can be found here. The Fan Fiction Handbook and Frequently Asked Questions (FAQ) has, once again, been placed atop of the WR board as a sticky. If you have any questions about this document, please contact a Fan Fiction mod. While we’re on the subject of Fan Fiction mods, I have decided that it’s time for me to step down and pass my position onto a successor. I’ve modded these boards for the past year and have enjoyed doing so, but considering the fact that many things are beginning to change in my personal life, I thought it would be best to leave the boards in someone else’s capable hands. This does feel like the end of an era for me, and I know I’ll be tempted to jump on the computer, visit JC, and answer mod questions after my resignation. I would appreciate it if you left a message for me on this thread or PMed me. I don’t know who will be filling my role in the newsletter staff, but I’m sure that Xaara will find a replacement. That does mean that this is my last forum news. I wasn’t, however, able to write the vignette reviews this month. As I type this section, the administration is currently debating who will replace me as the third Fan Fiction mod. Best wishes, all! An additional thank you to Jane Jinn and Xaara, the two newsletter editors I have had the pleasure to serve under. In the spirit of February’s “Forum News”, I have recommended several interesting Fan Fiction-related discussions below: ~ What would you like to see in your fan fiction newsletter? – This discussion thread was created by the current newsletter editor, Xaara. If you would like to have your say on the content of the newsletter in the future, that’s the place. ~ How do you write fan fics? – The Writers’ Resource forum has hosted several versions of this thread in the past. The topic has always been lively, so please contribute your opinion. ~ A Late April Fool’s Day Challenge – Did you miss your chance to write on April Fool’s day? Here’s another opportunity, brought to your by the Writers’ Challenge host, Kit! ~ Writing Humour – Natural Talent or Hard Work? – Are you a humour writer? Would you like to interact with your fellow genre writers and share your opinions? Please vote and give your thoughts on that topic. ~ To Spice Up The Mix (Saga Tales) – What type of Saga stories do you like? Are you anticipating the opening of EP3 or are you a devoted OT lover? ~ The Fan Fiction Writers’/Readers’/Members’ Bio/Database thread – 101 questions devoted to you. Yes, you. If you ever thought you were overlooked and that people didn’t see the real you, here’s your chance to inform them. ~ Burnout – The burnout bug seems to be in circulation this month. Come and discuss your writing woes and share advice to getting out of that pit. ~ Mary Sue Litmus Test – A very interesting way of testing your original character to see if he/she is cliché. This topic also has a continued discussion about the nature of the test. ~ Official Map thread – Have you ever wanted to view a detailed map of the GFFA universe or of any planet therein? This is your ideal thread. ~ Coming Up With Titles – How do you think of a title? Do you have a process you undertake? ~ Music in Star Wars – This topic debates about the musical instruments used in the Star Wars universe and in SW fan fiction. ~ Viruses: Protect your stories! – An extremely informative thread about the dangers of viruses and email spam. We come to the end of this month’s “Forum News” section. Take care of yourselves - and remember, the Fan Fiction boards are always open for friendly discussion! Ciao! Advertisement: Tired of Pesky Know-It-All Droids? Fed-up with R2 units that just have to get in the last beep? Annoyed with those Protocol automatons that drone on and on about things you'd rather forget? At last, we can bring you the perfect solution.... ~ ~ ~ Mind-Wipes - R - Us ~ ~ ~ One quick stop and your troubles will be over! No muss, no fuss, no questions asked. Drop your droids off in the morning and by afternoon, their minds will be free and clear of clutter. No more drivel about your past, no more constant reminders of things you'd rather forget. A clean sweep! Come in and get a free demonstration. No obligation to buy. And, with our special introductory offer, we will even throw in a oil bath for that all-important, brighter-than-new shine. Don't forget!! Mind-Wipes - R - Us Found at several convenient locations in Mos Eisley and Mos Espa, Tatooine. Easily reached by speeder or dewback. That's Mind-Wipes - R - Us. Call us at 1-800-NoMinds today. Or you can login to gww.Who_Am_I.com. Brought to you by OffWorld Corporation Where great minds reinvent themselves every day. Past Newsletters: Newsletter I, March 2003 Newsletter II, April 2003 Newsletter III, May 2003 Newsletter IV, October 2003 Newsletter V, November 2003 Newsletter VI, January 2004 Newsletter VII, February 2004 Credits: Reviewers: _Derisa_Ollamhin_ Dianethx Flyboy_7 Padawan_Travina Shaindl Ty-gon Jinn Forum News: Amidala_Skywalker Plot Bunnies: JadeDjo Advertisements: Dianethx Editor/Organizer: Xaara -----signature----- 'Twas as if the combination in one city of too many printing presses; a bloody and perpetual atmosphere of Party Malice; and an infinite supply of coffee had combined...to engender...an unstanchable wound that bled Ink and would never heal.
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dianethx Registered: Mar '02	Date Posted: 4/1/04 4:19am Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition VIII -- March 2004 - Date Edited: 4/1/04 4:24am (3 edits total) Edited By: dianethx
	Another stellar job everyone. I especially liked the writing tips this month - I do those incorrect ones all the time! And the reviews for the love letters were very helpful. Great job. For anyone that didn't know where the Love letter threads were - here they are Before the Saga The Saga Beyond the Saga -----signature----- Betrayal - http://boards.theforce.net/s/b1/10935143 updated 9/22/08 jedidas3's Master
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FF_Newsletter_Editor Registered: Jan '04	Date Posted: 4/1/04 4:26am Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition VIII -- March 2004 - Date Edited: 4/1/04 1:45pm (1 edits total) Edited By: FF_Newsletter_Editor
	We already have a winner: Rogue_of-Peace! He answered the question posed in Newsletter News correctly, naming both the poem (Personal Helicon) and the poet (Seamus Heaney). He'll be interviewed for next month's newsletter, he'll be able to pick one story - any story - to be our feature for April, and he'll have the opportunity to take an all expense paid trip to...wait a second... Congratulations! -Xaara -----signature----- 'Twas as if the combination in one city of too many printing presses; a bloody and perpetual atmosphere of Party Malice; and an infinite supply of coffee had combined...to engender...an unstanchable wound that bled Ink and would never heal.
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Jane Jinn Registered: Jan '00	Date Posted: 4/1/04 7:28am Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition VIII -- March 2004
	Great job on the newsletters, Xaara, both this one and the one before! I can't believe you guys reviewed all those love letter stories! Whew! What a lot of work. I really liked the writing tips and I'm looking forward to the Further Adventures of Ray and Questa. Oh, congratulations, Rogue_of_Peace, on winning the poem contest! -----signature----- Mostly retired now Just making the occasional guest appearance
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Shaindl Registered: Jun '02	Date Posted: 4/1/04 7:41am Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition VIII -- March 2004
	To everyone who worked on this month's newsletter, great job! And to whoever reviewed my two Challenge viggies, thank you so much! Xaara, you're doing incredible work - we knew it would be hard to replace Jane, but you've filled the shoes wonderfully. Shaindl -----signature----- Halfway Moment - Qui, Obi, Anakin AU - http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/20110461/?0 - UPDATED JULY 3!
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Sara_Kenobi Title: NSWFF trivia hostess Registered: Sep '00	Date Posted: 4/1/04 10:01am Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition VIII -- March 2004
	That was just fantastic. I thought it was especially a great touch making an addition about the love letters. It really showed how much work everyone did for them and also made me think hard about what all the judges must be going through in deciding the winners. -----signature----- The NSWFF Trivia Challenge: http://boards.theforce.net/non_star_wars_fan_fiction_resource/b10809/30183507/p1/ Alderaan's Gambit (Updated June 26th) http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/29908930/p1/?27
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-Scarface- Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 4/1/04 3:12pm Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition VIII -- March 2004 - Date Edited: 4/1/04 3:13pm (2 edits total) Edited By: -Scarface-
	Wow, nice reviews! That must have taken some time But I think some of the stories from Beyond the Saga got left out. I know for sure that there was a Yuuzhan Vong story (by Tahi, I think). I didn't see mine (aka JadeSolo's), either, and I'd like to know what the reviewers think of it. Ahhh! I completely missed the challenge! Oh well, great job, everyone. I love those ads -----signature----- I was in love with New York. I do not mean "love" in any colloquial way, I mean that I was in love with the city, the way you love the first person who ever touches you and never love anyone quite that way again. - Joan Didion
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DarkDroid Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 4/1/04 5:56pm Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition VIII -- March 2004
	The Newsletter is always an enjoyable read. Especially the reviews and the advertisements. -----signature----- The Inglorious Vision - http://boards.theforce.net/Beyond_the_Saga/b10477/20960324/?2 Far Beyond - http://boards.theforce.net/Beyond_the_Saga/b10477/17625892/?0
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Thumper09 Registered: Dec '01	Date Posted: 4/1/04 6:26pm Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition VIII -- March 2004
	Awesome job, everyone, like always. Ray and Questa were funny and informative, and the advertisement was hilarious. Don't forget!! - LOL. I also noticed the "gww." in the ad's URL. Nice touch. I'm amazed you went through all the love letter entries. That's a lot of work. And, well, [face_shocked] I honestly never expected to get reviewed. All I can really say right now is thanks!! Keep up the great work. -Katie Thumper -----signature----- "Like anything worth writing, it came inexplicably and without method." -Karen Eiffel, _Stranger Than Fiction_ "A reader doesn't really see the characters in a story; he feels them." - _Inkdeath_
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Ty-gon Jinn Registered: Jan '00	Date Posted: 4/1/04 6:43pm Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition VIII -- March 2004
	But I think some of the stories from Beyond the Saga got left out. Do you mean for the love letters? That may have to be amended... If not, well, the newsletter can't hit EVERY story. -----signature----- I'm alive! And I'm back!! Who'd have thought it, eh? Assassination: http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=14787030 The Cost of Honor: http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=13443744
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NarundiJedi Title: FF Chapter Rep Albany, NY Registered: Oct '01	Date Posted: 4/1/04 6:56pm Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition VIII -- March 2004
	I have to ask - and I don't mean to be rude - but if you thought my story was good but rated it a 6/10, why is that? You can be honest with me, since I am working on getting this vignette archived. I really want to know if the reviewer was just not interested in Ulic and Nomi as characters or if I could do something more to build them up and flesh out the story. Also, and this may sound silly, but does it have something to do with it being a sad story on a happy, romantic holiday? I just want to get something more out of this than a repeat of what the story was about and a label of "good" when 6/10 is failing in the American school system. Jae Angel -----signature----- Kill Brodey: Vol 1 - http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=17015774&replies=0 Helané, Handmaiden of the Crest Leli's Blonde Twin! I'm now Mrs. NJ! w00t!
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Amidala_Skywalker Title: Manager Emeritus Registered: Jul '01	Date Posted: 4/2/04 5:36pm Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition VIII -- March 2004
	Fabulous work by all! Another wonderful issue of the newsletter! FYI – I’ve added the “Forum News” section. I apologise for being a tad late. Thank you for letting me serve on the newsletter staff. Amsie -----signature----- Amsié, Crest of Handmaidens . ___ TF.N Archive Reviewer ___ Battlestar Galactica is the new way.
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J_M_Bulldog Registered: Apr '03	Date Posted: 4/2/04 8:58pm Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition VIII -- March 2004
	Excellent job on the newsletter guys. And I think, maybe, y'all need to sit down and rest after reviewing all those letters. Whew. To those who reviewed my story thanks. Made my day. I love those ads. -----signature----- BA(bad attitude), aka Thwack, of TKL's Lomin Ale Wraiths I am never down. I am either up or I am getting up, but I am never down. Stop telling God how big your storm is; instead tell the storm how big your God is.
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