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Date Posted: 12/23/03 1:22pm Subject: RE: Alderaan Blessings - Holiday FF Challenge (Bail, Dorme, 3PO, little Leia) **New post 12/23**
Adorable addition. happy

 

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Date Posted: 12/23/03 1:38pm Subject: RE: Alderaan Blessings - Holiday FF Challenge (Bail, Dorme, 3PO, little Leia) **New post 12/23**
What a lovely story. I always wanted to read about the younger lives of our twins. You are doing an excellent job. I can feel the love in the home.

 

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Date Posted: 12/23/03 4:04pm Subject: RE: Alderaan Blessings - Holiday FF Challenge (Bail, Dorme, 3PO, little Leia) **New post 12/23**
What a heartwarming story, just bursting with Emperor's Day spirit wink !

Jolting upright, Threepio demanded, “And precisely what did you mean by fork you?”

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PadmeLeiaJaina 
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Date Posted: 12/23/03 9:56pm Subject: RE: Alderaan Blessings - Holiday FF Challenge (Bail, Dorme, 3PO, little Leia) **New post 12/23**
New Post tomorrow Folks! (Nice early Christmas present! grin )


Crystal

I like how you decided to use traditional old fashion stuff for the entertainment.

Some of my favorite books are by Stephen R. Lawhead. In them he always puts in scenes where bards are entertaining the Royal courts. This is something that I just love from those stories and thought it would be a nice, pleasant, wonderfully ‘civilized’ event in the darker, dreary days of the Empire.

Arriss

But 3PO – beautiful? LOL. From the mouth of babes. Heehee. He must’ve been extra shiny that night. And the bickering between him & R2

Well you know, 3PO’s my favorite dunderhead to write. He’s well versed on human behavior but he has absolutely no idea how to actually incorporate and utilize the lessons that he understands. His complete cluelessness makes him utterly endearing to me.

I couldn’t resist the Qui-Gon icon he just looked too cute.

Well as you see I’ve changed my appearance also. Gotta give Goldenrod a moment of glory grin

RebelScum77

What lovely description... I could actually see the Palace, children and the feast in my head.

I love writing description. I’m glad I managed to put in just enough stuff to make it work.

What's going to happen next? I can't wait.

I’ll post the next chappy tomorrow!

PadLei

I love the interaction b/w Leia and Winter. Very true to life.
What are they going to play?
I know. *sigh*


Writing kids is a chore for me since I don’t have any in my life. I try to think back on how I behaved when I was that age and hope that when I’m writing it comes out pretty true. Glad you liked… more on Leia/Winter tomorrow.

Lex

The Leia/Winter interaction was very well done. And I liked Dorme as well.

Thank you!
And the droids again. *bows to the master*

<< Look to my icon>> Bowing might not be such a good idea my friend wink tongue

RebelMom

Glad you enjoyed!

Qingauk

I always wanted to read about the younger lives of our twins. You are doing an excellent job. I can feel the love in the home.

These 2 stories have been treats for me. Maybe after Ep 3 comes out I’ll work on something larger w/ the twins. For now though, I’m enjoying these little snippet stories. Glad you’re enjoying how I’m writing them!

MissPadme

Artoo, you naughty droid.

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Date Posted: 12/24/03 3:51am Subject: RE: Alderaan Blessings - Holiday FF Challenge (Bail, Dorme, 3PO, little Leia) **New post 12/23**
The palace sounds beautiful by fire and candlelight. Leia is sure to become the champion for people of Alderaan after meeting them personally.

With 3PO’s royal and sheltered lifestyle, his beginnings would feed his inflated ego, although Anakin did make him with the start of his glorified delusions. I didn’t catch this last post but, so that’s how he gets his gold coverings...

I really like Leia becoming a human tuning fork. She is having a wonderful time sharing the evening with a new friend and so many others. happy Everyone has forgotten about the cold outside.

 

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Date Posted: 12/24/03 6:32am Subject: RE: Alderaan Blessings - Holiday FF Challenge (Bail, Dorme, 3PO, little Leia) **New post 12/23** - Date Edited: 12/24/03 6:38am (2 edits total) Edited By: PadmeLeiaJaina
Altaira

With 3PO’s royal and sheltered lifestyle, his beginnings would feed his inflated ego, although Anakin did make him with the start of his glorified delusions.

Yes, actually I think Padme inadvertantly gave 3PO his swelled head by calling him "perfect" tongue

Leia is sure to become the champion for people of Alderaan after meeting them personally.

Yup, that's about how I've always envisioned that Leia was raised. She always seemed more mature than Luke because she wasn't as sheltered as he growing up.

Ok- here's today's post!

I might put up the last post on Christmas- or day after.

Happy Christmas Eve!

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Part 4

Nervously shifting in their seats, the audience waited in anticipation for the minstrels to begin their song.

One man tuned his wind instrument, while the other two adjusted the strings on their bandoleen and chelllios. Each man nodded to each other to signify that they were ready.

The owner of the bandoleen stepped forward and announced, “Tonight we sing you a song of Alderaan legend. It is a story of hope and compassion. I am certain you all know of it, for it is a favorite tale of ours…it is the story of King Bail Ban and Branwen.”

Cheers erupted in the hall, the folktale was a cornerstone of Alderaanian folk traditions and for this simplistic crowd, the choice could not have been better.

When the voices leveled off, the musician holding the wind instrument expertly breathed life into the soulful sounding device. It’s hauntingly, lilting tunes sent chills running up and down all of the guest’s arms and over the backs of their necks. And then the chellioist began to strum out lower toned notes out of his large instrument. The singer then added his higher pitched rhythms with the bandoleen.

The beautiful music brought tears to the eyes of many listening in the hall. Then the singer’s true and beautiful baritone voice filled the room with song:

King Bail Ban was beloved by all
Fair and just he ruled the land
In times of plenty and times of less
He gave his entire soul to those less fortunate.

As the times passed, he longed for something of his own
A wife he desired to have and to hold
But alas, no fair maiden crossed his path
So a quest he began to locate his fair lass.

All over Alderaan he searched high and low
From the highest of noble courts
To the poorest of hovels
He just knew his beloved had to exist.

For two years he searched and searched in to no avail
His heart remained empty as he crossed the Wellinian Plains
Sitting heavily upon a stone he openly wept
His heart broken, his soul bereft.

The sky then drowned his sorrow with rain
His despairing soul realized that his quest had been in vain
From out of the clouds a single ray of sun shined
Gazing into the light, the King’s sight nearly went blind.

Light as air, in the sun’s blinding beam a raven flew
The King longed to be as free as the crow
His eyes widened in horror as a bolt of lightning
Struck the bird out of the sky
Where it plummeted to the ground, and died.

Rushing to the bird, the King cradled the creature in his arms
To see a free thing struck down in its prime
Made his heart weep and weep,
He cried tears of sorrow and of loneliness, and dismay.

As his tears rolled down his face they splashed onto the bird’s corpse
And magically they turned her black feathers white.
Through his own misery and longing,
He failed to see the bird’s transformation and altering.

Suddenly, the bird slipped through his hands
When he opened his eyes the skies had cleared
Before him was a sight of marvel and wonder
A maiden of enchanting beauty had materialized out of thin air.

With hair and skin as white as new fallen snow
She looked like no other woman he’d ever gazed upon.
Tentatively, he asked for her name
And from where she came.

Smiling brightly she replied, “I have answered your cries. I am what you seek.
Only a man of great character and compassion could cause me to wake.”
Full of wonder, he asked, “Who are you, enchanted lass?”
Smiling brightly she replied, “Do you really need to ask?”

Beaming, King Bail Ban already knew her name
From the beginning of time her legend was keen
She embodied the Alderaanian spirit of virtue and peace
She was Branwen, goddess of beauty and grace.

Weeping in delight, the King had finally found his perfect bride
And then they were married and all celebrated their union with pride
That their King had finally located a woman worthy of his blessed personna
And his generosity still exists today, in the hearts of the House of the Organas.


There was not a dry eye in the house. The thunderous applause that followed after the final notes could have leveled a less structurally sound building than the Palace. From her side, Leia’s young friend’s eyes were wide with wonder. All her life she had hated her white and unusual hair, but no longer. When the applause ended, Winter timidly asked, “Was she really real?”

Prince Organa, tickled by the new twist that the singers added to the end of the tale, absently pulled apart a piece of dark bread, and flashed the inquisitive child a smile. He explained, “Well, maybe you need to judge for yourself, legend says that King Ban and Branwen were the founders of the House of Organa. If you look above the Southern mantel you will see the carvings of two people. Do you see them?”

Winter and Leia turned their heads and studied the ancient carvings of a man and a woman with flowing, long hair. They nodded their heads in unison. Bail continued, “Those carvings are of King Ban and Branwen.”

Goosebumps erupted all over Winte’s body. She whispered, “She did exist.”

Flashing his wife an amused wink, Bail shoved a lump of bread in his mouth, not wishing to spoil the magic of the moment for the little girls. As Leia continued to stare at the carvings, she tilted her head and realized that the man’s cleft in his chin resembled her fathers. And the set of the woman’s eyes was the same distance apart as his as well. She believed, in that moment, that the legend had to be true.

After sweetmeats were passed around for dessert and the Galactic Travelers had churned out their entire repertoire of songs, everyone dispersed to head to bed. The Royal family got to leave first, and after much nagging and whining, Leia was allowed to bring Winter along with her.

The two little girls headed towards Leia’s bedroom. Winter’s eyes popped out of her head when she spied the mountains of toys that lined the walls and filled the toy chests in Leia’s bedroom. The feminine, pale yellow room was a Palace all into itself for the starving young orphan’s eyes.

Following her new friend’s gaze at all of her untouched toys, Leia wondered why her new friend seemed so fascinated by the dolls and stuffed creatures. Snatching up a ragged doll, Leia handed it to Winter and asked, “Don’t you have dolls and toys at the orphanage?”

Gulping and holding the doll carefully, like it was made of glass, Winter answered, “We have some toys. Most are very dirty and old, though. I’ve never seen so many toys in one place before.”

“Don’t you get to go to toy stores?” Leia wondered.

Winter shook her head. “Master Nicco says we would just be sad if we saw that many toys in one place. And that we would want them and we cannot afford them.”

Sitting on the edge of her bed, Leia asked, “So what do you play with if you only have old, dirty toys?”

“We play with them anyway, and we play imaginary games,” Winter replied.

Leia’s brows furrowed in confusion and she inquired, “Imaginary games?”

Nodding, Winter responded, “We pretend… pretend that we’re Galactic explorers, that we live on faraway planets… pretend that we belong in families and have siblings.”

In that moment, Leia realized the full magnitude of the differences between them. Her new friend had nothing, nothing but dreams and she had everything, but none of it mattered to her. She decided to try to make this time together memorable for her new friend.

“Why don’t you show me how you play Galactic explorers? That sounds like fun,” Leia offered.

“Okay…can we play with your dollies?”

“Sure… go ahead and grab whichever ones you want to play with,” Leia urged.

“Any of them?” Winter squeaked, seeing mountains of dolls that looked too fragile to breathe on, much less play with.

“Yup,” Leia agreed. Snatching down armloads of dolls, they sat on the floor and began roll-playing. For Leia, the toys had always just been pretty, useless objects. With her friend’s imagination to help breathe life into the globs of plastique, and yarn they turned into so much more; they became instruments for telling stories that only children could create; naïve, full of wonder, and of hope.

An hour later, Dorme rounded up the girls, gave them baths, changed them into pajamas and they crawled into bed together. And for the first time that they could recall, Leia and Winter had the best night’s sleep they had ever experienced.

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As dawn’s gray light crept over the horizon, the snow continued its relentless assault of Alderaan on Emperor’s Day.

Throughout the night the engineers worked diligently in the frigid conditions to restore power to the town and Palace. Little by little they managed to amp up enough energy to maintain a constant flow of power to the folk who remained in town, but they were still struggling to get the systems back on full. They were optimistic that the power would be restored by midday.

The staff in the Palace worked through the night to keep the fires roaring and the food cooking for the Emperor’s Day celebration.

Shortly after sunrise, Bail awoke from his slumber and wrestled his arms into a bathrobe. Yawning, he discovered his morning pot of caff waiting for him as usual. Without power, no one had been able to download the latest news. He snorted happily. Last thing he needed was to get his blood pressure boiling about the Emperor, on this “holiday.” As he scanned the darkened, snowy, dreary landscape he couldn’t help but reflect on bygone times. It wasn’t so very long ago that this day was properly called Life Day. Emperor Palpatine, however, outlawed any festivities that held even the fleeting reference to the Jedi Order, and had instead declared that the day belonged to him alone. Bail remembered that he had a difficult time keeping his lunch down upon hearing that proclamation that day in the Imperial Senate.

As he thought of the people sleeping in his spare rooms, he wondered how many other leaders on planetary systems would have done the same thing. He wondered if there was still an ounce of compassion out there, anywhere, for fellow man. If things had been left entirely up to the Emperor, he doubted that anyone would be allowed to receive even the slightest bit of charity on this day- or any day for that matter. Over the course of dinner the previous evening, Bail had counted over seven hundred heads seated at the tables. Seven hundred people who lived in the poorest district of town. He’d never had that many impoverished souls living in that district before, that fact plagued his heart with worry.

“Troubled times we live in,” he mumbled, taking a long draught off of his steaming mug of caff.

“We most certainly are,” Dorme replied from behind. Tightly, she wrapped her arms around his waist and snuggled into the small of his broad back.

Bail smiled, dropped a hand and laced their fingers together over his waist. Icily, he seethed, “I hate that we have to pretend, Dorme. Every year we pretend to be loyal to that puppet master of a tyrant and all the while more and more people are falling between the cracks. He sends out false messages that the Galaxy is thriving and prosperous, but that is only to a chosen few- the wealthy. How can he not see what we see? Does he not see that common people are needlessly suffering? Where is justice in this Galaxy that we live in?”

Dorme’s eyes took on a faraway look. Flickers of golden days, bright with Democracy and freedom teased them and then bounded forever out of reach. She sighed, “I don’t know, Bail. The real question is how long before things can be restored? He can’t live forever.”

Stroking Dorme’s hand, Bail nodded, “That’s true. However, there is the other who would easily take his place.”

Stiffening, Dorme’s breath quickened, and a stray tear escaped from her eye. “Milady…”

Putting aside his cup, Bail turned and wrapped his arms tightly around his shaking wife. Even now, seven years later, she was still plagued by nightmares…nightmares of a love gone sour… riddled with pain and deceit. And the black figure that continually loomed in her dreams, leaving a trail of destruction in his wake.

“I’m sorry, Dorme. I shouldn’t have mentioned anything,” Bail hissed, ashamed at himself for not thinking before he spoke.

“She can’t ever know the truth, Bail… she just can’t,” Dorme stressed.

Immediately following her train of thought, and stroking her hair, Bail whispered, “She won’t know. How can she? We’re the only ones who know the truth.”

“There are others.”

“And they want nothing to do with Leia,” Bail reiterated.

Shaking her head, Dorme disclosed, “It would kill her if she knew. She’d hate him.”

“And she’d have a right to, he doesn’t deserve one ounce of compassion. Do not worry, Dorme. She has long ago accepted that we are her parents. She’ll never have a reason to go looking for her past,” Bail remarked.

“I hope you’re right, Bail. I hope you’re right.”

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Curled up together in Leia’s bed, the Princess whispered to her new friend, “Do you remember your parents?”

Pursing her lips together, Winter shook her head. “They died when I was a baby. I’ve been at the orphanage most all of my life.”

“I don’t remember my mother either… well much of her, anyway,” Leia disclosed.

Winter looked confused. “But wasn’t that your mother sitting beside you at the table?”

“She’s my adopted mother, same as my father isn’t my real father,” Leia explained. Sadness crept into her voice as she continued, “I never knew my real parents. And they never talk about them.”

“Did they even know them?” Winter asked, amazed that this girl could’ve been so lucky to have been adopted into a Royal family.

Eyes widening, Leia nodded. “I think they did. All they will tell me was that they were very much in love and then they died.”

“That’s so sad,” Winter consoled.

“I know,” the Princess replied. Furrowing her brows, she concentrated deeply. She called into the farthest, darkest corners of her memory and brought forth a singular image. “I remember her… a little bit. She looked a lot like my Mommy… but she was prettier. She was so sad…”

“I wonder why,” Winter remarked. Then she suggested, “Maybe because your Daddy had died?”

“Maybe.” As Leia stared into Winter’s eyes she realized that this was the first time she’d ever discussed her real mother with anyone. Her nursemaids and Palace staff utterly refused to speak of the subject to her. And her parents rarely ever divulged anything beyond the merest of basics.

“At least you have people who love you,” Winter sadly pointed out.

Suddenly feeling guilty about whining about her own petty problems to a girl who had nothing, an answer sprung into her head. “So do you,” Leia stated.

“I do?”

Smiling, Leia answered, “Yes, you have me. I do. And I will always consider you to be family.”

Winter smiled, not knowing what to make of the Princess’s strange proclamation. She decided that she didn’t care and closed her eyes. Both of the girls snuggled deep under the covers of bed and fell back to comfortable sleep, only to reawake when Leia’s nursemaid entered the room to rouse the girls for the day’s activities. Once dressed and sighing deeply, both girls decided to make the most of their last time together and headed downstairs hand in hand.

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Date Posted: 12/24/03 7:13am Subject: RE: Alderaan Blessings - Holiday FF Challenge (Bail, Dorme, 3PO, little Leia) **New post 12/24**
I love how you've developed the friendship of Winter and Leia. Very nice.

 

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Date Posted: 12/24/03 9:00am Subject: RE: Alderaan Blessings - Holiday FF Challenge (Bail, Dorme, 3PO, little Leia) **New post 12/24**
Ahh, the song of Ban and Branwen. love

I enjoyed the way Winter was so overcome by the sight of Leia’s toys. Those that have so much tend to forget how fortunate they are. Leia really made the little girl feel at home. I was surprised at how openly she talked about her real mother.

Nice chapy! grin

Looking forward to the next. I don’t know how much net time I’ll have over the next few days, but I’ll catch up. happy

 

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Date Posted: 12/24/03 10:42am Subject: RE: Alderaan Blessings - Holiday FF Challenge (Bail, Dorme, 3PO, little Leia) **New post 12/24**
Ah... that was lovely.

I always wondered if Leia knew she was adopted or not, and how much she did know about the circumstances. Not much undoubtedly... you did that really well. And poor Dorme!

And I love the friendship between Leia and Winter.

 

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Date Posted: 12/24/03 10:55am Subject: RE: Alderaan Blessings - Holiday FF Challenge (Bail, Dorme, 3PO, little Leia) **New post 12/24**
This is a really beautiful story! Just perfect for the holiday. The parts with Bail and Dorme are excellent character development. I always enjoy learning more about the folks we don't get to know in the films.

My favorite part, though, was Leia's developing friendship with Winter. You've done a really nice job making their affection for each other believable and real. The Alderaani legend was a nice touch, too - especially the part about Branwen's white hair.

 

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Date Posted: 12/24/03 1:07pm Subject: RE: Alderaan Blessings - Holiday FF Challenge (Bail, Dorme, 3PO, little Leia) **New post 12/24**
So warm and lovely. You are touching the hearts of many and showing what compassion is. This is so appropriate to the times.

 

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Date Posted: 12/24/03 3:28pm Subject: RE: Alderaan Blessings - Holiday FF Challenge (Bail, Dorme, 3PO, little Leia) **New post 12/24**
Leia has found a friend to share and learn with. I liked the trust she has with Winter. Broadening her knowledge beyond the small circle she lives in can only bring good. The power outage is a blessing. wink

Dormé and Bail are wonderful parents for her. It was fun how Bail encourages them to imagine about Bail Ban and Branwen. You’re doing a great job showing Leia’s young life and the influences that shape her. This story is blending the good and bad that exists easily, and the simple things that help to make the bad more bearable.

Another bustling day begins, although the servants will need a day off. grin

 

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Date Posted: 12/24/03 5:17pm Subject: RE: Alderaan Blessings - Holiday FF Challenge (Bail, Dorme, 3PO, little Leia) **New post 12/24**
Awesome story, PLJ. It's a great companion piece to Sandstorm Celebration. But the part about Branwen and Ban, do I detect a subtle cross-promotion here? wink

 

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Date Posted: 12/24/03 11:41pm Subject: RE: Alderaan Blessings - Holiday FF Challenge (Bail, Dorme, 3PO, little Leia) **New post 12/24** - Date Edited: 12/25/03 1:01am (1 edits total) Edited By: rhonderoo
OOOH,saw this was second story, will have to go read the first. I'll be back!!!

EDIT: I'm back! Great story PLJ! You have gotten into Bail's head as someone said before. In story, just like the other, you can feel the hand of fate.... *goosebumps*

You have really given the twins' childhood's life, PLJ! Great job!

*waves hand in front of PLJ -you will write more in saga stories.... silly

Now I must go catch up on To Court a Queen.

 

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Date Posted: 12/25/03 2:04pm Subject: RE: Alderaan Blessings - Holiday FF Challenge (Bail, Dorme, 3PO, little Leia) **New post 12/24**
Leia and Winter's budding friendship was wonderfully-written. The talk about The Past between Bail and Dormé was a nice touch of darkness in a sweet, warm story.

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