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darthnick11 Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 8/28/04 4:16pm Subject: Betrayal(AU AotC) FINALLY updated 6/5! - Date Edited: 6/5/05 2:04pm (24 edits total) Edited By: darthnick11
	Title: Betrayal Author(s): Darthnick11 and Ki-Adi-Matt Timeframe: Attack of the Clones Characters: Mace, Palpatine Genre: Alternate Universe Keywords: AU Summary: Mace kills Dooku and slaughters all of the Jedi. Notes: none Betrayal Prologue Mace Windu walked out of the dark corridor and out into the sunlit balcony overlooking the arena. He activated his purple lightsaber and readied himself for a fight. He took one quick slash and Count Dooku went to the floor headless, along with his bodyguard, Jango Fett. The Confederacy had fallen. Mace went into Vaapad, his only salvation the Dark Side, and fell through it. With three slashes he took everyone else on the balcony down. He leapt down into the arena, and slaughtered anyone he saw. All of the other Jedi ignited their lightsabers and ran down to save Obi-Wan, Anakin, and Padme. But Mace was their first. With a stab into Obi-Wan’s head, a slash to Anakin’s neck, and gripping Padme’s neck with the Force, choking the life out of her. Kit Fisto came running up to Mace, trying to attack him. Mace was unstoppable, however, as Vaapad was the greatest lighsaber technique in the galaxy. Although at least twenty Jedi surrounded him, he went into a fit of Rage and killed every Jedi near him. Many Clone gunships came near the arena, but retreated instantly after seeing the Jedi slaughter. Mace stood alone in the middle of the arena, unstoppable in his Dark Side madness. The sounds of repulsor lift filled the arena. A Sith Infiltrator was slowly floating to the ground. The exhaust shaft steamed and the ramp to the ship opened. The stooped form of Darth Sidious, the Dark Lord of the Sith, slowly walked out. “Hahahaha!” Cackled Sidious. “Good work, my new apprentice. You are strong in the Dark Side of the Force. Come with me.” With that, Mace Windu, now Darth Morphus, walked into the Infiltrator.
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VadersMistress Registered: Apr '04	Date Posted: 8/28/04 6:12pm Subject: RE: Betrayal(Alternate Universe AotC) Mace turns Dark!
	Can you say creepy??? LOL. That was intense. It was very good but intense! Good job with it. -----signature----- Harry Potter > Twilight Would I rather be feared or loved? Um... Easy, both. I want people to be afraid of how much they love me. Persia pwns your face.
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Ki-Adi-Matt Registered: Aug '04	Date Posted: 8/28/04 7:47pm Subject: RE: Betrayal(Alternate Universe AotC) Mace turns Dark!
	Hey, This is Matt, the co-writer. I hoped you enjoyed our prologue. -----signature----- Read my Fan Fiction story, "The Plight of Hoth" http://boards.theforce.net/Before_the_Saga/b10475/17916560/?0 "They best chiggity check themselves before they wreck theyselves" "Do or do not, there is no try." YODA Happiness is a virtue LOTR ROCK!!!!!
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VadersMistress Registered: Apr '04	Date Posted: 8/28/04 7:59pm Subject: RE: Betrayal(Alternate Universe AotC) Mace turns Dark!
	I did! I hope to see more SOON. This is a terrifc spin on things. -----signature----- Harry Potter > Twilight Would I rather be feared or loved? Um... Easy, both. I want people to be afraid of how much they love me. Persia pwns your face.
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darthnick11 Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 8/30/04 9:16pm Subject: RE: Betrayal(Alternate Universe AotC) Mace turns Dark!
	glad you liked it i'm working on it RIGHT THIS MINUTE. expect to see some soon.
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Ki-Adi-Matt Registered: Aug '04	Date Posted: 9/1/04 7:48pm Subject: RE: Betrayal AU AotC Mace turns Dark!(Reviews appreciated, we only have one)
	Thanks for the compliments we still got more suprises. -----signature----- Read my Fan Fiction story, "The Plight of Hoth" http://boards.theforce.net/Before_the_Saga/b10475/17916560/?0 "They best chiggity check themselves before they wreck theyselves" "Do or do not, there is no try." YODA Happiness is a virtue LOTR ROCK!!!!!
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Jedi_Chani Registered: Aug '04	Date Posted: 9/2/04 5:00am Subject: RE: Betrayal AU AotC Mace turns Dark!(Reviews appreciated, we only have one)
	A dark Mace? Well, now that is interesting. Hope you update soon, I'm hooked. -----signature----- "I've got a bad feeling about this..." "The enemy to be feared the most is the one who wears the face of a friend."
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darthnick11 Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 9/2/04 7:35pm Subject: RE: Betrayal AU AotC Mace turns Dark!(Reviews appreciated, we only have one)
	Oh, we will. I promise that if i don't update within the next three hours, then i will write the whole story tonight no matter how long it takes. Nick
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darthnick11 Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 9/2/04 8:05pm Subject: RE: Betrayal AU AotC Mace turns Dark!(Reviews appreciated, we only have one) - Date Edited: 4/3/05 6:58pm (3 edits total) Edited By: darthnick11
	Chapter One-A New Blade Three weeks later….. “Ilum!” spoke Darth Sidious to the pilot of the Infiltrator. “We head to Ilum! Lord Morphus, step into the ship and bring that purple lightsaber, it’s time to leave.” “Yes master. I am ready. But why are we going to Ilum? There’s nothing there but Jedi Lightsaber crystals,” spoke Morphus. “You shall see, my friend, you shall see,” spoke Sidious deftly to his young Sith apprentice. Deep space. The silver, sleek new Sith Infiltrator flew straight towards a giant white planet, full of ice. The turbolift engines suddenly came on from the bottom of the craft, as the ship was ready to land on the planet. The people inside this ship, however, did not notice the ten wedge-shaped Jedi Starfighters tailing them, along with the twenty clone trooper fighter ships with them. They did not shoot the streamlined Infiltrator, however, as Destruction was not their plan. The true plan was for something more-something a lot harder than destroying a ship. They were here to turn the dark-skinned man they knew as Mace Windu back to the Light Side of the Force. The Clone Ships followed the Jedi Starfighters straight under an ice-bridge, and into a secret cavern, full of shining blue, green, purple, orange, and yellow ice. One of the circular cockpits opened on a Red Starfighter, and the old, battle-torn Ki-Adi-Mundi stepped out. His brown robes over his tall head, and one solid hand on his lightsaber, he ordered the other Jedi and Clones out of their ships. Suddenly, the air was filled with the sounds of thirty cockpits opening and the click-click of boots stepping toward the Jedi Master. They heard a loud bang which meant the Infiltrator had landed. He looked in between to icey rocks, and saw a bald man in a dark robe and an old man with a cane walk out onto the cold land. “There they are. Follow on my command,” said Ki-Adi, looking back as the Jedi and Clones nodded their head in answer. They had to be silent, silent or else be silent as dead men. They watched as the two Sith entered a corridor made of ice. Ki-Adi had never seen this before, and wandered where it had led. “Follow them, now!” He whispered quietly. The Jedi followed him, the twenty clones in the rear. “Only kill on my command.” Morphus inquired, “Where does this hallway lead, master? I’ve never seen it before on my two trips here.” “Again, my apprentice, you will have to wait. Stop asking so many questions, or you will be punished,” spoke Sidious back to him in his crackly tone. They got to the end of the hall and Morphus gasped in awe. The entire cave was filled with thousands of red ice-crystals used to make lightsabers. “This, Lord Morphus, is why we are here. It is time, time for you to make your new lightsaber.” Morphus used the Force to move one of the crystals out of the cavern’s wall. Sidious through him a black, grey, and silver handle. Still using his Force-powers, he moved the crystal within the handle. It was complete. His new lightsaber was finished. “Morphus, try it out! How do you like your new blade?” said Sidious loudly as it echoed of the cavern walls. Morphus lit his new lightsaber and the room lit up with more blood-red light. Its hum vibrated through the air as Morphus admired his new saber. “Wait, master, there’s something here. I sense a strong presence in the Force along with many other small ones.” Ki-Adi leapt forward from the hallway and slashed straight for Morphus’s arm. Ki-Adi’s green lightsaber only hit the red blade of Morphus. “You should’ve never turned, Mace,” spoke Ki-Adi. “Who is this ‘Mace’ you speak of? I am Darth Morphus. And, why are you here, Jedi filth, you will never beat me alone.” “I am not alone,” said Ki-Adi as the other nine Jedi came in, many colored lightsabers shining, running toward Morphus. The Clone Troopers came in firing. Sidious ran off into a corner of the cavern. Was he running? Or was it a ploy to get them away from Morphus? A Jedi said, “Clone troopers, follow that dark-robed man.” “Yes sir,” spoke the Clone Commander obediently. “We will capture him for you.” As Morphus deflected every single lightsaber slash, stab, and swing, the Clones followed Sidious into the darkness. They turned one corner to find the Chancellor Palpatine waiting for them there. “Troopers, attack those Jedi! Why are they attacking that innocent man?” Spoke Palpatine. “I am your commander, not them!” The Clones obeyed their order perfectly. As the Jedi fought with their backs turned, the Clone troopers shot everyone of them down with deadly precision. Sidious had just gained people for his cause. They ran back to Palpatine for their next command, but found him vanished. However, unbeknowenst to the Clone Troopers, one Jedi had survived. It was Ki-Adi-Mundi, and he lie on the ground before Morphus. “You should have never turned. Kill me now, Mace, Morphus, whatever you’re called. I have no reason to live no longer. You used to be my friend, and ally,” spoke Ki-Adi softly. “Join me, Mundi. You could be a powerful friend for the Sith. It is the only way. Join us,” said Morphus in his deep voice. “No. Kill me.” Ki-Adi saw one lightsaber right behind Morphus. He closed his eyes softly and called the saber to his hand using the Force. It was Morphus’s purple lightsaber, dropped during the battle. Morphus saw it coming and slashed the handle straight in half. “I am a Jedi no more, Mundi. The Sith will conquer all. And, As you wish, you will now die a warrior’s death as you always wanted,” spoke Morphus. He twisted his lightsaber around in his hands, and brought it down upon Ki-Adi. One of the greatest Jedi ever had fallen. “My apprentice, you have beaten them. Great job,” laughed Sidious. “These Clones are ours now, I have manipulated their puny minds. Also, I have an offer for you, Morphus. The Confederacy is key in our plans. You will need to become the leader of it so it still survives. The Republic, and the Jedi, must fall.” Morphus kneeled to the ground. “Yes my master. I will do your bidding.” They walked back to the Infiltrator and stepped in, Clones following. Every trace of the Jedi Mace Windu had vanished. Mace was dead. In his ashes stepped a new evil Sith, Darth Morphus.
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Ki-Adi-Matt Registered: Aug '04	Date Posted: 9/3/04 9:30am Subject: RE: Betrayal AU AotC Mace turns Dark! New post 9/2! Morphus goes red lighsaber-y!(HaHa)
	Thanks for the comments i'm glad you like our story -----signature----- Read my Fan Fiction story, "The Plight of Hoth" http://boards.theforce.net/Before_the_Saga/b10475/17916560/?0 "They best chiggity check themselves before they wreck theyselves" "Do or do not, there is no try." YODA Happiness is a virtue LOTR ROCK!!!!!
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darthnick11 Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 9/3/04 3:52pm Subject: RE: Betrayal AU AotC Mace turns Dark! New post 9/2! Morphus goes red lighsaber-y!(HaHa)
	We don't have that many comments.....Matt you're weird. SO, anyone that is reading this should know that another post will come, tonight. If you read, reply! We take criticism very well, and we will fix our story! Nick
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VadersMistress Registered: Apr '04	Date Posted: 9/4/04 12:50pm Subject: RE: Betrayal AU AotC Mace turns Dark! New post 9/2! Morphus goes red lighsaber-y!(HaHa)
	runs into room Okay, I just found this and I HAD to read it. The update is awesome! It is even better than the prologue and I loved the prologue! I hope you post some more soon... -----signature----- Harry Potter > Twilight Would I rather be feared or loved? Um... Easy, both. I want people to be afraid of how much they love me. Persia pwns your face.
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darthnick11 Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 9/5/04 11:58am Subject: RE: Betrayal AU AotC Mace turns Dark! New post 9/2! Morphus goes red lighsaber-y!(HaHa)
	Wow! Thanks! Expect a post tonight...if i've got the time.
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darthnick11 Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 9/7/04 8:19pm Subject: RE: Betrayal AU AotC Mace turns Dark! New post 9/7! The Sith Trials-Task One - Date Edited: 4/3/05 6:58pm (2 edits total) Edited By: darthnick11
	Chapter Two Morphus, face glaring, sat down right across from his master. The dark robes fell straight over his master’s eyes, so Morphus never knew who the man behind the robes was. “Lord Morphus, have you ever heard of the three trials of the Sith?” Spoke Dark Lord Sidious in his same crackly tone. Morphus said back, “No, master, I’ve only heard of the Jedi trials. What are these?” “These, my young apprentice, are much harder than those ‘Jedi Trials’ you speak of. They are called The Ancient Trials of the Sith. More ancient. You have to have a lot more skill than those Jedi to defeat all three trials,” said Sidious. “They take place over three planets-Kessel, Yavin IV, and Coruscant. You must first survive the terrain of Kessel for three hours with no breathing apparatus. Then, you must fly to Yavin IV, a moon in the Yavin system. There, you must defeat my hand, Asajj Ventress. Next, you must travel to Coruscant, and defeat my second hand- the droid-man General Grievous. Then, you will be worthy enough to become my apprentice.” “Master, I am ready.” “Your Infiltrator awaits, Morphus. And good luck, you’ll need it. The trials are intense. This time-you will be totally alone. Go, Morphus. Fly to Kessel,” spoke Sidious. “Remember, strength lies in the Dark Side of the Force.” It was very dark in Kessel as Morphus’s infiltrator gently landed on a remote area away from any cities, hangars, or mines. He sat up a holocam and started meditating outside of the starship. For the first hour he had no trouble breathing in the harsh climate of Kessel. Suddenly, he developed a very bad cough and couldn’t stop it through the Force. Sand, dirt, and everything else was blown around by a gigantic tornado-like spiral. Morphus nearly lost his footing as strangely powerful winds ricocheted round and round him. “This is man made,” thought Morphus to himself. He leapt over it and went to investigate. He brought the holocam with him, to track his progress. He saw a gigantic rolling crawler, going as fast as a speeder. He flipped through the air behind the crawler, and slashed at its edge. It went straight through the tough metal, and a small hole appeared. The MechaCrawler, as Morphus called it, was very big inside. It was filled with many droids, most-likely sent by the Seperatists. He reached for the air inside his belt, where he thought his comlink would be. “Obi-Wan Kenobi, it’s Mace. The separatists have- wait, Kenobi is dead. I am Windu no more.” Morphus wondered why he had this sudden thought about his distant pass. He thought, in some way, hi Jedi self might be trying to come back to him, but this was doubtful. He shielded himself off from the Light Side of the Force. No one could know about this. Especially Sidious. He went back to the battle. He fought the droids quickly, destroying them with fantastic lightsaber moves. By the time he had defeated all of the droids the two hour limit had passed, as he still had let some air into the MechaCrawler. He went into the front control room quickly, unleashing his anger. He saw the leader of the crawler inside. It was a mysterious Jedi, most likely a rogue. The Jedi activated his purple lightsaber as Morphus glared in awe. “But I thought I was the only Jedi that had a purple saber,” he spoke. He caught what he was doing in the sentence, but continued fighting. The Jedi moved his purple saber right in front of his face to block Morphus’, but Morphus was a master swordsman. In one swipe, he had cut the Jedi to the ground. “Who are you?” Said Morphus sternly to the Jedi, wondering why one would be as far out as Kessel. “I-I am-was-a Jedi Knight in the temple. I left as they did not notice my skill. That was twenty years ago. They thought I was the Chosen One, but ditched me. They said I was too close to the Dark Side of the Force,” spoke the Jedi, his brown-gray hair glistening from the metal in the MechaCrawler. “Then, Jedi, how would you like to join the army of Master Sidious, Dark Lord of the Sith? As there is the rule of two, you cannot become a true Sith, but we will accept you as a Dark Jedi,” inquired Morphus. “Yes. I will go. My name is Cepton Clant. Tell your Lord Sidious that I will help you annihilate the Jedi.” Luckily, the Infiltrator had just enough room for a pilot and co-pilot. Morphus gave Cepton a chance to fly the ship, for him to show his skill. They headed for the Yavin system immediately, and the would reach them in about two standard days. Cepton was an expert flyer. He dodged anything that came in his path such as asteroids and space debris-and shot down the ones he couldn’t dodge. He took the ship in many hard maneuvers, such as a full flip straight through a destroyed transport’s breached hull. He then turned back, fired the Infiltrator’s cannons, and hit the ship dead on. It exploded into thousands of glittering peaces that shone directly off the ship. “Great job, Clant. But I think I could do better,” said Morphus, already thinking he could win. He did three complete revolutions, went straight up, and leapt into lightspeed. While in it, he kept spinning as fast as he could. When they got out of lightspeed, they were straight in front of Yavin, and Cepton was pale, sick, and tired from the trick. “Okay, Morphus. You win.” Morphus chuckled. "The Dark Side guides me. I am strong in its power. How do you think i defeated your droids?" "I always thought it was luck!"
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VadersMistress Registered: Apr '04	Date Posted: 9/10/04 2:12pm Subject: RE: Betrayal AU AotC Mace turns Dark! New post 9/7! The Sith Trials-Task One
	Morphus, face glaring, sat down right across from his master. The dark robes fell straight over his master’s eyes, so Morphus never knew who the man behind the robes was. “Lord Morphus, have you ever heard of the three trials of the Sith?” Spoke Dark Lord Sidious in his same crackly tone. Morphus said back, “No, master, I’ve only heard of the Jedi trials. What are these?” “These, my young apprentice, are much harder than those ‘Jedi Trials’ you speak of. They are called The Ancient Trials of the Sith. More ancient. You have to have a lot more skill than those Jedi to defeat all three trials,” said Sidious. “They take place over three planets-Kessel, Yavin IV, and Coruscant. You must first survive the terrain of Kessel for three hours with no breathing apparatus. Then, you must fly to Yavin IV, a moon in the Yavin system. There, you must defeat my hand, Asajj Ventress. Next, you must travel to Coruscant, and defeat my second hand- the droid-man General Grievous. Then, you will be worthy enough to become my apprentice.” “Master, I am ready.” “Your Infiltrator awaits, Morphus. And good luck, you’ll need it. The trials are intense. This time-you will be totally alone. Go, Morphus. Fly to Kessel,” spoke Sidious. “Remember, strength lies in the Dark Side of the Force.” Ooooh... blinks stupidly Can you say creepy? But, VERY GOOD! The updates are getting better and better. This story is really good, I enjoy every word. Mace is one bad a$$ dude! -----signature----- Harry Potter > Twilight Would I rather be feared or loved? Um... Easy, both. I want people to be afraid of how much they love me. Persia pwns your face.
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darthnick11 Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 9/10/04 5:39pm Subject: RE: Betrayal AU AotC Mace turns Dark! New post 9/7! The Sith Trials-Task One
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