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RannOrgana Registered: Oct '04	Date Posted: 12/21/04 5:18am Subject: Shining Light - Episode 4 AU Chapter one up on 23/12/04 - Date Edited: 12/23/04 5:36am (2 edits total) Edited By: RannOrgana
	Somewhere on Yavin IV. "Anakin, did you hear about that Alderaani princess?" "No Padme, I didn't, What happened to her?" "Her ship was intercepted over Tatooine"! "Tatooine!? Why was she at Tatooine?" "Apparently she was trying to find someone who was Tatooine for the last twenty-twenty five years. That's the offical word anyhow." "I wonder who she was trying to find?" "I have no clue Ani." "Who's ship caught her?" "Some Captain from Correllia." "Did he have a name?" "Sootir F something i didn't catch all of his name." "Sootir, Sootir Fel perhaps?" "Maybe." With that comment two rebel technicians went back to work on a damaged fighter craft. first fic!!! more later Constructive critisism welcome! Rann Organa -----signature----- I cannot corrupt that which is by nature already corrupt - Rob Zombie http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/17828754/?0 - Shining Light ANH AU
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_Tenel_Ka_ Registered: Sep '01	Date Posted: 12/21/04 10:16am Subject: RE: Shining Light - Episode 4 AU Prologue
	Intriguing beginning! I'm interested to see where you go with this! Maybe a bit more description. It's very obvious who's talking, and that's good, but it needs a bit to fill it out, you know? -----signature----- Sister to _Alisas_Silverleaf_ "One day love just hits you with a flash, leaves you staring blindly just like a photograph..."
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RannOrgana Registered: Oct '04	Date Posted: 12/21/04 11:21am Subject: RE: Shining Light - Episode 4 AU Prologue
	Thanks for help! for the story, think ANH with a twist: vader/Anakin saw the error of his ways 10 years prior to ANH, faked his own death (Blowing up an empty suit of armor) and absconding to the Rebellion. suffice to say Obi wan Kenobi will survive the death star and find about Anakins return to the light. Rann Organa -----signature----- I cannot corrupt that which is by nature already corrupt - Rob Zombie http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/17828754/?0 - Shining Light ANH AU
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GreatOne Registered: May '03	Date Posted: 12/21/04 11:30am Subject: RE: Shining Light - Episode 4 AU Prologue
	Will Han be in this story??? (requires massive doses of H/L to survive)
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RannOrgana Registered: Oct '04	Date Posted: 12/21/04 12:00pm Subject: RE: Shining Light - Episode 4 AU Prologue
	Han will be in this story as this is basically a rewrite of ANH with a Lightside Anakin instead of a Darkside Vader. anyone who was in ANH will be in this fic, the only different characters are: Padme and Anakin no vader Kenobi makes it to Yavin and the Rebels Rann Organa -----signature----- I cannot corrupt that which is by nature already corrupt - Rob Zombie http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/17828754/?0 - Shining Light ANH AU
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RannOrgana Registered: Oct '04	Date Posted: 12/23/04 5:32am Subject: RE: Shining Light - Episode 4 AU Chapter one up 23/12/04 - Date Edited: 12/23/04 5:34am (1 edits total) Edited By: RannOrgana
	Postie!!!!! **************************************************** Shining Light Chapter One Padme Amidala walked dow the corridor from the medcenter towards her quarters, groaning softly to herself. "Triplets, now what am i going to do?, Ani will be over the moon but Obi wan would be frightened for my safety. If only he knew......" Having reached the quarters she shared with her husband she opened the door. Walking inside she called out to her husband. "Ani, are you home?" The next minute she found in the arms of her husband. "How did it go, my Love?" "The babies appear to be fine....." "Hold on.... Babies?" "Triplets, Ani, I'm having triplets this time" "Triplets....... WooHoo i'm gonna have 3 more children!" ************************************************** Obi wan Kenobi shouted to the youngsters that followed him into the hanger "Go.... run Luke run..... i'll hold the stormtroopers off you get out of here..... join the Rebellion.... don't concern yourself over me ......remember don't think, Feel...... the force will be with you always. With that a stray blaster bolt hit Obi wan in the back, killing him instantly. With the troopers pouring blaster fire into the empty robes, a scream was heard in the hanger bay. "BEN" "Noooooooo" **************************************************** More soon Comments welcome -----signature----- I cannot corrupt that which is by nature already corrupt - Rob Zombie http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/17828754/?0 - Shining Light ANH AU
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GreatOne Registered: May '03	Date Posted: 12/23/04 5:37am Subject: RE: Shining Light - Episode 4 AU Chapter on up on 23/12/04
	TRIPLETS??? - Now if Luke and Leia are eighteen, and Padme was, say, around twenty-five when she had them.... 43???????? She's 43 and having TRIPLETS??? (good thing she's not Force sensitive, or Anakin would be dead meat)
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MasterSareBabe Registered: Dec '04	Date Posted: 12/23/04 11:36am Subject: RE: Shining Light - Episode 4 AU Chapter one up on 23/12/04
	That soooo funnny! TRIPLETS!
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RannOrgana Registered: Oct '04	Date Posted: 12/30/04 1:24pm Subject: RE: Shining Light - Episode 4 AU Chapter one up on 23/12/04
	more to come in the next 3 days if you think triplets is a shocker, the next surprise will knock you into orbit! Rann Organa -----signature----- I cannot corrupt that which is by nature already corrupt - Rob Zombie http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/17828754/?0 - Shining Light ANH AU
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Jedi_Alexis Registered: Oct '04	Date Posted: 1/22/05 8:54am Subject: RE: Shining Light - Episode 4 AU Chapter one up on 23/12/04
	Whoa. Now I'm intrigued. And confused. Great job! More please! -----signature----- Twisted Perceptions - A New Hope AU - http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/17880434/?3 "Reality continues to ruin my life." - Calvin and Hobbes
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