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JediMasterRev Registered: Dec '04	Date Posted: 3/5/05 5:10pm Subject: The Naboo Chronicles: Complete. More replies (9/17/07) - Date Edited: 7/2/08 10:17am (60 edits total) Edited By: JediMasterRev
	My first posting here so would definitely like any and all kinds of feedback. Have been working with this idea for over a year now. Hope you all enjoy! TITLE: The Naboo Chronicles AUTHOR: JediMasterRev TIMEFRAME: End of TPM to 6 years prior to AotC CHARACTERS: Anakin, Padme/Queen Amidala, Obi-Wan, Sabe, Handmaidens, Count Dooku, Palpatine, Siri Tachi, the Jedi Exile and OCs. GENRE: Drama, Action, Romance, Adventure. SUMMARY: A post TPM AU. How would Anakin's destiny be altered if the Jedi intially rejected him and he stayed on Naboo? Would this keep him in the light or will the Darkside still prevail? DISCLAIMER: It all belongs to GL. Just borrowing the car for a little while. Many thanks to all my beta readers, past and present: Pokey1984, Alethia, Hansgirl1031 and Geo3 Chapter 1: In the Beginning He stared at the funeral pyre for what seemed like hours. Although the boy had only known Jedi Master Qui-Gon Jinn for a short time, Anakin Skywalker felt as if he had lost his best friend in the galaxy. His pain was further compounded by the disapproving stares of the various Jedi Council members, as well as the saddened glances from his new friend Obi-Wan Kenobi. Anakin didn’t need the Force to know that the Jedi weren’t going to train him, despite his actions during Naboo’s liberation. While he was still saying his good-byes to the man who helped free him, a soft, melodic voice called out to him as the gentlest of hands lay upon his shoulders. “I’m sorry Ani that this happened.” The boy turned around to see the troubled, painted face of Padmé Naberrie, otherwise known as Queen Amidala. Due to a twist of fate, Anakin had been able to win the parts required to repair her ship in a podrace. Though his intention was to only help the marooned Queen, his selflessness resulted in his freedom. “I really miss him,” he muttered, trying to remain brave. “I know, Ani.” She said, lightly touching the side of his face. “I miss him as well.” Amidala knelt down to look the boy in the eyes. “I believe though Master Qui-Gon would not want us to focus on the negative, but rather all the good that has come from this.” Anakin hung his head down while brushing several tears off his face. The young Queen gently pulled the boy close to her as they cried together. They solemnly embraced until the sixteen year old chief handmaiden Sabé approached. “Your Majesty?” “Yes?” replied Amidala as she straightened up. “Chancellor Palpatine is requesting an audience with you.” Sabé said before flashing a quick smile at Naboo’s new little hero. “I will meet with him tomorrow. But first, I want to schedule a meeting with Masters Yoda and Windu. I want to know what their intentions towards Anakin are,” she stated tiredly. Amidala smiled at the boy as she added, “Also, have Rabé and Eirtaé setup the dignitary suite for Anakin tonight.” The dutiful handmaiden left to carry out her orders. Amidala then reached down for the boy’s hand, which he was more than willing to give her. During their walk towards the palace, the thoughts of the Jedi and what they were planning to do, concerning him caused Anakin to groan aloud. “Are you alright, Ani?” “The Jedi are not going to take me with them,” he said without any doubt in his voice. The young Queen stopped to look at him. “How do you know?” Anakin shuffled his feet, while looking down to the ground. “I could hear their thoughts during Master Qui-Gon’s funeral. They are all afraid of me except for Obi-Wan. He’s too sad about losing his friend to be thinking about much else.” Amidala stood silent as she considered his words. She knew once her Royal Court resumed session, all the problems of the occupation would be revealed, including the tally of all who lost their lives. However, she would deal with that soon enough. Right now, the situation regarding her new friend’s future was cause for great concern. Surely the Jedi wouldn’t send him back to Tatooine, would they? Although the details of the Jedi Order were largely an enigma to Amidala, she did know that they ordinarily did not take anybody older than an infant. It was their belief that at a particular age, a person formed too many emotional entanglements to be properly trained. She had also heard Qui-Gon call Anakin the Chosen One, referring to an ancient prophecy with which she was only vaguely familiar. She needed to gain more insight if she was going to argue in the boy’s defense. Padmé could not even fathom what would happen to her little friend if the Jedi refused to train him. One thing was certain, as Queen and especially as his friend; she would not allow him to be sent back into slavery. With a slight nudge, she motioned for Anakin to continue their walk. Once they re-entered the palace, the young boy looked around the halls in pure wonderment. Amidala chuckled to herself when she saw Anakin’s mouth agape as he observed all the elaborate statues, paintings and architecture; this time without any droids shooting at him. The Naboo were a people comprised of artisans, musicians and thinkers. They relished the beautiful things of life and all that surrounded them. This ideal had brought a long standing peace to their society for hundreds of years. It saddened, yet pleased the Queen that her new friend was able to experience such simple pleasures for the very first time here. Upon reaching his quarters, Amidala was thankful that the handmaidens already had it prepared. Still in awe, Anakin could barely find his voice. “Who else is staying in here?” “This room is only for you, Ani,” she said, amused with his boyish naivety. “All of this?” Amidala nodded in confirmation, which the boy replied to with his lopsided grin. Anakin’s curiosity then took hold, causing him to run into the room and jump on the large bed. The Queen felt a slight pang of regret as somewhere deep inside, she wished that she could join in his childish antics. Perhaps one day, she would permit herself a brief reprieve from duty and enjoy being a girl, if even only for a few minutes. Padmé never regretted her commitment to her people. While she aspired to become Queen, she never allowed herself to believe it would ever happen. And despite her success as a junior legislator or even after her election as Princess of Theed, that dream seemed unattainable. That was until fate intervened and her predecessor, King Veruna was implicated in a scandal, leading to his abdication. The people of Naboo, repulsed by his actions, were ready for a new leader to restore greatness to the throne. Gaining support from both her mentor Governor Bibble and her parents, Padmé decided to follow her heart and run for the office. Although Lady Amidala was young and idealistic, she favored the traditionalistic elegance and pageantry of the monarchy. She felt under the modernist Veruna, the Naboo lost some of their identity and she promised, if elected, she would work to regain the pride the office once held. Her campaign was an overwhelming success. Padmé was elected Queen in the quickest election in the history of the planet. It took her best friend and campaign manager Sabé Orllize dragging her in front of the scores of holonews reporters to make her accept her victory. How a few months could change everything. That was all before the occupation and before her world nearly collapsed around her. From their initial reports, it would be years before the wounds inflicted by the Trade Federation would heal. The young Queen detached from her musings when the blue eyed boy called out her name with worry. “Padmé…Are you alright?” Blinking rapidly, she answered, “I’m fine Ani. I’m just… preoccupied.” “Can I help?” Anakin asked with an eager sparkle in his eyes. “I wish you could,” she replied with a hint of regret. Not wanting to be somber, Padmé scrunched her face playfully, causing Anakin to giggle in delight. Happy that she bolstered his mood, as well as her own, she added, “I think though that destroying the droid control ship was quite enough for a day’s work.” Anakin chuckled as he attempted to fight back a yawn. She smiled at him sweetly, knowing how tired the little hero must have been. “When was the last time you got some sleep?” He shrugged his shoulders dramatically up and down as another yawn took hold. “Why don’t you get some rest? We both have a big day tomorrow.” The young boy droop his shoulders as he made his way towards the bed. After grabbing his sleepwear, Anakin asked, “Padmé?” “Yes Ani?” “Do you think the Jedi will take me back to Tatooine tomorrow?” Sensing the nervousness in his voice, Padmé placed her hand on his shoulder, in an effort to comfort him. “Whatever happens, I promise that we will find a solution.” Anakin gave her a sheepish smile as he hugged her in thanks. When he withdrew slightly, the boy beamed at her, much as he had when they first met. “Padmé?” “Yes?” “Are you sure you’re not an angel?” Padmé tilted her head slightly as she gave him a bright smile. She then kissed his forehead before he retreated towards his bed. “Good night, Ani,” she said, turning off the light. Before leaving, she paused as she looked into the dark room. “I will always be your angel.” In haste, Amidala left the room, closing the door behind her. A large grin eclipsed young Anakin’s face, which was hidden in the shadows of the night. “Good night, my angel,” he whispered as he laid back to fall asleep. While she headed out of his room, Amidala wondered what possessed her to say that. While they had just met a few weeks prior, it almost felt like he had always been in her life. ****** -----signature----- "This above all, to thine own self be true." Polonius, Hamlet, Act I, Scene III For the Love of the Queen: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/24151408/p1/?0 The Naboo Chronicles: http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/18644312/?162
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Idrelle_Miocovani Registered: Feb '05	Date Posted: 3/5/05 5:35pm Subject: RE: The Naboo Chronicles-Post TPM AU (Anakin, Padme, Obi-Wan & More)
	Awww, Ani's so cute. Nice, AU, with him being rejected from the Order. This is will make things very interesting. -----signature----- Nat is my new Muse. Yes, you may have one of those flowy Greek-robe things you say you can't spell. This Time Around: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/27062943/p1/?2 DarthIshtar's Padawan
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Alethia Registered: Feb '05	Date Posted: 3/5/05 5:55pm Subject: RE: The Naboo Chronicles-Post TPM AU (Anakin, Padme, Obi-Wan & More)
	I read this on fanfiction.net today, but I'll respond here... I like this a lot. Having Anakin rejected from the Jedi Order is a different and interesting twist and I like that Padme's already planning to have something done about it. Thanks goodness for her. I don't want to say much more, since I've also read Chapter 2 and I don't remember exactly enough to keep the chapters apart and posting here about Chapter 2, when you still haven't posted it would be pretty pointless... But I will say that I really like this fic and am very curious to see where you're going with it. And once you post chapter 2, I can write a more thourough review... -----signature----- Jen, High Scholar and Ponderer of all Things Verily Blue, and Official caller of Suz, Crusader of Heretics and Knight of the Blue 1000 Now sacrificing Movie Garfield
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JediMasterRev Registered: Dec '04	Date Posted: 3/6/05 8:03am Subject: RE: The Naboo Chronicles-Post TPM AU (Anakin, Padme, Obi-Wan & More) CPT 1 (part II) - Date Edited: 12/26/05 11:30pm (1 edits total) Edited By: JediMasterRev
	Hi everyone. Thanks for tuning in. I will be updating fairly regularly so keep your eyes open for new posts. Idrelle_Miocavani Thanks! We'll definitely see what new hoops Anakin will jumb through will all these changes. Alethia I like that Padme's already planning to have something done about it. Thanks goodness for her. Thank goodness, indeed. GL has said many times it's all about Vader. In my stories, it's all about Anakin and Padme. Glad that you are curious. Keep on watching . Without further ado.... Chapter 1 (part II) Upon returning to her quarters, the young monarch changed out of her elaborate robes and into a comfortable dress. Prior to dismissing her handmaidens for the evening, Amidala had Sabé summon Jedi Kenobi to meet with her in the sitting room. Just as she was about to relax, she heard a knock at the door. “Enter,” she ordered. The young Jedi stepped inside, followed closely by Sabé. “Your highness, I understand you wish to speak with me,” Obi-Wan declared, bowing with respect. “Yes, Padawan Kenobi. Please sit down,” Amidala said, motioning to a nearby couch. Full of pride, Sabé interjected, “Obi-I mean Jedi Kenobi was just granted full knight status this evening, your Majesty.” Padmé flashed a subtle grin at her handmaiden. She didn’t need Force sensitivity to know when her best friend was smitten. However, maintaining her royal façade, the Queen remarked; “Well, then congratulations are in order, Master Kenobi.” “I humbly thank you, your highness” he responded with a touch of sadness in his voice. A brief, awkward silence followed with the room’s occupants staring listlessly at one another. “I asked you here because I wanted to gain some insight about the Council’s decision towards Anakin before I meet with them tomorrow.” Amidala said. Before Obi-Wan could answer, Sabé interrupted. “With your permission, your Majesty; I will take my leave.” “Please stay, my friend.” Sabé half-bowed in acknowledgement while Amidala returned her attention towards the Jedi. He exhaled loudly as he sensed that the Queen was not going to be pleased. “I spoke with Master Yoda only a few hours ago and he was adamant about the Council not approving Anakin’s training.” Annoyed, Amidala folded her arms tightly against her chest. “What is their rationale?” “They feel he is too old and possesses too many emotional attachments to ever be a Jedi. They believe to train him would be dangerous.” The young Queen gave him a cold, hard stare. “And is that how you feel, Master Jedi?” Obi-Wan contemplated her question, bothered that she was further reinforcing his lack of confidence in the Council’s decision. “Your Majesty, I must admit that I did not initially agree with Master Qui-Gon’s bias towards the boy; and in all honesty I can understand the Council’s reservations.” Noticing that both women were now scowling at him, he quickly added, “However, after everything that has happened, it is hard to ignore the signs that suggest that Anakin may be the Chosen One.” Amidala folded her hands together as she became lost in thought for several moments. “Please explain to me then this prophecy of the Chosen One.” “Nearly a thousand years ago, prior to the end of the last major engagement with the Sith Empire, an ancient Jedi reported that he received a vision of the future. He prophesied that the Force would become unbalanced and a Chosen One would arrive to restore equilibrium. He or she would be conceived by the Force itself and born to a woman of low station. And from those humble beginnings, the Chosen One would rise to be one of the most powerful Force adepts ever.” The two young women listened intently as Obi-Wan continued, “Many of the Jedi thinkers throughout the ages believed that a great calamity would befall the galaxy prior to the arrival of the Chosen One.”. “If this event is so important, then why do your Masters treat Anakin like he’s the spawn of a Sith?” Amidala asked innervated. “The Council members are staunch believers in the Jedi Code. While the prophecy remains important, I believe they feel that when it would happen, it would occur within the Order and coincide with its rules.” Obi-Wan stated, uncertain if he still believed that now. The young Queen rolled her eyes in annoyance. “That seems somewhat presumptuous, don’t you think?” Trying to remain objective, Obi-Wan answered, “It is not my place to question the Council’s wisdom; at least not at the moment, your highness.” Now irate at the Jedi’s detached appearance, Padmé arose to ominously hover over Obi-Wan. She pointed her finger at him, much like a mother who was about to rebuke a child. “Whether Anakin is or isn’t the Chosen One makes no fundamental difference to me. What is important is his future and I’ll be damned if they send him back to Tatooine.” Obi-Wan remained sitting with his mouth slightly ajar while the young monarch focused her attention to Sabé. “Come with me. We have much to do before tomorrow.” Before the young knight could stand to bow, the Queen stormed out. Sabé offered him a slight shrug of resignation as she pursued Amidala. While he still had lingering doubts about Anakin’s future, what surprised him were the overwhelming feelings of protectiveness the girl Queen had towards the former slave. Normally distrustful of most political figures, Obi-Wan was developing a strong respect for this young woman. Her empathy for people, especially Anakin, rivaled that of most Jedi. The galaxy was in desperate need of more like her. *********** After abruptly leaving her sitting room, Amidala, followed by Sabé, made their way into the Palace’s library archives. The young Queen sat at one of the terminals, quickly activating the unit. “What are you looking for?” “I’m reading up on the Republic’s laws concerning Jedi children, as well as Naboo’s official immigration policies,” Amidala answered without removing her eyes from the viewscreen. “What can I do to help?” Sabé asked. Smiling at her friend, the young Queen pointed to the terminal next to her. “Call up all the pertinent laws concerning adoption.” “Adoption?” the chief handmaiden looked over at her astonished. With frustration and a lack of sleep getting the better of her, Padmé snapped back. “You heard me.” Her face then softened as she quelled her frustration. “Besides, that may be the only legal way we can keep him here.” Without further question, Sabé followed her orders. For the next two hours, they searched several databases, as well as most of the legal archives of the Naboo. During that time, the other handmaidens Eirtaé, Rabé, Saché and Yané became curious when neither Amidala nor Sabé came to bed. Once they discovered them, the other handmaidens were immediately put to work. After several pots of caf later, the six young ladies moved all the collected data from their terminals to several datapads, which they pilled upon a large table at the center of the room. The blonde haired Eirtaé, the Queen’s main advisor for legal and political matters was the first ready to share her findings. “Your highness, the laws involving the Jedi and children are extremely vague. According to the Republic statutes, once a child is taken into the Jedi Temple, the Council gains sole guardianship. And if the child was unable to conform to the Order’s standards, they would subsequently be sent back to their home planet.” “Under what situations is the child returned?” Amidala asked, hoping that there would be something applicable to Anakin’s circumstance. Eirtaé scanned her datapad, then shook her head. “Again, there’s nothing specific. They just make the blanket statement of lack of Jedi conformity. I’m afraid that’s all I could find on the subject, your Majesty.” Unnerved, Padmé was about to rub the back of her aching neck when she felt the string of the japor snippet pendent. She smiled inwardly as her fingers traced the intricate pattern on the carving. For whatever reason, this brought her a sense of comfort, albeit a brief one. The young Queen exhaled forcefully in frustration. “That was what I was afraid of.” Eirtaé then smirked at the Queen. “However, your Majesty, there is nothing governing what would happen before they were granted guardianship of the child, meaning….” Padmé sat up as she interrupted, “Meaning…Since Anakin was never accepted for training, they have no clear claim on him.” “Nor could they forcibly take him from Naboo.” Sabé added. “No, I don’t believe they could, your highness.” Eirtaé confirmed. “Do you really think that they won’t train him, your Majesty?” asked the normally quiet Rabé. The young Queen looked to Sabé as they shared a knowing glance before returning her gaze towards the brunette handmaiden. She nervously clenched her datapad as she said, “According to Master Kenobi, even as of early this evening, the Jedi are refusing to train him.” Yané folded her arms in defiance. “I cannot believe that! He destroyed that droid control ship without ever flying a starfighter before…That was amazing!” Padmé nodded. “That it was.” The normally rambunctious brown haired handmaiden Saché was uncharacteristically reflective during the discussion. “We owe him our very lives for what he did.” The others sat nodding in quiet affirmation, as Sabé looked down at her chronowatch. “It is near the second morning bell, your highness. With the celebration and your meetings tomorrow, I suggest that we all turn in for the night.” Exhausted, the young Queen nodded as she dismissed her attendants. After the others left, Sabé handed her a datapad. “Here is all the information you requested about the adoption procedures. It’s quite extensive.” Padmé smiled in thanks as she quickly reviewed the datapad. She then looked up to see her chief handmaiden still standing in the doorway. “Something on your mind?” She asked, remaining focused on her reading. Sabé slowly approached her. “May I speak candidly, Mé?” Whenever her friend used Padmé’s family nickname, she knew it was always serious and non-official. The Queen immediately placed her datapad down on the table, giving Sabé her undivided attention. “Why are you going through all this trouble for a boy you hardly even know?” Padmé nearly scoffed as she recalled using those same words with Master Qui-Gon on Tatooine. It angered her further that her best friend, unknowingly made the same assessment. Are we that selfish? With conviction, the young Queen retorted, “We are all he has, especially if the Jedi choose to abandon him.” The handmaiden shook her head. “He still has his mother who I’m sure would want him back home.” The young Queen suddenly stood up. Amidala, who was beyond exhausted turned to Sabé in frustration. “And then what? He goes home and becomes a slave again. How cruel would that be, Sabé? After everything he has done for our people; to be rejected first by the Jedi, then us.” She then gazed downward as her voice softened. “That is something I cannot do.” While Sabé agreed with the crux of her argument, there were other considerations. “So you’ll adopt him and then what? You’re barely fourteen Mé and the Queen on top of that. I hate to remind you, but the Trade Federation did a pretty good job at wreaking the planet. You won’t exactly have time to be a mother.” The Queen stared at her friend bitterly as she pushed aside her friend’s argument. “I don’t want to be his mother, Sabé. I don’t feel that way about him.” “Then how do you feel?” Sabé asked insistently, yet curious how her friend would answer. Padmé stood silent, mulling over her feelings. “Protective…As if we’ve known each other all our lives.” She paused momentarily and then looked at her handmaiden; her temper now softened to a quiet roar. “He’s my friend, Sabé…I know it sounds crazy, but there is something that draws me to him, almost as if this was meant to happen.” With a slight smirk, the chief handmaiden walked over to place a hand of comfort on her Queen’s arm. “For as long as I’ve known you, you have always cared more for others than yourself; putting their needs ahead of your own. And when you call somebody a friend, they are your friend for life.” Padmé smiled weakly at Sabé who continued, “I am one of the privileged few to be called that. If you say Anakin is your friend, I know you will do anything for him, and so will I.” The young Queen nodded in thanks to her handmaiden. “Well, enough fretting for one night; tomorrow will be another long day.” -----signature----- "This above all, to thine own self be true." Polonius, Hamlet, Act I, Scene III For the Love of the Queen: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/24151408/p1/?0 The Naboo Chronicles: http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/18644312/?162
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Jaina-Solo-1 Registered: Jan '05	Date Posted: 3/7/05 8:40am Subject: RE: The Naboo Chronicles-Post TPM AU (Anakin, Padme, Obi-Wan & More) Chp 1 (part II) up!
	This is very interesting! Please continue soon! -----signature----- ¸.,·»Jaina-Solo-1«·,.¸
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JediMasterRev Registered: Dec '04	Date Posted: 3/7/05 10:59am Subject: RE: The Naboo Chronicles-Post TPM AU (Anakin, Padme, Obi-Wan & More) Chp 1 (part II) up! - Date Edited: 12/26/05 11:35pm (2 edits total) Edited By: JediMasterRev
	Thanks Jaina for checking my story out and to all the lurkers, don't be bashful. Would love to hear from ya. Now here is the next part. Chapter 2 (part I): Decisions Young Anakin felt nervous. As Amidala and her handmaidens were organizing the parade, he made his way towards the rear of the large group. Shifting about in place, he eyed the gathering of Jedi with unease. The recently freed slave had always known when others harbored negative feelings towards him. It had saved him on numerous occasions, as well as his former owner. Anakin supposed this knack was the Force guiding him and what it said was that these ‘heroes’ feared him somehow. The celebratory parade was a thing of wonder. The cheerful cries of thousands of freed Nubians resonated throughout the Theed Palace complex. Meanwhile, confetti fluttered in the breeze and onto the shoulders of all in attendance. The entire planet, both Naboo and Gungan were united in celebration, now that the threat to their peace had been removed. This world was so much different than where Anakin had been raised. If only his mother could see this wonderful place. The boy’s heart ached as he thought about her, still back in that Force forsaken desert. If he was sent back, perhaps he could strike a deal with Watto to help him obtain a new racer. Then he could enter the Galactic podracing circuit and earn the credits needed to buy his mother’s freedom. It all was perfect, too perfect when he thought about it. In reality, if he was to go back to Watto, he’d be fortunate to live through the encounter. Anakin’s thoughts drifted back to his friend, the Queen. As much as he cared for Padmé, trusting anyone other than his mother was something that he rarely did. However, besides being captivated with her beauty, something about her was comforting. It was almost like coming home. Padmé was the kindest person he had ever encountered, next to his mother. During their recent adventure, she had taken it upon herself to make sure he didn’t feel so alone. Then, once he learned that she was Amidala, her small gestures had meant all that much more. Since the moment she walked into his life, his heart desperately encouraged him to trust her. Despite her position and their friendship, how could she possibly oppose the Jedi? They were all powerful and if they wanted him back on Tatooine, nobody could oppose them. As much as he wanted to revel in the moment, to be celebrated as a hero, these thoughts refused him the joy he desperately sought. Anakin was near the point of despair when he caught the radiant smile of the angel Queen gleaming at him. When he offered his lopsided grin, Amidala’s smile grew, causing his mood to lift. A new thought then entered his consciousness, causing him to squash the mounting trepidation that was building in his heart.Trusting her is definitely worth the risk. That moment’s acceptance would irrevocably change Anakin’s life. ********* After the parade, Eirtaé and Yané guided Anakin back into the Queen’s throne room. It was a spacious area with white marbled floors and several bay windows overlooking the palace’s grand entrance. In front of the windows was a large alabaster throne with a rectangular desk in front. Opposite the throne were several smaller seats, belonging to the Queen’s chief officials. To the far left hand side, several rows of wooden chairs were placed for key members of Naboo’s Parliament. In the center of the room was a large holoprojector that displayed life sized holographic images. As Anakin looked around the room in awe, Eirtaé joined him. “Her majesty requests you take the seat at her right side.” The young boy proffered a tense smile. “Thank you, Eirtaé.” The handmaiden nodded as both she and Yané departed for the antechamber. Now alone, Anakin could not sit still for more than a minute. He then stood up so he could stare out the window. He was captivated at Theed’s ornate architecture when a melodic voice called out from behind. “It’s quite breathtaking, isn’t it?” The young boy jumped as he twisted around to see Queen Amidala standing a few feet behind him. She was wearing the red robes that she wore in the Senate chambers on Coruscant. She chuckled when she saw him blush. “I didn’t mean to startle you, Ani.” He smirked as he replied, “You didn’t, your highness. I was thinking how totally wizard all the buildings are.” The young monarch proudly beamed as she gazed outside. A moment later, Sabé entered the throne room to inform them that the Jedi were outside waiting. Amidala nodded and as she and Anakin were taking their places, she threw a quick smile to the boy. “Everything’s going to work out, Ani. Trust me.” He winked at her as he responded, “I trust you, angel.” Once seated, Jedi Masters Yoda and Windu followed by recently knighted Obi-Wan Kenobi entered the room and politely bowed before the Queen. She acknowledged them silently, while motioning for them to sit down. “Thank you Master Jedi for agreeing to meet with me.” Amidala announced warmly. Mace Windu stoically answered, “It is our pleasure to answer your Majesty’s summons.” The Queen inwardly winced at his apparent indifference. “I wish I could say though that this meeting was held under better circumstances; however, such is the way of things.” “What is it that you wish to discuss, your Majesty?” asked the diminutive Master Yoda. Before the Queen spoke, she took a deep breath to steady herself. “It has come to my attention that you are not taking Anakin back to Coruscant to be trained as a Jedi.” The two Jedi Masters stared at each other blankly before Master Windu answered, “The Council has decided that while incredibly gifted, Anakin is too old and emotionally attached to become a Jedi.” “Surely your graces can see that Anakin is special and deserves to be trained,” pleaded the Queen. “While the boy is talented, training him would be an unwarranted risk,” cautioned Windu. “Too much anger and fear, cloud his destiny they do.” added Master Yoda. Amidala was quickly becoming enraged, but remained outwardly placid as she continued to seek a diplomatic solution. “Certainly this is all the more reason to train him. Help him learn to control those feelings so they could never become destructive.” In an attempt to defuse the escalating situation, Obi-Wan addressed his Masters. “I swore to Qui-Gon that I would train Anakin; with or without the Council’s permission if I had to.” Master Windu looked at him with regret, thinking about how disappointed his lost friend would be with their decision. “It is unfortunate that you made a promise that you knew in your heart you couldn’t possibly keep.” “Expelled from the Order, you would be, Obi-Wan. Dishonor your fallen Master’s memory, you would,” said Yoda coldly. Queen Amidala saw the young Jedi lose his resolve as his grief overshadowed his convictions. Under any other circumstance, she would have pitied him. However, with Anakin’s life on the line, the young monarch would not allow her sympathies to cloud her perceptions. “While I cannot begin to understand your ways, I find it hard to believe that such an enlightened group cannot see beyond a rulebook when the right decision is so much more rewarding,” the Queen remarked, in an attempt to approach the problem from another direction. Yoda closed his eyes to focus his vision into the Force. He then opened them, looking straight at Amidala. “Betray you; your thoughts do, your highness. Much love and compassion for the boy in you, I sense.” Yoda continued “Unobjective and unwarranted your arguments are; our own council we will take in who we will or will not accept for training. Untrained, Anakin Skywalker shall remain.” As if slapped in the face, the Queen jolted back in her throne. Nobody, in her few years of political service, had ever been so blunt. Now infuriated, Amidala’s voice lowered as she asked sardonically, “Am I to take it then that you will be returning Anakin to Tatooine?” Master Windu cleared his throat in an attempt to shake off the strong emotions the Queen was releasing into the Force. “The boy must be returned to his mother. It is our way and responsibility, since he will not be trained” “The Jedi way is to return an initiate to his home. This does not apply to somebody who was never accepted for training in the first place.” Amidala pointed out. The dark skinned Jedi looked at Master Yoda who reluctantly nodded in agreement. He then reiterated, “Nevertheless, the boy’s mother is on Tatooine and that is where he belongs.” “So you’ll just take him back to where the Hutts are the law and he’ll most likely become a slave again? How convenient,” she said bitterly, while strangling the ends of her armrest. “Your highness, our Code tells us…” Mace began, but with her patience now gone, the fourteen year old ruler of Naboo stood up from her throne; she finally had heard enough. “Damn you, Jedi. Damn you and your imperturbable Jedi Code! Anakin’s just a boy who you condemn for simply not being born in the right place. Some enlightened Order.” The Jedi looked at each other dumbfounded during the Queen’s tirade. “Since you obviously care for nothing, except maintaining the sanctity of your precious Code, I’m going to give you some rules. I want you and all the members of your Order off of Naboo immediately. Your presence here is no longer required.” As the three Jedi stood up, Amidala smirked in satisfaction as she spotted the look of pure astonishment coming from Anakin. True to his word, he had remained quiet throughout the confrontation, trusting Padmé take care of everything. “Also, you will not take Anakin with you. Under Naboo law, he is temporarily a ward of the state and I am placing him under my protective custody.” As the Jedi were about to protest, she added, “If you do try to take him, I will order your immediate arrest for violating our sovereignty under Republic law. Do I make myself clear?” Yoda looked at her wryly. “Unusual your actions are, your highness. To take the boy, well within our rights, it is.” An evil grin eclipsed the face of the girl Queen. “Be my guest, Master Jedi. In fact, Supreme Chancellor Palpatine is in my antechamber and I am sure he would be interested in learning that the leading members of the Jedi Order wish to abduct a ward of Naboo, which coincidentally, is his home planet.” The diminutive Yoda glimpsed the nodding approval of Mace Windu. The two Masters then bowed before the Queen. “Then with your permission, your highness, we will take our leave.” After a moment’s hesitation and while staring at the very awestruck Anakin, he then remarked, “We leave the fate of young Skywalker in your majesty’s capable hands.” Coldly, Amidala stared in reply. Meanwhile, Master Windu faced Anakin. “May the Force be with you young one.” “And with you, sir,” the boy replied, amazed to see a Jedi backing down. Before Masters Yoda and Windu left, Obi-Wan stood before the Queen. “Your highness, may I remain a moment?” She nodded solemnly as the two other Masters left the throne room. Anakin lingered in his seat, shocked by the ferocity of the Queen. Whatever lingering doubts he had about her, disappeared; never to return. “I must apologize for my outburst, Master Jedi. I fail to see how an Order, so dedicated to service could condemn a soul to slavery.” “No need for apologies, your highness” said Obi Wan. “I feel responsible for failing my Master.” Gathering his thoughts, he added, “Even though I was at first apprehensive about Anakin, I see now that he has tremendous potential and we should not let fear dictate our actions.” “You had no authority over this matter and I appreciate all that you tried to do.” Amidala said, unable to mask her disappointment. “If only I could have done more...” Obi-Wan replied with regret, but stopped in mid-sentence as he felt Anakin inadvertently reach out to him through the Force. The young Jedi had always been a proponent of supporting the Council’s rulings, despite his personal views. However, on numerous occasions, Qui-Gon risked his own expulsion from the Jedi in order to save him from ill-advised, youthful mistakes. This situation involving Anakin was wrong. As he felt the boy reaching out, he also sensed the Force urging him to do the right thing. Obi-Wan motioned for Anakin to join him. The two looked at each other silently, while the boy shifted his weight from foot to foot, waiting for the Jedi to speak. “I know I am not allowed to train you, Anakin.” The young boy looked down, not noticing the sly grin eclipsing the face of the young Jedi. “However, I made a promise to my Master; one I intend on keeping.” Obi-Wan flashed a smile at the unsuspecting Queen before returning his gaze at the boy. He then walked behind young Skywalker and in a display similar to what Qui-Gon had done only days prior, he announced, “I take Anakin Skywalker as my unofficial Padawan learner as witnessed by her majesty Queen Amidala.” “I accept, Master Obi-Wan!” The boy’s face radiated as he saw the approving smile from Padmé. Obi-Wan then reached into his tunic and pulled out Qui-Gon’s black handled lightsaber. He then knelt down to look Anakin in the eye. “I know my Master would want you to have this.” The boy’s face was mixed with pride and sadness as he felt the cold metal of the weapon. How he wished the Master was here so none of this had to happen. Sensing Anakin’s jumble of emotions, Obi-Wan placed a hand of support on his shoulder. “Remember, a Jedi’s strength flows through the Force and it is never to be used with hate or anger. You must always be mindful of those feelings for they lead to the dark side.” Anakin shyly replied, “I will do as you say, Master.” He then clipped his new lightsaber onto his utility belt while standing proudly. “I know you will Anakin and one day you will prove the Council wrong.” Obi-Wan said hopeful. During this impromptu lesson, Amidala had walked down from her throne to join them. She flashed a warm smile at Obi-Wan as she gave him her sincerest thanks. “I must get back to the other Jedi as I am sure they are becoming suspicious.” Obi-Wan observed, causing both Amidala and Anakin to smirk full of mischief. “As soon as I return to Coruscant, I will formally request a transfer to the Jedi training facility on Corellia, which is less than a parsec from Naboo.” “Will I see you often, Master?” Anakin asked with hope. “While I’ll have the freedom to come to Naboo every other month or so, it will be up to you to maintain your training.” Meanwhile, your majesty, it will be critical for Anakin’s long term needs to be addressed.” The young Queen nodded as she offered a quick wink at the boy. “I’m currently working on ensuring that Anakin can stay on Naboo permanently.” “Really?” Anakin cried out with excitement. A soft smile crossed the white painted face of the Nubian monarch as she noted her little friend’s elation. However, her mood sobered as she knelt down to grab both of his hands. “I know how much you must miss your mother and if it was in my immediate power, I would bring her here in a heartbeat. However, with all that has happened to Naboo, we lack the resources to free her.” The young boy listened intently as Amidala leaned closer to him. “But I promise you, just as soon as possible, we will return to Tatooine so we gain her freedom.” Staring at her in complete wonderment, the jittery boy uttered, “I don’t know what to say, your highness.” Anakin momentarily scanned the compassionate face of the girl Queen. “Why are you doing all this? I am just a slave.” “Because I am your angel, as well as your friend.” Without warning, he jumped into her arms and they hugged until Obi-Wan cleared his throat to gain their attention. Chuckling, the two youngsters broke away. “With your permission, your majesty, I will take my leave.” He politely bowed and then reached into his utility belt to reveal a tiny datachip, which he gave to Anakin. “This will provide you with the basics of lightsaber wielding, meditation and the customs of the Jedi. It also contains a private scrambler code that you can use to get into contact with me.” Awestruck at the brazen disregard of the Order’s rules, the young Queen gave the Jedi a friendly embrace. “Thank you, Master Obi-Wan for saving the people of Naboo, as well as our opinion of the Jedi Order. I pray your wisdom will someday be recognized and will enlighten the rest of the Jedi.” Throwing him a large smile she added, “You will always be most welcomed on Naboo.” Obi-Wan half-bowed in thanks, then he bent down to hug Anakin. “Begin your reading as soon as possible. I hope to return soon so we can start your initial training.” Anakin bowed his head. “Yes Master. I look forward to it.” ************ In a far corner of the throne room, away from the sight of its occupants stood two figures. One was the illuminated image of Qui-Gon Jinn, while his companion was in the form of a young woman. She radiated brilliance and was beaming with joy at the scene before her. As defiant as ever, the spirit of Qui-Gon folded his arms: “I still don’t understand what you think you are doing?” The woman smirked at him, amused at his naivety. “It is not required for you to understand, Master Jinn.” “Why did you make the Jedi so obstinate? Surely Anakin would have been better off trained by Obi-Wan with the approval of the Council.” “Oh really?” She responded as if she already knew the answer to that observation. Cautiously, the former Jedi Master withdrew as he returned his gaze towards Anakin. “While it would have been difficult for him to adapt to Temple life since he is older, I think he still would have made the adjustment. Plus, the structure would have shaped him into a great Jedi.” “Your insight was correct when you recognized Anakin as the Chosen One and the Jedi Order will be instrumental to his destiny, one day.” As Qui-Gon was about to further question her, she raised her hand to stop him. “However, the task of training the Chosen One to hear my voice is too great a responsibility for them to assume alone.” “There are others besides Obi-Wan who can teach him?” Qui-Gon asked curiously. Smirking, the woman replied, “Many others, but one in particular. However, everything in its due time. For now, the Chosen One will be safe with his angel.” “What about the Dark Lord? You know you are placing them in dangerous proximity to him.” The spirit of the Jedi Master looked at her with great concern, but sighed in defeat as she continued watching Anakin and Padmé. “I just wish I understood…” She chuckled as she turned to face the ethereal Jedi. “It really isn’t that difficult. I will never abandon them, either of them. And that’s what is important.” The woman then placed a hand of comfort on his shoulder. “Come. It is time for you to return with me. There is much for you to learn.” The former Master smiled happily as they disappeared into eternity. ****************** -----signature----- "This above all, to thine own self be true." Polonius, Hamlet, Act I, Scene III For the Love of the Queen: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/24151408/p1/?0 The Naboo Chronicles: http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/18644312/?162
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Alethia Registered: Feb '05	Date Posted: 3/7/05 11:42am Subject: RE: The Naboo Chronicles-Post TPM AU (Anakin, Padme, Obi-Wan & More) Chp 2 (part I) up!
	Ha! So Obi-Wan's going to train Anakin anyway. Very glad that he decided to do that. Who knows what would happen if Anakin never received any training at all. And Anakin gets to stay with Padme, thank goodness. I really liked the way Padme stood up to the COuncil. They needed it and it really was in character for her. And who's that woman with Qui Gon? I liked how you wrote that scene too, by the way. All in all, I really liked the chapter and I'm glad you updated. Great job. -----signature----- Jen, High Scholar and Ponderer of all Things Verily Blue, and Official caller of Suz, Crusader of Heretics and Knight of the Blue 1000 Now sacrificing Movie Garfield
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Jek_Windu Registered: Jan '03	Date Posted: 3/7/05 11:49am Subject: RE: The Naboo Chronicles-Post TPM AU (Anakin, Padme, Obi-Wan & More) Chp 2 (part I) up!
	Wow, this is pretty good. I really want to see what happens. PMASAP! -----signature----- Tryanids: You don't have enough bullets! Imperial Guard: YES WE DO! R.I.P. Trini
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Jaina-Solo-1 Registered: Jan '05	Date Posted: 3/7/05 12:48pm Subject: RE: The Naboo Chronicles-Post TPM AU (Anakin, Padme, Obi-Wan & More) Chp 2 (part I) up!
	Yayness! Awesome chapter! -----signature----- ¸.,·»Jaina-Solo-1«·,.¸
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JediMasterRev Registered: Dec '04	Date Posted: 3/8/05 7:14pm Subject: RE: The Naboo Chronicles-Post TPM AU (Anakin, Padme, Obi-Wan & More) Chp 2 (part I) up!
	Hi everybody. Thanks again for tuning in to the story. Here's a short post for ya! Alethia And who's that woman with Qui- Gon? Who is that, indeed? All I can say for now is that we shall see "her" again towards the end of the story. hint hint I'm glad you have been enjoying. Jek_Windu Happy to know you like. Your wish is my command . Jaina-Solo-1 Glad you liked. Here's more Chapter 2 (Part II) When he reached the antechamber, Obi-Wan was greeted by an anxious Sabé. The two gazed upon each other affectionately until the doors to the throne room shut behind him. At that moment, the slender young woman threw herself into his arms to give him an appreciative kiss. As they pulled away she smiled, with a hint of mischief in her eyes. “I knew you would do the right thing all along.” “Were you listening the entire time?” The Jedi asked, crossing his arms with a look of mock disgust. Feigning innocence, Sabé answered, “It is amazing how sound carries in this old Palace, isn’t it.” “Quite amazing indeed,” Obi-Wan observed amused. “So, will I be seeing you soon, Master Kenobi?” Sabé asked, with slightly teasing tone in her voice. “Quite possibly, Sabé Orllize. Stranger things have occurred.” He reached over to give her a chaste kiss on the check. “Until then, may the Force be with you.” “And with you, my friend.” She replied, trying to hide her sadness. They embraced again before the young Jedi Knight left to board his transport. The young handmaiden sighed as she hoped that the friendship that they had forged during their little adventure would one day bring them back together. Meanwhile, back in the throne room, an excited but obviously tired young boy began to yawn. Sensing his fatigue and knowing fully well that her little friend would not leave her presence on his own accord, Amidala asked, “Are you tired, Ani?” He bobbed his head up and down in response, attempting to keep his eyes open. “You’ve had a busy day. Why don’t you go to your room and relax?” She proposed. “After my commitments are complete for the day, we can dine together.” The young boy politely bowed. “It would be a pleasure, your majesty. Before Anakin could exit, Saché entered the throne room. “I apologize for the interruption, your majesty.” “What is it?” Amidala asked. “Chancellor Palpatine and Governor Bibble are waiting to speak with you” stated Saché. The young monarch refocused her attention upon her little friend, giving him a slight smile. “Until dinner then, Ani?” “Of course, your highness.” Quickly, he left the room, only pausing momentarily to bow before the Supreme Chancellor and the Governor. Amidala’s face immediately returned to the calm, stoic persona of the Queen upon reaching her throne. The two elder gentlemen bowed as she motioned for them to stand before her. “What can I do for you, Chancellor?” Palpatine smiled evilly at the mention of his new title. “I know of the turmoil left behind by the Trade Federation; however, I wanted to remind your Majesty that my position as Senator needs to be filled until an election can be called.” The Queen nodded knowingly at his statement. “I appreciate you bringing this to my attention, Chancellor. Unfortunately, with the damage done to our infrastructure, it will be some time before I can call a general election.” “Might I suggest that your highness appoint somebody reputable for the interim?” Amidala smirked as she asked amusedly, “Who do you have in mind, Chancellor?” Sio Bibble interrupted. “Believe me, your majesty; I had nothing to do with this.” “Even if Palpatine hadn’t interceded, I couldn’t think of anybody else I would trust in the Senate for the interim; that is, if you are willing to serve Governor?” asked the Queen. The elder statesman smirked. “I am willing to serve the crown in any capacity, your highness.” “Very well Sio. I’ll officially appoint you interim Senator when we reconvene the Royal Court in the next several days.” He bowed as he thanked the young ruler. A moment of uncomfortable silence filled the room before Chancellor Palpatine broke it. “Is it my understanding that the Jedi have refused to train young Skywalker?” “If afraid it is.” Amidala replied sadly. “With your permission, of course, I could speak with the Jedi Council on his behalf” The young monarch looked thoughtful as she contemplated his offer. Although the office of the Supreme Chancellor did carry significant weight with the Jedi, something told her that it would be unwise to accept his request. “While I would appreciate the effort Chancellor, I’m afraid nobody could change their minds.” Governor Bibble spat, “What a terrible way to treat a hero of the Naboo. In just two days, stories of his heroism have spread throughout our people, giving them much needed hope.” The Supreme Chancellor smirked wickedly while he listened. “Indeed, young Skywalker’s actions do merit recognition.” Curiously, Amidala asked, “What do you have in mind?” The two elder gentlemen glanced at each other as Governor Bibble asked, “What do you remember of the Order of the High Protectors, your majesty?” Amidala furrowed her brow as she recalled an old history lesson from her days at the academy. “I believe they were once a group of nobles charged by the old monarchy to serve and defend the throne. But once Naboo became a democracy, it became a title of honor that very few people have ever achieved” That is correct, your highness; twenty to be exact in almost a thousand years.” Bibble said. “What are the requirements in naming a person a High Protector?” Amidala questioned, knowing they already had this in mind. “The recipient must exhibit extraordinary valor in the defense of the crown and people of Naboo. He or she would have to be recommended by two members of the Royal Court and approved by the monarch.” Governor Bibble stated. Unconsciously, Amidala reached for the pendent of Japor snippet that hung from around her neck. “I take then that you both are recommending Anakin for this honor?” Chancellor Palpatine bowed his head. “With all due respect, your highness, I think the boy more than deserves it. Plus, it would be a great to lift the spirits of our people. The deeds of many of the High Protector Knights are part of legend.” Sio interrupted, “It would be much more than just a simple award. While it would grant young Skywalker automatic citizenship, tradition dictates that the High Protector be given a place in the Royal Court to act as an advisor to the monarch.” Palpatine frowned. “But young Skywalker is just a boy.” “Only for the moment, your Excellency,” stated the Queen smirking. “However, I do seem to recall a tribute that was established by one of my predecessors that not even I can access; only the High Protector.” “That is correct, your Majesty.” Governor Bibble then added “However, unlike before, I don’t recall this honor ever being bestowed on a minor child before.” “Then we are in uncharted territory,” the Queen said while folding her hands together. Palpatine smirked as he looked at Amidala. “Might I suggest that your highness appoint somebody as overseer of the tribute as I am sure it is quite considerable” Sio Bibble nodded in agreement. “There hasn’t been a High Protector in nearly ninety years, so the fund should be very substantial.” Palpatine was about to give his additional thoughts when the Queen held her hand out, giving him pause. “I think for the moment, we should first see if young Anakin wishes to stay with us. Once we’ve settled that, I will personally take care of the details.” Queen Amidala then motioned for Rabé to hand her a datapad. “I will of course approve of your nomination and we will organize a formal state dinner in the next few days to award Anakin this honor.” She said while writing in her orders to make it official. “As you wish, your Majesty.” The two men respectfully bowed and left the throne room. As soon as they were alone, all of Amidala’s handmaidens gathered about her. “That is an amazing honor.” Eirtaé observed. Both Amidala and Sabé shared a knowing smile. “This changes a few things, don’t you think, your highness.” The Queen smiled briefly as her mind was sorting through all that just transpired. Eirtaé then grinned mischievously, “Of course you know, your highness, it is tradition for the Queen to give the recipient a gift.” Amidala folded her arms as she thought what would be befitting for a boy who literally saved her and her world. She snapped her fingers as the answer appeared in her mind. However, she kept it to herself as she wanted it to be a surprise. For the meantime, there was still a major issue that needed to be addressed. Quickly she stood up. “My ladies, let us retire so I can get out of these robes. I have important things to take care of.” The handmaidens grinned as they followed their Queen and friend back to her chambers. -----signature----- "This above all, to thine own self be true." Polonius, Hamlet, Act I, Scene III For the Love of the Queen: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/24151408/p1/?0 The Naboo Chronicles: http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/18644312/?162
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Gina Registered: Jun '03	Date Posted: 3/8/05 9:16pm Subject: RE: The Naboo Chronicles-Post TPM AU (Anakin, Padme, Obi-Wan & More) Chp 2 (part II) 3/8/05
	This is an excellent fic. I look forward to reading more. -----signature----- A long time ago in a house far away, there was a mother who was strong in the ways of the Force. She "forced" her sons to clean their room, she "forced" her sons to behave. - Part of a story written by my 9 yr. old sons I found while cleaning their desks
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Vivid_Scripts Registered: Jan '04	Date Posted: 3/8/05 10:54pm Subject: RE: The Naboo Chronicles-Post TPM AU (Anakin, Padme, Obi-Wan & More) Chp 2 (part II) 3/8/05
	intresting, very intresting. I wonder what it will be like for Anakin to grow up around Padme, and how anakin will be at age 16. High Protector sounds like a formidable title for Anakin. I wonder if he will ever have to protect Naboo... update soon? -----signature----- "trickbind"
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Marmida Registered: Nov '04	Date Posted: 3/9/05 5:04am Subject: RE: The Naboo Chronicles-Post TPM AU (Anakin, Padme, Obi-Wan & More) Chp 2 (part II) 3/8/05
	Wau! This is getting better all the time. Sabé and Obi together here also. Happy me! And Ani lives near Padmé, That´s very interesting. More, please. Marmida -----signature----- Member of the official Obi-Wan Kenobi Fan Club. And proud of it! Obi-Wanskubansku on miun lemppari warssissa! Fic under work: Covered: Not gonna finish it... Fan art: Removed...
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pokey1984 Registered: May '04	Date Posted: 3/9/05 8:57pm Subject: RE: The Naboo Chronicles-Post TPM AU (Anakin, Padme, Obi-Wan & More) Chp 2 (part II) 3/8/05
	Sneaky, you didn't think I'd find this here did you? Well I did! :P Seriously, though, this is one tickled Beta, I love the way you portray the characters in this story and I don't think I've ever seen a fic where Ani stayed on Naboo before. I'm enjoying all the Ani/Padmé interaction and It's nice to see Obi-Wan grow a backbone. I love this fic and I can't wait to read the next chapter. Great Job! -ZMD -----signature----- Another day, another thought. -ZMD Burden of Choice - An Obi-Wan and Anakin story http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/18999319/?0
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AJ_Nejedi Registered: Feb '05	Date Posted: 3/10/05 12:25pm Subject: RE: The Naboo Chronicles-Post TPM AU (Anakin, Padme, Obi-Wan & More) Chp 2 (part II) 3/8/05
	I am very interested to see where this is going. I like the story so far and i hope that it keeps the momentum going that it has already built. I love the interactions, and i know that old Palps has to have something up his sleeve for this. Interesting twist, can't wait to read more!!!
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JediMasterRev Registered: Dec '04	Date Posted: 3/10/05 1:43pm Subject: RE: The Naboo Chronicles-Post TPM AU (Anakin, Padme, Obi-Wan & More) Chp 2 (part II) 3/8/05 - Date Edited: 9/1/05 7:24am (1 edits total) Edited By: JediMasterRev
	Wow. Thanks guys for all the comments. Was beginning to worry that nobody was out there reading. But since you are, I am updating with a short post of the next chapter. Promise to update soon after with the remainder. Gina Glad to read that you are enjoying this. Vivid_Scripts I wonder what it will be like for Anakin to grow up around Padme Keep on reading to find out. However, I can say that both their lives will never be the same. I wonder if he will ever have to protect Naboo He's already done it once, so who knows? . Happy that you are liking. Stay tuned for more. Marmida Sabé and Obi together here also. Happy me! They're not quite together, but there are major possibilities here. . Glad that you find this interesting. Pokey1984 Sneaky, you didn't think I'd find this here did you? I just like keeping you on your toes . You definitely flatter me, which of course you can always send more of it this way. Thanks again for all your help. AJ_Nejedi I'm excited to know that you are enjoying the story. About to throw some curveballs, so be ready . Without further ado.... Chapter 3 (Part I): The Bonds of Friendship The blond haired boy was still awestruck at what he experienced only minutes ago. Upon reaching his quarters he unceremoniously kicked off his shoes and jumped into the large, comfortable bed. As he stared up at the ceiling reflecting, he thought about how the petite angel Queen stood toe to toe with the Jedi and all for him. Nobody had ever stood up for him before. Not Watto, Kitster or even his own mother. With exhaustion taking a hold, Anakin fell into a deep sleep as the Force whispered into his ear. Feeling the heat of the sun, Anakin opened his eyes to find himself in the middle of a desert. Uncertain where he was, the boy walked for hours. When the desert finally ended, he entered a beautiful meadow, which stretched beyond his sight. A sudden sense of apprehension filled him when his eyes focused upon a body lying in the midst of a blooming field. He cautiously approached when he saw that it was the body of a once beautiful young girl. She lay motionless with her eyes fixed blankly towards the sky. The world mourned her death for not a sound could be heard. Even the brilliant wildflowers withered because of her loss. To his horror, Anakin realized the dead form was Padmé. The light that normally resided in her eyes was gone. Her soft features were ashen with the hand of death. A frigid chill ensnared his soul and terror descended upon him in the form of a grinning hooded figure. With his heart splitting in two, Anakin screamed out in bitter horror… As the young Queen was reviewing the day’s events, something compelled her to check on Anakin. Suddenly, an ominous feeling overwhelmed her. Now breaking into a brisk walk, she rushed towards Anakin’s room; both Sabé and Eirtaé saw her urgency and followed quickly behind her. “Ani, Ani, what’s wrong?” Padmé questioned, rushing to his side. Trembling, Anakin buried himself against her chest. As he pulled her closer to convince himself that she was real, he sobbed, “I wasn’t strong enough to save you.” Deeply concerned, Padmé held him snugly until he calmed down. After a few moments of gentle rocking, Anakin finally relaxed. “I cannot ever lose you,” he said as he angrily wiped at his falling tears. “You are my everything.” Never seeing him so distraught, but also sensing a passion in his voice not associated with a ten year old boy, Padmé felt herself shake. Upon finding her voice she queried, “Do you want to talk about it?” “I dreamt that somebody hurt you and I wasn’t in time….” Anakin recalled, trying to control his breathing. The young Queen looked up at Sabé and the others as they shared in a moment of silent concern. With all that happened with the occupation, plus Anakin’s unusual affinity with the Force, they were understandably edgy. Trying to ease Anakin’s fears, Padmé smiled as she squeezed both of his shoulders affectionately. “The Trade Federation is gone, Ani. You helped make Naboo free again.” He smiled bravely, but the image of her lifeless body was burned into his memory. Although he desperately wanted to pass it off as just a bad dream, Anakin knew that it was much more than that. He had nightmares like this before and they always had an ominous way of coming true. After taking a few more moments to calm down, the young boy suddenly realized that the Queen of Naboo was kneeling on the floor consoling him, surrounded now by Sabé, Eirtaé, Yané, Saché and Rabé; a wave of embarrassment flushed through him as his face blazed beet red. Sensing his discomfort, Amidala dismissed the handmaidens, leaving the two alone. “Are you sure you are alright?” The blue eyed boy swallowed hard while nodding in affirmation. “I’ll be alright as long as you promise me that you’ll be careful.” Sensing his earnestness, Padmé gave him a smile. “I promise,” she said as she thought that he was probably overreacting. If she survived storming her own palace, surely there was no further danger. Finding these thoughts uncomfortable, she abruptly changed topics. “Are you getting hungry, Ani?” Being a typical boy that never passed on food, Anakin eagerly nodded. Padmé smirked. “Meet me in my private dinning room in thirty minutes.” The boy bowed his head respectfully as Amidala left his room so he could prepare for last meal. ************************* -----signature----- "This above all, to thine own self be true." Polonius, Hamlet, Act I, Scene III For the Love of the Queen: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/24151408/p1/?0 The Naboo Chronicles: http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/18644312/?162
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