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Dev_Binks Registered: Aug '03	Date Posted: 4/30/05 12:27pm Subject: Anakin & Anakin Version 2.0 Returning once I get a beta - Date Edited: 6/9/06 1:16pm (12 edits total) Edited By: Dev_Binks
	I know many of yall will be happy to see this has returned. Title: Anakin & Anakin Version 2.0 Characters: Anakin Solo, Anakin Skywalker, Tahiri Veila Summary: Anakin Solo and Tahiri Veila travel back in time to a couple years after TPM. Now I do hope yall enjoy it. Anakin waited patiently for Tahiri. It took a Jedi’s patience, as he had been standing there for a good fifteen minutes. He could feel the indecision coming from Tahiri and was relieved when she finally chose. A minute later she came out, and all thoughts of teasing her left his mind. This was to be expected, as Tahiri was wearing a black shirt that showed off her more feminine attributes. “Jaina said you would have a surprising reaction.” Tahiri commented as she began walking down the corridor. “Now I know why she gave me this shirt.” She stopped and turned around; Anakin had stood there staring. “Are you coming or not, dummy?” Anakin hurried over to her and they began walking to the turbolift. “Jaina gave that to you?” “Good, your brain’s back in control.” The blonde teased. “And yes, Jaina gave it to me. Apparently she out grew it.” “I never saw her in it.” Anakin really wished Jaina hadn’t given Tahiri the shirt. It would be a distraction when they were sparring. As they walked Tahiri began talking and kept going until they reached the turbolift. As she reached to activate the lift, the door opened and Tenel Ka came out. Her eyes had tears in them. “Lusa was killed by a Voxyn.” She said with a look of sadness. “Jacen wanted me to tell you before we told Raynar.” “We’ll go with you.” Anakin said entering the turbolift with the two females. ____________________________________________________________ The Jedi squadron jumped almost simultaneously from the Froz system, annoyed by Kyp's Dozen. All but two, Anakin and Tahiri, they were a half a millisecond behind the others and scraped the edges of a surviving Dovin Basal. Outside of their ships it looked like they jumped to hyperspace, but inside their ships they thought nothing had happened. “Fiver, what happened?” Anakin asked the droid. “What do you mean we jumped? Nothing’s changed.” Anakin checked his scanner and saw that Tahiri hadn’t jumped either. “What do you mean time changed? Of course time changes.” “Little Brother, something’s wrong with my hyperdrive.” Tahiri said. “Same here.” Anakin looked at the screen that showed Fiver’s messages. “Wait, time went backwards?” He keyed his com. “Barefoot, Fiver’s telling me we traveled back in time.” “So is my R2.” Tahiri answered. “She says we’ve gone back almost fifty-five years.” “Is that right, Fiver?” Anakin asked. “Barefoot, my hyperdrive is pretty much gone.” “Same here. I can probably make it to Corellia.” “Affirmative, transmitting the jump sequence. Jump on my mark.” Anakin prepared to jump. “Five, four, three, two, mark.” The stars streamed around his cockpit and settled into the swirl of hyperspace. He felt Tahiri had also jumped. After a few minutes of hyperspace the alarm went off to revert. When the timer hit zero Anakin disengaged the hyperdrive and the planets of the Corellian system came into view. Tahiri’s X-wing reverted as his did. They began to head towards Corellia going over what they would do upon landing. Updates should be every two weeks, three if I'm doing a longer one or DRL comes up. Oh and this is dedicated to Barefoot_XO who beta'd it. -----signature----- "There will be pages. Lots and lots of pages. Most of them will have letters on them, and the vast majority of those letters will be in the roman alphabet." -Aaron Allston
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JediStarMoonstruck Registered: Feb '02	Date Posted: 4/30/05 12:36pm Subject: RE: Anakin & Anakin Version 2.0 It's baa-aack
	I'm confused. When did they get to their ships? But it's back!!! hugs fic -----signature----- "Without Anakin Solo, the SW Universe is lost and confused” - Padme FADA Minister of Insanity, Lunacy and Fanaticism Anakin Solo Day - October 30, 2006. LONG LIVE ANAKIN SOLO!! - Aaron Allston
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Dev_Binks Registered: Aug '03	Date Posted: 4/30/05 12:40pm Subject: RE: Anakin & Anakin Version 2.0 It's baa-aack
	I edited it a bit. It'll hopefully make more since, oh and to understand what happened at Froz you'd have to read SbS. -----signature----- "There will be pages. Lots and lots of pages. Most of them will have letters on them, and the vast majority of those letters will be in the roman alphabet." -Aaron Allston
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JediStarMoonstruck Registered: Feb '02	Date Posted: 4/30/05 12:43pm Subject: RE: Anakin & Anakin Version 2.0 It's baa-aack
	That's better. Not...reading...SBS.... -----signature----- "Without Anakin Solo, the SW Universe is lost and confused” - Padme FADA Minister of Insanity, Lunacy and Fanaticism Anakin Solo Day - October 30, 2006. LONG LIVE ANAKIN SOLO!! - Aaron Allston
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Idrelle_Miocovani Registered: Feb '05	Date Posted: 4/30/05 12:44pm Subject: RE: Anakin & Anakin Version 2.0 It's baa-aack
	Good, it's back. I like the edits. -----signature----- Nat is my new Muse. Yes, you may have one of those flowy Greek-robe things you say you can't spell. This Time Around: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/27062943/p1/?2 DarthIshtar's Padawan
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Dev_Binks Registered: Aug '03	Date Posted: 4/30/05 12:49pm Subject: RE: Anakin & Anakin Version 2.0 It's baa-aack
	The changes you mean? I like 'em too. And the edits I just made. -----signature----- "There will be pages. Lots and lots of pages. Most of them will have letters on them, and the vast majority of those letters will be in the roman alphabet." -Aaron Allston
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kazohil Registered: Apr '05	Date Posted: 5/1/05 11:54am Subject: RE: Anakin & Anakin Version 2.0 It's baa-aack
	well lets see A I have no idea how they made it from walking in to the turbo lift ot being in a psace ship and jumping 55 years back ward. Hmm Second, so what is tmp is that a book or wait do you mean phantom menace, if so wouldn't it be a bit better to do I don't know say right before the clone wars began. Actually there is a book about the mission right beore, wouldn't that work a bit better, but of course that is just my sugestion -----signature----- The sith is those who are scared to dye or are weak on the inside If you need details read NJO Anakin knows what I'm talking about
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kazohil Registered: Apr '05	Date Posted: 5/1/05 11:56am Subject: RE: Anakin & Anakin Version 2.0 It's baa-aack
	P.S. oh ok I got it but chek out the book if I can remember the name I'll tell you, but it's metioned in the movie. P.P.S. Good story -----signature----- The sith is those who are scared to dye or are weak on the inside If you need details read NJO Anakin knows what I'm talking about
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Dev_Binks Registered: Aug '03	Date Posted: 5/1/05 11:59am Subject: RE: Anakin & Anakin Version 2.0 It's baa-aack
	1 to understand the whole thing you have to go and read Star by Star. 2 TPM is short of The Phantom Menace, and it's taking place right after that because I don't like the CW stuff. 3 They had a mission three years after TPM when Obi-Wan and Anakin went to Zonama Sekot, this will involve that slightly. 4 Never argue with the writer, it leads to bad things happening. 5 Thank you for reading. -----signature----- "There will be pages. Lots and lots of pages. Most of them will have letters on them, and the vast majority of those letters will be in the roman alphabet." -Aaron Allston
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Anakin_Heartbreaker Registered: Sep '04	Date Posted: 5/1/05 12:09pm Subject: RE: Anakin & Anakin Version 2.0 It's baa-aack
	Okay, I'm gonna be reading this to see how it unfolds. Sounds like a great action adventure in the making.
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Dev_Binks Registered: Aug '03	Date Posted: 5/1/05 12:11pm Subject: RE: Anakin & Anakin Version 2.0 It's baa-aack
	Thanks Heartbreaker, and yeah, I already have a future scene planned out. It involves Palpatine, a sniper rifle, and Anakin. Though not in that order. It may go snipe rifle, Palps, Anakin. -----signature----- "There will be pages. Lots and lots of pages. Most of them will have letters on them, and the vast majority of those letters will be in the roman alphabet." -Aaron Allston
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kazohil Registered: Apr '05	Date Posted: 5/1/05 4:12pm Subject: RE: Anakin & Anakin Version 2.0 It's baa-aack
	not Zonama Sekot. When Anakin was a bit older it was the mission that Yoda metions when palpatine sugests that they be the body gaurds, that Anakin and Obi-Wan just recently returned from a border dispute or forget the name of the planet. They are on the planet with two other jedi's. The padawan of the other jedi knight is the main character in the story battle surgeons or something that but she is a healer and is in a two book serious of during the clone war by her self for her final test to become a full jedi knight. OK well just ot clear that up but it would make the Anakin's more closer to the same age. -----signature----- The sith is those who are scared to dye or are weak on the inside If you need details read NJO Anakin knows what I'm talking about
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Dev_Binks Registered: Aug '03	Date Posted: 5/1/05 4:24pm Subject: RE: Anakin & Anakin Version 2.0 It's baa-aack
	Age doesn't really matter here. It's not like Tahiri's going to fall for Anakin Skywalker. -----signature----- "There will be pages. Lots and lots of pages. Most of them will have letters on them, and the vast majority of those letters will be in the roman alphabet." -Aaron Allston
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JediFalcon Registered: Feb '02	Date Posted: 5/1/05 4:39pm Subject: RE: Anakin & Anakin Version 2.0 It's baa-aack
	wow and major edits there, I remember there was sparring, an explosion and they ended up on Tatoonie this could prove interesting too more? -----signature----- Rogue Three in FFC Rogue Wing, Ward rm #306 Council Member of the Lightside Master to Stridarious Crimson makes my heart go Master of BYS AHBY The Impeccably Patient Drugged-Out Lunatic of the Skies I wonder whats my purpose in life
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Dev_Binks Registered: Aug '03	Date Posted: 5/1/05 4:42pm Subject: RE: Anakin & Anakin Version 2.0 It's baa-aack
	Yeah, I know, I was originally going to keep it like that, but decided to interweave it more with SbS, and it felt more right for them to go to Corellia, don't know why. Well it was also closer to Froz. -----signature----- "There will be pages. Lots and lots of pages. Most of them will have letters on them, and the vast majority of those letters will be in the roman alphabet." -Aaron Allston
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The_Slilent_One Registered: Sep '04	Date Posted: 5/2/05 7:19pm Subject: RE: Anakin & Anakin Version 2.0 It's baa-aack
	its back! Great post but the jump from the turbolift scene to the hyperspace jump scene caught me off guard. -----signature----- Anakin(alive)/Tahiri(not-half-vong) 4EVA!!!!! Proud member of the F.A.D.A. To be or not to be... - http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=28949907&brd=10477&replies=3
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