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The Rogue in Hiding-AU-Padawan Anakin runs away to Naboo, also Padme, Obi-Wan 1/9-Completed!!!
aldocassidy
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The Rogue in Hiding
Summary: AU-Five years after Phantom Menace Anakin runs away from the Jedi
This is a story idea that's been bugging for awhile now. This chapter is a very short one and just the beginning of the whole plot. I plan this to be a somewhat extensive Saga with four parts to it. The Rogue in Hiding is just part one. Please let me know what you think.
Chapter 1
Queen Amidala had a few moments to herself. It was a rare occasion when she let the burdens of her office fade to the back of her memory so that she could enjoy being young for once. She wandered along the creek listening to the sounds of the birds and the crickets. Every few steps she would crouch down and gently feel the cool water of Spring glide gracefully over her hand. Alas, this vacation was to be short-lived. It was a lovely place, but the Royal Gardens are still within the great Palace of Theed, and Queen Amidala still had to go over the latest bills.
It was a relatively slow era to be the Queen of Naboo though. The major reconstruction work following the Trade Federation invasion was mostly finished thanks to her nonstop efforts that past five years. The people were content, regarding their peace as an exquisite jewel no longer to be taken for granted again. Relations between the Naboo and the Gungans had never been better as members of the two species slowly diffused into each other's worlds.
There was still work to be done, she knew. Things may seem peaceful now, but their peace must be achieved through constant maintenance. She could not sit back and watch another crisis tear apart her world. Preparation was...
"Your Highness." An aide walked into the room.
"Korta, what is the matter?" Somewhere deep within her heart she trembled.
"There is a man here to see you."
"Who is it?"
"I do need to know. He says he knows you." Korta's eyes were blank as he seemed to be reciting his lines. "He is here to see you."
The situation seemed very suspicious. "Thank you. Tell the guest to wait outside and I will meet him momentarily."
"As you wish Your Highness."
Queen Amidala reached under her desk and found her tiny blaster. She hid it inside her dress and cautiously walked outside into the lobby. There was a man hidden in a cloak with his back to her. Korta was gone and Amidala wasn't pleased. How could he leave her unprotected in the presence of a stranger, a stranger he shouldn¡¦t even have let in this deep into the Palace in the first place.
The cloaked figure spoke without turning in a deep voice that seemed feigned. "Your Highness, I came to see you."
"Then why don't you turn around so I can see your face." She readied herself to grab her blaster and wondered if anyone would be able to hear her screams for help.
"Padme, you don't need that blaster. I'm not going to hurt you." His voice was softer now. Higher, and more vulnerable. He turned around and the hood dropped.
"Why did you address me as Padme?" He was only a kid, barely into his mid-teens, Padme thought. His blue eyes sparkled with an intense sadness. His hair was short except for the long braid hanging on the side. He was oddly familiar..."Anakin?"
A soft smile crept onto his face and Padme knew she had guessed right. Unknowingly she reached for the Japor Pendant still hanging from her neck.
"You still have that?"
"Of course I do. How could I not wear the necklace given to me by my future..." husband. She couldn't say that now. It was a joke from a long time ago, made by a little kid. The kid was grown now. As she ran up to him and the two old friends embraced each other for the first time in five years, she realized how much he had grown. He was slightly taller than her now, and still growing. How old was he now? She did the math in her head.
Anakin Skywalker clung to his angel. He never wanted to let go. He was taller than her now, he realized, but he still felt like a little kid in her presence. A little kid clinging to his protector, his last hope.
She finally released him from the embrace and spoke. "This is quite the surprise, Ani. A pleasant one, but still a surprise. How'd you get here? And where's your master," she reached into her memory, "Obi-Wan Kenobi."
"Um, Master Kenobi is still back on Coruscant. I've got some time to myself. The Jedi are letting me take a little vacation."
She knew he wasn't telling the truth, but there seemed to be a desperate reason for it so she didn¡¦t inquire further.
He will tell me when he is ready
. "How'd you manage to get past the guards and convince Korta to let you in?"
"Jedi tricks," he grinned mischievously, and the sadness disappeared from his face for a brief second. "Works on the weak-minded."
"Well, I guess I learned something new about my aide today then. Do you Jedi know of any tricks to strengthen your minds?"
"Meditation maybe, but that¡¦s really boring stuff."
"Wow Anakin, I can never imagine you being bored," said Padme with a playful look. She had always remembered that little boy who was fascinated by everything in the galaxy.
"I'm bored because they're chores the Jedi make me do, and they prevent me from doing what I need to do, seeing who I need to see."
He had a very distant look in his eyes as he spoke. His eyes looked not at her but beyond her in what seemed to be a vast wasteland of despair. She realized that she had a lot of catching up to with her old friend.
"Come on Ani, let's get out of here. I've had enough of Queen-business for today and I want to hear all about what you've been up to these last five years." She grabbed his hand and gave him a subtle tug and Anakin assented to her request silently, his mind still lost in the deepest voids of space.
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Awww, cute A/P mush. Hope to see more, this is a fantastic start!
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This looks really interesting. Ani running away from the Jedi! He's in big trouble
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Here's the next chapter. Thank you for reading and leaving feedback.
Chapter 2
They gathered in a small, dilapidated hut faraway in the Nubaya Mountains of the planet. Some of them were fugitives. Some of them used to roam among the elite of Naboo. Some of them still did. As diverse their backgrounds and motives were, all of them shared a singular hatred and a common malevolent goal.
“It is decided then,” stated the leader of the group in a monotone voice. “The Queen must die, and her government must be eradicated.” He was a tall human of around forty, obviously a man of the higher classes as he spoke with the all the resolve of offended dignity.
“I most certainly second that notion,” exclaimed another. “I will no longer submit to the rule of a child! And to make matters worse, a little girl!”
“She broke up my gambling ring! The nerve of her…” a ruffian chimed out.
“And the Gungans, running around like this is their planet. Just the sight and sound of them makes me want to gag!” Another rich aristocrat.
The chatter went on as each member of the group gave vent to their ills and grievances. No one bothered to listen to one another, and it was not important anyway. Nothing of importance was being said.
A lone figure sat apart from the crowd seated around the table. He was not one of the group, but without him they would have nothing. These people would talk and plan and conspire, but none of them actually had the gall to go through with their wild schemes and fantasies. That was why the world needed mercenaries. That was why Jango Fett was able to make a living in the galaxy. So that the true scum would keep their hands clean and delude their consciences.
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“Do you think he is a threat, Knight Kenobi?”
As he listened to those harsh words Obi-Wan Kenobi felt apprehension towards the Jedi Council for the first time in his life. Fear, even. They were talking about his Padawan. His failure. He had failed as both a Jedi and a Master.
“No, Master Windu, I do not believe that my Padawan is a threat. He is just a boy, for Sith’s Sake!”
“A boy with power beyond comprehension and a lightsaber,” reminded Plo Koon. “He is highly unstable and has already done much damage on Tatooine.”
“Heard back from Master Ki-Adi Mundi, we have not,” proclaimed Yoda from his seat on the council. “Feel his presence in the Force, I do not.”
“Surely you don’t accuse a fourteen year old Padawan of killing a Jedi Master,” asked Obi-Wan with an incredulous attitude that bore traces of his old Master Qui-Gon.
“We only know the facts, Master Kenobi,” replied Mace Windu with an intimidating glare. “As of now Padawan Anakin Skywalker is to be considered a rogue Jedi. He is a potential threat and must return to our custody.”
“He is a confused boy who’s been having nightmares about his mother,” argued Obi-Wan. “If this council had not been so strict in keeping him away from her, we wouldn’t even be in this situation in the first place!”
“The code we must follow, Master Kenobi, through the course of every Padawan’s training,” stated Yoda, unmoved by the passionate argument by the man standing before him. “Loosen his attachments we must, in order to keep him away from the Dark Side.”
“I fear that our efforts will only result in driving him towards that path. He’s different, Master Yoda. Surely you can see that!”
“This argument serves no purpose,” interrupted Mace harshly. “Not until we have apprehended Skywalker. Master Kenobi, it is the will of the Council that you and Master Gallia go to Tatooine. Find your Padawan and bring him back to the Temple through whatever means and find out what happened to Master Mundi.”
Obi-Wan bowed silently and left the Council Chambers knowing that he was treading on thin ice. Why did the Council demand that one of its own accompany him to find a fourteen-year-old boy?
For oversight
, he concluded.
They want to keep tabs on me, on the training of my Padawan. They want to see where I went wrong. I don’t even know where I went wrong. Maybe that’s the problem.
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They walked in comfortable silence through the hallways of the Royal Palace until they found their way to a balcony overlooking the waterfalls. Padme desperately wanted a conversation with Anakin but he seemed simply content with situation for the time being. He was holding back something, she thought to herself. Something painful. Should she ask and try to help him? Would she even be able to?
“Don’t worry about me, milady. I’m content. Your presence is soothing.”
She glanced up at him in shock. It was as if he had just read her mind. But then, she reminded herself, he is a Jedi. “Thanks, Ani. I don’t know what to say.” She didn’t know where to start.
“You can say anything you want to. Or you can not say anything at all. I don’t want to impose on you or make you uncomfortable.” His face betrayed no emotions. Padme examined him and her eyes to his Padawan braid. She ran her fingers down the intricately woven piece of hair.
“How is your training going? Is Obi-Wan a good teacher?” She knew that she could be treading on a touchy subject but was amazed to see her friend’s face scrunch into an expression of unending pain and…hatred? Almost as quickly as he had lost it he regained his composure and his Jedi stoicism. Everywhere except for his blue eyes.
“The Jedi and Master Obi-Wan weren’t what I expected them to be. And I don’t think they are happy with my progress. I’m not turning to be the Jedi I should be, or maybe not the Jedi they want me to be.”
“I don’t see how that is possible, Ani. I remember everyone talking about how powerful you were, how much potential you had.” She noticed tears running down his cheeks. She didn’t know how her words were causing them so she tried to reminisce about more pleasant memories.
“You saved our entire planet, Anakin. You were the hero of Naboo and you still are.” She turned back into the palace with an excited sparkle in her eye. “In fact, this planet needs a celebration for its greatest hero.” She didn’t expect Anakin to pull her back, nor did she expect that desperate look in his eyes to still be there.
“You flatter me, Padme.” Strangely, she didn’t object him calling her by her real name. “All I did was get lucky. I don’t deserve any celebrations in my honor. I couldn’t even save…” He couldn’t finish his sentence and instead turned his gaze outside.
“Anakin, you’ve been so distant ever since you arrived here. What’s wrong?” He waited for what seemed like hours before he decided on an answer.
“Everything, Padme. Everything. Except for you.” His eyes truly met hers for the first time as he said that. Padme felt a strange shivering feeling crawling up her spine.
“I’m so sorry Anakin, for whatever that’s happened,” she said, closing the distance between them. “Is there anything I can do to help you?”
“Stay here and watch the waterfall with me, Padme,” he pleaded. “Please. I have not seen beauty like it for a long time.” She inched herself beside him and gently put her arm around his shoulders, comforting him. The two of them gazed at the scenery before them.
The water is always in motion
, he thought.
Always running, always changing, until it finally finds its true home.
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Oooh, the ruffian meeting was interesting. But they'll have Anakin to deal with if they try to kill Padme.
Again, love the A/P mush!
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great chapters alldocassidy, i just found this story. Do you plan on making it long? cus you could write how anakin would be trained as a rogue jedi until the time of the clonewars,confrentation with sidious. How he would be a more balanced jedi, the real chosen one.
You could have him already establish a relationship with padme, wich could grow more strongly in a 5years span, an unbreakable bond not hidden as a dirty secret.
A rogue jedi with emotions, he's not a sith nor a jedi, just a man trying to help, heheh, i got a little caried away there.
The only question would be who could train him, can't be obi-wan cus he's to involved with jedicode, counsil.
just some suggestions
let me know what you think
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hmmm... who could train a rogue anakin...
only one's i can think of are Dooku, Tholme, Vos and Vergere, although their methods are questionable (and in Dooku's case Dark) at best.
i like it that you showed how corrupt the Jedi have become.
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I love the interaction between Anakin and Padme.
Not many stories focus on what would have happened had they met during the years between TPM and AOTC.
Poor Jedi council. If they want to find Ani, they are headed to the wrong place. By the way I hate Mace
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before this i thought that my hate was toward only 1 character palpatine but that mace son of a sith is not doing it bad at all
please PM when update.
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Chapter 3
Anakin had been in Theed for two days now. There were plenty of extra rooms in the Palace and Padme had found one for him. She recalled with delight at how Anakin had been amazed by the size of his room. The next morning he said that he had never had such a comfortable night of sleep in a bed that large.
The two of them didn’t get to see each other that often. The Queen worked from morning to night, and Anakin usually kept to himself in his room. She had her handmaidens check on him throughout the day, and they usually reported back to her that Anakin was either meditating on the floor or staring out the window. Padme herself had peeked into his chambers on a few occasions and found a blindfolded Anakin in the middle of saber practice. She marveled at how fast he moved to defend himself from the training droids, but he quickly sensed her presence and shifted his attention to her.
The two friends had a few moments to themselves when Padme insisted on dining with her friend. The conversation was mostly one-sided; Anakin asked Padme about everything, her life, her work, her family, and he absorbed every word she said like it was a Holy Gospel, but he never said a word about himself.
Padme was growing impatient over her inability to communicate with her old friend, but what caused her more frustration was the fact that Anakin was clearly hurting and would not allow her to help him. Normally she despised the official social duties that as Queen she was obligated to attend, but she hoped that the event coming up that night posed an opportunity for her to pluck Anakin out of his shell.
“There is a ball in the palace tonight. It is a minor function, basically a setting for the socialites to nit-pick at each other. Of course, my presence is required, and I would like someone to keep me company. I usually want to fall asleep during these inane events.”
Anakin looked up from his meal with the expression of eager innocence that Padme had missed so much. “Really? You want me to come?”
“Of course I want you to come! I missed my old friend Anakin Skywalker. I haven’t seen him in five years, you know, and I’m wondering whatever became of him.”
“What do you mean,” asked a confused Anakin. “I’ve been here for two days.”
“And you haven’t said a word about what’s been obviously bothering you. What’s wrong, Anakin? Please tell me. I won’t judge you. Let me help you, Anakin, I want to help.”
Both of them were shocked at her outburst, though Anakin felt guilt and dismay over Padme’s frustrations. “I’m sorry, Padme. I never meant to cause you any problems. It’d be best if I leave.” He reluctantly got up but her words stopped him from moving further.
“But you don’t have anywhere to go,” she protested softly. She had long figured it out. Padme walked over to Anakin and grabbed his hand softly. “I know the Jedi don’t know you’re here, Anakin.”
“So you’ve already talked to them.” Anakin stared at the floor.
“No!” Padme took Anakin’s chin with her other hand and lifted his head up. “Anakin, look at me!” He did. “Trust me, Anakin. I figured it out by myself, and I will not tell anyone you’re here if you don’t want me to.”
“Thank you.” Anakin did not feel the need to question her sincerity. If Padme said it then it was invariably true. “That means I can’t go to the ball, you know. Someone might recognize me.”
“Ani, the people of Naboo only remember a sweet little boy. They won’t know what you look like now.”
“True, but what if someone inquires about my identity?”
Padme drifted into thought. “How about this? You can be a distant cousin of mine, from Alderaan.”
“Cousin? You didn’t intend for me to be your date?” Padme could tell Anakin’s disappointment. She hoped she hadn’t given him the wrong idea.
“Oh Ani,” she paused, trying to think of the right words to say while monitoring the look on Anakin’s face. “You’ve always been dear to my heart, Ani, and I care for you a lot.”
“I love you, Padme. I have dreamed about you everyday for the last five years. You are the reason I get up every morning, the last reason I have to live.”
Padme found her knees weakening as she found herself a chair. She did not take her eyes off of Anakin. She had long known that Anakin probably still harbored some form of crush on her, but she did not expect it to have developed to this extent. His intense voice did not make any attempts to betray his emotions, and his tortured tone suggested that he had long wanted to tell her this. Padme looked into his intense eyes and saw a man firm in his convictions.
“I’m sorry,” he apologized, sensing her discomfort. “I shouldn’t have said that. You don’t have to say anything, Padme.”
“No, Anakin. I don’t know how to react to what you told me right now, but I’m glad you said what you said. Anakin, I don’t want there to be any secrets between us.”
Knowing what she was inferring, he quickly changed the topic. “Are you going to have an elaborate headdress tonight?”
“Yeah, why,” asked Padme, puzzled over why Anakin suddenly took an interest in her hair.
Anakin reached into his tunic and took out a tiny object. Upon closer examination, it was a hairpin, except it had several glowing gemstones on it. Padme saw that there were several shades of blue, green, yellow, and purple.
“Sabe gave me a weird look when I asked her for a hairpin,” Anakin said as he offered the said object to Padme. She took the hairpin and marveled at its radiance. “I attached several crystals to it, the crystals that we made our lightsabers with.”
“Thank you, Anakin, but I’m not sure if I can take this.”
“Please, Padme, I insist on it. Accept it as a token of my gratitude for the hospitality you’ve shown me.”
He edged closer to her, took the hairpin from her hands, and started braiding it into her hair. Padme wanted to protest but Anakin spoke first.
“The crystals are strong in the Force. They’ll keep you safe.”
He finished his work and a very unnerved Padme got up to leave. She was surprised at herself for letting him get so close to her and touch her hair. But for some reason she felt safe, almost comfortable, in his presence. There was nothing threatening about Anakin’s actions. Still, she reminded herself to watch her own actions in the future. The little boy from Tatooine was growing up now. He may not have been completely grown yet, but nevertheless, a simple hug between two old friends may not be so simple anymore.
“I better get going,” she said, trying to distance herself emotionally from him. “I’ve got to get ready for tonight. You should too. I’ll have Rabe or Eirtae help you select a suitable wardrobe.” As she walked out of the room she turned back to look at Anakin. He had been staring at the ground again, and Padme felt her composure slipping. He looked so pitiful, so helpless, so sad. She wanted to comfort him, to tell him that everything was all right, that she wanted more than anything to help him with whatever demons he was dealing with. But she didn’t know where to begin. She wasn’t even sure if she knew Anakin Skywalker anymore.
“We
will
talk sometime,” she said in a deep and authoritative voice that did not betray the emotions laden in her words. “We will talk about everything, when I know what to say to you.”
He looked up at her, and her eyes found his, almost pleading for his approval. Anakin gave her a silent nod and smiled at her, reassuring her with his consent.
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“I love you, Padme. I have dreamed about you everyday for the last five years. You are the reason I get up every morning, the last reason I have to live.”
Anakin's pretty smooth, not many 14 year old boys can pull off a line like that.
I missed this story it's so good!
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Thank you to all of you for reading and leaving feedback! I'm slightly surprised at the anti-Mace sentiments here. I certainly don't condone his actions, but take into consideration that though he is the one speaking, his words convey the opinions of the majority of the Jedi Council.
Idrelle_Miocovani: Thanks. We'll see what those ruffians have to deal with very soon
lucid_lady: sorry for the long wait, but here's more
sethsky: Thanks a lot for your enthusiastic suggestions. This will certainly be a long saga, as I plan 3 sequels: The Rogue in War, The Rogue in Exile, and The Rogue in Prophecy. I can't give away any details, but the story will get a lot darker as Anakin and Padme will have to go through a lot of pain and suffering.
Chris_2Xtreme: Thanks for reading. We'll see who, if anyone, will keep training Anakin, and what will become of the Jedi Council.
iloveAnakin7: Glad I was able to write a good A/P scene. Everyone seems to hate Mace, huh?
sithrules: I will PM you once I finish writing these replies.
As for the story itself, these last 3 chapters are really the prologue. The real action is about to begin in the next chapter, but that may take awhile since we're going to see people and events that will affect the rest of the saga. Thus, until I have a more detailed outline of the entire story, I won't be able to finish the next chapter, but I will try to get it out asap.
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good chapter, i will gladly keep reading to see what kind of saga your gonna develop.
can't wait for more
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You had good timig with this chapter.
I'm leaving town tommorow.
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RE: The Rogue in Hiding-AU Five years after Phantom Menace Anakin runs away from the Jedi
Lovely update, aldocassidy.
“I love you, Padme. I have dreamed about you everyday for the last five years. You are the reason I get up every morning, the last reason I have to live.”
Awww.
Thanks for the PM!
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[while at sea] "Do you think that death could possibly be a boat?"
"No! Death isn't. Death is the ultimate negative. Not-being. You can't not-be on a boat."
"I've frequently not been on boats."
"No—what you've been is not on boats."
Ish's Padawan
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