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Author	Topic: Fall Like Fire (L/M; Sequel; AU) Updated 11/12 Chapter Ten -- MARA AWAKES!! .... and..... ^_^
Agent_Jaid Registered: Feb '03	Date Posted: 12/1/04 10:56am Subject: Fall Like Fire (L/M; Sequel; AU) Updated 11/12 Chapter Ten -- MARA AWAKES!! .... and..... ^_^ - Date Edited: 11/12/06 10:47pm (12 edits total) Edited By: Agent_Jaid
	Dedication: For my dear Nicole!! Tis finally up girl! Thanks: To my many readers who encouraged me to write this!! Love you guys! And also to my beta, MiaTieska for all of her assistance with this story! Author: Jaid Genre: AU; Angst; Action Disclaimer: The world is entirly in the pocket of George Lucas. I have slipped it out so I can play with it, unfortunately (or perhaps fortunately, depending on how you look at it) I didn't manage to snatch the deed to it so it still belongs to the Almighty God Lucas. Feedback: I love it. Gimmie! Author's Notes: This story is the sequel for my songfic Words Miscommunicate and if you want this to make any sense at all, you really, really should go read that first.... Prologue “I love you too, Mara.” Luke whispered softly as he sat by her side in the cool, shining room. An IV drip stood silently to one side of the bed, the pale liquid hydrating the still form. The slender hand almost reflected the harsh florescent light and the thick needle on the back of her hand glittered, even through the gauze and tape that tried to mask the ugliness of it all. A thin sheet was pulled up under her arms, the gown that they had dressed her in barely covering her. Slender silver wires slid underneath the fabric to attach to tiny censors attached to her translucent skin. “I love you,” Luke whispered again, desperate for a response. The room was empty of the Force, effects of the Ysalamiri that surrounded it. Mara had tried to kill herself with the Force and the memories she had replayed in her mind caused havoc with her system. The doctors said it was too dangerous. She was to be sealed off from the Force. “Mara, I-I love you…” Luke’s voice cracked. “Ca-” he cut himself off and took a deep breath and tried to ask again. “Can you hear me?” The room was empty of noise. More of a lack of something than something that was natural; it was quiet, dead. Luke shivered; then he noticed what was wrong about the silence. It wasn’t complete. It struck him that it was something of a sacrilege that something was disturbing the tranquility of the room. The silence was still incomplete, and the steady drip of the IV resounded in the room. Mara never stirred. Review? The chapters are not going to be this short, I promise.... -----signature----- Wasn't Enough: One-Shot http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=21015893
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ForGoodOrForAwesome9 Registered: Jul '04	Date Posted: 12/1/04 10:59am Subject: RE: Fall Like Fire (L/M; Sequel; AU) The Sequel is Here!! - Date Edited: 12/1/04 11:02am (1 edits total) Edited By: ForGoodOrForAwesome9
	bounce bounce And I'm in the start and all! I must read now.. review in a bit? Edit: aww! Short but sweet. I can't wait for more! But.. but... why won't she answer him? Whyyy??? Must go out and play in the snow with all the cute boys... giggles Excellent work Jaid, more posts soon...ish? -----signature----- "So, remember kids: Every time you screw up punctuation, God electrocutes Orlando Bloom with a cattle prod." I live with 3 small furry creatures... I call them tomato, cheese, and red pepper... they live in my fridge. Good thing tomorrow's garbage day.
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flowerbee Registered: Apr '04	Date Posted: 12/1/04 11:00am Subject: RE: Fall Like Fire (L/M; Sequel; AU) The Sequel is Here!!
	Meany.
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GreatOne Registered: May '03	Date Posted: 12/1/04 11:08am Subject: RE: Fall Like Fire (L/M; Sequel; AU) The Sequel is Here!!
	Does this mean we can start having Maracide fics now? Muahahha
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MiaTieska Title: Provo, UT FanForce CR Registered: Jan '03	Date Posted: 12/1/04 2:48pm Subject: RE: Fall Like Fire (L/M; Sequel; AU) The Sequel is Here!!
	Wonderful!! I'm honored to be your beta, this is a wonderful story. I love the angst. The angst is just so well done here. (And now we know you can write mush, so...) I love the pace of just the stillness and quietness you describe in here. Just the waiting and the hoping that she'll wake up. You captured it wonderfully. Okay, now I want to see the next chapter!!! You'd better send it to me soon. -Mia -----signature----- "I have mutated bread! Come see!" "The Bank of Jedi Skills is... empty. We're overdrawn." It's Just Pretend, K/J: http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=22720801 Provo FanForce: http://boards.theforce.net/board.asp?brd=10138
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RK_Striker_JK_5 Registered: Jul '03	Date Posted: 12/1/04 2:57pm Subject: RE: Fall Like Fire (L/M; Sequel; AU) The Sequel is Here!!
	Oh, my! Don't kill off Mara! I beg of you! If you do...I'll have Anakin dump Hotaru in my fic and have him shack up with Tahiri again! And Tomo Solo will be nothing more than an even chattier version of her mother. -----signature----- E-married to the wonderful DarthIshtar. Now also her Padawan. Member of the Y.J.K. Revolution Staring into the Darkness http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/27537567/p1/?23
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StarFighter5 Registered: Jul '03	Date Posted: 12/1/04 3:10pm Subject: RE: Fall Like Fire (L/M; Sequel; AU) The Sequel is Here!!
	The sequel is here!!! Yay!!!! The angst is too wonderful. Update soon! -----signature----- "I hope I slept with you to get the job. if not, then who the hell was that guy?" - Carrie Fisher "Now that I'm a pez and a lego, I shall want for nothing else." -Jeremy Bulloch "Thank you for going to the movies. Especially mine." - George Lucas
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Darth_Elu Registered: Jan '03	Date Posted: 12/1/04 4:43pm Subject: RE: Fall Like Fire (L/M; Sequel; AU) The Sequel is Here!!
	Looks great, sis. I await more. -----signature----- Brittnee My love, my life E-married to the love of my life! "Ichigo! Come out and fight me, you *******!" Master to Yukari_Nahashi I am Death: RIP George Carlin
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Agent_Jaid Registered: Feb '03	Date Posted: 12/1/04 5:41pm Subject: RE: Fall Like Fire (L/M; Sequel; AU) The Sequel is Here!!
	Nicole bounce bounce giggles Bunny! And I'm in the start and all! I must read now.. review in a bit? Yes you're in the start, yes you must read now, and yes you must review. Edit: aww! Short but sweet. ...feels horribly guilty I can't wait for more! But.. but... why won't she answer him? Whyyy??? Because she's unconcious! Must go out and play in the snow with all the cute boys... giggles Did you knock any of them down? Excellent work Jaid, more posts soon...ish? Soonish. Probably before my Han/Leia fic anyways 'cause FLF has plot, a good couple, an adorable beta, and is so pretty... Sarah Meany. I... am? GreatOne Does this mean we can start having Maracide fics now? NO! This is not a Maracide fic! whimpers Muahahha Ah... the sweet sound of villany.. MiaTieska Wonderful!! I'm honored to be your beta, this is a wonderful story. giggles at her Beta's sillyness for thinking that she's honored since her betaship is the only reason that this fic really made it this far... Love yah' Darlin! I love the angst. The angst is just so well done here. (And now we know you can write mush, so...) Angst is sooo painless to write! I just keep wanting to start singing!! I love the pace of just the stillness and quietness you describe in here. Just the waiting and the hoping that she'll wake up. You captured it wonderfully. Thanks, as you know, I struggled with it a lot.... Okay, now I want to see the next chapter!!! You'd better send it to me soon. Okay! Okay! Next chapter is to be worked on after supper! Jon Oh, my! What? Don't kill off Mara! I beg of you! Kill off Mara? But, but, but... what if it enhances the plot?... If you do...I'll have Anakin dump Hotaru in my fic and have him shack up with Tahiri again! O.O AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!! I WON'T I WON'T I WON'T I SWEAR I WON'T PLEASE DON'T DO IT PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!! PlotBunnyForFLF: AHEM!!! thwacks There is a PLOT that you are SUPPOSED to follow... Mel: ..... bursts out crying And Tomo Solo will be nothing more than an even chattier version of her mother. ..... o.o..... >.<..... twitch StarFighter5 The sequel is here!!! Yay!!!! The angst is too wonderful. Update soon! Hurray! I'm so glad you found this! I love watching readers from WM show up here.... Patrick Looks great, sis. I await more. Yes, you'll await. -----signature----- Wasn't Enough: One-Shot http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=21015893
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Darth_Elu Registered: Jan '03	Date Posted: 12/1/04 5:46pm Subject: RE: Fall Like Fire (L/M; Sequel; AU) The Sequel is Here!!
	I'll await? No, no. You mean..."Yes, you'll wait." beta mood -----signature----- Brittnee My love, my life E-married to the love of my life! "Ichigo! Come out and fight me, you *******!" Master to Yukari_Nahashi I am Death: RIP George Carlin
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AvenKiel Registered: Oct '03	Date Posted: 12/1/04 6:30pm Subject: RE: Fall Like Fire (L/M; Sequel; AU) The Sequel is Here!!
	claws at thread More!! -----signature----- I'm a naughty little Kitty... Meow! Grilled Cheese..... mmmmmmmmm..... http://www.livejournal.com/~jediliz/ I don't know what I'd do if I couldn't dance , sing and hop around all day, I'd probably die. Death from fidgeting!
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green_eyes Registered: Apr '04	Date Posted: 12/1/04 8:14pm Subject: RE: Fall Like Fire (L/M; Sequel; AU) The Sequel is Here!!
	Oh no, Mara isn't responding. Poor Luke. She has to wake up and hear him. No, no, Mara cannot die. Do you hear me? green_eyes
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GenOochy Registered: Jan '03	Date Posted: 12/1/04 8:56pm Subject: RE: Fall Like Fire (L/M; Sequel; AU) The Sequel is Here!!
	Kill off Mara? But, but, but... what if it enhances the plot?... What would the plot be after that? Interesting start. The first one was quite good, and this one has plenty of promise. Your writing has become excelent in recent months. Keep it up. -----signature----- http://swfanon.wikia.com/wiki/Category:Wolatarians "..We've got the Empire, now as then. We don't doubt; we don't take direction.. ..Lucretia, my reflection. Dance the ghost with me.."
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ForGoodOrForAwesome9 Registered: Jul '04	Date Posted: 12/2/04 6:23am Subject: RE: Fall Like Fire (L/M; Sequel; AU) The Sequel is Here!!
	Uh oh Jaidy lady, I think we're falling into the old a-million-reviews-after-each-post thing again! giggles Bunny! I really am... bounces some more ...feels horribly guilty You should feel guilty lady, must provide us with our L/M fix, you know? Because she's unconcious! Ahem Has that ever stopped them in the past? In canon, Luke declared his love for her while she was unconcious! Did you knock any of them down? Unfortunately no. But prettiful one from Montreal threw one back at me and I caught it! They got it wrong you know, it's winter that's the more romantic of the seasons! Soonish. Probably before my Han/Leia fic anyways 'cause FLF has plot, a good couple, an adorable beta, and is so pretty... So pretty indeed. Are you going to have some sort of posting schedule? I like those, easy to remember when to let myself go online for a bit It's almost Christmas! bounce bounce And with that comes exams.... stops bouncing... And candy! bouncebouncebounce -----signature----- "So, remember kids: Every time you screw up punctuation, God electrocutes Orlando Bloom with a cattle prod." I live with 3 small furry creatures... I call them tomato, cheese, and red pepper... they live in my fridge. Good thing tomorrow's garbage day.
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RK_Striker_JK_5 Registered: Jul '03	Date Posted: 12/2/04 7:09am Subject: RE: Fall Like Fire (L/M; Sequel; AU) The Sequel is Here!!
	Hmm, so it's the plot bunny? I'll have to take care of that. Jon arms himself with a phaser rifle, double-bladed lightsaber and rabbit food Here, bunny, bunny, bunny! -----signature----- E-married to the wonderful DarthIshtar. Now also her Padawan. Member of the Y.J.K. Revolution Staring into the Darkness http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/27537567/p1/?23
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Agent_Jaid Registered: Feb '03	Date Posted: 12/2/04 8:55am Subject: RE: Fall Like Fire (L/M; Sequel; AU) The Sequel is Here!!
	Patrick I'll await? No, no. You mean..."Yes, you'll wait." No. no, I meant "Yes, you'll await..." tis a cross between Knightish and English. beta mood AvenKiel claws at thread More!! laughs happily Really?! Very well, I shall hurry! green_eyes Hurrah! Another WM person!! Oh no, Mara isn't responding. Nope. Poor Luke. She has to wake up and hear him. But that would take away the angst... Actually it wouldn't. No, no, Mara cannot die. Do you hear me? .... >.< Tyler What would the plot be after that? Trying to find what the meaning of life is in a world post-Mara.... Interesting start. The first one was quite good, and this one has plenty of promise. Your writing has become excelent in recent months. Keep it up. Thanks Ty, I'll do my best!! glows Excellent! He called it excellent!!! Nicole Uh oh Jaidy lady, I think we're falling into the old a-million-reviews-after-each-post thing again! laughs hysterically We probably are... but tis so much fun!! I really am... bounces some more Actually you look more like an adorable little mouse when you wear your beanie... You should feel guilty lady, must provide us with our L/M fix, you know? ... I'm responsible for L/M fix's?! Aaahhhh!! Ahem Has that ever stopped them in the past? In canon, Luke declared his love for her while she was unconcious! And it's not stopping him now! She just isn't talking back! And sides. YSALAMIRI!! Unfortunately no. But prettiful one from Montreal threw one back at me and I caught it! They got it wrong you know, it's winter that's the more romantic of the seasons! The prettiful one... was he the one you got turned to mush over a couple weeks back? And Winter? Romantic? thinks.... I like fog. Not snow. So pretty indeed. pets the adorable cherished plot bunnie Are you going to have some sort of posting schedule? I can try... I suck at them though... I haven't had one in like a year... I like those, easy to remember when to let myself go online for a bit laughs How 'bout this. I'll post notices in my LJ for whenever I update FLF. Would that work? It's almost Christmas! bounce bounce And with that comes exams.... stops bouncing... And candy! bouncebouncebounce EXAMS!! HURRAY!!! dances We loves exams!! (well... not bio or other yucky things... blech...) but History Exams!! bounces btw, I LOVE your signature!! Jon Hmm, so it's the plot bunny? I'll have to take care of that. ...tries to set bunnie traps Jon arms himself with a phaser rifle, double-bladed lightsaber and rabbit food Here, bunny, bunny, bunny! gloats And THUS shall the small insignificant (yet highly resourceful) plot bunnie be captured and forced into eternal servitude..... MWAHAHAHAHA!!! -----signature----- Wasn't Enough: One-Shot http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=21015893
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