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DaenaBenjen42 Registered: May '05	Date Posted: 2/14/06 10:10pm Subject: Ever and Always (L/M, angst/romance) (update 10/18) - Date Edited: 10/18/08 12:38pm (64 edits total) Edited By: DaenaBenjen42
	Title: Ever and Always Author: DaenaBenjen42 Characters: Mara, Luke Timeframe: post Jedi Academy Trilogy Genre: Angst/Romance Note: Many thanks to zonzo for the cover art. It was cold in the dark, dank prison cell. The woman sat there, shivering with cold and fear, terrified of what would happen when the door opened once more. She couldn't be certain of how long she’d been here; as there was no way to mark the passage of time, but for her captors dragging her out into the light and the infliction of pain. Days, weeks, months? Or was it years? She did not know. Even her senses could not tell her that, as they were blinded. The woman lifted her head off her knees when she heard a loud commotion from outside. What was that? She wondered. And then a familiar low buzzing sound was heard, and her eyes widened in the darkness. Could it be? Not daring to hope, she rested her head back on her knees and listened to the ruckus. The commotion was over as quickly as it began, with a yell and a loud thud. She heard voices from outside the door, but couldn’t make out the words. Out of long practice, she crawled to a corner and waited for the door to open, her face hidden behind her scraggly hair. She heard the door open, and all at once her senses opened. Her head came up with the rush of sensation, and someone familiar that she didn’t dare to hope to see. Arms enfolded her, and soft words of comfort were whispered in her ear, and she melted into the embrace. “Never leave me,” she whispered in a voice that was harsh from disuse. “Never leave me.” “I never will,” he whispered back. “Not ever.” “I love you,” she whispered. “I love you, too, Mara,” the man whispered. “Come on, let’s get out of here.” He covered her in a blanket and picked her up in his strong arms. Taking note of the darkness, he positioned her in his arms so her eyes would be protected. “It’s pretty bright out there, so close your eyes.” “Okay,” came the faint whisper. “Are we going home?” “Yes, Mara, we are.” “I love you, Farmboy. Stay with me?” “Ever and always, Mara. Ever and always.” Mara snuggled into his arms, finally, after so long in the pain-filled darkness, feeling safe in the arms of the man she loved. Fini (or so I thought...) -----signature----- "Say it with me now. Postcard. Zoo. Not. Shopping." master to jackyyy17, micky-nikki & Trimaj e-sis to BrightFeather All cats are leopards after dark.
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mavjade Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 2/14/06 10:34pm Subject: RE: Ever and Always (L/M, angst/romance)
	Awww, that was really sweet! I loved it! "It's pretty bright out there, so close your eyes." I don't know why, but this was my favorite line. It was just so sweet, innocent, and natural! Mara snuggled into his arms, finally, after so long in the pain-filled darkness, feeling safe in the arms of the man she loved. Awww.. sniff I love this... it is as though Luke just being there can wipe away not only the literal darkness but the emotional one too! His light is very bright! (Did I read way to much into that? I'm kinda bad about that! ) Wondeful viggie, DaenaBenjen42! -----signature----- We don't love the people we love because they are perfect, we love the people we love because they are. http://whiteknot.org -because everyone should be able to tie the knot! ~ "I love that your heart is bigger than your very annoying brain."
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DarthIshtar Title: Former CR Registered: Mar '01	Date Posted: 2/15/06 12:11am Subject: RE: Ever and Always (L/M, angst/romance)
	Very sweet after such a suspenseful beginning. -----signature----- "I feel like a more down-to-earth Pink 5 when I'm writing Leah. Same attitude, less lip gloss." ~Me on how to get in the right mindset for Twilight fanfic.
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RedGold Registered: Nov '04	Date Posted: 2/15/06 12:42am Subject: RE: Ever and Always (L/M, angst/romance)
	Now that is a story to wake up to after V-Day! -----signature----- Legend... Recluse... Forgotten... Will one day return... http://www.starwarsfanfic.com
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furrylittlebantha Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 2/15/06 2:24am Subject: RE: Ever and Always (L/M, angst/romance)
	sniffs Lovely, Daena! Poor Mara, so down and out she can't even conjure up her infamous wit! Snuggle her up, Lukie! Twas beautifully written. -----signature----- Master of tjace and bi0nic. In mourning for the one year, nine months, and five days it has been since The Souls of Demons was updated. sob
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divapilot Registered: Nov '05	Date Posted: 2/15/06 2:39am Subject: RE: Ever and Always (L/M, angst/romance)
	Brief, but effective. You've shown a lot of emotion here. Nicely done as to how she dared to hope, even when she heard the noises right outside. And that's our beloved guy, carrying her into the light. Again. -----signature----- Never tell me the odds. AKL Happy new year!
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MirandaFair Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 2/15/06 1:57pm Subject: RE: Ever and Always (L/M, angst/romance)
	Ooo! Started off very dark, and I was happy Luke was there for Mara. A good cuddle can always drive away scary shadows. Nice work! -----signature----- May the Muse be with you.
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Idrelle_Miocovani Title: Solar Power loving Scattergories Hostess Registered: Feb '05	Date Posted: 2/15/06 2:02pm Subject: RE: Ever and Always (L/M, angst/romance)
	Very lovely and sweet after a dark and doom-y beginning! -----signature----- "Can I just run by my battle cry?" "As you run, as you fight the evil Lord Vader—" "I'll turn on my lightsaber, look him straight in the helmet and, to make you proud, I will yell out 'the Canadians are coming, the Canadians are coming!'" Ish's Padawan
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JadeLotus Registered: Mar '05	Date Posted: 2/15/06 3:25pm Subject: RE: Ever and Always (L/M, angst/romance)
	-----signature----- You are the only thing that makes sense Just ignore all this present tense
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Trimaj Title: Arena Fantasy Football Champion Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 2/15/06 4:06pm Subject: RE: Ever and Always (L/M, angst/romance)
	very, very nicely done master. glad to see you changed that one little word... -----signature----- Life, is a joke. And death, is the ultimate punchline. Kahn Iceay My 20k Thread http://boards.theforce.net/your_jedi_council_community/b10008/29632241/p1/?0 See if you got mentioned. (Second section of thanks added, see second page) Arena-ites added.
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BrentusofGath Registered: Aug '05	Date Posted: 2/15/06 6:04pm Subject: RE: Ever and Always (L/M, angst/romance)
	Good as always! And with a bit of suspense that makes it better. I love suspense. Great work, sis! -----signature----- In time or so I'm told, I'm just another soul for sale, oh well Feel it in my bones when you break my back, break it just to watch me bend Why'd you have to go and Let it Die? -Foo Fighters http://conscienceoftheking.blogspot.com/
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DaenaBenjen42 Registered: May '05	Date Posted: 2/18/06 9:45pm Subject: RE: Ever and Always (L/M, angst/romance) - Date Edited: 2/19/06 10:30pm (1 edits total) Edited By: DaenaBenjen42
	walks back into thread, sees reviews, nearly faints in disbelief Um... wow? mavjade: No, mav, you didn't read too much into it. Really. And thankyou. DarthIshtar: Thankyou. RedGold: Thankyou. And, well... it was actually supposed to be FOR V-Day, but I didn't write it in time. furrylittlebantha: furry! Thankyou for the kind reply. divapilot: Thankyou. MirandaFair: Thankyou. Idrelle Miocovani: Thankyou. JadeLotus: Um... thankyou. Glad you enjoyed it. Trimaj: well, it was either change the word, or be reminded of the Vulcan Mindmeld every time I looked at it. Thankyou, padawan. BrentusofGath: Thankyou, bro. Yes, suspense is good. -----signature----- "Say it with me now. Postcard. Zoo. Not. Shopping." master to jackyyy17, micky-nikki & Trimaj e-sis to BrightFeather All cats are leopards after dark.
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SakuraTsukikage Registered: Oct '05	Date Posted: 2/19/06 1:44am Subject: RE: Ever and Always (L/M, angst/romance)
	Great job. You scared me there at the beginning, but the ending was natural and sweet and very Luke and Mara. -----signature----- Never tell me the odds. Rebellion Rising-- http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=26988897&brd=10476
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jackyyy17 Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 2/19/06 2:24am Subject: RE: Ever and Always (L/M, angst/romance)
	That was very good, Master, short but sweet. Good job p.s. sorry about the lateness of this reply. jacky -----signature----- Padawan to DaenaBenjen42
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VaderLVR64 Title: Fan Fic Manager in Combat Boots Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 2/19/06 7:20am Subject: RE: Ever and Always (L/M, angst/romance)
	Very sweet! Nicely done! -----signature----- Someone who loves me carries an M16. My baby boy wears combat boots.
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DaenaBenjen42 Registered: May '05	Date Posted: 3/2/06 7:07pm Subject: RE: Ever and Always (L/M, angst/romance) - Date Edited: 3/2/06 7:08pm (1 edits total) Edited By: DaenaBenjen42
	SakuraTsukikage: Thankyou. Glad you liked it. jackyyy17: Good job Thankyou. p.s. sorry about the lateness of this reply. You were studying, Jacky. I understand completely. VaderLVR64: Thankyou! -----signature----- "Say it with me now. Postcard. Zoo. Not. Shopping." master to jackyyy17, micky-nikki & Trimaj e-sis to BrightFeather All cats are leopards after dark.
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