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Chilla Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 3/22/06 12:56pm Subject: Not the Time to Cry *Do you want a sequel?* - Date Edited: 12/5/06 10:56am (23 edits total) Edited By: Chilla
	Not The Time To Cry Author: Chilla Timeframe: Beginning of NJO, before battle of Ithor till the battle Characters: Solo Family, Luke/Mara, Tenel Ka, Tahiri, Anni Captson Genre: Romance, some action Summary: Jaina falls in love during the war, AU-ish Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the characters, they belong to George Lucas cover Thanks to BurntTheMacaroni for beta-reading! Prologue Love is something you can’t control, Something that catches you suddenly; Without any warning it changes your life forever. Love makes you blind, But it also opens your eyes for all the things you haven’t seen before. Love will keep you awake at night; Will make you hope and make you cry. And although love can make you hate yourself, You should never stop loving, It’s all that matters. -----signature----- master to Cem_Fel and proud J/K shipper e-daughter to AzureAngel2 and DarthUncle and e-sis to Darth_Gangrenous e-mother to RevaDurron and her e-husband Darth_DSpice http://yun-harla.tripod.com http://freewebs.com/signedbygod
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Chilla Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 3/22/06 1:01pm Subject: RE: Not The Time To Cry (mainly J/K, some J/TK, L/M, H/L, A/T, Anni Captson)
	Chapter 1 You couldn’t really call it a break, the Yuuzhan Vong were still attacking, but for a small period of time, the Jedi had some kind of peace. Most of them needed this calm period to heal their wounds, while others wanted to re-join the war again. The Jedi were meant to protect the innocent, which caused some of them to protest Master Skywalker’s decisions. They felt he wasn’t doing enough. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ On the Ralroost, Luke had persuaded Admiral Kre’fey to allow them to train in a small room. Many Jedi had taken up the offer, and arrived in time for Luke’s speech. He was happy so many had followed his call. This was important. He didn’t want to lose any more Jedi, to the war or to their straying from the path, but he had doubts that his training had prepared them enough for such an enemy. He looked at his wife to make sure she was ready for the task she had chosen. When his students became quiet, Luke made eye contact with every one of them before he finally spoke: “Thank you all for coming. I know some of you want to join the war now; if you choose to go I won’t stop you, but I want you to be prepared. We can’t afford to lose any more of our kind, so the ones who choose to stay will receive a special training to better prepare them for our enemy. You’ll learn to become a weapon. You must learn this to be able to survive this war. Master Jade-Skywalker, my wife, will lead this special training program. You’ll learn right from the Emperor’s Hand how to defend yourselves.” Mara spoke up: “Whom ever would like to learn this, your training begins here in two hours. May the force be with you.” ~~~~~~~~~ Jaina Solo looked around in the training hall. She grinned at her friend Tenel Ka. “This will be very interesting.”, she said with a look at the assembled Jedi. “Fact!” Tenel Ka agreed. Many of the young Jedi were standing in the hall, including Jaina’s twin Jacen, Tahiri Veila, Lowbacca, the Jedi Master Kyp Durron, Valin Horn, Raynar Thul and several others. Surprisingly Jaina’s little brother Anakin wasn’t among them, he was practicing in a simulator. She couldn’t blame him. In contrast to her, Anakin wasn’t in a fighter squadron, but had already proven himself as a very good pilot. As Mara entered the room, Kyp murmured, “Let’s hope this will be different than the training Corran has led at the praxeum!”. He turned around to face a “not-very-happy-about-his-appearance” look from Corran Horn. ~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jaina became paired with Kyp for their first training lesson. She eyed him suspicious and couldn’t help but wonder why the kriff she had been the one to train with him, especially when they had to fight without any weapons, or the Force. Mara even wanted them to learn how to fight without the aid of the Force, which proved to be tricky. Kyp was obviously stronger than her. A new thought entered Jaina’s mind, causing her to hold back a laugh. Mara and Corran had chosen her on purpose, but not to punish her, it was more a punishment for Kyp. He couldn’t influence her; Jaina stood behind Luke and he had no chance of changing that or turning her against her uncle. She was so stubborn she would never surrender – especially not against a stronger enemy. Never! Not with me! Jaina thought as she rushed towards him and feigned a slap. Instead she lifted her leg and kneed him in the gut. Kyp’s tried to dodge, but lost his balance. Trying to prevent himself from falling, he grasped onto her arm. Unfortunately he was already half-way down, causing Jaina to take a tumble. Needless to say, she wasn’t that pleased as she landed on the ground next to him. “Kyp, you idiot! You did that on purpose!” “Calm down...We’re just training” He said softly, patting her left cheek. He smiled at her and offered her a hand. Jaina thought a few seconds about whether to take it or not. It might be a trick, but how could she know if she didn’t try? She took his hand and stood up. “I don’t like to hit women, especially when they are as kind as you and the daughter of my best friend.” “Kyp, this is just for training.” “But I wouldn’t want to explain to your father why your nose is broken.” “If you don’t pull me to the ground again, my nose won’t be broken. Let’s just…train.” Jaina said impatiently. Kyp finally sighed and nodded. “Okay, I’m ready.” She attacked. ~~~~~~~~~~~~ After having a shower, Jaina laid awake in her bed for a long time. When they are as kind as you... Pictures of Kyp kept flashing through her mind. She could still feel his touch on her cheek Hell, why can’t this stop?! Jaina thought. She had no idea why she kept thinking about him. Okay, he was kind, polite and had charm, but… But what? Jaina frowned, confused. And deep down in her heart, she found the answer, the reason why she couldn’t stop thinking about him. She was in love. And love is something one can’t control, not even with the force. Suddenly she felt a warmth rising within her heart. She was in love. And it felt good. -----signature----- master to Cem_Fel and proud J/K shipper e-daughter to AzureAngel2 and DarthUncle and e-sis to Darth_Gangrenous e-mother to RevaDurron and her e-husband Darth_DSpice http://yun-harla.tripod.com http://freewebs.com/signedbygod
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Maggy Registered: Oct '04	Date Posted: 3/22/06 1:09pm Subject: RE: Not The Time To Cry (mainly J/K, some J/TK, L/M, H/L, A/T, Anni Captson) - Date Edited: 3/22/06 1:10pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Maggy
	great start, Chilla nice to see her end up with Kyp in the training and what a change that Luke is taking it up to train the Jedi in a rather quiet time and Mara is all kick butts ~ Mags ~ -----signature----- The Revenant - http://boards.theforce.net/a/b10477/28313064 - co authored with Jedi Ant "Maggy rawks " - YodaKenbi Proud Recipient of the Golden Elegos™
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mastermeg_0228 Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 3/22/06 1:23pm Subject: RE: Not The Time To Cry (mainly J/K, some J/TK, L/M, H/L, A/T, Anni Captson)
	yippie more K/J!!!!! A new thought entered Jaina’s mind, causing her to hold back a laugh. Mara and Corran had chosen her on purpose, but not to punish her, it was more a punishment for Kyp. hehehe, i loved this line! poor Kyppie. She was in love. And love is something one can’t control, not even with the force. YES!!!!!!! and ain't that the truth. one of my favorite lines: you can't help who you love. you're not supposed to. Suddenly she felt a warmth rising within her heart. She was in love. And it felt good. aaaah, great line!!!! wonderful start, so when do we get more???? and how bout PM list? meg -----signature----- My sarcasm is my best quality! Music is a total constant.... A song can take you back instantly to a moment, or a place, or even a person. If you can tell me where I got this quote from then you're enlightened! mage's muse!!! My friends call me Sparky
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JediMasterAmanda Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 3/22/06 1:27pm Subject: RE: Not The Time To Cry (mainly J/K, some J/TK, L/M, H/L, A/T, Anni Captson)
	Nice job Chilla. It's kinda interesting to see what will happen next. Tell me when you got the next chapter. -----signature----- Jedi Padawan--/---\--Trust in the Force "When we die, we die together." -Monkey D. Luffy "Remember, the Force will be with you...always." -Obi-Wan Kenobi "Good reason or not, no one messes with a friend of mine." -Shanks
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BurntTheMacaroni Registered: May '05	Date Posted: 3/22/06 1:32pm Subject: RE: Not The Time To Cry (mainly J/K, some J/TK, L/M, H/L, A/T, Anni Captson)
	Such a good story Chilla! An interesting twist on the Kyp and Jaina relationship! Cant wait for the next part! -----signature----- How many Corellians does it take to change a glowpanel? ... None! If the room's dark, you cant see us cheating at sabacc! Yub Yub Commander
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Alishu06 Registered: Mar '05	Date Posted: 3/22/06 3:06pm Subject: RE: Not The Time To Cry (mainly J/K, some J/TK, L/M, H/L, A/T, Anni Captson)
	This was really interesting, please put me on your pm list. -----signature----- Always Remeber that they fought and are fighting for your FREEDOM Master to Handmaiden_Azul and SKYWALKER024
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Chilla Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 3/22/06 10:31pm Subject: RE: Not The Time To Cry (mainly J/K, some J/TK, L/M, H/L, A/T, Anni Captson)
	Alishu06 posted: This was really interesting, please put me on your pm list. Thanks! You're on it. BurntTheMacaroni posted: Such a good story Chilla! An interesting twist on the Kyp and Jaina relationship! Cant wait for the next part! LOL, as my beta, you'll probably get it soon. JediMasterAmanda posted: Nice job Chilla. It's kinda interesting to see what will happen next. Tell me when you got the next chapter. Hi Amanda! Thanks for having a look and of course I'll tell you. mastermeg_0228 posted: yippie more K/J!!!!! A new thought entered Jaina’s mind, causing her to hold back a laugh. Mara and Corran had chosen her on purpose, but not to punish her, it was more a punishment for Kyp. hehehe, i loved this line! poor Kyppie. She was in love. And love is something one can’t control, not even with the force. YES!!!!!!! and ain't that the truth. one of my favorite lines: you can't help who you love. you're not supposed to. Suddenly she felt a warmth rising within her heart. She was in love. And it felt good. aaaah, great line!!!! wonderful start, so when do we get more???? and how bout PM list? meg Hm...I think you'll get more soon, did start working on the next chapter yesterday. But I'll let you know it when it's up. Thanks! Maggy posted: great start, Chilla nice to see her end up with Kyp in the training and what a change that Luke is taking it up to train the Jedi in a rather quiet time and Mara is all kick butts ~ Mags ~ Yes, I love Mara! And I think she would do something like that to prove her desease doesn't weaken her. Thanks! -----signature----- master to Cem_Fel and proud J/K shipper e-daughter to AzureAngel2 and DarthUncle and e-sis to Darth_Gangrenous e-mother to RevaDurron and her e-husband Darth_DSpice http://yun-harla.tripod.com http://freewebs.com/signedbygod
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Darth_Gangrenous Title: •Teh-Mole's Game Grinch •Retired StLFF CR Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 3/23/06 2:13am Subject: RE: Not The Time To Cry (mainly J/K, some J/TK, L/M, H/L, A/T, Anni Captson) - Date Edited: 3/23/06 2:39am (1 edits total) Edited By: Darth_Gangrenous
	A great start, Chilla. I want MORE. Please! Please e-mail or PM me when you do your updates. -----signature----- e-dad of s65horsey e-sonofAzureAngle2\|e-twinofEirate_rules e-bro of VaderD,Lissa,JE,Thrawn1786,Chilla,Blueeyes,SWF,TEE,Rilwen,Swan,Rabe,morri,Shaelyn,Allegra&Zap Master of Dar_manda Geriatric Ward suite 305
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AzureAngel2 Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 3/23/06 4:37am Subject: RE: Not The Time To Cry (mainly J/K, some J/TK, L/M, H/L, A/T, Anni Captson)
	"I can only agree with Frank here!" is very proud of her sweetie! "And also do put me on your PM list or... I make your hardly used mobile phone explode with SMS!" ... ... ... -----signature----- "There is good in him. I felt it." "Y a-t-il un coeur sous ton armure? Le mien est pur comme l'azure." Wife of DU & e-mom of DG Member of the GFFG
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Flowerlady Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 3/23/06 6:20am Subject: RE: Not The Time To Cry (mainly J/K, some J/TK, L/M, H/L, A/T, Anni Captson)
	Great start!! and an interesting twist to the Vong war and K/Jness... More soon.. May I please be on your PM list if you have one. Thanks... FL -----signature----- I used to dream of Kyp or Jag, now it's Edward Cullen...I blame Cyn and Saber.. Master to DanaeMariSkywalker, JediMasterArmada and PHGS_Weyr
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Chilla Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 3/23/06 6:57am Subject: RE: Not The Time To Cry (mainly J/K, some J/TK, L/M, H/L, A/T, Anni Captson)
	Flowerlady posted: Great start!! and an interesting twist to the Vong war and K/Jness... More soon.. May I please be on your PM list if you have one. Thanks... FL Yepp, you're on it! Thanks. AzureAngel2 posted: "I can only agree with Frank here!" is very proud of her sweetie! "And also do put me on your PM list or... I make your hardly used mobile phone explode with SMS!" ... ... ... Hi Mum! 'kay! Darth_Gangrenous posted: A great start, Chilla. I want MORE. Please! Please e-mail or PM me when you do your updates. Thanks so much Frank! You'll also get a PM. Okay, I've finished the second chapter, but still need to write it down with the computer and get it to my beta. So next post will be probably tommorrow. -----signature----- master to Cem_Fel and proud J/K shipper e-daughter to AzureAngel2 and DarthUncle and e-sis to Darth_Gangrenous e-mother to RevaDurron and her e-husband Darth_DSpice http://yun-harla.tripod.com http://freewebs.com/signedbygod
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brodiew Registered: Oct '05	Date Posted: 3/23/06 9:41am Subject: RE: Not The Time To Cry (mainly J/K, some J/TK, L/M, H/L, A/T, Anni Captson)
	Good start on this story, Chilla! I'm not opposed to a J/K pairing. I'm interested to see where you take it. I also enjoyed the dialogue between Kyp and Jaina. Kyp’s tried to dodge, but lost his balance. Trying to prevent himself from falling, he grasped onto her arm. Unfortunately he was already half-way down, causing Jaina to take a tumble. Although brief, I liked your action sequence. I think this might be an area for you to furhter explore. “But I wouldn’t want to explain to your father why your nose is broken.” “If you don’t pull me to the ground again, my nose won’t be broken. Let’s just…train.” Jaina said impatiently. Again, I really like you k/j dialogue. There is that sarcastic, irritated, sexual tension between them. Good work! -----signature----- Drabble Babble the Third: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/29083113/p1/?23
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SilSolo Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 3/23/06 9:57am Subject: RE: Not The Time To Cry (mainly J/K, some J/TK, L/M, H/L, A/T, Anni Captson)
	Wow nice start. -----signature----- http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/27517284/p1/?11 Like this quick sketch: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/32848083/ ? Then commission me. Prices are negotiable.
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Chilla Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 3/23/06 1:29pm Subject: RE: Not The Time To Cry (mainly J/K, some J/TK, L/M, H/L, A/T, Anni Captson)
	brodiew posted: Good start on this story, Chilla! I'm not opposed to a J/K pairing. I'm interested to see where you take it. I also enjoyed the dialogue between Kyp and Jaina. Kyp’s tried to dodge, but lost his balance. Trying to prevent himself from falling, he grasped onto her arm. Unfortunately he was already half-way down, causing Jaina to take a tumble. Although brief, I liked your action sequence. I think this might be an area for you to furhter explore. Thanks for stopping by, brodiew! Yeah, that action sequence.....I just can't survive without a bit action. But I don't really know how to write all of this in English. Again, all these fics here helped me a lot, I still remembered some action scenes and the vocabs they used. Small teaser for you: I've already planned a scene where Jaina fights against Vong, it will be a very special scene and also explaining the title. brodiew posted: “But I wouldn’t want to explain to your father why your nose is broken.” “If you don’t pull me to the ground again, my nose won’t be broken. Let’s just…train.” Jaina said impatiently. Again, I really like you k/j dialogue. There is that sarcastic, irritated, sexual tension between them. Good work! That's my fav part in this chapter. I love sarcastic comments, poor Jaina has got my quick tongue and strange sense of humor. SilSolo posted: Wow nice start. Thanks! I'm glad you like it. -----signature----- master to Cem_Fel and proud J/K shipper e-daughter to AzureAngel2 and DarthUncle and e-sis to Darth_Gangrenous e-mother to RevaDurron and her e-husband Darth_DSpice http://yun-harla.tripod.com http://freewebs.com/signedbygod
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Chilla Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 3/25/06 2:50am Subject: RE: Not the Time to Cry (mainly J/K, some J/TK, L/M, H/L, A/T, Anni Captson)
	New chapter for you, hope you'll like it! Chapter 2 Mara woke up with a big headache, but far more surprising was the white room she was in, and the white bed she was laying on. I hate hospitals! She thought. Why can’t they use different colors?! That white is totally boring. She grinned. Maybe that’s why people die in here, this color kills them. Green is much better. She looked around and found a worried looking Luke Skywalker sitting on a chair near her, wearing a set of pajamas. Pajamas? “I’m glad your finally awake. You has me scared when you collapsed-“ “I collapsed?” “Yes, when you came back from the training program you are leading.” “Oh.” The disease, it must have attacked me again. “Mara, I don’t want you to continue with the training. It’s too dangerous, your body can’t fight against the disease any longer if you keep running yourself dry. Please... Reconsider?” “No!” Mara stared at her husband angrily, bright fire burning in her eyes. “I won’t surrender to this disease! I’m not that weak!” Luke sighed. He know he couldn’t win against her, she was too stubborn. Like her apprentice. Wait! Jaina, that’s it. “Please, if you want to keep it up, skip a few lessons. You can’t do it everyday, but maybe every second would be a good solution. Jaina can also only come every second because of her flight lessons with the rouges.” Mara bit her lips. She didn’t want to skip any of the lessons, but her body could really use a rest. And my son. I can’t risk his health. She nodded slowly. “But I still don’t like it, Skywalker.” “I know, but you don’t have to.” While they walked back to their quarters, Luke wondered about the disease. Why did it attack now? Usually this only happens when Vong are near… ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jaina still ran around the following days with a big happiness inside of her. Her friends did notice something different about her, Jaina had begun to act strange, doing things she hadn’t before. But yet she seemed to be very relaxed, more patient than ever and seemed to have found inner peace. She felt like a butterfly; one time she even went down a corridor humming. Well, usually that’s not a catastrophe, but at that time a young lieutenant suddenly appeared from a side corridor and stared at her in astonishment as she went by. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jaina sat at a table in her parent’s apartment on the Ralroost, looking at her brother. Anakin sat across her and had just finished his lunch, a terrible self-made soup. Both looked serious, neither showed any emotions. Slowly Jaina leaned forwards without flinching and continued to come closer to the 14 years old boy. She just wanted to know how he would react. If he ever would react. Moving very slowly, Anakin lifted his hands, formed a gun with them and shot his sister without blinking. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jaina went down the corridor to the pilot's quarters happily. She had finished her flight training for the day as one of the best and was quite satisfied. But one big question still remained and hunted her since she had woken up. Should she tell him? Yes, he deserves to know. She thought. No, better don’t tell him. Maybe I should… Hm. Maybe, but how do I tell him about my feelings? I can’t just run to him and say: “Hi Kyppie, I’ve fallen in love with you. How do you feel about me?” Kriff! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Five mintes later she was in her room and still hadn’t found an answer. “Sticks?” Anni Captson’s, her wingmates voice cut through her thoughts. “Wanna come and play sabbacc with me against Colonel Darklighter?” Jaina laughed. “He has enough Jedi friends to know he can’t win.” “We’ll see.” Challenged Anni her smilingly. “Anni?” “Yes?” “How…how does one tell the person he loves about his feelings?” “Ah! Now I know what’s up with you!” Anni grinned. “I’m not sure, but I’ve heard it’s easier to write it down. Why don’t you try a letter?” Jaina burst into a smile and hugged her friend. It felt like a good idea. “Deal!” “Then let’s go!” Anni exclaimed and took Jaina’s hand. They left their room together, ready to make Colonel Darklighter a poor man. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Later that evening, Jaina stared at the datapad on her desk. She was sure this was a good idea, but she simply couldn’t find the words to express her feelings. "Dear Kyp"? No! To formal. She deleted it. "Hi Kyp?" No. Sounds more like it would have been written to a friend, not someone I love. Jaina pressed the clear button again. "Kyppie"? Forget it. He’ll kill you for that nickname. Damn! She looked around in her room, hoping to find the missing words there. But she could only see the two beds, her’s and Anni’s, two chairs, the desk, a lamp and a cupboard for their clothes. No words hanging in the air and telling her what to write. She sighed. Anni came to her quietly and started to massage her back. Jaina leaned back and tried to relax. Looking up at Anni’s face, she whispered sadly: “I don’t know what to write, Anni. Can you help me?” “I’m afraid I can’t. That’s a thing only between you and the man you love. I’m sorry.” Jaina stared at the blank datapad. “Maybe I should find another way to tell him or maybe I should just wait and see whether he feels something for me at all.” “Do you want to tell me about him?” Anni asked softly. “Yes, I think I want to.” Then Jaina started to tell her about Kyp, the rouge but yet so kind Jedi. She told Anni about his smile which had caught her heart and about his brilliant green eyes, in which she always got lost when she looked at him. When she had finished, Anni was quiet for a long time. Then she smiled. “I’m so happy for you, Jaina. You deserve someone good.” She said in a low, moved voice. “Oh Anni!” Jaina exclaimed and jumped up to embrace the young woman. “Thank you” she whispered. But despite what Anni had told her, Jaina felt bad. Too bad for Kyp; he deserved a better person. The warm feeling inside her chest turned to a cold knot. -----signature----- master to Cem_Fel and proud J/K shipper e-daughter to AzureAngel2 and DarthUncle and e-sis to Darth_Gangrenous e-mother to RevaDurron and her e-husband Darth_DSpice http://yun-harla.tripod.com http://freewebs.com/signedbygod
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