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Anakin7624 Registered: Jun '08	Date Posted: 6/19/08 5:37pm Subject: Just a little question. - Date Edited: 6/19/08 6:12pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Jedi Trace
	I am currently writing a AU fanfic about what might have happened if Anakin had killed Palpatine in ROTS. I trying to keep Anakin as close to his flaws as possible without making him a tad OCC. So far do you think have I written Anakin in the right way? http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/live_preview.php?storyid=4133307 -----signature----- Chargers 2008 Super Bowl Champions! R.I.P Bobby Kennedy
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JEDIGUNSHIP Title: C&G Game Host Registered: May '08	Date Posted: 6/19/08 5:53pm Subject: RE: Just a little question.
	I couldn't read it; they ask you to login. I'd read it, but the thing wouldn't let me in. -----signature----- Blue and yellow make a green lightsaber. How do you get red out of blue? Council Member in the New Jedi Trials/ Commander-in-Chief of the Rebel Alliance Addicted to Rock Band 2 and Proud of It! SWC Secret Rebel '09 On Winter Break
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Anakin7624 Registered: Jun '08	Date Posted: 6/19/08 5:56pm Subject: RE: Just a little question.
	JEDIGUNSHIP posted: I couldn't read it; they ask you to login. I'd read it, but the thing wouldn't let me in. Oops! I am sorry here it is. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4133307/1/Star_Wars_A_Republic_Crisis -----signature----- Chargers 2008 Super Bowl Champions! R.I.P Bobby Kennedy
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Idrelle_Miocovani Registered: Feb '05	Date Posted: 6/19/08 5:57pm Subject: RE: Just a little question.
	The Beta Reader Index is a great place to either find and PM a beta, or put in a request for a beta. Betas can help you with characterization and other aspects of your fics. -----signature----- Nat is my Officially Official Muse Proud Member of Slytherin. The JC House Cup is controlling my life! DarthIshtar's Padawan
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Jedi Trace Title: • SouthEast RSA • FanFiction Manager Registered: Dec '99	Date Posted: 6/19/08 6:11pm Subject: RE: Just a little question.
	Welcome! We do not allow threads to review individual fics in this forum. You are welcome to post your story on the Saga board. For constructive criticism, you can request a beta, as Idrelle suggested, and you can also discuss Anakin’s characterization here. Locked and redirected. -----signature----- "Laughter, like love, has power to survive the worst things life has to offer." - Harry Dresden
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