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brodiew Registered: Oct '05	Date Posted: 2/27/08 10:10pm Subject: What Am I Even Doing Here? A humorous poem (Luke POV arriving on Dagoba) Responses 3/3/08! - Date Edited: 3/3/08 12:44pm (9 edits total) Edited By: brodiew
	A/N: This is a hastily written, uneven mess, but I had a lot of fun writing it. Read at your owner risk. But, if you do, I hope you enjoy. What Am I Even Doing Here? Shooting through the atmosphere, I have no idea what I'm doing here. Landing heavy with a SPLASH, My eyes are jolted by the FLASH of shorting systems. Ship is sinking in the muck Giving me no time to truck With what I don't NEED. Droid goes flying in to the trees, Emitting a long, uneasy wheeze. I float him back with relative ease His only reply a nasty sneeze. Sitting in my little camp, Feeling something cold and damp, On my butt. Though my landing was severely botched, I can’t shake the felling I'm being watched. Suddenly, I'm feeling famished, And, as I reach for a sandwich, What before my eye appears, but a little gremlin with giant ears. He makes his way right for my food, This old and green and funny dude. I really have no time to waste As he rifles through my stuff with haste. He manically throws my things about As if a being with heavy clout, Muttering nonsensically all the while, Then flashing me a mischievous smile. I tell him who I'm looking for, But all that he can say is "more" As he struts across the jungle floor to kick me. He says he knows whom I’m here to see As he shuffles into the forest with glee. He waves at me, a command to follow But, in my mind, I’d rather wallow In my disappointment. Suddenly serious, he catches my ear, As he rambles on about my fear, Saying that the one is near To tell me what I’m even doing here. -----signature----- “You were right about one thing, Master. The negotiations were short.”
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KELIA Title: The Pretty in Pink Fan Fic Manager Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 2/28/08 12:10pm Subject: RE: What Am I Even Doing Here? A humorous poem (Luke POV arriving on Dagoba)
	He manically throws my things about As if a being with heavy clout, Muttering nonsensically all the while, Then flashing me a mischievous smile. I loved that part! The whole poem was wonderful -----signature----- "Do or do not, there is no try." Master Yoda A Light In The Darkness: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/28150602/p1/?8 NaNaWriMo Progress: 11,018
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DarthIshtar Title: Former CR Registered: Mar '01	Date Posted: 2/28/08 12:30pm Subject: RE: What Am I Even Doing Here? A humorous poem (Luke POV arriving on Dagoba)
	Very funny/Seussian. -----signature----- "I feel like a more down-to-earth Pink 5 when I'm writing Leah. Same attitude, less lip gloss." ~Me on how to get in the right mindset for Twilight fanfic.
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LilyHobbitJedi Registered: Aug '05	Date Posted: 2/28/08 1:01pm Subject: RE: What Am I Even Doing Here? A humorous poem (Luke POV arriving on Dagoba)
	I loved this, it was simply hilarious! Suddenly, I'm feeling famished, And, as I reach for a sandwich, What before my eye appears, but a little gremlin with giant ears. That's one way to describe him! Wonderful poem! -----signature----- Proud Master to eboneya & Alassë Eärfalas! Everybody Lies- House/SW Crossover! http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/28032689/r28039379/ A Light In The Darkness http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b1047
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Meredith_Kenobi Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 2/28/08 7:28pm Subject: RE: What Am I Even Doing Here? A humorous poem (Luke POV arriving on Dagoba)
	Hee hee! That was great. My favorite part: Droid goes flying in to the trees, Emitting a long uneasy wheeze. I float him back with relative ease His only reply a nasty sneeze. -----signature----- Proud to be ZaraValinor's Padawan Delighted to be brodiew's Master
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dancing_star Registered: Feb '07	Date Posted: 2/28/08 7:33pm Subject: RE: What Am I Even Doing Here? A humorous poem (Luke POV arriving on Dagoba)
	Hee! This was great, brodie! I read it earlier, but I've kind of been in lurk-mode lately. I've been so busy with school. Just wanted to tell you great job! -----signature----- God bless America and our troops. "The LORD gives strength to his people. The LORD blesses his people with peace." Ps 29:11 ~~~ "Darkest Hours, Brightest Hope" (fic below) http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/29811085/p1/
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JediKaren Registered: Apr '07	Date Posted: 2/28/08 8:58pm Subject: RE: What Am I Even Doing Here? A humorous poem (Luke POV arriving on Dagoba)
	lol good one! -----signature----- Bring Light Into Darkness Anakin's Introduction to Yoda's Stew NEW story: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/29867773/p1/?0 Healing Hearts: http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/28282728/p1
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brodiew Registered: Oct '05	Date Posted: 3/3/08 12:44pm Subject: RE: What Am I Even Doing Here? A humorous poem (Luke POV arriving on Dagoba)
	KELIA: Thank you, Kelia. I have always loved Yoda’s introduction in ESB. His routing through Luke’s provisions cracked me up every time. DarthIshtar: Thanks, Ish. It is rather scatterbrained! LilyHobbitJedi: Thanks for reading, Lily. I’m glad you enjoyed it. I decided not to call him a troll, which is another way to describe him. Meredith_Kenobi: Thank you, Master. R2’s Sneeze was a little more than just that… dancing_star: Thanks for stopping in, star! JediKaren: I’m glad you had fun with it, JediKaren. -----signature----- “You were right about one thing, Master. The negotiations were short.”
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Zonoma Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 4/29/08 5:03pm Subject: RE: What Am I Even Doing Here? A humorous poem (Luke POV arriving on Dagoba) Responses 3/3/08!
	Haha! Poor Luke, so confuzzled. Poor Yoda, with such an impossible student. -----signature----- http://zonoma.livejournal.com/
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