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Broken Promises **Dear Diary 2007 Challenge** Thanks for the nom!
Jade_Pilot
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Dec '05
Date Posted:
1/3/07 4:43pm
Subject:
Broken Promises **Dear Diary 2007 Challenge** Thanks for the nom!
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Title: Broken Promises
Author: Jade Pilot
Characters: OC, Luke and some of the usual.
Genre: Drama/Angst, AU
Summary: Written for the Dear Diary 2007 challenge. Tani Dahl (OC) journals her life and experiences on Tatooine with a certain farmboy.
A/N: Thanks to WyoJedi for the artwork!
**Thanks to everyone for voting Tani Dahl as Best OC 2008!
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Journal entry # 11,756:
After so many years, I’ve decided that the best thing to do would be to make contact. I know…I’ve said this so many times in the past that even I don’t believe me anymore. But this time I mean it. I’m not just fantasizing about seeing him again, wondering how he’ll receive me—if he’ll even recognize me. This time I’m really going to go see him and tell him what I’ve longed to tell him for so many years.
This doesn’t come without risks. He has a whole new life now, a wife and a Jedi Order to maintain. But some things were left unsaid and he has a right to hear the words denied him back on Tatooine…when we were both young and naïve. The question is—can my heart withstand the onslaught of emotions that seeing him again will cause?
It doesn’t matter. Sometimes you just have to do the right thing no matter what the cost. I have been a coward for much too long and now…now I intend to remedy that. The truth will be told—and our lives will never be the same. I just pray that Luke will understand and forgive me. After all, I was his first wife.
…to be continued.
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"It is in giving that we receive." ~ St. Francis of Assisi
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G__Anakin
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Date Posted:
1/3/07 4:46pm
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RE: Broken Promises **Dear Diary 2007 Challenge** OC, Luke and others.
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!
Looks cool! Do you mind giving me PMs when you update? Please!
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ginchy
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Date Posted:
1/3/07 4:58pm
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RE: Broken Promises **Dear Diary 2007 Challenge** OC, Luke and others.
Ack!
*peeks out through fingers*
What a start there, gal.
Can't wait to see more!
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ginchy's gambit:
http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/29089731/p1
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Date Posted:
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EEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!!!!!!!! HIS FIRST WIFE!!!
The author deserves a thwacking for that.
No, maybe not. Apparently he's wised up and married the bestest lady i.e., Mara.
Please PM me with updates?
I will enjoy this, I can't help it.
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ginchy & IJJ: yours especially
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PRINCESSCAMBRIA
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Date Posted:
1/3/07 5:39pm
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RE: Broken Promises **Dear Diary 2007 Challenge** OC, Luke and others.
It's a great start!
I know you would take the plunge.
Looking forward to more of the first wife of the Grand Husband.
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The Innocent Diva Twin
"Beautiful Temptress of Pilots" - adaml83
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brodiew
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Date Posted:
1/3/07 6:50pm
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RE: Broken Promises **Dear Diary 2007 Challenge** OC, Luke and others.
Wow, Jade! A shocker out of the gate! I like then idea of Luke having a wife on Tatooine. Wife?
I really look forward to more.
What is she going to do? What is here as yet unstated motivation?
I haven't been hangin in Beyond lately, but I glad I stopped over or I would have missed this. As always, your lyrical narrative is captivating and easy to engage. I'll take a PM when you start dishing them out.
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MirandaFair
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Date Posted:
1/3/07 6:58pm
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RE: Broken Promises **Dear Diary 2007 Challenge** OC, Luke and others.
Whoa-o-o-o-ooooo!
Stop the presses!
*does a double-take*
After all, I was his first wife.
I love this already! You've hooked me, my friend.
Cannot wait for more. It'll be interesting to learn the answers to the mysteries. I'd love to be included in the PM list. Pretty please.
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Jedi Trace
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Date Posted:
1/3/07 8:30pm
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RE: Broken Promises **Dear Diary 2007 Challenge** OC, Luke and others.
Duuuude.......... This looks fascinating! Please add me to your PM list.
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"There are plenty of people who pray for peace, but if praying were enough it would have come to be." ~ Jewel
“Umo ji muna, Cade mojo.
” ~ Jan Duursema
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divapilot
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Date Posted:
1/4/07 3:14am
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RE: Broken Promises **Dear Diary 2007 Challenge** OC, Luke and others.
Oh, cool!
A first wife!? Who even knew the landspeeder
had
a backseat? (And I've seen the real deal at the Boston Museum of Science.)
This is one story I have to read. Please put me on your soon-to-be ginormous PM list, sister pilot!
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verybusy
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Date Posted:
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RE: Broken Promises **Dear Diary 2007 Challenge** OC, Luke and others.
*gulp*
....and I had nearly missed this....
... I guess I have to read this as well, so can I have a PM too?
cheers,
VeryBusy
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Date Posted:
1/4/07 7:45am
Subject:
RE: Broken Promises **Dear Diary 2007 Challenge** OC, Luke and others.
Incredible!
I love this idea!
It doesn’t matter. Sometimes you just have to do the right thing no matter what the cost. I have been a coward for much too long and now…now I intend to remedy that. The truth will be told—and our lives will never be the same. I just pray that Luke will understand and forgive me. After all, I was his first wife
.
Can I request a PM too?
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WyoJedi
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Date Posted:
1/4/07 8:41am
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PM, PM, PM, PM, PM!
Wow! That was a shocker of an opening. I cannot wait to see what comes from this reunion. You have really opened up a world of possibilities with just a few words... Amazing job!
Cheers,
Wyo
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Jade_Pilot
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Date Posted:
1/4/07 5:19pm
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RE: Broken Promises **Dear Diary 2007 Challenge** OC, Luke and others.
A/N: Well I may just get the reputation as the only L/M shipper who keeps writing romantic Luke AUs with other women.
G Anakin
: Surprised ya' didn't I? I've added you to the PM list. Thanks for reading.
ginchy
: Still speaking to me? Thanks for reading, girl!
Jade eyes
:
ouch! ouch! ouch!
Enough with the wacking! Hang in there...I promise an interesting ride.
PrincessC
: Okay...this is all your fault! Thanks for reading sis!
brodiew
: Thank you! Shocked ya' huh?
Miranda Fair
: HeeHee! Gotcha! Yes the mysteries will slowly unfold. Thanks for reading.
JediTrace
: Yes, duuuuuuude! It will surely be a killer ride, girlfriend. Thanks for reading.
divapilot
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A first wife!? Who even knew the landspeeder had a backseat?
Funny stuff, sister pilot! But there's always Beggar's Canyon. Thanks for reading.
verybusy
: Thank you for reading! I've added you to the PM list.
VaderLVR
: Thanks Vadey! I heard you're doing 2 diaries???? Girl! Where do you get the energy!
WyoJedi
: Shocked you didn't I? heeheehee!
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Date Posted:
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hee, I'm smarter this time around and kept reading.
Great beginning, gal!
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