Author Topic: Kaleidoscope. Updated 22 Jan
leia_naberrie  3737 posts
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Date Posted: 4/28/06 5:14am Subject: Kaleidoscope. Updated 22 Jan - Date Edited: 1/22 8:36am (74 edits total) Edited By: leia_naberrie
Title: Kaleidoscope
Timeframe: Episode 2-time
Characters: Darth Vader, Padmé Amidala, Obi-Wan Kenobi
Genre: AU. Drama. Romance. Horror. Supernatural.
Summary: A long, long time ago, in a galaxy that never was, a Sith apprentice named Vader hunts for something that should never be his.
Disclaimer: This is George's sandbox. I'm just haunting it. skull

Notes #1: A sequel of sorts to Through A Mirror Darkly
Notes #2: Both 'Kaleidoscope' and 'Through A Mirror Darkly' are inspired by the Star Trek: Enterprise episode and AUs everywhere. Other than that, I have no idea of where this is going but it might be fun to find out together.

Notes #3: Thanks to the lovely and talented Meredith Brownen Mallory for this beautiful cover art and banner art that she made me for Christmas! dancing dancing


The banner art version is pretty huge but if you want to see it in more detail, click here.

 

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leia_naberrie  3737 posts
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Date Posted: 4/28/06 5:20am Subject: RE: Kaleidoscope, Summary of 'Through A Mirror Darkly' - Date Edited: 1/22 8:36am (24 edits total) Edited By: leia_naberrie
Summary of Through A Mirror Darkly

A long time ago, in a galaxy that never was, an Empire of millenia reaches the peak of its powers. It is a time of peace and prosperity for the obedient serfs of the Empire; and for the not-so-obedient, it is a time that always ends quickly.

Against this backdrop of peace, prosperity and order, Darth Vader - Dark Lord of the Sith, Apprentice and Heir to the Emperor - hunts down the one thing that a Sith should never, ever claim.


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Erm... Trust me when I say that the story is even more vague than the summary. tongue

Unless otherwise mentioned, all the events are following chronologically from the end of 'Through A Mirror Darkly'. devil



Chapter List
1, Waking Dreams/Broken Wings
2, Inferno
3, Demon in A Cage
4, Waking Dreams, II
5, Broken Wings II
6, Inferno II/Awakening
7, The Pilgrimage
8, The Changing of the Guard I
9, The Haunting
10, The Hunting
11, Broken Wings, Broken Feet.
12, Inferno III
13, Fire on Water
14, Inferno IV
15, Inferno V/Desert Fusion
16, The Haunting II
17, Demon in A Cage II
18, Devoveo
19, The Haunting III
20, The Hunting II
21, Broken Bonds
22, Broken Bonds II
23, Banishment
24, Desert Rain
25, Ejima
26, Prodigal
27, Legacy
28, Token
29, Contemno
30, Affirmation
31, Rage
32, Appeasement
33, En Passant
34, Changeling
35, Paradox
36, Pomegranate
37, A Show of Hands
38, Slight of Hand I
39, Slight of Hand II
40, Slight of Hand III
41, So It Begins





kaleidoscope.
ka·lei·do·scope
n.

A tube-shaped optical instrument that is rotated to produce a succession of symmetrical designs by means of mirrors reflecting the constantly changing patterns made by bits of colored glass at one end of the tube.
A constantly changing set of colors.
A series of changing phases or events: a kaleidoscope of illusions.


[Greek kalos, beautiful + eidos, form.]

 

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leia_naberrie  3737 posts
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Date Posted: 4/28/06 5:32am Subject: RE: Kaleidoscope, Chapter 1. Waking Dreams/Broken Wings - Date Edited: 1/8/07 2:06am (6 edits total) Edited By: leia_naberrie
Thanks to the extraordinarily talented rose rocketscientist rose for this amazing art. It was made for Chapter 13 of 'Mirror' and it's just as excellent for Chapter 1 of 'Kaleidoscope'.

The Dreamer & The Prize

1, Waking Dreams/Broken Wings


The bounty hunter arrived almost an hour after the appointed time for the rendezvous.

Vader watched the Mandalorian descend from his ship and breathed.

Jango Fett did not bother to apologize. “I have your bounty.”

The hot rush of anticipation soon to be sated, was more than enough to counter the long, cold, furious hour.

The exchange was quick. Vader gave the suspicious mercenary his coins, almost smiling at the thought that Fett was trying to ‘secure’ himself from him, Vader. If Vader had the mind too, he would have destroyed the bounty hunter with, literally, his mind alone.

Then --- his prize was brought forward. Fett carried her over his shoulder, and brought her to Vader. As she was placed in his arms, he could feel the rush of blood behind his ears, could feel the soft breath from her body, his every senses had come alive, magnified.

“What did you do to her?” he asked suspiciously, feeling the unnaturalness of her slumber acutely.

“I fed her.” Vader’s eyes all but drilled holes into Fett’s helmet; quickly, the bounty hunter elaborated: “Harmless sedative. She’ll be awake in an hour or less.”

The Sith turned his eyes from the bounty hunter to his prize. He looked into her face and felt his soul shatter with realization.

Mine.

The bounty hunter’s ship lifted from the ground, disappeared into the air above.

Vader hardly noticed. He had fallen to his knees, carefully placing her body so that her head rested against the crook of his arm, and his free hand could touch her.

Could touch her. He hesitated, his mind shouting the words at him – “Unworthy! Monster!” – and his fingers shook where they hovered inches from her cheeks. He could feel her breath against his fingertips.

“You’re mine,” he whispered, still not touching her. The words sounded hollow in his head and he felt anger and fear grip him. His hand left its undecided position above her face, and skimmed over the line of her cloak, running along the cloth until he found her wrist. With swift determination – knowing that if he hesitated, he would lose his nerve – he gripped it hard, feeling the fine bones in her hand, binding her to him.

“You’re mine!” He shouted furiously, bending so low over her that his hair scraped against the pale skin of her forehead. Tears filled his throat and he swallowed hard. “You belong to me!”

She stirred in his arms, murmuring something, but she did not wake.

The little murmur was his undoing. Her voice, so soft, so sweet, so pure.

You monster. You vile, murderous, damned –

He closed his mind to his own counsel and he captured all that soft, sweet, purity with his mouth.


~‘’~


She fell out of sleep, shaking violently.

“Padmé? Padmé, are you alright?”

The hand reached for her, and wildly, she struck at it, feeling the claustrophobia of a caged animal.

There was the rustle of clothes as more people came to her.

Strong arms went round her, holding her against a broad chest until she had stilled.

“Shhh… Shhh…”

Slowly, consciousness came to her. A familiar room, high walls, wide, open windows. Not a landing platform high above Coruscant where a thief had claimed her.

“Wake up. It was only a bad dream.”

She nodded bleakly, tears filling her eyes.

Soft hair brushing against her forehead.

She pulled away from the restraining hold and her hands flew to her head, brushing away the sensation like clinging cobwebs on her skin. She looked at her hands and froze. Slowly, she lowered them to her lap.

Her friends, her charges flocked around her on the bed.

“…safe here…”

“…back to sleep…”

Their voices rose and fell around her, like the beating wings on the humanoid creatures on Iego but Padmé paid them no heed. All her focus was on her own hands, now spread open, pink against her white gown.

Like flowers, the bruises were blossoming on her wrist.



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Star_Angel  4775 posts
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Date Posted: 4/28/06 6:06am Subject: RE: Kaleidoscope (Darth Vader Thriller. PT. AU)
hugs leia for starting this, it looks awesome and I can't wait to read more.

And what a creepy begining worried .

Thanx for the pm hugs and please keep me on the pm list praying .

 

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rocketscientist  783 posts
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Date Posted: 4/28/06 6:19am Subject: RE: Kaleidoscope (Darth Vader Thriller. PT. AU)
I know there are other fics I should be responding to first - but just like a kid who's offered her druthers, I'll eat the candy first! hehe! Well I for one didn't think the start was vague at all grin

So what I'm wondering is - was she dreaming her dream, or his dream? and is this the present or the past? Please don't tell me! Let me figure it out! With most authors these questions would be taken for granted but I know that's a mistake with you! mischief

All her focus was on her own hands, now spread open, pink against her white gown.

Like flowers, the bruises were blossoming on her wrist.


thinking huummm....

 

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Gina  3879 posts
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Date Posted: 4/28/06 6:35am Subject: RE: Kaleidoscope (Darth Vader Thriller. PT. AU)
shock Wow! Such an eerie, intriguing beginning.

Their voices rose and fell around her, like the beating wings on the humanoid creatures on Iego but Padmé paid them no heed. All her focus was on her own hands, now spread open, pink against her white gown.

Like flowers, the bruises were blossoming on her wrist.


*shivers* Creepy!! Can't wait to see where you're taking us with this one.

If you have a PM list, add me to it! grin

 

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geo3  2149 posts
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Date Posted: 4/28/06 7:13am Subject: RE: Kaleidoscope (Darth Vader Thriller. PT. AU)
AHHHHHH!!!!!! It has begun!!!!!! At last!

And what an opening chapter. Utterly chilling and thrilling.

“You’re mine!” He shouted furiously, bending so low over her that his hair scraped against the pale skin of her forehead. Tears filled his throat and he swallowed hard. “You belong to me!”

She stirred in his arms, murmuring something, but she did not wake.

The little murmur was his undoing. Her voice, so soft, so sweet, so pure.

You monster. You vile, murderous, damned –

He closed his mind to his own counsel and he captured all that soft, sweet, purity with his mouth.



If that isn't the epitomy of dramatic conflict, I'd like to know what is!

Greedy. Cannot wait for more. Just can't!

 

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Daenarrah  968 posts
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Date Posted: 4/28/06 7:47am Subject: RE: Kaleidoscope (Darth Vader Thriller. PT. AU)
This opening chapter was creepy and eerie and chilling.

You show Vader's possessiveness towards Padmé so well - it's chilling. I have to ask too whose dreams was it really - hers or Vader's? Was he sending it to her?

The concern of others tells me this hasn't been the first time she's dreamed like this? Or has it?

Then to see the bruises blossoming on her wrist. Okay, something tells me this is all Vader's doing, trying to get to her in another way since he couldn't the way he wanted to the first time.

 

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Vivid_Scripts  933 posts
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Date Posted: 4/28/06 12:57pm Subject: RE: Kaleidoscope (Darth Vader Thriller. PT. AU)
creepy. very.
Like flowers, the bruises were blossoming on her wrist.

If you clutch something too tightly, you break it.

continue soon, I'd like to see where this goes.

 

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Amidala66  1514 posts
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Date Posted: 4/28/06 6:34pm Subject: RE: Kaleidoscope (Darth Vader Thriller. PT. AU)
This is haunting and cool at the same time.

You have intrigued me again with your wonderful prose.
Please add me to your pm list when you make one. praying

 

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jedi_princess18  875 posts
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Date Posted: 4/28/06 6:44pm Subject: RE: Kaleidoscope (Darth Vader Thriller. PT. AU)
So glad you're doing a sequel!! happy

Loved the beginning- can't wait for more!

Please add me to your PM list!

 

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Charmisjess  611 posts
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Date Posted: 4/28/06 6:52pm Subject: RE: Kaleidoscope (Darth Vader Thriller. PT. AU)
*shudder* Oh, so dark and beautiful. You... *stares* made me like Padme. shock A lot.

I think my favorite part of this was your language. It was absolutely brilliant. Words like beating wings, the bruises like flowers... all simple, gorgeous images, which are stunningly hearbreaking mingled with her pain.

Great work, and I love the title. happy

 

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_ThatJediScum_  581 posts
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Date Posted: 4/29/06 1:31am Subject: RE: Kaleidoscope (Darth Vader Thriller. PT. AU)
So, are we getting a glimpse of the other side of the mirror?
Very well done. Please keep the PMs coming. grin

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Padlei  1030 posts
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Date Posted: 4/29/06 7:27am Subject: RE: Kaleidoscope (Darth Vader Thriller. PT. AU)
You did it! grin I was so awaiting the sequel...

And it's such a great start once again. applause I'm really intrigued and I love how you get into Vader's head. I'm a little bit confused over the timeline thinking but that's not a bad thing, you always leave me wondering. happy

I can't wait for what's next.

Oh and please, put me on the PM list. happy

 

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DarthNaughtious  281 posts
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Date Posted: 4/29/06 2:02pm Subject: RE: Kaleidoscope (Darth Vader Thriller. PT. AU) - Date Edited: 4/29/06 2:09pm (2 edits total) Edited By: DarthNaughtious
This is a wonderful start! Very haunting.

I got the impression that they were sharing a dream, and a perspective. I wonder if Padme's perspective will be altered by her voyage into Vader's thoughts. And I hope Vader never dreams about killing her, judging by what happened when he dreamt of merely grabbing her wrist too hard.

 

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Mirik  146 posts
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Date Posted: 4/30/06 11:01am Subject: RE: Kaleidoscope (Darth Vader Thriller. PT. AU)
)) love the story and would like to be on the pm list, plz ))

 

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