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Remember When It Rained (JA, Qui and Obi, AU, angst, hurt-comfort) CHAP 14!! Feb 15th
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Lady_Snow_Kaguya
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Jun '05
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2/4/06 9:52pm
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RE: Remember When It Rained (JA, QUI/OBI, AU, angst, hurt-comfort) chapter 7!! 04/02/06
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“You frightened me” He whispered softly to his apprentice’s ear.
Obi-Wan let out a mocking but affectionate laugh.
“Gee Master, I didn’t know you were afraid of ghosts”
Glad being dead doesn't affect his humor....XD
mush! yay!
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Jedi_Tigris
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2/5/06 11:48am
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RE: Remember When It Rained (JA, QUI/OBI, AU, angst, hurt-comfort) chapter 7!! 04/02/06
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Ch 6 - I wonder what all those voices were. Some kind of warning from the Force? 
Ch 7 - Nice peek into Qui's thoughts. I'm so happy he finally realizes what he's been doing.  Obi's gone?  The Force couldn't want Obi back already, could it?
Ch 8 - Ah, good, Obi isn't quite gone yet.  Love that he still has that sense of humor. Yay, they've got the bond open again! 
Great job, and thanks for the pms!
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Sarabi
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2/5/06 11:54am
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RE: Remember When It Rained (JA, QUI/OBI, AU, angst, hurt-comfort) chapter 7!! 04/02/06
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Wow!
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I have a bad feeling about this
If they find us,they will grind us into tiny pieces and blast us into oblivion
Another pathetic lifeform
You were right about one thing Master : the negotiations were short
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MASTER_KAYM
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2/5/06 12:46pm
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RE: Remember When It Rained (JA, QUI/OBI, AU, angst, hurt-comfort) chapter 7!! 04/02/06
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-Darksaber- : Thanks
___Sithspawn___ : Thanks indeed 
micky-nikki : Thank you!!  I really try to do a good story with this.
Bastet : Well, if Obi had really disappeared, the story wouldn't have been good anymore I'm glad you loved the part with the bond, but I wish I would have done it with better descriptions. I do my best, but it's not as easy when you do not know English as well as French
kenobiwanobi : I'm glad you're still loving this
Gkilkenny : I wasn't to put that ghost joke there, but I couldn't get it oou of my mind, so I'm happy that you liked it!
Lady_Snow_Kaguya : Yes, mush, WOOHOOOOO! I love mush! 
Jedi_Tigris : A really special thank you to you Jedi_Tigris , for beta-reading me, I guess I needed that And thanks for your review of the 3 chapters
Sarabi : Wow, you read all this today?? Well thanks! I hope you don't think it's too mushy
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Star_Drifter
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2/5/06 4:45pm
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RE: Remember When It Rained (JA, QUI/OBI, AU, angst, hurt-comfort) chapter 7!! 04/02/06
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What happened was totally unexpected. The great wall crashed down completely, leaving the bond as wide opened as it never was. Their souls connected, literally melting together. The thoughts of one became theirs, the feelings were not distinguished, neither were the minds. They fused completely together.
That is really up close and personal!
Nice update!
Can't wait to see what happens at the Temple! 
Star
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SakuraTsukikage
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2/5/06 5:26pm
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This just keeps getting more interesting.
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MASTER_KAYM
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2/10/06 8:21pm
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RE: Remember When It Rained (JA, QUI/OBI, AU, angst, hurt-comfort) chapter 7!! 04/02/06
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Star_Drifter: I'm glad that you love it I already have an idea of what will happen at the Temple
SakuraTsukikage: Thanks
A.N. I'll try to write as soon as possible, unfortunatly, Dearth Real Life is hard on me right now. I'll survive 
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Gkilkenny
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2/20/06 7:51pm
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RE: Remember When It Rained (JA, QUI/OBI, AU, angst, hurt-comfort) chapter 7!! 04/02/06
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this is a great story
I'mm just wondering have we reached Corruscant
yet
or is DL still interfering
Post soon Please  
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MASTER_KAYM
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2/20/06 9:23pm
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RE: Remember When It Rained (JA, QUI/OBI, AU, angst, hurt-comfort) chapter 7!! 04/02/06
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Oh I'm so sorry! I just have no time at all to write. I get 4 or 5 hours of sleep each night, and all I do is homeworks  (ok well, I still watch for fics, but that doesn't count, right?)
I have a lot of exams and homeworks, but maybe in 2 weeks, I'll get a little break, so I'll try to write. But I'm really happy that you're still waiting for this one 
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Gkilkenny
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2/20/06 9:28pm
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That's OK
Homework has to be done
and reading is good
I am patient, I will wait.
GK
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MASTER_KAYM
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2/18/07 10:31am
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RE: Remember When It Rained (JA, QUI/OBI, AU, angst, hurt-comfort) chapter 7!! 04/02/06
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Maybe I'll finish this story sometime in the next 10 years lol!! But I decided to post a chapter today, don't ask me why... I need to get some Obi-angst out
Anyway, even if nobody remembers this story, I don't care lol! I'm still working on my English skills anyway...
Chapter 9 : Traitor?
The small ship arrived to Coruscant shortly and Qui-Gon received a message on the holo-emitter. It said that he had to present himself before the Council… alone. Qui-Gon knew that they were concerned about his sudden departure. He had, after all, stolen a ship. They wanted to know why and where he had been. The Master didn’t mention Obi-Wan right away. He sensed that the boy needed rest. He only sent a message back saying that he would meet them shortly.
As they landed, he turned to Obi-Wan.
“Go to our quarters and rest for a while. I will inform the Council of your condition.”
Obi-Wan bowed.
“Yes Master”
The boy put his cloak on with his hood over his head. He knew of his appearance and didn’t want to alarm anyone or bring attention to himself.
They exited the craft together and took the turbo lift. As it stopped to their quarters’ level, Qui-Gon spoke again.
“I will see you shortly.” He said with a smile.
Obi-Wan smiled back and headed for their quarters as the turbo lift door closed behind him.
He walked slowly, taking in the soft hum of the Force in the Temple. It was so quiet and he felt home. He had missed this. The war now seemed like a distant nightmare. It was good to feel safe again.
Behind him, he heard footsteps so he hid his hands in his sleeves and lowered his head. He hoped that the Jedi behind him would just think that he was just seeking privacy as he was on his way to meditate like many Jedi did.
“Obi-Wan?”
Oh no, he thought, it was Siri.
He didn’t answer. Maybe she would think she was mistaking.
“What are you doing here, Obi-Wan?” She spit, clearly knowing it was him.
He halted, but didn’t turn.
“I thought you had left the Jedi” She said again.
Obi-Wan cringed. So she knew…
“I did…” He whispered, ashamed.
“So what are you doing here? I didn’t think the Council accepted traitors back!”
“I…I’m not a traitor…”
He could feel Siri’s glare on his back. He knew she despised him for what he did. She didn’t understand…
“No? And what do you call yourself then? You left your friends, your family. You turned your back on us to help…strangers.”
She said the last word as if it was disgusting her. Obi-Wan fought the tears. It was true. He had done all she said… He had also let those strangers, as she called them, die in a horrible way. He had let down everyone he had ever cared about. And it was ripping him apart.
“I’m sorry” He said softly.
Siri laughed.
“Sorry? SORRY??? What do you think? That because you’re sorry, everything will be like it was before? Well I have news for you, nothing will. You broke the trust of everybody in this Temple. You made us doubt of everybody’s commitment to the Order. It is not something you can easily take back.”
Siri’s words when right trough his heart. He knew she was right. He didn’t deserve any sympathy.
“A reprimand isn’t enough.” She continued “I think you should be severely punished for your actions.”
Ghostly tears rolled down the boy’s face under his hood.
“I already was…” He chocked out.
“I don’t think you were enough!”
Obi-Wan turned around swiftly and stared at Siri with tears flowing down his burning cheeks.
“I died! What more do you want??”
With that, he fled away, leaving Siri’s shocked form behind him in the hallway. He ran all the way to his and his Master’s quarters and sank on his bed, sobbing quietly.
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"Life does not treat you fairly or unfairly. It merely is. It is up to each of us to be fair, or unfair. " Qui-Gon Jinn, JA8 My Work In my Bio Nothing is lost where force dwells and the force is everywhere. Proud Master of Lady_Snow_Kaguya
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Valairy_Scot
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2/18/07 11:10am
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RE: Remember When It Rained (JA, QUI/OBI, AU, angst, hurt-comfort) chapter 9!! feb18
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“A reprimand isn’t enough.” She continued “I think you should be severely punished for your actions.”
Ghostly tears rolled down the boy’s face under his hood.
“I already was…” He chocked out.
“I don’t think you were enough!”
Obi-Wan turned around swiftly and stared at Siri with tears flowing down his burning cheeks.
“I died! What more do you want??”
Oh, poor Obi. I can't wait to find out more.
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MASTER_KAYM
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2/19/07 9:03pm
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RE: Remember When It Rained (JA, QUI/OBI, AU, angst, hurt-comfort) chapter 9!! feb18
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Valairy_Scot: Thanks a lot! More is coming soon, I'm on it!
Ok, here is my PM list (so I won't lose it again ):
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Gkilkenny
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If you're not on it, or you're on it and want to be removed, just ask
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-Darksaber-
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2/20/07 4:36am
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Obi-Wan turned around swiftly and stared at Siri with tears flowing down his burning cheeks.
“I died! What more do you want??”
What more does she want, indeed. Poor Obi-Wan. I sense his anguish is not yet over...Hmm, intriguing it is. See more of this, I must
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Gkilkenny
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2/20/07 7:22pm
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Ohh!!! that would have hurt him terribly for Siri to condemm him.
He's right he can do no more than die.
Poor Obi
Thanks for the PM.
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