[TheForce.net]
» Jedi Council Forums
» Fan Fiction
» Before the Saga
Register
|
Login
|
Search
|
Help
|
New Boards
|
Harassment Policy
|
Rules of the JC
|
TOS
|
Markup Codes
Locked Topic
|
Read Only Topic
|
Previous Active Topic
|
Next Active Topic
Pages:
5
10
15
20
25
30
35
40
45
50
55
60
65
70
75
«
6
|
7
|
8
|
9
|
10
|
11
|
12
|
13
|
14
|
15
»
-
Previous
|
Next
|
Reload
Author
Topic:
The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) note from the author 4/9
LuvEwan
Registered:
Mar '02
Date Posted:
6/29/05 10:05pm
Subject:
RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/29
A lot indeed.
And I can't wait to see all that happens to these two. I just adore your writing style,
may
. It's both gentle and rich, with lovely characterization for every character, major or minor. So beautiful. You should be very proud of this.
-----signature-----
What Light Breaks-AU Obi-Wan, Qui-Gon Anakin angst (collaboration with Spiritweaver)
http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/29979222/p1/?0
You want an Obi-Wan epic? We've got it right here.
Locked Topic
|
Active Topic Notification
|
Private Message
|
Post History
PadawanKitara
Registered:
Dec '01
Date Posted:
6/29/05 10:19pm
Subject:
RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/29
So if it'a not that AGriCorps guy, then I guess we have to find someone else to be scared of
-----signature-----
Courtier of the Royal Order of Shambling Dufi
We are Dufi...Resistance is Futile!
UCLA BRUINS
Locked Topic
|
Active Topic Notification
|
Private Message
|
Post History
Seven
Registered:
Jul '00
Date Posted:
6/29/05 11:09pm
Subject:
RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/29
~blinks speachlessly~
What?
Us?
Spoilt?
NEVER!
But this was a wonderful chapter.
I simply adored Jinn's reaction to the Agri-corps people... and the fact that Obi was less that stellar with thier disicion to talk about his future without him.
More soon please?
Seven
-----signature-----
Mythology:
http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=23852079&brd=10475
Not So Cool:
http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=22005893
The devoted little padawan of Master ithesock/Princess_Arulmozhi
Locked Topic
|
Active Topic Notification
|
Private Message
|
Post History
ithesock
Registered:
Mar '05
Date Posted:
6/30/05 12:30am
Subject:
RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/29
Lovely chapter,
May
. I loved how Qui didn't want to make them tea at first, and then thought he should have, once he realized that they weren't that unsympathetic. And his fierce protectiveness of Obi.
Great work.
-----signature-----
Fields of Elysia (JA):
http://boards.theforce.net/Before_the_Saga/b10475/20100957/?140
- *10/8*
Epistles to a Master (JA, AU):
http://boards.theforce.net/Before_the_Saga/b10475/20479680/?25
Lore-Master to Seven
Locked Topic
|
Active Topic Notification
|
Private Message
|
Post History
Master_Noi
Registered:
Sep '04
Date Posted:
6/30/05 1:37am
Subject:
RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/29
Okay, the Agri-corp guy can stay for now. He doesn't seem to have hurt Obi-Wan, but I'm still not sure of him. It is good that he is letting Obi-Wan stay with Qui-Gon for some time. They really need some time to figure out this bond.
Hmmm, if the Agri-corp leaders are okay then that still means there is a baddie running around somewhere out there.
-----signature-----
For Such a Time as This ( 01/17/09)
A Shrouded Path (03/21/09)
Locked Topic
|
Active Topic Notification
|
Private Message
|
Post History
Gkilkenny
Registered:
Mar '04
Date Posted:
6/30/05 3:02am
Subject:
RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/29
Yep I agree there is still an evil one out there
waiting to pounce.
Great Story I'll sit here and wait for more.
-----signature-----
Proud Padawan to p_stotts
Peace over anger - honour over hate - Strength over fear.
Links to Stories in my Bio. Obi-Wan forever.
Locked Topic
|
Active Topic Notification
|
Private Message
|
Post History
darshaassant
Registered:
Mar '05
Date Posted:
6/30/05 3:38am
Subject:
RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/29
Oh man... I got a measly 12th post! *curses time differences*
Yay! Tehy're going to be together!
-----signature-----
An infrequent poster
Locked Topic
|
Active Topic Notification
|
Private Message
|
Post History
Bekah_K
Registered:
Sep '02
Date Posted:
6/30/05 7:34am
Subject:
RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/29
*delurking*
I am enjoying this fic very much! I like how Qui-Gon is trying to figure things out in regard to his newly developed relationship with Obi-Wan and also his own force-sensitivity.
Qui's right, a lot can happen in a week. Perhaps he and Obi-Wan will figure things out between them, even if its only a partial understanding of how their bond began.
Wonderful job with this, May! You are a talented writer and I enjoy reading your fics. Please know that I am reading even if I don't always reply.
-----signature-----
See bio for other fics
Life Beyond the Code (Obi-Wan/Anakin) -
http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/20820324/?6
a.k.a. bek
Bring Him Home (Obi-Wan) -
http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/21107038/?3
Locked Topic
|
Active Topic Notification
|
Private Message
|
Post History
Shaindl
Registered:
Jun '02
Date Posted:
6/30/05 9:18am
Subject:
RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/29
Lovely post, May.
Like Noi, I still have suspicions about Heim, but he can stay...
...for now.
Looking forward to more!
-----signature-----
Halfway Moment - Qui, Obi, Anakin AU -
http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/20110461/?0
- UPDATED JULY 3!
Locked Topic
|
Active Topic Notification
|
Private Message
|
Post History
dianethx
Registered:
Mar '02
Date Posted:
6/30/05 7:46pm
Subject:
RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/29
I had to think about this post for a while... and read it a couple of times as well.
It was interesting that the Agri-corps people seem well-meaning and quite concerned about Obi-Wan, if a little unobservant. They need to rethink how they approach the recruits after the young ones reach the AC. I can certainly believe that most of them are depressed and morose after being "rejected" by the Jedi Order to tend crops. And I liked that they mentioned that there were other options if the AC didn't pan out.
So the question then becomes who did that to Obi-Wan? Why did they and will they try again?
I look forward to seeing Qui-Gon find out a little more about the connection they have. However, Obi-Wan will still need to come to grips with not becoming a Knight.
Great job. Going to read it again.
-----signature-----
Betrayal -
http://boards.theforce.net/s/b1/10935143
updated 11/2/09
jedidas3's Master
Merlin - Diplomatic Immunity -
http://boards.theforce.net/nswff/b10808/30459852
Locked Topic
|
Active Topic Notification
|
Private Message
|
Post History
solojones
Registered:
Sep '00
Date Posted:
6/30/05 8:05pm
Subject:
RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/29
I've just caught up. I keep telling myself I need to read more in Before the Saga, and boy have I been right. I really love Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan together, especially when portrayed properly, not in the evil manner of that *one* so called professional author... But truly, this story has some great interactions. And on top of that, I'm really, really intrigued by the whole concept of the story itself and where you're headed with it. Nice work,
may
! Keep it up
-sj loves kevin spacey
-----signature-----
6 x 9 = 42
Proud member of the Colbert Nation
My short films:
http://www.youtube.com/solojones1138
Locked Topic
|
Active Topic Notification
|
Private Message
|
Post History
Lady_Snow_Kaguya
Registered:
Jun '05
Date Posted:
6/30/05 8:27pm
Subject:
RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/29
Every time you post, I think I adore Qui a little more. And his overprotectiveness from the JA books is here too! Very nice. Will he get to adopt Obi? Or will teh Force give them both a kick in the rear and say " go.destiny.make it happen , people!" So many interesting thoughts from this....
^_~ Cant wait for more!
-----signature-----
Former Padawan of MASTER_KAYM
Jedi = Intergalactic Therapists
I ship Qui/Tahl
Republicans for Voldemort
"You threw yourself into a lake of acid just to spite your Master. I think that makes you mentally unstable in most galactic dictionaries!"-Tahl
Locked Topic
|
Active Topic Notification
|
Private Message
|
Post History
Bastet
Registered:
Dec '99
Date Posted:
6/30/05 9:06pm
Subject:
RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/29
Ooh, great post! (As always!)
I'm glad Obi-Wan gets to stay with the Jinns for a while, poor kid really needs some lovin'.
-----signature-----
"Oh yeah. Ooh, aah. That's how it always starts. But then later there's running, then...screaming." --Dr. Ian Malcolm
"Okay fine. Go ahead and scream. Then when that tricycloplots attacks you, don't come crying to me." --Paul Kirby
Locked Topic
|
Active Topic Notification
|
Private Message
|
Post History
Jedi_Tigris
Registered:
Mar '05
Date Posted:
7/1/05 1:35am
Subject:
RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/29
Great post!
I'm glad the Agri Corp people and Qui have a sort of understanding. I thought it was thoughtful of Nira to offer Obi the chance to choose what he wants to do. Interesting to think that there are options other than Agri Corp if Obi really couldn't work there.
Maybe Obi can stay with the Jinns? He does have a bond with Qui after all, hope they figure out what to do with it soon, or how important it is. They have time while Obi recovers.
-----signature-----
"Who is more foolish? The fool, or the fool who follows him?" - Obi-Wan Kenobi, ANH
padawan/adoptee of Myri_Antilles
Battling DRL...otherwise known as college and work...
Please add me to your pm list when I review. Thanks!
Locked Topic
|
Active Topic Notification
|
Private Message
|
Post History
River_Stone
Registered:
May '05
Date Posted:
7/2/05 5:28am
Subject:
RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/29
“I’d like to stay here, sir.” He looked quickly to Qui-Gon. “If, if that’s all right . . .”
But Obi-Wan? How will you receive mush if you leave? Silly, cute, and heavenly adorable lad...
Another beautiful post, May. I'm really curious to see how Xanatos will fit into all this.
Great job!
-----signature-----
"May it be a light to you in dark places, when all other lights go out."
Galadriel, FOTR, LOTR trilogy
Padawan to the wonderful dianethx
Locked Topic
|
Active Topic Notification
|
Private Message
|
Post History
Pages:
5
10
15
20
25
30
35
40
45
50
55
60
65
70
75
«
6
|
7
|
8
|
9
|
10
|
11
|
12
|
13
|
14
|
15
»
-
Previous
|
Next
|
Reload
[TheForce.net]
» Jedi Council Forums
» Fan Fiction
» Before the Saga
© 2009 IGN Entertainment, Inc (9.02.17.2300, IGNPRDAPPW64214) 0.719