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LuvEwan  4689 posts
Registered: Mar '02
48923_Obi-Wan Kenobi (719097)
Date Posted: 6/29/05 10:05pm Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/29
A lot indeed. raised_brow And I can't wait to see all that happens to these two. I just adore your writing style, may. It's both gentle and rich, with lovely characterization for every character, major or minor. So beautiful. You should be very proud of this. applause

 

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PadawanKitara  7976 posts
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Date Posted: 6/29/05 10:19pm Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/29
So if it'a not that AGriCorps guy, then I guess we have to find someone else to be scared of

 

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Seven  754 posts
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Date Posted: 6/29/05 11:09pm Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/29
~blinks speachlessly~

What?

Us?

Spoilt?

NEVER!

But this was a wonderful chapter.

I simply adored Jinn's reaction to the Agri-corps people... and the fact that Obi was less that stellar with thier disicion to talk about his future without him.

More soon please?

Seven

 

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ithesock  285 posts
Registered: Mar '05
22843_Obi-Wan and Padmé
Date Posted: 6/30/05 12:30am Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/29
Lovely chapter, May. I loved how Qui didn't want to make them tea at first, and then thought he should have, once he realized that they weren't that unsympathetic. And his fierce protectiveness of Obi. love Great work.

 

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Master_Noi  1851 posts
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14361_Obi-Wan Kenobi
Date Posted: 6/30/05 1:37am Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/29
Okay, the Agri-corp guy can stay for now. He doesn't seem to have hurt Obi-Wan, but I'm still not sure of him. It is good that he is letting Obi-Wan stay with Qui-Gon for some time. They really need some time to figure out this bond.

Hmmm, if the Agri-corp leaders are okay then that still means there is a baddie running around somewhere out there. worried

 

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Gkilkenny  3700 posts
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7963_Obi-Wan Kenobi
Date Posted: 6/30/05 3:02am Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/29

Yep I agree there is still an evil one out there
waiting to pounce. devil

Great Story I'll sit here and wait for more. coffee

 

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darshaassant  396 posts
Registered: Mar '05
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Date Posted: 6/30/05 3:38am Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/29
Oh man... I got a measly 12th post! *curses time differences*

Yay! Tehy're going to be together!

 

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Bekah_K  1130 posts
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Date Posted: 6/30/05 7:34am Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/29
*delurking* blush

I am enjoying this fic very much! I like how Qui-Gon is trying to figure things out in regard to his newly developed relationship with Obi-Wan and also his own force-sensitivity.

Qui's right, a lot can happen in a week. Perhaps he and Obi-Wan will figure things out between them, even if its only a partial understanding of how their bond began.

Wonderful job with this, May! You are a talented writer and I enjoy reading your fics. Please know that I am reading even if I don't always reply. happy

 

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Shaindl  3140 posts
Registered: Jun '02
Date Posted: 6/30/05 9:18am Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/29
Lovely post, May. happy Like Noi, I still have suspicions about Heim, but he can stay...

...for now. tongue

Looking forward to more! happy

 

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dianethx  14887 posts
Registered: Mar '02
Date Posted: 6/30/05 7:46pm Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/29
I had to think about this post for a while... and read it a couple of times as well. grin
It was interesting that the Agri-corps people seem well-meaning and quite concerned about Obi-Wan, if a little unobservant. They need to rethink how they approach the recruits after the young ones reach the AC. I can certainly believe that most of them are depressed and morose after being "rejected" by the Jedi Order to tend crops. And I liked that they mentioned that there were other options if the AC didn't pan out.

So the question then becomes who did that to Obi-Wan? Why did they and will they try again?

I look forward to seeing Qui-Gon find out a little more about the connection they have. However, Obi-Wan will still need to come to grips with not becoming a Knight.

Great job. Going to read it again.

 

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solojones  33512 posts
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Date Posted: 6/30/05 8:05pm Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/29
I've just caught up. I keep telling myself I need to read more in Before the Saga, and boy have I been right. I really love Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan together, especially when portrayed properly, not in the evil manner of that *one* so called professional author... But truly, this story has some great interactions. And on top of that, I'm really, really intrigued by the whole concept of the story itself and where you're headed with it. Nice work, may! Keep it up grin

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Lady_Snow_Kaguya  228 posts
Registered: Jun '05
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Date Posted: 6/30/05 8:27pm Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/29

Every time you post, I think I adore Qui a little more. And his overprotectiveness from the JA books is here too! Very nice. Will he get to adopt Obi? Or will teh Force give them both a kick in the rear and say " go.destiny.make it happen , people!" So many interesting thoughts from this....
^_~ Cant wait for more!

 

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Bastet  1610 posts
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Date Posted: 6/30/05 9:06pm Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/29
Ooh, great post! (As always!) grin I'm glad Obi-Wan gets to stay with the Jinns for a while, poor kid really needs some lovin'.

 

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Jedi_Tigris  1104 posts
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39836_Obi-Wan and Boga
Date Posted: 7/1/05 1:35am Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/29
Great post!

I'm glad the Agri Corp people and Qui have a sort of understanding. I thought it was thoughtful of Nira to offer Obi the chance to choose what he wants to do. Interesting to think that there are options other than Agri Corp if Obi really couldn't work there. happy Maybe Obi can stay with the Jinns? He does have a bond with Qui after all, hope they figure out what to do with it soon, or how important it is. They have time while Obi recovers. happy

 

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River_Stone  192 posts
Registered: May '05
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Date Posted: 7/2/05 5:28am Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/29
“I’d like to stay here, sir.” He looked quickly to Qui-Gon. “If, if that’s all right . . .”

But Obi-Wan? How will you receive mush if you leave? Silly, cute, and heavenly adorable lad... love

Another beautiful post, May. I'm really curious to see how Xanatos will fit into all this.

Great job!

 

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