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Ob-wan-shawa Registered: Mar '05	Date Posted: 7/3/05 1:18pm Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 7/2 - Date Edited: 7/3/05 9:54pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Ob-wan-shawa
	Dooku! Is he still good?! This is very cool, I can't wait for more! Love Obi wan he's strangely funny. -----signature----- Proud padawan of Art_Of_War
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shanobi Registered: Dec '01	Date Posted: 7/3/05 3:59pm Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 7/2
	Ah, so that evil that was mentioned is not the Agri-corps....and would be other figures yet to emerge?? Enter Dooku. Interesting. Very interesting. And quite timely I might add. Love the way Julune is so intuitive to Qui-Gon and vice versa. Already calling the boy 'our Obi-Wan' I too wonder what will happen when it comes time for Qui and Julune to leave Bandor. Of course Obi-Wan will just have to go with them Obi seems so sensitive to the Force. I have to wonder what his perception of Dooku will be - and if it will differ from Qui-Gon's. --shan -----signature----- The Plot Bunny Thread: http://boards.theforce.net/fan_fiction_resource/b10304/8535413/p1/?1308
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PadawanKitara Registered: Dec '01	Date Posted: 7/3/05 5:21pm Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 7/2
	Dooku showed up? Hide Obi-Wan far away. take him off planet with them -----signature----- Courtier of the Royal Order of Shambling Dufi We are Dufi...Resistance is Futile! UCLA BRUINS
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Kylie_Jinn Registered: Apr '05	Date Posted: 7/3/05 9:05pm Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 7/2
	holds breath wait, that's it? too short, need more! i'm just up sitting here reading and there's no more yet! lol, great, though. Dooku and Obi-Wan together can't be too good... -----signature----- "The dark is generous, and it is patient, and it always wins--" -Matthew Stover Oh continuity: a joy and a curse...well, maybe more of the latter.
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DarthDolly Registered: Feb '05	Date Posted: 7/3/05 10:36pm Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 7/2
	I just found this story, its very sweet! Looks like you have a good plot going on too, can't wait to see where you go with this. -----signature----- ~Dolly~ Padawn of Miana Kenobi
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Kynstar Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 7/4/05 8:32am Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 7/2
	Oh that was so sweet! I too, loved the part about our Obi-Wan warm fuzzies That was so sweet! Oh no... they only have a week or two left until they have to leave? Oh man... I hope they can take Obi with too. And lookit who arrived! Perhaps he can help explain some things to Qui about what's up between them too. I'm sure Dooku will be taken by surprise that those two have formed a bond. Specially since Qui truly insn't fully trained. Can't wait for more, Padawan of mine! Great job once again! -----signature----- Paddy sis to t_s & SarkaVrae/Master to hyperspace_police Member of Rebel Legion and Jedi Assembly (Kynstar Lans) Only thru fear, hatred, and pain will the true power of the Force be revealed. See stories/viggies in bio
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LumiKuningatar Registered: Nov '03	Date Posted: 7/5/05 11:45am Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 7/2
	Dook Dook Dook-U does the Dooku-dance Dooku -----signature----- Tell a man there are 400 billion stars and he'll believe you, tell a man that a bench is wet and he'll have to touch it... Catapultam habeo. Nisi pecuniam omnem mihi dabis, ad caput tuum saxum immane mittam. It's a bird, no wait a plane.. damn.. it IS a b
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maychorian Registered: Jan '05	Date Posted: 7/6/05 11:43pm Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 7/2 - Date Edited: 7/7/05 1:13am (1 edits total) Edited By: maychorian
	ithesock Cliffie! Evil cliffie! Dooku's come...here!! Can you believe it? I was hoping to catch people off guard with that. Glad it worked. Seven ~points to the above statement of her master and agrees~ What a good Paddy. ::pats Seven on the head:: astraevirgo and it seems that Dooku is still in the Order -- ha, it kinda implies that Qui was what made everyone go PSYCO!Evil. Interesting statement. Dooku actually didn't leave the Order until after Qui-Gon died, so you could say that he was KEEPING him from going psycho!evil. And actually, he never went totally around the bend. He truly was a political idealist, though his ideals were a bit too close to Hitler's for comfort . . . Hmm. Well, thanks for making me think about that. I still have some pondering to do when it comes to this character. Very interesting. Not that I think there needs to be, because the family development story is lotsa fun and sweetness and interesting, but is there a grand plot that takes the galaxy by storm? Actually, there is. Just you wait--all sorts of little gears are starting to turn, now. LuvEwan This fic has such warmth to it, in the atmosphere you create, in the words you use and the gentleness of Qui-Gon and Julune. Aw, thanks. A lot of it is word choice, yeah--that's how I've learned to set mood and tone. And a lot of character is in gestures and looks, even more than in words. I've learned bunches of little tricks over the years to make it work. I'm glad you enjoy it. I'm liking it, too. Bastet But now what does Dooku want? Agh, need more soon! ::deep voice:: He has come for your SOUL! ::normal voice:: Just kidding. But Count Dookula almost works, doesn't it? Gkilkenny And WHAT does Dooko want lets hope he is a goody in this story but somehow I do not think so Hehehe. Well, you are half right. darshaassant Oh yay..... i hope he isn't dark and can help Obee! Well, Qui-Gon trusts him. That's a point in his favor. We'll see how it goes, though. Master_Noi Gosh, I'm suspicious or maybe the word I'm looking for is over-protective when it comes to Obi-Wan. I'm hoping Dooku is a good thing. That's okay. Obi-Wan appreciates your good wishes. Isn't that right, Obi-Wan? Obi: Um. Yes. Thank you, Master Noi. Such a good kid. River_Stone Is he going to try to take Obi-Wan away? I think he might.... I just love all the guesses people are throwing out about Dooku. You make me think. And then run away laughing like a lunatic. Thanks! dianethx The problems will be multiplying soon I think with the move, Obi-Wan not being a Jedi, the Agri-corps perhaps not allowing the Jinns to take Obi.... quite a few. Great, more story to read. And more to write. I'm truly enjoying this, so I'm glad you are too. Interesting speculation on why Dook is here. I'm almost tempted to change the plot I had planned, because that would be really interesting . . . Argh, now I'm going to be writing AUs of my AU. That's just going too far. kenobiwanobi Thanks! Jedi_Tigris Dooku!! Wonder why he's there? And what's he there for? I hope you weren't expecting a straight answer, because you're not going to get one. Thanks for reading! Ob-wan-shawa Love Obi wan he's strangely funny. Interesting that you would say that. I guess he kind of is, especially at the end of that chapter. He's gaining a little confidence as he receives more and more TLC from the Jinns. We'll see more of his true personality come out as the story progresses and he grows past the hurt, scared, vision-plagued child I've turned him into. shanobi Obi seems so sensitive to the Force. I have to wonder what his perception of Dooku will be - and if it will differ from Qui-Gon's. Oooh, thanks so much for that comment. It made me write this next chapter differently than I might have. Good! It's all good. I love my reviews, and my reviewers. It's fun to get a bunch of comments and then write--interesting things happen in my head. PadawanKitara Hide Obi-Wan far away. take him off planet with them Ah yes, wouldn't that be just the ideal ending for this story? Sadly, life is rarely ideal. Kylie_Jinn Dooku and Obi-Wan together can't be too good... It's new for me, definitely. I've never written Dooku before, and certainly never with a young Obi-Wan. Should be interesting. DarthDolly Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it. As for "where I'm going with this" . . . you'll just have to wait and see. My Master (mine!) I'm sure Dooku will be taken by surprise that those two have formed a bond. Specially since Qui truly insn't fully trained. No kidding. Seems like nothing can be normal with these two. But isn't that why we love them? I knew you'd like seeing Dooku show up--hopefully he'll keep being good for you. (Though how could he not, eh?) LumiKuningatar Dook Dook Dook-U does the Dooku-dance Somehow this has become the dancing story. I'm okay with that. Thanks for reading! Well, all, that was pretty interesting, wasn't it? I was amazed and amused by the gamut of reactions to Dooku. Everything from "Protect the Obi!" to "Yay, here comes tall, dark, and knowledgable!" Writing this next chapter was definitey an interesting experience, as I've never written Dooku before. It was a bit like traversing a mine field, watching for exploding pies--I haven't thought so much about the character I'm writing since I first fell into fanfic land. Yes, I'm in a silly mood tonight. Sorry the chapter isn't quite done--it will be up by morning, I hope. EDIT: Almost forgot to do the new reader happy dance! ::does happy dance several times:: Yay, new readers! So glad you're here. Next Post ETA: I'll be gone from Thursday to Sunday at family camp, so probably Monday. Assuming I manage to write while at camp. That's always iffy. -----signature----- Kynstar's former Padawan The Unchosen: http://boards.theforce.net/Before_the_Saga/b10475/20049795/p1/ updated 2/16 When the darkness falls early, and the light hits the ground, there's a moment to be captured . . .
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maychorian Registered: Jan '05	Date Posted: 7/7/05 1:07am Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 7/2
	Chapter 10: Kindred Spirits . . . Or Not Qui-Gon let out a gasping little chuckle as he stepped aside to let Master Dooku into his home. Anything new happening? What a question! It almost frightened him to think how much his life had changed in the last few days, never mind the ten years or so since he’d last seen his Jedi friend. “Why, yes, actually, quite a lot has been happening,” he said, and was pleased with how steady his voice was. “Did you know I’d gotten married?” Dooku nodded deeply, once, as he crossed the threshold into the small living quarters. “I remember receiving an invitation some years back, yes.” He frowned slightly at the sight of the tousle-haired youngster sitting on the couch, staring sleepily at him with wide, innocent blue-green eyes. “I didn’t hear you had a son, though.” Obi-Wan blinked, eyes widening even further. Qui-Gon cleared his throat, crossing to stand by the couch and lay a hand on the boy’s shoulder. “This is Obi-Wan Kenobi, our young friend. He’s staying with Julune and me for a time while he recovers from a rather serious illness.” “Hmm, yes. I thought the child looked rather peaked.” Dooku seemed to be peering down his nose at the boy, but Qui-Gon knew that this was the way the man interacted with everyone, even sentients he respected greatly. It was an entirely unconscious attitude of superiority, and it fit the powerful Jedi like a well-worn cloak, comfortable and homey. And it made Qui-Gon smile to see his old teacher looking and acting so exactly as he remembered him. “Obi-Wan, this is an old friend of mine,” Qui-Gon said, gently squeezing the youngster’s shoulder. “He taught me about the Force, many years ago, and we’ve kept in touch. Though not always very well,” he admitted with a wry twist of his lips. Obi-Wan nodded, very slightly, staring up at the Jedi in something like awe or appreciation, though Qui-Gon realized that neither word was quite correct. It was almost as if the boy was . . . evaluating Dooku, and coming to a conclusion. Though what that might be was not clear. “I’ve heard of you, Master Dooku.” “Can’t say the same,” Dooku said, not unkindly. His thick black brows seemed to knit together. “Though I wonder . . .” He looked at Qui-Gon. “A kindred spirit of yours?” Qui-Gon hesitated, thinking of the bond. “You might say that.” “Hmm.” Again the supercilious, questioning look was turned to the pale-faced lad. “You should be a Jedi, just as Qui-Gon should be. The Force around you fairly sings with power. Why aren’t you a Padawan? Did your parents make the same choice as Qui-Gon’s? To keep you?” Obi-Wan opened his mouth, then closed it and lowered his head, staring down at his hands clasped in his lap. “No.” It was a nearly-silent murmur, empty of any sign of emotion. “No one chose to keep me.” The black brows scrunched yet more firmly together, and Qui-Gon recognized that look of Dooku’s, the one he wore when bent to a puzzle he was determined to solve. He stepped forward to prevent the Jedi from making more blunt declarations, probing more open wounds. Dooku was not the most sensitive man in the galaxy, to say nothing of his tact. “Have you met my wife yet? I don’t think you have. Julune!” he called, turning toward the kitchen. “Dearheart, we have a visitor.” A sound of clattering came from the kitchen, and after a moment Julune appeared at the doorway, wiping her hands on a towel. Her brows were knit in a disturbing mirror of Dooku’s, a slight frown gracing her perfect lips. Though Qui-Gon knew the expression wasn’t aimed at him, he felt an apprehensive shiver pass over his chest. He had learned to be wary of that face. Julune Graffon-Jinn was a force to be reckoned with when riled. “Yes, I heard him come in.” She gave the elegant Jedi a cordial nod. “I’m pleased to meet you, Knight Dooku.” The man gently cleared his throat, one eyebrow raising slightly. Julune raised a hand, nodding deeply in acquiescence, then raising her head to continue her dark stare. “Sorry. Master Dooku. Welcome to Bandomeer.” Qui-Gon grimaced. He’d forgotten how easily sound carried in these tiny quarters Obviously, she’d heard the entire conversation so far, and was less than pleased.. Julune’s frosty tone spoke much more plainly then her hospitable words—he would have to speak to her later, make her understand that this was just Dooku’s way. Both his wife and his old teacher simply were who they were, both dear to his heart, and he would never try to change either of them. He only hoped they wouldn’t come to blows before he had a chance to mediate a truce. However, Qui-Gon was fully aware that these particular negotiations had a high likelihood of failing miserably. Julune was typically calm and laid-back, laughing off any slights to herself with sparkling, merry eyes, so comfortable in her skin that such words simply slid off. But she did not respond as well to disparaging words or gestures aimed at her work, her family, her planet—and most especially, her husband. And now Qui-Gon saw that when it came to Obi-Wan—this vulnerable youngster who had slipped so easily and tenderly into their home and their hearts—when it came to this boy, Julune was a full-tilt mother she-niber, and her claws had just been unsheathed. Then, with a flash of insight, he understood. It wasn’t so much Dooku’s words that had set her off—anyone could have made an innocent mistake, unknowingly pricked Obi-Wan with uncomfortable questions. It was the fact that this was a Jedi, and the Jedi had hurt this boy. That was all it took to rouse Julune’s protective instincts to full, alarmingly feral life. It truly was as simple as that. “Master Dooku, won’t you sit down?” Qui-Gon asked, pouring warmth into his voice as a subtle message to everyone in the room. He spread a hand toward the recliner still drawn up next to the couch, absently massaging Obi-Wan’s shoulder with his other hand. Dooku nodded his thanks. He removed his cloak with a rather lovely flourish—it was either entirely natural or had been practiced so much that it appeared so—and sat, somehow imbuing the broken-down, sand-colored piece of furniture with the dignity of a throne. Qui-Gon took the cloak and hung it on one of the hooks on the wall, next to his thick green one and Julune’s dark red. Julune took a deep breath. “Will you be staying for supper?” The words were spoken neutrally, without rancor. Qui-Gon knew that only he could hear the sullen, slightly menacing edge beneath them. “If it’s no trouble,” the Jedi said smoothly, stretching his long legs out and settling his shoulders back with the satisfied little sigh of a weary traveler coming in to rest. “Oh, none at all.” Julune widened her eyes in a masterful display of innocent surprise, as if shocked that he would even think his presence could be the slightest bother. “It’s soup, and there’s plenty to go around—I’ll just set another place at the table.” “You are most kind, madam.” Julune made a little pish-tosh gesture and turned sharply around to disappear into the kitchen again. Qui-Gon hesitated. He wanted to go into the kitchen and have a quiet little conversation with Julune, make sure she wouldn’t “accidentally” poison Dooku’s soup. But it didn’t seem safe to leave Obi-Wan and Dooku alone, either. They were again studying each other with intense, focused eyes, the blue-green gently hooded by long lashes and a lowered head, the dark brown clear, straightforward and thoughtful. With an exasperated shake of his head, Qui-Gon gently nudged the boy to scoot over on the couch, then sat next to him, his arm circling the slender shoulders without conscious thought. And Obi-Wan leaned into him, also without thought, much of the tension in his slight frame instantly fleeing as if repelled by that simple touch. Qui-Gon did notice the slightly sardonic smirk that touched the corner of Dooku’s mouth, and glanced instinctively down at the boy tucked under his arm. Only then did he realize what he’d done. But Obi-Wan didn’t look up, and Qui-Gon decided not to move. “So, what brings you to Bandomeer, Master Dooku?” Qui-Gon asked. “Just thought I’d drop in and see you, old friend.” Dooku straightened the creases on his trousers, plucking at them with long fingers. Qui-Gon raised an eyebrow. “I didn’t realize you had our itinerary. Julune and I only stay on a particular planet for a couple of months—it makes it rather difficult for most people to keep up with where we are.” Dooku shrugged. “Itinerary? I would have commed ahead if I had known I was coming. No, I was flying by the system on the way back to Coruscant when I had a feeling that I should stop by. I didn’t understand why—a nasty little world, this. But I have learned to listen to strange voices in the night, on rare occasions, mind you.” Qui-Gon smirked. Even the idiosyncratic little phrases Dooku used reminded him of the time they had spent together years ago, Qui-Gon exploring the Force like a child in a toy store, Dooku patiently explaining how it all worked, where things should go, and why it was best to stay away from the shadowy corners where spiders lurked. He had to fight to keep the nostalgic mood from overtaking him. Julune was still agitated, and Obi-Wan was definitely struggling within himself, as well. It wouldn’t be fair of Qui-Gon to abandon them so he could sink into the past. “Well, I’m glad you decided to follow that particular witch-light into the fog,” he said warmly. “It’s been too long. We have a great deal of catching up to do.” But Dooku was again staring at the young boy, who seemed to have found something infinitely fascinating on the tip of his left index finger, and was studying it intently. “On further thought, I think the name Kenobi does ring a chime,” he said slowly. “Were you . . .?” “Yes,” Obi-Wan said abruptly. A tremor ran through his body, but he lifted his chin and looked his interrogator directly in the eye. His voice was clear, the words slightly clipped. “Two weeks ago, I was a Jedi initiate. I was not chosen by a master, so I was sent to join the Agri-Corps here on Bandomeer.” Dooku’s dark eye flashed. “Not chosen? Not chosen?” He sat forward in his seat, his hands clenching the armrests. “A child of your obvious talent and power, shining so brightly in the Force that the light all but crosses over into the physical realm—you were not chosen? What is wrong with those idiots at the Temple?” Obi-Wan was taken aback—he leaned against Qui-Gon’s arm, as if attempting to sink into the couch to escape the Jedi’s rising voice. Qui-Gon pressed him closer and just stared at his old teacher, amazed. He had never seen the man in such high dudgeon. And it appeared to be getting higher. Dooku suddenly jumped to his feet and began to pace, the prowl of a large, carnivorous creature bent low to the ground to sniff its prey. He even growled a bit, his fists quivering at his sides. “I knew it. I knew it! Something’s gone wrong. There’s a pall over the Order—we’ve gotten weak, clouded, tied to the strings of the Senate . . . Not our own. Shouldn’t be this way. More and more talented children are being allowed to fall through the cracks, and the mediocre, the mundane, the rule-bound . . .” He spat this word like a foul-tasting morsel, a bit of bone caught in his teeth. The dark gaze flashed to Qui-Gon, to the boy, and forward again as the man continued to pace. “. . . these are the ones who rise,” he finished, shaking a finger in the air. “The low, the cringers and scrapers. I knew it. I knew something was off.” He paused to point at the boy, his finger now quivering with outrage. His dark eyebrows were bent over eyes that seemed to spark with disgust, daring the boy to contradict him. “Did no one speak to you at all? Did anyone try to explain why no Master would take you? Was it because you were too passionate, too unpredictable, too headstrong?” Obi-Wan shrank yet further against Qui-Gon, but he answered, his voice trembling only a little bit. “Y-yes, Master Dooku. I had one last chance, and I . . . I fought too aggressively. Knight Xanatos was disturbed, and he said . . .” “Xanatos.” Dooku sat suddenly, heavily, in his chair, the single word seeming to escape his mouth rather than be spoken. It took all of his energy with it, and though his eyes as he stared at the boy were sharp, the ferocious strength of righteous rage no longer sparked there. “That fool. He rejected you, didn’t he? The fool, the stupid young fool.” Obi-Wan nodded hesitantly, then gathered himself together, stilling his agitation. He leaned forward a bit, looking curiously at the Master Jedi. “You, you know Knight Xanatos?” “Why, of course I do.” Dooku’s voice was grim and hard. “Training him made me a master, after all.” Obi-Wan nodded again, more certainly this time, and leaned back into Qui-Gon’s support. He had nothing else to say. -----signature----- Kynstar's former Padawan The Unchosen: http://boards.theforce.net/Before_the_Saga/b10475/20049795/p1/ updated 2/16 When the darkness falls early, and the light hits the ground, there's a moment to be captured . . .
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Gkilkenny Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 7/7/05 2:25am Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 7/7
	Well !! what do you make of that Now I'm not sure what to make of Dooku a devil in masters clothing Well done -----signature----- Proud Padawan to p_stotts Peace over anger - honour over hate - Strength over fear. Links to Stories in my Bio. Obi-Wan forever.
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Master_Noi Registered: Sep '04	Date Posted: 7/7/05 7:43am Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 7/7
	Well, interesting that Dooku trained Xanatos. Hmmm, I am always suspiscious when I see Dooku - big surprise, huh? Joins Julune clattering pots and pans in the kitchen while fuming Poor Qui - stuck between a dear mentor, an irritated wife, and a sad, sick, neglected Obi-Wan. Dooku seems surprised that the Order rejected Obi-Wan, but sounds like he's already getting disgruntled with the Order. I wonder if that's a good thing in this AU. I mean leaving the Order wasn't the best thing for him in the non-AU timeline. -----signature----- For Such a Time as This ( 01/17/09) A Shrouded Path (03/21/09)
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LuvEwan Registered: Mar '02	Date Posted: 7/7/05 8:39am Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 7/7
	I loved Qui-Gon's introspections during this, and as always, the descriptions were stellar. Great job. -----signature----- What Light Breaks-AU Obi-Wan, Qui-Gon Anakin angst (collaboration with Spiritweaver) http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/29979222/p1/?0 You want an Obi-Wan epic? We've got it right here.
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Kynstar Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 7/7/05 8:46am Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 7/7
	Loved her in this one! Mrs. Jinn juz rocks! Isn't he so enigmatic? I liked that it was him that trained Xan But you gotta admit to it though, what Dooku said about letting the 'strong' ones slip thru the cracks because of their 'passionate emotions'... it's juz not right. They could be taught to curve them. Obi eventually learned, so it is possible. Poor Obi...he isn't all that sure how to take this meeting going on. Poor kid. Great job once more! You're doing pretty good with Dooku -----signature----- Paddy sis to t_s & SarkaVrae/Master to hyperspace_police Member of Rebel Legion and Jedi Assembly (Kynstar Lans) Only thru fear, hatred, and pain will the true power of the Force be revealed. See stories/viggies in bio
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River_Stone Registered: May '05	Date Posted: 7/7/05 9:52am Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 7/7
	Another enjoyable post I especially like Dooku's characterisation - the way you have so expertly slipped in his "dark" qualities and his loss of faith in the order is so in keeping of what we know of him in the books and films. I still think(or more accurately hope) that Dooku is going to try to adopt Obi-Wan, but then that's just me -----signature----- "May it be a light to you in dark places, when all other lights go out." Galadriel, FOTR, LOTR trilogy Padawan to the wonderful dianethx
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Bastet Registered: Dec '99	Date Posted: 7/7/05 11:52am Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 7/7
	Well, that was very interesting. It sounds like Dooku hasn't changed, except that he trained Xanatos, though he doesn't seem to like him that much. You'd think the two of them would be trying to take over the galaxy by now. I loved Julune's reaction to Dooku, I'm glad her and Qui feel so protective of poor Obi-Wan. Now I hope Dooku doesn't try to take Obi with him, I just don't trust him! We'll have to wait and see, eh? Great post, can't wait for more! -----signature----- "Oh yeah. Ooh, aah. That's how it always starts. But then later there's running, then...screaming." --Dr. Ian Malcolm "Okay fine. Go ahead and scream. Then when that tricycloplots attacks you, don't come crying to me." --Paul Kirby
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