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Seven  754 posts
Registered: Jul '00
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Date Posted: 6/18/05 11:13pm Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/19
Wonderful!

Please more soon?

Thanks!

Seven

 

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Bastet  1610 posts
Registered: Dec '99
6008_Obi-Wan Kenobi
Date Posted: 6/18/05 11:27pm Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/19
Woooohoooo!! I was hoping for an update before I went to bed, a perfect way to end the day!
Poor Obi-Wan! Not thinking that anyone cares for him, how sad! sad He should meet his fanclub. wink I like how Julune said it didn't take Obi long to make a claim on her, you'd have to have a heart of stone for him not too. If Obi really can't be a Jedi now, I think the Jinns should adopt him.
Lovely post! love

 

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Gkilkenny  3712 posts
Registered: Mar '04
7963_Obi-Wan Kenobi
Date Posted: 6/19/05 12:54am Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/19


ohh so sweet
Who could have done that to our Obi-wan.
Kidnapped by who?
Look after him Qui-Gon!! love

 

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Jedi_Tigris  1104 posts
Registered: Mar '05
39836_Obi-Wan and Boga
Date Posted: 6/19/05 2:42am Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/19
That was beautiful! I love the relationship between Qui-Gon and Julune, they're so well matched. Poor Obi-Wan, being confused because someone cares for him? What has he been through all these years? I wonder why and who took Obi-Wan and hurt him, since Qui brought up those questions? Great post! happy

 

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dianethx  14888 posts
Registered: Mar '02
Date Posted: 6/19/05 4:35am Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/19
I adore those two. So well matched, loving and warm. Now, Obi-Wan is there and he has been hurt - by whom, I wonder. The Agri-corps, someone stealing Force sensitives, slavers? I am sure all will be revealed in time but this is such a lovely story. Very much looking forward to more!

 

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Qui-Gina-Jinn  3112 posts
Registered: Jun '03
44103_Qui-Gon Jinn
Date Posted: 6/19/05 4:48am Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/19
Poor Obi cry

Love how the Jinns care about him - very good indeed.
Seems like little Obi needs it badly.

Now, who dared treat him like that? angry

More soon? [face_hopeful]

 

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shanobi  1399 posts
Registered: Dec '01
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Date Posted: 6/19/05 8:09am Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/19
The plot thickens happy I'm not even going to wager a guess as to what exactly is going on with our sweet little Obi-Wan. You'll no doubt surprise us all anyways mischief

Wonderful interaction between Qui and his wife, they seem to have a very warm sweet and open marriage. Loved the talk at the end where she reminded him that his burdens are hers as well.

I have to wonder what the morning will bring and how easy it will be for Qui to remain a constant in Obi's life. What a hard life our little would be padawan seems to have had. I'm so glad Qui is in the picture now and can give some love and stability. praying

Great Job Laura!

--shan

 

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PadawanKitara  7976 posts
Registered: Dec '01
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Date Posted: 6/19/05 7:23pm Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/19
That was great. WIll begging for more work? It worked last time grin

 

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PadawanEstel  165 posts
Registered: Jan '04
19081_Obi-Wan Kenobi
Date Posted: 6/19/05 7:49pm Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/19
Oh, how sweet! love The poor kid is just so scared and confused... for it to not make sense that someone cares about him is just heartbreaking! Follow your instincts, Qui-Gon! Give him a hug!
thinking angry Now, who's hurting my poor baby like that? Hmmm... a certain black haired young man comes to mind... confused

 

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Master_Noi  1851 posts
Registered: Sep '04
14361_Obi-Wan Kenobi
Date Posted: 6/19/05 10:17pm Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/19
Julune turned to face him, her eyes fierce, and reached up to tangle her fingers in his beard, holding his face in both hands. “Darling, we are one. Your burdens are my burdens—your cares are my cares. This poor, suffering child has made a claim on you somehow, through the Force or through something more simple. And as your heart belongs to me, so does the claim. I wouldn’t have it any other way.” She glanced at the boy, her eyes softening. “Besides, I think he’s made a claim on me, too. Didn’t take long,” she added musingly.

Okay, you can end it right here. Obi-Wan stays with the Jinns, is loved and cared for, becomes big brother to Baby Jinn, and lives happily ever after. praying

No such luck, huh? Why do I sense angst on the horizon? worried

 

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LuvEwan  4689 posts
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Date Posted: 6/19/05 10:56pm Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/19 - Date Edited: 6/19/05 10:56pm (1 edits total) Edited By: LuvEwan
Angst? Why would you ever think that, Noi? I mean, just because it's a story by may----oh.

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KSkywalker  619 posts
Registered: Aug '98
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Date Posted: 6/20/05 5:07pm Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/19 - Date Edited: 6/20/05 5:17pm (1 edits total) Edited By: KSkywalker
“You . . . you took him to your house? But, Mr. Jinn . . .”

“All right. Thank you, Mr. Jinn. Oh, Master Shilbey is not going to be happy . . .”





Did anyone notice this reaction? Why wouldn't Master Shilbey be happy that one of his wards has been found and is being cared for? Sounds VERY suspicious! I don't think I'm going to like this fellow too much!

 

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Knight-Nix 
Registered: Jun '05
24113_Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan
Date Posted: 6/20/05 6:43pm Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/19
I just read this one FF.net happy its really great. I especally like Julune. Good job and thanks for reading mine.

 

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Kynstar  9194 posts
Registered: Mar '04
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Date Posted: 6/21/05 5:13am Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/19
Awww that's so sweet! Poor Obi sad Thinking nobody cares or even should. Shame on him...but if I was in his situation I'd think the same. He believes in nothing right now cuz he believes nobody believes in him. Totally sad...


hugs Well done once more! Love Mr. and Mrs. Jinn! They're so sweet together!!!

 

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darshaassant  396 posts
Registered: Mar '05
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Date Posted: 6/22/05 2:46am Subject: RE: The Unchosen (Qui/Obi AU) updated 6/19
Heh.... It's nice how they accepted Obi into their family.... pooor obi... is he gonna be alright? I HATE XANATOS (in this one)

 

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