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Jim-JamJinn Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 8/8/05 12:52pm Subject: Revan's meditation on Malachor V
	hello everyone. i wrote down a prologue for an interesting (to me anyway) story of Darth Revan, two months after the Battle of the Star Forge. I have a prologue ready. If anyone can read it and reply I would be obliged and happy to continue the story when i can find time enough to type and submit. Thank you, Jim-Jam Jinn -----signature----- feel don't think... use your instincts this saga is your life big hello to ALL you fans of the star wars saga hello to all the UK fans Thank you Mr Lucas for making us fans so happy
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Jim-JamJinn Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 8/8/05 12:54pm Subject: RE: Revan's meditation on Malachor V
	STAR WARS KNIGHTS OF THE OLD REPUBLIC REVAN'S SOLITUDE PROLOGUE: The small ghostly figures glowed like beacons of blue flame in the dark, eerie room. One was certainly human; the facial features (such as the position of the nose, mouth, eyes and ears) were evident enough for the simplist sentient beings to understand. His hair was wavy, almost carefree, his beard was fine and barely visible on the hologram. If it were not for the military uniform, one would have thought that Carth Onasi was a smuggler, and not a famed heroic soldier of the Republic. Two pistols hung in their holsters on either hip, in his hand was a small vibro-blade. Captain Onasi was a loyal friend and warrior to the Republic Senate and Military. Standing next to him was a slender, humanoid alien: a Twi'lek. Physically, Twi'leks were almost identical to humans, save two major factors in their biological appearance: their skin complexion and their lekku. A Twi'lek's most crucial part of his/her body is the lekku. These are long headtails (generally two) that can be draped over the shoulders or simply hang down their back. Lekku have special properties that allow Twi'leks to converse with one another in their native language - in which half is spoken and the other is spoken in a kind of sign language as they move artistically. The pigmentation of Twi'leks are often seen as bright vibrant colours (with the exception that some have a fair complexion similar to humans) such as red, green and blue. The one in the hologram was a blue Twi'lek, a young girl in her teenage years named Mission Vao. Although not as highly recognised as Carth, the Observer knew both as well as the other. The fact that Mission was young was a key factor behind her inability to see the true powers of the universe. That the Republic had brainwashed her with false propoganda as it had to Carth. Both were slaves to the Jedi Council and Republic Senate. They had both been given a chance of new freedoms and greater powers. Sadly both had rejected the offer on the beaches of Rakata and fled before they could be killed for treason. For that reason, the Dark Lord Revan now declared them officially as enemies of the Sith Empire and traitors to him. Sitting in his throne, in a small dank compartment on board his freighter the Ebon Hawk, Darth Revan seethed with rage beneath his hood, focusing that hatred into finding their pathetic lifeforms across the vastness of space. Although they were not visible because of the cowel of his hood, Revan's eyes burned a fiery yellow of absolute rage. A bell chimed above the durasteel door; yellow lights blinking as if dancing to the dreary sad that reminded Revan of death. 'Enter,' his voice, though cold and bitter, was also calm despite the fit of rage he was in. A fountain of light poured in, piercing his perfect darkness. In the doorway stood the figurative silouhette of a young woman. 'We have reached Malachor Five, master,' her voice was cold like Revan's, but with a soft angelic tone that had been perfect to fool even the Jedi Council. The perfect voice for seducing victims and enemies into Revan's traps. The door closed behind her, enveloping her in the darkness of its former self. Bastila Shan, former Jedi Padawan with exceptional skills and hero of the Republic, had forsaken both to join Revan and his Sith Empire. Now, as Revan's apprentice, she was stronger than ever before. During the Battle of the Star Forge, Bastila's mastery of battle meditation, coupled with her knew found knowledge of the darkside had proven to be instrumental in crippling the Republic fleet and protecting the huge weapons factory; while Revan had challenged his former apprentice Darth Malak on the Star Forge itself. Both had succeeded in their mission to preserve the Sith Empire and Revan's rightful place as its leader. 'I can feel the power of that planet from here, master,' she said, clenching her fists tightly as though she held that power within her hands. 'Now you can plan your final takeover of the galaxy and grow even stronger with energies on the planet surface.' Revan saw her in his mind's eye as clearly as he saw his own destiny in the darkside of the Force. 'We will have our revenge against those who betrayed us,' he said in that icy voice, crushing the hologram projectors with a small gesture of his right hand. -----signature----- feel don't think... use your instincts this saga is your life big hello to ALL you fans of the star wars saga hello to all the UK fans Thank you Mr Lucas for making us fans so happy
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Aiden_Sanic Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 8/8/05 6:41pm Subject: RE: Revan's meditation on Malachor V
	Hey Jim-JamJinn. I am a huge fan of KOTOR stories, and this story is gleaming with promise and entertainment. By all means, please add more. -----signature----- Fan Fics http://boards.theforce.net/user.asp?usr=1202767 Diary Challenge Entries: Birds Eye View http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/25923603/p1/?3 All The Emperors Men http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/25888343/p1/?6
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Jim-JamJinn Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 8/9/05 10:11am Subject: RE: Revan's meditation on Malachor V
	thanks Aiden-Sanic. i started writing chapter 1 during lunch today at work. should be ready and online by saturday. Lot of saber stabbing in the beggining. im feeling optimistic about this. btw does it matter that i refer to Revan as "he", i hope none of the ladies who play the game are offended -----signature----- feel don't think... use your instincts this saga is your life big hello to ALL you fans of the star wars saga hello to all the UK fans Thank you Mr Lucas for making us fans so happy
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Jim-JamJinn Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 8/9/05 10:37am Subject: RE: Revan's meditation on Malachor V
	sorry moderators i forgot to fill you in: Title: KNIGHTS OF THE OLD REPUBLIC: REVAN'S MEDITATION ON MALACHOR V Author: jim-jam-jinn Timeframe: 2 months after KOTOR Characters: Darth Revan; Bastila Shan; Carth Onasi; Mission Vao; Republic soldiers and Sith Troopers Genre: Sci-Fi/Action Keywords: Summary: Darth Revan is searching for Carth Onasi and Mission Vao who abandoned him on Rakata, to help him he is travelling to Malachor V to help regain his strength and prepare for a final assault against the Republic. Meanwhile, Carth Onasi is trying to persuade the Republic to attack the Sith academy on Korriban. Story will end with Revan vanishing and the Sith Academy in ruins, plaqued by the spirits of many soldiers and residents of the training academy. Notes: Referring to Revan as a male and as the reclaimed Sith Lord. Bastila is his apprentice. Have not played KOTOR 2 yet, so if I am wrong about Korriban academy being abandoned please let me know. -----signature----- feel don't think... use your instincts this saga is your life big hello to ALL you fans of the star wars saga hello to all the UK fans Thank you Mr Lucas for making us fans so happy
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Jim-JamJinn Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 8/13/05 3:52am Subject: RE: Revan's meditation on Malachor V
	im trying to type chapter 1 now, but im experiencing writers block, might be a couple of days before its ready. im really sorry everyone -----signature----- feel don't think... use your instincts this saga is your life big hello to ALL you fans of the star wars saga hello to all the UK fans Thank you Mr Lucas for making us fans so happy
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