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Author Topic: Kidnapped by Darkness. Obi, Qui, Xanatos,Sequel(Lost & Found) COMPLETED Thank you!
Gkilkenny 
Registered: Mar '04
7963_Obi-Wan Kenobi
Date Posted: 1/1/06 11:43pm Subject: Kidnapped by Darkness. Obi, Qui, Xanatos,Sequel(Lost & Found) COMPLETED Thank you! - Date Edited: 4/5 2:00am (19 edits total) Edited By: Gkilkenny
Title:Kidnapped by Darkness.
(A Sequel to LOST and FOUND)Lost and Found

Author: GKilkenny
Timeframe:AU Obi is Ten/twelve on the verge of becoming a Padawan
Characters:Obi-Wan, Qui-Gon, Xanatos. and others
Genre: PG
Keywords:Obi Angst- Dark side, Xanatos, kidnapping, and comfort.

Summary: This is a sequel to my first ever story written.
Obi has been brought back to the Temple after being left alone on a planet for five years, Xanatos is in prison for trying to kill him. kidnapping, obi/angst and the dark side all make an appearance in this story......


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Ten year old Obi-Wan Kenobi stood at the top of the shuttle ramp surveying the tall spires of the Temple.
His heart was thumping, he was so nervous, that he didn’t sense Qui-Gon come up behind him and rest his hands on his shoulders.

The weight on his shoulders made him jump. “Steady now Obi-Wan, do not be afraid, this is your home, this is where you belong.
This is the Jedi Temple.
“Come walk with me” Qui motioned for the boy to walk down the ramp.Followed by Yoda and Mace.
Once they stepped off the ramp onto the landing bay, Obi took a deep breath and slowly let it out, with a shudder.

Either side of the bay were streams and streams of air traffic. Many craft of different sizes screamed past.

“I don’t remember this place, it is very noisy. Where are all those space ships going and why are they in such a hurry.” he asked.
Obi –wan had not seen lanes of traffic flying past before, it seemed to him that they were flying in all directions at once.

“What if they crash into each other”? Obi asked as he turned his head to the others.
“Alarmed do not be, good pilots are most. Not often do they crash” Yoda explained.

Obi nodded then started to walk towards the railing, but stopped suddenly when in the distance he could see a very large dome
shaped building.

“What is that?” he asked pointing.

“That is the Senate Building, Senators from all over the galaxy meet there and discuss new laws, and problems throughout the republic are solved there.” Mace answered as he stepped alongside him.

“When you start studying subjects like Protocol, Galactic History and Diplomacy you will spend time in the Senate building, listening in on local sessions, It will be part of your training.” Mace added.

“Then I do not want to learn about those things” Obi said as he backed into Qui-Gon.
His breathing had become quicker and he was taking in air in short gasps.

They sensed a disturbance, caused by agitated feelings radiating from Obi-Wan.
Qui-Gon turned the boy to face him. “What is wrong Obi-Wan?”
Qui had hold of his shoulders but Obi-Wan strained his head round to look back at the building.
“I d-on’t want to go there. Not s-afe to go there” he stuttered.

The words spoken brought Qui-Gon’s memories flooding back to him of another time and place when this child had said those same words.

( It was when Xanatos had picked Obi-Wan up and taken him up to the plateau and then thrown him off into the river.
He remembered vividly what the child had said. .( “don’t want to go Not safe to Go”)
Qui-Gon remembered the promise he had made to the boy only a few days ago.

(“I am so sorry that I didn’t listen to you, all those years ago. I promise that from now on I will always listen to you.)
It was still fresh in his mind.

“Then you do not have to go there, Ok Obi” he said smiling down at the child.
“You promise”? He asked full of hope.

“Yes I promise I gave you my word that I would listen to you and my word is my bond".Qui-Gon said.

” Into the Temple go we should. Council meeting to attend Settle Obi-Wan in your Quarters Qui-Gon Then to the Chambers come you will” Yoda stated……..


In the distance in one of the offices of the Senate building set aside for Senators, stood one such man staring out towards the Temple.
His hands gripping the brass railings in front of him, He had sensed it. It made his blood boil.

His thoughts whipped around wildly. “It couldn’t be” he whispered to himself, Concealing his boiling anger under a calm façade…....


By the time Qui-Gon reached the Council Chambers, Yoda and Mace had relayed their story on to the Council.
The first reaction was disbelief, citing that a child of that age could not survive on his own, in the wild.

The question was asked whether or not the child was really Obi-Wan.

But after they showed them the Journal and Yoda insisted that it was Obi-Wan’s force signature he had felt, they nodded in acceptance.

“Difficult it will be for him to adjust to Temple life. Do you not think” asked Plo Koon.
“No lessons has he had since he was five. Need a tutor he will, and who will care for him. Will he live in the dormitory with the other initiates his age?.” Yaddle inquired.

“With Master Jinn he will stay until comfortable in his new surroundings he is. To be Qui-Gon’s Padawan he is.' Yoda announced.

“Impossible for him to be a Padawan, at this time, with no training and no education” exclaimed several of the Councillors.

“And what of Qui-Gon, missions he will have. What will become of the boy while he is away?” Another Councillor asked.

Mace caught the look Yoda gave him.

Mace cleared his throat. “I will take care of him when Qui-Gon is away on missions.”
Master Yoda, stamped his cane on the floor to gain attention.

“Obi-Wan stay with me also. Teach him I will Be ready to pass the test to be apprentice before two naming days have passed. See to it I will”

“Qui-Gon Tell us , How do you feel about all this. Will you accept him as your apprentice when turns twelve he does.” Yaddle asked.

Qui-Gon stood in the middle of the chambers and a small smile crept on his face.
He could tell that no matter what argument the Council came up with Mace and Yoda would not bend, in their determination.
He stepped forward bowing to the Councillors.
“It is my wish to take Obi-Wan Kenobi as my apprentice, the day he passes the Padawan trials.”

“And what if he doesn’t pass” announced Plo Koon.
“Pass he will” snapped Yoda.
“No doubt have I Great Jedi he will be” he added……

Obi-wan began his studies in classes with six year olds for the first few months.
It was really hard on him because some of his age mates, ridiculed him in front of a group of six year olds he was studying with.
Obi-wan was taller than the six year olds, but was small for his age of ten.
The leader of the group was a bully named Malak, he and his two friends where always picking on the younger students.
All three of them were slightly taller than Obi-wan.

“Hey whatcha doing with these little kids, are you to dumb to be in our class” Malak sniggered
His two friends laughed and pushed Obi-wan back towards the pond.
Obi-wan lost his balance and fell into the pond, but unknown to Malak and his friends Obi could stay under water for a long time.

Obi-wan didn’t like these three boys, so he swam under water and came out on the other side of the pond.

He got out and went to the exit, he decided that he would go find Qui-Gon and tell him about the bullies.

The problem was that none of the children saw him get out of the pond.
After a few minutes some of the younger children started crying, thinking Obi-wan had drown.
Malak and his friends Tome and Paulo panicked and ran to get help.

Several of the crèche Masters were sitting not far from them and heard the screams.
Once they found out what happened, a search was made of the pond.
They couldn’t find the boy anywhere.
The Masters couldn’t sense him and so they called Yoda…..

Obi-wan ran down the corridor and found Qui-Gon meditating in the star room, quietly he walked over and sat down next to Qui-Gon.
He wanted to tell him what happened, but he didn’t want to disturb Master Qui-Gon’s meditations.
So he decided to close his eyes and meditate too while he waited.

After a moment Qui-Gon sensed Obi-wan’s presence trying to meditate but failing. He was fidgeting too much and couldn’t centre himself.
Qui-Gon chuckled to himself ( He’s bored he cannot concentrate, he is like a bag full of beans just waiting for the opportunity to spill out all over the place, I think I will make him sit there for a little while longer)
Qui-Gon chuckled to himself.

But it wasn’t Obi-wan who broke the silence, it was Qui-Gon’s comm. unit.

“Jinn here” he said looking down at a sleepy Obi-wan.
The boy was just dozing off and his head was slowly falling to rest on Qui-Gons knee.

“Qui-Gon! Mace here’, I think you had better come to the pond in the fountain room.

“It’s Obi-wan”. Mace Blurted out.

Qui-Gon looked down at a now fully asleep child and said “What about Obi-wan Mace?”
“Qui The Masters here think he has drowned in the pond They have searched and cannot find him.”
“Drowned You say Mace Are you sure ?” Qui asked.

“Qui-Gon! ! NO of course I’m not SURE But we cannot find him and the children say he fell in the pond and didn’t come up.

“Calm down Mace Obi-wan didn’t drown, I can see him, he is fine” Qui-Gon told his distraught friend.

“What do you mean you can see him You don’t have visions? How can you be so calm Qui, Will you just come? and hurry up about it!.” Mace was getting frustrated.

“Take it easy Mace, I’m trying to tell you that Obi-wan is here with me!
“With you ! Where are you?” Mace snorted.

"Well I was trying to meditate in the star room, and Obi-wan came in and meditated with me."

“Meditating Obi-wan is with you meditating? But! How can he be with you, when all the children here are crying because they think he drowned.”

“Mace I can assure you that Obi-wan ‘IS’ here with me, and Now that I look at him closely, his clothes are wet.” Qui-Gon confirmed.

“Well ask him what happened, why did he let the other children believe he was in the pond?” Mace inquired.

“I’m sorry Mace but I cannot ask him anything at the moment.” Qui smiled to himself.

Why not?” asked Mace who was getting annoyed.

“Well he fell asleep while he was meditating. Listen Mace I will comm. you as soon as I get Obi home and out of his wet clothes and tuck him into bed. Jinn out”

The next day after the real story was revealed Malak, Tome and Paulo were put on probation.
Obi-wan wanted to stay as far away from them as possible, so he started to spend more time in the library, and with his tutors.

It was hard on Obi-Wan but he was determined to become a Jedi Padawan and he wanted to catch up to his age mates.
So he studied constantly moving between Qui-Gon’s apartment, Maces place and Yoda’s.
It was like having three Fathers.
Each one cared for him in different ways, but with a common factor, each one felt the importance of him being trained.



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maychorian 
Registered: Jan '05
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Date Posted: 1/2/06 6:58am Subject: RE: Kidnapped by Darkness. -- Obi, Qui, Xanatos A Sequel (Lost & Found) 2nd/ Jan
Cool start! It's an interesting idea, and I like how all three Jedi Masters are taking a hand with helping Obi-Wan adjust to Temple life. I'm sure it will be difficult, but he'll have lots of help. The part with him falling asleep was kind of sweet. love I like Qui-Gon this way, concerned and careful. Those bullies deserved their fright.

 

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kenobiwanobi 
Registered: Jun '05
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Date Posted: 1/2/06 7:10am Subject: RE: Kidnapped by Darkness. -- Obi, Qui, Xanatos A Sequel (Lost & Found) 2nd/ Jan
applause I really really like this! applause
More please.
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AriaJediKnight 
Registered: Jul '05
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Date Posted: 1/2/06 1:07pm Subject: RE: Kidnapped by Darkness. -- Obi, Qui, Xanatos A Sequel (Lost & Found) 2nd/ Jan
It's really good so far. Can't wait for more. Qui seems nicer in this one but I always say that and I'm wrong. SO I'll just see what happens. lol.
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LilQui-Gon 
Registered: Jul '04
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Date Posted: 1/2/06 1:16pm Subject: RE: Kidnapped by Darkness. -- Obi, Qui, Xanatos A Sequel (Lost & Found) 2nd/ Jan
Hey GK this is good. I see Qui-Gon is much nicer in this story, please keep him that way! I don't want to hurt him. I will look foward fo more soon! grin

 

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jodiwent 
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Date Posted: 1/2/06 1:24pm Subject: RE: Kidnapped by Darkness. -- Obi, Qui, Xanatos A Sequel (Lost & Found) 2nd/ Jan
Wow, I havn't been on line in a few weeks, SO it is nice to have this be one of the first things I see. grin

 

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Star_Drifter 
Registered: Jul '05
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Date Posted: 1/2/06 4:17pm Subject: RE: Kidnapped by Darkness. -- Obi, Qui, Xanatos A Sequel (Lost & Found) 2nd/ Jan
In the distance in one of the offices of the Senate building set aside for Senators, stood one such man staring out towards the Temple.
His hands gripping the brass railings in front of him, He had sensed it. It made his blood boil.

His thoughts whipped around wildly. “It couldn’t be” he whispered to himself, Concealing his boiling anger under a calm façade…....

I've got a bad feeling about this... It's Sidious, in his guise of Palpatine, sensing Ob-Wan! worried

It just might take all three Masters to protect him! wink

I can't wait for more of this great sequel! grin

Thanks for the PM, GK! hugs

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Bastet 
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Date Posted: 1/2/06 4:29pm Subject: RE: Kidnapped by Darkness. -- Obi, Qui, Xanatos A Sequel (Lost & Found) 2nd/ Jan
Woohoo! You started it! dancing I'm so excited!

And I must say your story is off to an awesome start! grin And it's great that it started practically right where the other one left off. love

Good to see Qui listening to Obi about his bad feeling with the senate building, but now Palpy (I'm assuming that was him) knows he's still alive, eeeee! worried

I was sad to see they were right, and Obi became the target of bullies. sad But that was funny how Obi scared the bullies without even meaning too. Heh heh. And that was cute how Obi feel asleep on Qui while trying to meditate. Awwww! love

And that conversation between Mace and Qui was funny. “What do you mean you can see him” “You don’t have visions?” How can you be so calm Qui”, “Will you just come? and hurry up about it!.” Mace was getting frustrated. Poor Mace! grin

I also love how Qui, Mace, and Yoda are taking turns taking care of Obi, and how they're all so determined to see Obi become a Padawan. love

But now I'm worried, because Obi is going to be kidnapped sometime soon, noooooo!! cry The poor boy is having enough trouble adjusting as it is! And Xanatos is insane, aaahhhh!

Ah well, I'm very much looking forward to more! grin

 

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VaderLVR64 
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Date Posted: 1/2/06 4:57pm Subject: RE: Kidnapped by Darkness. -- Obi, Qui, Xanatos A Sequel (Lost & Found) 2nd/ Jan
Nice work! applause Nice to see a sequel up and running! grin

 

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Gkilkenny 
Registered: Mar '04
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Date Posted: 1/4/06 1:19am Subject: RE: Kidnapped by Darkness. -- Obi, Qui, Xanatos A Sequel (Lost & Found) 2nd/ Jan

maychorian Thanks I thought it was about time
I gave Qui-Gon a bit of peace, and give him a fatherly
roll.
Yep deep down Qui-Gon is just a softy kiss

kenobiwanobi Thank you I will try and keep
the posts regular hugs

AriaJediKnight You are right this time Qui
is nice wink

LilQui-Gon I will keep him nice for this story
Obi needs someone nice to look after him, so you can
put away all thoughts of hurting him. hugs


jodiwent Thanks I hope you like it. hugs


Star_Drifter Thanks
yes Palpy has made an appearance, we cannot have a
sweet Qui love
without an evil Palpy. devil



Bastet Thanks
I tried to put a bit of humour in now because there is
a bit of angst coming. grin


VaderLVR64 Thanks I always intended to write a sequel
but it took a while. grin



 

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obi_webb 
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Date Posted: 1/4/06 7:25am Subject: RE: Kidnapped by Darkness. -- Obi, Qui, Xanatos A Sequel (Lost & Found) 2nd/ Jan
great job gkilkenny! applause
it's nice to see qui gon so supportive of obi from the beginning in this! and obi has mace and yoda to look out for him too! cool
i LOVED the frantic mace on the comm with qui about obi supposedly drowning! in fact, i loved the whole thing!
good to see you start another story so quickly! you keep writing and i'll keep reading!

 

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Jedi_Tigris 
Registered: Mar '05
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Date Posted: 1/4/06 2:05pm Subject: RE: Kidnapped by Darkness. -- Obi, Qui, Xanatos A Sequel (Lost & Found) 2nd/ Jan
Ooh, yay sequel! Love seeing Qui so fatherly with Obi. I like how Yoda and Mace are so determined to see Obi become a padawan and Jedi. Spooky that the Sith, probably Palpatine, can sense that Obi is back. I'm happy that Obi can sense the danger though. Loved the scare Obi gave those bullied, served them right. grin

Great start! Thanks for the pm. happy

 

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KELIA 
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Date Posted: 1/4/06 2:59pm Subject: RE: Kidnapped by Darkness. -- Obi, Qui, Xanatos A Sequel (Lost & Found) 2nd/ Jan
Poor Obi-Wan - taunted by the evil bullies right off the bat.

I'm sure with the 3 Jedi Masters looking after him, he will adjust just fine.

Very nice beginning

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Date Posted: 1/5/06 8:33pm Subject: RE: Kidnapped by Darkness. -- Obi, Qui, Xanatos A Sequel (Lost & Found) 2nd/ Jan
Well I'm intrigued! This is really good!

I love how Obi-Wan disappeared from sight and wound up falling asleep while meditating. love

I shall definately look forward to your next post. Do you have a PM list? If so, can you add me to it? praying

 

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Gkilkenny 
Registered: Mar '04
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Date Posted: 1/6/06 1:27am Subject: RE: Kidnapped by Darkness. -- Obi, Qui, Xanatos A Sequel (Lost & Found) 2nd/ Jan
obi_webb Thank you, your so kind hugs
It's nice to have a bit of humour laugh


Jedi_Tigris Yep finally got around to a sequel happy
scaring bullies always seems to put
them in their place devil

KELIA Thanks, Yep gotta have some bullies
in the story beatup

Sionnach-Airgid Thank you I'm glad your enjoying it.
I will certainly let you know when I post happy




 

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Gkilkenny 
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Date Posted: 1/6/06 2:08am Subject: RE: Kidnapped by Darkness. -- Obi, Qui, Xanatos A Sequel (Lost & Found) update 6th Jan - Date Edited: 4/5 2:10am (1 edits total) Edited By: Gkilkenny


After a long year, Obi-Wan eventually caught up to his age mates in most areas.
He had re-made a few close friends, Bant, Garen, and Siri.

He had known them before, but five years is a long time to a crèche ling, and they had forgotten him, but he had not forgotten them.
Sometimes when he was alone at night in his cave back on the planet Rayma, he would think of his friends, so he wouldn’t get lonely.

After a while they became very close again and when Qui-Gon and Mace were off planet for a week, Obi had asked Yoda if he could stay in the Dormitory with his friends.

Yoda was happy about this decision as it showed that the boy was finally feeling secure in his place at the Temple.

Over the next months as the trials were getting closer, Obi-Wan stayed more and more in the dormitories with his friends.

Soon Obi-wan hardly ever saw Qui-Gon and Mace, it seemed that there was an important on-going mission that kept Qui-Gon and Mace tripping around the galaxy for months at a time.

Obi-wan had asked Master Yoda what the mission was about, but never got a straight answer.

“When become a Padawan you do, understand about these things you will.
Not the time for you to worry about.” Yoda would say.

Obi-wan knew he shouldn’t ask about Master Jinn and Master Windu’s mission, but he had felt the unsettled feelings, coming from both Masters.

The last time they left Corusant and had said goodbye to him, it was if they were afraid for him, and were going to do something to keep him safe.

Master Yoda was right, he didn’t understand, so he would do as Yoda said and not worry.

A week later the two Masters returned, safe and sound.
They even brought Obi a present.
It was a small leather pouch that could be attached inside a Jedi tunic. It was a credit pouch to keep small amounts of credits in.
On the top flap of the pouch the letters OWK were stitched in black leather on the light brown pouch.

Obi-wan was so surprised and happy about the present he didn’t notice the worried looks on their faces.
Several more weeks flew past and Obi-wan had settled into the last term of his training.

Qui-Gon was looking for Obi-Wan to say good bye as he was heading out on another mission and wanted to see Obi before he left.

He opened himself to the force and honed into Obi’s signature.
He and his friends were in the Room of a thousand fountains.

As he approached the large pond he could hear the laughter of the four friends.
Garen was being tossed into the pond and was protesting at his treatment although Qui-Gon chuckled to himself.

If Garen stopped laughing maybe his protests wouldn’t be ignored.

“That’s not fair three against one” Garen cried out once he emerged from the water.
Siri pulled a face at him “Oh poor baby is you all wet” then she screamed light heartedly when from behind Obi-wan had picked her up and with a war cry jumped in the pond with Siri wrapped around his neck.

Bant wasted no time in jumping in bombing them all.
By the time Qui-Gon had reached them they were all splashing each other.

“Excuse me young ones” he yelled over the laughter.
They all turned at the voice. “Master Jinn” they said.
Quickly they climbed out of the pond bowing a greeting to him.

“I hate to spoil your fun, but I wish to speak to Obi-wan for a moment” He said as he motioned for the lad to come with him.

“Obi-wan, I have been called away on a mission I am leaving soon, my transport will arrive within the hour.”
The boys face went from a bright laughing expression to sadness in one instant.
“How long will you be gone Master”

Only two weeks I believe It is a relatively simple mission but it is in the outer regions of the republic. The trip there and back will be the toughest.” He answered the boy who had a distraught look on his face.

“Master Nothing can go wrong can it?" Obi asked.
“Do not worry so young one, I have been on many missions, and I do not anticipate any problems on this one, and besides Master Windu is accompanying me.
You know he will look out for me.”

“It is just that it is not long till the Padawan Trials, and I am afraid that you might miss them.” Obi-wan said.

“Do not fear my Obi-wan nothing will keep me from being here, I promise that if a mission comes up around that time I will refuse to go.”
“Now return to your friends I must see the Council before I leave.”

“Very well Master and May the Force be with you”

“And with you also young one” Qui-Gon smiled at him.


The Padawan Trials were only a month away and Obi’s name day was two weeks after that.
Master Yoda was confident that Obi would pass, as were Qui-Gon and Mace.

But Obi-wan had been having dreams, and in his dreams, he didn’t take the trials.

He couldn’t see why in his dreams, but it scared him.

He had discussed these dreams with Qui-Gon, who had dismissed them as his nervous anticipation of the exams.
He had told Obi-Wan that he was ready for the trials and not to worry so much.

Walking back to where his friends were he could hear an argument taking place.
He rushed back to the pond just in time to see a fight going on between Garen and the big bully Malak.

Malak was twice the size of Garen who was the smallest of their group.
As he ran towards them, two of Malak’s friends were holding Siri and Bant down on the ground.

Malak never knew what hit him as Obi-wan charged into him knocking him into the pond.
Obi then turned to the other two grabbing one and pulling him off Bant, and in the confusion Siri was able to push the other one off as well.

“What do you think you are doing” Obi shouted to Malak who was climbing out of the pond.
He came up to Obi glaring at him and said.
“You just wait, I will get you. How dare you push me in the pond.”

“How dare you attack my friends. I think you should leave before I call the Masters.” Obi said.

Malak had been humiliated in front of his friends, so he retaliated.
“Oh does the poor little lost boy need to run to the Masters, your a weakling
You better hope you don’t have to fight me in the trials, Kenobi because you will lose and then you won’t be good enough to become Master Jinn’s apprentice”. He smirked.

“Come-on” he screamed to his cohorts, then he turned and stormed off, with his followers tagging behind him.

Obi waited until the bully had disappeared then he went to help Garen up. “What happened” he asked.

“I threw a container of water at Siri, she ducked and Malak was standing behind her.” Garen said.
“He lost his temper and charged me, knocking me down.”
“Yeah the bully” Bant added. “I tried to push him off but one of his so called friends pushed me over”
“And the other one grabbed me “Siri said.

“Why is he such a dork, He never does anything nice, you have to wonder if he will ever make it as a Jedi”. Siri said helping her friend off the ground.

“Come on” Obi stated lets go and get cleaned up, its nearly meal time.

“Boy Obi is that all you think about ‘Food’ Bant laughed.
“No but right now I am, and I am hungry Lets go" he added...

Later that day Obi-wan was walking down the hall from the library
when Malak stepped from the arch way blocking Obi’s path.

“Where yah going Kenobi where are yah body guards."
He placed his hand on Obi’s shoulder stopping his progress down the hall.

“Leave me alone Malak find someone else to bother I do not have time for your games”
He grabbed Malak’s hand pulling it off and went to step away.

Just then Master Jason came around the corner, Malak saw him before Obi did and screamed,as he twisted his hand in Obi’s grip.

“Ahhhrg! Help me he’s trying to break my arm.” Obi was confused by the outcry until he felt Master Jason grab him and pull him away from Malak.

“What’s going on here What are you doing Initiate Kenobi?”

Before Obi could answer, out of the archway one of Malak’s friends emerged.
“Master Jason we were going to the library when Obi-wan started taunting Malak.
He pushed me in there then grabbed Malak’s hand twisting it. We didn’t do anything to him." the other boy Paulo said.

“What do you have to say about this initiate Kenobi” Master Jason demanded.

“Master Jason it was him who was taunting me. I didn’t know his friend was there.
I tried to leave but Malak grabbed me. I was just defending myself. Sir”

Master Jason thought about what was said.

He knew Malak was a hot head and a bully and no one had been able to make him see the error of his ways. He was heading down the path of Darkness.


He and his friends had been put on detention that many times, that the Council had almost decided to send the boys back to their home planet or to one of the Corps.
The boys had been counselled about their behaviour, but to no avail, they were too arrogant for their own good.
Master Jason had recommended scaring them into behaving but the Council felt that kind of tactic was too harsh.
But Master Jason had plans for Malak and decided that he would experiment with the tactic and see where it led.

So when Master Jason spoke it was not what was expected.

“I am disappointed in you Initiate Kenobi, as it appeared to me that you were the aggressor, in this instant. Please return to the Dormitory and wait I will be come to speak to you shortly.”

“But Master I did nothing wrong” Obi sounded indignant at the accusation.

“Do you intend to add disrespect to your charge as well Initiate Kenobi” ?”
“No Sir Obi bowed and turned and walked away.

Malak and his friend were chuckling at their perceived cleverness, until the Master turned to glare at them.

He addressed Malak only.

“Young Malak your foolishness is apparent. You are heading for a fall and your time here is short.
But I suggest that if you wish to remain in this Temple and if you are hoping to become a Padawan, you will heed my warning and do not try to fool me again I believe young Kenobi was right about you.” Master Jason said.

Malak’s mouth sagged open.

“Why then Master Jason, did you agree with me?” Malak asked in confusion.

“Because young Malak, I wanted to see that arrogant smirk wiped off your face, you have always been the bully, but sometimes bullies are the biggest cowards, I see potential in you and I may decide to take you as my apprentice, and if that day comes you will know the meaning of humility; I will not tolerate your arrogance and egotism”. Master Jason added.

“I need a challenge, I will use any means at my disposal to make you into an obedient Padawan, even if I have to train you from daylight to dark or beat it into you.
You think you are so brave ganging up one initiate, let’s see how brave you are when you become my apprentice. Now both of you return to your dormitory and another thing, I do not want to ever see you, and your two friends in each others company again.
Paulo I suggest you find another pastime, like studying plant growing, because that is where you will be going, you and your friend Tome. Because I will make sure that you end up growing plants, if I ever see you three boys together."
As Master Jason moved off he clipped Malak over the ear, “now go” he said...


“What was that all about Malak?”, Paulo asked as they walked back to the dorm.
“Geeze I don’t know, but I know one thing I do not want to be his apprentice, he’s creepy.” Malak stammered.

“I don’t think I like Master Jason either said Paulo, and I don’t want to go to the Agri Corps !” he whined.
“Can he do that? Paulo asked.
“He is a Master, I suppose he can, I certainly do not want to find out.” Malak answered his friend.
“What are we going to do then?” Paulo stammered.

“Well for starters Keep clear of Kenobi and Master Jason” he stated.
And you better tell Tome, that we wont be hanging around together Master Jason gives me the creeps” Malak said.

Master Jason chuckled, as he watched the retreating forms of Malak and Paulo.

He mused to himself (I better go find Obi-wan and convince him of my ruse, I want Kenobi to feel comfortable around Malak.)
Jason snickered (I have a plan for that boy Malak, he will suit my needs just fine.)



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