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RevanTheOne Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 1/8/06 8:56pm Subject: Kotor- The New Jedi Order
	Knights Of The Old Republic The New Jedi Order Its been 25 years since Exile, Natan Satome and his crew defeated Sion, Kreia and Nihilus. Natan succeeded in finding Revan on the end of the Outer Rim. The pair returned to Coruscant two years after Revan originally left and the Jedi were regarded as hereoes of the Old Republic. Rebuilding the Order has been difficult but the Force is with them. Now a Jedi Master and member of the High Council alongside old friends such as Natan, Bastila, Yuthura Ban, and aspiring Master, her stepson Dustil, Revan will need all her wits to fend off the greatest threat known to Republic space The Yuuzahan Vong. For the first time twenty-five years peace was a somewhat attainable dream for those of the beloved Old Republic. The planets Telos and Taris had finally been brought into the splendor and glory they once were, Mandalorains were starting to co-exsist in the new government, thanks to their leader Mandalore. Even the Sith threat had become a distant memory. People were finally starting to push the Mandalorian and Jedi Civil Wars out of their minds at long last. Even those old enough to remember the days of Exar Kun were taking that long baited breath- the well deserved breather. Finally able to enjoy life to its fullest. Despite all of that, and much more, Jedi Master Revan Onasi was not at peace with herself. Now well past forty, into her early fifties, Revan was starting to understand the wisdom comes with age policy, as well as a few kinks to once finely oiled reflexes. Using the Force to augment herself, Revan used both hands to push herself to her feet, after sitting motionless in on the stone floor in the circular Masters meditation chamber. "Lord Revan, its been nearly five hours. Are you feeling well?" "Mmmmm... a bit tired. Old age." Revan mused, crossing the room to the scattered cushions on the rim of the room. The lanky, wirey figure once known as Jedi Exile stood in the doorway. "By years and events you should at least be a thousand. Heck, maybe even two." Natan Satome said with a cheerful smile. "Ah, but being married to Carth and bonded sister with Bastila has slowed my aging process, I think." Revan said calmly. Natan nodded. Finally having shed his 'Exile' status after Malachor V's destruction and having joined his old commander in her final quest to rid the "True Sith" from the Outer Rim sectors. He'd been a cautious man of 28 when he'd found her again, new to the ways of a weapons master. His smooth jet black hair showed streaks of grey at the temples and was thinning to his great dislike. Many a man of the Satome family was cursed by this element. Like her most loyal friend, Revan too had begun to show signs of grey. Her beautiful dark skin was marred with scars that were hidden beneath her robes. But a cheerful youthfulness shown from her eyes, as well as Natan's. They were inseparable, and through the Force they were beacons of light. "I did have a reason for my visit. The High Council is starting a session, and Master Bindo and Master Ban want to introduce to you some promising young padawans later today." "A Master's work is never done... even if it is building the council from ground up." Revan said, pressing her thumb and forefinger tightly to her eyes. "Come now, there's a special treat, Master." Natan said with twinkling eyes. "A certain cargo ship with a blue twi'lik and Mandalorain are with Masters Bindo and Ban." "Mission and Canderous..." Revan implored with a surge of excitement in her voice. She'd always remember the fiesty but hot tempered Mandalorian by his true name- one whom she'd fought against and beside on the battlefield. Canderous Ordo. Now cheiftan of the Mandalorain Clans. "We don't want to keep them waiting. You know how Bastila will get if we're late." Natan said teasingly. Revan shook her head. "Always on the move." she mutterd, before drawing her robes tightly around her. "Come then, lets be off." -----signature----- Revan & Exile. Two kindered souls ravaged by war. Someday soon, they'll find a way back home
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WyoJedi Registered: Nov '05	Date Posted: 1/9/06 9:30am Subject: RE: Kotor- The New Jedi Order
	Interesting take on post Kotor. I look forward to seeing where you take this. Cheers, Wyo -----signature----- Proud Master of PRINCESSCAMBRIA... SVRF Rogue 35 Emergence - http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=24909454&brd=10477&replies=0
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VaderLVR64 Title: Manager Emeritus Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 1/9/06 11:52am Subject: RE: Kotor- The New Jedi Order
	Looking forward to an update on this one! -----signature----- R.I.P John, Alex, Jason, and Christian Never forgotten Soldiers' Angels http://soldiersangels.org/ 2114 soldiers waiting for someone to care
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RevanTheOne Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 1/9/06 8:52pm Subject: RE: Kotor- The New Jedi Order
	Yay! Reviewers! Thanks so much! First post Kotor fic! ~Temple Waiting Room~ "They're late." Canderous growled. "Nope, Jedi are never late or early. They're just there." Mission said. "They're late." Canderous said with final. Mission shrugged and looked around at the temple's settings. So much has changed. Coruscant has changed, my friends have changed. I've changed... cept Griff, he's one stubborn nerf-hearder. "Now lass, don't get so frazzled all the time." Jolee said, wearing his trademark grin. He'd led two padawans, a boy Twi'lek and a young girl Cathar- to Juhani's great pleasure to receviced 'advanced' trainning on Coruscant. The doors whooshed open, and Revan and Natan walked out into the foyer area and greeted their guests. Canderous did a rigid bow- he'd only do this for his comrades, he slowly began to realize as 'friends' The strength that Revan and Natan showed during the Wars and throughout their adventures hearalded that. "Mission, Canderous. I'm glad to see you're both well." Revan said, folding her hands in the billowing sleeves of her robes. Natan bowed to Mission and then looked at the padawans. "Please come right this way." Revan watched the two quiveirng youths go down the main hall towards the high council chambers and chuckled. Her pre-war memories and memories that were programmed told of the same fear she'd showed when she was brought fourth in front of the Dantoonie High Council. "You look tired, Rev. Don't push yourself to hard okay?" The blue alien scoundral caught her friend in a bone crushing hug. "Every warrior needs to know when to take a breather. Even those who have a spouse." Canderous agreed, with a glint in his eye. "Canderous, old friend.... seriously..." Revan felt the blush spreading up her face and turned her attention to fiddling with her lightsaber. Mission wagged a finger teasingly. "You dont' think we came here without a surprise for you? Do ya?" Despite being a Jedi Master, one of the most powerful of her time, Revan looked utterly clueless. "I'm afraid.. I do't understand." A mask of darkenss fell over her eyes. "Then maybe you need to take a closer look then, huh beautiful?" "C- Carth?! Carth!" Revan turned and threw her arms lovingly around her husband. They kissed, the bond of love circulating between them that seemed to breech across space and time itself. The couple was once again united as one. "ewwww! they're kissing!" Two teenagers stood in the doorway of the temple. A boy with tan skin and unruly brown hair and a girl with matching skin and dark hair. Both were dressed in padawan robes and had lightsabers. "That's the other part of the suprise! All the way back from their little training exersion on Yavin III." Canderous affimred, before nodding to Carth. "I took good care of em. Don't worry." "I would't trust them with anyone else, but you." Carth affirmed, stroking his wife's cheek. Revan rested her head agaisnt his strong chest and felt the beard that familar stubble. "Japser." she warned the boy "you didn't do anything to get into trouble, did you?" Jasper pushed a lock of his brown hair out of his eyes and smiled. "Who me? No mom." "And Jayla?" "Course not mom!" "Kids. can't live with em." Carth agreed "Certainly not without them." Revan said. "Master Revan. Bastila is waiting." Natan had reappeared and looked calm and at peace. "There's my cue....." Revan reluctently pulled herself from Carth's grip and turned to her two twin children, and crossed her arms behind her back. "Now, go and see your brother. Dustil said he'd take you out to thousand fountains room." she pointed a finger "If you do your excercises and are polite." "Yes!" "Bye!" The two took off faster than the old Ebon Hawk from the spacesports of Nal Hutta. A robed figure moved from the shadows cunningly. "I'll watch em, don't worry." the speaker was a womanm, a power jedi knight. "Of that, I have no doubt of Mira." Carth said, as he lovingly watched his wife go to Natan and enter the High Council Chambers -----signature----- Revan & Exile. Two kindered souls ravaged by war. Someday soon, they'll find a way back home
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WyoJedi Registered: Nov '05	Date Posted: 1/10/06 9:04am Subject: RE: Kotor- The New Jedi Order
	Revan and Carth have 2 kids? Wow. I like the interaction you are setting up here with old friends. I look forward to more on this fic. Cheers, Wyo -----signature----- Proud Master of PRINCESSCAMBRIA... SVRF Rogue 35 Emergence - http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=24909454&brd=10477&replies=0
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RevanTheOne Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 1/10/06 4:21pm Subject: RE: Kotor- The New Jedi Order
	Dustil folded his arms inside the billowing sleeves, using the Force to augment himself from his medatative position in the room of a thousand fountains and rubbed his dark eyes wearily. "you don't know the meaning of break, do ya, flyboy?" "Is that a question for a fact?" Dustil Onasi looked across the room at Mira who was sitting at the edge of one of the pools, idly tracing a ring in the water with her finger. Her short cropped red hair fell just past her shoulders, and her jedi knight robes were perfectly falling in place with the rest of their body. Dustil arose and walked silently across the room and wrapped his arms tightly around Mira's waist and rested his chin on her shoulder, gently planting a kiss on her cheek. "love you, bounty girl." "Heh. I'd say the same, flyboy. you take after your old man now." "Ouch. You hurt my manly feelings with that one." "Oh, I'll bet." The two Jedi knights found each other in the quiet calmness of the room. They'd known their love for quite sometime, but were afraid to come out openly to the others about their feelings. Its true, my parents professed their love over twenty years ago after the Jedi Civil Wars. My mother left for a long time too as well, and my father waited for her. Like how Brianna loves Natan... I only hope I can love Mira as much... Dustil thought as he began to rock her gently against his chest. "Dusty! Duuusty!!" "Kids. Someday they'll get it right. Let them act like it for at least a litte while." Mira affirmed. "Its Dustil." Dustil muttered, slowly releasing Mira from his grip and then turned to see the two teens stampeading to the main fountain. Jasper and Jayla weren't kids really, but sixteen respectively. Their powers were fledging, someday they'd surpass thier mother, and take her role as leaders in the New Jedi Order. "What are you two doing here? Alooone." Jayla said, sitting down next to Mira with a mischevious smile. Mira ruffled her hair and then watched Jasper pace along the less beaten path of the ingrown forest. "The Force is strong here....I'm ready for my training lessons, Master Onsai, Master Mira." "I may be a Jedi Knight, I'm no master yet." Mira said, barely trying to hide the joy she had in her voice. Jasper clasped his hands behind his back. "My mother- Master rather, and Master Satome seem to think highly of you." "The Force wills, and we are only to serve." Mira recited, though she made it sound more painful than it was by remembering the jedi quotes Natan told them over and over on the Ebon Hawk. "Say, when will Jedi Rand and Jedi Dur be back?" Jayla asked curiously. " I believe Bastila sent them on a mission to the planet Telos for boarder checkups. They'll be home sometime next week." "Good, I can't wait to show Atton what new pazaak moves I've learned." Jayla grinned. "I've been waiting to modulate those new hydrospanner parts to the Ebon Hawk's mainframe with T3." Jasper said, slowly unclipping his lightsaber from his belt. "Activites that should- and will, hone your Jedi skills to their fullest." Dustil agreed, unstrapping his twin green blades. "I will be honored to fight you, Master Onasi." Jasper said. Jayla looked at Mira. "One quickie?" "Sure kiddo." Mira pulled the double bladed blue saber from her belt and ignited it. The four Jedi met in the center of the room and crossed blades respectively before taking their various stances of makashi, nimon, ataru, and juyo. ~~ "Welcome members. Council is now in session." The members sat in a circle on cushions that reflected the equality and tranqulity. Revan, Natan, and Bastila took the middle as senior members, Atris, and Yuthura Ban on the left and right. Jolee sat in as a substitute member prior to his arrival. "It seems to me, that the issue concerning Jedi Knights Rand and Dur. I dont' know what you the kids, but the situation is far dire than expected." Jolee said. "I know that, but we are barely four hundred right now, Master Bindo." Natan said firmly, squeezing the chair with one gloved hand. Nails dug into upholstry. "Everyone, calm yourselves. I sense... they're running into rough waters, but the Force runs strong in them both. Are they not two of 'lost jedi?' Revan said quietly. "Revan, surely you do not intend to let them fend for themselves." Bastila murmured. "No, no. I would not be a Jedi Master or a human if I did not look out for the well being of my friends. I will mediate on this and come to a proper solution." Natan breathed in and out slowly. Atton and Bao-Dur should have been back a long time ago. He stood slowly and walked towards the window. "Master Revan- a private word." Revan slowly rose from her seat and went to Natan's side. The Force flowed easily as the bond she and Bastila shared. Former dark lord and Jedi Exile shared a moment in time that was more intimate as lovers and secretive as brother and sister. "I sense... a flux in the Force." Natan murmured. "I know. I feel it too." Both looked at another and then came to a decision. Revan and Natan turned back towards the awaiting council members. "Natan and I must take an extended leave. Master Bido, Master Shan, please review the padawans, and I will review the reports when I return." Revan said. ~~ "Hyaaaaaaaaaa!" Japer and Dustil's lightsabers crashed together fiercely but without the strike to land a killing blow. Two ice green blurs and a cyan flashed and sparked with gusto as well as a mighty dust cloud in the process. "You're feeding too much into your emotions, feel the Force and use it to elevate your movements." Dustil said, as he backed off, releasing a burst of stasis. "Ha! Shows what you know, Master!" Jasper used the Force to repel the attack and then Force jump over his head and land neatly on the side of him. Gathering the Force like a lcloak, Jasper brought his blade up to meet Dustil's icy green once again. "Boys will be boys." Mira commented. "He's not a boy. He's my twin brother. Its an entirely different specesis." Jayla said. Both female Jedi had clashed their blades together. Mira's blue blades swept over Jayla's head. Jayla's orange blade slapped Mira's away and took the ataru stance. "Not bad, you've been watching Natan train, haven't you?" Mira commented. Jayla's focus wasn't on the lightsaber battle. Through the Force she sensed Natan and her mother making their way towards the docking bay, speaking in low hushed tones. Mom? Master Natan? What's going on? I feel.. as though... something.... is not right... Mom.. don't leave us again... please.... Next Up: Revan, Natan and a stowaway or two set off to find MIA Jedi Knights, Atton and Bao-Dur. What happened in the first place? -----signature----- Revan & Exile. Two kindered souls ravaged by war. Someday soon, they'll find a way back home
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WyoJedi Registered: Nov '05	Date Posted: 1/11/06 8:26am Subject: RE: Kotor- The New Jedi Order
	Nice update. I like how you have put Dustil and Mira into a relationship. It seems the Jedi might have changed their attitudes a little. Good update. Cheers, Wyo -----signature----- Proud Master of PRINCESSCAMBRIA... SVRF Rogue 35 Emergence - http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=24909454&brd=10477&replies=0
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RevanTheOne Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 1/13/06 8:51pm Subject: RE: Kotor- The New Jedi Order
	Revan easily probed the controls of the legendary Ebon Hawk from a gentle start into a fierce roar. The repulserlifts retracted smoothly into the hull and the engines whirrled to life. "Dweep, beeeep!" "Relax T3, Revan knows about the ajustments." Natan said, settling himself down comfortably into the co-pilot's chair once again. Revan, had taken Captain's seat. Odd really, because technically it was 'their' ship. "Statement: Are we off to singe some meatbags, Masters?" "No. No, not no HK. Just keep patrolling the ship. No using your ion cannons on T3 in the medbay room either." "Exclamation: Why, Masters! To think I would be so incoriable to do such a thing." "HK, you would." Natan said, before going to the galxy map. Revan checked the navi computer and pointed. "Here we go. Sector 27-AC. Thirty miles... beyond Telos? Sith's blood... what did those two get into now?" "Master Revan." Natan said calmly, slicking a piece of black and gray streaked hair behind his ear "they are new to the Force after all." "Natan. Don't lecture me. One of the Jedi Knights is Atton. He's a scoundal with Force powers!" "...........true. We'd best hurry along them." Revan sighed to herself, and immediately wished she'd told Carth and the children she was leaving. Oh sure, Jasper and Jayla could feel her through the Force, but... afer all the pain she'd put Carth through over the years... and Natan never did say goodbye properly to Brianna either. "We've got company." Natan suddenly annouced as he strode to the main hull of the ship. Revan's gloved fingers squeezed the controls tightly. "Ready the laser cannons, I'll keep her going until we can figure out another plan." "I mean in teh cargo hold." Natan supplied simply. The Jedi walked into the bare room, and turned his attention to some empty crates. "Jas, Jay, come out now." The twin children of Revan Onasi peeked out with impish grins on their faces. "Covers blown, everybody!" Jasper annouced, making sure his saber was still on his belt. "So it seems. Go and report to your mother." Natan ordered gently. From a corner of the room, the large cargo contain opened and Mira and Dustil tumbled out. "Ow! Geez flyboy, bulkier than a dead Bantha on a tatoonie famine." Mira grouched. "Ah, another stoway." Natan said, with a bemused smile as he crossed his arms. "Eeer... yeah." The two Jedi Knights looked at one another and blushed before straightening robes and sabers alike. Then the trio returned to the cockpit where Revan was giving a fine chewing out to her children. "D- does your father know about this?! If we hadn't already made the jump, I'd sent you both right back to Coruscant this second!" "But you can't, mom." Jayla said with satisfaction "That's why Jas and I waited until after the jump." "Wow. They got you there." Mira speculated with a smile. Dustil gave her shoulder an affectionate squeeze. "Kids.... your father and I are going to have a serious talk. Perahps another outing with 'Uncle Canderous' is in oder, hmmmm?" "Noooooooooooooo!" Jasper and Jayla moaned, feeling sick all of a sudden. "I knew you'd see it my way." Revan said. -----signature----- Revan & Exile. Two kindered souls ravaged by war. Someday soon, they'll find a way back home
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RevanTheOne Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 1/25/06 5:00pm Subject: RE: Kotor- The New Jedi Order
	Where'd My Reviews go?! Is my fic that bad? Pleaase like this chapter! ~Ebon Hawk~ Revan hailed Carth from the communications room aboard the Hawk while Jayla and Jasper pestered Natan about the innerworksing of this marvekous ship. I don't know what to tell you, Gorgeous. I mean, one minute they're with Dustil and Mira, and the next-Carth stared, but Revan merely raised a hand. "Playing stoways. Yes, I know. Look, Dustil and Mira on onboard too. Hm. Seems like the old days." "The real old days, if you know what I mean there, Beautiful. Please, I know you can certaintly look after yourself, but you and Natan have this thing were you think you can take down the Sith all by yourself and I- "Is THIS about those damn trust issues again? I AM not ging to let ANYTHING happen to them!" Revan snapped, her gloved finger skillfully landing on the 'end' button. Carth considered his wife's words. "No. No, I suppose not. You love them both as much as I do. Hell, even more probably cause you are their mother afterall. I shouldn't have underestimated you." Carth admitted tersely. "I think we'll talk when we get back. Oh, and apologze to Bas for us, okay?" "Dammnit woman, always making me do the hard stuff! Honestly, you Jedi are something else I'll tell you." his voice softened "Be careful. All of you. We can't have anymore Jedi rushing off again." "I won't, Carth. Promise. I love you, Goodbye." Revan watched the palm sized version of her husband fade into empty air. A loud screech was heard as T3 warbled and protested. "Okay, so maybe I left my hydrospanner in there a bit to tightly!" Jayla muttered. The droid beeped out a seemingly hateful reply. "Aww, she's learning T3. He doesn't know you, like we do." Natan said, patting the loyal droid's silver dome. It chirped happily and rolled into the engine room for another round. "Natan, we're getting too old for these rescue missions." Revan said, leaning tiredly in the doorway. Both wore the faded robes of Masters, age showing in everything but their eyes. "Hey, Commander. Don't feel like that." Natan placed a hand over her shoulder, giving it a affectionate squeeze. "The Mandalorain Wars destroyed us. The Jedi Civil Wars... I created. The Star Forge. The death of Kriea, the fall and redemption of Atris. Our little stint in the Outer Rims, the creation of the New Jedi Order," "Reforming the High Council and the Council on Dantoonie." Natan said gently. "For all the death we've caused, I'd hoped we'd made a dent in attonement at least." "I think I can safely speak or both of us, when I say It'll take the rest of our lives to makeup for the atrosities we've commited. Another life of endless wondering after we've passed on in the Force." Revan said, turning to face her old General. For the firs time, the other realized how old the other was. Revan noted Natan's one stunning black hair, neatly swept behid his ears or in a ponytail during training was shot with white. A neatly trimmed beard formed around strong cheekbones. Natan speculated the weight his former leader and Dark Lord had beared. The revelation, the betryal of Bastila, the Star Forge. Malak's death. Her shoulders slumped, and her eyes seemed.... tired. Her dark skin once shinning was mottled. Her chocolate locks drooped and were shot with gray as well. "We're not getting any younger." Revan pointed out with a smile tugging at her lips. Natan nodded. "Ah, but being married to Carth and Brianna has slowed our aging processes some, I think." "They'd be fools to love us. Marry us." Revan said "They'd be fools not to love us." Natan quipped. Both Jedi Masters laughed, a seemingly inside joke that only they shared. A cough from behind. "Wow, you two really are pushing two hundred in human bodies. Maybe you are Hutts or something... I always knew you were both weird." Mira joined. She was younger than the two, but nowhere near the fiesty young woman Natan had rescued from Nar Shadda. Mira was now at least past forty, but kept her body in incredible shape over the years. "Mira, I think its safe to say, you can gladly join the ranks to be called 'old.'" Revan said, looking at the galaxy map with earnest. "Whatever. I use my saber, I defend the Republic. I can face aging all by myself thank you very much." Mira muttered before going into the main hold. "Revan, we're coming up on the Unkown Regions shortly. Should we jump?" "Course. Relay a message to the Temple. Tell Jolee to bring Atris up to speed, and another to the Dantoonie Academy. Juhnai will have to train the younglings for a little while longer. You may want to call Brianna as well." Revan instructed. "Oh yeah... I'd better inform her of our little adventure as well. Plus apologize to Hayden." "Some father you are, leaving your son without a word. Tsk tsk." Revan said, thinking back to the fair haired, tan skinned thirteen year old padawan. "He'll only be mad that he didn't get to come. He's making great progess as a Counsular. I've been monitoring him." "Jasper has the makings of a Sentinal, while Jayla is a Guardian. Remarkable the Force. Truly." Revan admited. The Hawk lurched as they were thrust into a asteroid field. T3 screamed by as the ship rocked and lurched from side to side. "Gee, what does this remind you of?!" Natan said, scrambling to the co-pilot's seat. "Sith ships? The Peragus facility? You trying to drive this tihng for the first time?" Revan guessed as she dropped into the pilot's chair. "Funny, Onasi. Very. Mira, get the kids and find Dustil! Man those guns! We've got to shoot those things before they blast us out of the sky!" Natan yelled. -----signature----- Revan & Exile. Two kindered souls ravaged by war. Someday soon, they'll find a way back home
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WyoJedi Registered: Nov '05	Date Posted: 1/25/06 5:20pm Subject: RE: Kotor- The New Jedi Order
	I really like the lighthearted manner between the masters. It seems they have very natural, friendly relationships. I really like your style. Good job. Cheers, Wyo -----signature----- Proud Master of PRINCESSCAMBRIA... SVRF Rogue 35 Emergence - http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=24909454&brd=10477&replies=0
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JediMasterGaraceDane Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 1/26/06 5:07pm Subject: RE: Kotor- The New Jedi Order
	Nice take on how event are after KOTOR 2. I also love the kids and the brother and sister thing you ahve with Revan, the Exile, Carth, and Bastila. Nice touch adding the Vong as the main enemy Cant wait to see where you take this. Its great. Seems like this is going to get very good very soon..... -----signature----- "A padawan's tie to his Master should never be broken in a time of WAR."-Jedi Knight Garace Ryn. http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=22902108&brd=10475&replies=0 -Sith Wars Series: A Hero's Legend Ends Padawan to Darth Ishtar
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RevanTheOne Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 4/10/06 5:04pm Subject: RE: Kotor- The New Jedi Order
	"Cool! Space battle!!" "Jasper!" Dustil laid a protective hand on his younger stepbrother's shoulder and gave it firm squeeze. Mira smoothed the wrinkles in her Jedi robes and turned her head to the approaching battle. "We're going to have to fight." she murmured "blaster bolts, I hate feeling cornered like this." Natan raced down the hall, speeding past both Jedi knights and grabbing the ladder and climbing down into the belly of the Hawk. In the control room, Natan's headset winked to life. "Missiles are locked, loaded and running very hot. Do some fast flying or we're toast!" Natan ordered. "Fast flying?! How bout 'good shooting' sexless marsh toad!" Revan snapped, her fingers punching in rapt codes as she spoke into the intercom on the main dashboard. Okay so only Carth, Bastilla, and Atton have ever truly flown this thing, but I was co-pilot for sometime! Errr... I think... right, afterburners! The Hawk granted with a groan of protest as the thrusters kicked to life, and the massive cargo ship jerked from its repreive and shot into the inky blackness of the night. The asteroids, to Revan's horror, followed them!! "They're ALIVE?!" the Jedi Master yelped. "It seems that way." Mira had said this. She and Dustil were watching them congrugate outside the ship. The red hot ribbons of lasers pelted the Hawk over and over again. T3 warbled in protest. "We're taking maximum damage! Shields down at 35% We can't take much more!the droid beeped. "Don't give us the odds, T3! We need an escape- we need to run!" Mira grimly confirmed. Dustil's hands clenched. "Dad would fight. He would!" the younger Onasi man said proudly. "Your father knows when to retreat!" Revan roared in a voice Dustil rarely heard her use. "Mom! Mom!" Jayla scrambled into the cockpit and looked ashen faced. "What is it Jay?" her mother implored snappishly. "T- the rocks... meteories, whatever! Fragments are breeching the hull!" "Hang on, this is going to be awfully tight." Revan said, dropping into the captain's seat. Mira and Dustil dropped into the chairs on either side of her. "Jay, get Jasp and tell him to hold on tight! The med room is the best place on the ship! Tell T3 to do emergency shutdown! Go!" Natan's voice reverberated from the commn unit. "Yes, Master." Jayla said obediently and ran to do as she was told. From the outside, the Hawk made a sharp turn and plunged straight down. The sharpnel of the meteorites were flung off in all directions, the heat sheilds cooking what couldn 't be done airborne. One of the meteor ships fired three direct hits to the Hawk's flank, sending the planet wildly out of the way and damaging the back hull. It crashed on a unknown planet, and all communication was lost instantly. Jedi Temple. Coruscant. "NO!" Atris, Jolee, and Yuthra looked at Bastilla with worried interest. The 'Jedi Princess' opened her eyes slowly with deep sadness. "I- I felt... a...great pain.... Revan, Natan, Mira, Dustil.... Jayla, Jasper.... they're gone." she whispered. -----signature----- Revan & Exile. Two kindered souls ravaged by war. Someday soon, they'll find a way back home
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Lady_Snow_Kaguya Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 8/8/06 2:20pm Subject: RE: Kotor- The New Jedi Order
	oh, please tell me you'll continue. This is bad...real bad...like Episode III bad news.....poor everybody! -----signature----- Former Padawan of MASTER_KAYM Jedi = Intergalactic Therapists I ship Qui/Tahl Republicans for Voldemort "You threw yourself into a lake of acid just to spite your Master. I think that makes you mentally unstable in most galactic dictionaries!"-Tahl
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