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Gkilkenny Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 3/17/06 7:57pm Subject: * My Brothers Keeper.* (Obi, Owan, Qui, Dex, OC's AU/JA 23rd May " Home sweet home *The End" - Date Edited: 5/23/06 3:22am (15 edits total) Edited By: Gkilkenny
	Title: My Brothers Keeper Author: Gkilkenny Timeframe: AU JA Genre: Obi/Angst Characters: Obi, Qui, OC's The Council,Bail,and Dex except for the OC's I don't own any of the characters sniff sniff, just borrowing them. Summary: Through no fault of his own Obi-wan is sent back to his family, there he discovers depception and death, leaving him alone to raise his little brother, what happens when they are forced to flee for their lives. ~~~~~~~~ Obi-wan couldn’t believe it, in trouble again all because of Arly Bron, that evil excuse for an initiate, who would probably end up being a smuggler or a thief something like that. Why couldn’t the Council see his faults and just send him away why did he have to ruin other lives in his decent to Darkness. Obi-wan said to him self as he fumed over another run in with the slightly older boy. Arly Bron was determined to end his career as a Jedi before it even started. They had transferred Arly to Obi-wan’s room, all because Obi’s roommate had been chosen recently and his other two room mates had gone to different areas of the Jedi one had gone to the Agri Corps and one had gone to medical corps. So that left twelve year old Obi-wan in a room that was meant for four boys, he had the room all to himself. But it didn’t last long first came Dag-mar then Gerlin and then Arly. Dag-mar and Gerlin stood at the door with their bags. “Come in” said Obi-wan “I wont bite you, he said chuckling” “You can have any of those beds, but this one is mine” Obi said pointing to the one by the window. The two new boys seemed very shy, but soon Obi had them talking and laughing. The boys got on very well and became friends, they studied together and were becoming quite good at their lessons. Obi-wan was very happy with his new room mates and was looking forward to becoming a Padawan as were Dag-Mar and Gerlin. But all that changed when Arly arrived. Arly was a bully and he had been passed around from dorm to dorm because of his unruly behaviour. Dag-mar, Gerlin and Arly Bron were all human species as was Obi-wan. Arly intimidated Dag-mar and Gerlin and eventually the three boys were picking on Obi-wan constantly. Arly seemed to have a knack of turning nice boys into little monsters, Obi-wan was sure he was threatening them into doing whatever he asked of them. Obi-wan wouldn’t become one of them so he was ostracised and they played tricks on him every chance they got. But every time Obi-wan defended himself from accusation, the three boys would insist that Obi-wan was either the culprit, or he had helped them do whatever dastardly deed had been done. Obi-wan couldn’t get through to the two young boys who did every thing Arly told them to do. “How can you be so stupid, he is going to get us all shipped off to the Agri-Corps is that what you want” Obi stated to the two boys when he had them alone. “Aw come on Obi, you are too straight for your own good, Arly says he knows what Masters are going to choose us. “He hacked into the Data Base and saw which Knights will be coming to take us.” “Oh said Obi “Did he tell you their names?” “Did he show you the list where your name is on it to become a Padawan.?” he asked. “Well no, but Arly wouldn’t lie to us he’s our best friend.” said Dag-Mar. “Yeah Obi, Arly said that even you will get a master if you do what he wants” “What does he Want?” asked Obi. “He wants you to steal the test papers for next weeks astrophysics test.” “Why doesn’t Arly do it himself?” or is he a coward. berated Obi. “He says that no one would think you did it because you always know the answers and are good in class.” “That’s because I study, just like you two used to do, what is wrong with you can’t you see what Arly is doing, he will get caught eventually and he will drag you down with him.” “Don’t be like that Obi, he wouldn’t do that, we trust him and he trusts us.” Gerlin said..... In the Council Chamber the Masters were in session. “Master Windu” have you heard from Master Yoda and Master Jinn, they have been away for a while now isn’t it about time for them to return.” asked Master Kit Fisto “I spoke to Master Yoda only yesterday, he contacted me to say that he is staying for a few months for the Annual Swamp races on Dagabah, he feels that his visit home, has been long overdue and knows that the Temple is in capable hands. “What of Master Jinn” when is he coming back then?” Has he finished his mission to Alderann?. “Yes he has, but he has decided to take a break before coming back to the Temple, he is going to spend some time with Master Yoda on Dagobah, I think Yoda is hoping he will take a Padawan on his return." But Qui-Gon hasn’t said anything to me so I am not sure if he will take one or not.” Mace said. “Has he ever spoken of a preference in initiates. “Has he picked one out.” one of the Councillors asked. “I have not heard that he has even looked at one, he hasn’t spoken of it, and besides he hasn’t been in the Temple for quite some time.” Mace affirmed. “Speaking of initiates has anyone else being pestered by the initiate teachers about the behaviour of the four boys in Section 8 room 12. Plo Koon asked. “Yes" added Master Gallia, I am a bit shocked at one of the names though." Master Windu turned his chair to face Master Gallia "Who are you talking about which four boys are we discussing." Master Plo Koon spoke revealing the names of the boys, Arly Bron, Dag-Mar, Gerlin Oslick and Obi-wan Kenobi. “What have they been doing”? asked Mace Windu who had been away for the past month himself. The councillors listed quite a number of offences that the foursome had been involved in. Even Mace Windu was shocked that Obi-wans name was amongst them. “Are you sure that Obi-wan has been doing this mischief as well". “Well the evidence points to it. The other two boys were very shy before they came to room with Obi-wan but every time something happens they insist that it was Obi-wan who thought of the prank or disruptive behaviour." Another Councillor said. “What about Arly Bron, isn’t he a bit of a bully, I would imagine he could very well be the ringleader in any mischief going on around here.” Mace said. “Yes I’m certain that the Bron boy will be sent to the Agri corps soon". Master Gallia said. “What is the status of Knights looking for Padawans at this time" asked Master Windu. “There are none available and wont be any available for approximately six months, and then there is only one Knight that will be ready for an apprentice even then.” Master Yaddle said. “Who is that?” asked Master Gallia. "Knight Jerico has placed his name on the list, but he has also indicated his choice as well.” he added. “He is interested in that young girl Sala-maine “I believe they will make a good pair. “Then if there are no Knights available perhaps we should send the four mischief makers to one of the Corps now, instead of waiting until they turn thirteen." Master Pl Koon said. “Do you think that is a wise move to make, you know how much Master Yoda thinks of the Kenobi boy?." Master Windu regarded the other Councillors for a moment and then he spoke. "I believe we should make the decision now as there will be no contact with Master Yoda for another month, Dagabah has moved into the night orbit and will not be in communication range for a month, and there are no Knights available at this time. If knights become available and they are interested in any of these initiates, then we will know where to find them . "But before we make the final decision we will go over all the reports on these young boys. Mace Stated. Please Review -----signature----- Padawan to p_stotts Peace over anger - honour over hate - Strength over fear. Links to Stories in my Bio. Obi-Wan forever.
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obi_webb Registered: Aug '05	Date Posted: 3/17/06 9:22pm Subject: RE: * My Brothers Keeper.* (Obi, Owan, Qui, Dex, OC's AU/JA 18/03 )
	wow i really don't like this arly bron! he DEFINITELY is a bad apple! i hope the council sees through the kids lying trying to get obi in trouble.. i'm quite intrigued by what happened in the opening coupled with the summary of the story.... this should be another great one! oh, and one little bit i wanted to mention, i really liked the part about dagobah being in night orbit and not being in range for a month.. that was a good plot device to keep yoda out and a neat little detail too. why do i get the feeling yoda is going to be upset with the council for not seeing through arly's mischief when he gets back? anyway, thanks for the pm and i look forward to the next one! -----signature----- Jedi Consular- Acolytes of Revan ACOLYTES FULL SPEED AHEAD!!! A Jedi's Sacrifice- my kotor fic http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/22040803/p1/ Shadows- more kotor fun! http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/23554736/p1/?1
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VaderLVR64 Title: Fan Fic Manager Digging out from Fay Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 3/18/06 5:20am Subject: RE: * My Brothers Keeper.* (Obi, Owan, Qui, Dex, OC's AU/JA 18/03 )
	Arly A good start! I look forward to reading more. -----signature----- If you have to choose between tears and laughter, remember that laughter burns more calories. They call me NANA Vader. At least she doesn't lack confidence...
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kenobiwanobi Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 3/18/06 5:31am Subject: RE: * My Brothers Keeper.* (Obi, Owan, Qui, Dex, OC's AU/JA 18/03 )
	I am glad you PMed me about this one..I love it.. Poor Obi...don't let them take him away -----signature----- Better to die on your feet than live on your knees-Dolores Ibarruri Moulin Rouge Freak- The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return check out my story ( link=my profile) Proud Padawan of stormqueen874
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Gkilkenny Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 3/18/06 11:55pm Subject: RE: * My Brothers Keeper.* (Obi, Owan, Qui, Dex, OC's AU/JA 18/03 )
	obi_webb Thanks this is a bit different and Yoda is not going to be happy VaderLV64 Thank You I hope you enjoy it kenobiwanobi There sending him away, and they will be sorry -----signature----- Padawan to p_stotts Peace over anger - honour over hate - Strength over fear. Links to Stories in my Bio. Obi-Wan forever.
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LilyHobbitJedi Title: Apples to Apples hostess Registered: Aug '05	Date Posted: 3/20/06 9:38pm Subject: RE: * My Brothers Keeper.* (Obi, Owan, Qui, Dex, OC's AU/JA 18/03 )
	I really like this so far, poor Obi getting caught up in so much mischief. Arly sounds like Bruck, I hate those bullying characters. If you are pming people, can I be added? Great job!! -----signature----- Proud Master to eboneya & Alassë Eärfalas! Everybody Lies- House/SW Crossover! http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/28032689/r28039379/ A Light In The Darkness http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b1047
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jodiwent Registered: Feb '00	Date Posted: 3/21/06 7:41am Subject: RE: * My Brothers Keeper.* (Obi, Owan, Qui, Dex, OC's AU/JA 18/03 )
	I thought I posted here I knew you had to have a new story in the wings. Can't wait to see Owen too. -----signature----- Links to FICS in Bio on botom of profile http://boards.theforce.net/ASP/user.asp?usr=238155
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Gkilkenny Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 3/22/06 12:55am Subject: RE: * My Brothers Keeper.* (Obi, Owan, Qui, Dex, OC's AU/JA 18/03 ) - Date Edited: 3/22/06 1:03am (1 edits total) Edited By: Gkilkenny
	LilyHobbitJedi Arly's name is a character taken from a smugglers list Bullies always drag innocent people into their schemes. I hate them too. I will be happy to PM you Thanks for reading. jodiwent You know me so well, I always have a story waiting. I think I have the writing bug Owan is a cute little boy just like Obi-wan post coming soon -----signature----- Padawan to p_stotts Peace over anger - honour over hate - Strength over fear. Links to Stories in my Bio. Obi-Wan forever.
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Gkilkenny Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 3/23/06 12:15am Subject: RE: * My Brothers Keeper.* (Obi, Owan, Qui, Dex, OC's AU/JA 23rd March Post
	The Astrophysics exam was beginning in the large auditorium, but half way through the test, the teacher spied Arly Bron reading something under the table. “Initiate Bron” “What are you doing" he said. Arly jumped in surprise and realised he had been caught. Next to him on either side was Dag-Mar and Gerlin. Arly panicked and said “Nothing Master this was just passed to me," he held up the paper, the teacher realising it was the answers to the test pulled Arly out to the front of the room. “Who passed it to you initiate Arly." Arly looked at the two boys that were sitting next to him and then dropped his eyes and said Obi-wan Kenobi Sir” Obi-wan jumped up and said “That’s a lie Master” I would not cheat and I certainly wouldn’t help Arly to cheat either”. “Enough" the teacher stated. The teacher called Security and they searched the room finding two more pieces of paper in Dag-Mar and Gerlins possession. All four boys were taken out of the room, and were placed in separate rooms. Each boy was interviewed, Obi-wan denied doing anything but he would not implicate Dag-Mar or Gerlin as he knew they were innocent but were being controlled by Arly. He hoped that this episode would open their eyes to what kind of person Arly was. Arly of course blamed everything on Obi, and Dag-mar and Gerlin backed him up. The Masters were fed up with their antics and called the Council to intervene. While Obi-wan, Dag-Mar, Gerlin and Arly were waiting to be called in to the council Chambers, Arly convinced the two timid boys that everything would be alright if they just agreed with him. Obi-wan was fuming and he grabbed Arly “Wake up to yourself Arly, this is no joking matter you will not be able to talk your way out of this. “You will be sent to the Agri corps for sure, this time.” Arly took a swing at Obi and they began to fight, as the doors opened to the Council Chamber. Obi-wan swung his fist and connected with Arly’s chin and he slid across the floor into the council. The other three boys followed in and Obi’s face was flushed. He knew that it was forbidden to fight and he shouldn’t have hit Arly especially in the Council Chambers, and in front of the Council. Master Windu’s face was like looking at a stone there was no emotion, just glaring eyes. “What is the meaning of this display of anger, have you not been taught the dangers of anger?” he said in a calm voice. Obi bowed low and spoke “I am sorry for my behaviour Master Windu I have no excuse, but…...” Master Windu raised his hand up silencing Obi-wan. “It seems to me that you may have run out of excuses.” He snapped. Obi lowered his head in shame and stood silently. The inquisition took place and by the end of the session Arly and the two other boys believed they had successfully laid the blame on Obi-wan for all the troubles they had been involved in. By the end of the session Obi-wan had a bad feeling about his future with the Jedi. It wasn’t long before his fears were answered. “It is the decision of this Council that you four boys have come to the end of your mischievous ways. We can no longer abide the unruly and aggravating manner that you four boys seem to display. We will be informing the Head Master on Bandameer that he is to be expecting four new arrivals within a few days. You four boys have been relegated to the Agri-Corps on Bandameer, transport will be arranged for tomorrow." "You will be given a set of cloths to wear and you are to pack your personal belongings. You will remain on Bandameer until a decision is made, to which Corps you will be sent to, there you will stay until you reach adulthood or until a Master so decides to choose you as an apprentice. But let me advise you that there are many initiates still here at the Temple that will be chosen before you. And after your fourteenth name day you will no longer be eligible for apprenticeship.” The Council is very disappointed in you initiates “May the force protect you and be with you” You may leave now to pack.” Mace informed them. Obi-wan was stunned he hadn’t done anything wrong, he was being blamed along with the others. Before he went to his room he walked out in the garden trying to calm himself, he felt lost and afraid. Later when he entered his room the other boys were sitting on their beds crying and Arly was staring out the window. He turned around when Obi walked in “What are we going to do he yelled.” “I don’t want to go to the Agri corps. He was getting angry and because the other two boys were crying and he lost his temper, “It’s all your fault you snivelling idiots, just shut up your crying” “I cannot think” he snapped. Obi-wan spun around and screamed “That’s your problem you fool You don't ever think!!” “I kept telling you where you would end up and now you have dragged me along with you” “You lied “, you all lied, I never did anything to hurt you, but you have ruined your lives and mine too.” Obi broke down and sobbed. “All my life I wanted to be a Jedi I studied hard and practiced and you have taken that from me because of your lies,” and then he thought (My parents gave me up so I could be a Jedi I am sure they wouldn’t have given me away if they would have known that I was going to the Agri corps, why can’t I go home, the Jedi don’t want me they are sending me away, I should be allowed to go home) Obi-wan lay on his bed, and didn’t speak another word to the others, but he thought about his real family and wondered if his mother and Father would take him back. The next morning Obi-wan got up early and went to the records room. He wanted to find out where his parents were and if he could go back to them. When he asked the Docant he was refused the information. That made Obi-wan more determined. He went to the comm. station and put in a request to speak to the Council, his request was granted. As he entered the Council Chambers all the Masters eyes were on him. “You have requested an audience before you depart initiate Kenobi.” Mace said. “Yes Sir” My request is that I would like to be returned to my Mother and Father, wherever they are living?". “That is impossible young Kenobi, your parents gave you up willingly, so you could come to the Temple to become a Jedi.” “You know nothing about them or if they even still live". That shocked Obi-wan he hadn’t thought about them being dead. “Are my parents dead then? he asked. The council Masters looked at each other and then Master Windu shook his head “No they are not dead.” he said. “Then I have a right to know whether they want me back then?” Obi said. “You are testing our patience Young Kenobi, you have been relocated to the Agri corps and that is final.” “Masters I mean no disrespect but I must insist, that I be able to contact my parents and ask them if they want me back, if I cannot be a Jedi then I have a right to go home”. Obi stated. “Tell me why we should allow this from you” all those that are not chosen are sent to the Corps, it is your duty to the order.” Mace answered Obi-wan was a stubborn boy when he believed he was right. “Because you have committed a lie yourselves, if you do not allow my request, and you said last night that you would not tolerate liars here at the Temple". “You are testing my patience now young one" said Master Plo Koon “We do not lie” Please explain yourself before we change our mind and send you to the detention centre.” Obi-wans eyes opened wide he hadn’t thought about the detention centre, that was for bad students ones who had committed crimes against the Jedi. Obi-wan began to shake slightly, but he was determined to say his piece. “W-What did you tell my parents when you came to our house to test me and then take me away from them?” he asked. “It is what we do to all force sensitive beings, we have not lied, your parents knew as all parents know that if a child is force sensitive they had the option of keeping the child or allowing the natural force in the child to be nurtured and for that child to become a Jedi to help the galaxy, it is an honour for those parents to let their child go for the benefit of the universe." he was told. “Yes an honour it is” “But are the parents told that if their child is not chosen for whatever reason, they are sent to work at the Agri corps whether that child wants to or not?” “Never to become what you tell them we will become, "a Jedi Knight?.” Did you tell my parents there was a chance I would not become a Jedi, did you allow them the choice then that maybe their son would be better off staying with loving parents instead of being sent to an institution where we are never treated as children just a product, and if that product is proclaimed bad for whatever reason he is sent away.” The Councillors were stunned, they had never thought of that before. They had not told the parents of the possibilities. Master Windu stood up and walked over to Obi-wan. “Initiate Kenobi please go and wait in the corridor we wish to discuss this in private.” Obi-wan picked up his bag and went out into the hall, he stood there thinking of Dag-Mar and Gerlin and wondered if he should have told them to question their fate just as he had done. But he shrugged his shoulders, (I have to worry about myself from now on) he thought. Some time later he was called back into the chambers. Master Windu waited for Obi to get to the centre and bow, before he spoke. “We concur that you have a point young Kenobi, and we have contacted your Mother, she has requested that you go home to her. We have arranged a cabin on a transport that is heading to your home planet". Master Windu stood up and walked over to Obi-wan handing him some papers, these are your release papers from the Jedi. You will relinquish all rights to return to the Temple and if you change your mind and decide that going back to your birth family is not what you want, I am sorry to say that you will not be accepted back here". “Do I make myself clear young man”. Obi-wan felt the cold tendrils of abandonment permeate his soul, he was angry at the Council they were so cold and stern. They could feel his anger and Mace commented on it. “Your anger is what has made our decision easier, we had such high hopes for you but your arrogant and stubborn ways have destroyed any chance of you becoming a Jedi.” “Now it is time for you to leave, your ship leaves at the same time as the one to Bandameer, the other initiates are preparing to board". Mace turned around and headed back to his chair . Obi-wan just stood watching the Councillors. If anyone was arrogant, stubborn and selfish it was them, and Obi-wan decided to say his piece. “Masters" "You have made yourself very clear to me,I will go never to return, and I promise you that I will uphold the Jedi honour and never use the force for evil or for my, as you put it own arrogance and angry way, but I must say this and even though it is highly disrespectful I believe I must say it". “I worked hard for my place here at the Temple, I didn’t ask to come here, I wasn’t given a choice, and now I believe my parents weren’t really given a choice either, but up until a few months ago, I was convinced that I had upheld the tradition and the code of the Jedi, I was attentive and did not cause any trouble. I thought my good behaviour would assure my place as a Jedi. But lies and deceit are rife within this Temple, and I believe the Council are blind, arrogant and self centred. You do not care about the initiates or their families, you just take and when it doesn’t suit you, then you just abandon children who have never known any other home but this one, in essence you 'are our' parents. "How do you sleep knowing you turn your own children out...." Mace sat there allowing the boy to speak, but he was getting annoyed at what the boy was saying it seemed to be hitting a nerve in his soul somewhere and he didn’t like the feeling. “Enough” Master Windu shouted, we have listened to your words now leave, and don’t come back!” he said as he pointed to the door. -----signature----- Padawan to p_stotts Peace over anger - honour over hate - Strength over fear. Links to Stories in my Bio. Obi-Wan forever.
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kenobiwanobi Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 3/23/06 3:24am Subject: RE: * My Brothers Keeper.* (Obi, Owan, Qui, Dex, OC's AU/JA 18/03 )
	How aweful...but at least we'll meet Obi's family. Great job!!!! -----signature----- Better to die on your feet than live on your knees-Dolores Ibarruri Moulin Rouge Freak- The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return check out my story ( link=my profile) Proud Padawan of stormqueen874
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obi_webb Registered: Aug '05	Date Posted: 3/23/06 4:48am Subject: RE: * My Brothers Keeper.* (Obi, Owan, Qui, Dex, OC's AU/JA 18/03 )
	quite an eventful post.. and a thought provoking one. obi brought up some very good points at the end. to me, this part summed it up.. But lies and deceit are rife within this Temple, and I believe the Council are blind, arrogant and self centred. You do not care about the initiates or their families, you just take and when it doesn’t suit you, then you just abandon children who have never known any other home but this one, in essence you 'are our' parents. "How do you sleep knowing you turn your own children out...." i think obi was exactly right and i hope the council eventually sees the error in what they did to obi and learn from their mistakes! again, i really think yoda is not going to be a happy camper when he gets back! this is turning into another fantastic story! -----signature----- Jedi Consular- Acolytes of Revan ACOLYTES FULL SPEED AHEAD!!! A Jedi's Sacrifice- my kotor fic http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/22040803/p1/ Shadows- more kotor fun! http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/23554736/p1/?1
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LilyHobbitJedi Title: Apples to Apples hostess Registered: Aug '05	Date Posted: 3/23/06 8:04am Subject: RE: * My Brothers Keeper.* (Obi, Owan, Qui, Dex, OC's AU/JA 18/03 )
	Thanks for the pm! You tell him Obi! I'm wondering if this means he won't become a Jedi, since he won't see Qui-Gon on Bandomeer. I can't wait to see what you have planned. I can't wait to see Obi-Wan's parents, that will be interesting. Great update!! -----signature----- Proud Master to eboneya & Alassë Eärfalas! Everybody Lies- House/SW Crossover! http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/28032689/r28039379/ A Light In The Darkness http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b1047
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Jedi_Tigris Registered: Mar '05	Date Posted: 3/23/06 11:52pm Subject: RE: * My Brothers Keeper.* (Obi, Owan, Qui, Dex, OC's AU/JA 18/03 )
	Aww, poor Obi getting all the blame. No wonder he has some anger, the Council is being quite unreasonable. And no chance of Yoda or Qui learning about this for another month...I don't think Yoda will be very happy about what the Council did. Nice start! Thanks for the pm, and please keep me on your list. -----signature----- "Who is more foolish? The fool, or the fool who follows him?" - Obi-Wan Kenobi, ANH padawan/adoptee of Myri_Antilles Battling DRL...otherwise known as college and work... Please add me to your pm list when I review. Thanks!
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TheLurker Registered: Aug '05	Date Posted: 3/24/06 7:43pm Subject: RE: * My Brothers Keeper.* (Obi, Owan, Qui, Dex, OC's AU/JA 18/03 )
	Thanks for the PM, otherwise I never would have discovered this great story. I'm really enjoying it. It's got a great plot to it. Looking forward to more soon. ~Rhi -----signature----- Doesn't expecting the unexpected make the unexpected the expected? One Day Remains - http://boards.theforce.net/Before_the_Saga/b10475/21397275/?0
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Gkilkenny Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 3/24/06 11:12pm Subject: RE: * My Brothers Keeper.* (Obi, Owan, Qui, Dex, OC's AU/JA 18/03 )
	kenobiwanobi Yep the council are mean lets hope Obi's parents are nice? obi_webb The council were always self righteous only this time they have made a grave mistake. LilyHobbitJediAfter the way he spoke to the Council, there is definately a possibility that he wont become a Jedi unless they come to their senses. Jedi_Tigris Can you blame Obi-wan for his anger and Yoda is going to be annoyed TheLurker the plot thickens and Obi meets his family Thanks for taking the time to review it means a lot to me -----signature----- Padawan to p_stotts Peace over anger - honour over hate - Strength over fear. Links to Stories in my Bio. Obi-Wan forever.
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jodiwent Registered: Feb '00	Date Posted: 3/25/06 4:51pm Subject: RE: * My Brothers Keeper.* (Obi, Owan, Qui, Dex, OC's AU/JA 18/03 )
	I actually read this a few days ago . . . Mean Master Mace mean -----signature----- Links to FICS in Bio on botom of profile http://boards.theforce.net/ASP/user.asp?usr=238155
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