Author Topic: In Master's Clothes - REVISION: 4-Sep-2007 -- one-shot, Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan -- it's just so cute
Healer_Leona 
Registered: Jul '00
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Date Posted: 6/2/06 5:15am Subject: RE: In Master's Clothes -- one-shot, Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan -- it's just so cute
Just checking for posting problems. grin grin

 

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Princess_Arulmozhi 
Registered: Nov '04
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Date Posted: 6/2/06 5:52am Subject: RE: In Master's Clothes -- one-shot, Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan -- it's just so cute
Healer_Leona posted:
Just checking for posting problems. grin grin



Riiii-ght. <needles Leona> You wouldn't want to walk about in his robes, would you? grin

Loved the story all over again. love Obi-Wan!

 

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ardavenport_QGJSock 
Registered: Mar '06
Date Posted: 6/2/06 3:27pm Subject: RE: In Master's Clothes -- one-shot, Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan -- it's just so cute - Date Edited: 6/2/06 3:45pm (10 edits total) Edited By: ardavenport_QGJSock
Testing...

Testing...


Thanks all so much for reading and replying!

I liked putting Obi-Wan in the inconvenient time when he's not sure about his position as Qui-Gon's padawan. But Qui-Gon has more experience and maturity, and probably some embarrassing youthful slip-ups in his past as well. He understands, but it's all new to poor Obi-Wan.

Since they will travel together a lot it's inevitable that they get into each other's clothes. Obi-Wan would want to do everything just right, but I think Qui-Gon would appreciate seeing an unguarded moment from him, too. grin

Padawans in oversized clothes are just so cute, and cuteness makes such good quality mush. grin

When I thought of the clothes fresher, I didn't have it doing nearly as much as it ended up doing. But I kept thinking, 'Nobody in the GFFA has to iron their clothes and they certainly don't have to fold them or clean their boots either! Yeah, I could use a machine like that, too.

Yes, they had to take their lightsabers in with them to the fresher. I thought about it thinking and it just didn't seem right for them to be without their lightsabers.


See..........this is my sock. Could you tell it was me? grin

For some bizzare reason, the forum would not let me reply. Logging out and logging in with a new browser window didn't work. Rebooting my computer didn't work. Trying to post on the next day didn't work. Finally, logging in as one of the socks I use for story links in the bio....that worked.

As far as I can tell, for some weird reason, the won't let 'ardavenport' post to this topic. If it keeps happening, I'll look for tech support and see they can puzzle it out.


Edit....but now it looks like the same thing happened with the sock. It seems to be something in the code I'd put at the top of the messages when I listed all the names of who had replied....

This bit of code does not make it lock up:

Princess_Arulmozhi, Valairy_Scot, Ara-gon, Healer_Leona

And....this bit of code does not make it lock up:

Princess_Arulmozhi, Valairy_Scot, Ara-gon, Healer_Leona, KELIA

And....this bit of code does not make it lock up:

Princess_Arulmozhi, Valairy_Scot, Ara-gon, Healer_Leona, KELIA, dianethx

And....this bit of code does not make it lock up:

Princess_Arulmozhi, Valairy_Scot, Ara-gon, Healer_Leona, KELIA, dianethx, ___Sithspawn___

And....this bit of code does not make it lock up, but it was loading a tad bit slow:

Princess_Arulmozhi, Valairy_Scot, Ara-gon, Healer_Leona, KELIA, dianethx, ___Sithspawn___, VaderLVR64

But THIS BIT makes it choke!!!

Princess_Arulmozhi, Valairy_Scot, Ara-gon, Healer_Leona, KELIA, dianethx, ___Sithspawn___, VaderLVR64, Layren

 

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ardavenport_QGJSock2 
Registered: Apr '06
Date Posted: 6/2/06 4:16pm Subject: RE: In Master's Clothes -- one-shot, Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan -- it's just so cute - Date Edited: 6/2/06 4:22pm (1 edits total) Edited By: ardavenport_QGJSock2
Testing again....just to see if I've completely hosed this thread with all the boldface code in the last message...

....ahhh, it's me, in a completely different sock. Isn't this a gread disguise. grin

Anyway....the lesson is:

I won't post too many things in boldface, spaced by commas, again.

At least, I think this is the problem. It could be something else. I guess I'll try posting a message with too many boldface things in the Communications forum and see if the tech people can enjoy this apparent bug as well. It seems to be repeatable.

 

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ardavenport 
Registered: Dec '04
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Date Posted: 6/2/06 4:23pm Subject: RE: In Master's Clothes -- one-shot, Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan -- it's just so cute - Date Edited: 6/2/06 4:27pm (1 edits total) Edited By: ardavenport
Testing....

Aaaaah, it lets me post again as myself. I'm back. happy

Uh, sorry about all the experimenting. Can you tell I'm a programmer?

And thanks P_A for the new reply; glad you enjoyed the story. Obi-Wan is just so cute in that big, ol' robe. grin

 

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whatifisaidno 
Registered: Jan '06
Date Posted: 6/5/06 1:20pm Subject: RE: In Master's Clothes -- one-shot, Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan -- it's just so cute
Qui Gon killed me. That was hysterical. *grin*

 

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micky-nikki 
Registered: Dec '05
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Date Posted: 6/5/06 7:01pm Subject: RE: In Master's Clothes -- one-shot, Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan -- it's just so cute
Aww *melts* love that was too cute.

I love how you set up the situation. It added so much to the whole story grin

 

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Arwen-Jade_Kenobi 
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Date Posted: 6/6/06 1:45pm Subject: RE: In Master's Clothes -- one-shot, Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan -- it's just so cute
Aww that was indeed very cute!!! Awesome work!

 

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LuvEwan 
Registered: Mar '02
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Date Posted: 6/6/06 1:55pm Subject: RE: In Master's Clothes -- one-shot, Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan -- it's just so cute - Date Edited: 6/6/06 1:56pm (1 edits total) Edited By: LuvEwan
ardavenport, I've had problems posting on my own threads more than once, but always in the Saga. It's really weird, especially when other people can come in and post with no problem. I don't know what causes it, maybe the coding thing you mentioned. What worked for me was cutting the post in half, and posting them separately. It can be very irritating, that's for sure! happy

What I really like about your stories is that they have so much thought in them. It would be one thing to just write a story about Obi-Wan walking around in his Master's oversized clothes, but to add the backstory gave it so much depth, and made the ending that much sweeter. I read this one all the time. wink

 

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Veloz 
Registered: Aug '04
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Date Posted: 6/9/06 3:27pm Subject: RE: In Master's Clothes -- one-shot, Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan -- it's just so cute
Awww this was so cute!.. great job with Obi and Qui Gon's characterizations.. i could totally "see" them on this fic happy

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Kestrel_Kenobi 
Registered: Sep '05
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Date Posted: 6/10/06 3:51am Subject: RE: In Master's Clothes -- one-shot, Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan -- it's just so cute
aww, lovely - very cute...loved the ending...

Great job grin

 

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ardavenport 
Registered: Dec '04
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Date Posted: 6/18/06 7:28pm Subject: RE: In Master's Clothes -- one-shot, Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan -- it's just so cute
Oooops! Forgot to reply to these!


whatifisaidno: Qui Gon killed me. That was hysterical. *grin*

Thanks much! Qui-Gon is such a wise master. wink

micky-nikki: Aww *melts* that was too cute.

I love how you set up the situation. It added so much to the whole story


Glad I made you melt. happy I like all the background; it just makes the story flow together so much better, even the parts that I don't actually use in the story.

Arwen-Jade_Kenobi: Aww that was indeed very cute!!! Awesome work!

Thanks! happy

LuvEwan: ardavenport, I've had problems posting on my own threads more than once, but always in the Saga. It's really weird, especially when other people can come in and post with no problem. I don't know what causes it, maybe the coding thing you mentioned. What worked for me was cutting the post in half, and posting them separately. It can be very irritating, that's for sure!

What I really like about your stories is that they have so much thought in them. It would be one thing to just write a story about Obi-Wan walking around in his Master's oversized clothes, but to add the backstory gave it so much depth, and made the ending that much sweeter. I read this one all the time.


I run the stories over in my head many times. And then it sometimes turns into something else when I write them down on the computer. But the details keep it going when I write and give me more options if I get stuck. Thanks so much for replying, it really adds to the whole fanfic experience! grin

About posting problems.....I can definitely make the board freeze up on my replies if I put too many bold face elements too close together. If they're spaced futher apart the board seems to be OK with them. But with only a non-bold comma between them, nine or more of them will make it lock up every time. I assume that this is true for underline or italisized things, too. Not that this is at all a useful thing to do, but maybe it will solve some mysteries for some people.

Veloz: Awww this was so cute!.. great job with Obi and Qui Gon's characterizations.. i could totally "see" them on this fic

Thanks! Yeah, young padawans in big robes are just automatically cute. They're such a good team.

Kestrel_Kenobi: aww, lovely - very cute...loved the ending...

Thank you!

 

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KILIK 
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Date Posted: 6/19/06 4:46pm Subject: RE: In Master's Clothes -- one-shot, Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan -- it's just so cute
Aww just what I needed to read, thanks for writing it. happy

I want to waer Qui-Gon's robe, that would be cool, Yeah I sound werid. grin But come on its a Jedi master robe. happy

applause I loved it thank you for writing it. happy

 

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ardavenport 
Registered: Dec '04
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Date Posted: 6/22/06 5:26pm Subject: RE: In Master's Clothes -- one-shot, Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan -- it's just so cute - Date Edited: 4/26/07 3:36pm (1 edits total) Edited By: ardavenport
KILIK: Aww just what I needed to read, thanks for writing it.

I want to waer Qui-Gon's robe, that would be cool, Yeah I sound werid. But come on its a Jedi master robe.

I loved it thank you for writing it.


Thanks! Wanting to wear Qui-Gon's robe isn't so weird, especially since I made one like it. happy Except shorter. I don't look nearly so cute in over-sized clothes as Obi-Wan does.

 

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Princess_Arulmozhi 
Registered: Nov '04
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Date Posted: 11/3/06 7:06am Subject: RE: In Master's Clothes -- one-shot, Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan -- it's just so cute
Upping this, as I needed some warm, rich mush today. love kiss This is such an amazing story. And Qui-Gon's comment right at the very end just makes me grin. It's so very Qui-Gon. Love the big lug.

 

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