Author Topic: The Game of Death (Qui/Obi, Angst, Hurt/Comfort) Chapter 9 *Updated 23/09/08*
Gkilkenny 
Registered: Mar '04
7963_Obi-Wan Kenobi
Date Posted: 7/26 11:37pm Subject: RE: The Game of Death (Qui/Obi, Angst, Hurt/Comfort) Chapter 8 *Updated 26/07/08*


I hope his captors don't use the child against him, to make him do things he shouldn't.

Great post and thanks for the PM. hugs

 

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jedidas3 
Registered: Apr '07
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Date Posted: 7/28 4:12am Subject: RE: The Game of Death (Qui/Obi, Angst, Hurt/Comfort) Chapter 8 *Updated 26/07/08*
applause A tremendous update. I so enjoy reading anything you write. Your stories are so well thought out and beautifully written. Wonderful story and all I can say is, please post again soon! praying

 

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VaderLVR64 
Title: Fan Fic Manager in Combat Boots
Registered: Feb '04
20251_Anakin Skywalker
Date Posted: 7/30 4:55am Subject: RE: The Game of Death (Qui/Obi, Angst, Hurt/Comfort) Chapter 8 *Updated 26/07/08*
At least Obi-Wan has a purpose outside himself now. I think that will help him.

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Lileia 
Registered: Jan '08
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Date Posted: 7/31 6:43am Subject: RE: The Game of Death (Qui/Obi, Angst, Hurt/Comfort) Chapter 8 *Updated 26/07/08*
Amazing! Absolutely wonderful chapter. Thank you for the Obi-Wan we all know and love. A true Jedi who cares even about such a wasted life as his adversary has. It's so like him to be compassionate even to the enemies. And I could almost see how he stops fighting with the force of his voice only. I love his caring about the lonely child and his determination to help others. hugs

I'll be happy to read more!!!! I hope it will be finished. praying
Great job, dearest! hugs rose

 

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dianethx 
Registered: Mar '02
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Date Posted: 8/3 6:22am Subject: RE: The Game of Death (Qui/Obi, Angst, Hurt/Comfort) Chapter 8 *Updated 26/07/08*
I was on vacation so I'm just catching up now....

Great job. I loved how Obi-Wan was still the caring Jedi, even though he was hurt and despairing himself. At least he was helping the child to survive. However, he better watch his back because I'm sure the others weren't too happy with him.

Wonderful.

 

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Sabriel_Orion 
Registered: Mar '08
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Date Posted: 8/5 11:21pm Subject: RE: The Game of Death (Qui/Obi, Angst, Hurt/Comfort) Chapter 8 *Updated 26/07/08*
Awww! Obi's such a sweetie for deciding to take in the kid. grin Great chapter, and hope to see more great ones soon. XD

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Obi-Odd13 
Registered: Feb '08
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Date Posted: 8/13 12:45pm Subject: RE: The Game of Death (Qui/Obi, Angst, Hurt/Comfort) Chapter 8 *Updated 26/07/08*
Aw, that was so sweet of Obi-Wan! love love It was such a Jedi thing to do, and yet it was such an Obi-Wan thing too! And for some reason the little boy reminds me of Anakin - probably because you compared his eyes to desert sands... I dunno if that has any real connection to anakin, but either way, I absolutely can't wait for your next chapter! applause

 

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XANl 
Registered: May '06
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Date Posted: 8/18 4:46am Subject: RE: The Game of Death (Qui/Obi, Angst, Hurt/Comfort) Chapter 8 *Updated 26/07/08*
So much action in the last chapter and then you stopped.
Please post again soon. This is an awesome fic

I will spend the time pacing and checking the boards to see if you have \
posted a new chapter

Hi
I just found your fic and keep reading until the end?
no please not the end...
just a short time for you to post the next chapter ( praying hopes that is true)

I can see from the many people posting that we all are waiting for a new post!!
So please more..I can't wait till he finially contacts Qui Gon dancing and he come to
help

 

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Anakin_Freak_Forever 
Registered: Jul '08
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Date Posted: 8/20 2:45am Subject: RE: The Game of Death (Qui/Obi, Angst, Hurt/Comfort) Chapter 8 *Updated 26/07/08*
What!! angry

He didn't really die?? skull

Damn! doh! What do you think Vader?

Vader: It is most disapointing.

Sorry bout me but I like storys with obi-torture and killings...I should've known when you "killed" him in the first chapter. devil

-calms down- whistling

Good job! dancing

AFF

 

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Glenstorm 
Registered: Mar '06
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Date Posted: 9/22 5:12pm Subject: RE: The Game of Death (Qui/Obi, Angst, Hurt/Comfort) Chapter 9 *Updated 23/09/08* - Date Edited: 9/22 5:53pm (2 edits total) Edited By: Glenstorm
Hey hey! Not very fast, but better than last time! Action is definately not my favourite thing to write, so the going has been slow. But this is a long chapter so I hope it satisfies all of you people out there that love this story and keep my muse alive praying

Believe me when I say that I'm so grateful that there are still so many of you out there that that keep coming back despite my slowness. kiss to you all!


Now buckle up because it's going to be a bum-py ride grin

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Chapter 9


“Ow!!!” Obi-Wan shot upright, or at least tried to. He moved only a few inches and had to stop for the cutting pain. It felt like there was a great weight trying to tear the hair from his skull.

“In the name of--!” Blue-green eyes glared over the edge of the cot, nailing the grinning child sitting at its base.

In point of fact there was a great weight trying to tear his hair off. His braid dangled over the side, the end clutched in one small fist.

Seeing that the Padawan was awake, the child squirmed with delight and gave the braid another tug.

“Ow! Stop that.” Obi-Wan scowled angrily, but in truth it was hard to stay irritated when faced with such a beaming smile. “That’s not a pull string with which to wake me up.”

Oblivious to his words the child just beamed some more and waved the hand clutching Obi-Wan’s hair. “Ben, Ben,” he said.

Obi-Wan shook his head, carefully, exasperated. “No, not ‘Ben’. I’m Obi-Wan.” He pointed at the child. “You’re Kyan.” He then pointed at himself and spoke very carefully for what seemed like the millionth time. “Oh-Be-Wan.”

It had been no problem for him to learn the child’s name, discerning it from all the inane babble that came from his lips. He had not counted upon his own name being so hard to get across.

“Oh-Be-Wan.”

The golden eyes brightened. “Ben,” the word was spoken with finality.

Obi-Wan sighed but was spared further effort by the arrival of breakfast. Or what passed for it. That soggy sawdust masquerading as food could be called anything but.

The guards made their entrance through the main doors, flanked predictably by hulking Wookies toting blaster rifles. Obi-Wan watched as the ensuing scrum of desperate prisoners unfolded, but despite his hunger he remained where he was, biding his time. He had learned to wait for the initial rush to die down before making his move, but to time it so that there was still plenty left when he did finally make his approach.

Soon enough the arguments and the scuffles calmed and Obi-Wan knew that the chance had come. The worst of the bullies had gotten their share. The crowd was easier. Now was the time.

Prying Kyan’s fingers from around his hair, Obi-Wan got up and leaned down to swipe out the two small bowls he kept stashed underneath the bed, before striding purposefully towards the nearest guard. Kyan followed closely.

The guard turned as he approached. The rough lip curled before he scooped some of the thin gruel from his large serving bowl and slopped it carelessly into Obi-Wan’s offered dish. Though irritated, Obi-Wan had long since learned to let the insolent behaviour pass over him.

A chuck of dry bread was then dumped unceremoniously on top of the soggy mixture and the dismissive guard began to turn away.

“Excuse me,” Obi-Wan called him back, deliberately throwing on his most polite tones. The burly man turned round, a dangerous glint of irritation in his eyes as he surveyed the ragged prisoner that dared to stand there like a demanding prince. Unphased, Obi-Wan held out the second bowl. “A little something for the boy, perhaps,” He nodded down at Kyan, who was huddled around his ankles.

The guard gave a low growl, the look on his face suggesting that he’d rather just shoot Obi-Wan right there and then, but nevertheless grudgingly ladled out a second helping.

Being Sonu’s favourite certainly had its perks, Obi-Wan thought, and he was determined to use them all to his full advantage.

He had Kyan to care for now. He could not afford to be proud.

The second serving was considerably smaller than the first, but despite everything Obi-Wan knew just how far to push his luck.

“Thank you so much for your generosity,” he said in the same mock politeness as he stretched a short bow.

A muscle in the guard’s cheek gave a satisfying twitch as Obi-Wan turned on his heel and strode away, the little boy trotting along in his wake.

Back at their cot, Obi-Wan set the bowls down and carefully evened up the rations before helping Kyan onto the mattress. The boy could get down easily enough, usually finding it highly hilarious to use Obi-Wan’s braid to do so, but he was as yet too small to climb up unassisted.

“There we go,” Obi-Wan said, getting the child settled and placing the smaller bowl in his hands. Kyan’s strange golden eyes blinking gratefully up at him before he started to slurp hungrily at his breakfast, his little legs swinging contentedly over the side.

Obi-Wan smiled secretly at the scene. “Uncivilized pup,” he mock grumbled.
Kyan paid him no mind so Obi-Wan continued to watch him carefully. Even after just a few days of being under Obi-Wan’s protection, the Padawan could already see an improvement. The little face was no longer drawn and sunken. His energies had improved and he had grown in confidence, though he still tended to shy away if Obi-Wan moved too suddenly. And his eyes burned with renewed brightness. Obi-Wan was glad.

Lifting his own bowl the Padawan began to pick though his own foul breakfast, grimacing on each bite. How could he have ever complained about his Master’s cooking?

The idle thought was like a knife to his heart.

A lump rose in his throat and Obi-Wan squeezed his eyes shut to hide the sudden burn of tears. How long had it been now since he had teased Qui-Gon over breakfast? He missed his Master so much it hurt. He wondered what Qui-Gon was doing now. How was he coping with his supposed ‘death’?

Obi-Wan shook his head quickly. He knew those sort of thoughts couldn’t help him, only make him feel worse, but he couldn’t help thinking and he knew he would trade anything he had just to be back with Qui-Gon now -- to sit with his Master in their quarters and share a slightly burned breakfast made with love. Tell him how much he appreciated it.

The burn of tears increased until Obi-Wan forced them away, refocusing on Kyan. The child was still slurping happily on his sodden mush, oblivious to Obi-Wan’s sudden sadness. Unlike him the little boy had never known anything other than this hell.

Obi-Wan’s heart twisted anew as he looked again at the child that was just this side of emaciated. The pain was quickly surpassed by a sharp sense of embarrassment. As a Jedi he was used to people claiming his life was a hard one and before today he would have readily agreed. Now he found himself truly humbled by this youngling seated before him.

Who truly had had the hard life? When he was this boy’s age Obi-Wan would never have known what it was to be hungry, to have to fight for a morsel of food. Since he was a baby he had been surrounded by peace and tranquillity, by Masters who had attended his every need. He had never known hate. He had never known fear. And the choice to face the darkness in this galaxy was his alone.

This child had no choice. Yet here he sat surrounded by greed and filth, while happily eating food most children would view as poison, and there was no bitterness. No complaint.

And he shouldn’t have to do it!

And he wouldn't.

A renewed determination seized Obi-Wan then, his face grew grim as it burnt through his melancholy. He would get out of here. In all the days that he had been here he had occupied his mind with searching for means of escape. But his efforts to find a way out had always come to nothing. He had felt his hope begin to wane and his frustration mount, though he hid both from Kyan. But there had to be a way. The very first opportunity he found he would take. He would get back to Qui-Gon. And when he did he would take this child with him. Obi-Wan would see to it that he never know hunger or hate ever again. He would take him where he would be loved and want for nothing.

Vow sealed, Obi-Wan settled to reluctantly continue with his own meal. Unlike the child he had known better.

The rest of breakfast passed without incident, the silence broken only by the odd noisy slurp by Kyan. When all was finally consumed the boy placed his bowl aside and licked his lips so as to savour every drop.

Obi-Wan put his own bowl down. “All finished?” he asked. Kyan just looked at him expectantly. “Ready for some exercise?”

The boy smiled and bobbed up and down eagerly. Obi-Wan could tell he still didn’t understand a word he was saying, but just seemed to be liking the attention. Obi-Wan smiled back at him and offered his hand. “Come on, then.”

He lead the boy a short way to a space free of cots and bodies, a place he had adopted as his workout area. He had no idea when he would be called upon to go back into the pit, but he didn’t think it would be long now. He was determined to keep in shape. Not to do so would be fatal. So every morning and every evening he ritually moved to this very spot to run through his Jedi stretches and katas, at least the ones that didn’t involve too many spinning manoeuvres. And his efforts had paid off. His injured arm was almost returned to its full strength.

There was no real reason for Kyan to join him, but the boy would not be left alone, so he always followed. Obi-Wan did not mind. At first the boy had just stared at him like he was mad. Then he seemed to grow amused by Obi-Wan’s antics, laughing and clapping when Obi-Wan achieved and held a particularly tricky position, or flipped over in the air. By and by he started to try and copy. Attempting to balance on one leg, or stand on his hands. He would always end up in an undignified heap, but this only caused him to laugh more.

Obi-Wan laughed with him, grateful, the little boy had turned these sessions from a dull necessity into a happy time for both, overshadowing the fact that Qui-Gon was not there to mirror each action perfectly as he had always done and blotted out the suffocating feeling of the collar.

Reaching the floor Obi-Wan began to limber up, stretching each muscle assessingly. His arm was still slightly stiff and his ribs tender, but he was confident that should he be called back the injuries wouldn’t hinder him too much.

A crease formed between his brows. Who would he have to face this time? Would he end up with a string of opponents he had to ‘watch his back’ against? Obi-Wan sighed before pushing the matter from his mind. It didn’t matter. He had no choice.

He was just beginning to run through the first of his katas when suddenly without warning Kyan gave a small cry. There was terror in the golden eyes as he fled from the floor, diving quickly to hide behind the sheets of their cot.

Bewildered, Obi-Wan started after him. “Kyan, What--?”

“Jedi.”

The hackles on the back of Obi-Wan’s neck rose at the voice. The reason behind Kyan’s flight suddenly became clear. His mood plummeted.

“Cobra.” He turned to find the lean bounty hunter standing a few meters away, hands folded behind his back, seemingly untouched by the conditions around him.

“I’m glad to see you’re keeping in practice, Jedi,” he said. “Sonu would be most displeased if you became a disappointment now.”

Obi-Wan stood rigidly. “What are you doing here?” he asked shortly, though he had a sinking feeling that he already knew. The time of waiting was over. “It’s certainly not pass the time of day with me.”

“Unfortunately no.” The Cobra’s emotionless face gave way to a feral grin. “It is time again to prove your worth, Jedi. All is ready for the second round and Sonu is waiting. Best not make him impatient.”

You’re really enjoying this, aren’t you, Obi-Wan thought darkly as the Cobra nodded and two heavily armed guards materialised upon either side of him.

“Let’s go.”

The guards began to hustle Obi-Wan forward but they didn’t get far before a distressed cry suddenly rent the air.

Obi-Wan stiffened. Kyan, no!

But it was too late. Forgetting his fears the little boy launched himself out of his hiding place and quickly fastened his arms around Obi-Wan’s legs.

“Ni! Ni! Dinachi‘ nu, Ben. Ni!”

In the blink of an eye the two guards had their blasters trained on the quaking child.

“Kill him,” Cobra waved his hand dismissively.

Fear slid through Obi-Wan‘s guts like ice. “No!” He raised both hands desperately. “Don’t hurt him!”

The guards paused, flicking glances between Obi-Wan and the bounty hunter scum holding their leash.

A cruel smile flickered over the Cobra’s face. “Why shouldn‘t I, Jedi?”

Anger licked at Obi-Wan. He fixed burning blue eyes on the Cobra. “Hurt him and you will get nothing further out of me.”

The smile became fixed. “We will, Jedi. We are in control here. I can make you do whatever I want.”

“Not if I’m dead,” Obi-Wan’s eyes were dangerously resolute. “And that’s what it will take. If you want to hurt him, you’ll have to kill me first.”

“Your life means nothing to me, Jedi!” the bounty hunter spat.

“Undoubtedly. But I get the idea that it matters to Sonu. What would he do to you, Cobra, if he found out that you were responsible for the death of his favourite? I can’t imagine it would be anything nice.” Obi-Wan’s voice was now icy cool. He had the upper hand here, and they both knew it.

The Cobra’s eye twitched, mind working furiously as he watched Obi-Wan sink into a ready stance, the child hugging his legs as the guards fingered their triggers. A titanic internal struggle passed beneath the long face before he spat, “Fine! Keep the brat. What do I care. We’re running out of time. Just deal with him before I have my guards take him somewhere and lock him up.”

Tight lipped, Obi-Wan nodded. He reached down and lifted Kyan into his arms. The little body was quaking and Obi-Wan tried to soothe him as he carried him back to the cot. Placing him down on the mattress Obi-Wan crouched until they were at eye level. “You have to stay here now, Kyan,” he said gently. “I have to go for a little while, but you have to stay. Understand?”

“Ni! Ni!” Kyan swept forward, closing his arms around Obi-Wan’s neck.

Heart rending in two, Obi-Wan let him hold him for a little while. He wished he had the Force so he could make the child understand, but he felt the Cobra shift impatiently behind him and knew he had to do his best without it.

Prying the child’s arms from around his neck, Obi-Wan sat him back and held him firmly between his hands. “Stay here, Kyan,” he said, locking eyes with the child and willing him to understand. “Stay here and I will come back.” He touched the child’s cheek. “I will come back. I promise.” He gestured to himself and then to the cot and at last the boy seemed to understand, though the fear did not leave his eyes.

“Ni,” he whispered.

“Stay,” Obi-Wan said then rose, leaving the child behind as he followed the guards from the prison. He nevertheless felt Kyan’s tear filled eyes follow him all the way to the door.

*

For the second time in just over a week Obi-Wan was lead through the draughty corridors. But not in the same direction. The cold stone passageways brushed past him, hollow and unfeeling. Unfailingly identical. But even without the Force, Obi-Wan was quick to pick up on the fact that he was being taken somewhere different.

It couldn’t be the pit that waited for him then.

What now?

As he walked he worked to keep his heart rate low. To maintain his calm composure. Now that he didn’t have Kyan to reassure it was difficult. The last time he had gone into the arena he had barely escaped with his life. This time would undoubtedly be more difficult, more deadly. He didn’t think Sonu’s crowd would settle for anything less.

Thus it was Obi-Wan knew that he could very well be walking to his own execution at the hands of what ever monster Sonu had chosen to throw at him this time.

His hand moved to the collar around his neck, worrying at it. The cool metal bit at his fingers. He wanted nothing more to tear it away from his flesh, to breath again and let the comfort of the Force soothe his fears.

Recoiling from the unforgiving metal, his hand instinctively drifted from the choking collar to the warmth radiating from his breast pocket. The weight of the River stone comforted him in place of the Force. A go between for him and the power that he could no longer feel himself.

It was there. The Stone would not lie. Obi-Wan closed his eyes briefly, banishing his creeping fears and refocusing on the ordeal ahead. No matter what happened, he would not go down without a fight.

Finally the Cobra halted the little group outside yet another set of massive stone doors. With the butt of his blaster he knocked three times upon the heavy gateway. The announcement was acknowledged and the doors ground open under some unseen force.

An antechamber waited beyond, much the same as the last, bare, circular and lit by dozens of flaming torches. Their light danced a depraved rhythm upon the solemn walls, the heat from them warming Obi-Wan’s cold skin even as the sight of Sonu and the sound of a distant but horribly familiar roar chilled his soul. The effect made Obi-Wan shiver.

Another blood thirsty crowd waited for him in the arena beyond this deceptively calm island. And it was bigger than the last.

“Good morning, Obi-Wan,” Sonu said, moving from the centre of the room with the cheer that was always there but never seemed to reach his calculating eyes. “I trust you are well?”

Obi-Wan nodded slightly. “As can be expected under the circumstances.”

Sonu’s smile broadened, though it still fell short of his eyes. “That’s the spirit. And as you should be. You should know, my Jedi, that in jut one fight you have broken all records. You’re famous! Beings are coming from all over the sector just to watch you. There is a crowd out there the like of which has never been seen in the history of a gladiatorial arena.”

Obi-Wan tilted his head. “I’m honoured.” He answered but he wasn’t really heeding the hateful man’s words. He was focusing his mind on what lay ahead. He just wished Sonu would get past his gloating and tell him what he was expected to do.

As if in answer to his thoughts, the stocky man stepped forward, pulling something from beneath a new velvet lined cloak.

He hadn’t had that before Obi-Wan observed. Sonu was obviously making sure he did well out of his new pet’s ‘fame’.

With a flourish Sonu placed a vibroshiv into his right hand. “You may be needing this, Jedi,” he said with an eager light in his eyes.

Obi-Wan looked down at the weapon and then at Sonu, waiting.

“This is the second round of Kralti,” Sonu started. “Inside the arena is a climbing frame. Your goal is to reach the top before your opponent by any means necessary. But do not fall. Do not fall, Jedi. Once you are on the frame an energy field will be activated beneath your feet. If you fall the charge is powerful enough to disable you for days. It has been known to kill smaller beings. Do not fall. Reach the top with your weapon. The sensor embedded within the rock can only be reached by the tip of this blade. Don’t lose it. Touch the sensor and you will have won and earned yourself a place in the next round.”

Huh, Obi-Wan thought as he absorbed the information silently. He felt slightly relieved. This was not a test of size or strength, but agility and speed. He looked again at the vibroshiv. His Jedi training would help him a great deal in this.

He drew a long breath and centred himself. He was ready.

“Do you understand your objective?” he heard Sonu ask.

Obi-Wan nodded stiffly.

“Well then, what are we waiting for!” Sonu rubbed his thick hands together. “Good luck to you, Jedi. May you continue to make me the richest man in the sector.”

Obi-Wan grimaced as Sonu signalled eagerly and the hitherto silent Cobra drifted forward to push him towards the doors leading into the waiting arena.

A horn sounded and the roar of the crowd reached new fever pitch. Thick anticipation could be tasted on the air, turning Obi-Wan’s stomach.

The stone doors ground open and Obi-Wan was hit once more by the noise and the dark stench of evil. But he had been ready for it this time and he did not recoil as he stepped forth into the arena, head held high.

Into darkness. There were none of the flaring lights from last time to blind his eyes, instead he found himself blinded by near blackness.

Unnervingly he could not see the crowd, only hear it. The door locked shut behind him taking the last of the light and glimmer of heat with it.

Folding his arms around himself to ward off the sudden chill, he waited for his eyes to adjust, breath clouding the crisp air before him.

The first thing to become apparent was the massive structure rising up from the bones of the floor. A mighty scaffold of many limbs, rungs and ropes. It nearly filled the entire arena, rising up and up until it disappeared into the shadows above.

‘Climbing frame’ did not do it justice. A fall from just half way up could be fatal. Never mind an energy field.

Taking his eyes off the monstrous metal skeleton before him, Obi-Wan began to search the other side of the room for his opponent. He caught a movement and focused on it, but saw only shadows. He could make nothing out. He only just stopped himself trying to use the Force to aid him. The shock of it not being there when he called still had the power to shatter him.

Thus it was that he still had not caught a glimpse of his adversary by the time the horn bleared for the game to begin.

He would find out soon enough.

Stepping forward he took hold of the first rung of the scaffold and pulled himself up, working his vibroshiv around his grip. The cool metal seeped into his fingers as he melded himself to the structure. Looking up as far as he could see, Obi-Wan began to plan his assent. Seeking the fastest route.

He was so absorbed by this that the activation of the energy field nearly shocked him right off his perch. From all sides there was a sudden explosion of blue light. It snapped and hissed beneath him, licking eagerly at his feet suspended just inches above. Despite himself Obi-Wan swallowed hard and gripped the rails with new fervour. The blue light from the field now cast an eerie glow into the shadows above. He could just make out the crowd now. Or at least their eyes, glittering eagerly down through the dark to find him far below, waiting.

Turning his own eyes away from them, Obi-Wan quickly began to climb. A light click on the far side of the scaffold said that his opponent had also started to move.

Obi-Wan concentrated, carefully selecting his hand and footholds. The spaces were random and uneven but Obi-Wan was quick to compensate. His progress was sure and swift. Within minutes he was high above the ground.

The attack when it came, took him completely by surprise.

The hiss of a rope was all he heard before a vibroshiv flashed out and caught him across the shoulders.

Obi-Wan cried out in surprise and pain even as the crowd roared and cheered. The blow had been glancing but his tunic was torn and he felt the blood trickle down his back.

His opponent was attacking him.

By any means necessary suddenly took on a whole new meaning.

Gritting his teeth Obi-Wan clutched his own weapon more tightly as he quickly renewed his climb. This time he listened carefully for any telltale swishes or creaks. Whoever was out there had surprised him. They would not do so again so easily.

Another strike but grimly Obi-Wan avoided it. Just. Clinging on as he moved he strained his ears. The dark pressed on his eyes.

He struck out at a perceived shadow. His arm met empty air. His enemy was not there.

Sharp pain as a blade nicked his cheek. Again Obi-Wan's counter met empty air, passing harmlessly through the cold air. His enemy taunted him with his blindness.

Whip, crack, before Obi-Wan could even think the scaffold rattled. He barely swung aside on one arm as a pair of booted feet lashed out at his midsection, attempting to kick him right off into oblivion. Before he could recover they vanished back into the dark. A blade slashed out and made a cut for his clinging hand.

Obi-Wan moved just in time to save his fingers. Quickly he climbed away, eyes searching the dark now with frantic desperation. Nothing. What was this that he faced?! His fear and frustration boiled quickly to the fore. His resolve was rattled. All of a sudden he felt exposed and helpless.

His hand came up to claw at the collar anew. He couldn’t see! He wanted -needed- the Force now. He was lost without it.

A slash to his arm whipped him round. Obi-Wan grabbed a nearby rope and swung away, letting it carry him round the structure, hoping to put some distance between him and this phantom hunter. He needed to get away.

On the other side he began to climb again, hastily powering himself up. Meter after meter. He had to get to the top. His ears raked the dark as the ground quickly became a distant memory. He tried not to look down at the dizzying drop now stretching away below him. If he fell now it would be bad news. And he was not yet even near half way up.

Sooner than he expected his injured arm began to ache under the strain of hauling his weight. His ribs burned and his hands flamed on the scaffold. He had nothing with which to soothe them but he continued raggedly on, defying the increasing gravity that sought to pull him backwards to his death. All the time knowing that his enemy could strike at any instant. Every slight vibration made him tense.

The not knowing, the not being able see wore at him psychologically. It threw his blindness to the Force into stark new relief, fuelling his fear and doubt. He was being toyed with. His enemy could have killed him twice over now. It was just revelling in his helplessness.

Obi-Wan swallowed. A clank of metal made him jump. His head whipped round searching. Nothing. Silence once more except for the pounding off his heart and the harsh scrape of his breath.

He wished now that he was back in the other arena, trading blows with the giant. At least then he knew where the threat was coming from and where it would strike. He felt helpless and naked, like a piece of meat hanging from the scaffold ready to be diced and devoured.

He shuddered as he forced his body to climb on. Jumping at every sound.

Another ladder. Another leap to the next bar. Eyes straining into the shadows.

Half way.

The noise level from the crowd began to increase. It told Obi-Wan that he was drawing near to the level of the stands.

A sudden thought stuck his brain. Could he swing from here into the crowd and escape? The girth of the scaffold extended near to the outer walls. With an effort he could get there. Where the audience came in there must be exits. Lots of them. And transports, fewer guards.

Sonu had finally slipped. He had his opportunity.

Hope flooded him lending extra strength to his muscles. The chance of a way out called him on.

Still keeping his senses tuned for another invisible attack, he hurried on.

But his respite had ended. Another hiss from an unseen rope told him that his enemy was coming in for another strike.

No! Obi-Wan gathered his strength and leaped upwards, catching hold of the bars several levels above and dragged himself out of reach. Sparks flared in the darkness as an unseen blade scorched the scaffold right where Obi-Wan’s neck had been.

Sticky, salty moisture trickled down Obi-Wan’s back, stinging his wounds. The smell of mingling sweat and blood filled his nostrils together with the tang of metal. He was living only by the skin of his teeth and that missed blow told him that his enemy had grown tired of toying with him. That blow had been meant to kill.

He had to get out of here. Now. He was fighting a phantom.

Desperately he looked up and to his relief he saw his target. He had finally brought himself level with the ledge of one of the viewing platforms. The noise of the crowd was almost overpowering, blocking out all else and rendering him completely ignorant to his opponent’s whereabouts. He knew that that lightning blade would find him soon if he didn’t get out.

A rope dangled nearby and Obi-Wan seized it with both hands. Only a couple of meters and he could escape.

He kicked off and let go of the rope with one bleeding hand, reaching for the ledge and his freedom.

His body slammed into the invisible force field at full speed. The shock of it stunned him and he barely he hung on as he crashed back into the climbing scaffold hard enough to jar bone. His vibroshiv flew from his grasp and disappeared.

Then he was falling. Falling away into the darkness until his right leg tangled with a protruding rung and stopped him. The brutal wrench drew a scream from his lips.

Barely conscious he dangled there helpless from one knee.

Pain overwhelmed his senses, but it was in his heart that he was now ultimately defeated.

What had he been thinking, the thought came to him distantly. He had been stupid to think that Sonu would allow him to escape so easily. Such a desperate fool. Had he succeeded he would only have been torn apart by the crowd before he’d gone two paces anyway.

There was no escape.

No escape.

The crowd leered down at him through his fading mind, jeering and calling and he felt their cries sink into him past the last of his stubborn defences.

Why was he trying so hard to survive? He was existing now to solely to satisfy the bloodlust of this rabble. To line the pocket of a thug.

His identity as a Jedi had been stripped from him. And so he was nothing.

Reach the next round. For what?!

Make me the richest man the system, Jedi.

Obi-Wan’s stomach roiled. He couldn't do it any longer.

The telltale swish of a rope found its way through his senses. His death was swooping towards him. And he waited for it.

He smiled faintly. He would escape. And this was how he would do it. He had done Sonu’s biding. His captor couldn’t argue if he fell in the pits and then the prisoners would be safe. And he would be free.

Reunited with the Force.

Could he still become one with it, blinded as he was from its warmth?

A quiver of fear shivered through his heart at the thought. But he couldn’t do anything about it. He would escape this place either way and deprive this hive of scum and villainy of its twisted pleasure. He could still control one thing and that was his own death. Sonu hadn’t thought of that.

At his core Obi-Wan centred himself. His life and events passed before his eyes for his reflection and he let it.

His friends.

Qui-Gon.

Ni! Ben! Ben!

Kyan.

The memory jolted Obi-Wan like a bolt of electricity. Still clutched in a haze of fog he pulled himself up. He cried out again as the blade scythed across his upper arm. Pain flooded him as he dragged himself away hardly knowing what drove him.

He had been fully prepared to die and now here he was moving again.

What had done that?

Kyan. You promised him you would come back. That you would return.

The boy. He had a responsibility to the boy. The pain in his arm cleaved through the cloying haze in his mind and gave him the strength to pull himself up a few more meters.

Kyan.

A wooden platform, closed on two sides, materialised just above him and he hauled himself onto it, gasping for breath as he concealed himself as best he could. What had he been doing back there? He did his best to gather his scattered thoughts. Yes there was escape that way. But could he forgive himself for giving in. For letting the boy down. For letting his Master down. They both needed him still.

Shakily Obi-Wan raised himself onto his elbows. Yes dying might be the only way out. But he realised now that he couldn't do it without knowing that he had fought with all his might to survive for those he loved. He would never have peace otherwise.

He had to get up and get himself together.

With a huge effort Obi-Wan pushed himself to his knees. Staring out into the dark from his little island he let his heart settle. He had a job to do.

He had to get to the top of this scaffold with his hide.
But what then. He had lost his vibroshiv. He had nothing now with which to touch the waiting sensor.

His weapon was lost a hundred meters below to the energy field. He would not be getting it back. Which left only one other option.

He almost laughed at the impossibility of it.

But he couldn’t go up there without.

Watching and listening he sat there. There was no sound apart from the impatient shuffle of the crowd above. No movement. But even without the Force he knew his mysterious opponent was out there, waiting.

He just had no idea where.

The Force. Obi-Wan shivered slightly. He felt so helpless without it. And that helplessness was threatening to consume him.

He couldn’t let it.

So he asked himself, was the Force all he was?

Was that his crutch? A comfort blanket that he clung to like a frightened child? His Master would disapprove of such a notion.

He was still living. He had his other senses. His eyes, his ears. His honed reflexes. He was still equal to his opponent in all ways.

Except in his head, he realised. He had grown so used to having the advantage over his enemies that now he felt crippled without it.

His adversary was under no such hindrance.

That had to change. He had to accept no matter how much his soul railed against the idea or he would not be getting out of here.

Breathing slowly and silently, Obi-Wan stared out. Where are you, hunter of the night? he thought. Hunting me.

He pulled in a lungful of frigid air. It was no good. He had to turn things around. He had learned from bitter experience that the only way to stop being the hunted was to become the hunter.

He needed a weapon and he needed to survive.

Impossible as it seemed he had to find his enemy. It was something he should have done from the start. He should have focused on the threat before focusing on the goal.

His enemy had been wiser than he there, too.

Another thing that was about to change.

Obi-Wan mulled over how best to achieve this near impossible task. He had no idea what he was up against. There had only been the wraithlike blade flashing out of the darkness to mark its victim at its leisure.

His enemy certainly had no trouble finding him when he wished.

An alien with superior night vision or a hound like sense of smell.

Either way it mattered not. The reality was that his opponent could see and he couldn't. He could chase the creature round this scaffold for weeks and not catch him. So where did that leave him?

A grim smile found its way onto Obi-Wan’s face. He knew his Master’s answer to this dilemma.

In such situations, my Padawan, it becomes necessary to let your adversary find you.

Obi-Wan closed his eyes as he remembered Qui-Gon’s soft tones.

Master.

Tears prickled behind his eyes but now his path was clear. A trap was needed.

And he would be the piece of meat baiting it once more.

Only this time it would be his idea.

Obi-Wan thought about it for a moment. His weapon had been lost, he had nothing to win with and nothing with which to fight his enemy. But there were alternatives to fighting. He let his eyes rove until they came to rest upon a nearby rope.

His enemy’s favoured form of attack. Each time he had attacked he had done so by swinging in.

The ropes. Inspiration hit and Obi-Wan had his plan.

It was risky but it was the only one he had.

Grabbing the rope before he thought better of it Obi-Wan began to lower himself down, careful to make just enough noise to make his presence known but not enough to make the hunter suspicious. His hands screamed as they were forced to grip the rough rope and his abused body cringed from trauma old and new, but Obi-Wan gritted his teeth and ignored it.

In seconds he had reached the nearest beam below his feet. He took his weight off the rope but did not let go of it. Holding it loosely in one hand, he stood upon the narrow beam of metal in perfect balance, seemingly unconcerned for the great drop and the energy field beckoning far below him.

He had trained like this a hundred times and he relaxed into it. His centre was returned.

Then he heard it. A rope whistling as it cut the air. His enemy was coming for him.

Just as he’d planned.

Obi-Wan concentrated, focusing hard on the direction of the sound. A little to his right and behind him. And that was all he could think before the attack was sprung.

But this time Obi-Wan was waiting. He wheeled aside, dancing nimbly down the beam as if it were the ground itself. Even so he still felt the breath of the blade across his neck as his enemy swung by. And it reminded him that the outcome of this confrontation was still far from decided. His enemy was swift and could easily defeat him.

There was a muffled murmur of surprise in the dark as the seemingly wounded and weakening prey eluded the kill.

Without thought Obi-Wan sprang into action. He gripped his own rope and leapt into oblivion. He swung round in a circle dissecting the path of his enemy’s rope with his own, looping it around until he landed back on the beam near a vertical strut. Bracing himself he hauled on the line. A howl of frustration was his reward as the other rope and its passenger were snapped back. The speed of it caused the enemy rope to coil rapidly round the strut. Round and round it whipped until there came a sudden thud a few levels below.

Got you. But it wouldn’t be for long. Drawing a composing breath, Obi-Wan leaped down aiming for the beam where he believed his enemy had crash landed. All he had to do now was defeat him and gain his weapon.

All in a day’s work. He hoped he knew what he was doing.

He missed his target by one. The rope coiled on down another level. Cautious now, Obi-Wan descended hand over fist down his own rope until he stood upon the scaffold.

Here the other line ended. But his adversary was not there. He’d already disappeared.

No, he hasn’t!

Obi-Wan twirled, bringing his rope up in nothing more than blind instinct, blocking the blade that sought to impale him. He twisted the length as he did so. The rope severed but he successfully turned the vibroshiv.

There was a growl and Obi-Wan looked up to find himself face to face with his enemy for the first time. The nightmare of the night. He was small and covered head to foot in a short coat of sooty hair that blended seamlessly with the shadows. Fierce black eyes glittered from a feline face as thin lips drew back from rows of needle sharp teeth.

Obi-Wan started. A Sakurar. He had only ever heard of this race. Legends and stories of their hunting prowess in the dark jungles of their homeworld had found him in the creche when he was a youngling. He was indeed lucky to be alive. The Force, wherever it was, was somehow still with him.

Long whipcord arms flashed out, the vibroshiv flickering in a long fingered hand.

Obi-Wan countered without thought, whipping his severed rope and snapping it across his enemy’s extended arm. The Sakurar bristled as it leapt back, spitting in surprised pain and fury.

With a motion like water the catlike alien switched his weapon from one hand to the other, relentlessly moving after the Jedi almost without pause.

Obi-Wan moved with him, weaving and dodging, just keeping enough distance between him and his adversary to keep his rope in play, slashing and parrying with it. The tip was in a constant hypnotic dance.

Then his foot slipped.

Obi-Wan’s heart plunged in his chest as he stumbled and teetered for two eternal seconds before he was able to right himself.

But those two seconds were all that was needed for his enemy to make a move. The vibroshiv slashed across Obi-Wan’s right cheek and scored across his jaw even as he desperately turned his head aside to avoid losing an eye.

Pain blinded Obi-Wan. He allowed himself to drop a level to get away from the blow that would be coming if he stood still.

Trying to stem the bleeding with his hand, he dropped into a crouch. His tunic collar was soon soaked in blood. That had been to close. He had to find a way to end this before he was killed.

The Sakurar dropped after him, coming down behind Obi-Wan. Obi-Wan readied himself, waiting until he felt the lunge, then twisted in a motion nearly too fast to witness. He brought the rope round and down. It hit true and to Obi-Wan’s relief it twisted, becoming hopelessly tangled around his enemy’s wrist.

The creature hissed, baring all his teeth, and pulled, trying to break away, but the rope only tightened further and Obi-Wan had the advantage of strength. Wasting no time he dragged his adversary to the nearest vertical support beam and bound the rope quickly, winding it again and again until the Sakurar was held fast.

All this had happened in seconds. Obi-Wan blinked as he absorbed what had just happened. He had the Sakurar was trapped and most importantly of all-- unharmed. His knees were weak with relief.

Furious, the alien struggled, continuing to swipe at Obi-Wan. He slashed at the rope that bound him.

Obi-Wan was slapped back to reality. “No!” he wound the rope in another loop. His words went unheeded and the shiv came close to marking him again.

A swift chop relived the Sakurar of his weapon. Claws shredded instead.

Obi-Wan raised his hand. “Stop! Be still. Don’t you see this way nobody has to get hurt? Don’t fight it.”

The alien stilled but continued to glare at Obi-Wan with hate in his eyes.

“Please, stay here,” he beseeched. “I don’t want to hurt you.”

He had to go. The only way to end this was to reach the top. Obi-Wan quickly tucked the captured vibroshiv into his belt. He had what he needed. With one last glance at his trapped adversary he began to climb once more. Quickly. He did not like what he saw in his enemy’s eyes.

No matter what he said, the alien would find a way free himself and when that happened the one that had trapped him would be in serious trouble.

Obi-Wan doubled his pace. Hand over fist. Meter after meter until his enemy was lost once more to shadows far below.

Up he climbed, on into the darkness. The crowd around him bayed and called out, accusing cowardice but he ignored them.

Up.

The minutes slipped by. Longer and longer.

The ladder became all that he knew. His limbs trembled from the exertion and his raw hands were now bleeding freely. Twice he had to stop, gasping and trying to relieve the acidic burn of muscles that battled the gravity that sought to finish him. With every step the weight seemed to get greater.

Up.

It never seemed to end.

Grey spots had begun to swirl behind Obi-Wan’s eyes before he finally looked up and at last saw his goal. In the nearing ceiling above he could just make out two red pinpoints of light. Sensors that he could drive his blade into and end this torture.

Just ten meters. Just ten more meters.

The howl that came shattered the air. The sound turned Obi-Wan's heart to ice.

No!

It had happened. The Sakurar was free. Already he could feel the vibrations of pursuit.

Obi-Wan grabbed the next rung, dragging himself along the next few meters with all the grit and determination that he possessed. Hadn’t known he possessed until this moment. There was no Force to call on to aid his failing muscles. Just him and his will to get out.

He had to get out before that Sakurar caught him.

The ceiling was now just inches from his face. The red sensors glowed invitingly from narrow holes deep within the rock.

With a trembling hand, Obi-Wan pulled out the vibroshiv and drove the blade hard into the rock. The tip brushed the waiting sensor.

The crowd roared as a siren blew. A shrill bugle to signalling the end.

The sound deafened Obi-Wan as he clung there, barely holding on.

The end. It was over.

So exhausted was he that he didn’t see the shadow fly up from the depths.

The Sakurar launched itself upon Obi-Wan’s back, teeth and claws slashing as it tried to get a hold of the Jedi’s throat.

With a shout Obi-Wan drove his head back into his enemy’s face, striking him and loosening its hold. The Sakurar howled, claws digging in as it tried to re-establish its grip.

Obi-Wan twisted in blind desperation, he struck out, catching the alien in the jaw with his fist.

The Sakurar fell back spitting, leaping clear to cling to the bars two meters away. Murder strobed through the black eyes as the wiry body coiled.

Obi-Wan watched it all through his haze of pain and knew. He knew. His heart screamed. “No, please,” he begged. “Don’t do this!”

But the Sakurar was beyond reason. It leapt, slicing through the dark towards the despairing Padawan.

Obi-Wan watched him come as if in slow motion. His thoughts flew. Him or his enemy. His enemy or him. His foot came up but he did not feel it move.

He came apart on the inside as it connected, knocking his adversary out into thin air and into oblivion. A real cry tore from his lips, overlaying that of his adversary as the dark body tumbled, falling helplessly away into blackness.

A forever minute of silence passed before there came a blinding flare from the energy field far below.

But Obi-Wan did not see it. His face was already buried in his arm, stifling the despairing sobs that wanted to break free. What had he done? Why hadn't the Sakurar stayed? Why--?! He'd killed him. He'd--

He did not notice when a catwalk extended from a hitherto hidden door in the near wall. Rough arms reached out and pulled him from the scaffold, dragging him onto the catwalk as it began to retract back into the wall towards waiting door.

The touch of the arms roused Obi-Wan and he fought with all his remaining strength to free himself from the Cobra’s grasp.

Fury burned though his despair as he saw Sonu waiting for him in the small antechamber, a delighted smile upon his face.

It was all that Obi-Wan could do to keep from flying at him. To wipe that expression from his face and send him out of the door, into the air to follow after the fallen Sakurar.

He did not listen to Sonu’s words. He did not hear anything as the medics came forward to bandage his wounds. All he could see was his enemy as he tumbled away to what most surely would have been his death.

His enemy who had been as much a victim as he. Who had died for nothing. Through him.

Obi-Wan began to shake. And he could not stop it. What had he done? His emotions raged but had nowhere to go.

A shove and he was following Cobra back down through the draughty corridors, Wookies on either side. He stared at the back of the bounty hunters head, eyes burning. He would like nothing more than to have the Force back right now so he could choke the living daylights out of that hated man.

The doors to the great prison materialised out of the gloom before them without Obi-Wan even having recalled how they’d got there.

All of a sudden he was through and the Cobra was gone behind the doors, leaving him suddenly with no focus for his anger.

On wooden legs Obi-Wan started forward, moving back to his bunk, sightlessly stepping over those lying on the ground, heedless to anything.

Until a cry split through his senses and drew him to an abrupt halt. A cry of a child in distress.

Obi-Wan was already turning towards the sound. He espied a man at the near wall, Kyan was there, cowering at his feet. The man shouted and raised a fist.

Obi-Wan’s vision finally went red and he swept across the floor. In a heartbeat he had the man’s arm in his hand, twisting and pinning him against the wall in a vicelike grip.

Fury roared in his ears.

“Touch him again and I’ll kill you!” he snarled in a voice that he barely recognised as his own.

This sorry little man suddenly became the target for all his anger, his despair, his regret. All he could see in that moment were the faces of Sonu and the Cobra. The men who had done this. The men who were still doing this. Who had brought him here, who had fixed him with this suffocating collar. Blocked him from the serenity of the Force and his Master. Made him fight.

Made him kill.

The fury mounted. For the second time in as many hours he was tumbling into darkness. Into a pit far blacker and ever more inescapable than the one he had just fought his way out of.

“Ben?”

It was the little voice that saved him. It cleaved through the raging mire of his mind like a thin sword of light.

Kyan?

With a gasp Obi-Wan came back to his senses. The red haze receded and his vision cleared. For the first time he truly saw the man he held pinned before him. A short, quivering man. Not Sonu. Not Cobra.

Another victim.

Fear stood in the brown eyes as the man stared at him and it stabbed through Obi-Wan’s heart.

Sucking in a ragged breath he let the stunned man drop to the floor and hastily stepped back. He was trembling violently. The anger drained away leaving him sick.

His hands dropped to his sides. Looking down at the cowering man he could only murmur hoarsely. “I’m sorry.” His eyes closed, blocking the man’s fear from his sight. “I’m so sorry. Just… please leave us alone.”

With that he turned, unable to stand there anymore, and scooped Kyan up into his arms. He barely had the strength left to carry the child.

Unseeing he stumbled back to their cot. Physically and emotionally numb, he collapsed down, finally unable to go any further. Curling into a ball he drew Kyan against his chest, needing the child’s presence to ground him. Twice already the boy had pulled him back from the brink. From death. From the dark. Maybe now he would save him from falling apart

The golden eyes peered at him questioningly then the little hand came up, tracing the long gash down Obi-Wan’s face.

“Ben,” he said softly.

That did it. The trembling became too much and Obi-Wan came apart. He tightened his grip around Kyan and buried his face in the boy’s small shoulder, pouring out his grief in long shuddering sobs to purge his wounded soul.

It was a long time before Obi-Wan managed to control the storm and draw back. “Kyan,” he murmured. His sorrowing eyes searching for the child’s wellbeing. He needed to know that the boy was still alright. It was all he was surviving on.

The child looked at him wearily, confused, but well. He was well. “Ben?”

Obi-Wan dragged up a weak smile. “Obi--” He shook his head. “Oh, never mind.”

He stroked the boy’s soft head as the tears continued to spill down his cheeks. “Never mind.”



tbc…


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Date Posted: 9/22 8:59pm Subject: RE: The Game of Death (Qui/Obi, Angst, Hurt/Comfort) Chapter 9 *Updated 23/09/08*
Poor Obi-Wan cry having to kill another victim and to care for Kyan. When will Qui-Gon rescue him. That would give those criminals something.

Great action scenes applause

 

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Date Posted: 9/22 10:00pm Subject: RE: The Game of Death (Qui/Obi, Angst, Hurt/Comfort) Chapter 9 *Updated 23/09/08*
Great chapter. The place is as cold as the hearts.

without the Force, Obi-Wan is so vulnerable to his emotions. (Makes for great reading ... mischief )

... Where's Qui-Gon ... ?

 

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Date Posted: 9/23 12:16am Subject: RE: The Game of Death (Qui/Obi, Angst, Hurt/Comfort) Chapter 9 *Updated 23/09/08*
Oh - by all that's - shock Intense and gripping - I tell you, you're the master.


The Sakurar fell back spitting, leaping clear to cling to the bars two meters away. Murder strobed through the black eyes as the wiry body coiled.

Obi-Wan watched it all through his haze of pain and knew. He knew. His heart screamed. “No, please,” he begged. “Don’t do this!”

But the Sakurar was beyond reason. It leapt, slicing through the dark towards the despairing Padawan.

Obi-Wan watched him come as if in slow motion. His thoughts flew. Him or his enemy. His enemy or him. His foot came up but he did not feel it move.

He came apart on the inside as it connected, knocking his adversary out into thin air and into oblivion. A real cry tore from his lips, overlaying that of his adversary as the dark body tumbled, falling helplessly away into blackness.

A forever minute of silence passed before there came a blinding flare from the energy field far below.

But Obi-Wan did not see it. His face was already buried in his arm, stifling the despairing sobs that wanted to break free. What had he done? Why hadn't the Sakurar stayed? Why--?! He'd killed him. He'd--


Under normal circumstances, I don't think this would be so devastating to defend himself - but poor Obi has been through so much, and without the Force to back him up. It doesn't feel like self-defense, it has to feel like forced murder on his part and that just grips Obi-Wan's core and twists it.

And then you add more raw emotion and gut-wrenching pain - and a message from the Force through a small boy:


On wooden legs Obi-Wan started forward, moving back to his bunk, sightlessly stepping over those lying on the ground, heedless to anything.

Until a cry split through his senses and drew him to an abrupt halt. A cry of a child in distress.

Obi-Wan was already turning towards the sound. He espied a man at the near wall, Kyan was there, cowering at his feet. The man shouted and raised a fist.

Obi-Wan’s vision finally went red and he swept across the floor. In a heartbeat he had the man’s arm in his hand, twisting and pinning him against the wall in a vicelike grip.

Fury roared in his ears.

“Touch him again and I’ll kill you!” he snarled in a voice that he barely recognised as his own.

This sorry little man suddenly became the target for all his anger, his despair, his regret. All he could see in that moment were the faces of Sonu and the Cobra. The men who had done this. The men who were still doing this. Who had brought him here, who had fixed him with this suffocating collar. Blocked him from the serenity of the Force and his Master. Made him fight.

Made him kill.

The fury mounted. For the second time in as many hours he was tumbling into darkness. Into a pit far blacker and ever more inescapable than the one he had just fought his way out of.

“Ben?”

It was the little voice that saved him. It cleaved through the raging mire of his mind like a thin sword of light.

Kyan?

With a gasp Obi-Wan came back to his senses. The red haze receded and his vision cleared. For the first time he truly saw the man he held pinned before him. A short, quivering man. Not Sonu. Not Cobra.

Another victim.


The Force is there - in life, in friendship, in connections. Magnificent job, my friend.

 

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Lileia 
Registered: Jan '08
14919_Leia
Date Posted: 9/23 2:05am Subject: RE: The Game of Death (Qui/Obi, Angst, Hurt/Comfort) Chapter 9 *Updated 23/09/08*
Oh, finally it's out! dancing

He had Kyan to care for now. He could not afford to be proud
How trully obiwanian this is.

A lump rose in his throat and Obi-Wan squeezed his eyes shut to hide the sudden burn of tears. How long had it been now since he had teased Qui-Gon over breakfast? He missed his Master so much it hurt. He wondered what Qui-Gon was doing now. How was he coping with his supposed ‘death’?
Dearest, dearest Obi-Wan. That bit with 'breakfast made with love' simply has done me in. I think Obi-Wan never took his Master's love for granted.

Absolutely brilliant piece about hardships of life. applause

“Undoubtedly. But I get the idea that it matters to Sonu. What would he do to you, Cobra, if he found out that you were responsible for the death of his favourite? I can’t imagine it would be anything nice.” Obi-Wan’s voice was now icy cool. He had the upper hand here, and they both knew it.
Now that's some negotiating! Qui-Gon's teachings. happy

But his respite had ended. Another hiss from an unseen rope told him that his enemy was coming in for another strike.
Arghh, you're evil! grin I was biting my nails up to my elbows out of worry! And you say that action is your least favourite thing to write? I saw him do all these things, I tensed trying to hear the next hiss of the rope, I forgot I'm still in the office and was starled when someone addressed me! Great job here!

But he realised now that he couldn't do it without knowing that he had fought with all his might to survive for those he loved. He would never have peace otherwise. How true for our Obi-Wan!

That did it. The trembling became too much and Obi-Wan came apart. He tightened his grip around Kyan and buried his face in the boy’s small shoulder, pouring out his grief in long shuddering sobs to purge his wounded soul
cry Awesome. I nearly cried myself.

Thank you for such a wonderful chapter! rose

 

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Gkilkenny 
Registered: Mar '04
7963_Obi-Wan Kenobi
Date Posted: 9/23 2:54am Subject: RE: The Game of Death (Qui/Obi, Angst, Hurt/Comfort) Chapter 9 *Updated 23/09/08*
Such an intensely exciting chapter. Plenty of action and thank the Force Kyran was there otherwise Obi-Wan might be dead now. worried

brilliant chapter. applause

 

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