Author Topic: Jedi Dreaming -- Yoda, Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, OCs -- COMPLETE (really) -- 18-June-2007
Healer_Leona 
Registered: Jul '00
44266_Fan Art - Female Chiss
Date Posted: 6/1/07 1:06pm Subject: RE: Jedi Dreaming -- Obi-Wan angst, Yoda, Qui-Gon, OCs -- Parts 1-6 -- 29-May-2007
I like the inclusion of the Whills and knowing it was Qui-Gon this passed on Whills spoke with.

Also enjoyed that Qui-Gon disagreed with Yoda's punishment of Obi-Wan. grin grin

 

-----signature-----
Any way youll never know
The many ways I've tried
Locked Topic | Active Topic Notification | Private Message | Post History
LuvEwan 
Registered: Mar '02
19928_Obi-Wan
Date Posted: 6/2/07 10:42pm Subject: RE: Jedi Dreaming -- Obi-Wan angst, Yoda, Qui-Gon, OCs -- Parts 1-6 -- 29-May-2007
Awww. love I loved their little reunion, that Obi-Wan knew Qui-Gon would stand there as long as Obi-Wan needed him to. And I'm glad Qui-Gon doesn't agree with Yoda's assessment of Obi-Wan's attachment. wink You're doing a fantastic job with this. applause

 

-----signature-----
It's the answer spoken by young and old, rich and poor, Democrat and Republican, black, white, Hispanic, Asian, Native American, gay, straight, disabled and not disabled.
-barack obama
Locked Topic | Active Topic Notification | Private Message | Post History
ardavenport 
Registered: Dec '04
22348_Luke Skywalker
Date Posted: 6/3/07 11:41am Subject: RE: Jedi Dreaming -- Obi-Wan angst, Yoda, Qui-Gon, OCs -- Parts 1-6 -- 29-May-2007

Current PM List:
earlybird-obi-wan
Gkilkenny
obi-gonjinn
Valairy_Scot
VaderLVR64
Healer_Leona
ratna
DarthBerryStraw




ratna: Thanks for reading! Reviewing what happens to orphaned Padawans was just reality check for Obi-Wan. Best to look at those when the master is fine and healthy than when things are bad. And the Whills shaman is female just because I tend to make a lot background characters female. I assume that Lucas has a lot of main characters in the Saga because he is male, and I just do something similar.

earlybird-obi-wan: Thanks! Obi-Wan just needed a hug. [face_smile] love

Fifilla: Thank-you! happy Yeah, there had to be some mission to the Whills somewhere and this is just my idea about what it would be.

Valairy_Scot: Thanks! Well, if Qui-Gon was learning about life after death from the Whills and Obi-Wan picked up on it, then Obi-Wan would not really understand on it and would pick up on the 'death' part more.

Gkilkenny: Thanks for the reply! Aaaaah yes, Qui-Gon would not really agree with Yoda coming down on Obi-Wan. There will be more about that. And I think Qui-Gon just had to ask to come in because Obi-Wan blocking the door and too shocked to move. happy

VaderLVR64: Thank-you! happy

dianethx: Thanks! The Jedi Council is a little top-down for management style. They don't think they need to explain themselves. That makes them a little tough on padawans.

Healer_Leona: Thanks for the reply! And I just don't think that Qui-Gon would agree with Yoda that trying to go around a Council member was such a bad offense. mischief

LuvEwan: Thanks! Given that he has time, it's hard for me to imagine Qui-Gon skimping on hugs for his padawan. hugs

 

-----signature-----
Links to all fics -- http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=25405090&brd=10304&start=26223917
The Heart of the Jedi -- http://boards.theforce.net/b/b1/26013327
---- Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, JA and everything you wanted to know about lightsabers
Locked Topic | Active Topic Notification | Private Message | Post History
ardavenport 
Registered: Dec '04
22348_Luke Skywalker
Date Posted: 6/3/07 11:44am Subject: RE: Jedi Dreaming -- Obi-Wan angst, Yoda, Qui-Gon, OCs -- Parts 1-6 -- 29-May-2007
o-o /O-O-O\ o-o \-O-O-/ o-o /O-O-O\ o-o \-O-O-/ o-o /O-O-O\ o-o - - - Part 7


Qui-Gon entered the Med-Center and made his request to the attendant droid. It tapped a com and issued a series of musical bleeps to relay Qui-Gon's request. Qui-Gon sat down in a soft, dull yellow chair in the waiting area. There was no one else there.

Qui-Gon closed his eyes, his hands resting in his lap in an informal meditation. There was no need for him to speak to Doombas. He had already drafted his petition to the Council after speaking with the Jedi Knight at Mission Ops and with Ynofique and her Padawan.

He had been shocked by Yoda's account of what had happened while he was gone. Yaddle had lingered in the Council room when she had seen them talking, and she confirmed Yoda's story about Obi-Wan's offense, but she also expressed surprise that Yoda had banished Obi-Wan to his room. This had initiated Qui-Gon's suspicions about Yoda's part. He was also very unhappy about Yoda's unilateral decision that informing him about Obi-Wan's dreams before he returned would be too much of a distraction from the mission. Yaddle had heard nothing about Obi-Wan's request until Obi-Wan tried to contact her.

Qui-Gon's unhappiness changed to something close to anger when he had actually seen Obi-Wan and heard his account. Factually, it matched exactly what Yoda had said. But emotionally, they were as different as light and dark. True, Obi-Wan had let his passions guide his actions. But that was to be expected at his age, and Yoda's guidance had been minimal at best. If he had no time for Obi-Wan's problem, then he surely could have referred to him to any number of better Masters.

Yoda had always preferred to teach, 'Your own wisdom, you must find' sometimes to excess. He had treated Obi-Wan's dreams as a private test for the boy. And when Obi-Wan had sought out help from a close friend, Rhara and Muln were conveniently sent away. Qui-Gon did not believe in coincidences. And Qui-Gon did not think that Obi-Wan's attempt to go around Yoda's authority, after his efforts to seek either action or guidance had been thwarted, had been such a serious offense.

No, Qui-Gon told himself, he deceived himself by denying his feelings. He was angry. He would not be free to meditate on the Whills and the shaman until he had resolved this. Yoda's arrogant interference with his apprentice, Obi-Wan's obvious trauma, the unspoken accusation of attachment, they all intertwined in a tight, blazing knot.

Thump-a-clak. Thump-a-clak.

Qui-Gon heard Doombas approaching and stood. Obi-Wan had mentioned Doombas's new artificial limb. When the older man appeared, he looked surprising well and like his old self, despite the effort he now expended to simply walk. Determined, Qui-Gon thought, not the disconsolate hulk he had seen earlier, his whole mind and body one unified wound. He was now more than just the parts that been destroyed and damaged.

Doombas grinned at Qui-Gon, who smiled back. He was not close to Doombas, but they had been casual acquaintances since they had been Initiates. They were both much older now.

Holding his arms out to display his new condition, Doombas invited, "Have a look. I would say pathetic, but I'm past that part. Just broken now."

"Hardly broken, Doombas," Qui-Gon denied. "Otherwise you would not be standing and I would still be visiting that huge lump of flesh I saw here earlier." Doombas sneered in return. Qui-Gon knew that he appreciated honesty, the blunter the better, especially if he was the target.

"You came about young Obi-Wan," Doombas stated. Doombas also did not like to waste time.

"Yes."

"I only saw him twice, but he looked better the second time. Less. . . .broken. This will pass for him. And I don't think what he did was very serious. Not by your standards, at least."

Qui-Gon was not sure if this was criticism, or a compliment. It could be either or both coming from Doombas.

"It will pass for him," he agreed. "Despite Master Yoda's doubts. He thinks that Obi-Wan is too attached to me. That he panicked over a vision that I might die on my mission. I released him from Yoda's restrictions and sent him to the Archive to review the actions of Padawans of deceased Masters. To satisfy Yoda's concerns."

Doombas's expression changed to surprise.

Whack!

Doombas's palm shot out with the speed of a Jedi Master and slapped the side of Qui-Gon's head. Stunned, Qui-Gon grabbed for the older man's arm, but he had already pulled it back.

"You sent him alone, you poodoo-brain?" he bellowed. "Ee-Ida didn't have to do it alone!" Doombas fumbled for the com on his belt.

"Ee-Ida?" he spoke into it. She answered almost instantly.

"I want you to go to the Archive and find Obi-Wan Kenobi. Help him with what he's working on. It's important."

"Yes, Master."

He clicked off the com and glared at Qui-Gon.

"I'm really not copying on whatever started this. But why are you so hot about Master Yoda? I thought the Council disciplined Obi-Wan."

Hand still covering his stinging face, Qui-Gon stared back. Doombas pointed an accusing finger at him.

"If you're so concerned with what Master Yoda is doing with your Padawan, then you might start by not acting like him."


o-o /O-O-O\ o-o \-O-O-/ o-o /O-O-O\ o-o \-O-O-/ o-o /O-O-O\ o-o


Obi-Wan looked with surprise at the mission synopsis of Jedi Knight Tuor and his Padawan, Zakost. He and Ee-Ida were not allowed to see the whole details, but they did not really need them. Tuor had been killed; two other Jedi Knights and his Padawan were wounded unsuccessfully trying to rescue him.

Zakost, had finished the few years left of his training under the tutelage of the Masters in the Temple and gone on to train three of his own Padawans to Knighthood, plus adopting one whose Master had fallen, before retiring to the duties of a much beloved mentor in the Creche. Zakost had soothed more than one of one of Obi-Wan's youngling hurts with furry hugs and kind words. He served there still.

Sitting on the bench next to him, Ee-Ida looked up at him with sad green eyes. Once they had exhausted the dry details about the disposition of orphaned Padawans, she had suggested scanning the records, for Jedi who had left Padawans behind. She had done so when her own Master's survival was in doubt.

Looking at Zakost's history, Obi-Wan suddenly felt that the universe around him had become much larger and broader than his own concerns. His dreams faded even further into shallow concerns compared to the depths of the pasts of others. The guidance for orphaned Padawans was only a collection of words. These files were its reality.

"I talked to Master Zakost after I saw this one," Ee-Ida said. "He said that he would be honored to take me, if I needed him. But I'm really, really glad that he didn't need to." Obi-Wan silently nodded his agreement.

They continued looking at files until the viewer chrono approached the time for third meal, when Obi-Wan would meet Qui-Gon. They shut off the terminal and picked up the data cylinders to return to the Archivists before leaving.


o-o /O-O-O\ o-o \-O-O-/ o-o /O-O-O\ o-o \-O-O-/ o-o /O-O-O\ o-o


The door to the meditation chamber on Qui-Gon's level of the living area slid open. In the soft lighting, Qui-Gon recognized Master Yoda's distinctive profile, large ears protruding from his small, slightly pointed head.

Qui-Gon calmly entered, the door closing behind him. They were alone. He took a seat on the second meditation platform. He took extra care of his clothes and pulling out any wrinkles from under him. On the other platform, Yoda glowered at him as he fussed with his robe. Qui-Gon's calm increased.

"I see, the Council has received my petition," he said, his attention still on a few errant folds of brown fabric under his feet. Yoda did not speak until he looked up.

"Received, the Council has."

The room filled with a long silence. Qui-Gon did nothing. If Yoda wished to merely glare at him until the Council addressed his petition, then he would oblige if necessary.

"Unhappy you are, that disciplined your Padawan, I did."

"Yes. I believe you exceeded your authority. But that was not the only issue in my petition."

Yoda pointed a clawed finger at him. "Decide, the Council does, on what best for the mission, is. Distracted you now are, by your pride as Obi-Wan's Master, from you duty to that mission."

"I do not see how I could have been distracted, since I did not know what was going on in my absence."

Yoda shook his head. "Complete, the mission is not. Pass on what you have learned, you have not."

"I shall," Qui-Gon stated. "After this is decided." Qui-Gon knew that he could not focus on the larger world of life, death and Force until he had satisfied the needs of the living around him. Doombas has reminded him of that.

Growling low in his throat, Yoda lowered his brows and long ears.

"Then denied, your petition, is."

Qui-Gon started. Yoda pushed himself to the edge of his platform to climb down to the floor.

"You cannot! You are not the Council, Master Yoda!"

From the edge of his platform he turned back, his expression smug, his green eyes hard.

"Deny I can. If place before your mission, your pride, you do." Yoda dropped from the platform, his clawed, bare feet slapping the floor when he landed.

Qui-Gon slid his long legs off his own platform and stood.

"You did not inform me of Obi-Wan's dreams. You offered him poor guidance when he asked for it. You denied him his friend's counsel when he sought it." Qui-Gon listed his grievances, his voice getting louder while Yoda picked up his gimer stick and then looked back up from the shadow of the platform, his expression stern.

"Deny him counsel, I did not." Yoda jabbed his stick at Qui-Gon for emphasis. "Mission there was. No part did I have in that."

Qui-Gon folded his arms before him and glared down at Yoda.

"Really," he said contemptuously.

Ears lowered, Yoda's eyes narrowed, his wrinkled face tightened. Qui-Gon could not possibly have found a worse insult, to imply that a Jedi Council member was not speaking the truth. It hung in the air between them. Qui-Gon did not believe him.

Yoda scowled, grumbling low. "Meditate you should, on false accusations." Yoda turned his back on him to walk toward the float chair on the floor by the door.

Outraged, Qui-Gon reached down to turn Yoda back to face him. Yoda would not find him so easy to discard as Obi-Wan had been. He would go around Yoda and petition every member of the Council personally if he had to, but he would not have his grievances so casually cast aside without protest.

"Aaaaugh!" Yoda whirled.

Blunt claws pressed deep into Qui-Gon's arm as Yoda's cloak swiftly scurried up his arm. Crying out, Qui-Gon tried to turn and pull back. The Force slammed down on his back and shoulders and he staggered. It came again, driving him down with another colossal impact. The left side of his face hit the floor, hard. Lights flashed in his vision.

Stunned, he lay there, his arms spread out, his face numb on the cold floor. A weight pressed down on his neck and shoulders.

"Something more to say, you have, Master Qui-Gon?" Yoda's voice hissed over him with cold, dead fury. Blunt claws pressed into an artery in Qui-Gon's neck while Yoda's other hand gripped his long hair. The Force was a dark weight over them both.

Qui-Gon's eyes teared, with pain and emotion. Yoda had struck him down in anger. Qui-Gon did not think he could bear such a tragedy.

~~//Aaaaaaah, so strong, so strong. So much power he has. But really, it is nothing at all.//~~ a familiar voice spoke in his head.

The Whill shaman had returned.

~~//He could kill you in an instant, but you are only full of sadness for him, with grief. All for him.//~~

Yoda breathed heavily over him, his breath heating his hair.

\\I do not understand your whims. Or why you are here now.\\ The words formed in Qui-Gon's mind. As had happened before, Qui-Gon felt as if the Whill spoke from everywhere around him.

A chuckle. Not just an imaginary sound, but an essence of amusement, and fondness. ~~//You questioned why I only spoke to you,//~~ she reminded him.

\\You said you could only speak to my compassion.\\ His own presence with the Whill felt small and isolated. As before, the Whill seemed as connected to the life of the whole universe as the Force itself, but still a separate and distinct being.

~~//You did not understand it then. Do you understand now?//~~

\\No. But I'm not at my best right now.\\ Qui-Gon's face was beginning to swell and throb. He tasted blood on his lips.

~~//You will. Only compassion can sustain you in the Force, as you call it. It is your living anchor beyond death. As it is for you now.//~~

The pressure of Yoda's claws and the grip on his hair left him. The little Master was heavier than he looked, especially sitting on a person's neck and shoulders.

\\Is it easier for you to speak to those who are incapacitated?\\ The shock had left him and he was really feeling his injuries, including an emerging headache. He had not thought he had struck his head when he fell.

The sense of amusement came again, warm sunshine felt from inside. ~~//It would appears so. You have all you need to know, Jedi Qui-Gon. It is within you. With time and experience, it will come.//~~ The presence left him.

So did Master Yoda, thankfully. The small body climbed down and Qui-Gon realized the dark weight of the Force had dissipated as well. He felt weariness and enormous sadness; the shaman's pressure was gone from the room.

Yoda stayed close. Kneeling, he bent over Qui-Gon's head. Qui-Gon felt wetness on his hair.

"Sorry, I am," Yoda said, his voice cracking more than usual. Those dangerous clawed hands gently stroked his hair now. Near disaster was gone, and possibly it had never really been that close after all. Or, Qui-Gon wondered, if it was just too terrible to contemplate.

Qui-Gon moved. He had to. His eye was swelling shut. Yoda sat back as he lifted his head and he raised himself up on his elbows; one of them was tender and bruised. Yoda sat next to him, his ears down in shame now, his large eyes heartbroken. Closer to the small Master's eye level, Qui-Gon recalled a time many years ago when he looked at Master Yoda from that height, standing. His own Padawan and Master had similar memories along with every Jedi in the Temple. Generation after generation of younglings had been nurtured by this ancient and powerful being, his strength always expressed through his wisdom and kindness and an occasional prod of his stick. But never, ever with a blow.

Yoda slowly shook his head. "Aggravating, you are," he said, though his expression was still terribly shamed as he tilted his head to view the damage. Qui-Gon licked blood off his lip and it stung.

"Your petition to the Council, I will not deny. Many faults in myself, I see now." This last was almost a whisper with Yoda's eyes cast downward.

Qui-Gon dragged himself up to sit on the ground. His knees were bruised, too. Then he reached out and drew the small Master to him.

Yoda climbed up onto his leg and settled next to his body, one long ear scrunched upward against him. It looked terribly uncomfortable to Qui-Gon, but Yoda did not seem to mind. He laid his hand over the small body; it was cool to touch, but not cold. Qui-Gon thought of the long embrace that Obi-Wan had greeted him with, when he could only stand there with his Padawan clinging to him. He could not bear to push him away then, even though he had come to his room intending to be firm with him about attachments.

Compassion and passion. They seemed so close at the moment, entwined and inseparable. One was immortality, the other, terrible destruction. He felt as if he had come close to losing something infinitely precious.

Neither Jedi Master moved for a long time. The small body pressed next to him warmed from Qui-Gon's body heat. The little arms and little legs hardly moved, but eventually one of Yoda's ears twitched and he lifted his head toward the door.

"Go I must," he said before climbing down and letting Qui-Gon's large hand partially support him as he lowered himself to the ground. He reached for his gimer stick and it flew to his hand. Qui-Gon watched him slowly walk to his float chair, the stick tapping on the floor the only sound in the room. He climbed on and sat down. He looked back, his eyes still forlorn.

"Consider your petition, the Council will. Contact you, they will, when they are ready."

The chair lifted in the air and the door slid open for it. A flash of white ducked back as it exited and quickly sped away. But the door stayed open. First a foot appeared, then a head and then a whole body and open-mouthed surprise.

Obi-Wan stared back at him.


--- tbc ---

 

-----signature-----
Links to all fics -- http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=25405090&brd=10304&start=26223917
The Heart of the Jedi -- http://boards.theforce.net/b/b1/26013327
---- Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, JA and everything you wanted to know about lightsabers
Locked Topic | Active Topic Notification | Private Message | Post History
azizah 
Registered: Sep '06
13901_Obi-Wan Kenobi
Date Posted: 6/3/07 2:59pm Subject: RE: Jedi Dreaming -- Yoda, Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, OCs -- Parts 1-7 -- 3-June-2007
I loved the reunion scene between Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan, very touching. And I was expecting a little confrontation between Qui-Gon and Yoda, but I never thought it would get physical! Wow! And Yoda will just hate being reminded of his loss of control every time he looks at Qui-Gon.

Great story.

 

Locked Topic | Active Topic Notification | Private Message | Post History
VaderLVR64 
Title: Fan Fic Manager in Combat Boots
Registered: Feb '04
20251_Anakin Skywalker
Date Posted: 6/3/07 4:25pm Subject: RE: Jedi Dreaming -- Yoda, Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, OCs -- Parts 1-7 -- 3-June-2007
What a lovely and enthralling story you're crafting here! applause I love it! grin

 

-----signature-----
If you have to choose between tears and laughter, remember that laughter burns more calories.
Army Mom! HOOAH!
Adopt a soldier: http://soldiersangels.org/
Locked Topic | Active Topic Notification | Private Message | Post History
earlybird-obi-wan 
Registered: Aug '06
6130_Obi-Wan Kenobi
Date Posted: 6/3/07 8:49pm Subject: RE: Jedi Dreaming -- Yoda, Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, OCs -- Parts 1-7 -- 3-June-2007
Qui-Gon confrontating Yoda WOW and Obi-Wan in the archives what did he find?

A great update applause

 

-----signature-----
writer and Star Wars fan
FANART [link=http://boards.theforce.net/fan_art/b10020/25793899]fanart[/link]
stories in my bio
Locked Topic | Active Topic Notification | Private Message | Post History
ratna 
Registered: Mar '07
7949_Jappor Snippet
Date Posted: 6/3/07 10:30pm Subject: RE: Jedi Dreaming -- Yoda, Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, OCs -- Parts 1-7 -- 3-June-2007
compassion as an anchor in the storms of the soul... wow.

 

-----signature-----
Ou n'a tu pas tellement aime quelqu'un que tu avais peur de l'aimer au peur des souvenirs?
Locked Topic | Active Topic Notification | Private Message | Post History
Fifilla 
Registered: Mar '06
8151_Sando Aqua Monster
Date Posted: 6/4/07 12:35am Subject: RE: Jedi Dreaming -- Yoda, Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, OCs -- Parts 1-7 -- 3-June-2007
"I only saw him twice, but he looked better the second time. Less. . . .broken. This will pass for him. And I don't think what he did was very serious. Not by your standards, at least."

Qui-Gon was not sure if this was criticism, or a compliment. It could be either or both coming from Doombas.

laugh
I really like Doombas!


Compassion and passion. They seemed so close at the moment, entwined and inseparable. One was immortality, the other, terrible destruction.
That whole scene with Yoda and Qui-Gon... just wow! applause
Great chapter!!!

 

-----signature-----
"There's always a bigger fish."
Fear Of Failure - young Qui-Gon (WIP) > http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/27642896
Padawan to Valairy_Scot happy
Locked Topic | Active Topic Notification | Private Message | Post History
Gkilkenny 
Registered: Mar '04
7963_Obi-Wan Kenobi
Date Posted: 6/4/07 2:50am Subject: RE: Jedi Dreaming -- Yoda, Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, OCs -- Parts 1-7 -- 3-June-2007


OMForce. Yoda lost his cool. shame_on_you

"Consider your petition, the Council will. Contact you, they will, when they are ready."

The chair lifted in the air and the door slid open for it. A flash of white ducked back as it exited and quickly sped away. But the door stayed open. First a foot appeared, then a head and then a whole body and open-mouthed surprise.

Obi-Wan stared back at him.


Poor Qui-Gon, it was a hard way for him to get Yoda's attention.
What must Obi-Wan think at the sight of his Master on the floor all bruised and bloody. shock


brilliant post cool

 

-----signature-----
Padawan to p_stotts
Peace over anger - honour over hate - Strength over fear.
Links to Stories in my Bio. Obi-Wan forever.
Locked Topic | Active Topic Notification | Private Message | Post History
Healer_Leona 
Registered: Jul '00
44266_Fan Art - Female Chiss
Date Posted: 6/4/07 3:38am Subject: RE: Jedi Dreaming -- Yoda, Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, OCs -- Parts 1-7 -- 3-June-2007
Doombas's palm shot out with the speed of a Jedi Master and slapped the side of Qui-Gon's head. Stunned, Qui-Gon grabbed for the older man's arm, but he had already pulled it back.

"You sent him alone, you poodoo-brain?" he bellowed. "Ee-Ida didn't have to do it alone!" Doombas fumbled for the com on his belt.


Whoa!! shock Can't say Doombas is wrong though.

AN even more interesting confrontation between Yoda and Qui-Gon. Wow! lol

 

-----signature-----
Any way youll never know
The many ways I've tried
Locked Topic | Active Topic Notification | Private Message | Post History
DarthBerryStraw 
Registered: Mar '07
46395_JC: Fan Fiction
Date Posted: 6/4/07 7:18pm Subject: RE: Jedi Dreaming -- Yoda, Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, OCs -- Parts 1-7 -- 3-June-2007

ardavenport posted:
"Something more to say, you have, Master Qui-Gon?" Yoda's voice hissed over him with cold, dead fury. Blunt claws pressed into an artery in Qui-Gon's neck while Yoda's other hand gripped his long hair. The Force was a dark weight over them both.


shock I never would have imagined a physical confrontation between Yoda and Qui-Gon! Amazing chapter. applause

 

-----signature-----
“I MAY BE A HOGWARTS STUDENT….” Hargirid paused angrily. “BUT I AM ALSO A SATANIST!” - ... Tara
UDCS: Of All the Witty Titles http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/29095691/p1/?7
Locked Topic | Active Topic Notification | Private Message | Post History
obi-gonjinn 
Registered: Jun '06
40693_Shaak Ti
Date Posted: 6/6/07 4:18am Subject: RE: Jedi Dreaming -- Yoda, Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, OCs -- Parts 1-7 -- 3-June-2007
Yoda had a hissy fit! Yoda had a hissy fit!!! tongue

Great Googlely mooglely I cant beleave that!!!!! shock

Such a small thing had Qui-Gon close to tears!!!!!
ah well at least the made friends again!
I have a bed feeling that this story is far from over!!!
I cannot wait for more brilliant post!!!! applause

 

-----signature-----
Time is best spent when fast asleep zzzzzzzz
Locked Topic | Active Topic Notification | Private Message | Post History
LuvEwan 
Registered: Mar '02
19928_Obi-Wan
Date Posted: 6/6/07 11:05am Subject: RE: Jedi Dreaming -- Yoda, Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, OCs -- Parts 1-7 -- 3-June-2007
Wow, that would be quite a sight for a Padawan to see. laugh I like how in-depth this is. Really makes you think. And Yoda and Qui-Gon's confrontation was jaw-dropping. You handled it amazingly well. applause

 

-----signature-----
It's the answer spoken by young and old, rich and poor, Democrat and Republican, black, white, Hispanic, Asian, Native American, gay, straight, disabled and not disabled.
-barack obama
Locked Topic | Active Topic Notification | Private Message | Post History
ardavenport 
Registered: Dec '04
22348_Luke Skywalker
Date Posted: 6/8/07 4:50pm Subject: RE: Jedi Dreaming -- Yoda, Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, OCs -- Parts 1-7 -- 3-June-2007
azizah: Well, Obi-Wan was just really happy to see Qui-Gon. happy And I think Yoda will be able to adjust to being humble. Glad you enjoyed it!

VaderLVR64: Thank-you; glad you're enjoying it!

earlybird-obi-wan: Obi-Wan learned about what happens to padawans if their masters die. . . . for now. wink . Thanks for reading.

ratna: Thanks for the reply!

Fifilla: Doombas has a little more common sense than Qui-Gon I think. wink Thanks for the reading!

Gkilkenny: Yes, I think Yoda knows he's been very, very bad. sad And Qui-Gon is a shocking sight, but I'm sure that Obi-Wan can help. happy Thanks for the reply!

Healer_Leona: Thanks for the reply!

DarthBerryStraw: Thanks! happy

obi-gonjinn: Yeah, Yoda lost it, big time. wink But they did make up. Thanks for reading!

LuvEwan: Thanks! Yes, Qui-Gon is a bit of a sight for his padawan at the moment. The confrontation between Qui-Gon and Yoda was based entirely on my assumption that Qui-Gon really can be irritating enough to make Yoda lose his temper. tongue



 

-----signature-----
Links to all fics -- http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=25405090&brd=10304&start=26223917
The Heart of the Jedi -- http://boards.theforce.net/b/b1/26013327
---- Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, JA and everything you wanted to know about lightsabers
Locked Topic | Active Topic Notification | Private Message | Post History