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To You - - A Qui-Gon/Tahl Romance in Short Installments, JA, AU - COMPLETE - We Live - 17-Sept-2007
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star_writer24
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8/10/07 9:48pm
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RE: To You - - A Qui-Gon/Tahl Romance in Short Installments, JA, AU - I Hide - 10-August-2007
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This is so good!
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ratna
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8/10/07 11:28pm
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oh, wow, so beautiful.
together under the blanket... because of all that you have written leading up to this, this image is just filled with tenderness.
description of the sensations of hiding was GREAT!
"What do we do now?" I ask.
He has no answer.
*reader bounces up & down on seat waving hand wildly*
I do! I do!
1) Obi-Wan is a very loving and loyal padawan, he WON'T blow their cover(s) 
2) They get to live happily ever after. 
Hmmm, I suppose if they're together then they can't really be alone. With each other. But love is funny that way.
It really is, isn't it... 
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dianethx
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8/11/07 5:36am
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RE: To You - - A Qui-Gon/Tahl Romance in Short Installments, JA, AU - I Hide - 10-August-2007
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They were almost caught and it's not a good thing. They need to be more careful. But they are also playing at deceit. I wonder how long before they are discovered....
Good job.
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Healer_Leona
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8/11/07 10:36am
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The door opens and I throw my hands up in a preposterous gesture to cover myself. I am assaulted by my clothes being flung on me. My boots and most of my other things thump at my feet. The door hisses shut again.
I really LOL'd at that.
Sorry I can't help but figure both presences were felt by whoever would come to the door. 
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DarkAnakinfan
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8/11/07 7:21pm
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If it was Obi, surely he would sense or figure things out. If so, I am hoping he would be loyal to Qui. Tahl & Qui can't get caught & they just can't be separated. I just won't be able to handle that. I am trying to decide how cruel of an author you can be. You will be nice to us, right????
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LuvEwan
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8/11/07 8:29pm
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Nice image of Qui-Gon shoving Tahl into the bathroom.  It's great how in so few words we went from them lying together leisurely to Tahl being in a chilly bathroom to them standing there together. Great skills you've got, lady. 
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ratna
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8/11/07 9:52pm
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Hmmm, very interesting. Seems like this latest chapter is turning out to be quite a litmus for the moral compass of your readers. Way 2 go, Anne!!
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Fifilla
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8/12/07 11:37pm
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 They got caught... nice little cliffhanger!
I really love this story!
The chapters are so short but you manage to tell so much in them - great job! 
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ardavenport
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8/13/07 6:33pm
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RE: To You - - A Qui-Gon/Tahl Romance in Short Installments, JA, AU - I Hide - 10-August-2007
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star_writer24: Thank-you!
ratna: Well, Tahl and Qui-Gon might not be ready for happy-ever-after yet. There will still be a few things they need to work out, but I don't think Obi-Wan will get in their way. Thanks for the reply!
dianethx: They definitely need to work out things with their relationship.  Thanks for the reply!
Healer_Leona: Well, a visitor might only sense the presences of the people they intend to sense.  Thanks for the reply!
DarkAnakinfan: We'll see how the masters and padawans work things out. Thanks for reading!
LuvEwan: Thanks much! Tahl's POV seems to automatically demand a minimal style; I'm glad it seems to be working!
Fifilla: Thanks! They might not quite have been caught. Technically. 
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ardavenport
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8/13/07 6:35pm
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//^^\\v//^^\\v//^^\\_ We Meet _//^^\\v//^^\\v//^^\\
I walk with Bant. She always follows me, on my right, one half step behind. Sometimes, if there is something important coming, she will speak softly, tell me of a particular person approaching or waving, or describe what a group might be doing in the distance.
"Master Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan are coming down the stairs to meet us," she says.
"How do they look?"
"Master?" Bant is surprised. I rarely ask for what she sees.
"Their faces. How do they look?"
"Glad. They are smiling."
I feel them draw near. There is the very faint sound of a float chair. Apparently, Qui-Gon does not wish to try his Padawan's patience today.
"Tahl," Qui-Gon says, as if this was the first time we had met that day.
"Master Tahl," Obi-Wan says, as if this was the first time I had met Qui-Gon that day.
"Qui-Gon. Obi-Wan." I incline my head toward them. And smile back.
"Master Qui-Gon. Obi-Wan," Bant says, as if this was the first time she had spoken to Obi-Wan that day.
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DarkAnakinfan
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8/13/07 6:45pm
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I love it! So everyone is being discrete. I should have known that Bant and Obi would be the epitome of discretion.
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ratna
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8/13/07 8:35pm
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Good Padawans! Obi and Bant, gotta love 'em! 
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Fifilla
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8/13/07 10:45pm
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"Master Qui-Gon. Obi-Wan," Bant says, as if this was the first time she had spoken to Obi-Wan that day.
They are good Padawans, aren't they? They won't tell anybody else what has happened. But I wonder what they have planned, I don't think they just wait and see what will happen next.
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Healer_Leona
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8/14/07 4:01pm
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Funny to seem them acting all... professional I guess, when they're all such relly good friends. lol
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ardavenport
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8/19/07 8:35pm
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DarkAnakinfan: Oh, Jedi are very discreet. Thanks for reading!
ratna: Thanks for the reply! Obi-Wan and Bant know when to say nothing.
Fifilla: They are excellent padawans. Thanks for reading!
Healer_Leona: Thanks for reading! Jedi are so professional.
I should have posted this a couple days ago......I've been distracted. I might not be quite as regular posting until after DragonCon over Labor Day. My sewing machine needs me.
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