Author Topic: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - COMPLETE 6/3
jedidas3 
Registered: Apr '07
39868_Obi-Wans
Date Posted: 6/4 5:23am Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - COMPLETE 6/3
What a beautiful ending. applause applause I'm in awe. Thank you for such an incredible story!

 

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Quigonjecca 
Registered: Jul '07
46395_JC: Fan Fiction
Date Posted: 6/4 9:36am Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - COMPLETE 6/3
Wow! This story was so amazing, with such a peaceful ending. Often times when I read storeis that end with the main characters ageing or dying, the author fails to project peace to the reader. Your ending was so tranquil. I loved it!

Bravo on an amazing story!

 

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dianethx 
Registered: Mar '02
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Date Posted: 6/4 5:21pm Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - COMPLETE 6/3
Loved the ending with Anakin as a Master and them still thinking of themselves as a team. As it should have been.

Very well done.

 

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padawan_learner86 
Registered: Aug '05
19543_Obi-Wan Kenobi
Date Posted: 6/5 11:56am Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - COMPLETE 6/3
That was a beautiful, light-hearted ending to a wonderful fic! love

“Do I sense concern?” Obi-Wan asked, not bothering to hide the smile stretching across his face.
“Of course,” Xanatos replied. “Who will take me on walks if you get yourself killed or worse, laid up in that ward yourself?”
Lol, good to see those two became great friends. Really nice touch to have Qui-Gon's padawans all teaming up. wink

The shin-smacking passed down from Master Yoda is just brilliant grin

Those comments about never breaking up 'the team' cry Simply wonderful. Thanks for writing. ^^

 

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bek 
Registered: Jul '05
14551_Obi-Wan Kenobi
Date Posted: 6/5 6:17pm Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - COMPLETE 6/3
A wonderful ending to a beautiful story. applause

I'm glad Obi-Wan and Xan became good friends. happy And I too liked that Luke and Anakin were there for Obi after Xan died. Also that Anakin wasn't ready to let go of his mentor or have him too far away.

Wonderful, wonderful story! love

 

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VaderLVR64 
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Registered: Feb '04
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Date Posted: 6/6 5:46am Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - COMPLETE 6/3
I admit, I got a little teary eyed at the ending. cry

“I thought you would be rid of that damn crutch by now.”

“It looks like it will be with me to the end,” Obi-Wan shot back quickly. “Apparently, I am old and my bones don’t heal like they used to.”

“All the more reason for you to stop gallivanting around the galaxy like you are still a senior padawan,” Xanatos scolded.

“Do I sense concern?” Obi-Wan asked, not bothering to hide the smile stretching across his face.

“Of course,” Xanatos replied. “Who will take me on walks if you get yourself killed or worse, laid up in that ward yourself?”


That was just perfect! And the ending sequence with the Skywalkers... love

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p_stotts 
Registered: Jan '01
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Date Posted: 6/6 11:16am Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - COMPLETE 6/3
I just stumbled across this and oh, what a wonderful, wonderful story. This is how things should have gone, but, alas... Sir George disagrees. Anyway, I'm certainly glad I read this. Great work!

 

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Healer_Leona 
Registered: Jul '00
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Date Posted: 6/8 3:27pm Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - COMPLETE 6/3
Fantastic ending.

Thanks for sharing it Magier. hugs

 

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silverfighter 
Registered: Apr '07
7927_Obi-Wan Kenobi
Date Posted: 6/8 3:43pm Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - COMPLETE 6/3
Oh, that was wonderful. happy I loved seeing Obi-Wan old, and Anakin and Luke both in the Jedi Temple! That brought SO many plotbunnies to life, though. tongue

Fantastic story. grin

 

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Itachi-Uchiha 
Registered: Jul '07
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Date Posted: 6/8 3:53pm Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - COMPLETE 6/3 - Date Edited: 6/8 3:53pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Itachi-Uchiha
I absolutely loved how you tied this story up. And thank you so much for not killing off any main characters simply for the heck of it. I'm still numb from the EU doing that recently. sad Loved that you kept Xan alive and friends with Obi. love And that the old rogue found peace. I couldn't have thought up a more satisfying ending if I'd tried. Bravo! applause

“Rumor has it you are considering retiring your Council seat, Master Kenobi.” Xanatos raised an eyebrow. “I question your judgment in leaving the Council to the Skywalkers.”

“Whie will keep them in line,” Obi-Wan assured him before looking back toward the hallway. “Are you up for some fresher air?”


Whie! happy I'll miss this fic.

 

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Ganki 
Registered: Jan '02
20874_Obi-Wan Kenobi
Date Posted: 6/9 1:26pm Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - COMPLETE 6/3
Amazing story and an equally amazing ending. I loved the relationship between Xan and Obi I have such a weakness for those two. All in all i loved it <3

UP!

 

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mujapple-juicey 
Registered: Jul '08
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Date Posted: 7/22 10:58am Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - COMPLETE 6/3
shock WOW shock
Sooo awesome! Superb! Grandoise(wait a minute, is that even a word?)! OMA!
This is what I call a very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very good story. You made me like Natoes! cry
I'm a newby and I suck. Time travel is one of favorites! Awesome! grin

 

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padawan3 
Registered: Sep '99
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Date Posted: 8/14 9:17pm Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - COMPLETE 6/3
Wonderful ending. I greatly enjoyed the premise of this story. I look forward to reading more of your works.

 

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Qui-Gina-Jinn 
Registered: Jun '03
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Date Posted: 9/24 1:26pm Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - COMPLETE 6/3
At the moment, I'm trying to catch up with stories I've been reading and I knew that this was one of them.
It took me some time to find it via my last posts, but now I'm really happy that I did grin

I have just one word to say about the last chapter: Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!! blush

I really liked how you twisted the whole saga.
Having 'the Skywalkers' both being on the Council with Obi-Wan was awesome - and Obi-Wan talking with Qui-Gon love

Wonderfully done grin

 

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Master_Tigris_Leigh 
Registered: Jul '04
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Date Posted: 9/28 2:44pm Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - COMPLETE 6/3
I missed your post! But I was happy to see it. grin

Such a great story! Perfect ending. I wish this was canon. cry

You have made me a fan of time-travel stories. Everyone had a happy ending, except the Sith, and I have warm fuzzies now. Great job, and I hope to see more from you soon.

 

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