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Itachi-Uchiha Registered: Jul '07	Date Posted: 8/10/07 12:02pm Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - Ch 5, Update 8/6
	The chill that penetrated his body came more from the cold disposition of his companion than the wind. Qui-Gon, the man he remembered as warmly expressive, had not said a word to him on their trip. Pretty much nails my feelings about the JA version of Jinn. Good thing there are such wonderful fanfic writers such as you and Diane that helped soften my opinion on him. I loved how Obi-Wan sensed Anakin's confusion and hurt and was quick to offer support and comfort. Now Anakin is trailing his young master. -----signature----- Headstrong : http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/27188681/p1/?5 Xanatos/Quinlan/Qui-Gon/Obi-Wan/Dooku Updated December 17th! In Memoriam: Itachi Uchiha
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Magier Registered: Jul '07	Date Posted: 8/12/07 10:05pm Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - Ch 5, Update 8/6 - Date Edited: 8/12/07 10:07pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Magier
	azizah - Thanks so much. I like very real characters, and try not to write anyone as perfect. Fifilla - Qui-Gon knows something is fishy with the situation, just doesn't know the full extent of it obviously. dianethx - I think Anakin is getting a dose of reality, which is going to be very good for him in the longrun. jedidas3 - This is so hard for Obi-Wan to have Qui-Gon right there and not be able to say anything about who he is. It is something he will continue to struggle with. Valairy_Scot - I do love writing the interactions and the thoughts Obi-Wan and Anakin have on the younger Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon. It is what has fed this bunny. Healer_Leona - I think it is kind of shocking to Obi-Wan that he didn't realize he was walking behind Qui-Gon. aliceandjasper - I think that because he never had a chance to really learn under Qui-Gon, the "idea" of it was something he probably held onto as Obi-Wan's apprentice. It had to be easy every time Obi-Wan did something he didn't agree with to say,"well, Qui-Gon would have done it different." VaderLVR - Thanks. I am having a lot of fun with the characters. emerald54 - Old habits are hard to break, and he was Qui-Gon's padawan for quite a while. He never ever had the chance to interact with Qui-Gon outside that role. ardavenport - Funny you should say that. I never imagined I would write a time travel story because they can get really confusing, but I enjoyed this bunny idea a lot and couldn't resist the character interactions possible. Qui-Gina-Jinn - I loved the idea of the "stubbornness contest". Yes, Obi-Wan did learn from the best. Gkilkenny - I think Anakin's perceptions are changing quite a bit. He probably has more questions than answers right now. Itachi-Uchiha - I really feel for Anakin here. It has to be hard for him to see such a different Jinn. It will be interesting to see his thoughts on his master as a boy. Chapter 6 “Nothing” Obi-Wan breathed out in frustration. Obi-Wan closed the lid on the last remaining box. He had led Qui-Gon to the place he remembered entering the Home Planet mine, but they had found no bomb, no danger, no Core 5, only a mine shaft in the midst of repairs and boxes full of building supplies. Apparently, Offworld had made good on its offer to help. “This one is full of supplies as well,” Qui-Gon said. Sensing his companion’s growing skepticism, Obi-Wan closed his eyes, trying to bring up a mental picture of the mine shaft from his memories. They had moved quickly through the mines, believing Xanatos was in close pursuit. The tunnel had seemed to go on forever when he was here before as a child. This one stopped rather abruptly. There was more, something he was missing. He quickly began to move the boxes and supplies, revealing a stack of fallen crossbeams. “It’s completely blocked,” Qui-Gon observed. “Just as VeerTa said it was.” “No,” Obi-Wan said. “The crossbeams are arranged to look that way to hide something.” Obi-Wan tugged on a couple of the crossbeams until he made an opening large enough for him to slip through. Even as he began to crawl, he felt the Force guiding him forward. He was supposed to find this. The mine shaft extended backwards, beyond the makeshift wall. The ground sloped sharply, leading down. “The mine goes for a long way on this side,” he called to Qui-Gon. “Come on.” He closed his eyes again as the larger Jedi master squeezed through the opening. This was it. They had pursued Xanatos down this shaft, the crosscut tunnel was ahead. Obi-Wan cautiously led the way through the narrow corridor toward the familiar sensations of intense heat and thin air. As the passage grew dimmer, he pulled a glow rod from his utility belt to light their way. In its glow, he saw a faint sign and breathed out a sigh of relief. “It’s here. Core 5, as promised,” he said to Qui-Gon. His companion followed in silence as Obi-Wan led them into a wider tunnel. This was where the lights had gone out. This was where they had faced Xanatos. In this place, a young Obi-Wan had finally pushed away his anger and drew on the Living Force. This was where he and Qui-Gon had first fought as a true team. It felt odd to stand here with Qui-Gon now, knowing that none of that had happened yet and possibly never would. “We’ve still found no bomb,” Qui-Gon pointed out. “I know. Either it is not yet here, or it was moved,” Obi-Wan said softly, wondering which was true. “Wait,” he said, suddenly remembering Xanatos’ escape. “There is a lift here, hidden, behind a wall that turns transparent.” “Like the one in Xanatos’ office,” Qui-Gon murmured. The two Jedi drew on the Force, searching the wall until one section disappeared, revealing a lift tube. “Shall we see where it goes?” Obi-Wan suggested. “I don’t suppose you would tell me why you are so certain there is supposed to be a bomb here, and how you knew there was a hidden lift?” Qui-Gon asked as they climbed inside. There was a growing part of him that hated hiding from Qui-Gon and wanted to believe the Jedi master would understand. The timeline was undoubtedly damaged already. Instead of saying any of the many things on his mind, Obi-Wan simply lowered his head. “Sorry, I cannot.” The lift came to a stop, and they readied themselves. While there was every possibility of an ambush, no one was there. The lift simply emptied into the night air. Not far, Obi-Wan could see the hangar where he knew Xanatos’ ship was waiting. “He always has a backdoor,” Qui-Gon whispered. “I am unsure of where to look now,” Obi-Wan admitted. “It is late and we are both exhausted,” Qui-Gon said. “Perhaps we should both get some sleep and start again tomorrow with fresh minds.” “If Xanatos has changed his plans and moved the bomb …” “We will not find out tonight,” Qui-Gon interrupted. “The Force warns us of no imminent danger. In this moment, we both need rest.” “Perhaps, you are right.” “Where are you staying?” Qui-Gon asked. “On our ship, in the hangar.” “With Obi-Wan missing, there is spare sleepcouch in my assigned accommodations. It’s a lot more comfortable and a lot warmer than a ship’s bunk. It might be better for us to start from one place tomorrow so we don’t have to meet up.” “I would appreciate that.” Though he suspected Qui-Gon’s motive was to keep a closer eye on him, Obi-Wan was grateful for the offer. Instead of keeping watch outside where Qui-Gon was staying, he might actually be able to get sleep tonight. * Stepping with the grace and quiet only possible from Jedi, Anakin was nearly invisible as he made his way through the corridors of the mining platform. His destination was obvious, the bright Force presence that matched his master’s identically serving as his beacon. He rounded a corner and found himself in a room stacked high with platforms, filled with sleeping slaves. The stench of bodies, sweaty from hard work, was overwhelming, and Anakin was reminded of just how loud some species could be when they slept. He quickly found the object of his search tucked away in a corner. The boy … his master … was coated with grime. Obi-Wan slept restlessly, an overwhelming sense of loss and hopelessness leaking through his shields. Anakin wondered how Qui-Gon could have been so blind to someone destined to become a legend in the Jedi Temple. He hoped to the Force he hadn’t messed things up too much with his carelessness. Obi-Wan shifted, grimacing at the pain from slowly healing wounds as he let out a muffled whimper. It was a strange feeling to see his master, but not as the strong Jedi master he learned from everyday. This Obi-Wan was a child and vulnerable. Anakin decided there was one thing he could, even if it was to just ease a little of his master’s suffering. He sent warm bursts of healing into the boy’s injured body, watching with satisfaction as the small form relaxed. “I’m here to take care of you,” he whispered softly, settling down to stay at his master’s side for the night. * Across the Great Sea of Bandomeer, another Obi-Wan was fast asleep, also unaware he was being closely scrutinized. Qui-Gon had watched the young man meditate, and then drift off to sleep. He was an enigma, a stranger, a man with no name. Yet, he was oddly familiar. It was his eyes that were most striking, not quite blue, not quite gray, changeable, almost like … it was an alarming similarity, and Qui-Gon decided his tiredness was getting the best of him. This Jedi master certainly seemed to know much about Xanatos. Could he have been one of Xanatos’ agemates? Someone his former apprentice had sparred against on occasion? Qui-Gon had locked away many of those memories, too painful. At least he had the man close where he could watch him. Rest, and then he could face his questions tomorrow. There was one last thing he needed to do. He approached the communications’ consol and logged in the frequency for the Jedi Council. Master Yoda was apparently waiting for his transmission after Qui-Gon had sent an earlier message saying that Obi-Wan was missing. “Found him have you, Qui-Gon?” the aged master asked with obvious concern. “No, not yet,” Qui-Gon whispered. He lowered the volume down as he looked to make sure their voices had not disturbed his guest. “Though, I have a source that claims he knows the boy’s location.” “What source is this?” “Another master and padawan team. They had to make an emergency stop here.” Qui-Gon rubbed his chin thoughtfully as he decide how best to ask the question foremost in his mind. “The master seems to have uncanny knowledge of the situation on Bandomeer. I was actually going to request that you send me any information on a Padawan Anakin Skywalker, including the name of his master.” Yoda contemplated the name for a moment before turning to a nearby consol. “There is no Padawan Skywalker in the Temple,” Yoda replied. “Could they be from a Temple on another planet?” “In our records they would be. Try to find information from other sources I will.” Long ears lowered as Yoda faced Qui-Gon again. “Certain are you that trust him you can?” Qui-Gon looked toward the Jedi master sleeping peacefully where Obi-Wan should be. Though the young man was heavily shielded, the Force danced around him and fawned over him. It loved him, and that was perhaps why, when it made no sense, Qui-Gon was willing to trust him. “Yes, I believe I can.” “Careful you should be, Qui-Gon. Strange things I sense in the Force. Hard to explain they are.” “I am careful, especially where Xanatos is involved.” -----signature----- No Legacy So Rich : Xan,OC, Obi, Qui (12/19) Seekers, Not Saints: SW/TB crossover (8/12)
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Fifilla Registered: Mar '06	Date Posted: 8/12/07 11:51pm Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - Ch 6, Update 8/13
	Wonderful chapter!!! That's such a great story your are writing here!!! Obi-Wan shifted, grimacing at the pain from slowly healing wounds as he let out a muffled whimper. It was a strange feeling to see his master, but not as the strong Jedi master he learned from everyday. This Obi-Wan was a child and vulnerable. Anakin decided there was one thing he could, even if it was to just ease a little of his master’s suffering. He sent warm bursts of healing into the boy’s injured body, watching with satisfaction as the small form relaxed. “I’m here to take care of you,” he whispered softly, settling down to stay at his master’s side for the night. Awwwww that is so sweet! I really love Anakin in your story! Across the Great Sea of Bandomeer, another Obi-Wan was fast asleep, also unaware he was being closely scrutinized. Qui-Gon had watched the young man meditate, and then drift off to sleep. He was an enigma, a stranger, a man with no name. Yet, he was oddly familiar. It was his eyes that were most striking, not quite blue, not quite gray, changeable, almost like … it was an alarming similarity, and Qui-Gon decided his tiredness was getting the best of him. I really wonder when Qui-Gon will guess the truth! Qui-Gon looked toward the Jedi master sleeping peacefully where Obi-Wan should be. Though the young man was heavily shielded, the Force danced around him and fawned over him. It loved him, and that was perhaps why, when it made no sense, Qui-Gon was willing to trust him. I love that Qui-Gon feels that he can trust Obi-Wan! Very nice! -----signature----- "There's always a bigger fish." Fear Of Failure - young Qui-Gon (WIP) > http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/27642896 Padawan to Valairy_Scot
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Valairy_Scot Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 8/12/07 11:53pm Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - Ch 6, Update 8/13
	Obi-Wan slept restlessly, an overwhelming sense of loss and hopelessness leaking through his shields. Anakin wondered how Qui-Gon could have been so blind to someone destined to become a legend in the Jedi Temple. He hoped to the Force he hadn’t messed things up too much with his carelessness. Obi-Wan shifted, grimacing at the pain from slowly healing wounds as he let out a muffled whimper. It was a strange feeling to see his master, but not as the strong Jedi master he learned from everyday. This Obi-Wan was a child and vulnerable. Anakin decided there was one thing he could, even if it was to just ease a little of his master’s suffering. He sent warm bursts of healing into the boy’s injured body, watching with satisfaction as the small form relaxed. “I’m here to take care of you,” he whispered softly, settling down to stay at his master’s side for the night. The caring side of Anakin shows here...and how strange that has to be, see one's teacher at this point in his life. Qui-Gon looked toward the Jedi master sleeping peacefully where Obi-Wan should be. Though the young man was heavily shielded, the Force danced around him and fawned over him. It loved him, and that was perhaps why, when it made no sense, Qui-Gon was willing to trust him. I love that description of Obi-Wan. -----signature----- http://boards.theforce.net/fan_fiction_resource/b10304/25405090/p3/?52 Prolific Author thread: list & links there. Muse fueled by coffee. Often AWOL despite frequent sipping. Writes on inspiration, not a schedule. 2007-2008 the quality years
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Healer_Leona Title: Manager Emeritus Registered: Jul '00	Date Posted: 8/13/07 3:35am Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - Ch 6, Update 8/13
	“I don’t suppose you would tell me why you are so certain there is supposed to be a bomb here, and how you knew there was a hidden lift?” Qui-Gon asked as they climbed inside. That would be correct. I can't help but wonder though how much Qui-Gon may glean just for being around Obi-Wan so much? HOw fascinating for Anakin to actually see his master as a boy. Wonder what insight it will give him? Yikes, I'd never thought about contact from the Temple and Qui-Gon finding out there is no Master/Padawan team by that name. -----signature----- Feel so good, but I'm old 2000 years of chasing's taking it's toll
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jedidas3 Registered: Apr '07	Date Posted: 8/13/07 4:31am Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - Ch 6, Update 8/13
	Another wonderful chapter! You make the reader feel like they are there watching this whole thing happen! I love the fact that Anakin gets a glimpse into his master's past. He needs to see why Obi-Wan is the way he is. Perhaps he will come to understand his master more. Or I could be wrong, this is Anakin we're talking about! Thanks for such a great update and I can't wait for more! -----signature----- New Story: No Regrets http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/29659791/p1/?18 See bio for complete list of stories
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dianethx Registered: Mar '02	Date Posted: 8/13/07 4:33am Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - Ch 6, Update 8/13
	I loved that Anakin was willing to help young Obi-Wan. He certainly is finding Qui-Gon to be a Jedi with feet of clay. I loved that Qui is willing to trust older Obi even though he doesn't know who he is. If only he'd trusted younger Obi then, too. Great job. -----signature----- Betrayal - http://boards.theforce.net/s/b1/10935143 updated 9/22/09 jedidas3's Master Merlin - Diplomatic Immunity - http://boards.theforce.net/nswff/b10808/30459852
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Itachi-Uchiha Registered: Jul '07	Date Posted: 8/13/07 12:39pm Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - Ch 6, Update 8/13
	Though the young man was heavily shielded, the Force danced around him and fawned over him. It loved him, and that was perhaps why, when it made no sense, Qui-Gon was willing to trust him. Absolutely love this description! I agree that this experience can go a long way to help Anakin understand and appreciate his master more. Even though it is for a short time, Obi-Wan must have had some understanding and sympathy for Anakin's life as a slave. Love this fic. -----signature----- Headstrong : http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/27188681/p1/?5 Xanatos/Quinlan/Qui-Gon/Obi-Wan/Dooku Updated December 17th! In Memoriam: Itachi Uchiha
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dimyavie Registered: May '06	Date Posted: 8/13/07 1:48pm Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - Ch 6, Update 8/13
	Awesome update. The characterizations of Obi and Qui are really well written! I hope to read more soon!!!
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padawan_learner86 Registered: Aug '05	Date Posted: 8/13/07 3:34pm Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - Ch 6, Update 8/13
	Great update. Loving the story thus far: the period and characters involved makes for likable complications and superb interactions. Could I be added to the PM list, please? -----signature----- One who accepts only the SW movies as canon. Thus, refuses to read any of the SW books. ^^; Fics in Bio
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VaderLVR64 Title: Manager Emeritus Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 8/13/07 7:17pm Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - Ch 6, Update 8/13
	Obi-Wan shifted, grimacing at the pain from slowly healing wounds as he let out a muffled whimper. It was a strange feeling to see his master, but not as the strong Jedi master he learned from everyday. This Obi-Wan was a child and vulnerable. Anakin decided there was one thing he could, even if it was to just ease a little of his master’s suffering. He sent warm bursts of healing into the boy’s injured body, watching with satisfaction as the small form relaxed. “I’m here to take care of you,” he whispered softly, settling down to stay at his master’s side for the night. Loved it! -----signature----- R.I.P John, Alex, Jason, and Christian Never forgotten Soldiers' Angels http://soldiersangels.org/ 2114 soldiers waiting for someone to care
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Gkilkenny Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 8/14/07 4:16am Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - Ch 6, Update 8/13
	That was brilliant. I loved the part about the force loving Obi-Wan. It is a shame Qui-Gon doesn't see Obi-Wan the same way. Qui-Gon looked toward the Jedi master sleeping peacefully where Obi-Wan should be. Though the young man was heavily shielded, the Force danced around him and fawned over him. It loved him, and that was perhaps why, when it made no sense, Qui-Gon was willing to trust him. “Yes, I believe I can.” Although there is still hope for them yet. -----signature----- Proud Padawan to p_stotts Peace over anger - honour over hate - Strength over fear. Links to Stories in my Bio. Obi-Wan forever.
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Magier Registered: Jul '07	Date Posted: 8/16/07 3:44pm Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - Ch 6, Update 8/13
	Fifilla - I think Qui-Gon would trust Obi-Wan. He usually (except in the case of a 12-year-old initiate) follows the will of the Force. Valairy_Scot - I think one of Anakin's strengths always was compassion. And, I felt that even with Obi-Wan shielding so heavily, Qui-Gon would have to see something about his presence in the Force. Healer_Leona - Anakin is learning a lot with his master. Of course Qui-Gon would contact the Temple. A nameless Jedi master is just too difficult to accept. I figured he would think he was being tricky, but now he has even more questions. jedidas3 - I think we are going to have to trust that Anakin won't be dense here. dianethx - Perhaps Qui-Gon will trust a younger Obi-Wan before all is said and done. As for Qui's clay feet, well, Anakin is at least seeing that he is human, and maybe life wouldn't have been completely perfect with him as a master. Itachi-Uchiha - It is going to be hard for Anakin to be among the slaves. Probably another reason Obi-Wan didn't want to send him there. dimyavie - Thanks so much. padawan_learner86 - I do love the interactions that are possible. When the bunny first bit, Anakin interacting with 12-year-old Obi-Wan and Obi-Wan interacting with a younger Qui-Gon was too much to pass up. VaderLVR - Yes, Anakin will take care of him. Gkilkenny - Oh yes, there is hope for young Obi-Wan and Qui-GOn, the road just might be a little rockier on Bandomeer. ****** Chapter 7 It had been two days and two nights since young Obi-Wan had been taken to the mining platform, but it seemed like an eternity to Anakin. Ignoring the cruel treatment of the slave miners by the guards had taken every ounce of willpower. It was difficult to stand by idly when even simple cries for water were met with the unforgiving end of an electrojabber. No one spoke, no one faltered. All knew the penalty for being unproductive and the basic instinct to survive pushed them beyond what should have been possible. The events of this night had left Anakin terrified. It only made sense that the miners would need to blow off steam, and the fights that had broken out among several slaves were brutal. The guards did nothing to stop their entertainment. Besides, a couple of lives that would likely be gone in a few months anyhow mattered very little them. Though very young, Anakin remembered similar fights among the slaves when he and his mother had been owned by Gardulla the Hutt. As with everything on Tatooine, credits had flowed freely between Gardulla and her guests over the nightly events. Anakin was glad that Obi-Wan had wisely chosen to keep a low profile. And then the boy did something that made Anakin wonder how Qui-Gon had managed to keep him alive long enough to reach senior padawan status. “Do you think you could get me into the explosives room?” He wished Obi-Wan had had the sense to listen to the tall, gangly alien known as Guerra, but this was his master they were dealing with after all, with the added bonus of the reckless abandonment of youth. Anakin repeated the mantra of only interfering if Obi-Wan’s life was in danger as he trailed the pair to the explosives room. He observed with disbelief as the boy used a Force suggestion on the Imbat guard, already calculating up how much trouble he would have been in by this point. Of course there was a silent alarm on the door as they entered, and of course Obi-Wan had to trigger it. Anakin winced in a shadowed corner of the corridor as he heard the distinctive sound of an electro-jabber delivering its charge. “Penalty for stealing is being thrown overboard,” one of the guards said. Anakin placed a hand on his saber. Finally, there was something that fell under the category of threatening the boy’s life. It was time to get his master and leave. “My shift it over,” the other guard replied with a yawn. “Tomorrow morning is soon enough.” The Jedi padawan slumped over. Apparently, the Force had loved Obi-Wan even as a child. Anakin had lost count of how many near misses his master had lived through over the past few years. Some would consider it luck, but Anakin knew better. He trailed the guards carrying Obi-Wan to the lockup, waiting outside the door after they had left. Through weak shields, Anakin could sense the internal war beginning as the boy struggled with his fear and despair, and prepared to face death like a Jedi. Where was Qui-Gon? Sensing no one nearby, Anakin pulled out his comlink. “Master,” he snapped in an impatient whisper. “Yes, Anakin?” “Can you talk now?” “Just a moment.” There was a pause before he heard his master’s voice again. “Okay, I’m out of Qui-Gon’s earshot.” “I need to get Obi-Wan off of this platform now,” Anakin said, infusing his voice with every ounce of determination he felt. “What has happened?” “He was caught poking around in an explosives room and accused of stealing. They are going to throw him over the side of the platform first thing in the morning.” “Has he encountered an alien named Guerra yet?” “No,” Anakin said. He could hear his master’s frustrated sigh and quickly added. “Not so, I lie, Obawan.” Rich laughter flowed over the comlink before Obi-Wan quieted. “Guerra made a sling and caught me. Qui-Gon saw the whole thing on his way to rescue me. We will be there.” “You don’t understand, Master!” Anakin protested. “He’s terrified. He thinks he is going to die, alone, in the morning.” “No, I do understand, Anakin. I was there,” Obi-Wan replied softly. Anakin was struck silent. It was easy to watch the desperate boy sitting in the other room and separate him from a master who at times seemed invincible. It was the voice of that master that calmed him. “Trust the Force, Padawan. Only interfere if it is necessary to safeguard his life.” “Yes, Master.” Anakin leaned his head against the door as he shut off the transmission. He could sense that young Obi-Wan’s exhaustion had finally overtaken him. Reaching out through the Force, he sensed no alarm in the lockup and opened the door. As he had done the previous night, he did what he could to heal Obi-Wan’s wounds, but more importantly, made sure the boy was not alone. * “Is anything wrong?” Qui-Gon asked as Obi-Wan approached his position. They had spent the night staking out the entrance to the Home Planet mine. Unless Xanatos had changed his plan, he would have to make his move sometime soon. “It was Anakin, just updating me on his situation.” “I’ve been meaning to ask about your apprentice,” Qui-Gon said. “He seems unusually ...” The Jedi master paused, no doubt searching for a diplomatic word. A smirk twisted Obi-Wan’s face. “Difficult … impulsive … emotional?” Obi-Wan suggested. “He came to the Temple late, at nine years of age.” “Apparently, the Council didn’t learn from my experience with Xanatos,” Qui-Gon said, allowing the sentence to trail off as he glanced away. “I’ve been told that he will give me wisdom beyond my years, and I believe it. That is, if I survive training him.” “Did you know he would be so challenging when you chose him?” Qui-Gon asked. “Did you have concerns about him then?” Visions of the mission to Naboo rose in Obi-Wan’s mind as he decided to answer. The tension between him and Qui-Gon concerning Anakin and the danger that seemed to shroud the small boy, the fight with the Sith, his master’s last words to him and so much both had left unsaid, and his determination to honor that last request, even if it meant giving up what he had worked for so long to achieve. “I did not choose him, per say,” he finally said, taking a calming breath and releasing a cascade of emotion into the Force before continuing. “I took over his training after my master could no longer complete it.” “I’m sorry,” Qui-Gon said softly. “I was once told that losing a master is the hardest trial a padawan can face. You must have been close to him to honor him by continuing his work.” The conversation was too painful for Obi-Wan to continue while face to face with the master he had lost. “We were,” he said simply before turning away and changing the subject. “Obi-Wan is in trouble.” “Where is he?” Qui-Gon asked. “A deepsea mining platform on the Great Sea of Bandomeer.” “Why didn’t you tell me sooner? Do you know what could happen to him somewhere like that?” “Anakin has been keeping an eye on him.” A slight smile curved Obi-Wan’s lips. “But, he was snooping around the explosives room looking for one of the same boxes we have been looking for and was caught. His penalty is to be thrown off the platform.” “The fall could kill him.” “Which is why we should go …” “Can your apprentice get him off the platform safely?” “Why?” Obi-Wan asked in alarm. Turning back to Qui-Gon, he saw the Jedi master looking through a pair of electrobinoculars. “There is activity at the mine entrance. A speeder just pulled up,” Qui-Gon said. “It would be unwise for us to leave this position unattended.” “I think Anakin can get them both safely off the platform,” Obi-Wan murmured, accepting that stopping Xanatos was still the priority. “The boy is wearing a collar that can be detonated. He will have to go to Offworld security to try to remove it. There will be lots of guards, and we have Obi-Wan’s lightsaber. They will need help there.” “You stay here since you better know what we are looking for. I will meet your apprentice and Obi-Wan when they get to shore.” *** “What do you mean he’s not coming?” Anakin asked harshly over the comlink as he paced back and forth in the corridor, restless like a caged animal. “Qui-Gon will be meeting you at the dock …” “But … you said yourself that he rescued you …” “And now you will,” Obi-Wan countered with determination. “You have told me about the events in the mine, how it directly led to him finally choosing you … what about the timeline?” the padawan asked, throwing his master’s preoccupation back in his face. “It was my destiny to be Qui-Gon’s apprentice, and we will have to trust the Force, that it can work through the change in events.” Anakin muffled a groan as the transmission ended, stamping his foot hard against the ground. Qui-Gon should be charging in valiantly to rescue Obi-Wan. At least he was here, and he wouldn’t fail his master. Anakin slipped through the door again to where the boy was sleeping. Reaching out, he gently shook him. Obi-Wan opened his eyes, the bluish gray orbs widening in surprise. Anakin put a finger to his own lips. “I am Anakin Skywalker. I’m here to rescue you. Let’s get out of here.” Obi-Wan nodded and began to follow before stopping abruptly and tugging on the Jedi padawan’s tunics. “Wait! Guerra.” “It’s going to be sunrise soon, and when they find you missing, every guard in this place will be looking for you,” Anakin scolded. “You’re unarmed, and I don’t know how well I can hold all of them off.” “Guerra helped me, and I owe him.” Anakin couldn’t find an argument, especially staring into his master’s determined eyes. “Okay, let’s find him.” They made their way to a lower level of the platform, Anakin following the Force signature he recognized as belonging to Guerra. They found the long-limbed alien sitting by an open window, gaze fixed upward as the sun rose over the ocean. He clutched a sling made of tarps in his hands. “Guerra!” Obi-Wan called. The alien jumped. “Obawan. How did you escape?” “A friend,” the boy said with a smile. “Now come on. We’re leaving.” Guerra reached his hands up to his collar in panic. “I can’t leave. Neither can you, Obawan.” Obi-Wan looked up at Anakin. “I forgot. It’s an electrocollar. It will blow us up if we leave.” “Wouldn’t want that to happen.” Anakin flashed a bright white smile as he concentrated the Force on the transmitter in Obi-Wan’s collar. “The buzzing is gone,” Obi-Wan said. “We can remove it when we get to shore.” “Yes, the guards in the security office on the Bandor loading dock carry the transmitter,” Guerra explained. “We will just have to pay them a visit,” Anakin said. The lights dimmed suddenly and an alarm, complete with flashing lights, began to sound. “That’s our cue to exit,” Anakin breathed out. Why was nothing ever easy? Obi-Wan hesitated. “Come on,” Anakin said more forcefully. “Go to the upper levels and hide,” Obi-Wan said to Guerra. “In an hour, your collar will be deactivated for good. Trust me.” “I trust no one,” Guerra said as he started for a nearby stairwell. He paused, looking back over his shoulder. “Not so, Obawan! I trust you.” They could hear footsteps in the corridor now. Anakin jumped up into the open window. He reached out and grabbed Obi-Wan’s arm, jerking the boy to his side. They climbed out on the railing. Anakin sensed the blaster fire before it erupted, pushing Obi-Wan to hydrocraft below as he ignited his saber. “Start the engine,” he yelled as he jumped down to join the youth. Determination gleamed in his eyes as he began to deflect the blaster fire raining down on them. He finally allowed himself to relax as they zoomed out of weapon’s range. “Where’s Qui-Gon?” Obi-Wan asked almost immediately. “Waiting for us on shore.” Disengaging his weapon, he turned to find Obi-Wan looking out across the sea. “I had hoped he would come for me.” The boy turned back to face him, gray eyes churning like the turbulent sea. He had been on the other side of that look more times than he could count. It was filled with questions, and Anakin hoped there might be a few he could actually answer. -----signature----- No Legacy So Rich : Xan,OC, Obi, Qui (12/19) Seekers, Not Saints: SW/TB crossover (8/12)
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dianethx Registered: Mar '02	Date Posted: 8/16/07 4:26pm Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - Ch 7, Update 8/16
	I think Anakin is gaining more from seeing his master at an early age and all the things he had to go through to become a padawan. He might just learn a few things, like patience and acceptance of his master's goodness. Great job. Love this story. -----signature----- Betrayal - http://boards.theforce.net/s/b1/10935143 updated 9/22/09 jedidas3's Master Merlin - Diplomatic Immunity - http://boards.theforce.net/nswff/b10808/30459852
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Valairy_Scot Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 8/16/07 6:34pm Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - Ch 7, Update 8/16
	“I am Anakin Skywalker. I’m here to rescue you. Let’s get out of here.” And no garbage chute - no, wait - that's ANH and Luke Skywalker. This is a great story, but I do wonder how the Force will get young Obi and alive Qui together. You are doing a great job with this story. -----signature----- http://boards.theforce.net/fan_fiction_resource/b10304/25405090/p3/?52 Prolific Author thread: list & links there. Muse fueled by coffee. Often AWOL despite frequent sipping. Writes on inspiration, not a schedule. 2007-2008 the quality years
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