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bek Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 8/21/07 7:09am Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - Ch 8, Update 8/20
	Qui-Gon placed a hand on each of the youth’s shoulders, squeezing Obi-Wan’s firmly. In the shimmering depths of very familiar jeweled eyes, he saw peace for the first time. He knew the boy had as many questions as he did. They would have to wait. I think Qui-Gon may be making a connection between the elder Obi-Wan's eyes and the boy in front of him. It would be interesting if Qui figured it out on his own. Perhaps it would also give the elder Obi-Wan a chance for closure. Especially since he didn't really have that with Qui-Gon's untimely death against Maul. Oh, the possibilities... Can hardly wait for the next post! -----signature----- Update 5/26/08- Chapter 39- Life Beyond the Code (Obi-Wan/Anakin) - http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/20820324 Update 9/3/08- Chapter 26 - Not Myself - (Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Oc's) - Before the Saga Update 9/3/08 - Part 6 - Strength to Begin Ane
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Itachi-Uchiha Registered: Jul '07	Date Posted: 8/21/07 10:16am Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - Ch 8, Update 8/20
	So many things that I love about this post but I think if I had to pick one it would be the following: “Look at me,” Anakin barked angrily. His shields had slipped, and powerful emotions – fear predominant among them -- now leaked out, bleeding into the Force around him. “You have more potential and purpose in this universe than you can even begin to understand, and your time is far from over.” Qui-Gon ignited his saber and cut the lock on the box. A shudder ran down his spine as he opened it. His momentary shock was interrupted by a distressed plea. “Obi-Wan, I need you,” Anakin said in a near sob. “You need me?” the boy asked in puzzlement. “Yes,” Anakin replied. “I need you to grow up so that there is someone to train me.” I just can't get enough of Anakin and young Obi-Wan interacting. -----signature----- Headstrong : http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/27188681/p1/?5 Xanatos/Quinlan/Qui-Gon/Obi-Wan/Dooku Updated August 29th! In Memoriam: Itachi Uchiha
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Qui-Gina-Jinn Registered: Jun '03	Date Posted: 8/21/07 11:29am Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - Ch 8, Update 8/20 - Date Edited: 8/21/07 11:42am (1 edits total) Edited By: Qui-Gina-Jinn
	Wonderful update!! “You can’t tell me who your master is?” the boy asked, raising a ginger eyebrow skeptically. Anakin looked away, his face twisting into a frown. That expression! The kid had no idea it would one day be able to make even the Force’s Chosen One spontaneously confess. I believe he can!! Poor Anakin! “Obi-Wan, I need you,” Anakin said in a near sob. “You need me?” the boy asked in puzzlement. “Yes,” Anakin replied. “I need you to grow up so that there is someone to train me.” Uh oh - he let it slip!! Wonder what Qui-Gon and little Obi-Wan will make out of that??!! -----signature----- Dark Lady of the DLC Fan Force Denmark I was there - FFEurope meeting, Stockholm 2005, Celebration Europe 2007, JediCon 2008 Not to worry - we are still flying half a ship! Ke nu'jurkadir sha Mando'ade
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Healer_Leona Registered: Jul '00	Date Posted: 8/21/07 2:31pm Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - Ch 8, Update 8/20
	They were stepping into a future that was changing, and the life and galaxy he knew depended on steering it back to its original course. That is one very slippery slope. “I do,” Qui-Gon replied. “You are going to need this,” he said to Obi-Wan as he handed him the lightsaber he had taken back from Xanatos. More than just a start with that action!! “No, you dying is not an option,” Anakin replied firmly. Qui-Gon’s curiosity was piqued by the desperation he sensed in the padawan. Ahh, yes for sorry many reasons there! Very exciting chapter!! -----signature----- I want to swim away but don't know how Sometimes it feels just like I'm falling in the ocean
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padawan3 Registered: Sep '99	Date Posted: 8/22/07 11:23pm Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - Ch 8, Update 8/20
	Quite an exciting story. I look forward to reading more. If you could add me to your PM list, I would greatly appreciate it. -----signature----- "Oppression is often the consequence, but seldom or never the means of riches; and though avarice will preserve a man from being necessitously poor, it generally makes him too timorous to be wealthy." Thomas Paine
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dianethx Registered: Mar '02	Date Posted: 8/25/07 5:40pm Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - Ch 8, Update 8/20
	Sorry, I've been on vacation so I've just had time to start reading again. Great job. Love the way you are bringing the timelines back together again and in such a way that it should work out. Loved this. “Obi-Wan, I need you,” Anakin said in a near sob. “You need me?” the boy asked in puzzlement. “Yes,” Anakin replied. “I need you to grow up so that there is someone to train me.” At least, Obi now knows that he has a destiny. Loved it. -----signature----- Betrayal - http://boards.theforce.net/s/b1/10935143 updated 6/28/08 Fragments of Illusion- http://boards.theforce.net/bts/b10475/28456473 updated 8/16/08 Freeze frame - http://boards.theforce.net/s/b10476/27820434 Master to jedidas3 Impeach Bush!
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Magier Registered: Jul '07	Date Posted: 8/27/07 9:26pm Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - Ch 8, Update 8/20
	Fifilla - Well, the cat is out of the bag now. I think Jedi master Obi-Wan is going to have to be a little more forthcoming. Valairy_Scot - That is the difference between TPM Qui-Gon and JA Qui-Gon -- twelve years of training Obi-Wan. And let's face it, Anakin just wants to fix things. Gkilkenny - I don't think Obi-Wan can wiggle out of this one. I think both Qui-Gon and young Obi-Wan are going to want some answers. jedidas3 - Oh what could really happen next post. Obi-Wan is just trying to keep Xanatos from escaping. bek - Sometime they are going to slow down and Obi-Wan and Anakin will have to figure out why they are in the past anyhow. And yes, Qui-Gon is putting lots of pieces together. Itachi-Uchiha - I might have to show a little more of them down the road. Qui-Gina-Jinn - Yeah, that's a lot for them to think about. Healer_Leona - I loved the idea of Obi-Wan wanting to save Anakin, but Anakin is there to save Obi-Wan. padawan3 - thanks for reading. dianethx - Little changes here and there. Hopefully all will work out. And yes, Obi-Wan has a destiny. *** Chapter 9 The whooshing sound of air preceded the lift arriving, the sound filling Obi-Wan’s ears and pulling him from his meditations. He got to his feet and pushed himself into the shadows, taking one last cleansing breath as he prepared to face Xanatos. Booted footsteps approached, a figure in swirling capes rushing past him. Obi-Wan stepped from his hiding place and ignited his saber. The distinctive hiss of the blade brought Xanatos’ retreat to a stop. “Don’t tell me you forgot there was a second Jedi master on Bandomeer,” Obi-Wan said casually. Xanatos whirled around. Simmering eyes bore into Obi-Wan with icy, blue venom as the fallen Jedi ignited his own blade – bright crimson. He began to circle the Jedi, nonchalantly cutting small slashes into the air as he sized up his new enemy. Obi-Wan’s comlink chimed, causing him to jolt slightly. Without even checking, he knew it was Anakin. He also sensed that Qui-Gon was there nearby. The danger to his apprentice was fleeting. He reached down to shut the comlink off, never taking his eyes off of Xanatos. “What a great master,” the fallen Jedi taunted sarcastically. “Your brat might be in trouble, and all he has is the cold static of a comlink for comfort.” “He is not alone,” Obi-Wan replied. “Trusting his fate to the likes of Qui-Gon Jinn might be ill-advised.” Obi-Wan could sense Anakin’s stubborn determination across their bond intermingled with fear. A clash of wills had begun. His padawan was trying to prevent an impulsive teenager from blowing himself up. He had no doubt Anakin could handle his younger self and affirmed that confidence. He then felt panic as Anakin sensed the danger of his master’s current situation. Obi-Wan calmed Anakin once again before strengthening shields that already locked his presence away from Qui-Gon, Xanatos, and young Obi-Wan. “I have complete faith in my apprentice’s current company,” Obi-Wan announced. “The easy way to go about this is for you to surrender. No one needs to die here today.” “Anything easy is seldom worth what is gained,” Xanatos said as he launched himself forward. Obi-Wan brought his saber up and easily blocked the attack, pushing Xanatos away. “I guess I have my answer then,” Obi-Wan said. Xanatos attacked again, coupling powerful upward and downward strikes, using the sheer force of his blows to drive the Jedi master backwards. Obi-Wan gladly gave up the ground, giving Xanatos the illusion he was directing the fight while he studied his opponent, searching out weaknesses, most notably, a staggering sense of overconfidence. Completely aware of where he was, Obi-Wan leaped over Xanatos’ head at the last moment to avoid being pushed down the cliffside. Xanatos whirled around as Obi-Wan dropped into a defensive stance. Worry flashed through the fallen Jedi’s eyes before he spoke, his thoughts no doubt on the bomb sitting in the mine shaft below. “We both lose, as does everyone on Bandomeer. We all die here today,” he offered. His escape was taking too long, and the frustration at having his “backdoor” blocked was evident on his face. “There are enough explosives on this world to shake it to the core. I can stop it if I get to my ship in time.” “Your bomb is nearly disabled by now.” “There isn’t enough time.” “Ionite,” Obi-Wan suggested with a smile. “The neutral charge stops timers, and right now, your bomb is surrounded by it.” “Jinn.” The fallen Jedi spat the name like a curse as he lunged out, attacking again. “Actually, the boy,” Obi-Wan said, parrying the powerful strike. “I suppose the brat will get his wish then and become Jinn’s dutiful little padawan. I will just have to destroy them both at a later time,” Xanatos snarled, sabers still clashing. “Or maybe you will be dead by the boy’s fourteenth life day.” The mere suggestion angered the fallen Jedi and he sprang forward. A powerful Force push from Obi-Wan sent him into the rocky wall. He scrambled to his feet, slow getting up. “Who are you? You seem familiar,” Xanatos asked, gathering himself. “Surely we met in my former life at the Temple … saber class … sparring?” “I will say only that we have met.” Recovered, Xanatos pressed his attack again, more vicious than before, determined to escape. One strike broke through Obi-Wan’s defenses, but the Jedi master managed to avoid the blade that slid dangerously close to his shoulder. The strain of maintaining both heavy shielding and the concentration needed to fight was beginning to wear on him. Obi-Wan let go. He let go of his desire to remain hidden and his fear of destroying the future. Much as he had done dangling in a melting pit on Naboo, he focused on just the moment, and the Living Force swirling around him. Reality came into focus with a great surge of the Force. Qui-Gon’s strong presence, life dizzily surging along a dead bond. The duality of sensing his own presence. His younger self’s triumph as the bomb was disarmed, and hope for the future. Qui-Gon had called him “Padawan”. Anakin’s fierce determination and fear as he hurried to his master’s side. And from Xanatos, Obi-Wan felt utter shock. “You!” Xanatos stumbled backwards. “How?” Obi-Wan took advantage of the distraction, flipping the weapon from the fallen Jedi’s hand. He brought the tip of his blade to Xanatos’ throat. “Finish it,” Xanatos said. “You all but said that I die.” “Your future, Jinn’s, young Obi-Wan’s … they are all yet unwritten to you. But yes, if you continue on this path, your hate and lust for revenge will drive you to a point of no return. The Dark side is a cruel mistress.” Fighting Xanatos was something Obi-Wan remembered vividly from his childhood, his first real exposure to the Dark side of the Force. Somehow, after facing the Sith on Naboo and witnessing firsthand the complete corruption and decay of the Dark side, Xanatos seemed more like a wounded, bitter animal than the lord of darkness he remembered. “It hasn’t consumed you … yet,” he offered, not sure why. “After your apprentice intervened with Jinn …” Xanatos began before hesitating. Conflict warred across his face as though Obi-Wan had managed to tap into a conscience neither knew existed. With steely determination, Xanatos continued. “There is another detonator.” Obi-Wan had thought as much. “Where?” “The Enrichment Zones – if you are who I sense you are, you know where. If you go now and move quickly, you will have plenty of time. Of course … I won’t be here when you get back.” Obi-Wan found his hands trembling. He was uncertain what to do. Everything he had been taught told him to hold his prisoner. But, Xanatos had escaped in the past, a past that no longer existed. How would a captive Xanatos affect the future? How would it affect Qui-Gon? Closing his eyes, he sought an answer from the Force, and then hesitantly pulled his saber away. “Go.” “You’re letting me go?” Xanatos asked in obvious shock. “Go! Before I come to my senses.” Without another word, Xanatos scrambled in the direction of the hangar. Obi-Wan watched the fallen Jedi disappear, his attention finally drawn to the roar of engines behind him. Anakin. He turned as a speeder came to a stop. “Master!” Anakin cried out. “Are you okay? Where is Xanatos?” “He escaped,” Obi-Wan said. “We can catch him …” “No, Padawan,” Obi-Wan said. “We need to hurry to the Enrichment Zones.” The trip was made in silence, Obi-Wan still weighing his decision to let the fallen Jedi escape. When Anakin settled the speeder outside the domed structures that made up the Enrichment Zones, Obi-Wan didn’t wait for his apprentice to disengage engines. He quickly jumped from the craft and wound his way through the fields to the annex where he had first found the Offworld box as a boy. It still sat there. Obi-Wan opened the lid – a bomb, just as Xanatos had said. However, he had not told the entire truth. There was no timer, no indication it was meant to be anymore than another link in a chain reaction. A light began to flash on what looked like a communications’ device, catching the Jedi master’s attention. “You’re slow, Master … Kenobi,” came a smooth, silky voice. “I had to gather my apprentice.” “This is where I intended to leave a message for my old master. Relieved to have disarmed the bomb, he would have gone about collecting the rest of the parts, not knowing this trigger remained.” Xanatos paused. “I am going to leave Bandomeer now, but I have no doubt we will meet again in our respective futures. I intend to live a long, full life.” “I see,” Obi-Wan said softly. “Keep an eye on your brat,” Xanatos said, catching Obi-Wan off guard. “Anakin?” “He is different than you or other Jedi, and the ‘cruel mistress’, as you so eloquently put it, has designs on him.” Before Obi-Wan could respond, Xanatos offered a simple, “Farewell.” The transmission shut off, hurried footsteps breaking the silence that followed. “Did you find it, Master?” “It’s over, Anakin,” Obi-Wan whispered. -----signature----- No Legacy So Rich : Xan,OC, Obi, Qui (8/08) Seekers, Not Saints: SW/TB crossover (8/12)
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Valairy_Scot Title: PT Rewrite Winner Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 8/27/07 11:28pm Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - Ch 9, Update 8/27
	I was a little worried when Obi-Wan was meditating like Qui-Gon did before his fatal battle on Naboo. I was hoping - but you delayed it - for the Qui-Gon/Master Kenobi meeting. Great update - other than we only heard second-hand of Qui-Gon taking young Obi-Wan as his apprentice. Since, however, those of us who read JA know how it went...no big loss. -----signature----- http://boards.theforce.net/fan_fiction_resource/b10304/25405090/p3/?52 Prolific Author thread: list & links there. Muse fueled by coffee. Often AWOL despite frequent sipping. Writes on inspiration, not a schedule. I'm a writer, not a storyteller.
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Qui-Gina-Jinn Registered: Jun '03	Date Posted: 8/28/07 12:39am Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - Ch 9, Update 8/27 - Date Edited: 8/28/07 1:45pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Qui-Gina-Jinn
	Great chapter! Loved the fact that Obi-Wan just let it all go in the end. Must be quite a shock for dear Xanatos - and for the others when they realise it... I wonder if letting Xanatos go was wise - even if it meant finding the other trigger. I thought it was great that Obi-Wan was kinda playing around with Xanatos during their fight. Xanatos knows that Anakin will fall to the Dark Side?? Uh-oh, that's not good. Can't wait for the Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon confrontation... /edit: Obi-Wan let go. He let go of his desire to remain hidden and his fear of destroying the future. Much as he had done dangling in a melting pit on Naboo, he focused on just the moment, and the Living Force swirling around him. Reality came into focus with a great surge of the Force. Qui-Gon’s strong presence, life dizzily surging along a dead bond. The duality of sensing his own presence. His younger self’s triumph as the bomb was disarmed, and hope for the future. Qui-Gon had called him “Padawan”. Anakin’s fierce determination and fear as he hurried to his master’s side. And from Xanatos, Obi-Wan felt utter shock. I've been reading and re-reading this little part several times - I simply love it! It's just perfect, brilliant, wonderful (am running out of words here... perhaps supercalifragilisticexpialidocious would do...) Fantastically written! -----signature----- Dark Lady of the DLC Fan Force Denmark I was there - FFEurope meeting, Stockholm 2005, Celebration Europe 2007, JediCon 2008 Not to worry - we are still flying half a ship! Ke nu'jurkadir sha Mando'ade
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Fifilla Registered: Mar '06	Date Posted: 8/28/07 1:24am Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - Ch 9, Update 8/27
	Great chapter! Obi-Wan let go. He let go of his desire to remain hidden and his fear of destroying the future. Much as he had done dangling in a melting pit on Naboo, he focused on just the moment, and the Living Force swirling around him. Reality came into focus with a great surge of the Force. Qui-Gon’s strong presence, life dizzily surging along a dead bond. The duality of sensing his own presence. His younger self’s triumph as the bomb was disarmed, and hope for the future. Qui-Gon had called him “Padawan”. Anakin’s fierce determination and fear as he hurried to his master’s side. And from Xanatos, Obi-Wan felt utter shock. I loved that description - very nice! “Keep an eye on your brat,” Xanatos said, catching Obi-Wan off guard. “Anakin?” “He is different than you or other Jedi, and the ‘cruel mistress’, as you so eloquently put it, has designs on him.” Before Obi-Wan could respond, Xanatos offered a simple, “Farewell.” I wonder if not only young Obi-Wan's future will change but also Anakin's. Very interesting! -----signature----- "There's always a bigger fish." Fear Of Failure - young Qui-Gon (WIP) > http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/27642896 Padawan to Valairy_Scot
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jedidas3 Registered: Apr '07	Date Posted: 8/28/07 5:34am Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - Ch 9, Update 8/27
	Wonderful chapter. I was on the edge of my seat during the fight between Obi and Xanatos. All I can say is, "More, More!!!" -----signature----- The Past Revisited http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/28440949 Lessons Learned http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/28580784 Remembrance http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/28009025 Padawan to dianethx
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xxxkbunnies Registered: Jun '07	Date Posted: 8/28/07 5:44am Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - Ch 9, Update 8/27
	Yay! Finally caught up with all the chapters. I'm really enjoying how the story's unfolded so far - the pacing is good and makes it easy to read. I'm looking forward to what's going to happen now the encounter with Xanatos is almost over.
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Ganki Registered: Jan '02	Date Posted: 8/28/07 7:59am Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - Ch 9, Update 8/27
	YAY Master Kenobi lives woot-woot now what will Qui-Gon do?! EEP! This is going to get good. ^__^ Looking forward to more! -----signature----- “The act of putting pen to paper encourages pause for thought, this in turn makes us think more deeply about life, which helps us regain our equilibrium.” ~Norbet Platt
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bek Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 8/28/07 9:40am Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - Ch 9, Update 8/27 - Date Edited: 8/28/07 9:42am (1 edits total) Edited By: bek
	“This is where I intended to leave a message for my old master. Relieved to have disarmed the bomb, he would have gone about collecting the rest of the parts, not knowing this trigger remained.” Xanatos paused. “I am going to leave Bandomeer now, but I have no doubt we will meet again in our respective futures. I intend to live a long, full life.” “I see,” Obi-Wan said softly. I wonder what this means exactly. Is Xan going to let go of his revenge and the portion of darkness he's been flirting with, or just find another way to go about it? “Keep an eye on your brat,” Xanatos said, catching Obi-Wan off guard. “Anakin?” “He is different than you or other Jedi, and the ‘cruel mistress’, as you so eloquently put it, has designs on him.” Before Obi-Wan could respond, Xanatos offered a simple, “Farewell.” The transmission shut off, hurried footsteps breaking the silence that followed. “Did you find it, Master?” “It’s over, Anakin,” Obi-Wan whispered. I hope Obi-Wan heeds Xan's words. Edit: I can hardly wait for the face to face meeting between Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon, not to mention young Obi-Wan's thoughts. Qui had to have felt the training bond with the elder Kenobi. I bet he's a bit confused right now. -----signature----- Update 5/26/08- Chapter 39- Life Beyond the Code (Obi-Wan/Anakin) - http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/20820324 Update 9/3/08- Chapter 26 - Not Myself - (Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Oc's) - Before the Saga Update 9/3/08 - Part 6 - Strength to Begin Ane
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Gkilkenny Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 8/28/07 8:54pm Subject: RE: Threads of the Past (JA, time travel - Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Anakin) - Ch 9, Update 8/27
	I loved the confrontation between Xanatos and Obi-Wan and the shock Xanatos felt recognising the aura. Very different from JA, however an excellent difference. Well done -----signature----- Padawan to p_stotts Peace over anger - honour over hate - Strength over fear. Links to Stories in my Bio. Obi-Wan forever.
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